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The given two charts illustrate how many people rated the hotel’s customer service in two intervals: 2005 and 2010.
Overall, there was an increase in the percentage of callers considering the hotel’s customer service as excellent and good, except for that of three remaining reactions under scrutiny, with the most dramatic growth in the figures for excellent and good in two years.
Building on the overall upward trend, the visitor proportions assessed the hotel’s customer service as excellent which represented a considerable climb from 5% to 28% over the span. Likewise, the data for good reactions skyrocketed enormously from 14% to 39%, showcasing the similar growth in two separate times.
In terms of satisfactory, poor and very poor judges, the data for these responses sparkly contrasted with that of excellent and good, when a significant fall was observed from 45% to 17%, 21% to 12% and 15% to 4%, with the respective figures, under two intervals examined.
The given two charts illustrate how many people rated the hotel’s customer service in two intervals: 2005 and 2010.
Overall, there was an increase in the percentage of callers considering the hotel’s...
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The bar chart illustrates how the daily leisure time spent on six different recreational activities varied between Americans aged from 15 to 19 and those over 75 in 2015.
Overall, the senior group dedicated a larger proportion of their time to passive activities, including watching TV, reading, relaxing and thinking. In contrast, social activities like socializing, playing games and participating in physical exercises were more common among the youth. Both age groups spent the most time watching TV.
Passive activities were more popular among older people, with watching TV taking the lead, consuming 4.5 hours of their day. The youth also favored TV, but to a lesser extent, with 2.4 hours spent daily. At 1 hour, reading was the second most common activity for the senior while young individuals spent 12 minutes on it. Seniors also devoted more time to contemplation and relaxation, with an average of 36 minutes, compared to just 6 minutes for the young.
Active activities, on the other hand, were more favored among teenagers. Computer use was the second most popular activity for this group, with 1,1 hours, double the half-hour daily average for the senior. Similarly, the 15-to-19-year-olds allocated 0.6 hours to sports every day, triple the older group. Socializing and communicating showed smaller differences, with 0.7 to 0.8 hours by both age brackets. Nevertheless, the younger group spent slightly more time on this activity.
The bar chart illustrates how the daily leisure time spent on six different recreational activities varied between Americans aged from 15 to 19 and those over 75 in 2015.
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The chart illustrates the number of three kinds of visitors to a museum from 1997 to 2012. Overall, the quantity of adult visitors always comprised the vast majority during the given period, while there was only a minority in special exhibition visitors over the given time frame. Furthermore, all three categories saw a fluctuation over 15 years.
In 1997, adult visitors started with the highest number among three categories with 300,100 people, which nearly doubled that of visitors in the under-15 group (120,000 people). Meanwhile, special exhibition visitors lagged behind, which consisted of only 28,000 people. Five years later, the figure for the three categories experienced slight changes. The number of adult visitors and special exhibition visitors increases moderately, to around 1,100 and 1,200 individuals respectively. By contrast, the number of visitors aged under 15 decreased gently to 110,000 people in 2002.
Notably, in 2007, the number of adult visitors reached a peak of 400, 500 people then eventually fell to 380,000 in 2012. In addition, visitors aged under 15 dropped to 87,000 in 2007, ultimately reaching 82,300 in 2012. Turning to special exhibition visitors, this category saw an upward trend, rose to 37,700 in 2007 and reached 42,000 after five years.
The chart illustrates the number of three kinds of visitors to a museum from 1997 to 2012. Overall, the quantity of adult visitors always comprised the vast majority during the given period, while the...
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Writing Task 1
The map illustrates how a medical centre was changed between 2008 and 2010.
Overall, the centre was expanded with the addition of other facilities, catering for storage, familial, educational, and pharmaceutical needs.
In 2008, the main entrance led right to the reception area, behind which was the staff office, while a laboratory was on the right of the entrance. Meanwhile, visitors could wait in a room located on the left of the entrance, leading to a corridor that divided the centre into two separate areas. Alongside the corridor was a treatment room on the far left-hand side, followed by three doctor’s offices.
Two years later, the centre underwent several significant modifications. On the far right of the corridor was a newly-built office for medical practitioners, adjacent to which was a new store room. Moreover, the free space on the left of the waiting room was expanded, allowing a room for studying and another for mother and child to be constructed. Finally, the vacant part behind the laboratory was utilised for the instalment of a pharmacy.
The map illustrates how a medical centre was changed between 2008 and 2010.
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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct. There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
The debate surrounding the natural occurrence of animal extinction and the human responsibility to prevent it continues to be a topic of contention. One school of thought holds that extinction is an inherent aspect of nature and should not be a concern. However, I believe that human actions have a significant impact on the extinction rates of some animals, necessitating intervention to preserve biodiversity.
On the one hand, it is understandable that the extinction of animals has always taken place naturally. The primary reason behind this thinking is that geological records show that mass extinctions periodically reset the stage for new life forms to emerge and evolve. For example, numerous dinosaurs, along with other species, were eradicated by a historical catastrophe. This event coincided with the period when Homo sapiens had not yet come into existence. Therefore, it is a stretch to say that natural phenomena, including volcanic activity and climate shifts, are of paramount importance for the dramatic changes in biodiversity.
However, the rate of human actions, especially rampant poaching, is more pressing and positively correlates with the dramatic decrease in many species' populations. Moreover, industrial and agricultural activities, while contributing to the healthier economy of the state, partly cause animals to grapple with the challenges of destroyed natural habitats, a dearth of food resources, and poor reproductive conditions.
Besides, it is undeniable that many organisms, such as bees and other pollinators, are at the core of maintaining the delicate balance of ecosystems by facilitating the reproduction of flowering plants and ensuring the production of fruits and trees. Secondly, protecting wild animals yields multiple economic benefits, as they play an important role in helping tourism succeed by attracting not only domestic tourists but also international ones.
In particular, while extinction is a natural process with historical precedence, human activities also play a crucial role in the extinction of species, necessitating attention to the benefits of safeguarding ecosystems and contributing to the prosperity of the country. Therefore, there is a need for holistic conservation measures.
The debate surrounding the natural occurrence of animal extinction and the human responsibility to prevent it continues to be a topic of contention. One school of thought holds that extinction is an i...
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TASK 2: In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Opinions diverge on whether high income levels for people are beneficial to the nation or salaries should be regulated and limited by the government. This essay will shed light on both views before concluding that restricting the maximum income individuals can earn is more advantageous for national development.
On the one hand, proponents of excessive wage levels for employees may cite economic prosperity as their primary argument. It is a fact that as average income increases, so does the tax contribution from residents, which results in economic growth. In addition, earning excessive compensation packages is an incentive for workers. It is evident that employees with competence and remarkable achievement in work can be paid high salaries as a reward. This can have a positive motivational influence on other individuals to boost their productivity.
However, this line of reasoning is not sound since the effects of paying astronomical wage levels are related to social issues such as the increase in income gap and crime rate, which affect national development negatively. On the other hand, the government should impose a ceiling on personal earnings because of decreasing income equality and the crime rate. Differences in income level contribute to significant wealth gaps, which leads to the increase in poverty and financial hardship; therefore, the government should ensure that wealth is evenly distributed throughout a country by setting a limit on people’s earnings. Moreover, it is hardly undeniable that a significant gap between low and high salaries can trigger a disaffection among individuals at work, which can cause social conflicts. On top of that, countries with a considerable income gap are studied to have higher poverty and crime rates than those experiencing narrower economic inequality. Hence, it is necessary that the government cap individuals’ earnings.
In conclusion, despite seeming benefits associated with high employee incomes, I side with the opponents of such an idea and believe that constraining the amount individuals can make can have a positive effect on national development.
TASK 2: In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the...
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The given table compares data on the quantities of cars produced in three different nations in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
Overall, there was an increase in the car numbers generated in two countries, except for that of Australia under scrutiny, with the most dramatic rise being seen in the figures for Thailand. Furthermore, this nation held the highest numbers over the period.
Examining the data more closely, the cars being produced in Argentina which started at 235,088 million cars, after which it experienced a significant growth to 352,759 cars in 2006. Likewise, the figures for Thailand began at 452,163 cars, and then soared enormously to 1,162,356 cars in the corresponding period. Meanwhile, 452,163 cars were made in Australia in 2003, with a subsequent fall to 341,268 cars by 2006.
Shifting to the duration from 2006 to 2009, the statistics for Argentina climbed slightly to 466,089 cars in 2009, whereas the number of cars made in Australia and Thailand witnessed a downward trend when descended considerably from 341,268 to 245,264 cars and 1,162,356 to 999,963 cars, respectively, showcasing the parallel decline patterns during the evaluated timeframe.
The given table compares data on the quantities of cars produced in three different nations in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
Overall, there was an increase in the car numbers generated in two countries, excep...
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It is important for people to take risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
In this contemporary society, taking risks is said to hold an essential part in the development of individual lives as well as career path. From my perspective, although risk-takers can experience undesirable failures and disappointment, my firm conviction is that the prospective benefits of accepting hazardous challenges are far more significant than the disadvantages involved.
It is understandable why taking risks may pose some certain demerits to people’s lives. As a matter of fact, people can be confronted with various difficulties which require great effort and capacity to handle. For example, discouraged by those hardships, besides losses in time, money and effort, people may suffer from many serious mental problems such as depression or pessimism. Additionally, when it comes to the context of an enterprise, taking risk may not ensure the operation of a company appropriately. Conducting risky campaigns can probably cause bankrupts, thereby imposing big debt as a financial burden to the operation of the company.
Despite the aforementioned negative drawbacks, I would argue that it is worth taking risks due to the advantages it brings to the development of people’s lives and their occupation. To elucidate, it is undeniable that coming out of the comfort zone can help people gain a deeper insight as well as accumulate more experience. A good illustration for this is that students who study abroad may have to deal with loneliness or economic hurdles in return for more broad knowledge they obtain and the career prospects in the future. In terms of professional lives, people can get the same benefits as the mentioned student. For instance, many people do not know the history of establishing the renowned KFC brand which had gone through hundreds of failures and bankruptcy, but its boss did not give up until finding the best recipe then became successful.
In conclusion, in spite of bringing several disadvantages to a certain extent, I believe that taking risks is crucial for people because it allows people to broaden their horizon and become more proficient in their fields, thereby succeeding in pursuing their goals.
In this contemporary society, taking risks is said to hold an essential part in the development of individual lives as well as career path. From my perspective, although risk-takers can experience und...
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Đề bài: Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Essay:
In this technology driven world, numerous individuals from adults to children are inclined to work and study from home on account of the low cost,accessibility and convenience. From my viewpoint, such development is positive due to the aforementioned reasons.
On the one hand, working or studying from home do not waste much expense.Take an illustration of transportation.Every day, it takes people a great amount of time and expenditure even if they commute to working spaces or schools. Plus, there is a possibility of having several spontaneous fees, which can gradually spoil their savings. In this regard, working from home not only alleviates the money spent but also helps with addressing redundant expenses on a daily basis.
Another point to consider is that it is effortless to approach. The proliferation of the Internet has overcame geographic barrier; hence, working at home is a sustainable option. In fact, there is no fear of losing interaction with others when several social sites perhaps can fulfill that need. With those platforms, they are able to resolve and discuss work without stepping out of their homes.
Additionally, it allows them to flexibly regulate their schedules. Albeit the same official working and learning hours, they can properly decide which task to do first, then which is the second to enhance productivity without being criticized. This may make learning and working more comfortable.
In short, while it is clear that there is a great deal of shortcomings with this latest method of working, it is undeniable that the benefits are even more superior.
Đề bài: Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive...
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The bar chart gives information about the population living in urban areas in six different park of the world.
Overall, it can be seen that more and more people lived in cities and this number was predicted to continice rising until 2050. In addition, North America is where urban
sprank happens most.
According to the chart, North American has the largest population living in urban areas, at 64% in 1950. This number increased to 79% in 2007 and was expected to peak at 90% in the next 43 years. The most noticable surge was seen in Lahin America and Europe, where the percentage of urbain residents experienced the increase of 34% and 21% respectively and these would rocket to around 87% in 2050. At a lesser extent, the figure for Oceania is supposed to go up steadily mom 62% to 75%. With similar pattern, approximately 16% of population in Africa and Asia live in urbans areas, this followed by an increase 23% and might reach about 64% in 2050.
The bar chart gives information about the population living in urban areas in six different park of the world.
Overall, it can be seen that more and more people lived in cities and this number was pre...
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Topic 4: The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
The provided table illustrates how many automobiles are generated in three different nations from 2003 to 2009.
Overall, it becomes evident that there was an upward trend of cars generated in Argentina and Thailand with the exception of Australia, being constractly. In general, Thailand represented the highest number of automobiles manufactured over the span.
Between 2003 and 2006, Thailand held the top spot with 735,825 and 1,162,356 million cars produced, respectively. Although the figure for Australia displayed a twofold higher value than that of Argentina in 2003, these numbers seemed to be similar in 2006 with figures standing at 452,163 million cars, 235,088 million cars and 352,759 million cars, 341,268 million cars in their respective cases.
Shifting focus to the remaining period, between 2006 to 2009, the data for Thailand consistently topped the chart with 999,963 million cars in 2009. The figure for Australia sharply fell in 2009, at 245,264 million cars, whereas, the statistic for Argentina experienced a significant increase and exceeded that of Australia twofold, around 466,089 million cars.
Topic 4: The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
The provided table illustrates how many automobiles are generated in three different nations from 200...
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Writing Task 1
The two line charts show how many train travellers were there in Sydney and the punctuality of this means of transport from 1995 to 2004.
Overall, there was an increase in the number of people using trains for travelling, while the opposite was true for the proportion of trains arriving on time.
Regarding passenger numbers, in 1995, a quarter of a million people were train commuters, which was the lowest point. Over the next 4 years, the number inclined gradually to about 265 million travellers in 1999, before peaking at 300 million at the turn of the millennium. Thereafter, it fell back to the year 2000’s level, levelling off until 2004.
Concerning the proportion of punctual trains, in the first year, around 92% of trains were operated on time, followed by a steady decline to 85% in the next 2 years. From here, the share reached the highest point at just over the initial level, prior to dropping to the south of the year 1997’s figure and recovering to the pinnacle. Finally, the rate declined sharply and bottomed out at approximately 73% in the last year of the period.
The two line charts show how many train travellers were there in Sydney and the punctuality of this means of transport from 1995 to 2004.
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ĐỀ: Employers should be concerned about the quality of their employees' work instead of how they dress. Do you agree or disagree ?
There has been a growing concern over that it is crucial for the employers to concentrate on the work quality of the employees instead of being concerned about how they dress. From my perspective , I strongly agree with this statement for many reasons.
It is vital for the employers to acknowledge that the labor productivity is the fundamental contributor to the promotion of businesses’ economy. The employers play a paramount role in helping their employees to improve and move up the career ladder. In other words, if the managers put their efforts on training their staffs including following their working performance and find their strength and weakness, it can help the worker to cultivate relevant job skills , acquiring experience working that contribute to the promotion opportunities . As a result , the potential employees have ability to innovate the products that are not only ideal but also creative, boosting firms’ economy and reputation.
Another reason why I believe that is limiting the way employees dress leads to the loss of their job satisfaction . This is because when being observed by higher-ups , it makes employees uncomfortable and stressed out about the strict working environment. However, if the workers are allowed to dress in the free way , depending on their preferences, it leads to the enhancement of creativity and comfort. As a result , the employers can provide their employees with the not only friendly but also effective working environment.
In conclusion , it is more crucial for the employers to pay attention to the quality at work than focusing on the clothes which the workers dress.
ĐỀ: Employers should be concerned about the quality of their employees' work instead of how they dress. Do you agree or disagree ?
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Prompt: All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undergraduates in recent years have received enormous advocacy for community volunteering thanks to its positive impact on society. However, viewpoints are saying that potential drawbacks significantly affect their academic achievements which I strongly disagree with. I entirely support the statement that pupils studying in universities ought to do social charitable activities, attaching several pieces of evidence.
Doing voluntary work heedlessly causes disadvantages for university students. Concentration loss, time-consuming, and study neglect could happen to those who find social volunteering interesting. For instance, a guy who participates in a community project may spend hours designing a proposal to send and ask for sponsors or receive calls during school time to solve relevant work. These negative impacts seriously alienate not only students’ school performances but also their mental health.
On the other hand, the benefits can be gained when joining charitable activities completely outweigh the other in this term. Working for social purposes provides valuable opportunities for undergraduates to enhance life skills, such as time management, teamwork,... Besides, raising students’ awareness of understanding impoverished people and sympathy is what unpaid community service aims at. Therefore, more and more disadvantaged individuals are having better living conditions thanks to noble actions of students. Specifically, the proportion of those who are in the poverty line is more likely to reduce. Consequently, local society is step by step being improved and upgraded..
In conclusion, although doing voluntary work for community purposes impedes university students’ academic performances, it is strongly supported thanks to its benefits for the undergraduates themselves and the society.
Prompt: All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.
The table illustrates the estimates of literacy rates across five continents and worldwide, categorised by gender, between 2000 and 2004.
Overall, Europe consistently recorded the highest proportion of literacy in both genders and in total, while the opposite was true for Africa's figures. Additionally, the percentage of literate males was far higher than their female counterparts.
In total, the literacy rate was 82.2% globally, in which Europe dominated at 98.8%, followed closely by both the figures for the Americas and Oceania, comparable at around 93%. Meanwhile, just over three-quarters of Asians were literate, slightly higher than in Africa (62.5%).
Regarding males, literate men around the world accounted for 87.2%, with nearly every man in Europe able to read and write (99.2%), compared to about 94% in the Americas and Oceania. Moreover, the literacy rates of Asian and African males were 85.9% and 71.6%, respectively.
Concerning females, the global literacy rate was 77.3%, lower than that in Europe (98.5%), in comparison with approximately 93% in both the Americas and Oceania. Finally, women who could read and write in Asia represented 72.5%, while just over half of those in Africa were literate.
The table illustrates the estimates of literacy rates across five continents and worldwide, categorised by gender, between 2000 and 2004.
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TOPIC: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is sometimes argued that governments should allocate money to railway systems instead of road networks. To a certain extent, I agree that it may be true that investing in railways can bring many merits. However, I hold a strong view that there are many advantages to building roads.
On the one hand, the opinion that spending money on roads rather than railroads is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, roads have improved connectivity more than railways. This can be explained by investing in building roads to enable better access to remote areas, markets, and amenities for people. For example, the project of linking isolated areas to the rest of the country in Brazil through road networks gained improved access to essential services, markets, and healthcare facilities in larger cities. Secondly, building railways can enhance trade and commerce. To explain, when governments squander money on roads, well-constructed roads facilitate the movement of goods and services, encouraging trade and commerce.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe that governments should allocate money to railways. The first reason is that rail transport is more environmentally friendly than roads. This can be explained that when governments disburse money to railways, the number of people commuting by trains can increase significantly. As a result, this can cut individual carbon footprint and minimize the pollution state. For example, Germany can mitigate air pollution due to making significant investments in railway infrastructure of governments. Another significant reason is railways can reduce the number of vehicles circulating on the streets. Under certain assumptions, this can be construed as by providing a reliable alternative to cars, railways can help alleviate the strain on existing road infrastructure. This can reduce traffic congestion as well as accidents occurring among vehicles on the streets. For instance, the implementation of the high-speed railway system in Japan has significantly reduced traffic jams on major highways and improved the overall transportation experience for the public.
In conclusion, while there are valid arguments against spending money on railways, the benefits of their development outweigh the drawbacks. Therefore, governments should prioritize investment in railways to create a more sustainable and efficient transportation network.
TOPIC: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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The given graph illustrates the share of women members of parliament in five separate nations between 2000 and 2012.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of females of parliament to all five countries scrutinized, with the most dramatic rise being seen in the figures for the UK. Despite that, the UK consistently had the lowest data over the period.
Examining the data more closely, the percentage of parliament’s women in Germany started at around 35%, after which it experienced a slight fall to shy of this percentage, before reaching nearly 37% at the end of the span. Meanwhile, the figures for Italy climbed enormously to downward of 40%, outpacing that of Germany in 2012. Similar change, but to a lesser extent, were seen in the figures for France, which grew from around 25% to almost 32% during the evaluated timeframe.
In terms of Belgium and the UK, nearly 17% female representatives of parliament in 2000 in Belgium, with a significant growth to roughly 24% at the end of the duration. Likewise, data for the UK surged dramatically to 20% in 2008 before registering a similarly relative quantity at around 24% with that of Belgium at the end of the period.
The given graph illustrates the share of women members of parliament in five separate nations between 2000 and 2012.
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The diagram provides insights into how frozen fish pies are produced. The whole process involves a range of steps.
Overall, a fish pie contains peas, fish, sauce and potato. The sets of stages for fish pie production are as follows: preparation and delivery. In addition, the ingredient has to go through six different stages of preparation.
The initial stage of production starts with potato as it requires to be sent one month before the process occurs. It goes through cleaning, peeling and slicing, all the waste in the cleaning process is thrown away. After that, it underwent the process of boiling, chilling and storing.
Fresh salmon are marinated in lemon juice and salt and then cooked in a steam oven. The workers are capable of removing their skin and bones. Having inspected, the cooked salmon along with prepared peas, sauce and potato ready to go for wrapping and freezing before dispatching.
The diagram provides insights into how frozen fish pies are produced. The whole process involves a range of steps.
Overall, a fish pie contains peas, fish, sauce and potato. The sets of stages for fi...
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Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Nowadays, it is argued by some that the most influential years of a child’s life are before beginning school, whereas others believe that what a person experiences as a teenager has an impact significantly on their future life. This essay will further discuss the two sides of the issue and illustrate my viewpoint.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that early-life circumstances influence a child’s life. Since the preschool age is the most impressionable, their core character tends to be formed during that period. This is because years under 7 have had fundamental learning experiences, and their first observation of the world happened at that time, which affected their memory and built the basis of their future actions and decisions. For example, children who grow up in a happy family will create strong family bonds with their parents, and have a sense of security and stability, which helps them develop confidence and higher self-esteem. By contrast, children in an unhappy family may experience feelings of anxiety, and stress, which can affect their mental health and social relationships.
On the other hand, advocates of adolescence impacting one’s later life significantly are also able to come up with arguments to justify their opinion. First, a school is a diverse and multiple environment where children interact with peers and teachers, giving them opportunities to present new ideas and beliefs. As a result, children can broaden their horizons and develop a deeper understanding of the world around them. Second, as children mature, they have enough knowledge and responsibility to decide their future, especially to determine and orient their future careers. In fact, self-discovery and exploration are significantly important in shaping their personality and disposition towards life.
In conclusion, although the treatment and upbringing of a child from 1 to 6 years old have a great influence on their later life, their teenage period is also influential in forming one’s world views and beliefs. In my point of view, I personally support both of them.
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Writing Task 1
The table illustrates how students at a university assessed its different criteria in 2000, 2005, and 2010.
Overall, all the categories examined experienced increases in the proportion of students surveyed who rated positively throughout the period, apart from the modules range offered, which saw a downward trend. However, the ratings for buildings and teaching facilities remained unchanged over the given timeframe.
Regarding criteria that fluctuated, in 2000, three-quarters of students rated teaching quality positively, compared to 84% for print stationery. Over the next 10 years, both saw minor fluctuations in the share of students giving good ratings, ending up north of their initial levels in 2010.
Concerning the remainder, 45% of students said that e-resources were helpful initially, after which the share nearly doubled, reaching 88% in the final year. Meanwhile, almost one-third of students said so about the range of modules offered in the first year, which gradually declined to 27% after 10 years. Finally, the figure for buildings and teaching facilities stabilised at 77% over the period.
The table illustrates how students at a university assessed its different criteria in 2000, 2005, and 2010.
Overall, all the categories examined experienced increases in the proportion of students...
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