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The given chart shows how UK children from 11 to 16 years old travel to school by different means of transportation.
Overall, it can be seen that different means of transportation are preferred depending on how far the children need to go to school. In addition, cars and buses are chosen to travel over 5 miles rather than walking and bicycles.
At first glance, 90% of children choose to walk if the journey is from 0 to 1 mile, followed by bicycle at 50% of UK students. Buses are not preferred to travel to school at this distance, with only approximately 3% of children choosing this vehicle. Secondly, bicycles are the most chosen means of transportation for 1 to 2 miles journey by nearly 80% of youngsters, which is nearly 4 times more than cars at 20%.
However, for longer distances, cars and buses are more preferred than the remaining counterparts. In 2 to 5 miles journey, more than 30% of UK children travel to school by car, which is less than about 20% compared to bus. The most-chosen vehicle for over 5 mile distance is bus with nearly 70% of children's votes.
The given chart shows how UK children from 11 to 16 years old travel to school by different means of transportation.
Overall, it can be seen that different means of transportation are preferred dep...
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Some people believe that children should be taught to be competitive and achieve more, while others think that children should be taught to be cooperative and considerate of others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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There are growing discussions regarding whether students should be taught to be independently competitive or cooperative. This essay will first examine both viewpoints before concluding that a balanced approach that fosters both qualities is ideal for a child's holistic development.
Admittedly, people deciding to teach children to be competitive has undeniable advantages. Firstly, studying in a competitive environment can help children have motivation to aim for higher goals, so they can enhance themself and reach their full potential. For example, a competitive sports day in primary school can help them to try their best and be proud of their achievements.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned benefits of teaching to be competitive, I believe that nurturing cooperation in children is equally significant. The key rationale behind this is that when children study and work in a cooperative environment and all people are considerate of others, children can learn so many soft skills, such as: interaction skills, teamwork, leadership, conflict resolution skills. These skills are crucial for children in the future and help them to be more successful at work.
However, I believe that if children are only taught either competitiveness or cooperation, they can be impacted negatively.On the one hand, Children can become greedy, self-centered and overambitious when they solely focus on competing with others, so that they have to win at all cost, even cause harm to others. On the other hand, it seems to me that solely concentrating on cooperation may lead them to fall into complacency and a lack of ambition. Furthermore, children could rely on others when working together, as a consequence, they cannot achieve success independently. Therefore, it is important to strike a balance between cooperation and competition in child nurturing.
In conclusion, both ways of teaching children, namely collaboration and competition have their own benefits and drawbacks. Thus, children should be exposed to a balanced educational approach that encourages competitiveness when needed and cooperation when appropriate
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The chart below shows how frequent people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart gives information about the frequency of Americans who had meals at fast food restaurants from 2003 to 2013
Overall, while the proportion of customers ate out in fast food restaurants once a week and once or twice a month shared the highest in the three years examined, those for daily had the lowest ratio.
The percentage of people ate junk food at restaurant started at just over 30%, after which it rose slightly to around 33% in 2006, before falling to approximately 28% in 2013. A similar change was seen in the figure for those who had meals at these restaurants several times a week, which was about 17% in 2003, followed by a growth to 20% and a decline to north of 15%.
30% of American people went to a restaurant to have fast food in 2003, with a subsequent drop to exactly 25% in 2006, before reaching 33% at the end of the period. Similarly, the figure for those who had fast food in an eatery increased from 13% in 2003 to 15% in 2006 and stayed unchanged. Daily customers and people who never ate out in fast food restaurant did not at any time surpass 5% throughout the period.
The chart below shows how frequent people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
Poor countries are given financial support from richer nations to provide disadvantaged countries with the better standard of living and quality of life. However, This kind of aid rarely solves the issue of poverty, and therefore I completely agree that the richer countries should provide other forms of help.
On the one hand, in order to help poorer nations in the long term, the government and citizens should be provided enough educational tools. Because, education is a core factor to help people expand their knowledge and assess to new information, which will reduce the rate of illiteracy in poor countries. For example, they can give computers, laptop or even board and pen which are also foundation for children can approach to studying. Furthermore, by providing education about agriculture and farming will help people from poorer nations can farm efficiently, which will essentially provide them adequate nutrition to ward off hunger and disease.
On the other hand, instead of giving disadvantage countries money, they can help them with modern technologies and equipments such as medical equipment, farming machinery making the lives of poorer people significantly enhanced. Furthermore, in many poor countries have many natural resources but they do not have enough conditions and equipments to exploit such as fossil fuels and minerals, by providing these equipments will help them have certain work to settle down.
In conclusion, while giving financial help to poor nations will be beneficial in the short term, providing education and technology will be the long run.
Poor countries are given financial support from richer nations to provide disadvantaged countries with the better standard of living and quality of life. However, This kind of aid rarely solves the is...
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Ứng dụng học IELTS miễn phí Pombeebee sẽ trao 6 suất học bổng Thi IELTS miễn phí cho học sinh và sinh viên Việt Nam. Mỗi học sinh đều được cố vấn học tập và được sự hướng dẫn tận tình của giáo viên Po...
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Pombeebee is offering IELTS scholarships to 6 Vietnamese students. The 6 scholars will each receive a personalised study plan from learning advisors, and will be mentored by Pombeebee teachers.
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ
Marketing and promotion are the key to successful business. To what extent do you agree?
Due to the widespread adoption of technology in the 4.0 era, it is considered that marketing and promotion are the key to business success. However, I firmly believe that the success of a company is based not only on this facet but also on other aspects.
Turning first to the reasons why marketing and promotion are considered as the key to business success. Firstly, these aspects have a wide range of accessibility to customers. By applying some marketing schemes such as organizing questionnaires in social platforms, businesses can easily identify a significant number of customers’ demand, and have the suitable innovation with this to build revenues . In addition, marketing and promotion enable the company to create a strong brand identity. For instance, Caty, which is a new noodle brand in VietNam, perfectly exemplifies this situation as the marketing strategy of generating unique song called “mỳ tôm thanh long”, and this allow the business to build a strong brand identity with their dragon fruit noodles products.
Nevertheless, I strongly believe that the business success depends not only on marketing and promotion but also on other facets. Firstly, extraordinary contributions of individuals within the organization can influence a company's performance. With the capability and creativity of employees, numerous promising innovations can be proposed which contribute to the company’s growth. In this sense, the human element is indispensable in business success. Additionally, leadership capability is another aspect. The business can stand in a competitive economic institution when the leader can give direction, possesses vision for the company through challenges. Therefore, having an extraordinary leader is the bedrock for success.
In conclusion, I strongly argue with the notion that marketing and promotion are the key to business success. Despite its ability of accessing a significant number of customers and the benefit of enhancing brand identity, human contribution and leadership capability are the indispensable facets to business success.
Marketing and promotion are the key to successful business. To what extent do you agree?
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Đề Bài: Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
One school of thought holds that families who send their children to private school should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. While acknowledging the reason for this thinking, I personally disagree with this view and it will be analyzed in my essay.
On the one hand, it is obvious that in some private schools which are operated by the entrepreneur are different compared to the public school, they are not supported by the government so they have to spend their budget to pay for not only the utilities but also the operating costs and other expenses. Another reason is that despite having variety of different between the private school and public school but this act may exaggerate the disparity between them, for example, the majority of the private school have much more advanced education tools as well as higher quality teaching staff than the private school so if the wealthy who send their adolescents to the private school can not only save costs but also can have better education condition, it would be unfair for the poverty who learning at the public still have to pay taxes for the government but have less education condition.
On the other hand, i am not optimistic that we can not ensure that there are no other reforms that will start to resemble this one, for instance should the government stop taxing people who receive treatment from private hospital, but still kept the portion of the common resident, as a result the government may not experience fail reform due to monetizing from people who lack money but even worse can lead to the demonstration.
In sum, I firmly believe that any financial tax should be posed to the people who learn in private school.
Đề Bài: Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?...
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mong được thầy cô chữa để biết bản thân em đang ở band nào ạ
The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of absent workers who took a day off or more because of illness in Netherlands, France, Sweden, UK and Germany between 1991 and 2001
Overall, there was a decline in the percentage of workers with illness absence in France and, while a rising trend can be seen in the figure for Netherlands and Sweden and a stable trend for two remaining countries. In addition, Netherlands generally had the highest proportion throughout the tracking period; meanwhile, that for Germany consistently hold the lowest.
The share for absent workers due to sickness in Netherlands in 1991 was just under 5%, after which it grew moderately to around 5.5% in 1992. This figure then saw a significant decline to nearly 4% before finally climbing back to around 5.5%. similar changes, with a greater extent, were seen in the proportion for Swedish workers, which increased from 3% to approximately 4.5% in the final year.
Conversely, around 5% of workers in France were off in 1991, with a steady drop to 3% in 2001. Meanwhile, the figure for the UK and Germany remained unchanged, which fluctuated at around 2.5% and downward of 2% respectively.
The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001.
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e. E cảm ơn ạ
Nowadays, wearing uniforms has become a regulation for employees in many firms. This essay will discuss the benefits which a company can have when using uniforms for their staff as well as some positive upside for individual workers.
Turning first to the advantages for firms, there are two obvious benefits which uniforms could provide. One of these is that uniforms enable the companies to manage their staff more easily. With its cohesive and unified appearance such as the consistent color, logo, uniforms allow the companies to distinguish them from visitors or even strangers. Therefore, this contributes to a safer work environment for staff. Moreover, uniforms reinforce the company’s brand identity. For example, KFC has a unique uniform which has the face of Harland sanders’ face, founder of KFC, helps the brand to stand out over other businesses. Additionally, uniforms are beneficial not only for companies but also offer numerous advantages for individual staff.
As it can be seen, uniforms provide numerous advantages for each employee. The first benefit is reduction in personal clothing expenses. By having provision of clothing to wear when going to work, this can help staff cut down on the sum of money spent on shopping. Consequently, this facilitates workers to invest in other fields, such as saving, learning new languages with this money. Additionally, uniforms encourage appropriate behavior between staff and customers. For example, the uniforms enable students to distinguish between the teacher, who is the staff member at an English center, and other people.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that wearing uniforms has such a beneficial influence on both firms and individual staff. While companies have many benefits in security and their brand identity, per employee receives numerous positive upside in their financial, and others’ behavior.
Nowadays, wearing uniforms has become a regulation for employees in many firms. This essay will discuss the benefits which a company can have when using uniforms for their staff as well as some positi...
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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all time. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefit of having uniform for a staff?
Nowadays, wearing uniforms has become a regulation for employees in many firms. This essay will discuss the benefits which a company can have when using uniforms for their staff as well as some positive upside for individual workers.
Turning first to the advantages for firms, there are two obvious benefits which uniforms could provide. Firstly, workers’ clothes enable the companies to manage their staff easier. With the cohesive and unified appearance such as the consensus in color, logo, uniforms allow the companies to distinguish them from visitors or even strangers. Therefore, this contributes to a safer work environment for staff. Moreover, uniforms reinforce the company’s brand identity. Given that KFC has a unique uniform which has the face of Harland sanders’ face, founder of KFC, this helps the brand to stand out over other businesses. Additionally, uniforms are not only beneficial for companies but also provide numerous advantages for individual staff.
Visibly, there are dozens of advantages, which uniforms provide, for each employee. The first benefit is reduction in personal clothing expenses. By having provision of clothing to wear when going to work, staff can cut down on the sum of money spent on shopping. Consequently, uniforms facilitate workers to invest in other fields, such as saving, learning new languages with this money. Additionally, uniforms encourage appropriate behavior between staff and customers. For example, the uniforms enable students to distinguish between the teacher, who is the staff member at an English center, and other people.
Conclusively, I firmly believe that wearing uniforms has a positive impact on both firms and individual staff. While companies have many benefits in security and their brand identity, per employee receives numerous positive upside in their financial, and others’ behavior.
Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all time. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefit of having uniform for a staff?
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The given pie charts illustrate the qualifications the employees of an engineering company held between 1998 and 2008.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportions of employees holding PhDs both in Science and Arts, as well as people with Master's Degrees in Arts, whilst those with First Degrees in both Arts and Science experienced a decline. In addition, the share of employees who had a Master's Degree in Science remained the same throughout the years.
The proportion of workers holding a PhD in Science started at 13%, after which it peaked at 30% in 2008, marking it the most prevalent qualification within the company. Similar patterns can be seen in the figures for people with Master's Degrees and PhDs in Arts, which climbed by 2% and 5% at the end of the period.
Initially, the percentage of employees holding a First Degree, Science and Arts combined, was 45%, which later almost halved, ending with 11% of people having a First Degree in Science and 10% having one in Arts. On the other hands, Master's Degree in Science was the most widely-held qualification until being surpassed by the proportion of employees with Science PhDs, despite witnessing a consistent rate of 29% over the period of 10 years.
The given pie charts illustrate the qualifications the employees of an engineering company held between 1998 and 2008.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportions of employees holding PhDs bo...
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writing task 2-Em mong được thầy cô chấm bài giúp ạ. Cám ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ
Question prompt: Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern era, many people argue that fulfilling tax obligations is an immense contribution of citizens to the sustainability of society, while others advocate for social responsibilities that can go beyond taxation. In this essay, I will first examine both viewpoints and give my opinion.
On the one hand, it is not a stretch to say that paying taxes is significant support for a healthier economy and society, which is attractive for several reasons. At the heart of the reasoning behind this thinking is that the increasing amounts of taxes are positively correlated with more resources being channeled into healthcare, education, and infrastructure, bringing a sense of societal welfare. Moreover, individuals who contribute to the collective betterment of society will receive numerous benefit packages in the distant future.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned argument, I side with those who advocate for additional civic duties beyond tax payment, falling under the umbrella of a variety of social responsibilities, including addressing environmental problems as an example. While the responsibility of government bodies receives financial backing and channels more resources into combating environmental collapse, which is a pressing issue in the modern-day needing to be resolved as soon as possible. It is a complex issue requiring collective cooperation from each individual in the community, bringing a much-needed perspective to gain success in terms of improving one aspect of society's fabric.
In conclusion, I would contend that the holistic development of society requires not only fulfilling tax obligations, although they are of paramount importance for social functioning, but also necessitates an environment-conscious attitude within communities
Question prompt: Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discus...
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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?
Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
It is true that viewers love watching movies produced in other countries than domestic ones. There are several reasons for that, and I believe local film-makers should be subsidized by the government.
There are various factors for movies produced locally are less appeal to people than foreign movies. First, film techniques in local areas are not professional, which makes the quality of movies much lower and affects viewers' experience when watching it. To clerify, some characters and scenes in movies cannot film realistically such as a T-rex or a big explosion so directors need some alternative such as CGI to create those things instead. However, if their skills are not good enough to create qualified result, the movies are likely to be flop. Another reason is that foreign films often have the appearance of famous actors and actresses or accomplished directors, which people will excitingly look forward to watching the movies. Such as Beauty and the Beast, with the attendance of Emma Watson, who became well-known from Harry Potter, was such a huge success.
In my opinion, I think the government should fund film crew in order to create opportunities for them and develop film industry in their own countries. To begin with, film crew need budget to maintain such as paying for actors and actress, buying props to serve filming their movies. If they do not have enough budget for these, crew flims cannot exist let alone release movies. Furthermore, to make scenes more real and lively, crews need to shoot scenes in spectacular locations, which requires a huge part of budget. This is clear that governments' subsidiaries will give them a chance to improve movies' quality.
In conclusion, quite a few factors impact people to go for foreign movies and I claim that the government should raise fund to support local film-makers.
It is true that viewers love watching movies produced in other countries than domestic ones. There are several reasons for that, and I believe local film-makers should be subsidized by the government....
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Đề bài: Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is proposed that in this modern era, a diverse array of individuals rely on internet-based communication channels to stay connected with other people and access news events. From my perspective, regular use of social media provides numerous advantages owing to its convenience and efficiency.
On the one hand, It is understandable why some might subscribe to the viewpoint that web-based networking brings a host of disadvantages to its users. First and foremost, excessive use of social media raises privacy concerns, since the users have to share their personal information owing to the compromised privacy of these platforms in order to connect with other people, which in turn makes their information accessible to third parties, resulting in identity theft, stalking or other fraudulent activities. However, major social media platforms, including Facebook, Instagram, and X partner with numerous security firms to enhance and protect their server databases from cybercrime. Moreover, frequent use of these platforms could also lead to addiction, resulting in decreased focus on their
work and studies, as their attention is consumed by current news.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that virtual communities yield a plethora of benefits to their life. The first rationale for this is connectivity, as social media facilitate convenient and instantaneous communication with friends, family, and colleagues, regardless of geographical distances enabling people to stay connected and maintain relationships, fostering a sense of community and belonging. Furthermore, online networking platforms have become valuable sources of news and information for staying updated, as they offer access to reputable editorial offices and news organizations, providing users with timely and cost-effective updates on current events and breaking news.
In conclusion, while social media does present certain drawbacks, its advantages, such as connectivity, access to news and information, and convenience, make it an indispensable tool for communication and information sharing in this modern era, outweigh the drawbacks in the long run.
Đề bài: Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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Topic: Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the cause of this? What can be done to make families closer?
In this day and age, it has become far more normal for families to experience a disconnection between us. In my opinion, there are several causes contributing to this trend, along with potential remedies to address the issue
There are two compelling reasons that explain the reality of the disconnected relationship between households. The key reason is the proliferation of technology and social media. By having social platforms which give the convenience for people to communicate at all times, face-to-face interaction is limited. This means that in the virtual world of technology, people would prefer online interaction due to the absence of time and geographical constraints. Furthermore, the pressure of modern life is also the factor for the distance of families' relationships. This is because the common topic when talking is about life and private stories which accidentally put a strain on people and make them have a fear of sharing stories.
However, we still have the remedy to tackle this issue. For one, establishing regular screen time limits for each family member. In order to limit the screen time, individuals should propose some fixed time for using technology in family. By having less time on social platforms, face-to-face interaction would be more inclined towards. Another potential solution is encouraging honest communication and active listening as well as empathy. Instead of chatting online, people an create a friend outing in a caffe or somewhere to exchange information lively. Given more time outside, people would have more opportunities to bond with their relationships and understand their loved ones.
In summation, while technology and the pressures of modern life contribute to the disconnect within families, setting limits on screen time and fostering open communication can help rebuild these relationships.
Topic: Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the cause of this? What can be done to make families closer?
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The three bar charts illustrate the average years of schooling, the number of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developed countries during the period from 1980 to 1990.
Overall, it is clear that the figures for industrialized countries were much higher than development ones. Also, the charts show an overall increase in the research and science.
People in developing countries attended school for 3 years, with a slight increase to nearly 4 years from 1980 to 1990. On the other hand, the number of industrialized countries rose significantly from 9 years to 11 years in 10 years.
The number of scientists and technicians in industrialized countries almost doubled to 70 per 1000 people, and spending on research and development saw rapid growth from 170 billion to 350 billion in 1990. By contrast, the scientists and technicians still remained around 15 per 1000 and research and development spending fell down to 10 billion in 1990.
The three bar charts illustrate the average years of schooling, the number of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developed countries during the period from 1980 to 19...
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Đề bài: Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Changing demographics has been a thought-provoking issue for years. Many people believe increased longevity has lent support to the abolishment of mandatory retirement. I agree with this opinion.
Certainly, there are numerous favourable impacts on organisations when old people can maintain their work longer, chief of which is stable intellectual ability and physical health. As a matter of fact, thanks to improved medical advances and anti-aging technology, human longevity now is greatly extended. This marked improvement in living standards throughout the world leads to the fact that people at the threshold of retirement are generally more mentally and physically active than previous generations. It comes as no surprise that people’s prime has been extended significantly and old people now can live a more fulfilling life with fewer hospital visits. Thus, the traditional prejudices of old people living in decrepitude with costly nursing home care and being a drain on the country’s wealth should be removed. Since old employees’ mental and physical health are still active, their capability of work challenges and their competence may still remain the same. Along with the advantage of a vast amount of hand-on experience and skills, blue-collar workers can be considered as an asset to organisations. Therefore, it is of importance that the retirement age should be raised.
Another benefit arising from this modification is senior workers’ valuable wealth of experiences. To elaborate, many employees at advanced ages are willing to stay on junior positions and provide training to newbies, since income has no longer been an effective incentive to them. Thanks to their leadership and experience, young coworkers can get familiar with working style and culture. The consistency of staff training is therefore ensured greatly, contributing to the efficacy of the entire organisation. Moreover, the cooperation of old workers can guarantee the diversity of perspectives and minimises the risk of relying on impulsive decisions made by young, inexperienced personnels, hence promoting the prosperity of the organisation. For this reason, raising the age of retirement or just abolishing mandatory retirement should be subject to modification.
In conclusion, it is undoubted that increasing the age of retirement can bring about a number of benefits based on the above-mentioned reasons. Raising the retirement age is thus entirely justifiable, though it is up to the senior themselves whether to retire or not.
Đề bài: Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Task 1: The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of a specific nation’s qualified graduates based on their majors and types of degree in 1980 and 2008.
Overall, the proportion of students graduating from postgraduate education in both majors was significantly increased. Moreover, the pie charts witnessed graduates with Science diplomas dominant in both given years.
In terms of first-degree graduates, about a quarter of higher students graduated with a bachelor’s degree in Art in 1980, and higher than in Science with 6%. In addition, the figures both fell the most, dropping to 11%, and 10%, respectively in 2008.
Regarding the degree graduates after university of students, the Master’s and PhD Arts diplomas of graduates accounted for 13%, and 7%, respectively in 2008, compared to these diplomas in Science with 29%, and 30% in that order. Finally, the proportion of PhD degrees in both subjects saw the highest increase in 28 years, with 5% in Art and about double in Science, respectively.
Task 1: The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, mak...
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The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the sources to produce electricity in 4 different countries, namely India, Sweden, Morocco and Vietnam, from 2003 to 2008.
Overall, the proportion of electric sources produced unevenly in 4 countries. Vietnam did use nuclear power for electricity production. It can also be seen that fossil fuel was the largest source of electricity supply in Vietnam and India while it only accounted for a marginal proportion in the two countries and Hydro power was used in two countries.
In Vietnam, there are only two sources used: Hydro power and fossil fuel, while fossil fuels accounted for a higher percentage (56%) and hydro power was 44%. Likewise, Morocco also uses these two sources, however the proportions are different. 95% of the total amount of electricity comes from Hydro power and only 5% from fossil fuel.
In Sweden and India, there are different and contradictory proportions of the sources. For example, 82% fossil fuel was used in India while it occupied only 4% in Sweden. 14% Hydro power was used for electricity production in India while Sweden used with much higher proportion (52%). Additionally, nuclear power only accounted for 4% in India, but there were 44% used in Sweden.
The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant....
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