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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp...
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em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
Currently, the condition exhibits that numerous individuals dealing with some common diseases attempt to use a variety of medicines or therapies instead of being diagnosed or cured by a professional doctor. However, in my perspective, this trend has an adverse advancement on public health, and my essay will elaborate further on my viewpoint with relevant examples.
First and foremost, self-diagnosing hides many potential threats to human health. This is because some health problems have similar symptoms which are normally recognised by patient. Therefore, they are capable to mistake these diseases via their personal experience, and using the inappropriate medicine can even worsen their current condition. For instance, both diarrhoea and constipation are two diseases characterized by the abdominal sore. In this circumstance, if patient uses the constipation therapy for diarrhoea disease, it can exacerbate their problem as well as lead to the severe dehydration of body.
Furthermore, using the medicine without the allowance of medical professions may trigger to harmful complications. As some medicines require a rigid description. If people do not receive the advice from doctor and follow it cautiously, it can cause the detrimental effects as overdose or memorising issue. For an example, paracetamol is limited to be used twice or three times per day. When patient tries to use it as much as possible to heal their issues, they can face complications respectively vomiting, dizzy and the shortness in memory. Thus, self-treatment is one of big mistakes for individual health.
To conclude, a great number of people choose self-therapy or medicine by themselves to alleviate the health problems rather than seeing by the professionals in medical field. Conversely, I believe that it seems like a bad option for any individuals. Indeed, being diagnosed by doctors is one of the wisest options for patient to deal with their disease.
Currently, the condition exhibits that numerous individuals dealing with some common diseases attempt to use a variety of medicines or therapies instead of being diagnosed or cured by a professional d...
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The given pie charts illustrate the average ratio of three different sorts of nutrients which are separated into American distinct meals. Moreover, these nutrients can harm to human health with a high level of consumption.
Overall, these charts categorize nutrients into three types: sodium, saturated fat and additional sugar and their proportion is revealed via four different timeframes. While sodium and saturated fat are the most preferable during dinner time, added sugar is consumed greater at snacks.
In detail, whereas snacks and breakfast time are sharing the same consuming percentage of sodium at merely 14%, saturated fat is prioritized to be used for a snack at 21% than for breakfast at 16%. However, the proportion of both sodium and saturated fat during lunch time is constantly greater than breakfast and snack time, respectively sodium at 29% and fat at 26%.
Furthermore, for the added sugar, the dominant utilization occurs for a snack with 42%, nearly doubling the percentage of consumption during a dinner meal. It is remarkable that both breakfast and lunch show the using proportion of this nutrient under 20%.
The given pie charts illustrate the average ratio of three different sorts of nutrients which are separated into American distinct meals. Moreover, these nutrients can harm to human health with a high...
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Mong các thầy cô đọc qua, cho e nhận xét chi tiết và những chỗ có thể improve trong bài writting task 1 này ạ. Thanks a lot! :3
The bar chart illustrates how much time male and female employees spent on leisure activities.
Overall, the number of people in both sexes who were unemployed and retired had the highest amount for leisure pursuits. It is also evident that part-time employed men and male housewives had no time for themselves, while the figure for women owning full-time occupations was the least, compared to other feminine categories.
The amount of spare time unemployed men owned was around 85 units, while that of women was slightly lower, at shy of 80 units. Similarities can be seen in the figure for retired men, as opposed to women, which was just under 85 and 89 units in turn. As for people with full-time jobs, men got roughly 45 units, 7 units higher than women.
50 units of free period female housewives was spent, while masculine counterparts had no time at all. Finally, the leisure time span of part-time employed women also far exceeded that of men, with respective figures being 40 and 0 units.
The bar chart illustrates how much time male and female employees spent on leisure activities.
Overall, the number of people in both sexes who were unemployed and retired had the highest amount for l...
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Mong các thầy cô đọc qua, cho e nhận xét chi tiết và những chỗ có thể improve trong bài writting task 1 này ạ. Thanks a lot! :3
The line graph illustrates how many enquiries the Tourist Information Office got in one city in the first 6 months of 2011.
Overall, there was a decline in enquiry numbers received through email and in person, with that of hand receiving surpassed others in March onwards, while the figure for receiving by telephone witnessed downward trend over the given period.
The number of enquiries collected by hand started at just over 400 units, after which it rose slightly to 800 in the commencement of March, before ending the period at 1900. Meanwhile, the figure for telephone hovered in the range from 900 to 1000, and grew from that point in April to 1600 units in June.
Just under 800 enquiries got through letter in January, with a subsequent decrease to about 700 in March. Similar changes, but to a greater extent, were seen in the 2 following months, which dropped at shy of 400 and followed by a final stability toward the end of the period.
The line graph illustrates how many enquiries the Tourist Information Office got in one city in the first 6 months of 2011.
Overall, there was a decline in enquiry numbers received through email and...
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Please help grade my Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the gathering and treatment process that turns rainfall into consumable water in Australia.
Overall, there are five steps in the treatment plan, beginning with the drainage of rainwater and concluding with its redistribution as potable water.
Initially, draining pipes installed on the roofs of Australian homes channel rainfall into an underground pipeline. The pipes, which link the drain of multiple households, are connected to a common filtration system. After passing through the water filter, the rainwater is transported to a storage unit where it is held until the next phase.
Subsequently, the water is transported from the storage tank to a treatment plant where it undergoes purification using various chemicals. After the treatment is finished, the water - now clean and drinkable - is pumped back up to Australian households via a seperate conveyor system. These pipes, which also connect multiple houses, redistribute the water to be used for hydration.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by s...
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People in many countries are spending more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families?
A rising number of people in the globe nowadays live far away from their families. In my point of view, the major reasons for this tendency may contribute to the increasing personal demand of humans, leading to both positive and negative effects to society.
In this modern and competitive world, it is apparent for people, not least young individuals, to seek for further education as well as more opportunities such as jobs. Therefore, they tend to live away from their families, moving to other cities or countries which provide more chances to meet their demands of pursuing a career. For example, people living in countries where their education systems are limited are more likely to study abroad. Moreover, individuals have not continued with families as they want to no longer depend on their parents. Living alone has many benefits to them, particularly enhancing domestic or time management skills which are useful for them, thereby developing themselves.
In consequence, this trend tends to affect both beneficial and detrimentally to those individuals and their family. Regarding the positive aspect, living independently not only broadens their horizons, but also enables them to seek more opportunities to improve their future career. Additionally, families are also likely to receive financial support from their children who live and work in developed areas. However, living away also results in a lack of connection in relationships among family's members. Those who move to other places seem to decrease real interaction with their parents or siblings due to being busy and stressed with their work and lives. Thus, it poses a threat to maintaining a healthy relationship in the family.
In conclusion, owing to the increasing demand of humans in the advanced world, it is more prevailing for people to live far a long distance from family. This activity is beneficial for themselves but also exacerbates the connection between them and their important persons.
People in many countries are spending more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families?
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Trước em có làm 1 số bài writing rồi nhưng e bỏ một thời gian, đây là bài đầu e viết lại nên có nhiều sai sót, mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ.
Task 1: The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.
The line graph below illustrates how many hours were spent to produce transportation by different manufacturers in the US from 1998 to 2005.
Overall, despite some fluctuations, there was a downward trend in the number of hours spent on making cars at all four manufacturers examined, with General Motor witnessing the most dramatic decline. In addition, Honda generally had the lowest figures throughout the period.
32 hours were taken for General Motor to produce a car in 1989, with a subsequent decrease to 22 hours 7 years later. The figure for Ford underwent a consistent rise by about 3 hours in the first three years but decreased significantly to just under 22 hours from 2001 onward.
The number of hours spent on manufacturing a car by Toyota and Honda started at 22 hours, after which it experienced moderate growth to roughly 24 hours in 2002, before ending the period at 20 hours.
Task 1: The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.
The line graph below illustrates how many hours were spent to produce tra...
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Details regarding how many global student across various countries applied for a European university from 2004 to 2008 are pictorially delineated in the diagram. Overall, while the number of Chinese students in this university consistently declined, this university underwent rises in the enrolments of students of the other countries, to different extents. Additionally, American student quantity finally surpassed that of China, becoming predominant.
Regarding the applications of students of China and America in a university in Europe, the former initially topped the chart when there were roughly 27000 students applying for this university, which was significantly higher than that of America at exactly 20000. However, the quantity of Chinese students’ enrolments in this school sharply dwindled to about 18000 in 2006, after which this figure remained the following year, before finally dropping to 15000. The data for American young academics fluctuated between 15000 and 20000 over the first course of consecutive 3 years, before sinking to its trough of 10000. Conversely, this figure finally reached its pinnacle of 27000, becoming the largest contributor.
Concerning Japanese and Russian students, there was a marked increase in Japanese students applying for this university, with the figure finally doubling from the initial number of 5000 to 10000. Whereas, despite its rise, the number of Russian learners was relatively negligible, never exceeding 5000 students.
Details regarding how many global student across various countries applied for a European university from 2004 to 2008 are pictorially delineated in the diagram. Overall, while the number of Chinese s...
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One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several year’s time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The debate regarding the environmental influence of primary forms of transportation, including aviation and cars, has intensified in today’s globalized world. One school of thought considers that due to the tremendous fuel consumption of air travel, the curtailment of non-essential flights, particularly for traveling, should take precedence over restricting the car usage. While this perspective has its merits, I concur that there are feasible approaches solving effectively environmental concerns.
Admittedly, the aviation industry exerts a far-reaching role in social betterment and the flourishing of tourism. Indubitably, it is statistically established that tourist travel contributes significantly to a nation’s overall GDP, especially in Asian countries, these figures could reach up to a third, thereby enhancing the livelihoods of the locals and national economic prosperity as a whole. Consequently, if authorities curb the quantity of long-distance flights, not only would this trigger economic stagnancy, but this also could compromise living standards and employment prospects in tourist attractions. Furthermore, the reduction in airplane usage inadvertently encourages the utilization of private vehicles, specifically cars. This transformation, rather than decline released emissions level in atmosphere, probably exacerbate road bottleneck which is a predicament in the majority of countries, resultantly, exerting a catastrophic impact on residents’ well-being and resonating current air pollution.
Therefore, I opine that there are more radical solutions compared to minimizing unnecessary flights, one of which is the assistance of the non-fuel transportation. Thanks to technological marvels, some advanced alternatives, namely energy efficient vehicles or electric ones, act as a cornerstone for the mitigation of detrimental effects on the environment and citizens’ health. This could be exemplified by Singapore, known for its green landscape, this nation has enacted draconian regulations and upgraded the traffic infrastructure, thus impeding pollutants. Moreover, the adherence to environmental conservation policy and the adoption of non-polluting sources among aviation brands are pivotal to impede these imperative issues. As a result, this could reduce substantially the carbon footprint and emphasize the importance of collaborative efforts to rejuvenate the fresh environment.
In conclusion, I assume that while the limitation of long-distance flights is not a prudent way due to its severe implications towards citizenry’s life quality and economic aspect, investing in traffic systems and embracing sustainable energy sources should be taken into account to tackle pollution effectively.
The debate regarding the environmental influence of primary forms of transportation, including aviation and cars, has intensified in today’s globalized world. One school of thought considers that due...
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The line graph illustrates the amount of shops which were closed and opened during the period between 2011 and 2018, locating in a country.
Overall, the chart reveals a fluctuated trend for both categories. Furthermore, although the significant number of shops were constructed greater than the amount being closed at the beginning, the quantity of shuttering shops eventually exceeded the number of new stores.
In detail, after a year from 2011, the trends of the shuttering and opening stores indicated a drop in their numbers, reducing both appropriately 4500 new shops and 500 shuttering shops. Conversely, more new stores were consistently increasing and reached above 6000 shops in 2014. Similarly, the shops which were closures approached its top number at nearly 7000 in 2013, then its number subsequently dwindled to 6500 in 2014.
From 2014 to 2015, the quantity of closing stores faced the drastic fall, accounting for up to 6000 stores, more than triple the number of new shops that decreased. After 2015, two categories had adjusted their trends at least twice during this timeframe. However, while the total number of closing stores escalated from 500 to 5200, 4000 new shops were reduced and then only 3000 shops continued their business.
The line graph illustrates the amount of shops which were closed and opened during the period between 2011 and 2018, locating in a country.
Overall, the chart reveals a fluctuated trend for both c...
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In advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, many companies are turning to the strategy of enhancing their product with advertising. This essay will discuss some reasons behind this phenomenon and I believe that this phenomenon brings significant benefits.
There are a number of factors responsible for why large companies tend to emphasize their products are state-of-the-art. The first reason is that producing many luxurious items is not simple, it demands a high level of technology, skill and budgets. For example, Apples always launch their products every year, which can help them demonstrate not only their financial resources but also symbolying their utmost status in the technology field. Such action can expand the opportunity for them to raise their company profile and attract many individuals to buy the latest offerings, thereby increasing profit for the company. Another reason is that many people prefer to buy the newest products. This is because the latest products can help individuals enhance their status and satisfy their feelings when having it.
I believe this emphasis on newness can contribute to numerous advantages. Firstly, the advancement of the products offer people better user experiences such as new functions, fancy colors and special editions. For instance, Samsung has launched a new product with eye-catching folding design, which has attracted many individuals to try the latest product in the experiment sessions of the brand. Consequently, many people are really comfortable after using many features of products, which make companies sell a variety of products. Additionally, advertisements which can help the products can be approached with suitable customers. For example, many skin sets can be sold well if these products can be introduced for the women, who really care about the product.
In conclusion, advertisements for the newest products can be attributable to some causes. However, some remedies can be taken to alleviate the situation.
In advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
ANSWER:
The map illustrates the transformations of Darwin town's waterfront from 2009 to 2014.
Overall, the waterfront area underwent several alterations, most notably the demolition of industrial areas and the expansion of residential buildings.
In 2009, the waterfront featured three residential buildings in the middle, the industrial area and a lake above, these surrounded in a footpath circle. At the top left corner, there was a school and adjacent convention center. On the right, there was a fishing area, and a sea below it. Two swimming pools opposite the circle path, which were separated by a small footpath. A larger industrial area stretched to the coast.
In 2014, the residential area was doubled in size. However, two industrial areas were demolished resulting in the expansion of trees and footpaths. A small swimming pool was added, next to the lake, replacing the small industrial area. The larger industrial area was transformed into a tree area, and a university building built in this area. Additionally, a harbour was built in the sea and there was a long path across the trees area to it. Some locations such as the fishing area, two large swimming pools and so on remained unchanged.
The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and...
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Restoration of old buildings in many cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that governmental bodies expend too much money on restoring ancient buildings, as that money should be expended on building new infrastructures as accommodation and commuting system. Personally, I believe that there is little to disagree with this viewpoint for several reasons.
Granted, there are justifiable reason to believe that more money should be allocated for building new accommodations. Chief of these is that urban populations are growing more and more, so lack of housing for citizens has been a major problem for numerous developed cities. As a result, it is more prior to spend money on constructing more houses to solve such difficulty rather than spend money on repairing ancient constructions. For example, in New York city, thanks to overpopulation, instead of restoring historic buildings, government has erected more new houses for their resident, which is not only improve life quality but also decrease the homeless population and develop economic of the US.
Additionally, enhancing traffic system is also a priority. There are numerous issues happened everyday such as traffic congestion, long-time travelling, traffic accidents due to poor quality roads. Because of that, allocating money for building more appropriate roads can increase the safety for citizens when commuting, reduce significantly traffic jam and accidents. Let us take the case of Vietnam, a study shown that there was about 1000 daily cases of accidents when people travelling on the roads. In order to reduce this serious risk, the government’s expenditure on improving commuting system has been enormous. Hence, cases of accidents have been decreased considerably to just under 200 a day.
In conclusion, I believe that erecting more new accommodations and roads plays an essential role since benefits that they bring to human’s life are enormous.
Restoration of old buildings in many cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disa...
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ielts writing task 2
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All large companies should provide sports and social facilities in the local community.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that it is essential for the majority of big enterprises to support social and sport facilities for the communities in local areas. From my perspective, I partly disagree with this statement.
On the one hand, it is thought to be beneficial for the local community when large companies invest in these social services. One of the primary reasons is that inhabitants in local areas could have much easier access to public facilities. The residents are believed to meet their basic needs, such as getting vaccinated when some big firms share financial support for the medical centers. Otherwise, those enterprises could raise funding for constructing more playgrounds, which will satisfy children’s joy. Another possible reason is that the major companies can gain reputational benefits for them through public activities. The local community could get more convenient access to social facilities thanks to business investment. Therefore, they will comment and leave positive feedback on social media platforms about the quality of services, which can help big companies become more well-known.
Conversely, it is not an ideal choice for the large firms to contribute their money to social facilities for the local areas. To begin with, these companies are thought to be more lucrative when investing in other factors. Sharing money for their own businesses could bring economic values instead of public services. For example, they should allocate money for networking systems to become much more scalable, which could draw foreign investors and increase financial capital. Furthermore, investing financial resources for social services should be the duty of the government. This is because the governor will have more extensive landholdings and financial capital rather than the large companies. It is necessary for the authority to raise funding to provide facilities for local residents, such as refurbishing more local schools and constructing more local hospitals and healthcare facilities.
In conclusion, getting better access and gaining more reputational benefits would be the reasons why big firms should invest money in public services for local inhabitants. However, I think that this should be the governmental responsibility and those entrepreneurs should allocate money to make other profits. It is suggested that there should be a harmonious cooperation between the authority and major companies to aid the local community with social facilities.
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All large companies should provide sports and social facilities in the local community.
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International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages outweigh the disavantages
In contemporary society, transnational tourism has gained significant traction due to its increasingly affordable cost and open-door policies to tourists. From my perspective, although this trend may cause several drawbacks to the environment, the beneficial influences it brings to relations among nations and job opportunities are more significant.
On the one hand, one major problem resulting from international travel is the degradation of the environment. As a matter of fact, many travellers have a scant regard for the local environment where they visit. Consequently, their activities may accidentally lead to pollution which can pose a threat on the sanitation systems, affecting people’s health. Additionally, the upsurge in demand for facilities and accommodation can result in depletion of natural resources. For example, many organisations in Vietnam shrink agriculture lands and forests to construct new buildings and recreational spaces. Thus, the natural habitats may suffer from devastating consequences of over-exploitation.
Despite the aforementioned drawbacks, I would argue that global travel has far more desirable benefits. First, international tourism can promote cultural exchanges, which can help people to understand more about other countries, thereby reinforcing relations as well as eliminating prejudices existing. For example, the invasion of Korea by Japan had caused a lot of hostility between the two countries. However, since multinational travel developed, people have had the chance to understand others, hence mitigating the resentment. Another advantage worth noticing is that the increasing number of foreign visitors to a nation can open up more job opportunities for local residents, thereby reducing the unemployment rate, contributing to the prosperity of that country.
In conclusion, I accept the fact that the increase in travels between countries can bear negative impacts on the environment. Nevertheless, this problem can be tackled if national authorities implement policies or penalties to allevate pollution. Therefore, my firm conviction is that the benefits to employment and international relations.
In contemporary society, transnational tourism has gained significant traction due to its increasingly affordable cost and open-door policies to tourists. From my perspective, although this trend may...
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Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Government has set some vehicle-free occassions when private vehicles such as cars , trucks and motorcycles are not allowed to maneuver in city centers . Instead , citizens are encouraged to use public transportation on these days . In my view , I believe that despite some inconveniences that citizens might suffer , the advantages will outweigh such drawbacks.
Granted , many people argue that changes made by banning private transportation in city centers adversely affect their daily commute . For instance , without private cars , citizens usually need to spend lots of time to book a taxi or wait for the right metro to arrive at their station . Moreover , cities’ public transport systems can not accommodate the intense amount of users in centers , hence , delay and unavailability of transportation are inevitable , which results in frustration of citizens and people ineffective work . Nevertheless , such status quo would be thoroughly mitigated as long as the government implements policies to develop public transport systems , offering more availability to citizens.
Regarding the benefits of vehicle-free days , air contamination in mega cities will be improved significantly . Reducing the number of vehicles maneuvering on the streets helps hinder the emission of exhaust fumes such as CO2 and SO2 , which has worsened greenhouse effect. Therefore , it effectively contributes to curbing climate changes , moreover , prevents citizens from respiratory and cardiovascular issues . Besides , reducing vehicles on the streets will also prevent traffic congestion from happening , which is really crucial to be improved in big cities in order to reduce the fume emissions in the aforementioned issue .
In conclusion , I wholeheartedly believe that policy of vehicle-free days would benefit not only the citizens but also their cities’ environment , despite some drawbacks which could be successfully addressed by proper actions from governments .
Government has set some vehicle-free occassions when private vehicles such as cars , trucks and motorcycles are not allowed to maneuver in city centers . Instead , citizens are encouraged to use publ...
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Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Within the technology dissemination, one school of thought holds that rather than hands-on traveling to other destinations, information can be effortlessly accessed through TV or the Internet. While the Internet and other means undeniably boast various informative articles, I contend that empirical journeys are pivotal for the acquisition of multi-dimensional understanding.
Admittedly, proponents of searching information via networking sites frequently highlight its cost-efficiency and convenience. Indubitably, the advent of these forums enables individuals to explore desired destinations and diverse cultures through a myriad of sources featuring unequivocal images as well as detailed descriptions, regardless of geographic distance, plus the exorbitant prices of the majority of tourist attractions. Consequently, not only would this transformation serve as invaluable sources for those struggling with physical impairment, but this could also render people’s experiences wallet-friendlier. For example, instead of traveling to other nations to learn languages, numerous online courses and websites could cater easily to this requirement.
Conversely, I side with those who are in favor of the profound influence of firsthand journey on the grounds that these experiences can contribute to a greater comprehensive and acute viewpoint for cultural identities from different continents. By traveling to diverse cultures, tourists could broaden social circles by forming connections with the locals and observe realistically the nature of these practices, including the way formality is carried out or rituals, which cannot replicate explicitly by documentaries or the Internet, thereby enriching their understanding and boosting their appreciation towards these traditions. Furthermore, due to fabricated information from unorthodox articles, certain individuals presumably shape distorted mindset and preferences for some countries. As a result, false beliefs and misconceptions could be overshadowed by the authentic exposure to these cultures and local residents, fostering appropriate demeanor and positive attitudes among tourists.
In conclusion, while it is undeniable that the Internet and television lay a concrete foundation for the availability of multiple cultures to citizens across the globe, I affirm that realistic experiences through traveling are crucial to gain a holistic insight into diverse cultures and prevent previous misunderstanding of people.
Within the technology dissemination, one school of thought holds that rather than hands-on traveling to other destinations, information can be effortlessly accessed through TV or the Internet. While t...
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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
It is believed that many universities should free tuition for all students who have a disadvantaged background to help them continue to study higher education. While I understand why some people support this view, I would still firmly disagree with it.
Advocates of making a free registration fee for many undergraduates may have several arguments. The first argument is that supporting financially can encourage students to continue attending university. Nowadays, many students have a difficult economy to pursue tertiary education so they need the government to support them by providing financial support. For example, Germany pays all tuition fees so students can save a portion for living expenses. Additionally, when the authority can fund money for the students to learn higher education so they can attract talented people for the workplace. This is because continuing study in university has given students more knowledge and practical experience for their career paths. As a result, this can make the economy more thriving and decrease the rate of unemployment.
Despite the aforementioned valid reasons, I am in total disagreement with this view. Regarding the former, free tuition for advantageous people can push the government to the verge of bankruptcy or levy higher taxes on citizens. This is because the costs for the government to maintain the facilities or employ qualified teachers is really exorbitant. Consequently, this action can not ensure the life of the cityzens, which can reduce the quality of the people living in the country. Furthermore, providing a fee for students can increase the number of students in one class. Also, class size can impact on how each student interacts with their teachers and their peers. This can lead to their affair when asking in their class, as a result they can receive a bad performance in university.
In conclusion, it is understandable why some people advocate the idea of no tuition fee for students to help them have the opportunity to study tertiary education. However, I would still oppose this view.
Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what ex...
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The given charts illustrate the percentage of British pupils at one university in England who were capable for communicating by others languages , exception of English,between 2000 and 2010
As can be seen from the charts,British students who were not able to speak another languages ,except English and Spanish, take the biggest majority while other category seem to be spoken equally students athough there were some slight changes
In 2000, the Spanish speakers contributed the highest rate with 30 percent.Beside it, the figures of pupils who mastered German were recorded to have the same ratio as students who have the ability to communicate by two other type of languages , while an indifferent trend was seen in the percentage of French speakers and another language’s talker
According to the chart that presents data in 2010, Spanish rose sightly to 35 percent and still remained the most common foreign language with university pupils.On the other hand, speakers who had the capacity to utilize another language went up 5 percent , compare to its proportions in 2000, thereby turning to the second largest category in the chart.In contrast, a remarkable fall was seen in French speakers and British only talker , which decreased to 10 percent, as same as the German ratio
The given charts illustrate the percentage of British pupils at one university in England who were capable for communicating by others languages , exception of English,between 2000 and 2010
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The given charts illustrate the proportion of distinctive sorts of daily activities were done by adult during two periods of time, respectively in 1958 and in 2008.
Overall, the charts were divided into 6 categories such as sleeping, travelling to work, working, relaxation in residential house, hanging out and other alternatives. Whereas working, travelling to work and relaxing at home notably marked with an escalation in percentage, the amount of sleeping and going out dwindled over time.
In detail, working had a significant jump in its proportion from 33 to 42%, taking the leading role in these changes. Similarity, travelling to work depicted a slight increase in proportion, at about 5% in advance. Furthermore, the percentage of home relaxation also went up four times in this timeframe.
Conversely, the activity as going out was remarkably dropped its total rate from 19% and eventually reached to the similar percentage of other activities which remained constantly at 6%. Sleeping simultaneously experienced a decrease at about 7%, but still standing at the second choice of daily activities in both years.
The given charts illustrate the proportion of distinctive sorts of daily activities were done by adult during two periods of time, respectively in 1958 and in 2008.
Overall, the charts were divided...
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