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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Mong cô chấm writing task 2 giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn cô nhiều ạ!
Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are of the opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Answer:
Opinions are divided on whether large organizations should offer directors higher compensation packages than ordinary workers. While both views hold merits, I believe that it is entirely essential to pay individuals in top positions higher salaries, for reasons related to their responsibilities and economic values.
On the one hand, some people argue that the directors of large companies should not earn better **salaries,** as it might lead to inequality and negative attitudes in the workforce. Proponents of this opinion say that members of organizations have the same level of commitment to working time, so comparable salaries are necessary to ensure equality in treatment. For example, officers of large organizations strictly follow the 9-to-5 regulation, which means to start work at 9 in the morning and leave work at 5 in the afternoon, resulting in a demand for fair remuneration policies. Additionally, there are frequent cases when junior members are required to complete trivial tasks without additional payment, which are beyond their work scope. As a result, better compensation packages for managerial positions might cause the feeling of envy among subordinates, dramatically affecting the attitudes and morale in the workforce.
On the other hand, I think that excessive salaries for directors are necessary in terms of the higher responsibilities and greater value that they commit to their organizations. One valid point is that senior managers are expected to make important decisions that can impact the company’s overall performance, which can be more stressful than the work requirements for ordinary employees. Therefore, organizations need to offer generous compensation to ensure that the directors feel motivated to meet the taxing demands of their high position. Another key reason is the enormous value that can be generated by qualified top executives, which outweighs their high compensation packages and promotes the company’s economic growth. Research indicates that qualified directors with good leadership skills hold 75% of the main factors that drive the success of their organizations, by giving innovative plans to significantly increase the sales figures.
In conclusion, while some people argue that high director pay is unfair, I contend that individuals in managerial positions are entitled to earn excessive salaries for their contributions, particularly in terms of responsibilities for taxing demands and economic value for fostering the company’s growth.
Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are of the opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give y...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn cô nhiều ạ!
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009 (in millions).
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Answer:
The graph illustrates the number of foreigners who visited the UK for different reasons from 1989 to 2009.
Overall, all three categories experienced a rise throughout the given timeframe. Additionally, taking holiday trips was the most common purpose for UK visits, while meeting friends and relatives was the least common.
A closer look at the graph reveals that in 1989, there were 5 million overseas visitors who came to the UK for business purposes, which was relatively higher than the number of those who came to meet friends and relatives, with a figure of 3.5 million. Subsequently, the former saw a slight drop to 4 million in 1992, before significantly rising to 8 million in 2008 and finally falling back to 7 million in 2009. Likewise, visitors who came to the UK for social reasons experienced a steady growth, increasing twofold to 7 million in 2008 and then receding to 6 million in the final year.
On the other hand, there was a volatile pattern in the upward trend of holiday travel over the 20-year period. In the first year, the number of foreigners visiting the UK was 6.5 million, which remained the same within the next three years, before undergoing a surge to 9 million in 1996 and experiencing a sharp fall to around 6.5 million in 2004. However, the figure then increased steadily, recovering to its peak at 9 million by the end of the period.
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009 (in millions).
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Mong thầy cô chấm writing task 1 giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ!
The line graph gives information about how Australian products were exported to four countries, including Japan, the US, China, and India, between 1990 and 2012.
Overall, among the four countries, there was an increase in percentages of Australian exports to China and India, with the former becoming the leading export destination by the end of the period. In contrast, Japan and the US experienced a gradual decrease in the proportion of exports.
A closer look at the graph reveals that in 1990, China and India started as the smallest export partners for Australian goods, with moderate figures of 2% and 1%, respectively. Thereafter, there has been a steady growth in the exporting percentage to China within a decade, before experiencing a surge up to fivefold in 2010 and continuing a slight increase to 27% in 2012. Likewise, India remained a marginal presence in Australia’s export market throughout a ten-year period, after which its share slightly moved upward to 7% in the next decade, before dropping to 5% in 2012.
Regarding the remaining countries, Japan and the US first came as the largest export partners for Australian products, with impressive figures of 27% and 12%, respectively. However, Japan soon experienced a sharp decline to 17% in 2012, which made it the second-largest export destination by the end of the period. Similarly, the US saw an insignificant decrease in the first five years, then had a steady growth until 2000, before bottoming out to only 5% in 2010 and rising to 7% in the final year.
The line graph gives information about how Australian products were exported to four countries, including Japan, the US, China, and India, between 1990 and 2012.
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Children who grow up in a family with less money are more capable of dealing with prolems in adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Kids who are come from impoverished family have the ability to solve problems compared to those are raised by affluent family. However, I completely disagree with this viewpoint due to numerous reasons that will be explained in this essay.
Growing up in a low-income family, where children are not be able to gain enough knowledge and experience on problem solving. As their financial background, they are in a weak position to get access to a beneficial educational environment such as prestigiuos schools, where provide them with essential skills and knowledges. As a result, without the understanding of extensive knowledge, students may have difficulty with dealing issues. Another reason is that they do not allocate enough time to study and not concentrate on acquiring more personal involvement and comperhension. While learning is a long-lasting journey that require a lot of efforts and endeavor, children with low-social economic background may have to help parent’s housework and even dropping out of school to earn their livelihood, thus disrupting their learning process.
Financial support and expert guidance are not offer to children because of their background. With wealthy family, it is believed that they have sufficient income to deal with problems, which a challenges for kids who are in a poor family. In this day and age, financial plays a crucial role in most aspects of life, following with attempts, so children with financial problems are always defeated by these difficulties. Rich children have a lot of opportunities to enroll in social gathering and having meal with well-know experts in various fields, allowing students to expand relationships and can easily deal with their problems. In contrast, without relationships with experts and influencers, thus a lack of understanding and priority to overome difficulties.
In conclusion, children from high-class families normally have the upper hand over ones in both knowledge and finance, which plays a vital role in improvign their problem-solving abilities.
Kids who are come from impoverished family have the ability to solve problems compared to those are raised by affluent family. However, I completely disagree with this viewpoint due to numerous reason...
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Mong thầy cô chấm writing task 2 giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ!
Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Answer:
Opinions are divided on whether history is one of the most crucial subjects or whether STEM subjects are more important than it. While history is essential in the school curriculum, I believe that STEM subjects are of greater importance, for reasons related to increasing employability and economic development.
I think that knowledge from STEM subjects plays a vital role in fostering employment opportunities and economic advancement. One valid point is that today’s job market prioritises applicants who excel in STEM subjects to adapt to technological requirements and contribute more value to companies. As a result, STEM learners have more opportunities to secure good job opportunities, receiving high salary packages from top businesses. Another advantage is that STEM learning significantly advances the national economy. For example, recent research shows that countries such as
South Korea and Germany have witnessed a rapid growth in their economic field, stemming from large investments in science and technology education.
On the other hand, some people are adamant that history should be a compulsory subject as it reinforces patriotism among students. Proponents of this opinion argue that history equips learners with knowledge about past events that were formed by the forefathers’ sacrifices, shaping their country’s sovereignty and thus inspiring them to make contributions to the national growth. However, it is noticeable that patriotic citizens without a solid STEM foundation might not have the ability to drive a country’s economy. This is because there has been a higher demand for a well-educated workforce, including skilled engineers and computer programmers, for nations to effectively generate sustainable development in today’s competitive world.
In conclusion, while some people think that history should be considered one of the most essential subjects, I strongly believe that preparing students with STEM knowledge would be more beneficial, particularly in terms of employability prospects and economic advancement.
Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both view...
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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
bài làm:
Opinions are divided on whether history is one of the most crucial subjects or whether STEM subjects are more important than it. While the former is essential, I contend that the latter subjects provide more benefits related to increased employability and economic development.
There are two main reasons why I believe that knowledge from STEM subjects would be more beneficial in today’s society. One valid point is that those subjects equip students with a solid foundation for better career prospects. This is because advanced technology has become vital to most fields, requiring applicants to be well-educated in practical subjects, including maths and physics, to earn excellent pay packages from top companies. Another advantage is that STEM learners contribute mainly to their countries’ economic development. While historical knowledge is considered theoretical and academic, learners who excel in STEM subjects can apply what they have learned to generate evolutionary innovations and inventions in numerous areas, ranging from business to technology.
On the other hand, some people argue that history should be considered a compulsory subject, fostering patriotism among students. Proponents of this opinion think that knowledge related to past events could drive them to maintain national sovereignty gained by previous generations’ sacrifices. However, it is noticeable that patriotism alone cannot contribute to the country’s sustainable development. This is because today’s competitive world demands practical expertise in science and technology, which can be acquired through STEM subjects, for countries to achieve economic advancement and reinforce national solidarity. For example, South Korea and Germany have invested significantly in STEM education to develop a skilled workforce that boosts the national economy.
In conclusion, while some people are adamant that history is one of the most essential subjects in the school curriculum, I believe that STEM education gives students more advantages that outweigh it, particularly in terms of employment opportunities and economic growth.
Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both view...
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More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Many individuals disclose personal information as a daily routine to socialize socializing on social media platforms or access online banking. However, while there are clear advantages to these shared personal informations, there are also significant disadvantages that must be considered.
One clear advantage of putting private informations is the opportunities to build new relationships. When individuals share their interests or passions on social platforms, they can attract others who have similar hobbies, helping them make a strong relationship easier. The other potential benefit of sharing personal information online is that it expands career opportunities. Hiring employers tend to find such a promise worker in some platforms like linkedln, that showing achievements, skills will be an opportunity to have a new potential position for job seekers.
However, I believe there are greater drawbacks to putting private information on the internet. One noticeable disadvantage of this trend is that it could be an opportunity for criminals to expand their behavior. Cyber criminals can exploit one’s information to execute crimes like scamming, impersonating. As a result, victims of these crimes can have serious damages of finance, personal life. Another downside of sharing personal information on social networks is that criminals can use the information to bother or scam people. Many organizations like insurance salespeople or multi-level marketing can use personal information to spam, call, bother or even scam others.
In conclusion, it is apparent that updating private information on the social network offers several benefits, such as building relationships and expanding career opportunities. However, I believe that this trend can bring more drawbacks including promoting cyber criminals and scamming organizations.
More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think the advantages of this d...
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The government should encourage people to eat more fruit because it contains Vitamin C which is good for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided on whether it is necessary for governments to encourage people to eat more fruit whose Vitamin C is beneficial for health. Although this idea is reasonable, I believe that it is more disadvantageous in general.
Admittedly, government encouragement for people to consume more fruit is justifiable. Irrefutably, vitamin C in fruit is a key element that human bodies need to boost the immune system. These supporters believe that if individuals consume more fruit, they may reduce the risk of contracting health conditions, such as fungal infections or even cancer. However, this line of reasoning is flawed, as it fails to factor in the economic ramifications of a widespread increase in fruit consumption. Specifically, increased demand for fruit is likely to result in a significant rise in the price of produce such, namely strawberries or mangoes. From this angle, many people - especially financially disadvantaged people - would face a greater financial burden if they increased their consumption of fruit.
Additionally, fostering an increase in fruit consumption in communities can exert a severely detrimental effect on the overall development of a country. Indubitably, people generally prioritize wealth over other factors. In this sense, a substantial increase in eating fruit can provoke people to place a heavier reliance on fruit to make a profit, potentially resulting in the potential of neglecting other important factors such as infrastructure, healthcare and education. In the long run, such ignorance can lead to the stagnation of a nation, as underdeveloped streets and unskilled and uneducated citizens may not be profitable to foreign investors.
In conclusion, while it seems logical for governing bodies to persuade people to eat more fruit for wellness, I believe that doing so can cause graver long-term consequences for residents and society.
The government should encourage people to eat more fruit because it contains Vitamin C which is good for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided on whether it is neces...
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Mong thầy cô chấm writing task 2 giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ!
Some people believe the benefits of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in a particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Bài làm:
Many people are of the opinion that the benefits created by tourism outweigh the drawbacks because of its huge profit. Others, nevertheless, claim that this field might result in negative consequences for local communities and the environment. Although both views hold merit, I agree more with the former perspective.
On the one hand, a school of thought holds that tourism should be considered significantly beneficial for two main reasons. The first key point is that it generates a spectrum of jobs, facilitating individuals’ financial stability and vastly contributing to economic growth. Countries such as China and Thailand have recognized thousands of families supported by the enormous tourism revenue. Another reason is that tourism development promotes cultural exchange. Recent research shows that authentic travel packages to Vietnam, which allow people from different backgrounds to absorb knowledge of the country’s distinctive traditions and customs at an affordable price, also help raise public awareness of the values of cultural understanding and global peace.
On the other hand, some people are adamant that tourism brings more harm than good. People often have this opinion because tourist activities might result in environmental degradation. Vietnam’s tourist attractions, including Ho Chi Minh City and Vung Tau, are scientifically proven to be damaged by mass tourism. While these concerns are valid, it is noticeable that thorough tourism policies and sustainable development strategies can balance tourism growth and environmental preservation. For instance, proper regulations such as limiting single-use plastics have been enacted by local governments to ensure that travel agencies and visitors act responsibly in minimizing their environmental footprint.
In conclusion, although tourism can bring several problems, these can be effectively managed by careful and long-term planning. The positive impact of tourism on the national economy and culture generally outweighs the drawbacks, emphasizing that it is a valuable industry worth investing in.
Some people believe the benefits of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in a particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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mong thầy cô giúp với ạ. với lại em nhìn đề thấy 5 loại mà sao đề lại cho 4.
The graphic illustrates the proportion of power production from five different fuel types in five Asian countries, based on 2005 data.
Overall, while Japan and South Korea were more reliant on environmentally friendly sources to generate electricity, the other countries placed heavier dependence on fossil fuels, with the exception of Thailand mainly relying on unspecified sources.
Regarding eco-friendly sources, Japan exhibited the largest proportion of energy coming from nuclear, at 49%, distantly followed by 33%, 19%, and 13% for South Korea, Malaysia, and Singapore. In contrast, Thailand was the only country that did not use nuclear to generate power. 48% of South Korea’s electricity was produced by hydro and wind, significantly higher than that of Thailand, the figure recording nearly 20%. The remaining countries represented analogous percentages, each using about 4% for energy production.
Concerning fossil fuels, the proportions of energy from coal and lignite in Malaysia and Singapore were recorded 61% and 42%, respectively, showing the main resource of energy in these countries. This contrasted sharply with the other nations, with about 5% being utilized. Thailand showed 39% of energy from petroleum products while the remaining countries occupied a minimal presence of this type, recording just about 3%. Looking at unspecified source, Thailand was the leader with 42% of power generated. The identical figures were observed in Singapore and Japan, standing at 39%. This was basically triple that of Malaysia and South Korea, at around 12%.
The graphic illustrates the proportion of power production from five different fuel types in five Asian countries, based on 2005 data.
Overall, while Japan and South Korea were more reliant on enviro...
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The diagram illustrates the number of universities that were ranked in the top 200 across five countries, categorized by three different subjects, in 2011.
Overall, The USA had the highest number of universities in three subjects in all the examined countries while New Zealand represented the lowest figures. Additionally, biology courses were most favored in the USA, the United Kingdom and New Zealand, as opposed to Australia and Canada, where psychology classes were the most popular.
Regarding the USA and the United Kingdom, the former recorded 69 universities in biology courses, significantly higher than that of the United Kingdom with 30 biology-related institutions. 58 and 54 colleges in psychology and medicine classes were shown in the USA, compared to recorded 29 and 24 ones in the United Kingdom, respectively.
Concerning the remaining nations, Australia and Canada showed respective similar figures of top-ranked institutions, with 9 universities specialized in biology, 17 and 14 ones in psychology, as well as 13 and 12 in medicine classes. Conversely, New Zealand had 12 universities, with six, four, and two institutions in biology, psychology, and medicine courses in that order.
The diagram illustrates the number of universities that were ranked in the top 200 across five countries, categorized by three different subjects, in 2011.
Overall, The USA had the highest number of...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
In some countries, people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?
ANSWER:
These days, spending extra hours at work is becoming more common. This phenomenon may stem from people’s higher wage and their increasing workload, and I firmly believe that this trend brings about more cons than pros.
Nowadays, many people are overworking due to the pressure from daily necessities and work. In most countries, due to the escalating living cost, people are made to work long hours to afford their lives. In other words, overworking is not an option but rather an obligation for individuals to survive. In some other cases, people choose to work overtime to cope with their workload. The main reason is that their work is more intense and harder, making them have to work longer hours to finish the tasks. People often devote their time and take on more responsibilities to deal with their work effectively.
However, I hold the belief that overworking will bring more harmful things than the good ones. It is undeniable that working long hours help people earn a lot of money and also facilitate one’s life, nonetheless, it will put a person under immense pressure, leading to physical and mental problems. For example, when working overtime, we can get tired, stressed, and make our health deteriorate and also cause stress-related illnesses such as depression, panic disorder,...even some severe diseases like hypertension, arrhythmia and heart attack. Additionally, overworking can create an imbalance between our work and families. People just have little time for themselves and their families, and they are likely to risk the well-being of their close relationships, exposing them to depression and isolation in the future.
In conclusion, while it is understandable why people spend more time at work, I always believe that individuals need to manage their time appropriately to have a happy life without less pressure and tension.
In some countries, people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?
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These days, spending extra hours at work is becoming more common. This p...
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Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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It is argued that it should be mandatory for the young generation to engage in voluntary activities to support those who are in need. While this practice may lead to several problems relating to wasting valuable time and the exploitation of the young, I still believe that the overall impact is tremendously positive.
On the one hand, the disadvantages of requiring young people to take part in unpaid jobs are in plain sight. The main reason is that these activities consume a great amount of effort and dedication. For example, participants need to spend their free time to foster their knowledge and realistic skills so that they can be qualified enough to provide aid to other people in the community. Therefore, these works might not be feasible for those having hectic studying and working schedules. If the government forces young people to engage in unpaid work, they would suffer from stress and anxiety due to the lack of relaxation and rest time. Another drawback could be that illegal organisations might take advantage of young people, particularly students. This stems from the fact that some corporations overexploit participants for the sake of their own profits instead of community benefits. Consequently, this would cause mental and physical degradation and even well-being of the young.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the advantages of unpaid work still outperform the shortcomings. One of the primary benefits is the opportunities to accumulate diverse experiences and essential skills. Young people take part in voluntary work that require direct interaction and collaboration with each other, they can enhance their interpersonal skills. This brings about the expansion of vision and knowledge through practical experiences and even other people. Furthermore, unpaid jobs help foster solidarity among people, in terms of societal level. These voluntary programs help teach the young generation the importance and benefits of working together and sympathizing with others, especially poor people. Eventually, voluntary activities will boost a better quality of lives and a wealthier country when requiring the young support other people in the community.
In conclusion, despite the negative impacts of forcing the young to engage in charity work, I am of the opinion that its advantages are far more pronounced.
Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the development of a frog in natural life from egg stage to adult frog stage.
Overall, to become an adult frog, it has to go through a total of 8 stages to reach maturity. The process begins with the mating of two adult frogs and ends with the mature frog.
In the first step, the male and female adult frogs participate in the mating procedure and then give birth to eggs, containing embryos laid in water. Next, those spawns are hatched, becoming the first form of a frog to be a tadpole. After that, these tadpoles grow bigger in size and start to create front legs. In the following stage, the tadpoles gradually form limbs and long tails, and they also begin pulmonary breathing.
Then, they get out of the water and start living on the ground as amphibians. During this progress, their tails become shorter and then disappear when they reach the phase of becoming a tadpole frog. Finally, young frogs grow into mature ones and their life loops continue with the mating between 2 adult frogs.
The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates t...
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The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
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The maps illustrate how a small museum and its nearby area changed from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, the museum underwent several alterations during the period, most notably the extension/ expansion of the car park and the shop, and the addition of a new cafe.
In 1990, there was an exhibition room opposite the main entrance of the museum with an L-shaped building. However, a small part of the building was demolished to make space for the expansion of the shop. Additionally, two separate exhibition rooms located on the right side when standing at the entry, until 2010, were combined into one big building. While the restaurant was opposite the big exhibition room and in the left corner in 1990, it still remained unchanged in both position and size later.
Moreover, there was a cottage in the bottom left corner, but it was replaced by a new coffee shop in 2010. On the right side of the museum, the car park located opposite the garden in 1990, was expanded after 20 years thanks to the clearance of the garden. Outside the museum, the main road, the path to the entry and the garden on the top still remained unchanged despite some dramatic transformations of the museum design.
The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
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The maps illustrate how a small museum and its nearby area changed from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, t...
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The diagram give information about changes in a student accommodation building.
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The diagrams illustrate how student accommodation has changed from 2010 to present.
Overall, the building experienced several alterations during the period, most notably was the extension of space used for the study-bedrooms and the additions of a social area, en-suite room and a parking spot. Additionally, some other features have been removed to make space for the new design.
In 2010, there was a living room and a student bedroom located to the north of the building. Currently, three bedrooms have been built there, and the living room is no longer required. Next to the center of the main building, another student bedroom and a bathroom have been unchanged in position and size in the current design.
On the east side, the kitchen now has been expanded to serve as a social area, and a private room below, which was constructed in 2010, now has a new en-suite room adjacent to it, and as a result, the entryway has become noticeably narrower. Outside the residence hall, there were two gardens patching to the north and south, however a parking lot has taken the place of the garden to the south of the building.
The diagram give information about changes in a student accommodation building.
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The diagrams illustrate how student accommodation has changed from 2010 to present.
Overall, the buildi...
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The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000.
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The given charts illustrate what Australian students do after graduating from secondary school over the course of 20 years, commencing from 1980.
Overall, there was an upward trend seen in the proportion of employed students, while those who were unemployed and pursued higher education experienced a decline throughout the period. Another key feature is that the statistics for employed students register the most prominent in most years surveyed, whereas the opposite is true for unemployed students.
In 1980, half of Australian secondary school leavers decided to enhance their scholastic achievements. After 10 years, this figure decreased significantly to 38% and remained nearly unchanged in 2000. Meanwhile, the proportion of students who failed to seek employment was smallest, at only 10% in 1980 and 12% in 1990. It finally witnessed a slight decline to 8% in the final year examined.
On the other hand, Australian secondary schools saw an increase in the percentage of students who had their jobs after graduating. Specifically, it surged from 40% in 1980 to 55% in 2000, which accounted for the largest among all of the recorded categories.
The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000.
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The given charts illustrate what Au...
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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while others believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Nowadays, fast food has become more popular and gradually developed into a staple diet in many countries. This problem is concerned by individuals, they believe that it is beneficial to eat traditional foods, while some people prefer fast food. I am of the opinion that traditional foods are always a better choice.
It is understandable why some people advocate the view that fast food is a good option. The key rationale is that fast food captivates many individuals by its convenience and tastes. Fast food normally is processed and available in food stores or restaurants with unique, luscious flavors, and people will be drawn to it, they can buy it at any fast food stores along the roads. Therefore, they tend to eat fast food much and skip traditional meals to save time. However, this is not always true. In fact, fast food contains a lot of fat and many bad chemical ingredients, preservatives that trigger health hazards such as heart disease and obesity. Moreover, buying fast food too often can cost lots of money and can lead to waste of food. Thus, fast food can not replace any meals with traditional foods.
Instead of having fast food for daily meals, I believe that people can continue to eat traditional foods. Traditional foods reflect the culture and the history of a country, eating these dishes help us stay connected to our roots and preserve cultural values. Additionally, traditional meals are more healthier and meaningful compared to fast food. They are usually made from fresh, natural ingredients without harmful additives or preservatives, and offer a balanced mix of nutrients, such as proteins, vegetables and grains. That will be better for everyone’s health and prevent diseases which fast food causes. Unlike fast food, which is often eaten quickly and alone. Traditional foods are usually shared with family, bringing people closer together. Therefore, we should prefer traditional foods not only for health but also to keep a country’s culture alive.
In conclusion, it would be better and advantageous for people to eat traditional foods greatly.
In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while others believe that fast food is a good choice. Dis...
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Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, people are often exposed to many kinds of advertising programs to attract their attention to buy products. Some individuals believe that this will bring about positive benefits to our lives, and personally, I completely agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will explain why the statement is true.
Firstly, advertisements help people know more about other products. With the development of producing a variety of quality goods, there are many commodities which some individuals may not approach and experience. Thus, when advertising programs are displayed more, especially on TV or billboard, people can know easily and try using products. Additionally, advertisement is also a marketing way to impress people via eye-catching product images such as logos, contents and information about origin and source of products to make them feel interested, secure and want to experience these products.
Moreover, many individuals normally do search for products they intend to buy, so advertisements will help them have a brief description of products that people can consider carefully before purchasing. Not only that, advertising with many choices and tempting offers, people could receive their favorite products and enhance their comforts and standard of living. Advertisements not only bring users experiences of quality commodities, but also are marketing fields which generate a diversity of employment opportunities such as copywriter, digital marketers and social media specialists.
In conclusion, advertisements are more popular in modern society, and have positive impacts on our daily lives. It will offer many product experiences and also employment opportunities.
Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Should employees speak out if their colleagues are unethical?
In contemporary workplaces, ethical conduct is fundamental to fostering trust, accountability, and long-term success. However, when colleagues engage in unethical behavior, employees often face a dilemma: should they voice their concerns or remain silent? This essay argues that reporting unethical actions is a moral obligation, despite potential risks, as it safeguards organizational integrity and collective well-being.
Primarily, employees have a responsibility to uphold ethical standards to prevent harm to their organization and society. Unethical practices, such as fraud, discrimination, or data manipulation, can tarnish a company’s reputation, lead to legal penalties, and erode employee morale. For instance, if a sales team falsifies client records to meet targets, it may initially boost profits but ultimately damage client trust and invite regulatory scrutiny. By speaking out, employees protect not only their employer’s credibility but also the interests of stakeholders, including customers and investors. Furthermore, silence can normalize misconduct, creating a toxic work culture where dishonesty thrives. Addressing such issues promptly ensures transparency and reinforces a shared commitment to ethical principles.
Nevertheless, some argue that reporting colleagues may provoke retaliation, strained relationships, or even job loss. These concerns are valid, as whistleblowers often face ostracization or career setbacks. However, organizations increasingly implement anonymous reporting channels and legal protections to encourage accountability without exposing individuals to undue risk. For example, many companies now have dedicated ethics hotlines or human resources policies that prioritize confidentiality. Additionally, tolerating unethical behavior to avoid conflict can have graver consequences, such as enabling systemic corruption or endangering public safety. A healthcare worker who ignores a colleague’s negligence, fearing confrontation, risks patient lives, whereas speaking up could prompt corrective measures and save others.
In conclusion, while confronting unethical behavior involves personal risks, employees have a duty to prioritize ethical integrity over short-term comfort. Organizations must cultivate environments where transparency is valued, and safeguards exist to protect those who report misconduct. By fostering a culture of accountability, businesses can mitigate harm, enhance trust, and ensure sustainable success. Ultimately, collective responsibility toward ethics benefits both individuals and institutions in the long run.
In contemporary workplaces, ethical conduct is fundamental to fostering trust, accountability, and long-term success. However, when colleagues engage in unethical behavior, employees often face a dile...
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