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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Task 2: Some people say libraries are important in society as a place to get information and use books.often say as computers are advanced, libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Task 2: Some people say libraries are important in society as a place to get information and use books.often say as computers are advanced, libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some argue that libraries are vital in society as places to access valuable information and use books, while others say that as computers have been developed, libraries have become a waste of money and resources. In this essay, both views will be discussed before taking a personal stance on the matter, asserting that libraries are an unnecessary expenditure.
On the one hand, many believe that libraries are important in society for two main reasons. Firstly, many libraries possess rare books that are not published at present. Therefore they can provide a significant amount of precious information, contributing to academic research. Secondly, libraries are crucial for children’s development. This is because when children read varied paper-printed books, they can explore new ideas, boosting their creativity and intelligence. For example, according to research, children who read more books tend to perform better academically than those who read fewer books.
On the other hand, I believe that libraries are a waste of money and resources compared to the convenience of computers. With technological advancement, people can stay at home and use computers to access valuable information through search tools. As a result, it is more flexible and time-saving than visiting libraries. Additionally, establishing a library can cost a substantial amount of money, requiring government funding. However, state budgets should be allocated to global trade, education, and technology. These aspects are important to any country’s prosperity, so they tend to be prioritized over funding libraries.
In conclusion, while libraries can contribute to research and children’s development, I believe that with the advent of computers, using libraries can be considered as a way of wasting money and resources due to their inconvenience and the need for government funding.
Task 2: Some people say libraries are important in society as a place to get information and use books.often say as computers are advanced, libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both v...
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Thầy cô chấm bài writing Task 1 này giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
Đề: The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
While the given line graph depicts the monthly mean daily maximum and minimum degrees Celsius temperatures of two metropolises in Australia, the bar chart compares the average number of rainy days per month in these urban areas.
Overall, while the daily average temperatures fall between February and July in both cities, the number of rainy days in Brisbane has experienced downward trends, with Canberra’s figures remaining relatively stable. Additionally, Brisbane generally experiences more rainy days than Canberra, except during the period from June to October, when Canberra has more rainy days.
As for the line graph indicating mean daily temperatures, in January, the temperature in Brisbane has been the highest, accounting for nearly 24oC. It then peaks at approximately 30°C before dropping sharply to just over 20°C, following this, it gradually rises to nearly 29°C. At the same time, the figures for that in Canberra remain unchanged at around 27OC prior to plummeting to nearly 11oC in July, following which it soars back to nearly 27oC by December. Similarly, the average minimum temperatures in Canberra follow a similar trend to the maximum temperatures, starting at just over 13°C, dropping to nearly 2°C, and rising back to just under 13°C. Finally, In Brisbane, the minimum temperatures start at just over 20°C in January, before witnessing a two-fold decrease to nearly 10oC, and then progressively climb back to approximately 20°C.
In terms of column chart detailing mean quantity of rainy days, regarding the figures for Brisbane, it experiences around 13 rainy days in January, a slight increase to 14 days by March, followed by a gradual decline to approximately 17 days, where it remains steady until September, and then experiences a gradual increase to 12 days by the end of the year. Conversely, Canberra sees a consistent average of approximately 7 rainy days from January to May, except for a slight rise in March. The number of rainy days then increases to 10 between June and October, surpassing that of Brisbane, prior to dropping back to nearly 7 days in November and December.
Đề: The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian citie...
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The bar chart shows the percentage change in renewable energy levels relative to total energy production in four countries from 1997 to 2010.
Overall, during this period, the consumption of renewable energy sources increased in Sweden and Iceland, while the opposite was true for the two remaining countries.
In 1997, around 45% of the total energy produced in Iceland came from renewable energy, making them the highest percentage compared to other countries, followed by a steady increase witnessed in the period from 2000 (60%) to 2010 (70%). This pattern was similarly observed regarding the entire amount of energy generated from natural resources in Sweden, starting yet only with a small percentage of 5% before slightly climbing to nearly 10% in 2010.
Regarding Australia, roughly 10% of the energy was derived from renewable sources in 1997, decreasing slightly to around 7% (2000) and 5% (2010). Similarly, the percentage of renewable energy used in Turkey experienced a decline over the period from approximately 37% to under 35%, although it mildly grew in 2000.
The bar chart shows the percentage change in renewable energy levels relative to total energy production in four countries from 1997 to 2010.
Overall, during this period, the consumption of renewable...
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Task 1: The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to and from a European country in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Task 1: The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to and from a European country in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts depict the six reasons for immigrants to and from a specific European country in 2009. Overall, the main reason for immigration from the European country in 2009 was the definite job. However, most people immigrated to the European country at that time because of accompany/family concerns.
Regarding reasons for immigration from the country in Europe, most people immigrated because of job security, with 38%. In constrast, no reason and studying were the two least popular reasons, with 4% and 7%, respectively. The reasons namely family and looking for a job also occupied relatively small proportions, at 15% and 13%, respectively.
Looking at reasons for immigration to the country in Europe, the two primary reasons for people immigrating were academic aspects and job security, with 25% and 23%, respectively. Conversely, people desired to immigrate for no reason, which was a minor fraction at 7%. Lastly, 15% was the percentage of the three remaining reasons which were accompanying, job hunting, and other reasons.
Task 1: The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to and from a European country in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan...
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Speaking part 1: Transport
1. Which means of transport is convenient?
In my opinion, I consider motorbikes to be a very convenient means of transport for several reasons. To begin with, I believe they are accessible due to their affordability as it enables individuals to commute conveniently. Furthermore, I consider them to be highly user-friendly, particularly the electric motorcycle, which appeals to individuals of different age demographics.
2. Which means of transport is expensive?
Based on my observations, helicopters represent one of the most expensive modes of transportation utilized by affluent individuals. It appears that the cost for customers to acquire such services is approximately $2,000, rendering it unattainable for the average person. This is why I regard helicopters as one of the least affordable means of transport compared to other vehicles.
3. Do most young people prefer to take public transport to school or work?
Well, I suppose that a significant number of young individuals in my country, Vietnam, favor private transportation over public options due to the convenience it offers. For instance, using public transportation, such as buses or trains, can be time-consuming, particularly for those residing at a considerable distance from their educational institutions and workplaces. Therefore, it is evident that only a small fraction of them rely on public transport for commuting to school and work.
4. What are the advantages of using public transport?
The most apparent advantages of utilizing public transportation include its positive impact on the environment, particularly when individuals decrease their reliance on private vehicles. In urban areas, public transport systems like subways and railways offer a range of modern amenities that facilitate convenient travel for passengers to their workplaces and educational institutions.
1. Which means of transport is convenient?
In my opinion, I consider motorbikes to be a very convenient means of transport for several reasons. To begin with, I believe they are accessible due to thei...
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Speaking part 1: Topic Internet
1. How does the internet influence people?
The net affects people in various ways. For me, it’s a useful tool for learning, working and staying connected. However, I think it can also be a distractor if we don’t use it in the right way. It’s important to limit screen time and ensure productivity.
2. What would you do without the internet?
- Without the net, I will reduce my screen time and focus more on offline activities. I would read more books, do more outdoor sports, and meet people face-to-face
- In absence of the web, I would undoubtedly reduce my screen time and immerse myself more in offline activities. I would allocate a greater portion of my day to reading books, engaging in outdoor sports and fostering face-to-face interactions. Not having to stick my eyes to the screen, I would definitely have more free time, which could better be allocated to offline activities, be it reading books, engaging in outdoor sports and fostering face-to-face interactions.
1. How does the internet influence people?
The net affects people in various ways. For me, it’s a useful tool for learning, working and staying connected. However, I think it can also be a distracto...
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Speaking part 1
1. Are you living in a house or an apartment?
Currently, I am living in a modern apartment built by an investor in the central residential area of the capital. Obviously, this place is surrounded by many convenience stores and shopping malls that attract tourists from all over the world. So, my family and I often buy clothes or some necessities in that area and it is really comfortable. That is the main reason why I deeply cherish the moments spent with my family in my home.
2. What is your favourite room in your home? (Why?)
I would say it is definitely my bedroom. Obviously, I love immersing myself in the relaxing space in my bedroom because it gives me a pleasant feeling, especially after a tiring day of studying. Whenever things get boring, I often decide to complete my exercises under the lights with excitement and that really helps me improve my mood.
3. What things make your home pleasant to live in? (Why?)
For me, I really appreciate the valuable personal touch atmosphere in my room. Well, I have all kinds of photos and mementos hanging on the wall that evoke good memories like soft cushions, candles and a cool bookstore that makes the space feel so cozy. And nothing beats the sound of my family having a good time together.
4. Are the people in your neighborhood nice and friendly?
Yes, of course. They are extremely hospitable and friendly because whenever a guest come to our house, we will offer them many candies and snacks to welcome them. Another thing is that we always do our best to help each other when individuals accidentally struggle during their difficulties.
1. Are you living in a house or an apartment?
Currently, I am living in a modern apartment built by an investor in the central residential area of the capital. Obviously, this place is surrounded by...
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Speaking part 2
Describe a subject that you used to dislike but now have interest in
. What the subject is
. Why you disliked the subject
. What about the subject you are interested in
And explain why you become interested in it
Actually, physics is one of the most difficult subjects at my school which sadly makes every student feel really nervous and stressed, especially when it comes to the final exam. This includes me, as I only passed all of the Physics exams by a narrow margin.
Well, I assumed that only intelligent people could absorb and acquire all those kinds of formulas in Physics and my ignorance of them literally allowed me to eliminate it from my self-study curriculum. Throughout the school years, most of the time that I learn physics, I was surrounded with tears because of the low scores that I get from the tests and exams. The thing that challenged me the most was remembering the physical formulas and applying them in various exercises. I struggled with that a lot. So, this involves calculating the amount of them in separate carriers I didn’t need to figure out everything by myself. To my surprise, I met a tutor who could help me solve all the difficult problems and in the end, I was able to solve each Physics problem without me having to figure everything out on my own.
Recalling the memorable time with Physics, I realized how important Physics is. I passed the final exam with an excellent score, and it turned out that my curiosity about this subject motivated me to acquire a lot of useful knowledge. Anyway, you know, my attitude towards this subject has dramatically changed. I hope in the future I can build many concrete buildings for my family and for the community.
Describe a subject that you used to dislike but now have interest in
. What the subject is
. Why you disliked the subject
. What about the subject you are interested in
And explain why you become inte...
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Em chào thầy cô và các bạn. Hiện tại em muốn tăng điểm tiêu chí Grammatical Range and Accuracy. Mọi người cho em xin các cấu trúc ngữ pháp đa dạng để em có thể áp dụng vào bài viết của mình ạ. Em xin cảm ơn thầy cô và các bạn nhiều ạ!
Em chào thầy cô và các bạn. Hiện tại em muốn tăng điểm tiêu chí Grammatical Range and Accuracy. Mọi người cho em xin các cấu trúc ngữ pháp đa dạng để em có thể áp dụng vào bài viết của mình ạ. Em xin...
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Some researchers believe that it is essential for inventors to share their formulas and inventions to others. However, there is a more persuasive argument that it is too risky to open the discoveries to one another and they can use it for wicked purpose.
On the one hand, the rich people can share how they can earn a lot of money by investing into the real estates. To be more specific, this can create a strong influence on those who don not know about land and houses and they can invest their money in a thing that can make them rich. Additionally, they can start a business on their own and learn what they can do to make their business as a local brand in thier own country. For example, one of the biggest content creator is Mr. Beast as known as Jimmy Donald teaches in Havard University about how people start building their social media in a way that is approachable to various age groups in Youtube.
Nevertheless, I support the idea that kepping the secret method is a good way of kepping the original factor. If a country makes a weapon that could destroy an island, they cannot reveal their invention to others because it can be a threats to their country as well. For instance, if USA in World War 1 reveals their methods to Japan, the whole world could disappear in a blink of an eye.
To sum up, while it is apparent that sharing ideas is a good way of learning, it is undeniable that it can be use to kill one another.
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Some researchers believe that it is essential for inventors to share their formulas and inventions to others. However, there is a more persuasive argument that it is too risky to open the discoveries...
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Task 2: Job satisfaction is the most important thing for the young generation. Some people think that finding job satisfaction is considered the most important thing for the young generation nowadays.
Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
In contemporary society, a common belief among many is that job satisfaction is paramount for the younger generation; however, there are those who hold a differing opinion. Personally, I argue that there are several other factors that warrant equal consideration as significant, for the reasons outlined below.
On the one hand, it is commonly acknowledged that employees often place greater importance on job satisfaction than on salary for various reasons. In many organizations, employees frequently encounter considerable stress stemming from demanding workloads, which can lead to both physical and mental health issues. Consequently, achieving complete job satisfaction becomes a challenge for these individuals. For example, some employees choose to resign from Facebook because rigid work schedules and insufficient creative opportunities can hinder their dedication and prospects for success. This situation may result in a workforce that is less engaged and less likely to thrive in the future. Nevertheless, if organizations enhance their operational practices, they can not only foster greater flexibility but also stimulate innovation, thereby attracting employees who are more inclined to demonstrate loyalty and full engagement in their positions.
On the other hand, prioritizing education, practical skills should also be a concern for young individuals’ concern. Apparently, people are likely to struggle with their life if they do not know how to maintain the balance between the satisfaction in jobs and its efficiency. Therefore, it can be extremely difficult for an adolescent to seek a peaceful working environment unless they ensure productivity in their projects or know how to create harmonious relationships with colleagues. If individuals cannot bond with their colleagues or understand the importance of their contributions, achieving a sense of job satisfaction is unattainable, including their salary. For instance, in large enterprises, it is common for employees to experience pressure to manage a substantial workload in order to enhance the overall productivity of the organization. As a result, the public may find it challenging to unwind in the workplace, which leads to an overall increase in their stress levels; hence, it is important for them to maintain the balance between the other values.
In conclusion, I firmly believe while job satisfaction is regarded as the most comprehensive factor, additional elements such as educational qualifications and practical skills also play a significant role.
In contemporary society, a common belief among many is that job satisfaction is paramount for the younger generation; however, there are those who hold a differing opinion. Personally, I argue that th...
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e xin thầy cô chữa bài cho e ạ
The bar graph shows the exercising rates of men and women in Australia vary from age 15 to 65 and over in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the porportion of men in exercising was higher than that of women from all age groups. Also noticeable was that the exercising figures of women was higher than men between the age of 15 and 24.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the highest percentage of exercising men bewteen the age of 45 and 54 was 53.3 percent. Moreover, the lowest percentage of exercising women has reach 39.5 percent from age group of 35 to 44. The exercising percentage of men are higher than women from the age of 25 to 64 fluctuates between 39.5 percent to 53.5 percent. Additionally, the age group that fluctuates slightly was 65 and over only about 1 percent. The only age group that women was higher than man was the age of 15 and 24 about 5 percent.
In conclusion, men exercising more than women in all age groups except 15 and 24.
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The bar graph shows the exercising rates of men and women in Australia vary from age 15 to 65 and over in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the porportion of men in exercising was higher than that of w...
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Task 1: The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph depicts CO2 emissions statistics among six different countries from 1975, 1990 to 2005.
Overall, it is clear that there were marginal plunges in the amount of emitted carbon in Germany and the United Kingdom, while the opposite for the four remaining nations throughout the given period. Notably, the two countries that contribute the most to carbon are the United States, China, Canada and India.
From the perspective of Germany and the UK, in 1975 Germany emitted almost 250,000 thousand tons of carbon, 70,000 more than the UK figure. Additionally, in 1990 carbon emissions in Germany were flat before falling slightly to 200,000 thousand tons in 2005. Meanwhile, the UK figure fluctuated between 180,000 and 160,000 thousand tons over the period covered. display.
In terms of the upward trend, the US emitted carbon at 1,200,000 thousand tons in 1975 before reaching a peak, at 1,600,000 thousand tons in 2005. Meanwhile, Canada has a similar trend which increased from 150,000 thousand tons in 1975 to 180,000 thousand tons in 2005. In China and India alone, the amount of carbon emitted in China was nearly 300,000 thousand tons, three times the figure of India in 1975. In the following years, both countries showed similar trends. similarly in 2005, about 1,500,000 thousand tons in China and about 300,000 thousand tons in India.
The bar graph depicts CO2 emissions statistics among six different countries from 1975, 1990 to 2005.
Overall, it is clear that there were marginal plunges in the amount of emitted carbon in Germ...
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chấm giúp em bài writing task 1 với ạ
The charts under give information about the proportion of people working in three sectors from four different countries in 1980 and 2010. Overall, in both 1980 and 2010, China had the highest percentage of people working in agriculture as well as that of people working in the industry and services sectors in Germany were the largest among 4 countries. Additionally, China witnessed a huge decrease in the proportion of workers in all sectors except the industry one in 2010 while other countries increased rapidly in the industry sector with exception in the other two sectors.
As for the industry sector, the percentage of workers in Germany was the highest at 60 percent in 1980, then it increased by 20 percent in 2010, which is still the largest one. In contrast, despite being the second highest one in 1980 and having a 20 percent increase, USA went down to become the lowest one in 2010, and Japan went from the smallest to the second largest one in 2010 at nearly 80 percent.
In regard to Services and Agriculture, China had the biggest proportion of people working in agriculture in both 1980 and 2010, followed by Japan, USA and Germany at under 10 percent with Germany having the smallest one. Additionally, Germany and China were the highest in 1980 and 2010 at 50 percent, however, there had been a small decrease in all 4 countries back to under 40 percent, which made China become the country with the smallest proportion at above 20 percent.
The charts under give information about the proportion of people working in three sectors from four different countries in 1980 and 2010. Overall, in both 1980 and 2010, China had the highest percenta...
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Thầy cô chấm bài Writing Task 2 này giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
Đề: An increasing number of people choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve
their appearance. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is positive or negative development?
There has been an increase in the number of individuals opting for cosmetic surgery to alter their physical appearance. There are two major reasons for this phenomenon, such as the pursuit of careers that prioritize physical attractiveness and the desire for enhanced employment opportunities. However, I believe this development is largely negative, leading to significant drawbacks, including serious physical risks and potential long-term damage to one’s appearance.
There are two main causes of this trend. The first one is that an attractive appearance can open doors to careers where looks are paramount. To illustrate, Duc Phuc, a famous singer residing in Vietnam, underwent plastic surgery due to the toxic comments on his chubby body and unsuitable face for a celebrity. Post-surgery, he gained confidence and public approval, highlighting the pressure to conform to beauty standards in certain industries. Additionally, an attractive appearance can improve job prospect, sespecially in cultures where looks are highly valued. In South Korea, for example, those who don't meet societal beauty standards often face difficulties in securing jobs and job discrimination. This pressure can lead individuals to see cosmetic surgery as a necessary step to secure their future.
Despite this, the rise in cosmetic surgery could result in two significant disadvantages. Firstly, this trend could pose physical risks for people due to unreliable beauty clinics. As an illustration, Viet Phuong Thoa, a prominent TikToker, who had to undergo corrective surgery to remove improperly injected silicone that caused severe swelling and pain. Secondly, an addiction to cosmetic procedures can lead to disastrous consequences. For instance, Hang Mioku, a once-renowned Korean model, repeatedly underwent cosmetic surgeries in pursuit of an idealized appearance, ultimately leading to severe facial disfigurement that ended her career and left her reliant on social assistance.
To summarize, while the increasing prevalence of cosmetic surgery may be driven by the pursuit of career success and better job prospects, which brings about two disadvantages, including physical harm and the long-term impact on a person’s appearance, making it a largely negative development.
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The charts below show the reasons for immigrants to and from a European country in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The two pie charts depict the reasons people immigrated to and from a European state in 2009.
Overall, most immigrants entered this country for occupational or familial purposes, while people primarily left the nation to pursue a career abroad.
The most common reason why people move to this state was to live with an acquaintance or family with 25%, a mere 2% more than the next most common purpose, which was to take up a job offer. In addition, there were the same number of international students as job seekers with 15% for both, and another 15% came to this country for unspecified reasons.
A substantial amount of people left this nation to pursue a career in a different country at 38%. In terms of familial reasons and job-hunting, there were 15% and 13% respectively, approximately doubling those who emigrated to study abroad. There were less than 30% of emigrants who either left for miscellaneous reasons or did not participate in the survey.
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The provided diagrams depict proposed changes to the Biology school in specific higher education settings. Overall, the primary change to the Biology school will be the additional development for some more facilities and amenities, while cutting down trees.
Over the period shown, the most striking development can be seen in which the dramatic center has given way to music center. However, the presence of the central building in the middle of the campus remains unaltered. Additionally, the plan remains the main road and indoor sports house in the northwest and northeast respectively.
It is clear that the Biology school will be advanced with several locations and facilities. The number of trees will be reduced to convert into parking lots for staff in the southwest. Similarly, the locations, such as the lab and office in the top of the map will be added by reducing several trees.In conclusion , this proposed plan will be intended to meet the need of students.
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The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates the layout of a future town.
Overall, there will be several residential areas and a couple of industrial zones on the outer area of the town, along with some public facilities in the centre.
The town will be divided into four quadrants, with a ring road that encircles it, and a square plot of land in the middle. Inside the ring road will be a residential area with several neighborhoods, with three leisure spots near the southern street and one next to the western road. In the central town square, citizens will be able to access a bus stop in the northeastern corner and another near the western recreational area. Additionally, there will be two parking lots in the northwestern and southeastern corners.
In the outer part of the town, there is going to be a spacious industrial zone in the southwest, and a smaller factory area in the northeast. The rest of the land will be dedicated to housing facilities, with an entertainment zone near the southern street.
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Prompt: Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many find it necessary to channel considerable national healthcare funds to educate citizens to be health-conscious as well as prevent health problems in the first place, instead of taking actions when one's well-being deteriorates. Personally, I totally agree with this point of view.
First, the prioritization of health education and illness prevention is imperative due to the potential of substantial cost savings. To be more specific, an individual who possesses enough knowledge about the dangers of hypertension, obesity or similar diet-related conditions, tends to lead a healthy lifestyle, such as partaking in sports or steering clear of fast foods. Maintaining not to contract these health issues could prevent one from spending astronomical treatment costs that those diseases entail. Moreover, investing in health education also gives a hand for the government to set aside remarkable funds for the health ministry as well as the public welfare.
Second, reallocating resources this way would contribute to the long-term sustainability of public health. More specifically, when taught about the threats of excessive tobacco consumption, individuals could be less prone to suffer from lung cancer. These diseases, although cured by numerous interventions, still may cause complications after treatments, not to mention full recovery. Therefore, state subsidies for such preventative measures play a crucial role in diminishing the number of patients succumbing to those diseases, consequently paving the way for the extension of life expectancy.
In conclusion, citizens should be well-educated about health as well as prevent themselves from contracting diseases rather than waiting for the deterioration of their well being to take actions. It is essential for the local authorities and the government to maintain a reasonable allotment for the health budget.
Prompt: Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Task 2: Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
Task 2: Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
Given the fact that good health is a major concern for individuals, some argue medical services should not be run by profit-making companies, the question is whether the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages. Although private healthcare may bring certain benefits, I believe the downsides far outweigh them.
On the one hand, even though private health care can cost a substantial amount of money due to its high-quality services, it is more convenient and comfortable for patients. Private healthcare centers might offer exclusive services that prioritize patients with membership, which is a feature that public healthcare cannot offer. For instance, many private hospitals in Vietnam offer a service that allows patients to be treated conveniently at their homes; hence, the patients do not need to visit hospitals and wait for their turn to meet the doctor.
On the other hand, despite the advantages mentioned above, private health care may bring more drawbacks. Firstly, people using this service may face the burden of financial strain. Private healthcare can offer overpriced healthcare services, therefore people have to spend a significant amount of money to afford it. Moreover, private health care may put patients at risk. The quality of these private organizations cannot always be verified; hence, they can provide patients with ineffective treatments, leading to lower overall well-being and financial loss. For example, in Vietnam, there were many cases in which people engaged in private health care and symptoms worsened, while the patients underwent various treatments.
In conclusion, while people may experience greater convenience when using private health care, they face the potential of financial strain and lower overall well-being. It is advisable that patients are more aware of opting for any health care service, ensuring their long-term health.
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