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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp...
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Writing task 1 ạ. Mong nhận được lời nhận xét của thầy cô ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
The chart provides data about the number of people in four different age brackets who used gym services monthly in Europe during one decade (from 1990 to 2010).
Overall, people at the age of 45 and over showed the least interest in going to the gym. The number of young citizens from 18 to 24 documented a fluctuation, while the rest of the gym attendances reflected an upward shift.
Delving into specifics, in 1990, the percentage of inhabitants aged 25-34 commanded the highest position, about 7%, then rose significantly to precisely 50% in 2010. That data for adolescents from 18-24 years jumped dramatically from 6% in 1990 to nearly 60% in 2006, after which it declined marginally and then made a recovery to under 60% during the end of the period.
The number of people in the 35 - 44 age group also displayed a noticeable upswing, from approximately 5% in 1990 to about 22% in 2006, then it demonstrated a sharp increase to 40% in 2006. The figure for the oldest age bracket showed sustainable growth, increasing consistently from 3% to over 20% over the period.
The chart provides data about the number of people in four different age brackets who used gym services monthly in Europe during one decade (from 1990 to 2010).
Overall, people at the age of 45 and o...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e với ạ: Task 2: Organising a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organising a large family event and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It is argued that although a big family celebration such as a wedding can bring joys and knitted family ties, there may occur some difficulties and incalculable situations. This essay aims to discuss the problems and provide solutions.
One major hurdle is the disagreement over decisions like ideas about decoration, main style, or even guest list. This is an ordinary problem, according to various perspectives, ages, and hobbies which create conflicts when organizing the celebration. For example, while old people tend to prefer a simple and old style, the young may want a big and extraordinary celebration. Furthermore, to hold a wedding for instance, usually costs a huge financial investment, often creating a burden and pressure when managing costs for venues, catering, decorations, and entertainment. This may lead to debt and argument. On the one hand, coordinating the schedules of many family members and vendors can be complicated. For example, choosing the right day and a place where all guests can hold is a significant problem.
Perhaps these difficulties may seem hard to handle, yet they can be resolved mostly through discussion. People should set aside time to discuss matters together and use techniques such as voting to reach a consensus. For finance, list the estimated budget for each category and try to minimize unnecessary expenses, and it should be realistics in addition. Besides, asking the people who have held the similar celebration can help you a lot as you can avoid their mistakes and get experiences from them. This may help you to coordinate the schedules and organize in a better way.
To summarize, organizing a celebration can be quite hard, but if it is carefully planned, with discussion over family members and the advice from the predecessors, this may be rewarded in memorable occasions that strengthen the bonds among family members.
It is argued that although a big family celebration such as a wedding can bring joys and knitted family ties, there may occur some difficulties and incalculable situations. This essay aims to discuss...
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Em mong thầy cô chấm bài giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều.
The chart describes the proportion of men and women in various age in Australia who actively exercise by 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of female who exercise quite often was higher than male.
While the data for men was lower than women except the group aged 15 to 24.
Regarding the proportion of male doing physical activity, male aged 15 to 24 was the highest compared to male aged 35 to 44. The lower proportion of male doing exercise was in the age group 65 and over, 55 to 64, and 45 to 54 that range from 46.7, 45.1, 43.1, respectively.
Turning to female, the proportion of teenagers, aldults, and old people were much more likely the same that accounted for 47.7 and 47.1, respectively. The highest proportion of female actively doing excerise was 53.3, followed by 53 and 52.5 from people aged 55 to 64 and 35 to 44.
The chart describes the proportion of men and women in various age in Australia who actively exercise by 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of female who exercise quite often was higher...
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mong thầy cô chấm giúp e bài task 1 vs ah
The table depicts the volume of waste generated (in millions of tones) throughout six distinct nations in three different years (1980, 1990, and 2000)
Overall, the US consistently maintained the largest amount of waste output throughout the examined period. It is also remarkable that Korea was the only country that declined the amount of its waste production
From 1980 to 2000, the volume of waste generated in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes. a Similar change, but to a lesser extent was seen in the figures for Japan, which grew from 28 to 53 million tonnes. Throughout the same examined period, the amounts of waste production in Poland and Portugal went up by 2.6 and 3 million tonnes respectively.
The patterns for Ireland and Korea displayed striking contrasts. In Ireland, waste generation experienced a dramatic surge, rising over eightfold from a mere 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes by 2000. Conversely, Korea observed a substantial reduction in waste production, dropping from 31 million tonnes in 1990 to just 19 million tonnes in 2000
The table depicts the volume of waste generated (in millions of tones) throughout six distinct nations in three different years (1980, 1990, and 2000)
Overall, the US consistently maintained the larg...
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The bar graph describes the data about the average number of foreigners going to a museum in both seasons like summer and winter in 2005.
Overall, it is clear that the summer was generally much higher than the winter, with their peak time. It appears that the museum had the same opening hour, but in the summer the museum closed later at the end of the year.
Regarding the summer season, the number of visitors surged from 9 to 12 o'clock in the morning and reached a peak of 1500 visitors. Subsequently, the museum witnessed a gradual drop to 800 visitors at 16p.m, followed by another decrease to 200 visitors at 17h30 p.m. and closed at 18p.m
In terms of the winter season, the museum started having around 400 visitors from 10 A.M, which fell slightly to 380 visitors before increasing significantly to 600 visitors at 12 A.M. Especially, a continual decrease was observed in this attendance figure, and the museum closed its door at 3 P.M in the afternoon
The bar graph describes the data about the average number of foreigners going to a museum in both seasons like summer and winter in 2005.
Overall, it is clear that the summer was generally much highe...
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xin thầy cô chấm bài giúp e với ạ
The line graph illustrates the total number of various turtles that inhabited in India between 1980 and 2012.
Overall, Olive Ridley turtles were having a gradual upward trend to 1998 then fluctuating. Green turtles and the remaining species were stable, however, green turtles were lower than all species. In addition, leatherback turtles had a downward trend.
Looking at the graph more closely, every species had a starting point at 100 indexes. Olive Ridley turtles reached a peak at 140 indexes and stayed the same in the next 14 years. Furthermore, it had the highest number of inhabitants. Moreover, all species had a moderate rise and stopped at 110 indexes in 2012. In contrast, green species had a slight drop at 90 indexes in the final year. The leatherback turtles had an alarming rate of decreasing at 60 indexes and it had the lowest inhabitants in the chart.
In conclusion, only Olive Ridley turtles increased. All species and leatherback turtles decreased.
The line graph illustrates the total number of various turtles that inhabited in India between 1980 and 2012.
Overall, Olive Ridley turtles were having a gradual upward trend to 1998 then fluctuatin...
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mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạThe increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The natural environment is damaged by the increase in the amount of consumer goods manufactured. While there are several reasons for this phenomenon, some solutions can be taken to improve the situation.
One cause of this problem is the lenient regulations. In many developing countries, governments impose lower barriers to the environment for non-environmentally friendly industries to attract investment from foreign corporations. For example, the lack of strict environmental controls allowed the steel manufacturer Formosa to discharge untreated waste into the ocean, resulting in not only marine pollution but also encouraging increased production due to lower operational costs. To mitigate this problem, authorities should impose stricter environmental regulations on the manufacturing sector. In Singapore, the government imposes higher tax rates on many industries such as the plastic or steel industries to protect the environment.
Another reason is not properly recycling. Because of the increase in population, the demand for consumer goods also rises. The lack of proper recycling contributes to increased production of new consumer goods. Without effective recycling systems, materials that could be reused are wasted, leading to higher demand for new products. For example, in metropolises like Hanoi, the absence of efficient recycling programs results in increased production of plastic items, as used plastics end up in landfills instead of being repurposed. An effective method that should be implemented to tackle this issue is for the government to implement advanced recycling technology in recycling consumer waste. The government can raise funds to subsidize scientists operating in this field.
In conclusion, the lenient regulations and not properly recycling are two culprits behind the problem. I believe that if the solutions mentioned were implemented effectively, the problem would be alleviated.
The natural environment is damaged by the increase in the amount of consumer goods manufactured. While there are several reasons for this phenomenon, some solutions can be taken to improve the situati...
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Dạ mong thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the natural environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?
The young generation spends less time on outdoor activities in the natural environment, such as mountain climbing and hiking, during holidays or weekends. While there are several reasons for this phenomenon, some solutions can be taken to improve the situation.
One cause of this problem is the lifestyle, which depends on electronic devices and the Internet for entertainment. Growing up in the Internet age, it is easy to access entertainment content on social platforms and they can spend hours staring at the screen and forget physical activities. Young individuals need only a Wi-Fi connection to watch content on YouTube to relax so they do not want to participate in nature's leisure activities. To mitigate this problem parents should manage the amount of time their children use the Internet and encourage them to participate in various outdoor activities. This can help ensure a healthier balance between screen time and physical activity, fostering well-rounded development. This balanced approach can help mitigate the potential negative effects of excessive internet use.
Another reason is time-consuming. In the urbanization century, traffic jams can make individuals are lazy to go out. For example, in urban areas like Hanoi, if urban youths want to participate in hiking or camping, they can waste 2-3 hours to move to suburban areas. Therefore, it can consume almost all day for these activities and they do not have time to rest after these trips. An effective method that should be implemented to tackle this issue is shuttle services should be more invested. By providing convenient, accessible, and affordable transportation options, shuttle services can encourage children and families to participate in outdoor activities, sports, or events. This not only promotes a healthier lifestyle but also reduces traffic congestion, and lowers carbon emissions.
In conclusion, the dependence on electronic devices and the Internet for entertainment and time-consuming are two culprits behind the problem. I believe that if the solutions mentioned were implemented effectively, the problem would be alleviated.
The young generation spends less time on outdoor activities in the natural environment, such as mountain climbing and hiking, during holidays or weekends. While there are several reasons for this phen...
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Dạ mong thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Your essay should be about 150-200 words long. The two maps show an existing city and proposed changes for the next tên years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps depict the current city layout and the proposed changes planned for the next ten years.
At present, the city consists of a combination of industrial and residential areas, with factories positioned centrally and houses spread out. In the future, it is expected that the industrial zones will be significantly reduced, with factories moved to the outskirts. This relocation will allow for the creation of more green spaces and parks throughout the city.
Moreover, the existing road network is set to be improved, enhancing connectivity between residential and commercial areas. New pathways will be introduced, promoting walking and cycling as viable options for transportation. Public transport will also be upgraded, making it more efficient and accessible.
In summary, the future city will prioritize green spaces and improved infrastructure, leading to a more sustainable and livable environment for its residents. These developments are likely to encourage community interaction and support healthier lifestyles in the long term.
The two maps depict the current city layout and the proposed changes planned for the next ten years.
At present, the city consists of a combination of industrial and residential areas, with factor...
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Mong thầy/cô chấm bài này giúp em ạ, em cảm ơn thầy/cô nhiều ạ
The line chart illustrates the number of inquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city through three means of communication between January and June of the year 2011.
The given chart compares three means of communication received by how many inquiries were sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city from January to June in the year 2021.
Overall, there was an increase in types of communication by telephone and in person, while it witnessed a fall in the number of inquiries by letter or email. In addition, the figure for communicating in person had the highest data from April onwards.
The number of communicating in person started at just over 400, after which it experienced a dramatic growth before concluding at just over 1800. Similar changes can be seen in the figure for socialising by telephone, which was the highest data in January, then it reached a low of 800 in February before gradually increasing and ending at 1600.
Conversely, around 800 communicating by letter or email in January, which witnessed a significant fall from March to May before remaining unchanged at just under 400 in the last period.
The line chart illustrates the number of inquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city through three means of communication between January and June of the year 2011....
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thầy cô chữa đề writing task 1 cho em với ạ
The picture illustrate the breakdown of 5 servings of fruits and vegetables that numerous individuals consume each day in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008. Overall, over the course of 8 years, there was an upward trend in the figures for all categories. Besides, while women received the highest consumption, children saw the lowest proportion when eat 5 portions of fruits and vegetables every day.
It can be seen in the bar chart that from 2001 to 2003, most of kids and males remain unchanged the percentage of eating greengroceries at 13% and 17%, perspectively. Females, moreover, showed an rapid increase from 23% to 27% and comprised the highest point in all factors during this period.
However, since 2004, the expenditure of fruits and vegetables were increased significantly by children and men. While children rose from 17% to 23%, men seemed to be higher and reached between 20% and 27% over 4 periods. For women, they remained steady growth and reached a record-high of 35% consumed fruits and vegetables in 2006 over the period of 8 years. Nevertheless, the consumption of people ate 5 portions of greengroceries saw a plunge in females by 5% and slightly decreased for children and males around 25% in 2008.
The picture illustrate the breakdown of 5 servings of fruits and vegetables that numerous individuals consume each day in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008. Overall, over the course of 8 years,...
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Dạ thầy cô xem và sửa bài giúp em với ạ. Em cám ơn. Preventing campfires from causing wildfires is a major challenge. What are some reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Preventing campfires from causing wildfires is a significant challenge for several reasons.
One major factor is human carelessness. Many campers do not fully extinguish their fires or fail to follow safety guidelines, which can easily lead to wildfires. In dry and hot conditions, even a small spark can ignite surrounding vegetation and create a large fire.
Another reason is the increasing number of people who go camping. As more people visit forests and national parks, the likelihood of campfires getting out of control rises. Many campers may lack experience and may not understand the risks involved with lighting a fire in these areas. This lack of knowledge can contribute to dangerous situations.
To solve this problem, several measures can be taken. First, it is crucial to educate campers about fire safety. Providing clear information at campsites, such as brochures and signs, can help raise awareness about the dangers of campfires. Additionally, using social media and online platforms to share safety tips can reach a wider audience.
Moreover, local authorities should enforce stricter regulations on campfire use, particularly during dry seasons. This could include limiting campfires to designated areas or requiring permits to light a fire. Lastly, improving fire monitoring systems can help detect fires early, allowing for a quicker response.
In conclusion, while preventing wildfires caused by campfires is challenging due to human negligence and the popularity of camping, education, regulation, and better monitoring can significantly reduce the risks.
Preventing campfires from causing wildfires is a significant challenge for several reasons.
One major factor is human carelessness. Many campers do not fully extinguish their fires or fail to follow...
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Pls help me Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One school of thought holds that education and healthcare should be given at no cost and subsidized by the national budget, while others argue that individuals should bear the financial responsibility for accessing these services. In this essay, I would evaluate both views before proposing my personal opinion .
On the one hand, there are certain rationales supporting complimentary access to education and the healthcare system. Nowadays, the cost of education and medical care increases significantly due to the rising demands for qualities, facilities and human resources , hindering the accessibility of citizens with disadvantaged socio-economic backgrounds . This issue would impact negatively on the health condition, educational level and the overall development of a part of population, which, in turn, leads to the inability to contribute efficiently in the nation's workforce. As a result, by making these services accessible for all,this problem would be solved. More well-educated and healthy citizens would contribute in the workforce, boosting the economy growth and improving the living standard of the whole population.
On the other hand, albeit the idealistic nature of making healthcare and education free of charge, its realistic application would bring about many obstacles and problems. The coverage of such expenditure requires a huge amount of financial resources from the nation's budget. Unfortunately, many countries, especially developing ones,
may not have a flexible budget to cover such huge sums. As a result, if the proposal of removing the financial obligations for people is implemented , the government would not manage to complete such task. Therefore, some people deem that it is advisable to require individual payments for the services.
In conclusion, although there are
controversial opinions on whether the expenses of medical and educational services should be the responsibility of the government or citizens, I personally think that it is better to approach this issue based on case-to-case basis. While people with low means of living should be granted financial aids to access education and healthcare, people who can afford to pay should still follow their financial obligations.
One school of thought holds that education and healthcare should be given at no cost and subsidized by the national budget, while others argue that individuals should bear the financial responsibilit...
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nhờ anh chị chấm bài giúp em ạ
Writing task 1
The table illustrates the proportion of electronic products in New Zealand households over two years, 2002 and 2020.
Overall, it is notbale that the vast majority of households had ownership of washing machine and colour TV. Moreover, the most notable rapid rise was seen in the figure for cell phones.
In 2002, the most prominent electronic device in household was washing machine at 97%, closely followed by colour Tv with 95%.75% of New Zealand household owned video recorder, surpassing that of dishwasher and computer by 30 and 25% respectively. Meanwhile, cellphones were found in just 20% of houses, while digital cameras stood for only 2%.
During 2020, cell phone received the fourfold rapid rise, reaching 80% whereas digital camera remained the most uncommon devices devices owned by New zealand houses despite a significant increase of 38%.Notably, a small increase was recorded in the figure for dishwasher and computer, ranging from 28% and 10%.However, in spite of the popularity of washing machine in the first year,it was replaced by colour TV with a bigger increase of 4% in comparision to 1%.Coversely, video recorder declined slightly to 55% in 2020.
Writing task 2
Technological advancements act as a viable way of combating crimes and demystifying criminal cases easily. I wholly agree with this idea as technology has revolutionised the way we catch criminal acts.
The decline in unlawful act is due to the advancement of technology.the first reason is that it could facilitate observing criminal movement and give out the viable solution to combat crimes.By applying information technology in CCTV cameras in every corner of the city, the police officer could view the movement of people with just a few clicks.As a result, If there is a crime robbing the bank and he is escaping, it could act as the productive way of viewing the movement and the technology would give out the best advice to catch the thieves, hence ensuring high security of an area.
The implication of some broadcast devices like smartphones, Tvs, Ipads could play an important role in combating crimes and educating people about the consequences of unlawful acts.Thanks to the invention of broadcast tower, people could see news in numerous channels.By broadcasting the information of escaping criminals and his information and advice on how to prevent or catch him, people would take a strict measure and cooperate with the authority through giving out important evidence for them to trace the movement of the crime,hence catching them.Also, it could educate people about the bad consequences of performing unlawful acts in public.People would become more aware of their actions which could lead to criminal acts.Optimizing the potential of electronic devices could help address the criminal problem and encourage cooperation between people in combating crimes.
In conclusion, Techonologies have played an important role in promoting people’s cooperation and educating people about deterring crime.
Writing task 1
The table illustrates the proportion of electronic products in New Zealand households over two years, 2002 and 2020.
Overall, it is notbale that the vast majority of households had owne...
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Mong thầy/cô chấm giúp em bài Writing task 1 này ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy/cô nhiều ạ 🙇♀️
The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate the number of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sold in five European countries UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in 1999 and 2004.
Overall, the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee grew in all five Euro countries; meanwhile; the figure for bananas only increased in three of five Euro countries. In addition, the UK has the highest figure in two Fairtrade-labelled products.
The proceeds of bananas and coffee in the UK had a dramatic growth from 1.5 millions to 20 millions and from from 15 millions to 47 millions respectively. The figure for Switzerland in coffee reached 3 million euros in 1999 and ended at 6 million euros in 2004. Similar changes can be seen in the sales of Denmark, Belgium and Sweden, which all had a slight increase by just under 1 million in these three countries.
The turnover of bananas in Switzerland and Belgium gradually increased, from 1 million euro from 5,5 million euros and from 0,6 million euro from 4 million euros respectively. Conversely, the figure for bananas in Sweden and Denmark reached a low of 1 million euro and 0,9 million euro in 2004, decreased by about 1 million.
The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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These days, schools have to make sure to convey proper behavior to students in addition to offering formal education. I strongly believe this statement and this essay will provide evidence that supports this view.
Unlike parents, learning institutions have a unique opportunity to shape children’s behaviors. As a matter of fact, many people tend to spend excessive time in schools, where they are surrounded by many teachers and peers. Teachers who have a great influence on students are entrusted with the duty of developing behaviors at schools since they are in charge of enforcing a school-wide code of conduct and punishment policy. Taking this responsibility, schools ought to devote and allocate suitable time and sufficient resources to make sure students are trained in basic behavior courses after lessons. To accomplish this, educators should regularly balance between formal education and extracurricular activities like volunteer work and music and art.
Good behaviors can contribute to the development of a welcoming and supportive school culture, which is widely recognized as one of the most important factors in a school environment. When school prioritizes positive behavior, it will mitigate bullying and strengthen relationships between students. Additionally, students will be actively involved and invest time in studying and researching new knowledge to expand their horizons instead of playing games. Good Behavior not only gives them more opportunities to connect to more people surrounding them but also give rise to better academic performance.
In conclusion, I still agree that schools have a duty to equip knowledge about good behavior in addition to formal education by allocating suitable time for them to anticipating in outside activities.
These days, schools have to make sure to convey proper behavior to students in addition to offering formal education. I strongly believe this statement and this essay will provide evidence that suppor...
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The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provide information about the proportions of online sales derived from four major
sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Overall, the percentages of sales generated from travel and clothes declined.While the reverse was true for the contribution of books and film/music.
In 2003, New Zealand showcased a heavy reliance on travel products and services, as this sector contributed 36% to the total figure.Another 24% was generated thanks to the sales of clothes, while around one-fifth was contributed by seilling films and music products. Although the online sales of books accounted for the least of the overall figure, this sector remained substantially large compared to the three other sectors.
Regarding the chart in 2013, the online sales came from film and music products transcended travel products and services to become the largest share of four main sectors as it achieved 33%.By contrast, the figure for travel products and services observed a 7% decreased compared to the previous period with 29% of the total return. While clothing sales were responsible for only 16% of the entire proportion and a 3% increase can be seen for the return of trading books with 22% in this year.
The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
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The graph describes the manufacture of three forest industry products in a European country timber, pulp and paper, starting from 1980 to 2000.
Overall, it is clear that all three categories had a fluctuating trend throughout the period. In particular, pulp and paper experienced a rise, while timber saw a downward trend
In terms of timber products, production started at 5 million tonnes in 1980 and rose sharply to 10 million tonnes after declining to 7 million tonnes in 2000
Regarding pulp and paper, pulp was higher than paper in 1980, with nearly 6 million tonnes and 4 million tonnes respectively. In 1985, following the sharp decline, pulp production began to recover in 1985, climbing from 7 million to nearly 10 million tonnes in 2000. Similarly, the production of paper witnessed an increase to 8,2 million tonnes after continuing reach a peak at 12 million tonnes in 2000
The graph describes the manufacture of three forest industry products in a European country timber, pulp and paper, starting from 1980 to 2000.
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Write about the following topic: Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
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In modern life, a growing number of younger generations opting to have their offspring at older age has been a source of controversy. There are many reasons driving this trend, and this phenomenon brings both benefits and drawbacks to individuals and society.
Giving birth later in life results from many causes. The first reason is the high living standard in the city. In fact, the cost of housing, hospitals, and clothes have surged in recent years, so salary is often enough to pay for people's daily needs such as water or food price. Thus, having a child can be a burden on their financial foundation, leading to many difficulties. In addition, the upbringing of a kid can disrupt career progress. It is evident that childbirth requires time to recover and raise a child, resulting in interrupting the effort to achieve a higher position in work or further study.
It is disadvantageous for people and the nation to delay childbirth. First and foremost, this can affect the mother and infant when having a child. Because of old age, people often have weaker health, influencing the baby's well-being. Thus, kids are born with a poor immune system, becoming vulnerable to disease. Furthermore, giving birth later in life can give rise to a shortage of workers. Consequently, there are not enough employees in the factories to accomplish essential tasks and meet the demands of citizens. Hence, this not only can damage the balance between the young and the senior but it also can hinder the economic growth of the nation.
In conclusion, high living costs and prioritizing careers are the reasons for having kids in old age, and it poses many significant challenges such as poor health or a lack of employees.
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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while other believe that the purpose of museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether museums should offer educational or entertainment values to individuals. This essay will argue that since both factors hold their own merits, striking a balance between them can foster the sustainability of museum growth.
Admittedly, advocates of education as a primary rationale often highlight that these facilities generally cater to those favoring visual learning. For example, by exhibiting lifelike dinosaur models, accompanied by explanatory details, this group of visitors has opportunities to experience the prehistoric world first-hand, potentially gaining a deeper insight into prehistoric life. Without this approach, people may find it challenging to profoundly understand bygone ecosystems. However, this perspective is not sound as museums inherently serve as tourist attractions, suggesting that these places should target all visitors, irrespective of their purposes and backgrounds. If exhibition halls place excessive emphasis on educational factors, they will trigger a sense of tediousness among average visitors, leading to a significant decline in visitor counts in the long run.
For the aforementioned arguments, combining educational elements and recreational activities can be more beneficial. Regarding the latter, should galleries provide tourists with interactive exhibits or games, many visitors will find enjoyment, a key factor that fosters tourists' spending, making substantial contributions to increasing revenues. These funds are mainly allocated for preservation of precious artifacts and greater accessibility to the public. Resultantly, such a combination not only enhances recreational values but also facilitates the progess of these establishments.
In conclusion, due to the inherent benefits of both education and entertainment, I am of the opinion that incorporating the two purposes can emerge as a prudent approach regarding the long-term viability of museum development and the fulfillment of this demand for relaxation among tourists.
Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while other believe that the purpose of museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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