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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The given chart illustrates the percentage of a drug company’s total sales in three different regions , namely Asia ,Europe and America in a period of 5 years from 2002 to 2006
Overall , it is apparent that Asia exhibited an upward trend , the opposite was true in the case of America , and the figure for Europe witnessed fluctuations. In addition, the percentage of a drug company’s sales in America initially held the leading position , but Asia overtook it towards the end of the period.
Starting with a dominant position with 41% , the figure for America plunged to 29% in 2005 before rising slightly by only 1% at the end of the period. The sales proportion of Europe started at a lower rate in 2002 , with 34% , followed by reaching a peak of 38% in 2004 before witnessing a sharp fall by 8% at the end of the timeframe.
Regarding Asia , starting at lowest point , with only 25% , the figure then rose continually , surpassing both Europe and America in 2005 to reach the peak of 40% at the end of the period.
The given chart illustrates the percentage of a drug company’s total sales in three different regions , namely Asia ,Europe and America in a period of 5 years from 2002 to 2006
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The diagram illustrates a detailed comparison of UK age demographics’ three education levels, namely University degree, school certificate, and no qualifications in 2010. Overall, while no qualifications were the highest in people in 75+, university degree was dominant in the other age ranges, with the highest proportion being observed in 24-35 age bracket. Additionally, education generally declined with age.
Regarding the three younger cohorts, British people aged 24-35 led in university degree with 76%, slightly higher than that of the youngest profile, at 71%, which was exactly identical to that of the 35-50 age range. The same rate of school certificates was reported in teenager group and adult category, each contributing 20%, slightly exceeding the data for young adult group, standing at 15%. More notably, all the age ranges exhibited exactly identical rates of no qualifications, with 9% being reported in each age cohort.
Concerning retirees and seniors, half and a fifth of retirees had university degree and school certificate, respectively. However, for those over 75, these proportions halved and experienced a roughly sevenfold drop in that order. In stark contrast, compared to 30% of retirees without qualifications, the oldest group registered a significantly higher figure, at 72%, the largest proportion across all the age groups.
The diagram illustrates a detailed comparison of UK age demographics’ three education levels, namely University degree, school certificate, and no qualifications in 2010. Overall, while no qualificati...
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Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the unemployment rates in five selected European countries in 2005, categorized by unemployed people at the age of 15-24 and the overall percentage of unemployment.
Overall, Poland had the highest percentage of the youth unemployment and overall unemployment rate in 2005, while the lowest figures were recorded in Denmark. A similar disparity of noticeably higher youth rates were seen in all countries, except for Germany, where the two figures were similar.
Regarding countries with high proportions of unemployment rate, Poland reported the highest unemployment rates, with over 28% overall and nearly 35% among those aged 15-24. The percentage of unemployed Italian people who range from 15-24 was nearly 28%, and the overall unemployment rate was approximately half of that figure at 15%.
In terms of nations with lower unemployment rate, the proportions of young people who did not get a job in Hungary and Germany were similar, with nearly 25%, while the overall unemployment rate in Germany was 20%, which was much higher than that of Hungary with about 13%. Ultimately, a few people in Denmark did not engage in any job, with about 18% of youth unemployment rate and 8% of overall unemployment.
Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Su...
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The provided table depicts details of information about how many residents are of Australian nationality, whereas the pie chart illustrates the percentage of people living in different regions over unspecific years.
Overall, it is evident that Australia accounts for the highest share of the population compared to other nations, while the count of Dutch is recorded as the lowest point. Notably, most people opt to live in cities regardless of their nationality.
In terms of the pie chart, Australian residents made the most significant contribution to the total population, with the highest point of 73%. In addition, other countries constitute 14%, which is double the proportion of the British population, at 7%. Furthermore, there is a negligible constitution in other nations, including China, New Zealand, and the Dutch.
Regarding the table, Chinese people make up the biggest portion of nearly 100%, while a similar figure can be recorded in the percentage of other countries expecting from New Zealand, taking up around 80%. Additionally, New Zealanders account for precisely 90%.
The provided table depicts details of information about how many residents are of Australian nationality, whereas the pie chart illustrates the percentage of people living in different regions over un...
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TASK 2: With the growing number of population in cities, many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is an undeniable fact that more and more people are living in small accommodations without outdoor spaces as a result of the increasing population in urban areas. This trend has garnered a myriad of views, ranging from those who wholeheartedly embrace it to those who express reservations. While there are certain advantages associated with this trend, I am in complete belief that the negative effects significantly surpass the potential benefits. The subsequent discussion will meticulously delve into the reasons underpinning my stance.
A number of benefits tied to living in compact houses without outdoor areas are minimization of space usage and the convenience in accessing appliances. Firstly, accommodating in tight spaces reduces the land utilization, which is advantageous for the process of urbanization. Since houses can be built in a limited area, a larger number of dwellers can be attracted, thus contributing greatly to the labour force. Secondly, access to household appliances is much easier due to the compact size of it. This is extremely beneficial for people with disabilities. For example, those ones who are in wheelchairs can move around the house with ease.
Despite the evident advantages tied to this trend, I strongly believe that the downsides significantly surpass the associated merits. Mostly stemming from the health concerns and negativities toward the environment. At first thought, it is undeniable that the mental health of people who live in those areas will be affected. Their mental states might be infuenced awfully because of the lack of connections to nature. The reason for this is the unavailability of open outdoor spaces. Furthermore, the natural environment can be at risk due to this trend. As the number of accommodations rises, a higher amount of electricity will be required, leading to a much larger quantity of emission from energy generation. Moreover, the demand for other supplies such as food, water and essential goods, causing increasing over exploitation.
In conclusion, after meticulous consideration of the negativities associated with the increasing number of residents living in compact sized accommodations, it emerges conspicuously that the downsides of mental health concerns and environmental issues far eclipse the potential benefits. As a result, my endorsement of the proposition that the aforementioned trend should be considered disavantageous remains unwavering.
TASK 2: With the growing number of population in cities, many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is an undeniable fact t...
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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question of whether old buildings should be repaired or demolished in order to build new ones invites polarized perspectives, ranging from those who wholeheartedly endorse the assertion to those who express reservations. From my standpoint, I am in complete agreement with the opinion of replacing these structures.
At first thought, the preservation of old buildings comes with a lot of positive effects, most noticeably on the local’s tourism. It is undeniable that keeping and repairing historical structures attracts a huge amount of tourists. This contributes greatly to the economical growth of the region by providing local businesses with a source of income. For example the temples in China and castles in Europe, in which hundreds of millions of people visit annually.
Despite the evident beneficial impact of preserving old structures, the act of putting down and reconstructing these buildings seems much more convincing for a number of reasons, including the reduction in expenses and the high level of safety. Preserving a historical related structure can be extremely costly. Since the details are and the complexity of these figures were well considered and greatly sophisticated, which leads to difficulties in finding replacements and wastes a vast amount of government expense. One example being the old buildings of the previous Chinese dynasties that seem impossible to preserve. Moreover, the level of safety in these structures need to be reconsidered. The reason is that they were constructed such a long time ago. Therefore, demolishing those and setting up new buildings is much more reasonable.
Moreover, reconstructing facilities that meet the society requirements is much more vital. Since the start of the innovation era, a plethora of historic buildings have been replaced by modern offices or housing for dwellers, enhancing the region’s economy without the need for tourism. These changes typically take place in industrialized countries such as the USA.
In conclusion, after meticulous consideration of whether old buildings should be repaired or demolished in order to build new ones, it emerges conspicuously that the beneficial impacts of replacing them with mordernised facilities are undeniable. As a result, my endorsement of the proposition that old facilities ought to be destroyed and new buildings need to be set up remains unwavering.
Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead.
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The charts provide information about how many workers worked in 4 different nations in terms of three categories including agriculture, industry, and services over a 30-year period from 1980.
Overall, it is obvious from the charts that the industry was by far the most popular of the 3 fields in 3 countries with the exception of China. In contrast, the number of people working in agriculture constituted the lowest proportion in almost nations. An opposite trend was seen in the number of workers in China.
In 1980, 60% of the German workforce was employed in the industrial sector, compared to around 50% in Japan and USA, and 40% in China. The number of service employees comprised approximately half in Germany, the same as in the USA and China. However, Japan has less lower than around 10% in comparison with Germany. Especially, a minority of the agricultural people in 3 countries including Germany, the USA and Japan ranged from 5% to 10%.
According to the second chart, the year 2010 witnessed a dramatic increase in the figures for industrial workers of the first 3 nations. The percentages of employees in Germany and the USA rose significantly by 20%, with the former making up 80% and the latter being 70%. On the other hand, the remaining country still remained stable at 40%. Both the agricultural and services sectors experienced a downward trend in the figures for the workforce in all countries. Particularly, China stood at 70% in 1980, then went down to 50% in 2010. Besides, Germany, the USA and Japan declined to under approximately 10%.
The charts provide information about how many workers worked in 4 different nations in terms of three categories including agriculture, industry, and services over a 30-year period from 1980.
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The bar graph compares different kinds of magazines that were sold by the company in three separated years 1975, 1995, and 2015
Overall, it is clear that there was an increase in the number of sports magazines sold in three years. The opposite was true for food and fashion magazines. Additionally, the sales figures for food and other magazines remained unchanged, with a peak record in 1995
Sports were the only magazine that had increased upward, with 42% in 2015. By contrast, Fashion magazines experienced a decrease in selling ones from 23% in 1975 to 5% in 2015. Furthermore, health magazines witnessed a drop from approximately 27% to exactly 20% in 2015
Turning to food and others magazines, they followed the same pattern, with their figures standing at 10% and 27% in 1975, which surged immediately to 23% and 33% in 1995 before going back to 10% and 22% in 2015.
The bar graph compares different kinds of magazines that were sold by the company in three separated years 1975, 1995, and 2015
Overall, it is clear that there was an increase in the number of sports...
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Task 2: Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others think that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Along with the development of public health comes concerns about consuming fast food given its harm to our well-being. Some people propose raising awareness as the most effective method. Others, myself included, however, believe this proposal would produce an indiscernible effect if carried out alone, and thus should be executed in parallel with other measures.
Granted, there are good grounds for extolling education as the foremost method of excessive junk food consumption. Proponents often cite a strong correlation between knowledge and human well-being, saying that understanding the health risks of junk food, the importance of a balanced diet, and the benefits of healthier alternatives can empower individuals to make informed decisions. Nevertheless, this notion is deeply flawed given the fact that it overlooks the complex interplay of factors influencing dietary habits, such as accessibility and affordability of nutritious selections. For example, economically disadvantaged regions, where access to nutritious food is limited and processed options are often cheaper, may struggle to translate knowledge into action despite awareness of the risks.
Given the aforementioned limitations, I would argue that other measures should be adopted to better address the worry. First, governments can play a pivotal to implementing policies and regulations to limit the availability and marketing of junk food, especially to children. Restricting junk food advertising and imposing hefty penalties on offenders could significantly reduce exposure to these tempting yet detrimental options. In tandem with this, food manufacturers should be encouraged to produce healthier alternatives and to provide clear nutritional information on their products. Nestlé’s reformulation of many products to reduce sugar, salt, and unhealthy fats, while increasing whole grains, fruits, and vegetables exemplifies the potential of industry collaboration.
In conclusion, while equipping consumers with cognition is important in promoting a healthier population, I feel that it is not a sufficient method on its own and that law introduction and food producers’ contribution should occur at the same time.
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Task 2: Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others think that educati...
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The chart compares data for employees with jobs in a different profession in one Australian region over 7 years.
Overall, it is obvious that the sales, computing, and nursing category experienced an upward trend, whilst the accounting and farming sector represented a downward trend throughout the period. Moreover, Sales was the most popular occupation in both years.
In terms of Sales, it increased from almost 160,000 people in 2001 to above 160,000 individuals in 2008, remaining at the top position. Similarly, the Computing sector rocketed from nearly 60,000 to about 80,000 people, showing a remarkable difference in the seven-year period. Notably, the number of nurses was almost the same as that of computer staff in 2001. Then, this number was slightly grew to nearly 70,000 people
In stark contrast, the accounting sector initially employed approximately 62,000 people and decreased to only 60,000 accountants in 2008. Ultimately, the number of farmers started at nearly 30,000 before having a considerable decline of 10,000.
The chart compares data for employees with jobs in a different profession in one Australian region over 7 years.
Overall, it is obvious that the sales, computing, and nursing category experienced an...
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Task 2: Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Will the benefits of this outweigh the problems associated with it?
Along with the progression of globalization comes a perennial debate about the need to create a new language. A school of thought holds that inventing a new language is essential for facilitating global communication. While this notion may indeed have some substantial advantages, they are eclipsed by the difficulties posed in several aspects.
At first glance, having a common language can promote international cooperation and efficiency in business contracts. Were a new language to be universally adopted, it could potentially reduce communication breakdown, which is synonymous with economic development and other sectors. By the same token, linguistic hegemony might mitigate wars as well as conflicts. Specifically, thoroughly understanding conversations without language barriers can make negotiations easier, avoiding misunderstandings that often lead to conflicts.
However, we cannot discount the intractable challenges that an emerging language may face. The primary concern is that the implementation and adoption of a new language on a global scale seems impossible. The waste of time and effort or the lack of practical uses are among the arguments against this initiative. The situation in China perfectly exemplifies this issue. They reject learning a second language given the fact that the strong cultural attachment to Mandarin makes the idea of prioritizing others feel unnecessary to many. Added to this is the potential loss of cultural and linguistic diversity. Since language is a key to preserving culture and traditional values, minimizing its use can lead to cultural identity’s loss.
In conclusion, despite the aforementioned merits of developing an exotic language, I fervently believe they pale in comparison with the obstacles. Therefore, maintaining English as a global language is a feasible solution.
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Task 2: Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Will the benefits of this outweigh the problems associated with it?
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Task 2: Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Along with the progression of society comes a huge attention on the development of the young generation. A school of thought holds that it is of great essence for policymakers to invest more in leisure activities rather than education like in the past. I personally approve of this statement in light of the comprehensive growth and potential talent exploration.
Firstly, the balance between IQ and EQ is the primary rationale why some subscribe to the view that free time activity should gain more traction. As education gradually takes precedence over a long period of time, it leads to some psychological problems in the young like depression and peer pressure, and in the worst case, suicide. Thus, leisure time should receive more expenditures to improve this phenomenon. In other words, if a child can access both academic programmes and precious short time breaks, he/ she can release stress and maintain motivation, which is synonymous with emotional and intelligent development.
Secondly, focusing on relaxed actions for young people can also be helpful in finding talents. To be specific, while education can provide genius individuals for some heavy industries like science or astronomy or even politics, some free time activities like playing the instruments, playing football, or just reading a book can help indicate experts in music, and literature. Moreover, having some time to relax may assist individuals in solving problems better, and triggering more creative ideas. Thomas Edison is a testament. He invented hundreds of theories relating to physics thanks to his leisure time under an apple tree.
All things considered, despite the unshaken importance of education to children, I fervently believe that free time activities must not be ignored and governments should allocate more to this aspect.
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Task 2: Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Task 2:
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Along with the progression of society as well as education comes a perennial debate within what should and should not be done by students after graduating. Some assert that it is of great essence for them to enrol in higher education to land better job opportunities while others state that embarking on tertiary education is redundant to joining the labour market given impractical knowledge in its curriculum. Both viewpoints are justifiable, but I personally gravitate towards the former in light of higher salary and promotion chances.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people subscribe to the view that owning a formal degree has pale effects on career prospects. The primary rationale is that the academic programmes fail to provide hands-on knowledge for their pupils to meet the demands of employers. For instance, advanced mathematics is superfluous for individuals pursuing agriculture or sociology. However, this notion is deeply flawed given the fact that students can gain more benefits from a lecture than just the theory. To be specific, by learning mathematics or science-based subjects, the improvement of logical thinking and problem-solving is definite.
On the other hand, I would contend that it is unwise to downplay the unshaken importance of higher education attendance. In certain fields like computer science or biotechnology, having a degree will enable you to earn a higher salary right from the outset. To illustrate, those industries require a deep understanding and relevant skills, which are hard to get from own experience while some academic curriculums can equip students with an internship or a work placement to graduate. Moreover, obtaining an academic qualification is also synonymous with the ability to rise through the ranks, giving them a head start overs. The evidence of this would be seen in colossal companies in which graduates are often considered to be department managers.
All things considered, despite the aforementioned compelling justifications that opponents cite towards attending university in the labour-related debate, I fervently believe that a formal degree plays an integral role in students’ pathways due to the benefits offered to them.
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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both th...
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Đề: Nowadays, managers and team leaders in different organisations are much younger compared to the past. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?
In recent years, there has been a noticeable increase in the number of young directors and team leaders than it was in the past. While there are two major reasons for this phenomenon, such as the widespread availability of insights shared by successful professionals and the numerous self-development resources available on platforms like YouTube, I consider that this trend will provide major benefits, namely increased company productivity and enhanced adaptability in challenging situations.
There are two main causes of this trend. The first one is that work experiences from successful individuals can help a youngster know how to behave in working places. To illustrate, Huynh Duy Khuong, a renowned communication trainer in Vietnam, frequently shares advice with junior staff through platforms like Spotify. His insights, including stories of common pitfalls such as short-sighted decision-making, help young professionals learn and improve their workplace behaviour. Additionally, young residents can develop themselves through watching helpful videos on Youtube. Taking Web 5 Days as an example, this channel offers numerous videos on cultivating a successful mindset and developing essential life skills, such as maintaining a positive attitude and building productive habits. As a result, young people are better equipped to advance in their careers and secure promotions.
Despite this, this phenomenon could bring about two significant advantages. Firstly, the fresh perspectives of younger leaders can boost company productivity. For example, Tech startups like Cafe X, led by Henry Hu aged 25, have revolutionised the food service industry through robotics and advanced AI. This innovation, therefore, has earned high praise from customers for its efficiency and convenience. Secondly, the outstanding adaptability of young leaders helps them navigate adverse situations effectively. As an illustration, Ben Francis, a founder of Gymshark, identified a rising demand for home workout gear during the COVID-19 pandemic and successfully adjusted his business strategy to meet this demand, allowing the company to thrive during a challenging period.
To summarise, the trend of younger managers and team leaders is driven by accessible work experiences and self-development resources, which results in two benefits, including increased productivity and improved ability to handle challenges.
Đề: Nowadays, managers and team leaders in different organisations are much younger compared to the past. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?
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The best way to solve the gender inequality problem is to pay women as much as men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
On the one hand, providing equal pay for equal roles between the sexes is necessary to promote gender wage equality. In many workplaces today, women's achievements are still undervalued and unappreciated compared to men in the same roles. Additionally, their opportunities to obtain management positions are unequal, regardless of their efforts and expertise. This can potentially lead to feelings of depression and the belief that they will always be second to someone else, no matter how hard they try. Therefore, bridging wage inequality can boost women's confidence and morale, resulting in increased productivity and overall happiness. For instance, in countries like Scotland, the government has implemented strict wage laws to promote pay equality and create an inclusive work environment.
Another alternative is organizing campaigns to educate and boost public awareness to encourage females to pursue fields traditionally dominated by males , such as STEM ( Science , Technology , Engineering and Mathematics ). This can not only create chances for women to demonstrate their abilities in various fields to break down gender stereotypes , but also expand different career options for women
In conclusion , while paying women as much as men can help alleviate the gender inequality problem , I believe there are better solutions. A comprehensive approach that includes encouraging women to involve in fields traditionally dominated by men can lead to more sustainable and long-lasting solution
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The diagrams provide a detailed comparison of per-capita amounts of protein and calories consumed by individuals across regions. Overall, While North America leads in the intakes of both protein and calories, India has the lowest figures in the intakes of both types.
Concerning the average intake of protein, North America top the chart with 80 grams consumed being recorded, distantly followed by Latin America with roughly 45 grams. East Africa have an intake of precisely 30 grams, as opposed to roughly 28 grams for India, which does the least. More notably, residents of North America and Latin America have heavy reliance on animal-based sources when three-quarters and two-thirds of protein intakes in North America and Latin America are derived from animal origins. Whereas, East Africans and Indian have more balanced consumption between animal protein and alternative sources.
Regarding caloric intake on average, North America also takes the lead 35000 calories consumed, which is substantially higher than that of Latin America, at approximately 2700 calories. In stark contrast, while East Africa has the consumption of 2300 calories, 2000 ones are reportedly consumed in India, which also witnesses the lowest data in this category.
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1. The charts below show the proportion of holiday makers using three different types of accommodations in three different years.
The given pie graphs illustrates the proportion of three different holiday accommodations in 1988,1998 and 2008.
Overall, most visitors chose lower-priced accommodations as staying with family or camping in the first two years, while the last year depicted an upward trend of the percentage of holiday services as hotels and rented apartment.
To begin with, traditional types, staying with relatives and camping, accounted for more than a half of the total. However, most holiday makers preferred staying with their family, making it became the most popular choice with about 53% in 1988 and 1998. After the first two years, the figure for these two options decreased gradually. While the proportion of camping drop from 26% in 1988 to 12% in 2008, staying with family decreased by 8%.
Looking at other options, it could be seen that the holiday accommodation services, rented apartment and hotels were less popular. Both types were lower than one-fourth of the total in three years. Nonetheless, the figure for hotels was doubled the figure for rented houses in 1988 and 1998 before having a same percentage in the next ten years. Beginning at 15%, the proportion of hotels increased to 22% and stay unchanged while the significant growth could be seen for rented apartments’s figure. Staying at only 7% in 1988, the figure tripled to 22% in 2008.
2.New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Today, most people argue that high-tech devices have influenced the way children spend their free time. From my perspective, the negative aspects are more impactful than the positive.
We cannot rule out certain benefits of new technologies on the way children manage their leisure time. What people refer to the most is the variety of activities that modern devices provide. With the latest development, children are no longer limited by traditional games which might be too old and classical since they could access to a range of appliances and entertain with online games through the Internet. The more technological appliances, the more exciting that children feel as there are more new way for them to entertain. In addition, it is nigh to impossible to deny that technology brings more knowledge to children through provided leisure activities. Unlike before when studying and entertaining used to seperate, modern technology allows children to learn knowledge through games and activities in their free time without realising. With exciting plots and virtual images, children are unconsciously adapted lessons while spending free time in the Internet, making those time be more meaningful.
However, the associated drawbacks make this trend worth worrrying. A key argument for this view is related to the impact on health. As being obsessed with virtual activities, a downward trend for physical games or sports could be seen when those hobbies could not be as interesting as new ones and require more physical demands. The resulting possibility of having health issues could act as a consequence when students have to face academic pressure on the one hand with weaker health. Nonetheless, what really forms my pessimism is the capacity of obsessing with virtual world and technology. While using modern devices still require energy and brain’s working, some individuals might neglect this and increase time using for those activities just to entertain and have fun. The diseperated time between entertain and rest could make free time be counterproductive, resulting in poorer academic perfomance and other activities in school.
In conclusion, despite a numerous appliances to entertainment purposes and providing more knowledge, the drawbacks of new technologies to children’s leisure time decisions are more imperative. It not only poses a possible negative impact on health, but also brings the trend of obsessing with online appliances and virtual world.
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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will no longer be necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a contentious argument advocating that museums and art displays for the public are predicted to disappear due to the proliferation of the internet that allows individuals to search for historical objects and art masterpieces online. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this viewpoint because of several reasons explained in the essay.
It is true that the advent of the internet facilitates searching for whatever information that people consider historically and culturally significant. Some claim that the information available online is sufficient for historical items and art breakthroughs if they intend to explore something such as their origin and excavation. Hence, the existence of public museums and art galleries should be restricted. However, I contend that the chronicled documents are absolutely different from the experience of being in the presence of the artworks or historical objects that stick to sacred values and special events of the museums and exhibitions. The experience is unique and should be preserved.
Furthermore, the design of the public museums and art galleries are correlated with a country’s architectural styles. Public museums and art exhibitions are ideal places to express architectural features that may be predominant in the historic period. Hence, people can contemplate the grandeur of these places while they are grasping more valuable knowledge about the historical objects and art works. Millions of people visit The Louvre museum in Paris because it not only exhibits a huge invaluable collection of national masterpieces, but it is a prime example of the aesthetic appeal of ancient French architectural structures.
In conclusion, although the advancement of technology allows us to obtain various information about art and history online, I firmly believe that the public institutions cannot become obsolete because of people’s real sense when they learn about historical items or admiring a piece of art and the outstanding architectural features represented.
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The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment.
The given diagrams depicts the development process of a cooking device.
Overall , there are 3 stages in the process , which initially is simple fire and then becomes a more complex equipment with more features .
The first stage shows that a pot , which was balanced by three stones over a fire of fibres or grass. In the second stage , the fire and stones are surrounded with a clay shield with a small gap on it for adding more fibres.
In the third stage , the fire is enclosed with metal base with a openable door to remove the ash out and also allow more air to flow into when needed . The inner lining of the pot is made of clay. Moreover , There is also metal support and with its help, the pot can be balanced on the stove. Charcoal is used as fuel instead of fibres or grass.
The given diagrams depicts the development process of a cooking device.
Overall , there are 3 stages in the process , which initially is simple fire and then becomes a more complex equipment with m...
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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from eggs to adult fish.
The given diagram depicts the life cycle of a salmon ,from birth to maturity.
Overall , It is clear that there are six main stages as the salmon develops from egg to mature adult. We can also see that salmon spend time in three distinct locations during the cycle, moving from river to estuary to ocean and then back upstream.
Salmon begins its lives in rivers where the adult fish lay and incubate their eggs. After emerging from egg, the young salmon spends the next stage of its life being reared in freshwater areas. Then, at some point in its development, the fish swims downstream to river estuaries where rearing continues.
Following the estuary rearing period, the maturing salmon migrates to the ocean, where it eventually become fully grown adult. Finally, the adult fish travels back upstream to spawning areas of rivers; here it reproduces and lays its eggs, and the life cycle begins anew.
The given diagram depicts the life cycle of a salmon ,from birth to maturity.
Overall , It is clear that there are six main stages as the salmon develops from egg to mature adult. We can also see tha...
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