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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ
The given graph and chart illustrate information about migration to the UK. While the graph describes how long dwellers intended to stay from 2000 to 2008, the pie-chart gives causes in 2008. The number of people expected to live in the UK for only 2 years hit the highest point, compared to immigrants planned to stay from two to four years was the lowest. The primary reasons for immigrants temporarily moving to the UK was for occupational purposes.
As can be seen from the line graph, in 2000, the percentage of people who had the intention of living in the UK for maximum two years and for four years or more saw a similar number, for 150,000 people. In 2001, migrants were going to stay in the UK for more than four years remained stable until 2008. In the same time, the proportion of people planning to live in the United Kingdom for two years gradually saw an upward trend, from 150,000 to 250,000 people through to three years from 2001 to 2003 and plateaued until the end of the period. People who intended to stay for two to four years fluctuated minimally from the beginning until 2007, and decreased by half (100,000 compared to 50,000).
According to the pie-chart, the greatest causes that made people expected to live in the UK was for professional purposes, for nearly 40%. Another major reason was education, with around 32%, double number for people who expected to join family, 16%. Other reason and no reason stated was 14%.
The given graph and chart illustrate information about migration to the UK. While the graph describes how long dwellers intended to stay from 2000 to 2008, the pie-chart gives causes in 2008. The numb...
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Mong thầy cô sửa giúp em bài này ạ
The percentages of unemployed citizens in three regions (the Uk, the rest of Europe and Japan) for a period from 1993 to 2007 are depicted by the provided illustration. Overall, there was an increase of joblessness level in Japan whilst it was the opposite in the case of two other figures. Additionally, Europe line was remaining the highest for most of this period as in another hand.
Starting with an initial unemployment rate at 11%, percentage of the jobless Uk people plummeted constantly until the year of 2001 when it reached its bottom at approximately 5%. From that point, the figure remained unchanged for 4 years. Finally, it had a slight rise in 2005 and got to 6%
Meanwhile, Europe followed a similar downward trend. It started at 9% and had a three-year period of gradually increasing began from 1993. Among the 3 figures, Europe had the highest peak, which was more than 11% and was reached in 1997.Having climbed to the climax, Europe then constantly dropping to 2003 when it started to rose slightly in 2 years and followed with another decrease until it hit rock bottom at lower than 8%.
Initially, Japan unemployed citizens's rate was at 2 percent which then had a little push until 1995 when it remained steadily unchanged for 4 years. Next, it didn’t stop rapidly thriving not until 2003 that brought it to its highest point.From then on, the figure steadily falling with the rate of 0.5% per year in the next 4 years. The percentages of unemployed citizens in three regions (the Uk, the rest of Europe and Japan) for a period from 1993 to 2007 are depicted by the provided illustration. Overall, there was an increase of joblessness level in Japan whilst it was the opposite in the case of two other figures. Additionally, Europe line was remaining the highest for most of this period as in another hand.
The percentages of unemployed citizens in three regions (the Uk, the rest of Europe and Japan) for a period from 1993 to 2007 are depicted by the provided illustration. Overall, there was an increase...
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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In modern society, sport is becoming more and more prevalent among individuals at every age. Some people argue that it is more necessary to be strong physically and mentally and vice versa. In my opinion, both aspects are crucial to achieve success in sport. Nevertheless, physical strength is the fundamental factor that helps us gain achievements. In this essay, I will discuss both views, give explanations and relevant examples to support my arguments.
A number of individuals believe that having a positive and strong mental attitude will lead to success when it comes to playing sports. It is undeniable that keeping a healthy, optimistic and resistant mind is able to foster a competitive spirit, which triggers and stimulates the humans’ primal side to compete fiercely to become a winner. Furthermore, a strong mentality creates numerous aspiring athletes, who bring positive energy to their teammates and audiences that inspire the passion for sports to the world.
On the other hand, having a healthy and strong body is one of the most basic and vital elements that paves the way for success in sport. If a person who takes up sports and puts great effort in practicing and playing sports every day, he or she is more likely to get in shape. Also, this good routine boosts their physical endurance and stamina, which helps them balance and keep their body condition stable during the matches. It is obvious that a healthy person has more advantages in playing sports and achieving prizes than someone who suffers from health issues.
Another reason is that if participants who have enough health that meet the requirement for a particular sport, they will not need to cheat their opponents by using some illegal substances or performance-enhancing drugs that help them play better than their real ability, which may result in unfair evaluations and crimes.
In conclusion, both mental and physical strength are the key factors that lead to success. However, being strong physically is more important because it is the most basic need for people to take part in sport and become competent in this area. Therefore, it is a must for individuals to try their best to practice every day to keep their body healthy, strong and in the best condition.
In modern society, sport is becoming more and more prevalent among individuals at every age. Some people argue that it is more necessary to be strong physically and mentally and vice versa. In my opin...
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E mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài WT2 ạ Question 2: Education
Some people think that schools should invest more money in technology, such as more computers while others think more money should be spent on teachers. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many people argue that schools should spend more money on technology than teachers.While teachers should be spent on more than modern technology. I am of the opinion that spending on digital devices is significant more than that.
On the one hand investing in education technology is beneficial for students.
Firstly, schools should provide greater funding for the technology to directly enhance the student learning experiences.With technology, tutors can develop more interactive and engaging lessons that attract learner’s attention throughout each session . Technology also allows students to communicate and collaborate improving their communication and social skills.
Secondly, technology enables students to access educational resources globally. This is because online courses, digital libraries, education sites, audiobooks, and other resources can offer teachers and learners a wealth of resources and information for their learning.
On the other hand, purchasing teachers is critical. The reason for this is investing in teachers to build a team of high quality education.This is mainly due to, effective teaching plays a role in unlearning to stay up to date with modern trends and technology, teachers must continually upskill and train themselves.
In conclusion, there are many beneficial sides of spending on teachers. I still believe that spending on modern technology is significant because this enhances students' access to educational resources globally.
Many people argue that schools should spend more money on technology than teachers.While teachers should be spent on more than modern technology. I am of the opinion that spending on digital devices i...
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mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài này ạ .Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money the make. Is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?
Some individuals hold the belief that profits a criterion to measure the success of business. It is a true factor of business success, however money is not the sole determinant of success, customer satisfaction and ability to manage risks should also be measured in.
To begin with, money without a doubt, is considered as a true and most valuable criterion to mark success busines. Cash is the lifeblood of a busines which plays a major role in stability and growth of enterprise. According to some recently researches that most of successful entrepreneurs spend money on market searching and training staff then can facilitate the business development .
However, money alone cannot create a strong foundation for a business, satisfying consumers
is a significant measurement .In other words the companies should understand what customers
expect and delight them with amazing experiences. Take BMW, Mercedes, and Toyota as an example
of the auto industry which seemingly always have much higher expectations than average from their
customers that they have to manage.
Additionally, focusing on the risk management can provide a distinctive perspective
on success than simply looking at profits. It is ensure that truly successful people are those are able to protect their business from the risks. Elon Musk is known that being failed on multiple occasions
then consistently overcomes the most devastating blows to take his companies to even greater heights.
To conclude, even though profit is indicator of business success. It is clear that pursuit of money should be balanced with the consumers satisfaction and overcoming risks.
Some individuals hold the belief that profits a criterion to measure the success of business. It is a true factor of business success, however money is not the sole determinant of success, customer sa...
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Em mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài WT2 Ạ : Question 3: Nowadays, there is a trend that media reports focus on problems and
emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to
individuals and to society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the main focus of the media is a topic of much debate. While there is a trend that media reports focus on problems and
emergencies rather than positive development.I am of the opinion that it is a serious issue and also has negative impacts on civilization.
On the one hand, the option to network social focus on negative news is useful.
Firstly, focusing on problem can mobilize communities and governments to
address these pressing issues.
This mainly due to when they received the news to the others reports, the issue will be immediately solved
Secondly, reporting on emergencies can enhance public awareness to prevent potential consequences
In case, someone posts some news relevant to risks that endanger children so many parents will be attracted and pay attention, improving their knowledge to protect their children.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe the reports focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development.
The main one is,continuous exposure to negative news can increase stress and anxiety.
For instance, via social media platforms such as Facebook and Twitter consumers will be got more news on daily basis such as the pressure adolescence, many adults tend to overthinking since they have to attend too much lessons that they do not want to participate since depressed and lengthy theories.
In addition, constant exposure to negative news can desensitize people to violence, tragedy, and suffering.
This can be exemplified in the case of, when existing some reports about the regarding the issue of protecting people’s freedom and happiness , consumers always believe that they are being closely protected by the majority, but in reality is not that, the issue of school violence and domestic violence still appears in around the world,
In conclusion, while there are many benefits to problems and emergencies reported by the news. I still believe that it is more disadvantageous to society because negative news can increase stress and anxiety or desensitize people to violence, tragedy, and suffering.
It is advisable that governments take the initiative to completely solve the problem in the near future.
It is true that the main focus of the media is a topic of much debate. While there is a trend that media reports focus on problems and
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thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The illustration describes the renovation of Toronto GO Train Station in Stages.
Overall, it is clear that the station originally had two levels of boarding and transiting, which was further expanded to another level for commercial purposes.
In the past, the train tracks were located above ground, below this level was underground which used as a path for passengers to transit. A pillar was constructed to support from the bottom of the ground floor, which was divided two parts, the exposed part in the basement was relatively small
From the redesign stage, there was a big part of the pillar that was dismantled for the purpose of adding another underground level. After renovation, the bottom of the station was removed to resize the pillar. The existing transit concourse was slightly raised, and another underground level was opened for retail stores
The illustration describes the renovation of Toronto GO Train Station in Stages.
Overall, it is clear that the station originally had two levels of boarding and transiting, which was further expande...
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?**
Bài làm:
The emergence of driverless automobiles has been predicted for several years. Indeed, nowadays, drivers have become more dependent on technology. Corporations in the automobile industry have attempted to produce fully-automated cars, one example of this is Tesla. Although the advantages is undeniable, there are varied reasons why they haven't been mass-produced.
On the one hand, artificial intelligence restricts the miscalculations made by humans. Even individuals who have experience in driving can be easily distracted when encounter a certain deterrent. Other than that, people's state of mind can also contribute as an influential factor. For example, lack of sleep can reduce the attention duration while controlling a vehicle. Although, in many cases, there will be no casualty caused due to these simple reasons, it is still important to bear in mind that there are chances that it will. Driverless vehicles, however, do not possess any emotions which can possibly lead to lack of focus. In addition, accidents resulting from alcohol usage and law violations will be completely avoided.
On the other hand, technology can not be depended on in every situation. Despite the advancement of technology, there are still numerous misfunctions in driverless automobiles. Take the example of a nation with frequent traffic congestion such as Vietnam. The advanced vehicles are designed to brake when there is an obstacle, should they be launched on Vietnamese roads, they will be unable to operate due to a shortage of space. Driverless technology is connected to GPS and satellites, which can be a target of hijacking or information theft. There are a variety of aspects to consider before relying completely on technology.
Along with all the disadvantages, there is the continuous development of technology indicating that shortly, the advantages will make up for these drawbacks. Thus, for the time being, in spite of the misjudgments that humans might make, driverless cars still require further innovation to be considered as an alternative option.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
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Writing task 1 - Em rất mong được sự hỗ trợ của thầy cô ạ
The chart indicates the result of a survey about coffee and tea consumption habits of citizens in five cities in Australia.
Overall, people living in four cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide, and Hobart, tend to go to a café for these two beverages rather than buying fresh or instant coffee, with the exception of Adelaide’s citizens. Noticeably, Hobart saw the highest use of coffee over other cities.
The proportion of citizens in these cities who chose to buy fresh coffee was the lowest, with approximately 45% in Sydney, 40% in Melbourne, and Hobart, which was 5% higher than that of Brisbane and Adelaide. Meanwhile, Hobart claimed the first rank in purchasing instant coffee, with 55% of its residents. The next position belonged to Brisbane, Adelaide, and Melbourne, respectively, at about 50% of their citizen, while Sydney remained the last place with 5% lower.
The trend towards going to a café for drinks was dominant in Hobart, Sydney, and Melbourne, with above 60% of residents in each city, whereas the exact figure in Brisbane and Adelaide were relatively low, just about 55% and 50% respectively.
The chart indicates the result of a survey about coffee and tea consumption habits of citizens in five cities in Australia.
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Writing Task 1: Process- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài: **The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.**
**Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.**
Bài làm:
The diagram illustrates the steps taken in the plastic-recycling process.
Overall, it can be observed that the procedure consists of nine individual parts, which can be distributed into three main phrases including categorizing, processing, and merchandizing the plastic waste.
In the first stage, consumer waste is delivered by garbage trucks to recycling centers for classification, in which it is divided into recyclable and non-recyclable trash manually. The recyclable trash, then, is compacted into separated blocks to enter the trash grinding machine. Soon after, small chunks of plastic, which result from the grinding process, are transferred into a water tank for cleansing. The washed plastics are transformed into pallets, which go through a machine to create finer and cleaner plastic particles. In the seventh step, these pallets are heated and later on, act as a component for making raw material. The raw material can be used in the production of a variety of goods, ranging from plastic containers to synthetic fibers for clothing and stationary products such as pencils. When it is the end of the product's life cycle, the process will repeated from the initial stage.
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Đề bài: **The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 1 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.
TASK 1: The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
(BÀI LÀM)
The pie charts illustrate the study results related to reasons for doing MBA qualification, and the significant values which recruiters need most.
Overall, most individuals chose this degree because they believed that it would provide better job opportunities. Additionally, employers longed to choose their employees who had outstanding personality and previous experience (Knowledge), but the qualifications were estimated the last factor they considered.
In terms of the reasons for doing MBA, 65% was dominated by Better Job Opportunities, followed by Ability to Do job Better, accounting for 15%. Next, Personal Development was higher than Ability to Help Others, at 12% and 8%, respectively.
In connection with What Employers Value Most, there were a similar proportion for both Personality and Previous Experience (Knowledge), at 25% for each other. Surprisingly, Presentation/Appearance and Previous Experience (Connections) also had an alike number, registering 20%. Finally, Qualifications was the smallest factor when recruiters employed new workers, at 10%.
TASK 1: The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
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The pie charts illustrate the study results related to rea...
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Writing task 2, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed.
What are the reasons for this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Bài viết:
Many fathers and mothers in those days are giving too much expectation on their kids which put them under pressure to be successful for several reasons. Although this tendency may be good in some aspects as it can help children to allocate full effort and energy to whatever they do aiming for success, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the benefits.
There are various reasons why parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. First, people often believe that success can bring a wealthy life to humans. Since children become successful in the future, they can have enough money to afford their daily stuff and have a peaceful state of mind. Moreover, it is a fact that when individuals are put under pressure, they tend to try their best in order to achieve accomplishment.
On the other hand, despite the heavy pressure can contribute to children’s efforts, it can also have negative effects on them. When kids are being put under a lot of pressure, their mental health is harmed, and do not want to spend time with their parents as they are sacrificed by their own families at a very young age. For instance, some parents seem not to be satisfied with their children’s education results although they’ve got great marks. Some dads and mums even compare their children with others to force them to strive for harder work. Furthermore, too much expectation can prone to inferiority of children, they always feel that they are worse than others and do not want to improve themselves anymore. In this case, this development is not an efficient method for adults to help their child better but just gives a converted consequence.
In conclusion, I consider this advance to be negative for both children and their parents. Adults prioritize success and are willing to put their beloved children under pressure as they want the young to conquer a better life but this is not the right way as it can do more harm than good to children's health and minds.
Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed.
What are the reasons for this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Bài viết:
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Em mong thầy cô chấm bài Writing task 2 của e ạ, e cảm ơn :3 Q: Some people think that young people should go to university to further their
education, while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or
builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The topic of whether graduates should apply for a university degree as an executive education or they should commence working immediately has long been at the centre of discussion. I personally uphold the view that adults should seek a further education like a university degree.
On the on hand, car mechanics and builders provide essential services that contribute to the functioning of society.For example, construction workers will meet the needs of those who want to build a new house or renovate an old house. Moreover, they can have the opportunities for
hands-on learning.For instance, while going to school has to learn long and boring theories, those who work have been exposed to work, practiced and have a lot of experience.
On the other hand, university provides in-depth
knowledge and expertise in a
particular field of study.During time at university transferable skill will be developed which skills used every day professional work lives, social lives and home lives such as organising, managing time, working as part of a time. Besides, Individuals with a university degree
tend to earn higher salaries over their lifetimes compared to those without a degree. As it proves that workers have solid foundation knowledge as well ashave been trained in their field.
In conclusion, although working as car mechanics or builders presents certain advantages, i contend that is should not be encouraged due to that affects the quality of the salary, which is lower than that of people with a university degree. It can be predicted that communities should take measures to encourage adolescents to pursue higher education programs
The topic of whether graduates should apply for a university degree as an executive education or they should commence working immediately has long been at the centre of discussion. I personally uphold...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates how many tons of four types of waste were collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, the amount collected of all four types of waste increased over the period, with that of paper being generally the highest, while garden waste was consistently the least collected over the given time frame.
Regarding the two most common forms of waste, the amount of rubbish collected from paper in 2011 was 57 tons, after which it decreased steadily to the lowest point at 40 tonnes in 2013, being surpassed by glass waste, before recovering to peak at 70 tonnes in 2015. Meanwhile, the amount of trash collected from glass was generally lower than from paper, except for 2013 when it surpassed that of paper at the initial level of 48 tons to be the most collected, prior to inclining to the highest point at 52 tons in 2015, despite slight decreases to the lowest point at 41 tons in 2012 and to 46 tons in 2014.
Concerning the two remaining waste categories, the waste amount collected from tins was by far higher than that of gardens, hovering around 30 tons throughout the period, except for 2012 when both hit the low, with respective figures being 27 and 15 tons.
The bar graph illustrates how many tons of four types of waste were collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, the amount collected of all four types of waste increased over th...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graphs compare the mean protein and calorie consumption among four different areas around the world, namely India, East Africa, Latin America, and North America.
Overall, North America consistently has the highest protein and calorie intake, while the opposite was true for India. Additionally, North America is the only region where the consumption statistics in both categories exceed the recommended level.
Regarding average protein intake, its standard intake is nearly 70 units in total. The amount of animal protein consumed in North America is five times as much as that of other sources, with 62 and 18 units, respectively, overtaking the advised amount, while the figures for Latin America are much lower, at 32 and 13 units, in that order. However, the average animal-derived and other origins protein intake in India and East Africa are almost comparable, at around half each.
Concerning average calorie intake, North Americans account for the highest amount of around 3500 calories, surpassing the recommendation, while that of Latin Americans is just below the ideal level. Conversely, calorie intake amounts in East Africa and India are much lower, with respective figures being approximately 2400 and 2000 calories, with the latter being the lowest.
The bar graphs compare the mean protein and calorie consumption among four different areas around the world, namely India, East Africa, Latin America, and North America.
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writing task 1
The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.
The two maps illustrate some changes in Liverton docks infrastructure since 1980.
Overall, it is clear that in 1980 to today the most noticeable changes involving logistics and transport with facilities in education and residential areas.
Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that the northern part had two old warehouses and two cranes in 1980. Now, the crane is cut down and constructed as a sailing club, warehouse to replace the education centre and kid’s playground. In the river 1980 had five ships run through to the coast; after more than 40 years, they had only one ship museum.
The southern Liverton 1980 had one crane and one warehouse. At present, the warehouse is erected for apartments, parking and the crane converted to a hotel. Beside, the riverwalk runs along the river bank. At the moment, the addition bridge connecting the two sides of the river and flood barrier.
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The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.
The two maps illustrate some changes in Liverton docks infrastructure since 1980.
Overall, it is clear that in 1980 to today the most no...
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?**
Bài làm:
Advanced technology has become an important aspect of human life, especially in the way that consumers use and purchase goods. Along with the convenience and benefits that it brings, progress in logistics and e-commerce has created a throwaway society where overconsumption encourages buyers to view and treat items as disposable rather than sustainable. Whether there is more gain than loss, however, is a paradox.
On the one hand, the advancement in transportation and online trading creates a variety of options for buyers and, hence, a cheaper price to increase competitiveness. In the past, purchasing goods from overseas is restricted and costly. However, in 2024, any items can be ordered with just a click. Due to the explosion of consumption, large corporations are obligated to produce more affordable products to maintain their competitive advantages. One feasible approach to this problem is to reduce the quality of the product.
Mass production has created a throwaway society, one typical example is the fast fashion industry. Well-known brands, such as Zara and H&M, produce hundreds of millions of fashion duplications from other brands annually. Customers who purchase fast fashion can follow fashion trends without spending a large amount of money for more sustainable options. These items will often eventually be disposed of after a brief period of use, leading to an increasing amount of consumer waste.
In conclusion, despite the drawbacks that modern buying behaviors bring, there are, currently, no possible alternatives or solutions, therefore, consumers' lives will need to change accordingly.
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Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**New technologies and ways of buying...
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Writing task 2 - Em rất mong được sự hỗ trợ của thầy cô ạ
Differences between countries are becoming less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world we see the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels.
To what extent do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?
In recent years, the trend toward globalization has led to the widespread of films, fashion, brands, advertisements, and TV channels. While this situation can benefit the worldwide economy, it leaves an even more significant downside to cultural diversity.
On the one hand, blurring barriers between countries can facilitate the development of the mutual economy. By sharing the similarities in films and fashion trends, the cooperation between intercontinental enterprises working in these industries is much more viable. For instance, if the global fashion trends have many things in common, fashion brands can expand their businesses by establishing branches in other countries. This connection not only helps them generate more profit but also creates more job opportunities in society, ensuring the quality and overall well-being of local individuals in host countries.
On the other hand, globalization leads to the reduction of cultural diversity. Due to the widespread traditions of developed countries through movies or TV broadcasting, individuals in developing parts will have a higher chance to approach and be amazed by such traditions. Hollywood blockbusters, for example, promote American culture through most of their products. As a result, audiences will show the propensity to imitate foreign cultures and neglect the traditions of their own countries. In the long term, this phenomenon will lead to loss of cultural identity and patriotism among various countries worldwide.
In conclusion, while globalization can boost economic growth, this trend can significantly impact the cultural aspects of many countries. Therefore, I assume that the downsides eclipse the advantages of this trend.
Differences between countries are becoming less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world we see the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels.
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writing task 1
The two bar charts below give us information about the prime reasons that students are interested in studying in accordance with age and the number of help they can receive from employers.
The first graph shows us that there is a gradual decrease in studying reasons for career with age. Starting off with 80% of students under 26 study for career. That figure gradually declines by 10%-20% followed by age every decade and finally hits the lowest point at nearly 20% with age over 49 years old. Conversely, a growth of number reasons studying for interest among students followed by age shows the whole frame. As is observed, there is only 10% of under 26 years old studying out of interest. The figure climbs slowly till the beginning of the fourth decade and increases dramatically in late adulthood. Nearly the same number of 40-49 years old study for career. In the final stage, 70% of students study for interest in comparison to 18% studying for career.
The second graph illustrates the support of employers that reach the maximum number of approximately 60% for the under 26 years old students. This figure drops rapidly to nearly 32% up to the third decade, then gradually grows and gets over 40% at the late adulthood of life.
The two bar charts below give us information about the prime reasons that students are interested in studying in accordance with age and the number of help they can receive from employers.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table compares business activities between the Australian department and online stores in terms of number, profit, revenue, and growth in 2011.
Overall, it is clear that web-based stores’ figures were consistently higher than their physical counterparts. Despite this, the latter achieved greater business efficiency.
Regarding the two first criteria, online stores were on a greater scale compared to the department ones in terms of quantity, almost five times greater, with 368 and 67 stores, respectively. However, profits gained by offline stores nearly equalled the figures for those operated online, with 807 and 863 AUD dollars, in that order.
Concerning the two remaining categories, although the growth recorded in department stores was 0.4%, which was 0.2% lower than the online stores, the sales revenue generated was just 700 AUD dollars lower than their online counterparts, with respective figures being 12700 and 13400 AUD dollars.
The table compares business activities between the Australian department and online stores in terms of number, profit, revenue, and growth in 2011.
Overall, it is clear that web-based stores’ figur...
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