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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The village of Bunborough is depicted on the two maps below, along with plans for the village in 2024. Overall, it is apparent that a railway line and new road added to the fishing port will disappear in the future.
In the present day, the village consists mostly of houses with just a few shops, the beach, a fishing port, and some road lines. In the east of the village, there were some houses and shops inside the road line.
By the time plans were finished for autumn 2024, the village had changed considerably, mostly regarding the number of houses. Some houses will need to be destroyed and rebuilt elsewhere. The total number of houses will not greatly change though. The village’s current source of income appears to be fishing. In the future, this will be tourism as new hotels are built and much of the fishing port is destroyed. Although the fishing port is being replaced with a promenade, the beach will not change. There will be new road links to the south, and a railway line will be constructed around the villa with a station on the outskirts.
The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ
The given diagrams illustrate how the land has changed since 1995 to current.
Overall, the place has undergone a number of dramatic changes, with the most important of which being the development in the sea and the addition of several buildings.
In the north-west, residential area has been expanded with more residences catering for the increase in the population of the area, and the sport venues to the south of these accommodations have been converted into restaurants. In the center of the maps, the two hotels have been modernized to the two-floor spots, and the holiday home, car park have been erected, replacing the public park. There used to be a farm land in the north-east, but it has then been replaced by the golf course, which has been accompanied by the tennis course catering for recreational needs.
In the south-west, the fish market has been transformed into the apartment catering for the demand of staying, and the road which just had one way leading to the fish market in 1995, has been branched off to another small path reaching to the coffee. Furthermore, the coffee has been relocated to the center position due to the expansion of this new road. There is no longer a place for fish boats to anchor in the morning, and the sea has become a tourist destination with a plethora of yachts for tourists traveling.
The given diagrams illustrate how the land has changed since 1995 to current.
Overall, the place has undergone a number of dramatic changes, with the most important of which being the development i...
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Thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ
The two maps show some alternatives made in Porth Harbour between 2000 and today.
Overall, this harbour had experienced several significant transformations, including a position conversion between Maria for private yachts and fishing boats and the addition of a new dock in its central area.
On the north side of this harbour, the position of a car park and showers and toilets remained unchanged over time. One striking change is that the Maria for private yachts moved to the south side to exchange places with fishing boats. In 2000, there was only one dock, but today it has experienced the expansion of another dock. Nearby is a public beach, and passenger ferries have remained until now.
In the south, in 2000, there was another car park that led to the side road before it was connected to the main road, along with showers and toilets area addition. Commercial development is evident with the introduction of cafes and shops to the rear of the south harbour. Next to is a lifeboat station the same compared to 2000. The disused castle was removed to make room for the building of a hotel, which includes a private beach and is linked to the side road.
The two maps show some alternatives made in Porth Harbour between 2000 and today.
Overall, this harbour had experienced several significant transformations, including a position conversion between...
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Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?
In recent years the popularity of bicycle usage has been dropped. This is because the fast pace of life and electric vehicles have gained popularity. This can be tackcled by interventions of the government and companies.
It is obvious that the two introduced reasons have had an influence on the way of making choices of means of traveling. First and foremost, the husle and bustle of current society does not allow people to spend time cycling, particularly officers who usually have hectic work schedules. As a results, to limit time for commuting they opt for other means of transportation, such as public transport or personal vehicles. Another essential reason need considering is that the common of electric vehicles have led people to more various options when it comes to traveling. In the past, people chose cycling with the wish to supportedly protecting the environment, but there is another more effective option for people nowadays. In Vietnam, the revenues of Tesla and Vinfast, which are two most popular electric vehicle production companies now, have been rising dramatically. This is the evidence that people prefer this type of vehicle to bycicles.
The joint effort of both goveronments and companies can address this problem and promt the use of bycicles in commuters. In terms of the government, awareness campaigns should be launched to detail the benefits of cycling. People need to see the potential results bring to them when cycling, such as building and stregthening muscles or improving stress level. Besides, companies should make rewarding programs to convince their employees to cycle to work. For instance, VNG, which is a vietnamese corporation has established a small fund to reward their workers for cycling regularly. By this way, people in their workplace are likely to go for bycicles instead of other kind of transportation.
In conclusion, the tendency of using bycicles has descended due to the changes of lifestyles and the existency of new vehicles. Both governments and buisenesses should contribute their effort to raise up the number of bycicle usage.
In recent years the popularity of bicycle usage has been dropped. This is because the fast pace of life and electric vehicles have gained popularity. This can be tackcled by interventions of the gover...
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Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa bài task 2 này ạ . Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều ạ
Đề bài : Some people think that the government have the duty to ensure its citizens to have a healthy diet , while others argue it is responsibility of each individual . Discuss both views and give your experience .
Many people believe that the government must make sure its residents to have good eating habits . Others , however , believe that it is the responsibility of each individual . This essay will examine both views and explain why I ultimately believe that individuals should take primary responsibility for their own dietary choices."
On the one hand , there are several reasons why some people feel that the government is responsible for ensuring its individuals achieve a healthy diet . The first one is that government officials are selected by the public so that they need to take responsibility for taking care of their citizens . Therefore the government can promote healthy eating habits by making sure that food factories and industrial zones comply with food security standards and requirements . In addition , another reason is inhabitants have to pay various kinds of taxes on a monthly basis , so that the government can expenditure this finance on public health campaigns to encourage exercises and balanced diets .
On the other hand , I side with those who think that the residents have the duty to ensure that they have a healthy diet . This can be explained by the fact that as adults , we should be held accountable for our actions that encourage self - care and self responsibility . If we become rely heavily on the government for health , we could ultimately become dependent on them for everything in our lives . Moreover , the individuals will make their own decisions on foods and eating diets , thus they can take into account calories and nutrients in food which suitable for individuals . As a result , it facilitates resident to easily control their weight and make healthier food choices .
In conclusion , although some people say that citizens gaining a healthy diet which is the duty of the government , I would completely agree with those who believe that individuals should be held accountable for having good eating habits . By taking control of their dietary choices, individuals can promote their own well-being and contribute to a healthier society.
Đề bài : Some people think that the government have the duty to ensure its citizens to have a healthy diet , while others argue it is responsibility of each individual . Discuss both views and give yo...
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em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The message that unless there is the constant effort, they may deal with more obstacles to achieve success has been deeply ingrained in some cultures. According to that, some parents attempt to remind it to their offsprings days by days. Therefore, this essay will elaborate further on both beneficial and adverse sides of converting this valuable message.
The foremost benefit of this action is to promote the consistence of children. It means that whenever they begin any event that has an ability to profoundly affect their daily life, they are more likely to follow all steps and respect the process via their dedication, resulting that their consistence may be built up gradually. For instance, the requirement for a student to enter a medical university is at excessively high standard. Therefore, these spots may be only given to these students who have remained studying hard and never given up in their dreams. Indeed, due to this message, the child has become more consistent to achieve their goals.
In contrast, the increase of pressure on a young child is the primary disadvantage of it. This is because the parents, who are impacted by this conception, want their child to achieve success as fast as they can. Whist education may be a shortest way for that purpose, they potentially enforce their child to study with the rigorous schedule and a limited recreational time. Consequently, if these children experience this condition in a long period, they may be stressful and even lead to some mental diseases. It is also obvious in Chinese to notice that numerous youngers have faced depression because of the unstoppable time for study in recent years.
To conclude, it is no doubt that a positive side to transmit the message, hard-working can help people reach to their goals, for offsprings is to promote their consistence with any decision in entire their life. However, that it simultaneously generates an exclusive pressure on this age can be seen as one of the biggest detrimental sides.
The message that unless there is the constant effort, they may deal with more obstacles to achieve success has been deeply ingrained in some cultures. According to that, some parents attempt to remin...
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em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The illustation depicts the plan for the adjustment of southwest airport in the following year.
In general, the airport tends to expanse more gates for the passengers and convert the primary way for pedestrians into sky train way. Furthermore, it will open more specific places compared with the current map.
In more details, from the top of the picture, the noticeable feature is the increase of the number of gates from 8 to 18. Consequently, it is likely to alter the overall shape of the airport into Y shape. On the left side of the airport after the security area, numerous shops will be constructed for commercial purposes.
In addition, both entrance gates respectively, at departures and arrivals may be doubled in number. While the café shop will be relocated from the left corner of the departures to the arrivals, check-in area may move to the present position of cafe and leave more space to build up the bag drop position. Finally, ATM and car hire are two extra categories which will appear in the progress.
The illustation depicts the plan for the adjustment of southwest airport in the following year.
In general, the airport tends to expanse more gates for the passengers and convert the primary way fo...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instruments in 2005, 2010, 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The chart illustrates the proportion of students who learn to play various musical instruments in three years 2005, 2010 and 2015.
Overall, most categories witnessed an increase in learning to play instruments over the period, while violin saw a significant decrease.
In 2005, the number of students playing piano accounted for about 12%, followed by guitar and violin with 11% and 10% respectively. However the figure of drums only constituted about 5%, which was twice lower than violin.
Over the next 10 years, the quantity of school children learning to play piano and guitar experienced a significant rise. For example, piano increased to 20% in 2010 and continuously to about 38% in 2015. Similarly, guitar also rose from under 20% to 40% in 2015, reaching the highest point. Meanwhile, the figure of drums increased to 10% in 2015. However, violin tended to decrease from about 9% in 2010 to 5% at the end of the period examined.
The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instruments in 2005, 2010, 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em bài writing Task 2 này ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều ạ.
Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society, so they should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People in professions such as doctors, nurses, and teachers contribute positively to the growth of society, which is why these workers should receive higher salaries than sports and entertainment celebrities. From my viewpoint, I totally agree with this statement, given that doctors tackle diseases while teachers impart essential knowledge to young people, both of which are crucial for societal development.
The first major reason that I agree is that doctors can help to deal with pandemic diseases. To be specific, doctors are always the ones who recognise and devote efforts to finding the solution and taking care of patients when a new type of contagious disease appears. For instance, during the Covid-19 pandemic in Vietnam, doctors and nurses diligently cared for and motivated infected patients, resulting in a significantly lower infection rate compared to countries like China .As a result, the government of Vietnam had better put more resources into increasing the salary for newly graduated doctor.
Another support for my agreement is that teachers can help children expand their knowledge. Apart from parents, teachers play a vital role in bringing up young children, giving them reasonable and useful information to become a reliable and productive member of society. This could be exemplified by the fact that teachers at elementary schools educate children about their importance and role in society and give them fundamental knowledge in subjects like biology, physics, and chemistry, fostering a willingness to explore the world of knowledge among youngsters. Schools in developing countries like Vietnam, therefore, should hold more activities for pupils to experience taking part in jobs that they dream of.
To summarise, I totally believe that professionals like doctors, nurses, and teachers contribute more to society than entertainers. Therefore, investing in health and education should take precedence over short-term pleasures.
Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society, so they should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or dis...
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Task 2: It was predicted that with the development of technology, people would have more free time in 21st century. To what extent do you think the prediction has come true
In the contemporary society, for the sake of technological advancement, people nowadays perhaps have more free time to let off their steam. While the technological progress has undoubtedly elevated the productivity and facilized automation, I would argue that it can bring several disadvantages.
On the one hand, the development of technology could offer various benefits. Firstly, technology not only revolutionize the financial transaction due to its convenience but that also plays an important role in saving the time. Google meet is a prime example where students could participate in virtual classroom and they could exchange ideas and work together with peers instead of going to school and individual may experience real-time communication across continents, thus building global community. Secondly, that sophisticated AI also instantly access to a wealth of information, particularly researching information through the social platforms such as Facebook or google contributing to the deepen understanding of human.
On the other hand, I would argue that technology might bring some drawbacks. First and foremost, excessive use of technology could take a toll on the visuality and poorer academic performance. To elucidate, Phone that contain UV-ray that could affect the eyes and if students spend too much time on them reducing student’s attention span and study time. Although the technology could facilitate the automation and enhance the productivity contributing to economic prosperity, that could result in higher rate of unemployment. Besides, Technology provokes a feeling of insecurity, for tabloid newspapers are increasingly emerged giving people rampant misinformation, fake news and distorted story.
In conclusion, despite these neglectable merits, I would argue that they are overshadowed by its merits owning to the deleterious impact that could bring.
In the contemporary society, for the sake of technological advancement, people nowadays perhaps have more free time to let off their steam. While the technological progress has undoubtedly elevated th...
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa ạ cho em ạ
The provided maps demonstrate how a small regional museum and green space changed after some developments over a 50-year period, commencing from 1957 to 2007.
As can be seen from the maps, the museum site experienced considerable changes during this period. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are the relocation of the local history room and the construction of new facilities. In addition, the number of trees in the garden reduced significantly after 50 years.
In 1957, the museum was situated at the center of the green space and consisted of three main store rooms used for temporary exhibitions. the national history exhibition was at the top of the building, and to the right of it was the museum store room itself, which was opposite a local history room
Besides, a small pathway running from the main road to the entrance hall was located between the local history room and the museum store room. Moreover, the building was surrounded by several trees.
By 2007,it can be seen that the museum had been expanded in order to accommodate more visitors. To the right of the museum shop, a check - in area and a cafe were added (to the right of the museum shop). In addition, the location of the municipal history room was situated behind the reception. Another significant change was the birth of special exhibitions and an education center, which were on the top of the building. Both the old pathway and the trees were removed to make way for the new parking lot.
The provided maps demonstrate how a small regional museum and green space changed after some developments over a 50-year period, commencing from 1957 to 2007.
As can be seen from the maps, the museu...
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Mong thầy cô chám chữa giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of
technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make?
Has this been a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, technology has significantly impacted the way people interact, particularly influencing the types of relationships they form. Personally, I believe that it is a positive development.
Some ways of interaction in society have been changed by the improvement of technology. First and foremost, due to the advancement of technology, people have opportunities to make friends with other people from other countries or cultures. In fact, it is easy to access social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram, or Twitter to find new friends and chat with them through some groups in no time, resulting in cultural exchanges. In addition, it is easy to access the Internet, so people can maintain contact with their loved ones regardless of their geographical conditions.
In my opinion, this situation has a positive impact. To begin with, the convenience of the Internet helps bridge the gap between people in long-distance relationships. The reason is that the internet allows individuals to connect quickly with their friends or families during difficult or happy times. Thus, individuals can get close to others. Moreover, people can improve some important skills by having many new friends on media sites. For instance, because using social media is more relaxed than face-to-face, utilizing it as a false circumstance to develop some necessary skills like communication, self-confidence, etc is a good method.
To sum up, technology plays an important role in changing connected ways, including making new friends and getting on well with others and I believe that it is beneficial by providing new opportunities for connection, communication, and personal growth.
Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of
technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make?
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Old people have a more traditional idea about how to live, think, behave. Young people think it cannot help them to prepare to enter a modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Some believe that elderly’s conventional notion does not bring value to young people to assisst them in life nowadays. I totally agree with this statement for the following argument.
The marriage belief of old people prevent youngers from leading an affective life when they are not ready for it. To begin with, young people, especially around 20 to 25 years old, often forced to get married as soon as possible by their parents because old ones think that having a family can make sure their offsprings’ happiness in life, which brings about disadvantages more than advantages. This is because young people around this age have not had a stable career yet, so they cannot afford taking care of their family, particularly when having babies. Moreover, they need spend a great deal of time to learn different skills in both working and nourishing babies before getting married. As a result, young people will be put under pressure if they are not capable of handing issues in their lives theses ages because of lacking skills and experience; therefore it is not suitable for them to live in modern life with these thoughts.
Equal gender is also a problem in the thoughts of elderly, which is condemned in recent years. It commonly happens in Asian countries famale young people were taught that they should stay home and do housework rather get a job to earn money. This leads to the fact that young famale are preveted from contributing their potential to the country economy and making a living own their own. Furthermore, this way of thinking affects young people’s mind to the way that women are not value in society, causing miserible to women. Consequently, those people with this belief are hardly to get on well in modern society with new thoughts of equal gender.
In conclusion, I think it is not sensible for young people live in today society with old thoughts of elderle because of the negative effects mentioned.
Some believe that elderly’s conventional notion does not bring value to young people to assisst them in life nowadays. I totally agree with this statement for the following argument.
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The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The given bar chart depicts how families in a country allocated their weekly income to different purposes in 1968 and 2018.
Overall , it is evident that people spent their weekly income mostly on food in 1968 while in 2018 , people has spent more on other purposes . Notably , spending on household goods was similar in both years .
Food account for the largest portion of weekly income at 35% , while other purposes like clothing and footware , personal goods didn’t exceed 20% of income at that time . However , in 2018 , weekly income was spent for food halved to around 17% compared to the initial year . The similar pattern was also seen in the two aformentioned purposes which took up for 5% and 4% respectively in 2018 . Conversely , income for leisure accounted for about 23% in 2018 , which was at least twice as much as in 1968.
Income allocated for housing increased nearly half from 10% to nearly 20% in 2018 , while that of transport observed a more moderate increase to nearly 15% compared to its 8% initially . Meanwhile , spending on power and fuel had a negligible drop from 6% to less than 4% afterwards .
The given bar chart depicts how families in a country allocated their weekly income to different purposes in 1968 and 2018.
Overall , it is evident that people spent their weekly income mostly on fo...
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Topic: Some people think that schools should reward students with the best academic results, while others believe it is more important to reward students who show improvements.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is essential that schools reward students due to their determined attempts. However, who should be given rewards has been a hotly-debated topic. Some people believe that those who are high-achiever should be honored ;nevertheless, others get the opinion that schools reward students improving their academic performance. In my opinion, I agree with the view that the top students should be provided the prize at in school.
On the one hand, It is expected that schools should reward learners who reflect significant improvements in their study. In other words, every student has gained appropriate recognition from their school regardless of who they are, which brings them motivation to pursue learning with great determination. For example, a Vietnamese student who increases their math score from 4 points to 8 points between two exams needs recognizing by his classmates and teachers because of all the effort that he has made. As a result, he might tightly focus on studying math so his math’s marks gradually improve.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more crucial that the most outstanding students deserve to be rewarded due to their considerable effort. Unless schools honor them appropriately, they may lose their incentive to study intensively. Consequently, their academic results may be more and more terrible. Moreover, that schools reward the elite students can create an environment which is competitive among students. It is possible that those students try to improve their performance so as to be highly rewarded. As a consequence, there may be an adaptation to join a chaotic market which is dominated by the profits in their future career.
In conclusion, rewarding students who show signs of improvement is essential because, to some extent, every student has the right recognition. However, from my perspective, schools should honor top students on account of the competitive environment they provide.
Topic: Some people think that schools should reward students with the best academic results, while others believe it is more important to reward students who show improvements.
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Topic: Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas, while others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is advisable to ban tourism in certain locations to prevent local culture loss due to some negative influences caused by tourism activities. However, I totally believe that change is unavoidable and there is no use in prohibiting travel.
On the one hand, banning tourism in some areas is suggested to avoid commercialization and dilution, which can lead to local culture loss. Since cultural elements are transformed into marketed commodities, their spiritual values and original meanings are overshadowed by the profit of the tourism business. For example, traditional handicrafts, which require investment in time, effort, and the skills of craftsmen, are now mass-produced and sold as souvenirs, decorative items to cater to consumer demands. As a consequence, the commodification of culture may occur, leading to tourists disregarding the uniqueness of traditional expressions and local residents paying more attention to do business than promote cultural diversity.
On the other hand, I definitely agree not to ban tourism due to two significant benefits it may have. First of all, funds generated from tourism should be reinvested in protecting culture. It is necessary to revitalize traditional customs that fell into oblivion, though this process requires a huge amount of money to pay for technical equipment and labor. However, this problem might be solved thanks to the monetary contribution of tourists to the local economy. In addition, tourism provides a variety of employment opportunities for local residents. With the development of tourism, more and more accommodation activities are offered to meet the demand of the increasing number of travelers. For example, citizens can take part in various available job positions, such as managers, financial operators, and housekeeping, if they want to work in accommodation establishments.
In conclusion, to ensure the protection of local culture in some regions, the ban on tourism is an approach supported by many people, whereas I strongly believe that tourism should be promoted in order to increase areas’ revenue, which is then invested in cultural protection, and create jobs for local people.
Topic: Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas, while others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both s...
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New technologies have changed the way children spent their free time . Do the advantages of this developmet outweigh the disadvantages .
With access to a wide range of new technological devices , children have changed their way in using their spare time . While there are some several potential issues to this trend , I wholeheartedly believe that such issues are overshadowed by the benefits which technologies offer children.
Granted , one might argue that easy access to modern technologies could pose a risk to children’s physical and mental health , as many children relentlessly spent hours sticking their eyes to screens . Studies have shown that those who spend time playing computer games , using the internet in a nonsensical way rather engaging in sports and outdoor activites are likely to suffer from obesity , sleep disorders and other physical development issues . In addition , overexposure to such modern gadgets may also impact negatively children’s mental health in the form of cognitive impairment with surroundings , poor social skills , moreover , leading early contact with social evils . Such things may result in their academic regression and forming bad behaviour . However , those risks can significantly be mitigated through strict and disciplined intervention and supervision of their nurturers.
Despite the aformentioned drawbacks , the benefits of the trend towards children’s changing altitudes in using their spare time could be extremely helpful . Notably , for example , it can be an opportunity for them to promote their learning and skills development through a vast variety of educational applications and games in a simple and energetic way after their hectic schedule at school . Moreover , it is also a means of seeking and provoking their personal curiosity m which could also be a self educatiion medthodology , fostering and consolidating a sense of individualism as well as independence .
Conclusively , while certain technologies are associated with a number of potential drawbacks for children , with appropriate instructions and supervision from their parents , such problems can be solved thoroughly . Instead , those technologies are likely becoming the essential part of not only children but also everyone in their daily lives.
With access to a wide range of new technological devices , children have changed their way in using their spare time . While there are some several potential issues to this trend , I wholeheartedly be...
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of citizens in four Nations in Southeastern Asia between 1970 and 2020 and forecast for the 20-year period after that.
Overall, the percentage of residents residing in urban areas in all countries given has experienced an increase in both 50 years mentioned and 20 years in the future with Malaysia to see the biggest rise. Besides, it is anticipated that at least half of the population in four Southeastern Asia countries will be living in cities at the end of the period.
Starting at 30% in 1970, the percentage of population residing in cities in Malaysia gradually rose to approximately 45% 20 years later. After that, the figure for Malaysia experienced a significant increase before being forecasted to reach the peak at 82% in 2040, which is the highest point in 4 countries mentioned. Similarly, when only 15% Indonesian people lived in cities in 1970, the figure that sharply increased to 50% in 2020 is forecast to gradually go up to 60% at the end of the period.
It can be seen that the figure for Thailand saw similar changes, beginning at only about 20%, after slightly increasing over the 70-year period, half of Thai people will live in cities, Besides, the percentage of residents living in cities in the Philippines started at 32%, after which it experienced a fluctuation between 30% to 50% from 1980 to 2020, before being anticipated to end the period at 52%.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of citizens in four Nations in Southeastern Asia between 1970 and 2020 and forecast for the 20-year period after that.
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Some people say that the best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of education and child development have heightened public interest in the topic of how to nurture children effectively.Although some argue that team sports is the best way for children to improve their ability to collaborate, personally, I partly concur with this statement, in this academic essay, I will delve into the divergent viewpoints on this topic through examining some potential impacts on children’s development in the long run.
Granted, one might argue that participating in team sports is the most effective approach for children to develop their teamwork abilities. This is predicated on the assumption that group sports can not only enhance children physical health but also help them in fostering important social skills. According to this theory, through sports, children can learn the way to work together, mutual support and understand each other, which allow them to achieve their joint target. These skills are crucial for their further study and carrer when they need to cooperate in a professional circumstance. In addtion, when engaging in team sports, children may encounter some challenges, so it is better for them to control emotions, stay calm and find ways to solve problems peacefully, which could helps children develop self-control and flexibility skills in handling difficult situations.
However, this measure only work if children have a knack in playing sports, but for those who do not have a liking for physical activities, forcing them to participate in may result in feelings of discontent and resistance, impeding the personal growth and autonomy of children. This requires a more suitable approach, such as extracurricular activities and group projects, encouraging children promote communication and problem-solving skills. Therefore, parents and educators should consider intergrating diverse methods to ensure the holistic growth and development of children.
In conclusion, team sports may teach children to collaborate at certain level, but it should not the only way and other measures can combined to foster children into cooperative individuals.
The importance of education and child development have heightened public interest in the topic of how to nurture children effectively.Although some argue that team sports is the best way for children...
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ĐÊ: Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that they ought not to allocate tax money to the government because they prefer to keep all their Income. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this standpoint.
Primarily, tax payments play a crucial role in enhancing the welfare of societies. Clearly, the government can improve educational training and healthcare facilities with tax income is collected from citizens. The states also use this money to construct new facilities or repair aging infrastructure. For instance, Vietnamese people often contribute approximately 10% of their earnings to the government’s funds. This helps the government enough money to build bridges and repair old roads, making the transportation flows smoother, leading to enhancing the welfare of citizens.
Another reason is that paying taxes contributes considerably to economic growth. If individuals spend a small amount of their income, then, the government will have the budget to invest in various sectors such as technology development, exporting expenses, agriculture and so on. As a consequence, countries’ economies may grow significantly due to good investment. China is a case in point, in the 2000s, this country exported many computer components and overtook Japan to become the world's second-largest economic power behind the United States. This growth was largely due to taxation, therefore, demonstrating that people should not avoid paying taxes. The more tax revenue is collected, the more a country can develop.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the view that people should keep all their money and not pay taxes. This is because taxes are crucial for the welfare of citizens and the advancement of countries.
ĐÊ: Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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