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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In contemporary society, the popularity of tourism has led to a growing concern about cultural preservation. Opinions are divergent regarding the matter of whether cultural traditions will be ruined or supported if it is used to earn revenue. The aim of this essay is to investigate both viewpoints before giving my personal perspective on this issue.
It is understandable why a number of individuals suggest that the development of tourism may jeopardise cultural traditions. A rationale behind this belief is that the activities of travellers are likely to pose a threat to the sites visited. Despite the endeavour to protect these cultural heritage sites, local authorities cannot take control over a great quantity of visitors. Furthermore, this trend can lead to the loss of cultural identity since cultural commercialisation usually ignores the pivotal values of culture. As a result, if culture is used as a tool to generate income, it will be attached little importance to a unique tradition, causing damage to the nature of culture.
On the other hand, I would argue that tourism is one of the most optimal ways to protect a culture. First, tourism can help spread the culture on a global scale since countries have witnessed an astonishingly increasing number of tourists from abroad. Hence, it can encourage younger generations to dedicate themselves to activities, thereby preventing cultural traditions from fading into obscurity. For instance, in Vietnam, many skillful artists make an attempt to teach and pass down their skills to not only local residents but also foreign travellers, contributing significantly to the maintenance of cultural identity. Besides, revenue from the tourism sector can be allocated to repairing and upgrading facilities of cultural tourism sites, thus enhancing visitors’ experience. To clarify, unless Hoi An ancient town is used for tourism, it cannot earn enough money to reconstruct old buildings which keep invaluable things.
In conclusion, although tourism may put the integrity of culture at risk, my firm conviction is that it can help preserve these traditional values from disappearing and improve awareness of upholding a culture
In contemporary society, the popularity of tourism has led to a growing concern about cultural preservation. Opinions are divergent regarding the matter of whether cultural traditions will be ruined o...
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In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse.
What do you think are the causes of this problem?
What measures could be taken to solve it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is asserted that in many parts of the world, people are suffering from the lower standard of living in the metropolises. This essay attempts to bring the driven reasons to the light before enunciating several viable solutions.
The overpopulation can be viewed as the prime reason for these problems, leading to environmental pollution. In fact, a huge amount of population can result in the overconsumption of fossil fuels, such as gas, coal and oil, which can have a deleterious effect on the surrounding habitats. To elaborate, a recent research shows that the air pollution rate is witnessed the record soar in 2024 compared to the previous years. Moreover, the unemployment rate arising from these issues starts to increase as the job markets can be exceedingly competitive by dint of the superabundance of the workforces. If fhere are myriad people, who cannot be able to seek for a paid occupation, they may engagae in social evils, particularly drug and prostitutions, making the entire society at the peril status.
Therefore, the most feasible approach is to launch a worldwide family planning movement. This will help to restrict the population at a particular level, thereby alleviating the overall contamination by virtue of less consumption of powers and minerals. Another essential method is that the authorities ought, not only to allocate the national budget for the awareness campaigns which educate the inhabitants about the role of the environment, but also to expand the labour markets with the aim of higher employment proportion. For that reason, people can reach the environmental sustainability as well as curtail the delinquency tribulations.
In brief, people living in urbanized areas worsen their living conditions due to the overcrowding bringing about more detrimental ecosystem and the increasing number of criminals. To perfectly address these concerns, the governmental organs have to practice birth control, organize the awareness campaigns and widen the professional opportunities for all individuals.
In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse.
What do you think are the causes of this problem?
What measures could be taken to solve it?
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Topic: It is said that the amount of violence on TV programmes has negative effects on our social development and therefore should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The assertion that televised violence negatively impacts social development is a point of significant contention. I firmly believe this influence is detrimental, necessitating a reduction in such content. The ensuing discussion will evaluate the psychological effects on viewers and the broader societal consequences.
The psychological imprint of televised violence on individuals, particularly young viewers, is profound. Research by the American Psychological Association indicates that regular exposure to media violence heightens aggression by modelling inappropriate behaviours as acceptable in conflict resolution. For instance, children who frequently watch violent shows are more likely to exhibit aggressive tendencies and reduced empathy. These effects are not fleeting but have the potential to embed long-term behavioural patterns, disrupting emotional development and social interactions. Such findings underscore the need for stringent content regulation to safeguard mental health and promote positive social behaviours.
On a societal level, the pervasiveness of violence on television cultivates a culture of fear and aggression. Sociological studies illustrate a correlation between high rates of media violence consumption and societal violence, suggesting that televised brutality not only reflects but potentially exacerbates societal issues. For example, media portrayals of violence can desensitize the population, making incidents of real-world violence seem less alarming and more acceptable. This normalization can hinder community cohesion and mutual respect, pivotal components of societal advancement. Therefore, reducing these broadcasts can contribute to a more harmonious and empathetic society, fostering environments that encourage peaceful coexistence rather than conflict.
In conclusion, the adverse effects of televised violence on individual psychology and societal harmony substantiate the call for its reduction. By limiting exposure to such content, we can enhance both personal and community well-being. It is essential for media producers to prioritize societal health over sensationalism, aligning broadcasting practices with the principles of public good.
Topic: It is said that the amount of violence on TV programmes has negative effects on our social development and therefore should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion...
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The given graph depicts the data related to the number of participants engaging in distinct social activities at a central area in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
In general, the trend from most activities showed the increasing number of participants at the end of the period with the exception for the Amateur dramatics with its decreasing number. Particularly, the engagement levels of the film club constantly remained higher compared to other activities.
In details, amateur dramatics had a slight spike in members in 2005 with approximately 30 individuals. During the same period, the number of members initiated to join in musical performances and subsequently increased up to 10 in the following of 5 years.
Furthermore, the quantity of members in table tennis was significantly lower than in martial arts around 20 people at the beginning. However, its number drastically jumped up to 35 in 2015 and put on pair with participation number in martial arts. Moreover, the participating levels in film clubs from 2000 to 2020 consistently maintained over 60 memberships.
The given graph depicts the data related to the number of participants engaging in distinct social activities at a central area in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
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The table gives information about the results of a survey which 6800 Scottish adults chose to participate in various cultural activities during the past 12 months. Overall, it is obvious that the percentage of adults joining in dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting accounted for the highest figure. In contrast, almost age groups spent the least time on computer based activity. To start with, any performance, undertaking any crafts and cultural purchases received higher popularity among these groups. To be more specific, the proportion of 16-24 years allocating to dancing, singing, playing instruments and acting was highest, which stood at 35% and also the biggest data in the table. Meanwhile, any performance was the least welcomed among adults from 45 to 74, with the figure seeing at only 17%. According to undertaking any crafts, the percentage of people at 45-74 was 22%, which was two times higher than that of people at 16-24. In term of cultural purchases, the figures for 25-44 and 45-74 groups had the approximate data, which was 17% and 18% respectively. Group people at all aged 16 and over was the second one devoting to cultural purchases, with the data standing at 16%. Concerning the remaining statement, and data back to any visual arts, any writing, and computer based activity. The rate of adults at 16-24 dedicating their time to visual arts far exceeded that of 45-74 group, with respective figures being 30%, and 11%. Such a similar pattern was observed in any writing and computer based when adults at 16-24 years were still the group which spent the most time on these activities, witnessing the respective data at 17%, and 10%. Notably, the proportion of people at 45-74 years taking part in these activities experienced the same data, which was the lowest figure at 5%.
The table gives information about the results of a survey which 6800 Scottish adults chose to participate in various cultural activities during the past 12 months. Overall, it is obvious that the perc...
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In the past, knowledge was stored in books. Today, we store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In modern society, there is a tendency for information to be stored online instead of being written or printed in books like they used to be. From my perspective, I think this the positive aspects of this outweighs the negative ones.
It is certain that storing knowledge on the internet is more convenient for people to get access to. This can be seen from the way people can easily search for exactly right on information that they need through search engines, such as Google or Wikipedia, with a couple of clicks. However, this is not the case for books when people must spend a quite large amount of time to find necessary information.
It is undeniable that there are various forms of information presentation on the internet. This development brings some benefits for people who find reading books is hard to absorb knowledge. Besides texts, there are combination of audio and illustration, which makes videos lively and attracts learner's attention better. Additionally, this way of learning is particularly suitable for children who tend to lose focus on reading books.
In conclusion, I believe that online storing information is more beneficial than traditional way of storing, which is recorded in books.
In modern society, there is a tendency for information to be stored online instead of being written or printed in books like they used to be. From my perspective, I think this the positive aspects of...
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The graphs below show the percentage of graduates that got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, and the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of two types of graduates that landed full-time jobs after graduating from a specific Australian university, while the table depicts the average earnings of both these types of graduates, between 2004 and 2012.
Overall, most categories saw an upward trend, while the percentage of math graduates working as full-time employees had a reverse pattern over the given period. Another interesting point is that the total average salary of math graduates was more than that of other graduates.
Regarding the percentage of full-time workers holding a university degree, other graduates' proportion was approximately 65% in 2004 and then increased rapidly before reaching a record high of nearly 90% in 2006. Subsequently, the figure declined steadily to about 70% in 2012. The proportion of full-time workers who had a math degree was exactly 80% in 2004 and then it rose gradually to reach a high peak at about 85% in 2008, which is the same as that of other graduates. After that, the figure reduced moderately to under 80% in 2012.
In terms of the average yearly amount of these types, both math graduates and other graduates achieved $41,000 in average salary and the figures increased rapidly to $43,000 in 2006. Then the average earnings of math graduates and other graduates continued to soar to $56,000 and $51,000 in 2012, respectively.
The graphs below show the percentage of graduates that got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, and the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012. S...
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Đề bài
Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is that? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?
Bài làm
It is true that the use of some vehicles such as bicycles is decreasing. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and then offer some feasible solutions to it.
There are a number of factors responsible for the fact that people use bicycles less as a mode of transportation. Chief among these is that people with busy lifestyles prefer using convenient vehicles such as cars and motorbikes instead of inconvenient ones like bikes. In fact, they don’t have enough time to go to their workplaces because of the slow speed when using bicycles. Moreover, the demand for going to a lot of places, such as home, work places, schools, etc. , which requires indefatigable energy is also the main reason people deter from using bicycles. Another explanation is that the government does not concern itself with the improvement of streets used for bicycles, which leads to the lack of adequate infrastructure. An illustration for this is that some developing countries such as Laos, Viet Nam, etc., have lots of narrow roads, limited bike lanes, and inadequate cycling facilities, which can easily cause accidents with other vehicles like cars and motorbikes when people participate in traffic. As a result, this causes safety concerns among citizens that using bikes is not really secure.
Various measures, nevertheless, can be adopted to tackle the situation. The first possible approach is that the government can encourage residents to use bikes by implementing policies that improve infrastructure and deduct taxes on buying bicycles. Consequently, people may consider cycling for transportation purposes. The second solution is that the government should launch education and awareness campaigns in order to introduce the advantages of using bicycles instead of using other transportations. For instance, cycling may minimize the risk of suffering from diabetes or obesity, it also provides residents with the opportunity with a healthier lifestyle.
In conclusion, the fact that people tend to use convenient and fast means of transportation like cars, planes and motorbikes is increasing substantially and can stem from many causes. However, steps can be taken to ameliorate the situation.
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Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is that? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?
Bài làm
It is true that the use of some vehicles such as bic...
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Nhờ thầy cô xem qua bài này giúp em ạ. Nowadays, sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and in other ways. Is this a positive or negative development for sports?
In this day and age, it would be considered that the commercialization of sports has transformed it into a lucrative industry, benefiting both athletes and businesses involved. While this trend presents some merits such as motivating athletes and raising income for companies, it could also lead to fierce competition and unethical commercial practices. This development has both positive and negative impacts in equal measure which will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, there are some advantages associated with this trend. Firstly, sports stars could perform at peak condition and focus more on pursuing their careers thanks to the huge budgets from sponsors. The financial incentives could help sportsmen to have a decent income to support themselves and have access to state-of-the-art facilities and healthcare services accommodating their rigorous training. Additionally, many enterprises can reap benefits from sports celebrity endorsements reinforcing their brand awareness and loyalty. In particular, by making a 10-million-dollar contract with Ronaldo, one of the most renowned footballers in the world, to be the brand’s ambassador, a sportswear giant named Nike has significantly increased its sales, surging its takings ten times higher than before.
On the other hand, the emergence of sports financialization could be considered to be negative for several reasons. Firstly, high wages could lead to some athletes being tempted to cheat or engage in immoral behaviors. Placing excessive emphasis on financial gain could undermine sports players’s work ethic resulting in sports fraud and lack of sportsmanship. For example, some athletes have resorted to performance-enhancing drugs such as doping and anabolic steroids in order to boost their moods and enhance their physicality which could help them improve their chances of winning or secure profitable deals. In addition, this trend is exacerbated by the manipulation of betting companies helping increase their influx of income. Gambling companies could get involved in match-fixing and replace the final results of tournaments. If this course of action continues to thrive, a multitude of spectators could feel severely disappointed and even lose large amounts of money for making the wrong bet.
In conclusion, the increase in the income of sports stars and involvement of entrepreneurs has some beneficial effects by fulfilling players’s financial and training needs as well as raising the company's profile, whereas it also brings concerns regarding an unwholesome competing environment and the proliferation of immoral betting companies.
In this day and age, it would be considered that the commercialization of sports has transformed it into a lucrative industry, benefiting both athletes and businesses involved. While this trend presen...
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The table below show the amount of waste production ( in millions of tonnes ) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
The table compares the production of waste ( in millions of tonnes ) in six nations in three years ( 1980, 1990, 2000).
Overall, the US produced the largest waste in all three years. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that cut its waste output.
In 1980, America produced 131 million tonnes of waste, which outnumbered that of other countries. Over the next 20 years, there was a significant increase to 192 million tonnes of waste output. The production of waste in Japan was two-fold rise to 53 million tonnes in the same period. The amount of waste produced in Poland and Portugal climbed by 2,6 million tonnes and 3 million tonnes, respectively at the end of the period.
An upward trend could also be witnessed in the figure for producing waste in Ireland. The amount of waste produced climbed eightfold, from 0,6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Between 1990 and 2000, there was a slight decline in Korea’s waste output, from 31 million tonnes to 19 million tonnes.
The table below show the amount of waste production ( in millions of tonnes ) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
The table compares the production of waste ( in millions of ton...
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Task 1: The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts how many local and foreign research students of universities in Australia in 2001 and 2010, while the pie charts illustrate the proportions of gender among those students.
Overall, the total number of research students escalated over the given period. Notably, there was a substantial decrease in the former’s share, while the international enrollments increased rapidly. Additionally, the gender distribution remained relatively balanced.
Regarding the number of students conducting research, in 2001, native and international students were 33,657 and 5,192, respectively, with a total number was 38,849. Conversely, the figures escalated to 39,488 and 14,593 in 2010, respectively. As a result, the summarized number of research students rose to 54,081.
In terms of gender distribution, in 2001, non-local female and male research students occupied 4% and 9% of total research students, respectively. However, the figures experienced a soar to 15% and 12%, respectively. Meanwhile, both regional female and male research students declined sharply. In 2001, local female and male students who engaged in research were 43% and 44%, respectively. The figures then went down significantly to just 35% and 38%, respectively.
Task 1: The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak...
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These days, with the spread of innovative technology, children have changed the way they spend time on technology. While there are several potential disadvantages to this trend, but i believe that they are outweighed by the benefits that technology offers for younger people.
On the one hand, there are many disadvantages that pose a risk to the mental and physical health of children who spend too much time on screen or use modern technology. Studies have shown that children spend much time playing video games and watching TV affects their daily routine, which makes them suffer from obesity and sleep disorders. Moreover, technology can affect mental health in the form of impaired cognitive development, behavioral issues, and poor social skills. This will reduce opportunities for young people to connect with the outside environment.
On the other hand, technology plays a vital role in bringing about many advantages for these generations. Firstly, social platforms contain a vast amount of reputable information and knowledge about different subjects that people can be interested in, such as science, history, math,... Secondly, video games are always abundant resources that help people who can solve critical thinking and communication. Especially, modern apps such as Facebook and message and chat platforms have made it easier for children to stay connected with their friends and families.
In conclusion, technologies nowadays have altered the routine of using mobile phones on children's free time and have negative impacts on them, but I also strongly believe that modern technologies will important element to develop skills and relationships of children.
These days, with the spread of innovative technology, children have changed the way they spend time on technology. While there are several potential disadvantages to this trend, but i believe that the...
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The given chart illustrates how long for telephone calls in the UK which grouped into three categories between 1995 to 2002.
Overall, there was an increase in the number of minutes of national and international-fixed line and mobile with the exception of local ones. Additionally, the figures for local-fixed line categories was far higher than two counterparts in the first half of the period.
Turning first to the duration from 1995 to 1999, the number of minutes of local-fixed line started at upward of 70 billion, after which it experienced a significant growth to 90 billion in 1999. Similarly, but to lesser extents, could be observed in the figures for regional and international and mobile types which climbed from under 40 billion, about 4 billion to 50 billion, roughly 14 billion, respectively in 1995-1999 duration.
Shifting focus to the remaining span from 1999 to 2002, whilst 90 billion minutes of local telephone in 1999, followed by a decline to the initial point in 1995, the statistics for the two rest categories constantly rose from 50 to above 60 billion with national international and from upward 10 billion to nearly 45 billion with mobile type at the end of the timeframe.
The given chart illustrates how long for telephone calls in the UK which grouped into three categories between 1995 to 2002.
Overall, there was an increase in the number of minutes of national and in...
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ .Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get new events.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the contemporary era, it has been witnessed a growing number of individuals communicate and with others and check for news daily.From my perspective, I support the idea that the remarkable benefits of this trend surpass its major drawbacks
In the one hand, modern residents have the capacity to correspond with their relatives or acquire to the latest events as result of the enhancements in social network which have minimized the time-consuming issues of traditional methods. To be specific , if citizens keep connecting with others by conventional options such as : face-to-face meeting , holding an appointment, they will have to spend their quality time in order to complete that. In contrast to the old ways, interacting by online applications not only tackle time-consuming obstacles but also enhance the flexibility since users have the ablity to hold a conversation at any time .Take an example of this concept, Threads, which is a widespread website , was utilized by a significant number of people in all over the world.The primary reason contributes to the success of Threads is the sustainable and safe environment that this application created thereby eliminating idenity exposure and supporting residents in building relationships
Futhermore, because of some breakthroughs in technology of notifying website , fanancial problems which are linked to obtaining new events are no longer exist in our daily life.Particularly,the old solutions of receiving news such as : reading newspaper, collecting magazines cost us much money while modern online platforms allow individuals freely access to the latest events.Therefore, it deletes fee’s difficuties and develops economic and knowledgeable aspects a mong people .
To sum up,the potential benefits of connecting with the others and gaining new events overshadow its negative downside.Consequently , it has been a upward trend in the current age amongst the general public to interact through network platforms.
In the contemporary era, it has been witnessed a growing number of individuals communicate and with others and check for news daily.From my perspective, I support the idea that the remarkable benefits...
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em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The illustration outlines the process of manufacturing ethanol via a biofuel.
Overall, this circular process encompasses three main stages, beginning with absorbing carbon dioxide in the external environment and ending with adding microbes into the progress.
In detail, the initial stage starts with releasing carbon dioxide from means of transportation before it accumulates into plants and trees in a form as an energy containing light ray and carbon dioxide. Coming to the second stage, it is about crushing the physical trees, which are harvested in the farm, by the cutting machine into tiny pieces.
Meanwhile, most of the progression in the third stage will be done with biotechnology and chemicals. After collecting these pieces, they will be converted into numerous cellulose fibrous. Subsequently, combing with some sorts of chemicals will help these fibrous reformed as sugar. According to adding more microbes, sugar will become ethanol, eventually combing back to vehicles.
The illustration outlines the process of manufacturing ethanol via a biofuel.
Overall, this circular process encompasses three main stages, beginning with absorbing carbon dioxide in the external...
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Writing task 1
The given table illustrates how many kilometres in average adults traveled and different means of transportation between 1977 and 2007.
Overall, the greatest numbers belonged to cars in both year, and bicycles and motorcycles were the types of vehicles witnessing the least figures.
According to the table, the average kilometres that people drived by cars was 3 500 and rose up to 7 100, which ranked first compared to the other given datas in both year. Following that was the distance traveling by walking, with 400 kilometres in 1977, yet the figure slightly dropped to 300 in the next 10 years. In terms of the numbers of bicycles and motorcycles, the records were similar, with 100 kilometres in 1977. However, there were moderate decrease for two of these types of traveling, with 80 and 90 kilometres, respectively for bicycles and motorcycles.
Furthermore, although the distance that people used bus to commute was 800 kilometres at first, it descended to 500 in 2007. Additionally, trains were seen to have the second highest numbers in this table, with 900 and 1000 kilometres for two mentioned years. Finally, there was a significant distance growth in taxi, going up to 800 kilometres in 2007, compared to 200 kilometres in 1977.
The given table illustrates how many kilometres in average adults traveled and different means of transportation between 1977 and 2007.
Overall, the greatest numbers belonged to cars in both year,...
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ In some countries, schools are teaching foreign languages for primary school children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some countries , children are taught other languages apart from their mother tongue in an early age. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend , I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are two major drawbacks when foreign languages are taught at school. Firstly , adding another language apart from the mother tongue to the curriculum may be challenging and demanding for many children to meet. Children have to learn academic subjects like mathematics and science subjects that demand a lot of time and energy to understand and absorb complex formulas and complex theories and then apply them to complete their homework. Having another subject to learn and strive to excel in may cause the feelings of burnout and overwhelming , potentially leading to mental health issues such as depression and sleep disorders at a young age . Secondly , teaching foreign languages can lack competent language educators. To ensure the quality of education , teachers need to be trained and qualified with passion to deliver knowledge to children effectively. However , some schools in rural areas still find it difficult to address this problem.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits are more significant than such disadvantages.One reason for this view is that learning foreign languages early helps students gain future career opportunities. In our increasingly globalized world , language proficiency is a highly sought-after skill in the job market. Employers in fields such as international business , diplomacy and tourism often prioritize candidates with proficiency and fluency in conversational skill in order to support them to connect to customers from diverse backgrounds. Therefore , learning other languages except for the first language equips children with a solid foundation to be more competitive in today's job market , making them fulfilling in the career ladder and gain more lucrative earnings. Another reason is that learning another language stimulates brain development. To be specific , multilingualism requires learners to manage and exchange information between distinctive languages , making it an effective exercise brain in order for them to enhance multitasking,critical thinking and problem-solving skills.For example, The countless research papers have proven students who have studied a foreign language perform much better than their monolingual peers on many standardized tests, including all sections of the SAT. Therefore, bilingualism boosts brain development, giving learners an advantage in core subjects like mathematics and science subjects.
In conclusion , it seems to me that the advantages of this trend are more significant than the disadvantages.
In some countries , children are taught other languages apart from their mother tongue in an early age. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend , I would argue that these are outweighed by th...
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Mong các thầy cô đọc qua, cho e nhận xét chi tiết và những chỗ có thể improve trong bài writting task 1 này ạ. Thanks a lot! :3
The graph illustrates how many adults participated in each given occupation category of a country between 2003 and 2013.
Overall, there was a decline in the figure for Medical and Business, while the rest experienced a growth. It is also clear that Business had by far the highest figure.
The number of adults going for Business started at around 45 units, after which it witnessed a decrease to roughly 35 in 2013. In addition, that of Medical saw similar changes, dropping from 22 to 12 units.
Approximately 8 units of people participated in Education training in 2003, with a subsequent going up to 17; similarly, the figure for Building saw a rise by 10 units to 22 in 2013. Similar changes, but to greater extents, were seen in that of Hotel industry, Self-employed and Unemployed, which increased by about 15 units and by around 20 units from 14 and 13 respectively.
The graph illustrates how many adults participated in each given occupation category of a country between 2003 and 2013.
Overall, there was a decline in the figure for Medical and Business, while the...
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Xin chấm ielts writing task 2 ạ
Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
National identity is being destroyed and becoming a single culture by globalization. While I can see that many national cultures vanish because of globalization, I assume that this also helps many cultures to become better known.
Globalization causes the destruction and disappearance of each country's own culture. This is because each country always has its own distinct language that contributes to the beauty and the richness of its national culture. If the world becomes globalized, all nations will speak the same languages. This leads to many people rarely speaking their own languages, which can vanish. Moreover, many cultural treasures and knowledge that our ancestors passed down to us through their own language will gradually fade. Therefore, globalization causes the loss of unique cultural practices, traditions, and knowledge that are often tied to specific languages.
However, the process of globalization has the potential to enhance and enrich the cultural values of each country that are unique to each country. When globalization happens, this creates many opportunities for individuals to have more chances to experience and discover many other places. They not only admire the natural beauty, but also they have a chance to experience the special culture and characteristics of this country. As a result, globalization can help introduce many cultures to more people, ensuring that each country's unique culture and values will endure.
In conclusion, because of globalization, many languages are vulnerable to disappearing and have lost their unique culture and traditions. However, this allows many people to have more chances to approach and discover unique cultures, which helps many cultures to not vanish.
Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
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WRITING TASK 1
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa và nhận xét giúp em bài writing task 1 này ạ. em cảm ơn nhiều ạ
The given charts compare the total minutes spent daily on different forms of entertainment and household chores by men and women in the UK in the year 2008, measured by minutes.
Overall, it is clear that males dedicated more daily time to leisure activities, while females generally spent more time on housework in 2008. Notably, both genders tended to watch TV, radio, video as well as do the cooking and washing the most.
Looking first at the table, men took about 140 minutes per day to watch TV,
radio, and video compared to 118 minutes spent by UK women. A much smaller amount of everyday time was dedicated to books, 18 minutes for males and 19 minutes for females respectively. Sports exercises were the least popular recreational activities, with the total time being 15 minutes for men and 11 minutes for women.
Moving onto the bar chart, women in the UK devoted a considerable amount of time to cooking and washing, with nearly 80 minutes daily, far exceeding the figure for men, with about 35 minutes per day. Whilst females spent a relatively equal number of 35 minutes on shopping and clothing washing/ironing, the figures for men were noticeably different, at 10 and 22 minutes per day respectively. Repair was the household task that took up the least amount of daily time, only 20 minutes for men and 10 minutes for women.
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The given charts compare the total minutes spent daily on different forms of entertainment and household chores...
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