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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The graphic illustrates the proportion of power production from five different fuel types in five Asian countries, based on 2005 data.
Overall, while Japan and South Korea were more reliant on environmentally friendly sources to generate electricity, the other countries placed heavier dependence on fossil fuels, with the exception of Thailand mainly relying on unspecified sources.
Regarding eco-friendly sources, Japan exhibited the largest proportion of energy coming from nuclear, at 49%, distantly followed by 33%, 19%, and 13% for South Korea, Malaysia, and Singapore. In contrast, Thailand was the only country that did not use nuclear to generate power. 48% of South Korea’s electricity was produced by hydro and wind, significantly higher than that of Thailand, the figure recording nearly 20%. The remaining countries represented analogous percentages, each using about 4% for energy production.
Concerning fossil fuels, the proportions of energy from coal and lignite in Malaysia and Singapore were recorded 61% and 42%, respectively, showing the main resource of energy in these countries. This contrasted sharply with the other nations, with about 5% being utilized. Thailand showed 39% of energy from petroleum products while the remaining countries occupied a minimal presence of this type, recording just about 3%. Looking at unspecified source, Thailand was the leader with 42% of power generated. The identical figures were observed in Singapore and Japan, standing at 39%. This was basically triple that of Malaysia and South Korea, at around 12%.
The graphic illustrates the proportion of power production from five different fuel types in five Asian countries, based on 2005 data.
Overall, while Japan and South Korea were more reliant on enviro...
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The diagram illustrates the number of universities that were ranked in the top 200 across five countries, categorized by three different subjects, in 2011.
Overall, The USA had the highest number of universities in three subjects in all the examined countries while New Zealand represented the lowest figures. Additionally, biology courses were most favored in the USA, the United Kingdom and New Zealand, as opposed to Australia and Canada, where psychology classes were the most popular.
Regarding the USA and the United Kingdom, the former recorded 69 universities in biology courses, significantly higher than that of the United Kingdom with 30 biology-related institutions. 58 and 54 colleges in psychology and medicine classes were shown in the USA, compared to recorded 29 and 24 ones in the United Kingdom, respectively.
Concerning the remaining nations, Australia and Canada showed respective similar figures of top-ranked institutions, with 9 universities specialized in biology, 17 and 14 ones in psychology, as well as 13 and 12 in medicine classes. Conversely, New Zealand had 12 universities, with six, four, and two institutions in biology, psychology, and medicine courses in that order.
The diagram illustrates the number of universities that were ranked in the top 200 across five countries, categorized by three different subjects, in 2011.
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Mong cô chấm writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
In some countries, people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?
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These days, spending extra hours at work is becoming more common. This phenomenon may stem from people’s higher wage and their increasing workload, and I firmly believe that this trend brings about more cons than pros.
Nowadays, many people are overworking due to the pressure from daily necessities and work. In most countries, due to the escalating living cost, people are made to work long hours to afford their lives. In other words, overworking is not an option but rather an obligation for individuals to survive. In some other cases, people choose to work overtime to cope with their workload. The main reason is that their work is more intense and harder, making them have to work longer hours to finish the tasks. People often devote their time and take on more responsibilities to deal with their work effectively.
However, I hold the belief that overworking will bring more harmful things than the good ones. It is undeniable that working long hours help people earn a lot of money and also facilitate one’s life, nonetheless, it will put a person under immense pressure, leading to physical and mental problems. For example, when working overtime, we can get tired, stressed, and make our health deteriorate and also cause stress-related illnesses such as depression, panic disorder,...even some severe diseases like hypertension, arrhythmia and heart attack. Additionally, overworking can create an imbalance between our work and families. People just have little time for themselves and their families, and they are likely to risk the well-being of their close relationships, exposing them to depression and isolation in the future.
In conclusion, while it is understandable why people spend more time at work, I always believe that individuals need to manage their time appropriately to have a happy life without less pressure and tension.
In some countries, people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?
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These days, spending extra hours at work is becoming more common. This p...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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It is argued that it should be mandatory for the young generation to engage in voluntary activities to support those who are in need. While this practice may lead to several problems relating to wasting valuable time and the exploitation of the young, I still believe that the overall impact is tremendously positive.
On the one hand, the disadvantages of requiring young people to take part in unpaid jobs are in plain sight. The main reason is that these activities consume a great amount of effort and dedication. For example, participants need to spend their free time to foster their knowledge and realistic skills so that they can be qualified enough to provide aid to other people in the community. Therefore, these works might not be feasible for those having hectic studying and working schedules. If the government forces young people to engage in unpaid work, they would suffer from stress and anxiety due to the lack of relaxation and rest time. Another drawback could be that illegal organisations might take advantage of young people, particularly students. This stems from the fact that some corporations overexploit participants for the sake of their own profits instead of community benefits. Consequently, this would cause mental and physical degradation and even well-being of the young.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the advantages of unpaid work still outperform the shortcomings. One of the primary benefits is the opportunities to accumulate diverse experiences and essential skills. Young people take part in voluntary work that require direct interaction and collaboration with each other, they can enhance their interpersonal skills. This brings about the expansion of vision and knowledge through practical experiences and even other people. Furthermore, unpaid jobs help foster solidarity among people, in terms of societal level. These voluntary programs help teach the young generation the importance and benefits of working together and sympathizing with others, especially poor people. Eventually, voluntary activities will boost a better quality of lives and a wealthier country when requiring the young support other people in the community.
In conclusion, despite the negative impacts of forcing the young to engage in charity work, I am of the opinion that its advantages are far more pronounced.
Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The diagram illustrates the development of a frog in natural life from egg stage to adult frog stage.
Overall, to become an adult frog, it has to go through a total of 8 stages to reach maturity. The process begins with the mating of two adult frogs and ends with the mature frog.
In the first step, the male and female adult frogs participate in the mating procedure and then give birth to eggs, containing embryos laid in water. Next, those spawns are hatched, becoming the first form of a frog to be a tadpole. After that, these tadpoles grow bigger in size and start to create front legs. In the following stage, the tadpoles gradually form limbs and long tails, and they also begin pulmonary breathing.
Then, they get out of the water and start living on the ground as amphibians. During this progress, their tails become shorter and then disappear when they reach the phase of becoming a tadpole frog. Finally, young frogs grow into mature ones and their life loops continue with the mating between 2 adult frogs.
The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates t...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
ANSWER:
The maps illustrate how a small museum and its nearby area changed from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, the museum underwent several alterations during the period, most notably the extension/ expansion of the car park and the shop, and the addition of a new cafe.
In 1990, there was an exhibition room opposite the main entrance of the museum with an L-shaped building. However, a small part of the building was demolished to make space for the expansion of the shop. Additionally, two separate exhibition rooms located on the right side when standing at the entry, until 2010, were combined into one big building. While the restaurant was opposite the big exhibition room and in the left corner in 1990, it still remained unchanged in both position and size later.
Moreover, there was a cottage in the bottom left corner, but it was replaced by a new coffee shop in 2010. On the right side of the museum, the car park located opposite the garden in 1990, was expanded after 20 years thanks to the clearance of the garden. Outside the museum, the main road, the path to the entry and the garden on the top still remained unchanged despite some dramatic transformations of the museum design.
The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
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The maps illustrate how a small museum and its nearby area changed from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, t...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The diagram give information about changes in a student accommodation building.
ANSWER:
The diagrams illustrate how student accommodation has changed from 2010 to present.
Overall, the building experienced several alterations during the period, most notably was the extension of space used for the study-bedrooms and the additions of a social area, en-suite room and a parking spot. Additionally, some other features have been removed to make space for the new design.
In 2010, there was a living room and a student bedroom located to the north of the building. Currently, three bedrooms have been built there, and the living room is no longer required. Next to the center of the main building, another student bedroom and a bathroom have been unchanged in position and size in the current design.
On the east side, the kitchen now has been expanded to serve as a social area, and a private room below, which was constructed in 2010, now has a new en-suite room adjacent to it, and as a result, the entryway has become noticeably narrower. Outside the residence hall, there were two gardens patching to the north and south, however a parking lot has taken the place of the garden to the south of the building.
The diagram give information about changes in a student accommodation building.
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The diagrams illustrate how student accommodation has changed from 2010 to present.
Overall, the buildi...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000.
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The given charts illustrate what Australian students do after graduating from secondary school over the course of 20 years, commencing from 1980.
Overall, there was an upward trend seen in the proportion of employed students, while those who were unemployed and pursued higher education experienced a decline throughout the period. Another key feature is that the statistics for employed students register the most prominent in most years surveyed, whereas the opposite is true for unemployed students.
In 1980, half of Australian secondary school leavers decided to enhance their scholastic achievements. After 10 years, this figure decreased significantly to 38% and remained nearly unchanged in 2000. Meanwhile, the proportion of students who failed to seek employment was smallest, at only 10% in 1980 and 12% in 1990. It finally witnessed a slight decline to 8% in the final year examined.
On the other hand, Australian secondary schools saw an increase in the percentage of students who had their jobs after graduating. Specifically, it surged from 40% in 1980 to 55% in 2000, which accounted for the largest among all of the recorded categories.
The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000.
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The given charts illustrate what Au...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while others believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
ANSWER:
Nowadays, fast food has become more popular and gradually developed into a staple diet in many countries. This problem is concerned by individuals, they believe that it is beneficial to eat traditional foods, while some people prefer fast food. I am of the opinion that traditional foods are always a better choice.
It is understandable why some people advocate the view that fast food is a good option. The key rationale is that fast food captivates many individuals by its convenience and tastes. Fast food normally is processed and available in food stores or restaurants with unique, luscious flavors, and people will be drawn to it, they can buy it at any fast food stores along the roads. Therefore, they tend to eat fast food much and skip traditional meals to save time. However, this is not always true. In fact, fast food contains a lot of fat and many bad chemical ingredients, preservatives that trigger health hazards such as heart disease and obesity. Moreover, buying fast food too often can cost lots of money and can lead to waste of food. Thus, fast food can not replace any meals with traditional foods.
Instead of having fast food for daily meals, I believe that people can continue to eat traditional foods. Traditional foods reflect the culture and the history of a country, eating these dishes help us stay connected to our roots and preserve cultural values. Additionally, traditional meals are more healthier and meaningful compared to fast food. They are usually made from fresh, natural ingredients without harmful additives or preservatives, and offer a balanced mix of nutrients, such as proteins, vegetables and grains. That will be better for everyone’s health and prevent diseases which fast food causes. Unlike fast food, which is often eaten quickly and alone. Traditional foods are usually shared with family, bringing people closer together. Therefore, we should prefer traditional foods not only for health but also to keep a country’s culture alive.
In conclusion, it would be better and advantageous for people to eat traditional foods greatly.
In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while others believe that fast food is a good choice. Dis...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, people are often exposed to many kinds of advertising programs to attract their attention to buy products. Some individuals believe that this will bring about positive benefits to our lives, and personally, I completely agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will explain why the statement is true.
Firstly, advertisements help people know more about other products. With the development of producing a variety of quality goods, there are many commodities which some individuals may not approach and experience. Thus, when advertising programs are displayed more, especially on TV or billboard, people can know easily and try using products. Additionally, advertisement is also a marketing way to impress people via eye-catching product images such as logos, contents and information about origin and source of products to make them feel interested, secure and want to experience these products.
Moreover, many individuals normally do search for products they intend to buy, so advertisements will help them have a brief description of products that people can consider carefully before purchasing. Not only that, advertising with many choices and tempting offers, people could receive their favorite products and enhance their comforts and standard of living. Advertisements not only bring users experiences of quality commodities, but also are marketing fields which generate a diversity of employment opportunities such as copywriter, digital marketers and social media specialists.
In conclusion, advertisements are more popular in modern society, and have positive impacts on our daily lives. It will offer many product experiences and also employment opportunities.
Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, peo...
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Should employees speak out if their colleagues are unethical?
In contemporary workplaces, ethical conduct is fundamental to fostering trust, accountability, and long-term success. However, when colleagues engage in unethical behavior, employees often face a dilemma: should they voice their concerns or remain silent? This essay argues that reporting unethical actions is a moral obligation, despite potential risks, as it safeguards organizational integrity and collective well-being.
Primarily, employees have a responsibility to uphold ethical standards to prevent harm to their organization and society. Unethical practices, such as fraud, discrimination, or data manipulation, can tarnish a company’s reputation, lead to legal penalties, and erode employee morale. For instance, if a sales team falsifies client records to meet targets, it may initially boost profits but ultimately damage client trust and invite regulatory scrutiny. By speaking out, employees protect not only their employer’s credibility but also the interests of stakeholders, including customers and investors. Furthermore, silence can normalize misconduct, creating a toxic work culture where dishonesty thrives. Addressing such issues promptly ensures transparency and reinforces a shared commitment to ethical principles.
Nevertheless, some argue that reporting colleagues may provoke retaliation, strained relationships, or even job loss. These concerns are valid, as whistleblowers often face ostracization or career setbacks. However, organizations increasingly implement anonymous reporting channels and legal protections to encourage accountability without exposing individuals to undue risk. For example, many companies now have dedicated ethics hotlines or human resources policies that prioritize confidentiality. Additionally, tolerating unethical behavior to avoid conflict can have graver consequences, such as enabling systemic corruption or endangering public safety. A healthcare worker who ignores a colleague’s negligence, fearing confrontation, risks patient lives, whereas speaking up could prompt corrective measures and save others.
In conclusion, while confronting unethical behavior involves personal risks, employees have a duty to prioritize ethical integrity over short-term comfort. Organizations must cultivate environments where transparency is valued, and safeguards exist to protect those who report misconduct. By fostering a culture of accountability, businesses can mitigate harm, enhance trust, and ensure sustainable success. Ultimately, collective responsibility toward ethics benefits both individuals and institutions in the long run.
In contemporary workplaces, ethical conduct is fundamental to fostering trust, accountability, and long-term success. However, when colleagues engage in unethical behavior, employees often face a dile...
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The diagram illustrates details regarding how to make recycled paper.
Overall, the manufacturing process entails four main steps in sequence, beginning with the production of unfiltered pulp, followed by filtration and ink removal, and ending with final products.
The manufacture commences with placing discarded paper on a conveyor belt to travel to a tank where water and chemical are already mixed to form unfiltered pulp. Subsequently, this raw material passes through a pipe to another container where filtration takes place.
Once this stage is complete, ink removal begins. In order to eliminate this contaminant, water and soap are added in conjunction with air injection to facilitate the elimination of ink. After that, the newly cleaned pulp travels to an added water and chemicals again to make sure that ink is completely removed. Finally, the pulp is put on an additional conveyor belt to be heated to remove water before being rolled, readily available for sale.
The diagram illustrates details regarding how to make recycled paper.
Overall, the manufacturing process entails four main steps in sequence, beginning with the production of unfiltered pulp, followe...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The chart below shows the number of films produced in five countries in three years.
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The bar chart illustrates film production across five countries from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, there was an upward trend seen in the films produced by country B, C and E, while the reverse was true for those of country A and D. Another key feature is that country A led in film production, followed by country B, whereas countries C, D and E registered significantly lower outputs.
In 2007, 87 films were produced by country A, and this figure remained unchanged before declining to 80 films in 2009, but still producing the most among five countries during the period. Conversely, country B’s film production increased from 50 in 2007 to 53 in 2008, and surged to 70 films in the final year examined.
Countries C, D and E each produced fewer than 20 films annually. Specifically, country C’s films rose from 8 in 2007 to 18 in 2009, and country E also increased slightly from 9 films to 12 films over the same period. By contrast, country D experienced a decrease from 13 in 2007 to 8 in 2008, before recovering to 12 films in 2009.
The chart below shows the number of films produced in five countries in three years.
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The bar chart illustrates film production across five countries from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, there...
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Many people argue that crime originates from poverty and different social issues, others contend that this issue comes from instinct personality. The first argument is correct and is overwhelmingly supported by statistical analysis across thousands of studies.
On the one hand, many believe that the cause of crime is due to various social problems. Having little money, lacking educational progress, being unemployed, and having low income, some will return to crime as a solution to their problem. For example, many research shows that there are large numbers of violence, addiction, and sexual problems which are prevalent in many poor countries. Families may become desperate because of their son’s behavior. The rate of people in prison is sometimes higher than that of general people. Moreover, the government can not offer enough schools and standard facilities young generation, which has a profound impact on their development, making it difficult to distinguish between wrong and true behavior.
On the other hand, some people argue that criminals are simply bad people. Not anyone will naturally become a violent and addicted person. When they do not have care from their parent and education, it makes them take the wrong way, and sometimes it can destroy the life of a young generation. From that, the government and parents should spend more time and offer the highest condition for an elderly person. Because the perception of young people is absorbed by the way their parent show their love and attitude, which will shape children’s behavior and mindset.
In conclusion, I would argue that the first view is more convincing. It is important to equip enough conditions for children’s development and take care during the growth process
Many people argue that crime originates from poverty and different social issues, others contend that this issue comes from instinct personality. The first argument is correct and is overwhelmingly su...
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The table illusrates the number of citizens who loved in four nations in 2003 and have a prediction about population in 2025 and 2050
Overall, it is clear that the figure for Indonesia was highest in 2003, while that of Argentina was opposite. In addition, there will be a increase in 2025 and 2050 for Argentina, Indonesia, Italya, but the figure for Republic Korea will decrease slightly
The number of citizens in Argentina started at 34 million, after which it experience a significant growth to 48 million in 2025, before ending period at 0,8 in 2050
The figure for Italy was at 54 million followed by dramatic decrease to 47 in 2025, before ending in 2050 at 45 million. The number of citizens in Republic of Korean will increase sharply from 48 million to 52 million in 2025, and there will be a period of stability at 52 million in 2050
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The table illusrates the number of citizens who loved in four nations in 2003 and have a prediction about population in 2025 and 2050
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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Opinions are divided on whether manufacturers or supermarkets should be responsible for reducing the amount of packaging of goods, or if customers refrain from over-packaging products. As both have important roles, the combination involving these objects is more beneficial.
Admittedly, manufacturers and supermarkets have the onus to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Regarding the former, corporations’ direct controls over packaging, including designs, materials, and distribution of goods, allows these facilities to independently shift away from traditional practices to more environmentally friendly ways. Instead of using plastics, manufacturers can adopt biodegradable papers for packaging, leading to a potential reduction in packaging wastes. With regard to supermarkets, they could offer purchasers discounts on condition that buyers purchase goods in bulk or bring their own bags. This approach can encourage buyers to change their shopping habits, with the result that the amount of superfluous packaging would be reduced.
However, consumers play a role in alleviating this issue. Indubitably, as manufacturers are typically demand-based, the pressure of the public can exert a significant effect on facilities. For example, American buyers’ launches of boycott campaigns against heavily packaged goods to protect the environment have forced many companies to gravitate towards goods with simple packaging, which brings about a reduction in the amount of packaging waste. Additionally, eco-conscious buyers, through their shopping behaviors, can create a collective mindset of reusing or recycling, making a great contribution to a decline in the amount of packaged goods in the long run.
In conclusion, as manufacturers, supermarkets, and consumer choices are incredibly influential, a combined effort emerges as a viable approach to create a sustainable practice, contributing to the alleviation of this problem.
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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 different areas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the amount of wheat exported over Canada, Australia and the European community between 1985 and 1990.
Overall, while the amount of wheat exported by the European community increased, the figure for Canada fluctuated and that of Australia decreased. Also, it is clear that the amount of wheat exported in Canada was highest over most of the period.
In the first year, while the amount of wheat exported over Canada stood at about 19 million tonnes, the figure for the European Community was lower, at about 17 million tonnes. From 1985 to 1986, the figures for Canada and European Community rose to 17 million tonnes and 14 million tonnes respectively. Then, the amount of wheat exported in Canada fluctuated wildly and reached a peak of 15 million tonnes in 1988, before standing at about 14 million tonnes in the last year. At the same time, the figure for the European Community saw a gradual increase and reached the highest point of 21 million tonnes in 1990.
In 1985, the amount of wheat exported by Australia stood at 15 million tonnes. From 1985 to 1986, this figure saw a slight rise to 16 million tonnes, but later decreased steadily and hit the lowest point of about 11 million tonnes in the last year.
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Today there is a great increase in anti-social behavior and a lack of respect for others. What are the causes of this problem? What measures can be taken to reduce the problem?
In this day and age, many people have noticed that there is a significant increase in antisocial and a lack of respect toward others. In this essay, I will discuss the possible causes of this trend and suggest and suggest some ways to improve the situation.
This phenomenon stems from multiple factors. First and foremost, we are living in a society where many people become more individualistic which means they become less concerned with the needs and feelings of others. Leading to an erosion of social responsibility and moral values. With the advent of social media and social platforms where online communication takes place, it is easier for people to engage in disrespectful and offensive behavior without thinking about the consequences. For example, a person can create a fake social media account to bully or harass another person in virtual places, thanks to the anonymity provided by social platforms that allow that person to hide their identity.
To address this problem, a multifaceted approach is essential. Firstly, promoting a sense of community and social responsibility is needed. This can be achieved by encouraging people to participate in community activities and events, such as volunteering or local programs. Another solution that can be implemented to tackle this trend is to increase the consequences of antisocial behavior. For instance, individuals who are engaged in such behavior should be accountable for their actions, and consequences should be severe enough to discourage future violations.
In conclusion, it is clear that several factors contribute to the growing number of antisocial and lack of respect. It is crucial to organize more community activities and raise people’s awareness about the understanding of the consequences to resolve this issue.
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The diagram illustrates the process of producing soft cheese.
Overall, it is clear that there are five main stages involved in producing soft cheese, beginning with mixing water and milk and ending with cooling to make the final step.
First, milk and water are poured into a machine to mix it together before being cooled for two hours at 5 C. Next, the mixture undergoes fermentation stages, which add salt and takes 6 hours at 35 C.
And then, the fermented mixture is evaporated, in this step, it is heated at high temperatures of 100 C for 8 hours. Finally, the mixture is cooled at 5C over 6 hours. During the final step, the soft milk is extracted through the filter in the top of the machine, while wastewater is filtered out at the bottom of machine.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing soft cheese.
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The diagram illustrates the process of producing tea leaves into five various types of tea.
Overall, it is clear that there are nine main steps involved in the production of different leaves, beginning with growing leaves and ending with oven drying of the leaves.
First, the leaves are grown and then plucked and left to wilt. To produce white tea, the wilt leaves are simply dried in the oven. However, in the production of green tea, the wilt leaves have to pass a steaming and rolling period before oven-drying. The third type of tea is oolong which is not steamed, after wilting, it undergoes rolling and slight fermentation before frying in the oven.
The next tea is large and small-leaf black tea experience full steps to finish. The large black teas are rolled after wilting and passing full fermentation and ending with drying in the over. Following this, small black leaves are the same, it is not rolled, but crushed and undergoing the same steps as large black leaves.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing tea leaves into five various types of tea.
Overall, it is clear that there are nine main steps involved in the production of different leaves, beginni...
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