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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Mong được chấm bài ạ - Writing task 2 - Em cảm ơn nhiều
Đề: Some say that music plays an important role in society whilst others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Numerous individuals stress that music is basically an entertainment tool, whereas others believe it is a vital part of social life. This essay will consider both opinions and be inclined toward the importance of music in society.
A large number of the general public supposes music is just a type of relaxation activity, and it has no more advantages than being played in festivals or carnivals. In fact, instrumental music increases concentration ability and prevents listeners from being distracted by objective factors such as noise. According to a survey conducted in Vietnam, 75% of responders reported that they need music to focus on their work or study. Moreover, music can change the mood of users; as a result, it is usually used in festivals to create a dopamine and happy atmosphere. Another typical example is if an upset person wants to recharge and refill the energy, he will listen to an EDM song.
On the other hand, music also affects other aspects of life such as the economy and tourism. Music is often displayed in songs, and songs are absolutely a form of products, which can be sold and earn money. The entertainment industry obtains a great deal of income thanks to songs and CDs, which can be regarded as a billion-dollar industry; besides, this growing industry leads to thousands of concerts that have a significant influence on tourism. For instance, Hoi An welcomed more than 120000 tourists as Charlie Puth’s fans since this singer has a small show at a music festival.
To sum up, although music is a form of relaxation, it notably affects distinct respect of life such as economic growth and tourism. Indeed, the music industry provides a huge income to the economy and it can attract visitors through concerts and world tours.
Đề: Some say that music plays an important role in society whilst others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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Mong được các thầy cô sửa bài ạ
Televised Talent shows have become popular in many societies today.
Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment?
There were several projects with new skills at the turn of the century. Every country established its own greatest talent programs. Of course, everybody wanted to see and meet their country's top athletes and teams. As a result, we now have new TV stars and high-quality entertainment.
Without a question, every city and hamlet has a plethora of skills, and many of them aspire to be stars and celebrities. Employees from TV stations' marketing departments discovered this. And the casting process began! People have the opportunity to demonstrate their abilities and compete against other odd characters. Certainly, TV firms expended time and money to publicize castings, but after the first season, the
These types of shows are extremely popular among the general public. Each episode is strange and unpredictable. Nobody knows what to expect from the next newcomer. What will he display? As thrilling as it is difficult to create this program. Without a clear script, the creator must consider all moves of every character, as well as control cameras and scenery. By the way, the end effect of all this craziness is amazing spectator entertainment and outstanding professional production teams.
Finally, there was a beautiful period when TV networks discovered this notion, which became a new sip for industry. It gave birth to a new genre of shows as well as new teams of brilliant and experienced television professionals. People enjoy these types of shows, and organizations benefit from the opportunity to uncover new brilliant employees.
Televised Talent shows have become popular in many societies today.
Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment?
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Dạ mong thầy cô nhận xét bài giúp em ạ
Some people think that children should begin their education at a very
early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Children’s brain size and cognitive development improve as they grow. This has led to the belief that their education should be initiated at a very young age, whereas some assume the age of seven is the best for children to attend school. This essay will elaborate on two perspectives and the reasons why I lean towards the latter.
On the one hand, starting school at a very young age can bring about a variety of advantages. First, early exposure to education can significantly enhance children’s cognitive development. Numerous scientific studies have demonstrated that quality education commenced during children’s early years can help children engender critical thinking skills as well as problem-solving abilities. These may become the building blocks for their future academic success. Second, early formal education can also benefit parents. In most developed nations today, people are snowed under with heavy workloads, leaving little time for them to fulfill parental duties. Therefore, sending children to school can allow teachers to share such responsibilities, and parents can devote more time to their careers.
On the other hand, postponing education until the age of seven may foster better overall development. This can be attributed to the fact that early academic study can lead to unwanted stress that children of this age might not be able to cope with because of their underdeveloped mental capacity. Accordingly, it will be more beneficial for them to start education when they are more developmentally prepared. Moreover, this can allow children to enjoy a more extended period of childhood instead of being overburdened with their studies. To be more specific, young children will not be confined to theoretical lessons. Instead, they can have the chance to spend more time exploring the world around them, thereby discovering new things and gaining practical experience on their own.
In conclusion, while it is irrefutable that early education can bestow advantages on children and parents in many aspects, I would contend that delaying formal schooling until the age of seven is a more favorable option.
Some people think that children should begin their education at a very
early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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The pie charts give information about what households in Japan and Malaysia spent their money for in 2010.
Overall, proportionally, the majority of families in Japan spent their money on other goods and services; whereas in Malaysia, housing took the lead. It is also noteworthy that healthcare was the least spent on area in both nations.
Looking first at the statistics for Japan, the expenditure on other goods and services was at 29% in 2010, which was followed by food and housing at 24% and 21%, respectively. Meanwhile, transportation accounted for one-fifth of the total expenditure and the money spent on healthcare was at a marginal 6%.
Regarding Malaysia, most people spent their income on housing which stood at 34%. The figure for the food category was at 27% and other goods and services was a fraction lower at 26%. Malaysians only spent 10% of their money on transport and the spending on healthcare was 3 times lower.
The pie charts give information about what households in Japan and Malaysia spent their money for in 2010.
Overall, proportionally, the majority of families in Japan spent their money on other goods a...
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[TASK 2] mong được thầy cô chấm chữa bài ạaaa
People should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live, rather than for their own benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Essay
These days, controversies have arisen over a prevailing belief that individuals should prioritize their health for the betterment of the society they live in, rather than solely for their own benefits. From my perspective, I partially consent to this statement because focusing on personal well-being can lead to positive impacts on individuals and society as a whole.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that health should be pursued for personal fulfillment and an enhanced quality of life. Firstly, individuals should have the freedom to make choices regarding their own health without feeling obligated to society. This is primarily because imposing the responsibility of maintaining societal well-being solely on individuals completely neglects other factors contributing to public health. Secondly, poor inhabitants clearly lack access to healthcare facilities, making it difficult for them to prioritize their health. In such circumstances, expecting them to prioritize societal benefits over personal benefits may exacerbate existing inequalities.
On the other hand, it is immediately obvious that the importance of personal health has proved to be positive for the entire community. To begin with, one crucial point to discuss is that health promotion substantially reduces healthcare costs. In particular, individuals taking care of their health can minimize the need for expensive medical treatments, assisting the society in both the efficient allocation of healthcare resources and necessary investment in other essential areas. Furthermore, healthier individuals can greatly contribute to a healthier society, which minimizes the burden of the healthcare system. More importantly, they might actively participate in various aspects of society, including work, education, and community activities, leading to overall societal development.
To summarize, with these aforementioned catalysts, I firmly believe that it is imperative for individuals to focus on self-care and maintain good health, as it benefits both their personal well-being and society.
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People should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live, rather than for their own benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Dạ mong thầy cô cho em nhận xét ạ.
Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Many people insist that watching TV has adverse effects on youngsters, while others assert that spending time on TV can have various benefits. Although there are good arguments in favor of the benefits of television, I strongly believe that watching TV is detrimental to children.
On the one hand, there are several arguments that viewing television is positive for youngsters. First of all, supporters of this viewpoint claim that watching television programs can provide children with a wealth of information and learning opportunities. Young children, for example, can acquire deeper knowledge and broaden their horizons about history and geography by watching Ted.com or BBC News. As a result, they are more likely to develop an interest in studying. Furthermore, because of the abundance of information they get, many young children who watch television often can acquire foreign languages. Children in Vietnam, for example, may learn a lot about English owing to television. As a result, they will be more eager to study English than in the past.
On the other hand, there are two reasons why viewing television adversely affects youngsters. The main reason is that it can have a negative impact on their academics. When children spend so much time on the TV screen, they may neglect their scholastic responsibilities, which play an important role in their future jobs. Consequently, they are less likely to obtain better jobs compared to those who prioritize academic pursuits. Furthermore, watching TV may lead to numerous ailments such as obesity, stroke, and coronary heart disease their later lives. To exemplify, in England, during COVID-19, many children spend too much time watching television content; they will have 50% more chance of getting obese compared to peers engaging in other activities.
In conclusion, despite the potential benefits of watching TV for youngsters, I believe the downside of television is much more significant.
Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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Mong thầy cô chấm dùm em bài writing task 2 ạ, em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ
Nowadays, technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's world, the use of technology for surveillance purposes is becoming increasingly prevalent. From my point of view, while the benefits of monitoring individuals' activities are undeniable, I believe that the downsides of regulating users outweigh the benefits.
There are two main benefits of user monitoring. The most advantageous aspect is that using technology can deter people from engaging in illegal activities. This is due to the fact that without CCTV cameras, individuals would commit an offense such as robberies, money laundering, and murders. Therefore, installing hidden surveillance equipment can create a sense of safety and security for citizens. Moreover, tracking technology systems can survive people's lives in some situations. For example, in Ha Noi city, some babies were kidnaped by terrorists with GPS trackers, the police quickly identified all the abducted children and rescued them.
While being followed by tracking systems has many perks, there are far more significant consequences. One negative aspect of cellphone tracking is that it makes users feel nervous. They believe that they feel uncomfortable and fatigued while calling and chatting with their friends, and their relatives. The second downside is that some scammers and hackers can get access to individuals' accounts and steal money, some essential information that might be dangerous to users. Take Hieu Pc as a real example of this, he hacked more than 200 million US residents' personal information, including society security numbers, stand bank cards, touch phone numbers, and birthdays and sold it to internet criminal groups. As a result, more than thousands of people in the Us felt scared and shocked.
In conclusion, although there are some advantages to being monitored, I strongly believe that the disadvantages are much more significant.
Nowadays, technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored ar...
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Nhờ mn và thầy chấm giúp em writing task 1 ạ, em đang tập viết writing task 1 ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy và mn nhiều ạ.
The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of demographics of English males and females who lived alone in 2011, while the pie chart depicts the number of bedrooms in one household.
Overall, it is readily apparent that women aged 65 and over constituted the highest proportion of people living alone, whereas the majority of one-person households tended to have two bedrooms.
Based on the pie chart, the majority of people were attracted to 2 bedrooms, at 35.4%. One bedroom and three bedrooms accounted for 28% and 29.8%, respectively, making them the third and second most popular types of one-person households. Just under one-tenth of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms.
Around 63% of women aged 65 to 74 lived alone, while the figure for men was much lower, at 38%. Females occupied approximately 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84, as opposed to nearly 28% of males who stayed alone. There were 76% of females aged 85 and over living alone, compared to 25% of men. However, this trend was reversed for the younger age groups, with the 50-64 and 16-24 age groups recording more than half of male residents living independently. Similarly, roughly 62% of men aged 25 to 34 and 65% of men between 35 and 49 years of age lived alone, higher than their female counterparts by one third.
The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
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Mong được chấm bài ạ - Writing task 2 - Em cảm ơn nhiều
Đề: Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a belief that allowing profit-making companies to run medical services is unwise, as a healthy body is the key to human lives. This essay will discuss both positive and negative points about private health care and it holds an unbiased view.
Numerous individuals believe these companies caring much about profit usually put all their efforts into encouraging patients to take medical tests and use medicines more than it is necessary. Instead of truly caring about customers’ health and giving substantial pieces of advice, these medical companies will amplify the illness and incline patients to take more tests and pay for the bills. For example, the doctor will ask a patient to come back on another day to check their health while it is not an extremely severe case; as a result, the patient has to pay an extra bill for the next check. In several cases, these additional bills can harmfully affect customers’ health.
In other words, private health care is also an increasing trend as it is more secure and more accurate. It is undeniable that each person has a distinct health condition so there are different treatments amongst patients even though they suffer from the same disease. Private health care has arisen to solve this problem since it can focus on a particular resident and treat only one patient at a time. Therefore, the result will be more correct and faster. For instance, according to a survey conducted in Vietnam, 75 percent of attendees agreed that by using private health care they would have feedback immediately while the rest admitted that they had to wait for 3 hours to get the results.
To sum up, despite the unethical ways to make more profit of several companies, there is evidence that applying for private health care is indeed beneficial because of its accuracy and speed.
Đề: Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadv...
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[WRITING TASK 2] em mong đc thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em bài này với ạ, em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạaa <3
More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
Essay:
These days, controversies have arisen over a phenomenon that a growing number of individuals tend to acquire news online in lieu of physical newspapers and television programs. From my perspective, despite several drawbacks of this tendency, I strongly advocate the sentiment that this is a positive development by virtue of numerous advantages that are worth analyzing.
On the one hand, proponents of the idea that this alteration has an adverse bearing on the society have their own convincing arguments. Firstly, obtaining news from the Internet can facilitate the spread of misleading information due to a lack of fact-checking features from various online outlets. As a consequence, netizens would freely share unofficial news or information regardless of its authenticity, while readers are more likely to be misled. Secondly, the convenience of staying updated on news and events through the Internet can make it easy to get addicted to certain media channels like Facebook and Twitter. Once addicted, people cannot focus on more important tasks, which greatly influences their concentration and performance.
On the other hand, it is clearly apparent that the Internet offers more current updates and a more fascinating experience. The first favorable aspect is that news obviously travels faster on the Internet compared to traditional media sources. Unquestionably, audiences can instantly update articles and share news through social networks, whereas newspapers are often only updated daily and require customers to physically purchase them from newstands. The second bonus point to consider is that individuals can stay informed about current events with useful audiovisual elements thanks to the emergence of online media sources, which assists viewers in comprehending the information more easily. This is primarily because news coverage on the Internet usually uses video footage to illustrate the course of an event as opposed to merely boring texts and pictures in conventional newspapers.
To summarize, although the increasing tendency of using the Internet as their main source of news could give rise to the spread of false news along with an addiction to the Internet, I firmly believe that it is overall more beneficial as it provides users with faster updates and better experiences.
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More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009
The line graph illustrates the number of international travelers to three distinct destinations in a European country over the period of 20 years (1987–2007).
It is apparent that all types of destinations had an increase in visitors. The lakes were expected to see the most dramatic changes, while the coast was the most popular overall.
From the line graph , in 1987, the coast attracted the most noticeable number of visitors at around 40.000, while in the same year, the figure for the mountains was only 20.000. Five years later, the number of travelers on the coast saw a slight decrease to around 35.000 before experiencing a dramatic rise to reach its high point of approximately 75.000 at the end of the period. There was a moderate increase of 30.000 travelers in the mountains from 1987 to 1997, then its figure underwent a five-year period of stability, followed by a steady rise to roughly 35.000 visitors in the last year of the period.
Turning to other features, beginning with 10,000 visitors in 1987, the lakes quadrupled after a decade and continued to rise steadily, overtaking the coast as the most visited destination in a European country. Having reached a peak at approximately 75.000 in 2002, it suddenly dropped to the second position at 50.000 in the remaining portion of the surveyed period.
The line graph illustrates the number of international travelers to three distinct destinations in a European country over the period of 20 years (1987–2007).
It is apparent that all types of dest...
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Nhờ mn và thầy chấm giúp em writing task 1 ạ, em đang tập viết writing task 1 ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy và mn nhiều ạ.
The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the number of visitors who traveled to different countries over a period of 10 years.
Overall, Europe appealed to the most visitors, while this trend was opposite for the Middle East. Among these nations, Africa, Asia, and the Pacific experienced a steady increase in the number of travelers.
As can be seen in the table, in 1990, the total number of visitors was around 464.8 million, while half of travelers decided to travel to Europe at 280.2 million. Asia and the Pacific attracted 67 million travelers, whereas the figure in America was approximately 93 million. There was a dramatic increase in the total number of international voyages of 239.5 compared to Europe, which underwent a slight rise, taking the leading position in 2005. Visitors engaged in traveling to Asia and the Pacific than that of America, with around 135.8 million, and 113 million respectively. Asia and the Pacific overtook America as the second most visited nation in the total of each nation
Beginning with 9.6 million travelers in 1990, the Middle East quadrupled after a decade and continued to marginally increase in its figure. Despite reaching its highest point in 2005, it still had the lowest destinations visited during the survey shown. By contrast, if the figure in Africa was higher than that in the Middle East in 1990, then its data had a leap of 13.7 million visitors in all recorded years.
The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make com...
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nhờ thầy cô xem và chấm chữa bài giúp em với ạ. em xin cảm ơn
The line graph highlights the information about the production of waste in three companies, namely A,B and C from 2000 to 2015. From the overall perspective, what stands out from the graph is that the amounts of waste output by company A and B decreased over the period, whereas the opposite was witnessed in company C. Another striking feature is that the figure for company A was the highest for most of the period.
Turning to the details, in 2000, the amount of waste produced by company A was the highest at 12 tonnes, in comparison with just around 4 and 8 tonnes in company C and B, respectively. However, in the next 5 years, while there was a significant increase in waste production of company C from around 4 to 6 tonnes and company B with the amount of approximately 2 tonnes, company A saw a considerable decline by roughly 1 tonne.
Looking further into the data, over the 10-year period from 2005, company A continued cutting its waste steadily and finally reached around 8 tonnes. At the same trend, the amount of waste produced by company B fell dramatically and hit the lowest point at 3 tonnes at the end of the period. By contrast, company C's waste output gradually rose to approximately 10 tonnes in 2015.
The line graph highlights the information about the production of waste in three companies, namely A,B and C from 2000 to 2015. From the overall perspective, what stands out from the graph is that the...
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The charts highlight information about the percentages of British women and men working in manual and non-manual professions in 1992. From the overall perspective, what stands out from the graphs is that there were more male employees working in manual jobs than females, whereas the opposite was witnessed in non-manual careers . Another striking feature is that in the UK, the figure for General labourers fields was the lowest in both genders.
Turning to the details, in the UK, the non-manual fields were almost dominated by the females with 69%, in comparison to 48% of the males. In terms of Managerial and professional careers, the male workforce was the highest, at 36%, but it was quite noticeable in females with 29%. Besides, a majority of British women worked in the Clerical or related jobs, with approximately a third, while only 6% of males were employed in this profession. Furthermore, the female workforce contributed nearly a tenth to other non-manual occupations, compared with 6% for men.
Looking further into the data, in regard to manual fields, more males than females worked in these occupations, with 52% and 31%, respectively. The proportion of women in Craft or similar jobs accounted for a mere 3%, compared to nearly a quarter in men. However, surprisingly, the figure for general labourers’ careers in females and males made up for an insignificant amount, with 2% and 1%, respectively. In addition, regarding other manual careers, in comparison with male employees, the percentage for females was higher with only 1% from 27%
The charts highlight information about the percentages of British women and men working in manual and non-manual professions in 1992. From the overall perspective, what stands out from the graphs is t...
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The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.
The given line chart illustrates the numbers of different categories of travelers to a museum over a period of 15 years.
Overall, it is evident that almost all adult visitors were attracted to a museum, while this trend was opposite for visitors aged under 15. Adult visitors and special exhibition travelers experienced an upward trend, whereas the data on youngsters under 15 saw a steady decline throughout recorded periods.
As can be seen in the line chart, around 300,100 adult visitors went to the museum, making them the largest visitor group, while in the same year, visitors aged under 15 were approximately 120,000 visitors. There were a steady growth of 2100 visitors in the number of adult travelers in the next 5 years, compared to a slight decrease in the number of youngsters, at 110,000 visitors. After reaching the highest point in 2007, the number of adult travelers fell to 380,000 in 2012. Attendance among those under 15 years old still declined slowly, ending at 82,300 in 2012.
Turning to other features, beginning with 28,000 special exhibition travelers chose to travel in the museum, its figure continued to rise significantly in the next 10 years, achieving 37,000. Even though its figure underwent a dramatic increase from 38.000 to 42.000 in 2012, it was still the least visited group during the survey shown.
The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.
The given line chart illustrates the numbers of different categories of travelers to a museum over a...
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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In light of the increasing number of violent movies being aired on television and at the cinema, one school of thought holds that the level of violence in such movies should be regulated. However, other people opine that violent movies should not be regulated. This essay will examine both viewpoints, before concluding that I agree with the latter.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that the authority should limit the level of violence in films. Their key rationale is in favor of the notion that movies of this kind contain graphic images like blood pictures. Thus, some audiences might find these scenes disturbing and this can even take a toll on their mental health. Another reason is that some individuals can mimic the illegal actions in films containing too much violence content. For example, some people can adopt the actions in films that have fighting scenes and develop the tendency to be more aggressive. This, in turn, can lead to several social issues such as the increase in the crime rates and social unrest.
On the other hand, I subscribe to the viewpoint that violent films should not be regulated. To begin with, people should have the autonomy to watch the movies of their personal preferences as long as these movies do not encourage illegal actions. Depriving people of the right to do what they wish can instill in them a sense of resentment or even rebellious behaviors. Moreover, by watching violent movies, the general public can be better informed about the dire repercussions the people who violate the laws have to face and have a better understanding of the law systems. The implication of this is that they will refrain from breaking the law, thereby lowering the crime rates.
In conclusion, despite legitimate concerns about the negative impacts of violent films, I would contend that these films should not be restricted.
In light of the increasing number of violent movies being aired on television and at the cinema, one school of thought holds that the level of violence in such movies should be regulated. However, oth...
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Topic 1: Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that parents are necessary to impulse their children to join more physical activities instead of exceedingly focusing on studying. Personally, I totally agree with this view.
The option to let children spend time on physical activities is attractive for several reasons. The prime reason is the significant impact of physical health. It could be clarified that overloaded homeworks given to children have an enormous influence on their physical health since they become exhausted after fulfilling those, which causes their laziness of doing physical activities. Consequently, a great number of children have an increased tendency of obesity. Moreover, children might obtain acquaintance with new friends is the subsequent reason. Some outdoor physical activities require to play in a team, so they must get into conversation with each other, which is the supreme way of building a new relationship and enhancing the teamwork spirit. As a result, children become extroverts and more optimistic, which assists to form a strong mental health and against the negative energy. The additional reason is the dramatically increasing productivity of children. It can be explained by the fact that children’s body is presumed that it will release the dopamine hormone that is known as a happy hormone when doing physical activities. It makes them to gain more energy that will seriously boost their productivity, and finally, the work efficiency and concentration gradually develop right after children are back to study.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I maintain that children should be advised to participate in physical activities by their parents instead of concentrating on studying.
Topic 1: Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Topic 2: More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
Because the enhancement of technology in delivering news such as the Internet, people have not been fascinated in acquiring news from the original ways like reading newspapers or watching TV programs. I consider it to be a very positive trend.
Personally, I deem this a positive development. The first reason for my belief is the convenience that it has brought. This is because people can approach news every time, every where as long as they want through the Internet by electronic devices such as phones or tablets. For example, more websites for online newspaper like Saigonnews or BBC news have published widely, which gives people an ability of getting news immediately. As a result, people will save much time on getting news instead of purchasing newspapers or following news from TV programs. In addtion, the up-to-date news is the subsequent reason. This could be explained by the fact that orginal newspapers need to collect, select and print news from reporters, so those take much more time than online newspapers which just require the collecting and selecting process. For instance, the latest news on the scene such as unexpected accidents will be immediately collected and published within a hour to alert people to be careful, while original newspapers or TV programs need more than a week to publicize. Consequently, the newest information is instantly radiated to individuals, and online newspapers generate an opportunity to catch the latest news.
In conclusion, I consider this a positive development given the convenience and the latest news it provides a chance for people to easily approach. It is recommended that online newspapers websites should be encouraged to thrive.
Topic 2: More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
Because the e...
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Task 1: em mong được thầy cô chấm và đưa ra gợi ý cách cải thiện bài cho em ạ, tại writing đối với em là khó vô đầu nhất ạ :'(, em xin cảm ơn
The bar chart compares survey results about accommodation preferences including apartments, Terraced Houses, Detached Houses and Semi-detached houses in three cities in Britain in 2009.
Overall, while Liverpool citizens tended to live in apartments, Semi-detached Houses seemed to be more attractive for those whose houses were in London and Manchester. By contrast, Terraced Houses comprised the lowest percentage for all three cities throughout the given year.
Turning to the detail, the proportion of Liverpool apartment residents made up the highest figure with nearly 60% of the total, compared to just under 10% that of Terraced Houses, which was also the bottom proportion in 2009. In addition, both percentages of London and Manchester residents choosing apartments, at around 30% and 20% respectively were contrary to an approximately 10% rate difference in people opting for Terraced Houses (about 20% and 10% correspondingly)
The second most preferable settlement was Semi-detached Houses in both London and Manchester, with the same percentage of 38%, which was nearly similar to Detached ones in Manchester (35%). London and Liverpool, however, showed less interest in these types of accommodation with around 25% and 15% in the order given.
The bar chart compares survey results about accommodation preferences including apartments, Terraced Houses, Detached Houses and Semi-detached houses in three cities in Britain in 2009.
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The tables describe the change in the sales of coffee and bananas by Fairtrade in five different European nations from 1999 to 2004.
In general, the number of coffee and bananas in these European countries experienced an upward trend with the exception of sales of bananas in Belgium and Sweden.
It can be observed that in 1999, Switzerland was by far the most valuable market consuming coffee from Fairtrade-labelled with 3 millions of euros. The opposite was true for Sweden’s figure which stood at 0.8 millions. Over the following five years, the Unite Kingdom witnessed an enormous increase from 1.5 to 20, far surpassing the other countries. Sweden, however, was the lowest with 1 millions in consuming coffee.
It was clear that the Uinted Kingdom, Switzerland and Denmark went up in importing bananas while Sweden and Belgium went through a reduction. The United Kingdom saw an dramatical rise by around 32 billions of euros in the aforementioned period. By contrast, Sweden and Belgium underwent a slight decrease in bananas, respectively from 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9.
Mong quý thầy cô dành thời gian chấm và chữa bài giúp em ạ, em xin cảm ơn quý thầy cô
The tables describe the change in the sales of coffee and bananas by Fairtrade in five different European natio...
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