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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Task 2: Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing them many health problems, including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?
Along with the growth of society comes an array of health-related issues, including obesity given people changing diets. This essay will first delve into the underlying reasons of this phenomenon before proposing some viable solutions to improve the situation.
Bad eating habits are largely attributed to the inclination towards a sedentary lifestyle and food advertising. Regarding the former, in light of hectic schedules, many people prioritize fast food and convenience meals, which are often high in calories, sugar, and unhealthy fats rather than cooking by themselves. This shift in priorities often leads to serious health diseases such as overweight, diabetes and even cancer. This is compounded by food advertisements, driving people to buy sugary drinks, high-fat snacks and other unhealthy foods. The marketing strategies of chains like KFC, Lotteria, and Texas Chicken serve as a testament to this trend.
To change people's poor dietary habits, the following measures should be taken. First, it is imperative for governments to introduce policies or regulations that tightly control or ban junk food advertising. This can be achieved through initiatives such as imposing hefty fines on violating companies and censoring advertisements’ content before releasing it to the market. For example, the UK has banned junk food ads on TV during children's programming and restricted online ads targeting kids, as well as limited promotional offers on unhealthy foods. In tandem with this, the public needs to be fully cognizant of the health risks posed by overeating and the lack of exercise. This knowledge should be involved in educational programmes for children and spread through several campaigns organized by policymakers. Such a two-pronged approach could go a long way towards cultivating a good habit for eating.
In conclusion, what seems to be the core of unhealthy eating patterns may stem from inactive lifestyles and commercialization. Through heightened awareness and the enforcement of stringent regulations, society can work towards reversing this troubling trend.
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Task 2: Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing them many health problems, including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eati...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ , em cảm ơn ạ
Task 2: Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Along with the growth of human society comes a perennial debate about what governments should do to improve public health. A school of thought holds that it is imperative for them to alleviate environmental degradation and residential challenges. I personally disagree with this proposal, despite acknowledging the reasons for it.
Advocates for the enhancement of the environment and housing issues might argue that its direct impacts on public health are irrevocable. Mitigating environmental contamination, they say, can lead to cleaner air and water, thereby reducing respiratory diseases and waterborne illnesses. Also, access to fresh air and clean water sources could lead to healthier food products, which directly benefit the digestive system. By the same token, addressing overcrowding and lack of sanitation might advance living conditions and better overall health for residents. This can be seen in the Dharavi Redevelopment Project in Mumbai. By replacing informal settlements with modern housing and improving access to clean water and proper sewage systems, the project sought to enhance living standards and residents' overall well-being.
However, the aforementioned notion is deeply flawed given the fact that a singular focus on the environment and housing is insufficient and that a multi-faceted approach should be adopted. First, governments should prioritize incentivizing individuals to pursue the medical field. This can be achieved through some initiatives such as updating health-related educational programs and providing scholarships for outstanding students or graduates with high entrance exam scores. In tandem with this, it is also essential to raise public awareness, as understanding the repercussions of diseases and illnesses can encourage residents to adopt sustainable practices and maintain healthy living environments. The numerous scholarships offered by Singapore's Ministry of Health Holdings to attract talent to the healthcare sector perfectly exemplify this approach.
In conclusion, although tackling pollution and housing challenges can offer substantial benefits, I fervently believe that a combination of actions is necessary to improve overall public well-being.
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Task 2: Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
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Task 2: With growing number of population in cities. Many people are living in small homes that don’t have outdoor spaces. Is this a positive or negative development?
Along with the explosion of population comes a debate concerning the lack of open-air spaces in city housing. While this trend may indeed offer some substantial benefits, these are eclipsed by the potential drawbacks posed to city dwellers.
Granted, proponents of compact living contend that eliminating gardens and balconies within urban dwellings can optimize land use. Such buildings, they say, will maximise the residential capacity of a given area, accommodating a larger population. It is estimated that areas with concrete houses can accommodate five times more residents than their counterparts. Social interactions, alongside a strong sense of community, and inclination towards sustainable lifestyle are other advantages. Not only does the lack of outdoor spaces encourage people to seek out public parks and community spaces, but it also fosters a preference for minimalism and reduced unnecessary consumption.
The argument in favour of adding open-air areas to houses is further fortified by the numerous disadvantages it can bring to humans. First, physical and mental health issues given the absence of natural light and fresh air, as well as opportunities for physical activities such as gardening and recreation, are the foremost concerns. Many scientists and researchers have emphasized a strong correlation between spending time in nature and improved mental health. Residents without access to outdoor spaces may experience increased feelings of isolation, stress, and even depression. A study by the University of Exeter shows that people who spend at least two hours a week in nature are more likely to report good health and psychological well-being.
In conclusion, although the trend of smaller homes without outdoor spaces offers some benefits in terms of land use efficiency, its negative consequences for the health and well-being of residents are far more significant. Therefore, it is essential to prioritize the creation of green spaces and outdoor areas in urban planning to ensure a better quality of life for city dwellers.
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Task 2: With growing number of population in cities. Many people are living in small homes that don’t have outdoor spaces. Is this a positive or negative development?
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Mong các thầy cô giúp em chữa bài writing task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The table depicts the number of New Zealand people in different age groups in 2011 and 2012 as well as their fluctuations during the surveyed period.
Overall, while the national population grew slightly, the younger age groups experienced a small decrease. In contrast, the number of middle-aged and senior citizens increased, especially those over 65 years old.
When examining oldest age group, we can see that they accounted for only a modest part of the population with under 600 thousand people in 2012 - less than half the number of people aged 40 to 64 in the same year. However, they were the group with the most significant increase of 4%, which was eightfold that of the 40 to 64 group. In the case of younger citizens, there was a slight decline in the number of people under 40, with a 0.2% decrease in both the under 15 and 15 to 39 categories. Despite this modest decrease, these two groups combined still took up half of the population, and those aged 15 to 39 was the most dominant age group of the society with approximately 1.5 million people, though the 40 to 64 group were a close second with 1.3 million citizens.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The plans below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The maps illustrate a library's ground floor in 2001 and its redevelopment in 2009.
Overall, the library's floor underwent several alterations, most notably the addition of some rooms and the expansion of tables to meet study requirements.
In 2001, there were eight small tables centrally located for study and reading, and a fiction room behind. Self-help and History were situated on the left side and Newspaper & Periodicals at the right corner. Additionally, a librarian's desk was positioned just behind the entrance, adjacent to the stairs.
By 2009, the tables were expanded into four longer ones and added to replace the former fiction. Self-help and History were reduced in size, making space for Fiction, Kitchen, Economics and Law. Newspaper & Periodicals were replaced by Films & DVDs, next to the newly added computer area. At the backmost part of the library, a children's area was built, dedicated to children's activities. Throughout those changes, the librarian's desk and the stairs remained unchanged.
The plans below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where rel...
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Em có bài IELTS writing task 1 cần chấm và sửa lỗi ạ, em mong các thầy cô giúp em. Em cảm ơn ạ!
The provided diagram illustrates the renovations made to a habour from 2000 until today.
It is clear that many customizations occurred based on the services facilities of the habour. The initial layout of the area was mostly kept unchanged.
On the West side of the platform, new areas for showers and toilets are built to the North of each car park. The larger parking space is now connected to the main road instead. Besides, two vast water areas are now designated for fishing boats and private yachts. The Marina private yacht dock is now on the Southern bigger site instead of the previous space. A new platform was built parallel to the old passenger ferries’ dock.
Regarding the Southern side, a new site for cafes and shops have been opened to the right of the lifeboat area. The old castle is now replaced with a hotel to accommodate visitors. And the beach next to it, which was previously offered to the public, is now designated exclusively to the hotel guests.
The provided diagram illustrates the renovations made to a habour from 2000 until today.
It is clear that many customizations occurred based on the services facilities of the habour. The initial la...
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Mong thầy cô chám chữa giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Topic: more government's money should be invested in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, teaching science in school has been a source of controversy. One school of thought is that the national budget should be used for educating science for students, while I agree that it is beneficial for both individuals and the nation to teach science and other subjects.
To begin with, science plays an important role in society. Firstly, at the individual level, people can have more job opportunities in the future by learning science. Due to the development of technology, the demand for technological jobs, such as designing or fixing computers, has increased. Thus, by understanding more aspects of science, people can apply for many kinds of jobs. Additionally, at national levels, educating science can foster economic growth. In fact, learning science contributes to the existence of many new inventions, such as new crop species redundant in disease, enhancing productivity. As a result, it can meet the demand for the local market and exported products, contributing to economic growth.
On the other hand, other subjects are also crucial. By learning these subjects, students not only can adapt to diverse work positions but also can solve many unexpected situations. For instance, the student can improve their mental and physical health through physical education classes. They also can be better at calculation by learning math courses.
To sum up, educating science can help people have ample job opportunities and bolster economic growth, I strongly believe that it is advantageous to learn both science and other subjects.
Topic: more government's money should be invested in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Task 2: Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is believed that living in large cities results in citizens’ lower overall well-being. From my perspective, I agree with this statement
It is undeniable that living in large cities can lead to physical health problems. Cities have been modernized for a long time with technological advancements, up-to-date transportation systems, new large buildings, leading to a convenient life. However, urbanization can also cause environmental challenges such as climate change, deforestation, and different kinds of pollution. Consequently, these environmental problems can lead to respiratory disease such as asthma. For example, many parents in the USA are concerned about their children’s health as they may have to go to school in weeks away, which means they have to go outside frequently and absorb carbon dioxide from many forms of transport.
Moreover, negative mental health can also stem from residing in large cities. Despite the fact that big cities have a lot of handy facilities that help people streamline tasks in daily life, it can result in a higher cost of living than in rural areas; hence, city-dwellers should work hard and try to get high-paying jobs to live in competitive modern cities unless they risk facing stress and poor mental health. We need not look further than the case of Vietnamese laborers, especially those in Ho Chi Minh City. They might feel stressed when they have to work more hours than the average working time in Vietnam to meet their demands and achieve a better standard of living.
In conclusion, I completely agree that living in big cities can negatively affect both people’s physical health and mental health. In my view, local authorities in big cities should spearhead effective initiatives to improve people’s health.
Task 2: Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examp...
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Task 1: The pie chart shows the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009.
The pie charts compare the factors behind immigration and emigration decisions in a European country in the year 2009.
Overall, looking for a family was the foremost reason individuals immigrated to a European country, whereas people chose to leave that nation mainly because of a definite job. It is also evident that no reason was the least significant in both charts.
Looking first at the reasons for migrating to Europe, the contributions of job seeking, education, and others were almost even, with each accounting for roughly 15% of the total. Meanwhile, the desire to have family accompany constituted the largest share, which took up one-fourth of the total, trailed closely by definite jobs with 23%. No reason had the lowest percentage, with only 7%.
Turning to the remaining pie chart, the distribution of reasons varied to different degrees. Definite jobs accounted for 38%, nearly half of the total, and marked itself as the top reason. Other reasons took the second ranking with 23%, followed by family wish with 15% and job finding with 13%. Educational aim and no reason halved that of immigrants, with only 7% and 4%, respectively.
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Task 1: The pie chart shows the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009.
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Despite greater access to school education, many adults today still cannot read or write.
How does this affect them in life?
What can government do to help them?
In this modern society, there is controversy about the hardships that illiterate adults are having to endure while there are so many educational institutions providing them with knowledge. In this essay, I will analyze several drawbacks of illiteracy and propose some feasible solutions to mitigate this phenomenon.
It is understandable that various limitations associated with literacy have affected people's lives. Among the challenges posed by illiteracy, the inability to comprehend crucial documents hampers access to employment opportunities. To specify, it is difficult for people to do office work if they are unable to understand documents or projects which are provided with specilized informations. As a result, most of them may have to rely on manual work such as jobs in agricultural and construction sectors. For example, due to the low-quality educational facilities in some African countries, the rate of illiterate citizens is high which means that they are poor, lack education, and miss out on opportunities to join the workforce. On top of that, illiterate adults may become victims of criminals, especially when they accidentally access dangerous links on the social media or even tricked into signing unofficial documents which can threaten their financial status and their lives. For instance, the hackers may create some links to gain access to their bank accounts in case of stealing the owners’ money. Therefore, this can negatively affect their lives and their loved ones.
However, there are a number of solutions proposed for governments to address these problems. Concerning these issues, the government seriously allocates financial budgets for educational programs to ensure the education of disadvantaged people in remote areas. Accessible schools should be provided for underprivileged basic knowledge to pursue more employment opportunities for them instead of relying on menial work. Furthermore, another solution to eliminate criminals is to strengthen strict control of information posted online and may impose administrative sanctions on those who regularly send threatening links. Additionally, governments can also open webinars or events to educate citizens about the way to avoid cyber crimes by themselves. By strictly implementing these policies, the government can overcome these difficulties and give everyone the opportunity to compete equally as they enter job markets and reduce the risk of criminals, creating a more cilvilized society.
In conclusion, the inability to read and write limits people’s choice of profession and places them under risks of cyber criminals. Nevertheless, this issue can be partially resolved by the suggested remedies.
(Trong xã hội hiện đại này, có nhiều tranh cãi về những khó khăn mà người lớn mù chữ phải chịu đựng trong khi có rất nhiều cơ sở giáo dục cung cấp cho họ kiến thức. Trong bài luận này, tôi sẽ phân tích một số nhược điểm của tình trạng mù chữ và đề xuất một số giải pháp khả thi để giảm thiểu hiện tượng này.
Có thể hiểu được rằng nhiều hạn chế liên quan đến khả năng biết chữ đã ảnh hưởng đến cuộc sống của mọi người. Trong số những thách thức do nạn mù chữ gây ra, việc không hiểu được các tài liệu quan trọng cản trở khả năng tiếp cận các cơ hội việc làm. Cụ thể, mọi người khó có thể làm công việc văn phòng nếu họ không hiểu được các tài liệu hoặc dự án được cung cấp thông tin chuyên ngành. Do đó, hầu hết họ có thể phải dựa vào các công việc chân tay như công việc trong lĩnh vực nông nghiệp và xây dựng. Ví dụ, do cơ sở giáo dục chất lượng thấp ở một số quốc gia châu Phi, tỷ lệ công dân mù chữ cao, điều này có nghĩa là họ nghèo, thiếu trình độ học vấn và bỏ lỡ cơ hội tham gia lực lượng lao động. Trên hết, những người lớn mù chữ có thể trở thành nạn nhân của tội phạm, đặc biệt là khi họ vô tình truy cập vào các liên kết nguy hiểm trên mạng xã hội hoặc thậm chí bị lừa ký các tài liệu không chính thức có thể đe dọa đến tình hình tài chính và tính mạng của họ. Ví dụ, tin tặc có thể tạo một số liên kết để truy cập vào tài khoản ngân hàng của họ trong trường hợp đánh cắp tiền của chủ sở hữu. Do đó, điều này có thể ảnh hưởng một cách tiêu cực đến cuộc sống của họ và những người thân yêu của họ.
Tuy nhiên, có một số giải pháp được đề xuất cho các chính phủ để giải quyết những vấn đề này. Liên quan đến những vấn đề này, chính phủ nghiêm túc phân bổ ngân sách tài chính cho các chương trình giáo dục để đảm bảo giáo dục cho những người thiệt thòi ở vùng sâu vùng xa. Nên cung cấp các trường học dễ tiếp cận cho những người có kiến thức cơ bản để theo đuổi nhiều cơ hội việc làm hơn cho họ thay vì dựa vào công việc chân tay. Hơn nữa, một giải pháp khác để loại bỏ tội phạm là tăng cường kiểm soát chặt chẽ thông tin được đăng trực tuyến và có thể áp dụng các biện pháp trừng phạt hành chính đối với những người thường xuyên gửi các liên kết đe dọa. Ngoài ra, chính phủ cũng có thể mở các hội thảo trên web hoặc sự kiện để giáo dục công dân về cách tự tránh tội phạm mạng. Bằng cách thực hiện nghiêm ngặt các chính sách này, chính phủ có thể vượt qua những khó khăn này và trao cho mọi người cơ hội cạnh tranh bình đẳng khi họ bước vào thị trường việc làm và giảm nguy cơ tội phạm, tạo ra một xã hội văn minh hơn.
Tóm lại, việc không biết đọc và viết hạn chế sự lựa chọn nghề nghiệp của mọi người và khiến họ có nguy cơ bị tội phạm mạng tấn công. Tuy nhiên, vấn đề này có thể được giải quyết một phần bằng các biện pháp khắc phục được đề xuất.)
In this modern society, there is controversy about the hardships that illiterate adults are having to endure while there are so many educational institutions providing them with knowledge. In this ess...
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Task 2: In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?
Along with the growth of human society comes the disappearance of flora and fauna. This essay will first delve into the underlying causes of this phenomenon before proposing some viable solutions to improve the situation.
The decline in biodiversity around the world is largely attributed to habitat destruction and illegal hunting. Regarding the former, due to industry, growing human population and agriculture, land development occurs at the expense of many species' natural habitats, prioritizing fostering industrialization and housing demands. This shift in priorities often leads to climate change, and environmental pollution, affecting the survival and reproduction of certain animals and plants. This is compounded by illegal poaching, which drives some animal numbers to endangered levels. The trade-in of exotic animals for pets, traditional medicine, or the black market as a significant threat to many species is a testament to this notion.
To combat the loss of plant and animal species, the following measures should be taken. First, it is imperative for governments to introduce more strict laws applying to habitat conservation. This can be achieved through initiatives such as increasing penalties and strengthening supervision over logging activities or opening national parks. For example, countries like Costa Rica have successfully implemented national parks and protected areas to conserve biodiversity. In tandem with this, public awareness should be emphasized through campaigns and education. Schools can add environment education as a new subject to their curriculum to raise students’ awareness. Such a two-pronged approach could go a long way towards cultivating a sense of responsibility to preserve the diversity of our planet’s plants and animals.
In conclusion, what seems to be at the core of species decline lies in natural habitat devastation and illicit hunting. By fostering awareness and implementing strict laws, society can work towards reversing this troubling trend.
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Task 2: In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?
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The given chart illustrates the percentage of a drug company’s total sales in three different regions , namely Asia ,Europe and America in a period of 5 years from 2002 to 2006
Overall , it is apparent that Asia exhibited an upward trend , the opposite was true in the case of America , and the figure for Europe witnessed fluctuations. In addition, the percentage of a drug company’s sales in America initially held the leading position , but Asia overtook it towards the end of the period.
Starting with a dominant position with 41% , the figure for America plunged to 29% in 2005 before rising slightly by only 1% at the end of the period. The sales proportion of Europe started at a lower rate in 2002 , with 34% , followed by reaching a peak of 38% in 2004 before witnessing a sharp fall by 8% at the end of the timeframe.
Regarding Asia , starting at lowest point , with only 25% , the figure then rose continually , surpassing both Europe and America in 2005 to reach the peak of 40% at the end of the period.
The given chart illustrates the percentage of a drug company’s total sales in three different regions , namely Asia ,Europe and America in a period of 5 years from 2002 to 2006
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The diagram illustrates a detailed comparison of UK age demographics’ three education levels, namely University degree, school certificate, and no qualifications in 2010. Overall, while no qualifications were the highest in people in 75+, university degree was dominant in the other age ranges, with the highest proportion being observed in 24-35 age bracket. Additionally, education generally declined with age.
Regarding the three younger cohorts, British people aged 24-35 led in university degree with 76%, slightly higher than that of the youngest profile, at 71%, which was exactly identical to that of the 35-50 age range. The same rate of school certificates was reported in teenager group and adult category, each contributing 20%, slightly exceeding the data for young adult group, standing at 15%. More notably, all the age ranges exhibited exactly identical rates of no qualifications, with 9% being reported in each age cohort.
Concerning retirees and seniors, half and a fifth of retirees had university degree and school certificate, respectively. However, for those over 75, these proportions halved and experienced a roughly sevenfold drop in that order. In stark contrast, compared to 30% of retirees without qualifications, the oldest group registered a significantly higher figure, at 72%, the largest proportion across all the age groups.
The diagram illustrates a detailed comparison of UK age demographics’ three education levels, namely University degree, school certificate, and no qualifications in 2010. Overall, while no qualificati...
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Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the unemployment rates in five selected European countries in 2005, categorized by unemployed people at the age of 15-24 and the overall percentage of unemployment.
Overall, Poland had the highest percentage of the youth unemployment and overall unemployment rate in 2005, while the lowest figures were recorded in Denmark. A similar disparity of noticeably higher youth rates were seen in all countries, except for Germany, where the two figures were similar.
Regarding countries with high proportions of unemployment rate, Poland reported the highest unemployment rates, with over 28% overall and nearly 35% among those aged 15-24. The percentage of unemployed Italian people who range from 15-24 was nearly 28%, and the overall unemployment rate was approximately half of that figure at 15%.
In terms of nations with lower unemployment rate, the proportions of young people who did not get a job in Hungary and Germany were similar, with nearly 25%, while the overall unemployment rate in Germany was 20%, which was much higher than that of Hungary with about 13%. Ultimately, a few people in Denmark did not engage in any job, with about 18% of youth unemployment rate and 8% of overall unemployment.
Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Su...
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The provided table depicts details of information about how many residents are of Australian nationality, whereas the pie chart illustrates the percentage of people living in different regions over unspecific years.
Overall, it is evident that Australia accounts for the highest share of the population compared to other nations, while the count of Dutch is recorded as the lowest point. Notably, most people opt to live in cities regardless of their nationality.
In terms of the pie chart, Australian residents made the most significant contribution to the total population, with the highest point of 73%. In addition, other countries constitute 14%, which is double the proportion of the British population, at 7%. Furthermore, there is a negligible constitution in other nations, including China, New Zealand, and the Dutch.
Regarding the table, Chinese people make up the biggest portion of nearly 100%, while a similar figure can be recorded in the percentage of other countries expecting from New Zealand, taking up around 80%. Additionally, New Zealanders account for precisely 90%.
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TASK 2: With the growing number of population in cities, many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is an undeniable fact that more and more people are living in small accommodations without outdoor spaces as a result of the increasing population in urban areas. This trend has garnered a myriad of views, ranging from those who wholeheartedly embrace it to those who express reservations. While there are certain advantages associated with this trend, I am in complete belief that the negative effects significantly surpass the potential benefits. The subsequent discussion will meticulously delve into the reasons underpinning my stance.
A number of benefits tied to living in compact houses without outdoor areas are minimization of space usage and the convenience in accessing appliances. Firstly, accommodating in tight spaces reduces the land utilization, which is advantageous for the process of urbanization. Since houses can be built in a limited area, a larger number of dwellers can be attracted, thus contributing greatly to the labour force. Secondly, access to household appliances is much easier due to the compact size of it. This is extremely beneficial for people with disabilities. For example, those ones who are in wheelchairs can move around the house with ease.
Despite the evident advantages tied to this trend, I strongly believe that the downsides significantly surpass the associated merits. Mostly stemming from the health concerns and negativities toward the environment. At first thought, it is undeniable that the mental health of people who live in those areas will be affected. Their mental states might be infuenced awfully because of the lack of connections to nature. The reason for this is the unavailability of open outdoor spaces. Furthermore, the natural environment can be at risk due to this trend. As the number of accommodations rises, a higher amount of electricity will be required, leading to a much larger quantity of emission from energy generation. Moreover, the demand for other supplies such as food, water and essential goods, causing increasing over exploitation.
In conclusion, after meticulous consideration of the negativities associated with the increasing number of residents living in compact sized accommodations, it emerges conspicuously that the downsides of mental health concerns and environmental issues far eclipse the potential benefits. As a result, my endorsement of the proposition that the aforementioned trend should be considered disavantageous remains unwavering.
TASK 2: With the growing number of population in cities, many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is an undeniable fact t...
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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question of whether old buildings should be repaired or demolished in order to build new ones invites polarized perspectives, ranging from those who wholeheartedly endorse the assertion to those who express reservations. From my standpoint, I am in complete agreement with the opinion of replacing these structures.
At first thought, the preservation of old buildings comes with a lot of positive effects, most noticeably on the local’s tourism. It is undeniable that keeping and repairing historical structures attracts a huge amount of tourists. This contributes greatly to the economical growth of the region by providing local businesses with a source of income. For example the temples in China and castles in Europe, in which hundreds of millions of people visit annually.
Despite the evident beneficial impact of preserving old structures, the act of putting down and reconstructing these buildings seems much more convincing for a number of reasons, including the reduction in expenses and the high level of safety. Preserving a historical related structure can be extremely costly. Since the details are and the complexity of these figures were well considered and greatly sophisticated, which leads to difficulties in finding replacements and wastes a vast amount of government expense. One example being the old buildings of the previous Chinese dynasties that seem impossible to preserve. Moreover, the level of safety in these structures need to be reconsidered. The reason is that they were constructed such a long time ago. Therefore, demolishing those and setting up new buildings is much more reasonable.
Moreover, reconstructing facilities that meet the society requirements is much more vital. Since the start of the innovation era, a plethora of historic buildings have been replaced by modern offices or housing for dwellers, enhancing the region’s economy without the need for tourism. These changes typically take place in industrialized countries such as the USA.
In conclusion, after meticulous consideration of whether old buildings should be repaired or demolished in order to build new ones, it emerges conspicuously that the beneficial impacts of replacing them with mordernised facilities are undeniable. As a result, my endorsement of the proposition that old facilities ought to be destroyed and new buildings need to be set up remains unwavering.
Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead.
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The charts provide information about how many workers worked in 4 different nations in terms of three categories including agriculture, industry, and services over a 30-year period from 1980.
Overall, it is obvious from the charts that the industry was by far the most popular of the 3 fields in 3 countries with the exception of China. In contrast, the number of people working in agriculture constituted the lowest proportion in almost nations. An opposite trend was seen in the number of workers in China.
In 1980, 60% of the German workforce was employed in the industrial sector, compared to around 50% in Japan and USA, and 40% in China. The number of service employees comprised approximately half in Germany, the same as in the USA and China. However, Japan has less lower than around 10% in comparison with Germany. Especially, a minority of the agricultural people in 3 countries including Germany, the USA and Japan ranged from 5% to 10%.
According to the second chart, the year 2010 witnessed a dramatic increase in the figures for industrial workers of the first 3 nations. The percentages of employees in Germany and the USA rose significantly by 20%, with the former making up 80% and the latter being 70%. On the other hand, the remaining country still remained stable at 40%. Both the agricultural and services sectors experienced a downward trend in the figures for the workforce in all countries. Particularly, China stood at 70% in 1980, then went down to 50% in 2010. Besides, Germany, the USA and Japan declined to under approximately 10%.
The charts provide information about how many workers worked in 4 different nations in terms of three categories including agriculture, industry, and services over a 30-year period from 1980.
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The bar graph compares different kinds of magazines that were sold by the company in three separated years 1975, 1995, and 2015
Overall, it is clear that there was an increase in the number of sports magazines sold in three years. The opposite was true for food and fashion magazines. Additionally, the sales figures for food and other magazines remained unchanged, with a peak record in 1995
Sports were the only magazine that had increased upward, with 42% in 2015. By contrast, Fashion magazines experienced a decrease in selling ones from 23% in 1975 to 5% in 2015. Furthermore, health magazines witnessed a drop from approximately 27% to exactly 20% in 2015
Turning to food and others magazines, they followed the same pattern, with their figures standing at 10% and 27% in 1975, which surged immediately to 23% and 33% in 1995 before going back to 10% and 22% in 2015.
The bar graph compares different kinds of magazines that were sold by the company in three separated years 1975, 1995, and 2015
Overall, it is clear that there was an increase in the number of sports...
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Task 2: Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others think that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Along with the development of public health comes concerns about consuming fast food given its harm to our well-being. Some people propose raising awareness as the most effective method. Others, myself included, however, believe this proposal would produce an indiscernible effect if carried out alone, and thus should be executed in parallel with other measures.
Granted, there are good grounds for extolling education as the foremost method of excessive junk food consumption. Proponents often cite a strong correlation between knowledge and human well-being, saying that understanding the health risks of junk food, the importance of a balanced diet, and the benefits of healthier alternatives can empower individuals to make informed decisions. Nevertheless, this notion is deeply flawed given the fact that it overlooks the complex interplay of factors influencing dietary habits, such as accessibility and affordability of nutritious selections. For example, economically disadvantaged regions, where access to nutritious food is limited and processed options are often cheaper, may struggle to translate knowledge into action despite awareness of the risks.
Given the aforementioned limitations, I would argue that other measures should be adopted to better address the worry. First, governments can play a pivotal to implementing policies and regulations to limit the availability and marketing of junk food, especially to children. Restricting junk food advertising and imposing hefty penalties on offenders could significantly reduce exposure to these tempting yet detrimental options. In tandem with this, food manufacturers should be encouraged to produce healthier alternatives and to provide clear nutritional information on their products. Nestlé’s reformulation of many products to reduce sugar, salt, and unhealthy fats, while increasing whole grains, fruits, and vegetables exemplifies the potential of industry collaboration.
In conclusion, while equipping consumers with cognition is important in promoting a healthier population, I feel that it is not a sufficient method on its own and that law introduction and food producers’ contribution should occur at the same time.
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Task 2: Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others think that educati...
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