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Mong được các thầy cô chấm chữa writing task 2 ạ. E cảm ơn.
In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a common belief that people are forced to move elsewhere to find work, which often leads to separation from families and friends. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend, I believe that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are a number of major drawbacks when people go to work far away. The first drawback is they will feel lonely and homesick. Another negative effect is that when they leave their family, they will have to pay more expenses themselves. Moreover, people may lose contact with friends. For example, many people who work abroad will lose connection with friends back home because they do not communicate regularly.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits are more significant than such disadvantages. Firstly, people will have easier access to job opportunities. Secondly, they can earn more money and career advancement. Finally, they will develop personal skills and gain many life experiences. For instance, they can learn how to cook and live independently when they are not near their parents.
To sum up, while there are some disadvantages people have to move away from parents and friends to find work, it is evident that there are far more advantages when people work remotely.
In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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Em mong các thầy cô chấm chữa bài writing task 2 này của em ạ. Em có mục tiêu là band 7 nên mong thầy cô có thể gợi ý em một số cách để nâng cấp bài ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, study plays a crucial role in the development of a nation, especially tertiary education. However, it is believed that the provision of higher education to a larger percentage of the young is unfeasible and ineffective. In my view, I agree with the futility of providing university places on a large scale, but I think this also brings practical values to society.
There are several reasons why providing a broad-based university education is deemed impractical. First of all, not all professions require an academic degree or even formal schooling. This is because various fields like agriculture and tourism value hands-on experiences over specialized knowledge at university. This results in many youngsters only spending a short time on vocational training to enter the workforce rather than squandering time at college. Moreover, the widespread trend toward higher education might make credentials less valuable. This is due to the fact that many mediocre students can still gain admission, which leads to other students losing motivation to exert extra effort.
Notwithstanding, I argue that a nation benefits when qualified students are given the chance to register for university. This is primarily because university education prepares students academically. and professionally for future careers by providing specialized knowledge as well as platforms for networking and personal branding. Additionally, universities also nurture scientific and academic talents that contribute to their community through research and inventions. Therefore, more available university places mean more potential for personal development, which results in greater chances to give back to society, thus improving the standard of living.
In conclusion, while the idea of supplying entry to a high proportion of young people is impossible owing to students' demand and the quality of the university, it is useful that pupils have the opportunity to enroll in university.
It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp e bài task 2 ạ
Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree ?
Essay
It is sometimes believed that books are not providing knowledge enough as a source of information and entertainment. This essay strongly disagrees with this suggestion as now will be discussed.
The first argument behind my belief is that books are reliable and credible sources of information. This is because the authors often spend more time researching and verifying their content, thereby contributing to the overall trustworthiness of books. This is the case of Su Viet, through years of careful research, fast-checking and editing, exemplifies how books serve reliable and credible information. If the authors do not check this book carefully, it can make more people receive misinformation about the history of Viet Nam, which has a negative effect on Vietnamese people.
Another point worth mentioning is that books provide a unique and immersive form of entertainment. While other media, such as movies and video games provide them with visual experiences, books engage the reader's imagination , thereby allowing them to create a mental image and action of characters. Evidence for this can be seen in Harry Potter, where J.K Rowling author allows many people, who read this book, to imagine the magical world with fictional characters than watch the movies in the cinema.
In conclusion, I totally disagree that books do not significantly important about the source of information and entertainment.
Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree ?
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in society today. How important
is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative
characteristic?
Aspiration serves as a cornerstone for personal progress in the modern context. This trait plays a vital role in developing people’s careers and studying. Personally, I strongly believe that ambition is a positive aspect.
On the one hand, Ambition is of paramount importance when people want to fulfill their purposes. if people do not have ambition characteristics, they easily give up when they are confronted with problems. Without aspiration, many world achievements, ranging from scientists and artwork masterpieces will not ever become reality. Moreover, ambition can help people clearly envision their goals, improving the right direction to reach their dreams step by step without being distracted by external factors. Take ELON MUSK as an example, he has an ambition to send humans to Mars, Although he failed many times during a rocket launch test, because of his strong ambition he has succeeded in launching the rocket.
On the other hand, ambition trait is more beneficial to personal development. A major advantage is ambitious individuals are more resilient to challenges. They may regard setbacks as an opportunity for personal growth and they are less likely to surrender when experiencing failure. Furthermore, pursuing established purposes and witnessing achievement become reality, grows their confidence and belief in their abilities.
In conclusion, people need to have ambition to make a detailed plan to reach their dreams. I also strongly believe that ambitious people will easily succeed in their major.
Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in society today. How important
is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture illustrates how a common room for students has changed within 5 years. Overall, the room has been modernised with the addtion of more communal amenities, catering for a wider variety of activities for students.
Five years ago, the design of the room was relatively simple. Aligning the wall on the left from the entrance were a sink, a cupboard, two benches, a microwave, and a refrigerator, respectively. Meanwhile, in the central area of the room, four sets of round tables and chairs were set in a zic-zac way. Finally, in the right corner of the room was a bookshelf.
Presently, the room has been changed significantly. Nearly all the equipment along the left wall from the entrance is unchanged, except for one of the benches that has been replaced by another microwave. Moreover, two of the four round tables have been removed, making space for a new rectangular one right at the entrance, along with a new rectangular bench specialised for laptop use in the central right of the room. At the end of the room, a drinks machine has been newly added in front of the refrigerator. Finally, the bookshelf has been replaced by a television, surrounded by three new armchairs.
The picture illustrates how a common room for students has changed within 5 years. Overall, the room has been modernised with the addtion of more communal amenities, catering for a wider variety of ac...
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Thầy cô chữa bài giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều
The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010.
Summarise the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map describes how the village of Wells-on-the Water in the UK changed from 1985 to 2010.
Overall, it is obvious that the area became more modernized, dominated by accommodations and other facilities, with the most notable change including the expansion of roads.
Regarding the south of the map, while a post office remained unchanged, farm land situated in the right of the post office was turned into residential houses and farm house located in the left of that was replaced by park. Another significant modification is that Mansion lane was expanded crossing the river to serve travel demands of residents. More housing areas were also built along the right of the river bank.
In terms of the west of the map, an old factory situated opposite a farm house in 1985 was demolished to make way for luxury flats in 2010. Moreover, while a care house and housing estate opposite the factory was a replacement for a mansion house and large area behind used for cattle farming, mansion gardens still existed. The most striking attention was that a northest road underwent the expansion, which removes farm land and makes an intersection leading to the northeast, and lots of shops were made along both sides of this road, providing more shopping options for citizens.
The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010.
Summarise the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Em chào thầy cô. Em mong sẽ được thầy cô sửa bài ạ.
The line graph below gives us information about new graduates who work as English teachers and French teachers from 2001 to 2007.
At the beginning, the percentage of teachers of both languages could find jobs were approximately 70%, but English teachers were higher than french teachers. At the end of the period, French teachers increased of 2 or 3%, by that time, teachers of english fell to 25%.
In 2002, the percentage of French - language teachers found jobs successfully was about 52 %. It was lower than 2001 but higher than English teachers. The next years, the
number of new graduates who become French teachers grew up. In 2007, approximately 73% of new graduates had jobs .
On the other hand, there was a decrease in English teachers from 2001 to 2003. Before the percentage still fell down, the number of teachers went up from nearly 40% to 45%. During next two years, in 2007, the line dropped just 25%.
Overall, the chart shows the percentage of the first-year teachers in Ontario who teach English and French could find jobs. There were more French teachers had jobs than English teachers.
The line graph below gives us information about new graduates who work as English teachers and French teachers from 2001 to 2007.
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Chào cô thầy ạ e mới tự học writing được một tháng baif này e tự viết ạ mong thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The infographic illustrates how many fruits produced in four countries, including: France, Spain, Germany, and Turkey between 1970 and 2020
Overall, there was an increase in the amount of fruit produced in Turkey, and France, while a gradual decline was seen in Spain, and Germany. In addition, Spain generally produced the most fruits among the period examined
The amount of fruit produced in Spain started at 5.5 million tonnes, after which it experienced a rise to 6.1 million tonnes in10 years later, before ending at the period at 5.1 million of tonnes. Similarly, the figure for Germany declined significantly from 2.5 million tonnes in 1970 to 1.5 million tonnes in 1990, before ending the period at around 1 million tonnes
Approximately 2 million tonnes of fruits produced in 1970 in Turkey, with a subsequent increased to 3.5 million tonnes in 2010. Similarly, the figure for France rose from just over 1 million tonnes in 1970 to 2.8 million tonnes in 2010, despite a small fall from 1990 to 2000
The infographic illustrates how many fruits produced in four countries, including: France, Spain, Germany, and Turkey between 1970 and 2020
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài writing task 2 giúp em ạ
Đề bài: Some people say that having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Bài làm:
In this day and age, some people hold a firm belief that they would rather have more money but less free time than earn less money and have more time to relax. From my perspective, owing to various reasons contributing to this, I do agree with the first given point of view. The following paragraph will elaborate on my notion.
Multiple reasons support my idea. First and foremost, money is considered the most crucial factor in ensuring the sustainable growth of people's lives. With the development of technology and the expansion of the world's population, the prices of indispensable goods and the cost of living are witnessing a significant increase. Due to the aforementioned fact, people are struggling to earn a living so having more money is the ultimate aim of almost everyone currently. They can work from nine to five with a view to earning more money to survive in such a competitive environment.
In addition, people may appreciate having more free time to relax and indulge in their own interests. However, to the best of my knowledge, having more leisure time brings more numerous disadvantages than you may have expected. First of all, people can become lazy if they have more free time. Having a day to relax is a good way to detox your body but if you are just relaxing every day, you cannot do any beneficial activities to earn money or to develop yourself, leading to negative impacts on your future. Moreover, just imagine we have more money, one hour to boost energy is also enough. You can utilize your money on what you want, even to play games or to have a healthcare check. Therefore, despite having less free time, we can still have fun and enjoy life as meaningful as possible, as well as not wasting valuable time.
In conclusion, having more money and less free time is said to be better than earning less money and having more free time. As I have mentioned above, I firmly believe that people should opt for having more money to be exposed to happiness even in short leisure time.
Đề bài: Some people say that having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Bài làm:
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nhờ thầy cô chỉnh giúp e ạ. e cảm ơn nhiều lắm
Some people assert that the best source of news remain newspapers, while others prefer other media for learning the news. This essay will clarify both these views and explain why people have different opinions.
On the one hand, the advantage of newspapers is quality of information, because the news are published in the newspaper is clearly verified. Moreover, the newspapers are written by experienced journalists who analyse carefully, so it is trusted and accepted. In contrast, in the Internet, there are full of fake and false information that confuses the community. In terms of form, the articles are also easy to access, without the user needing to understand about accessing information online.
On the other hand, collecting the information via other media suits for the current technological period. Source of information through other media completely free, so people do not need to pay a fee, or only pay an insignificant fee. The amount of money is appreciable compared to the money which spend to buy the newspapers on a daily basis. Besides, information on the media has many ways of transmission such as images and videos which are more vivid and easier to receive than reading conventional newspapers.
I believe that both perspective have its benefits. However, I am inclined to agree with newspapers because I think the quality is the most crucial criterion.
In conclusion, both of these approaches to information have their advantages. Users should find the method that best suits to be most effective.
Some people assert that the best source of news remain newspapers, while others prefer other media for learning the news. This essay will clarify both these views and explain why people have different...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 1 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond.
Bài làm: (151 words)
The given diagram illustrates how a frog develops through its life.
Overall, the life cycle of frogs consists of eleven stages, commencing with eggs and ending with adult frogs.
The first stage is when eggs grow in size becoming embryos to prepare for hatching into tadpoles. The tadpole is black in color and has a short tail behind their body. As it develops, external gills are emerged, and its tail becomes longer. Then, two hind limbs are produced.
The next stage in the process is the baby frog feeding from food stored in its tail, following with the appearance of two front legs. After that, while its tail becomes shorter, the frog changes in their color, from black to dark green, and bright green, respectively. Finally, it fully grows into the adult frog attaching to remove its tail, equipped with all the necessary features to live on the land and reproduce.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond.
Bài làm: (151 words)
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture compares the layout of a library in 2001 and 2009. Overall, a wider variety of books were exhibited, and the library was also digitalised, providing more options for readers and visitors.
In 2001, the library’s interior was relatively simple. As one entered the library, they would see a librarian’s desk and stairs in the right corner. Along the left side of the library were two long sections for self-help and history materials, while at the end of the library was the fiction category. In the central area, there were eight small square tables, on the right of which was a separate shelf for newspapers and periodicals.
In 2009, apart from the librarian’s desk and stairs that remained unchanged, the library experienced significant changes. Two large shelves on the left were downsized, making space for more categories including history, kitchen, economics, and law. Fictional books were also relocated to this area, allowing the introduction of children’s books. Moreover, the small tables were replaced with four rectangular ones, while the space between these and the children’s books shelf was utilised for children. Finally, newspapers and periodicals were replaced with films and DVDs, in front of which were two newly added computers.
The picture compares the layout of a library in 2001 and 2009. Overall, a wider variety of books were exhibited, and the library was also digitalised, providing more options for readers and visitors....
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em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The pie chart depicts the amount of electrical unit which Australian and French generated by different kinds of fuel in two last specific years.
In general, although the whole production of unit of electricity in Australia surpassed France in 1980, Australian lost their domain position in this field in two years later. During that time frame, nuclear power was experiencing a notable increase in its electricity production.
While coal indicated an impressive jump in its electricity production from 50 to 130 units in Australia in only two years, that kind of fuel in France consistently remained its units, at 25. Additionally, in 2000, Australia only received 2 units from this creation by each of fuel sources which were natural gas and oil, similarly, France received the same amount from natural gas and hydro power.
Furthermore, nuclear power was effectively utilized by French, which contributed to its significant rise in electricity generation at 111 units in 2000. In contrast, natural gas had stood at the same level as coal in this production, at 25 units before dropping down dramatically ,at approximately 23 units in following two years.
The pie chart depicts the amount of electrical unit which Australian and French generated by different kinds of fuel in two last specific years.
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Mong cô chấm bài giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
ANSWER:
These days, people also have their vehicles to serve travel needs and the vehicles need petrol to operate. Some individuals think that the best remedy to handle crowding traffic and pollution problems is increasing the price of petrol. In my point of view, I firmly think that increasing the price of petrol is not the most viable method. In this essay, I will explain my opinion and show some more effective measures.
First of all, people know that most vehicles such as motorbikes, cars or trunks need petrol to operate and normally when using petrol, the vehicles will emit toxic carbon dioxide. Beside that, there are many electric vehicles which do not release toxic fumes into the environment. Therefore, these vehicles can be a good idea to use permanently, they do not pollute the environment. However, it does not mean that they could solve growing traffic because people still have to go out and join traffic when they use any vehicles. So, even increasing the price of petrol, people still can buy petrol at a more expensive price or switch to electric vehicles to save money and traffic is always growing with the development of human and technology.
Beside increasing the price of petrol, there are many ways to deal with the problems of growing traffic and pollution. For instance, authorities should limit private vehicles, charge fees to enter the city center or limit the number of private vehicles on the road during rush hours. Moreover, encouraging people to use public transport to reduce vehicles on the road, or building more highways, roads to minimize traffic congestion in certain areas.
To sum up, increasing the price of petrol is the best method to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. People can apply more effective measures above to handle these problems better.
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
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Question: Some people say in order to prevent illness and diseases, the government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, the question of what we should do to prevent illness and diseases has sparked an ongoing debate. While I acknowledge that the government's focus on dealing with environmental pollution and housing problems can bring many positive outcomes, I hold the view that there is a need from both residents and the government to successfully reduce the rate of illness and diseases.
On the one hand, some effective approaches done by the government including reducing the environmental pollution and accommodation issues can bring some benefits. Regarding the former, minimizing the level of environmental pollution plays a key factor to help prevent some pressing health issues. To clarify, some harmful emissions and waste from industrial activities or household usage can take a toll on the environment, easily leading to land and air pollution, which are anticipated as factors lead to a lot of health problems. As a result, if the government introduces new policies relating to addressing the level of pollution, they can control the illness and diseases. Regarding the latter, dealing with some housing problems can be effective in preventing a lot of health issues. This is because many less-well off individuals struggle to rent or purchase a house or an apartment so that I have to live in areas, which are under the social standard. Therefore, they potentially have a high risk of being affected by some bad health conditions relating to respiration or cardiovascular. Consequently, when housing problems are addressed by the government, there will be some positive outcomes.
On the other hand, to effectively avoid health issues and diseases, I hold the view that there is a participation of both individuals and the government. First of all, citizens should pay more attention to their health and gain knowledge about some diseases prevention. When they actively take care of themselve and learn how to deal with some adverse health conditions, they can lay the foundation for society in combating a lot of health issues. Secondly, the government should adopt new laws for manufacturers to ensure the quality of products. In the digital era, some big producers want to maximize their profits so that they are willing to produce a lot of food, which could include some poisons or preventatives. As a consequence, citizens' health are on the edge of risks but the reverse case will be seen when the government takes actions.
In conclusion, while I acknowledge that focusing on reducing the level of environmental pollution and housing issues can significantly effective to prevent illness and diseases, I concede there is a need for the join of both individuals and the government and some new policies should be implemented to completely avoid health problems.
Question: Some people say in order to prevent illness and diseases, the government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The graphs illustrate students' reasons for choosing to study at a specific UK university between 1987 and 2007.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of students going to the university because of suitable degree courses and being close to students’ parents, while the opposite trend can be seen in the other remaining groups. Additionally, throughout the years given, appropriate majors remained the primary reason for most students opting for this school.
To commence with, the percentage of people attending this university due to suitable courses of study started at 35% in 1987, after which it experienced a marginal rise of 2% after 20 years. A similar trend, but to a greater extent, was true for the figure for those pursuing the study at the university examined because of parental- related reasons, which grew significantly from 10% in 1987 to 22% in 2007.
By contrast, 21% students said that quality of resources was the reason why they chose the given university at the beginning of the period, with a subsequent moderate decline to 17% at the end of the period. Moreover, sporting and social pursuits and quality of teaching were the choices, generally sharing the equivalent number of students influenced in both years examined, standing at 19% and 15% in 1987, ending at 6% and 8% in 2007 respectively, after undergoing an around two times drop within 20 years.
The graphs illustrate students' reasons for choosing to study at a specific UK university between 1987 and 2007.
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Writing task 2. Thầy cô sửa bài giúp em.
Nowadays, technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example) through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantage of this the development outweigh the disadvantages?
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In the present era, humans are being tracked by high-quality digital equipment. In many situations, some individuals are not aware of this. In my point of view, these improvements may have some downsides however I strongly believe they have more positive impacts.
First of all, technology updates monitoring systems by boosting camera systems therefore, they can survive a lot of human’s life. By installing these hidden cameras in public places, they give a helping hand to detectives and polices in order to catch robbers and murders by replaying the recorded videos from crime scenes and easily catch thieves. For instance, For instance, in South Korea, there is the rule to install CCTV in every public location like streets, cafes, shopping malls which they put a key to press when a person feels in danger and alert the area’s police station, as can be seen, this invention makes South Korea the top ten safest place in the world.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks which we seriously pay attention. Firstly, governments must respect individual's privacy. Whenever they monitored people, it can reveal some secret information, more specifically for political individuals, about people's lifestyles. It can be fueled by the misuse and abuse of people's secrets. As result countries will be faced with international issues if some information such as political's communications reveal. Additionally, Sensitive documents and personal information are uploaded on the internet such as bank records, credit, and debit card details, property documents, personal photos, and videos, so on. These can be easily accessed by hackers and criminals who misuse them by blackmailing their targets for money extortion.
To sum up, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages as constant surveillance provides a safety net. There is also the danger of confidential information being leaked by cybercriminals.
Nowadays, technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example) through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored ar...
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Dạ thầy cô sửa chữa giúp em ạ. Write a 300-word essay about the following topic: What is your biggest fear? Does it bring you more advantages or disadvantages?
My biggest fear is social interactions. It has become an ever-present obstacle in my daily life, hindering my ability forge meaningful connection. When I try to do some ways which can lead to improved communication skills and increased confidence, I also have benificial experiences so I believe that the advantages of overcoming my fear outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, fear of social interaction can have some disadvantages. It may lead to feelings of isolation and loneliness, as avoiding social situations can limit opportunites for meaningful connections with others. This fear also might contribute to low self-esteem and a lack of confidence in social settings.
On the other hand, improved social skills enable me to network effectively, opening doors to potential career opportunities and collaborations. For example, I have joined a club at university when I started studying at here. It allows me to meet new friends from diverse backgrounds, it also expand my network of contacts. Furthermore, overcoming my fear can also help boost my confidence in public speaking situations, like giving presentation or speaking in front of a group. Moreover, facing fears head-on helps me foster personal growth by pushing myself out of my comfort zone. For instance, my mindset plays a crucial role so I take proactive steps towards gradually that feels right for me.
In conclusion, by actively working on improving my social interaction skills, I become more comfortable interacing with people and have experience more advantages than disadvantages.
My biggest fear is social interactions. It has become an ever-present obstacle in my daily life, hindering my ability forge meaningful connection. When I try to do some ways which can lead to improved...
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writing task 2
A growing number of individuals today express concern over the equality of male and female students in universities in terms of each subject. To my knowledge, I strongly agree that balanced numbers of students with both genders in every subject should be acquired because of its powerfully effective factors during student's learning process.
The gender balance in educational environment resulting from clever policies can create positivity and mutual respect not only among students but also among lecturers. That is because there is no existence of a sex barrier compared this class to another one which used to be a hard-solving problem. For example, competing in physical subjects could be a huge advantage of a class that contains many male students compared to the less ones while having outstanding numbers of female student during art competitions could provide favorable position. Hence, shutting down unbalance of numbers of male and female students could be the path to bring the equity and fairness.
Furthermore, there is a meaningful message through applying equility of the sexes in every subject that universities can convey. Students can gain deeply insight and their own points of view in the future. Regarding there is no unequality in school environment that can truely empower them about a thought they do everything in this life whatever your gender is.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that blurring the gender boudary of students in every subject should be accepted widely.
A growing number of individuals today express concern over the equality of male and female students in universities in terms of each subject. To my knowledge, I strongly agree that balanced numbers of...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The line graph illustrates the difference between the mean number of people visiting a museum in the UK in summer and winter in 2003.
Overall, more visitors came to the museum in summer than in winter, with their peak time at midday in both seasons. Additionally, the museum closed earlier during the cold season.
In summer, visitor numbers surged between 9 a.m. and 12 p.m., peaking at about 1500 at noon. Subsequently, the attendance rate decreased gradually during the day by nearly half at 4 p.m. before falling steadily towards 6 p.m.
In winter, the museum experienced a relatively similar pattern in the quantities of visitors, albeit to a much lesser extent, generally increasing to 400 visitors at 10 a.m. and reaching the highest point at 600 in the middle of the day, despite a minor decline between 10 and 11 a.m., followed by a steady fall until the closing hour at 3 p.m.
The line graph illustrates the difference between the mean number of people visiting a museum in the UK in summer and winter in 2003.
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