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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The table compares the quantity of waste produced in the six different countries in each three year: 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Overall, the amount of waste which was produced in the Unite State was highest over the period shown. In addition, there was a moderate fall in the Korea disposed of waste while the figures for 5 countries remain increased continuously.
In 1980, 0.6 million tonnes of waste dumped in Ireland, which is lowest and moderately increased to 5 million tonnes in the next 20 years. Additionally, the amount of waste dumped in Japan was 32 million tonnes which was merely 1% higher than the figure for Korea in 1990. While, the Japan continuously increased its waste output to 53 million tonnes, the figures for Korea trash dumped dropped considerably, 12% lower than 10 years before that.
There were 4 million waste dumped in Poland in 1980, which was double the figure for Portugal. After 20 years, the amount of the Poland and Portugal produced trash gradually grew, at 6.6 and 5 million tonnes respectively. The figure for the United State of waste production were constantly went up in every each 10 years, by 20% and 42% respectively
The table compares the quantity of waste produced in the six different countries in each three year: 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Overall, the amount of waste which was produced in the Unite State was highe...
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task 2
Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One school of thought holds that increasing the minimum legal age for car or motorbike drivers is the best way to reduce accidents. While this action could lead to inconvenience for drivers in some countries, I agree that it provides more safety benefits.
Granted, the change in the minimum legal age would not be suitable for every country. The primary key is that a large proportion of car or motorbike users are teenagers who use them to commute to school. Once the legal age is adjusted, people would tend to use alternative modes of transport like bus or tram. Therefore, the governments should ensure that they have a well-developed public transportation system to cater to their citizens. Considering this notion, it seems like the adjustment of driver’s legal age needs a lot of effort from the governments to develop the quality of their public transport.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned argument, I advocate that the increase in driver’s legal age does wonders in the safety aspect. First and foremost, drivers who are allowed to drive have already been equipped with academic learning, which means that they have knowledge and ability to tackle problems occurring everyday on the road. For example, a 17-year-old man’s life skills and experiences cannot be compared to those of a 20 year-old-man, so that the older man would come up with a wiser solution if he deals with accidents or daily problems on the road. Another key consideration is that this new policy indirectly decreases the proliferation of automobile users which often contributes to traffic congestion. The higher the legal age, the fewer drivers will be using private transportation. Because of that, traffic congestion would decline, reducing one of the major factors of road accidents.
In conclusion, while there are demands for governments worldwide to support the public transport system to adapt to this new policy, I believe that the increase in minimum driver’s legal age is the best way to ensure road safety, considering driver's problem-solving skills and the reduction in traffic congestion.
Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Studies have shown that most criminals have low levels of education. Because of this many believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a job after being released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Given that most criminals have low levels of education according to many studies, the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a secure job after being released. From my perspective, I partially agree with that statement.
On the other hand, educating prisoners is good for crime prevention because academic education can give prisoners higher levels of general knowledge, enhancing their creativity and qualifications which can help them find employment after release. For example, prisoners in many countries are taught manual skills, such as needlework, which can help them to find employment and achieve a better standard of living. Furthermore, teaching prisoners soft skills, such as communicating and foreign language can boost their confidence when applying for jobs, leading to job opportunities and low crime rates.
On the other hand, educational programs for giving knowledge to criminals can cost a large amount of money from government funding, leading to the government's financial burden. Moreover, a better solution is eradicating people’s prejudice about criminals. Many employers do not sympathize towards prisoners although they have been released for a long time; therefore they tend to not employ the prisoners for their company, making it difficult for ex-offenders to reintegrate into society. For instance, many ex-offenders struggle to find secure jobs or they are often offered low-paying jobs, leading to depression and a high risk of reoffending.
In conclusion, while educating prisoners can ensure reduced crime, I partially agree that this is the best way for crime prevention because it can be excessively expensive. Besides, eliminating prejudice is also a good way to reduce crime rates. Therefore, a multifaceted approach is needed to address this issue, ensuring the long-term well-being of society.
Studies have shown that most criminals have low levels of education. Because of this many believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a job after being released....
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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
in contemporary society, paying taxes for the government is always a growing concern. Many contend that taxes made a significant contribution to their city, whereas the view that individuals have broader societal responsibilities is not only an aspect of taxes. From my perspective, I advocate the last statement and i will discuss both perspectives.
Admittedly, the duty of the locals is to provide a fixed funding to the government every year so the state can function effectively. To be more specific, taxes support the needs of the public by facilitating better growth and learning prospects for contemporary generations and public safety, thereby creating a durable social structure with responsible members. Hence, they are fulfilling their tax obligation, doing their fair share.
Those who advocate more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes because they believe that only paying taxes can not elevate life quality and create an equitable society. Ethical behavior plays an integral role in modern society, such as complying with law enforcement, respecting other people, and helping others when someone has some problems. For example, tackling some issues, including environment or storm, requires cooperative effort of all members in the society, this ensures a safe and sustainable future for community.
In conclusion, paying taxes is a fundamental duty but it is not adequate. Hence, the collective actions of informed and proactive citizens are vital for societal development.
Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and...
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The map shown depicts the alteration of a particular village after a span of the last ten years.
Overall, the area has not seen significant changes to the premises, but many facilities have been built and park functionality has been improved.
Regarding the northwest entrance, it remained the same, while the number of tennis courts doubled to a total of four. In addition, the parking area was renovated to accommodate more cars, from 20 to 50. Beside that, the square soccer field in the center of the garden has been shrunk and converted into a rectangular field. Next, the children’s playground has been separated into normal and soft areas.
Analyzing further on the map, a picnic area has been introduced toward the empty space in the southwest along with the opening of boating facilities in place of the pond towards the southeast. Furthermore, the forests in the bottom-right corner of the map were cut down to make space for a new cafe. Additionally, a new bicycle path now encircles the park.
The map shown depicts the alteration of a particular village after a span of the last ten years.
Overall, the area has not seen significant changes to the premises, but many facilities have been buil...
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Đề: The research indicates that nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past. What are the reasons and is it a positive or negative development?
The research demonstrates that some end-users are less affected by advertising currently compared to earlier times. There are two major reasons for this phenomenon, such as increasing exposure to deceptive ads and the rise of alternative information sources. However, I believe this shift has predominantly negative consequences, such as rising unemployment and adverse effects on small businesses with limited budgets.
There are two main causes of this trend. First, the prevalence of misleading advertisements has eroded public trust. When consumers encounter false claims, they become skeptical of advertising as a whole. To illustrate, Volkswagen's 2015 scandal, where the company falsely marketed its diesel cars as environmentally friendly by using a software to cheat emissions tests, significantly damaged consumer confidence in green marketing, leading to broader skepticism toward similar claims. Secondly, the emergence of alternative sources like online reviewers offers consumers more trustworthy information. As an illustration, Mink, a popular Vietnamese beauty blogger, is known for her in-depth and honest reviews of cosmetics sold on Shopee platform, helping consumers make informed decisions and avoid low-quality products.
Despite these reasons, the declining influence of advertising has two major drawbacks. Firstly, it could lead to job losses in the marketing sector. As consumer responsiveness diminishes, companies may downsize their marketing teams, as seen with Twitter Inc., which laid off numerous employees due to shifts in consumer behavior, such as turning to alternative media platforms for reliable product information. Secondly, this trend could hinder small start-ups with limited marketing budgets. As more consumers rely on personal research and word-of-mouth, small businesses that can only afford to advertise on platforms like Facebook or TikTok may struggle to compete with larger companies that have extensive marketing resources. For example, new shops selling gadgets may find it challenging to attract customers through online marketing, while well-established platforms like Shopee dominate the market by leveraging sponsored reviewers and other marketing strategies.
In conclusion, the reduced influence of advertising is primarily driven by distrust in deceptive ads and the availability of alternative information sources. However, this trend brings significant drawbacks, such as job losses and challenges for small businesses, making it a largely negative development.
Đề: The research indicates that nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past. What are the reasons and is it a positive or negative development?
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The provided maps illustrate transformations in a museum over a ten-year period, between 1998 and 2008. Overall, it is evident that the museum upgraded with the most noticeable features, including the additions of new facilities and a reorganization of this map.
First of all, the permanent exhibition rooms were supposed to be built on both sides of the museum, but it had built on the right side of the maps. In addition, the garden was located in the heart of the maps and remained in the same position over the both years. However, in 2008, this area of garden contained extra fountains and a cafe sitting area.
On the left side, the bottom temporary exhibition room was moved to make space for new amenities, including shops, bags and coats. Although many changes happened, a place where people could buy tickets remained at the middle bottom of the map with entrance and exit over a ten-year period. In the plan, the cafe was constructed at the top of the garden and the wc was placed at the right bottom of the map. The cafe was still retained in the same position as the plan, whereas the cafe was made next to the cafe in 2008.
The provided maps illustrate transformations in a museum over a ten-year period, between 1998 and 2008. Overall, it is evident that the museum upgraded with the most noticeable features, including the...
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Task 2: It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than the benefits to the community and the young adults themselves?
Given that all young adults should be demanded to experience a period of unpaid work helping people in the community, the question of whether the disadvantages of this policy outweigh the advantages has been looming large. Although this trend may present certain challenges, I do believe the benefits far outweigh them.
On the one hand, there are several drawbacks, one of which is leading to young generations’ financial pressure, especially those from low-income classes. When they engage in unpaid jobs, they do not have money to pay for their living and education, leading to stress and financial problems. Compulsory unpaid work can also decrease the quality of the help. Forcing the young to participate in unpaid work might lead to resentment or lack of motivation, which could reduce the efficiency of helping other people.
On the other hand, this trend delivers significant benefits. Firstly, communities can save more money when launching campaigns and projects. Organizing a non-profit initiative or a community project requires a large amount of funding; hence, not paying salaries for workers would reduce significantly the financial burden. Secondly, young adults can gain valuable experience when helping other people. They can learn how to communicate effectively, learn new basic skills, and gain valuable knowledge that may not be taught at school or university. Lastly, this trend can also result in job opportunities. Many companies demand productive and energetic workers; hence, the more meaningful contributions young employees make to the community, the more corporations appreciate them.
In conclusion, while requiring young generations to undertake a period of unpaid jobs can result in financial pressure and decreasing efficiency, I maintain its benefits are greater due to the potential of cost savings, personal development, and increased job opportunities, leading to the long-term well-being of society.
Task 2: It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than the benefits to the com...
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The chart and table compare where Australian tourists at a specific holiday resort come from, how long they stay on average, and which type of accommodation and activities they opt for.
Overall, Europeans constitute the majority of the resort's customer base and spend the longest time there. Additionally, sightseeing is the most prevalent activity among tourists from Asia and Europe.
Regarding tourist origin, the percentage of Europeans and US tourists at the resort are the highest, with 37% and 35% respectively. Asians account for just 10% of tourists, compared to 18% of tourists in other parts of the world.
European and American tourists mostly spend time at the resort, for 16 and 14 days respectively, which is nearly double Asian and other regions, with 7 and 10 days. In terms of accommodation, Asian and Americans are prone to choose luxury hotels such as 5-star and 4-star hotel, while camping and caravans are the top choices in Europe and other regions. Sightseeing is the primary choice for Asian and American tourists, while European and other nations just engage in swimming, sunbathing and surfing
The chart and table compare where Australian tourists at a specific holiday resort come from, how long they stay on average, and which type of accommodation and activities they opt for.
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Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but there are few of them taking enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem
It is strongly encouraged by doctors for elderly people to do physical activities regularly , but there are few of them taking enough physical exercise. There are several compelling reasons behind this trend , and some measures could be taken to solve this issue.
One major reason for the lack of exercise among older people is age-related health concerns. These include mobility issues , joint pain and cardiovascular diseases , making physical activities more challenging , or even painful for them to do as a part of their daily routines. Therefore , obstacles related to age and the fear of injury and discomfort during exercise lead to older people to hardly take enough physical exercise thereby potentially resulting in their sedentary lifestyles. Another contributor to this trend is lack of resources , especially in rural areas. Although many older people are aware of the importance of doing exercise regularly , there are few programs and fitness centers designed to meet their needs . Limited access to facilities and proper guidance from qualified instructors make older individuals feel discouraged and have difficulty combining physical exercises in their daily routine to enhance their fitness levels.
To address this problem , a multifaceted approach could be taken. Firstly , specialists in the healthcare industry should research and develop exercise programs especially tailored to older individuals in different ages , physical limitations and preferences to encourage them to do exercise on a daily basis . These programs include low-impact activities , such as jogging , yoga , swimming and gentle stretching for those with low fitness level in order for them to be less likely to get injured , or more vigorous options for those with higher fitness level. Moreover , the government also plays a crucial role in raising awareness among citizens about benefits of exercise. The government should launch awareness campaigns to educate older people about the importance of doing physical activities regularly and how it impacts on their overall well-being .
In conclusion , it is clear that age-related health issues and lack of resources are two main reasons for this trend , and steps needed to address this problem include launching awareness campaigns to educate older people and providing more exercise tailored to different needs to ensure them to follow and engage in safely and effectively
Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but there are few of them taking enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem
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The chart below shows the number of different types of vehicles registered in European use from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given chart illustrates how many different types of vehicles registered in European in a 10 year- period from 1996 to 2006
Overall , private cars consistently held the leading figure in types of vehicles registered in Europe between 1996 and 2006. While the number of private cars and all other vehicles increased steadily , the opposite was true in the case of motorcycles and lorries. Notably , the numbers of buses , coaches and taxis in use remained unchanged during the period shown.
Private cars started at 10 million in 1996 , followed by a 26,32% increase , at 24 million in 2006.The figure for other vehicles followed a similar trend , witnessing a significant growth from nearly 1 million in the initial year to roughly 2 million in 2006.
Conversely , the number of motorcycles dropped significantly by 40% , from 1 million in 1996 to 0,6 million in 2006 , while lorry registrations fell moderately by 20% , from 0.5 million to 0.4 million in the same period. Notably , buses , coaches and taxis remained stable at 0.1 million during the timeframe.
The chart below shows the number of different types of vehicles registered in European use from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison...
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing Task 1
The line chart illustrates the figure of overseas travellers to three different places in a European country in the period of twenty years from 1987
Overall, it is clearly that the the number of overseas visitors to the coast and the mountains had increased over the time period meanwhile there was the opposite was true for the lakes.
The number of overseas visitors to the coast of a country in European was highter than two others areas in 1987 , which stood at 40 thousands people.Then it had decreased slightly to 35 thousands in 1992.However it quickly return to the highest line in the graph when increased steadly to 75 thounsands people from 1992 to 2007.While the number of travellers to the mountains seem lowest dramatically in the graph ,which had a slightly grown from 20 thousands people in 1987 to 30 thousands in 1997. after reach to 35 thousands people in 2007 the number of overseas visitors had stablised between 1997 and 2002.
in contrast , the figure of overseas travellers to the lakes in a European country had the most changed over the period time. While tin the first year 1987 there were account for 10 thousands visitors then rise slowly to 40 thousands people in 1997. Before dropped rapidly to 50 thousands people in 2007 the line graph had reached to the peak at 75 thousands visitors in 2002.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but there are few of them taking enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem
It is encouraged by doctors to do physical exercise regularly , but there are few people doing enough exercise. There are a number of reasons behind this trend and several solutions should be adopted by governments and individuals to improve the situation.
There are two compelling reasons why there are few people taking enough physical exercise.The first reason is health issues that are linked to their age. This includes mobility issues , joint pain and cardiovascular diseases , making participating in physical activities more challenging , in some cases , even painful. Therefore , the fear of getting injured and discomfort during exercise make them discouraged , leading to sedentary lifestyles. Furthermore , lack of services and facilities that serve for physical exercise is also another problem. In many places , especially in rural areas , although older people are aware of the importance of physical exercises , they can not find places that are suitable for these exercises and proper guidance from qualified teachers. In this way , the limited opportunities to access services and facilities leads to few older people to take enough physical exercise.
To solve this problem , there are several measures could be taken. Firstly , specialists should research and provide exercise tailored to each individuals’ needs and physical limitations so that older people with different needs can enhance their level of fitness. These exercises can be low-impact and gentle exercises such as going jogging , yoga , swimming and stretching for those with low physical health or joint pain , or high level exercises for those with high fitness level . Secondly , the government should launch awareness campaigns to educate older people with sedentary styles about various benefits of doing exercises on daily basis to their health
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for few older people doing regular physical exercise , and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but there are few of them taking enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem
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The table compares the levels of water use for various purposes in four nations.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of water uses in agricultural settings is the highest, while domestic activities consume the least water in four countries. Additionally, the majority of water consumption is attributed to Egypt and Saudi Arabia.
Regarding the domestic sector, the percentage of water use in Canada is the highest, at 20% which is double Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and New Zealand. with nearly 8%, 6%, and 10% respectively. In terms of industry, the level of water consumption in Egypt was 10%, which is lower than in Saudi Arabia and New Zealand, with 30% and 46%, especially 70% of the water use in Canada.
Turning to the agricultural sector, Egypt reaches a peak of water use, at 82%, compare to Saudi Arabia at 64%. At the same time, New Zealand accounts for 44% of water consumption, which is four times that of Canada, with 10%
The table compares the levels of water use for various purposes in four nations.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of water uses in agricultural settings is the highest, while domestic activit...
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The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers.
The bar chart above depicts the performance of a bus company regarding punctuality, both actual and target, while the bar chart below illustrates the number of traveler complaints from 1999 to 2003.
Overall, the actual percentage of services arriving on time was consistently lower than the target percentage throughout the period, except in 2003. Another notable point is the substantial increase in the number of complaints over the given period.
Regarding the first chart’s data, the bus company reduced its target for punctual performance. The target percentage remained relatively stable at 86% in the first two years, then decreased gradually to under 85% in 2003. In terms of actual performance, its percentage experienced a fluctuation. It was 85% in 1999, dropped to its lowest point of nearly 83% in the next year before returning to 85% in the end.
As can be seen from the second chart, more passengers have complained about the bus services over the past five years. In 1999, the number of complaints was about 70% per 1,000 travelers, but this figure almost doubled by 2003, reaching 120% per 1,000 passengers.
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Some universities now offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?
There has been much controversy about whether virtual courses bring more benefits or drawbacks. In my opinion, allowing individuals to study from the comfort of their home is more disadvantageous.
On the other hand, studying through internet-based courses provides several benefits such as its flexibility and convenience. This is because classes that are held online will save teachers' and students' commute time. Instead of spending an hour a day going to and from school, teachers and learners just need to stay at home to teach and learn on the Internet, so they will have more time to participate in physical activities or learn new skills. For instance, undergraduates can schedule their timetable around other modules in university. Therefore, studying remotely helps working adults and single moms access quality education without going to a particular place.
There are a few compelling reasons why some people think studying online can be detrimental. Firstly, this is especially challenging for distractible people. Although they can study at home, phone notifications or noises from construction sites nearby can interrupt their session. This leads to a reduction in their attention span and poorer academic performance. One clear disadvantage of studying virtually is that students have little interaction with other people such as classmates, and professors. They are unable to engage in in-person conversations as usual. Consequently, it poses a huge challenge for subjects that require collaboration. For example, if the teacher is given a task for a group of students, it will not be easy to conduct professional obligations with group assignments and group revisions.
In conclusion, it is apparent that virtual university courses bring about more drawbacks than benefits.
Some universities now offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?
There has been much controversy about whether virtu...
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task 1
Task 1: The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.
The line graph depicts the average time that four selected manufacturers namely General Motor, Ford, Toyota, and Honda spent on producing vehicles at US factories from 1998 to 2005.
Overall, most categories witnessed a fluctuating trend, except for General Motor with a downward trend over the given period. Notably, General Motor maintained its highest number in the industry during the period.
In terms of General Motor and Ford, they spent more hours producing a vehicle than the two remaining car manufacturers. General Motor started with 32 hours in the beginning, however, it experienced a significant fall to 22 hours. Meanwhile, one Ford vehicle took 28 hours to manufacture in 1998, then the figure hit a peak of nearly 32 hours before plummeting to under 22 hours in 2005.
Regarding the two remaining car manufacturers, their productivity in making cars was higher than the two manufacturers mentioned above. Toyota and Honda’s average hours were approximately 22 hours in 1998, their figures fluctuated between 20 and 24 hours before ending with 20 hours in 2005.
Task 1: The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.
The line graph depicts the average time that four selected manufacturers na...
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Đề: Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that crime is driven by conditions such as poverty and other social issues, while individuals who are inherently immoral are believed to be the main cause. In this essay, I will analyse both sides of the topic, and I believe that excessive greed for money, stemming from a bad nature, is the primary factor contributing to crime.
On the one hand, some argue that prolonged poverty can be seen as a driver of criminal behaviour. Those in poverty often lack basic necessities and face financial insecurity due to unemployment, leading them to commit crimes for survival. To illustrate, slums in cities like Chicago and New York often experience high rates of theft and drug trafficking, driven by limited job prospects and poor living conditions. Consequently, residents in these areas live in constant fear and anxiety.
On the other hand, others believe that an individual's character can lead to criminal activities. To be specific, certain people may possess inherent traits, such as a propensity for violence, that increase their likelihood of engaging in criminal behaviour. These traits may be influenced by genetic factors, early childhood experiences, or psychological disorders. For example, Henry Lee Lucas, a notorious American serial killer, had a violent upbringing and may have had genetic predispositions or psychological disorders, which contributed to his brutal crimes, including 11 murders. From this perspective, early intervention by the government to address such behaviours in children is crucial for preventing future criminal activities.
However, I believe that an overwhelming greed for wealth, inherent in human nature, can take control of individuals and drive them to commit crimes. Specifically, while greed can have both advantages and disadvantages, its impact depends on how it is managed. If controlled by a good person who operates within legal boundaries and aims to help others, greed can lead to positive outcomes in their actions and behaviours. Conversely, the opposite is true for a bad person. This is exemplified by Bernie Madoff, whose insatiable greed led to one of the largest Ponzi schemes in history, defrauding investors of billions of dollars.
To summarise, both sides offer valid viewpoints, such as the impact of poverty and inherent traits on criminal behaviour. However, I believe that an inherently bad nature, driven by excessive greed, is the primary cause, as some impoverished individuals still live within the law. Thus, the first step to reducing crime should be to enhance moral education among younger generations.
Đề: Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give y...
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Nowadays, more and more young Vietnamese people celebrate festivals such as Christmas and Halloween. Some people think there is nothing wrong with this while others are worried about the influence of foreign cultures. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
In the era of globalization, more and more Vietnamese young people decide to celebrate foreign festivals such as Christmas and Halloween. While adopting foreign culture brings various benefits to local residents, others argue that it can destroy the uniqueness of national identity.
On the one hand, there are several benefits of holding international celebrations. First of all, allowing the organization of remote programs in Vietnam can help people to have the opportunity to receive a variety of practical information from communication abilities to innovation abilities. This can broaden their perspective and cultivate their spiritual understanding. For example, participating in Christmas and Halloween celebrations can help them learn more about the societies of other countries, thereby making them more productive. The moment, young people can make friends from all over the world. Understanding the culture at a distance helps them remember their dialect, thereby convincing them to communicate with outsiders with complete honesty. As a result, they may become open-minded and value these events.
On the other hand, organizing these events may lead to some limitations. First of all, this can cause a loss of cultural identity. When festivals abroad are overrated, young people can easily forget about traditional culture and decide to replace it. This causes the erosion of traditional values and customs. As a result, this can lead to youth ignorance of traditional knowledge. They may become disrespectful to their ancestors, especially during important occasions such as Lunar New Year because they attach more importance to foreign festivals. Therefore, the entire young generation can try to replace the original culture, which can exploit the country's development.
In conclusion, although many controversies are formed around the benefit of celebrating Christmas and Halloween, I firmly believe that maintaining a balance between traditional organizations and international ones could create a more harmonious environment for youngsters to acquire knowledge and contribute to the development of traditional culture.
In the era of globalization, more and more Vietnamese young people decide to celebrate foreign festivals such as Christmas and Halloween. While adopting foreign culture brings various benefits to loca...
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Task 2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to study at school. Others think that children should study the same core subjects, regardless of their preferences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that children should have the right to choose the subjects they want to study at school, while others believe they should study the same core subjects, regardless of their preferences. In this essay, both views will be discussed before taking a personal stance, asserting that children should study their favorite subjects.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why many believe children should study the same core subjects, regardless of their preferences. Firstly, children can receive a comprehensive education. Many core subjects, such as mathematics, and literature, can give children general knowledge that can stimulate their creativity, intelligence, and so on. For example, while some students find it difficult to study physics in school, they admit that physics knowledge can help them streamline tasks. Secondly, all students can receive the same rights to access the same foundational knowledge, which is vital for creating equal opportunities.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that children should be responsible for choosing their subjects. Studying their preferred subjects can strengthen their motivation in the study process; hence, they might achieve higher academic achievement. For instance, students who study what subjects they love tend to show higher academic performance than those studying what they do not like. Additionally, children can learn how to make decisions by choosing their favorite subjects. They need to opt for subjects based on their personal circumstances, personality, and skills, making it more sensible to decide.
In conclusion, while children can obtain general skills and get equal opportunities due to studying the same core subjects, I believe that children should study any subjects they want because of the potential for motivation and learning to make decisions. Children should be encouraged to opt for their preferred subjects, ensuring their long-term well-being in the school environment.
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