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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The given bar chart depicts the quantity of waste which was tackle through landfill , burning , and dumping at sea in one European metropolis over 4 years interval starting in 2005
Overall, there was a gradual decrease in the amount of waste disposed via landfill , while the burning’s waste at sea saw a slight growth. Notably, the disposal waste by dumping almost no change in the period of shown
Looking at the bar chart, we can be seen that disposing of waste via landfill started at 1800 milion tonnes , which had the highest position in 2005, followed by a steady decrease at 1200 million tonnes in 2006 . Besides , in the first two years nearly burning of waste increased very little ,only 100 million tonnes. Also the amount of trash dumped at sea which always remained relatively unchanged at 600 million tonnes
In the two last years of shown, the quantity of waste processed by landfill and dumping dropped to over 900 and 600 respectively .By 2008, the burning of trash continuously went up till approximately 100 million tonnes
The given bar chart depicts the quantity of waste which was tackle through landfill , burning , and dumping at sea in one European metropolis over 4 years interval starting in 2005
Overall, there wa...
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The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of different groups of magazines sold by the company between 1975 and 2015 .
Overall , Ssort magazines sales increased throughout the period , whereas it dropped for sales of fashion and health magazines and remained intact for food and the unnamed magazines ones . Notably , sport magazines were the bestsellers compared to other types of magazines.
The proportion of sold sport magazines increased moderately from around 31% to just over 35% in 1995 , then peaked at approximately 41% in 2015 . Regarding that of food magazines , its figure started at 10% in 1975 before a soar to over 20% in 1995 , yet , falling back to 1975 levels in 2015 . Meanwhile , the figure of the unamed magazines followed the same pattern when it fluctuated between over 25% and about 30%.
With regard to the proportion of fashion magazines sales , the figure slightly decreased from just over 20% to nearly 15% between 1975 and 1995 , then witnessed a significant decline to 5% at the end . Sales of health magazines also dropped from approximately 25% to 20% in the first 20 years and stablized over the rest of the period.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of different groups of magazines sold by the company between 1975 and 2015 .
Overall , Ssort magazines sales increased throughout the period , whereas i...
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The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.(
The given pie chart illustrates the percentages of tourists coming from different regions , while the table chart shows what different regions’ tourists do in Australia.
Overall , European and US tourists account for the majority of holidaymakers . Notably , tourists tend to stay at least for a week for holiday , and sightseeing is their favorite activity .
To begin with , the percentage European tourists took up 37% of tourists , the largest group visiting Australia . Following by US tourists , who account for 35% of tourists , while those from Asian regions only amount to 10%. Additionally , people from other regions comprise nearly a fifth of tousists came to Austrilia.
With regards to tourists’ length of stay , Asian people usually stay for a week , and mostly choose 5-star hotels to stay, while American tourists stay twice longer, but prefer 4-star hotels . Moreover , Both groups mainly go sightseeing . Regarding European tourists , they stay the longest for 16 days averagely and mostly choose campsite or caravan rather than hotels , moreover , they prefer beach activities like swimming and sunbathing . Those from other regions usually stay for 10 days in the same accommodation as Europeans , however , surfing is the most popular activity.
The given pie chart illustrates the percentages of tourists coming from different regions , while the table chart shows what different regions’ tourists do in Australia.
Overall , European and US t...
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The two plans below compare the layout of a typical Japanese office and a typical American office.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the layout of typical offices in Japan and America.
Overall, there are dramatically differences between offices in two countries, with encouraging collaboration at the workplace in Japan, and emphasis on hierarchy or stratification in America.
In Japan, there are two large manager sections with tables and chairs of members in the same team placed together next to the location of the manager to promote teamwork. In front of two manager areas, there is only one table and chair placed for the department manager, and a window at the back of it.
Meanwhile, in America, tables and chairs for members are separated completely from manager areas. Each manager section is placed in a private room, and opposite is staff areas. Additionally, there are rooms added meeting job requirements, including a copier, a storage and two conference rooms. Besides, unlike Japan, American offices normally have two windows stretching across western and eastern walls.
The two plans below compare the layout of a typical Japanese office and a typical American office.
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Mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
People only work hard for money and there are no other reasons for doing that. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals suppose that people work hard for no other reason than money. Although money is the primary reason behind hard work, I firmly believe other factors, including passion and a desire to contribute to society, likewise motivate hard work.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that financial incentives are a primary motivator for many individuals. People need money to fulfil basic needs such as food, clothing, and housing. Beyond these essentials, money also provides a means to achieve personal goals, such as buying a house, travelling, or securing a comfortable retirement. The desire for financial stability and the ability to provide for one's family often drive people to put in long hours and exert significant effort in their jobs. This partly explains why many decide to work overtime or have two jobs at the same time to maximise their income.
However, there are various other reasons why individuals strive to excel in (cố gắng vượt trong) their work. Personal fulfilment and career satisfaction are powerful motivators since people find a sense of purpose and identity through their work. They derive satisfaction from overcoming challenges, achieving professional milestones, and gaining recognition for their accomplishments. This intrinsic motivation often drives individuals to work hard, not solely for monetary rewards but for the personal satisfaction and pride associated with doing a good job.
Additionally, I believe many individuals work hard because of a natural enthusiasm in tandem with a desire to help others. Many artists, for instance, are willing to work in galleries all day long to sketch, paint, and perfect their paintings. Their aim is more about creating impressive works of self-expression than maximizing how much they will earn from selling their artwork. Another reason that encourages hard work is a desire to contribute to society. Firefighters are a case in point. The fact that many firefighters are willing to risk their lives to rescue others shows that money is not their main motivation and that an altruistic wish to help others far exceeds other causes.
To sum up, money is, of course, a driving force behind hard work; however, passion and the desire to help others are also intrinsic factors why many individuals work hard. I hold the standpoint that people are likely to achieve a greater sense of inspiration when they consider other factors besides simply salary.
People only work hard for money and there are no other reasons for doing that. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think that the Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say the Olympics are a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is an ongoing debate on the important role of the Olympic games. On one hand, many see them as exhilarating events that foster international unity. On the other, critics argue that they are an exorbitant financial burden, suggesting that the resources could be more effectively allocated elsewhere. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own view.
Proponents of the Olympics highlight their unique ability to unite nations. The Games bring together athletes and spectators from across the globe, promoting a sense of camaraderie and shared human experience. For instance, the Olympics provide a platform for athletes to showcase their talents, inspiring millions worldwide. The event also fosters cultural exchange and mutual respect among diverse nations, as evidenced by the mingling of athletes and the sharing of cultural traditions during the opening and closing ceremonies. Furthermore, the Olympics can stimulate national pride and unity within participating countries, as citizens rally behind their athletes, celebrating their successes collectively.
On the other hand, critics argue that the enormous financial burden of hosting the Olympics often outweighs the benefits. The cost of building infrastructure, such as stadiums, transportation networks, and accommodations, can run into billions of dollars. For example, the 2016 Rio de Janeiro Olympics faced significant criticism for the extensive public spending amidst Brazil's economic struggles. Critics suggest that these funds could be better spent on essential public services like healthcare systems, education, and social welfare, which have a more immediate and lasting impact on the well-being of the population. Moreover, the infrastructure built for the Olympics often becomes underutilized after the event, leading to wasted resources and ongoing maintenance costs.
In my point of view, while the Olympics have undeniable benefits in terms of promoting international unity and sportsmanship, the financial implications cannot be overlooked. To balance both views, it is crucial for the International Olympic Committee and host nations to implement more sustainable practices. This could include using existing facilities, investing in multipurpose venues that benefit the community long after the games are over, and ensuring transparency in spending.
To conclude, the Olympic Games undoubtedly have the power to unite nations and inspire people worldwide. However, the significant financial burden they impose on host countries raises valid concerns. By adopting measures to reduce costs and ensure long-term benefits from Olympic investments, it is possible to maintain the positive aspects of the Games while addressing their economic challenges.
Some people think that the Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say the Olympics are a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discus...
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Thầy cô sửa bài giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at an art institution or organization as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In recent years, several tertiary education programs have required students to undertake unpaid work at companies or organizations. This practice, while beneficial in some respects, also has its drawbacks. This essay will detailedly discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a requirement.
To begin with, one significant advantage of unpaid work placements is the practical experience they provide. Students can apply their theoretical knowledge in real-world settings, which helps them develop valuable professional skills and competencies. For instance, a student studying engineering can gain hands-on experience with the latest technologies and methodologies, which enhances professional skills in the field. Additionally, practical work experience boosts employability, making graduates more attractive to potential employers. By working within a company, students can establish professional connections that may lead to future job offers. This networking can be crucial in industries where who you know can be as important as what you know.
However, there are some drawbacks that learners have to consider. The primary concern is financial strain. Many students already struggle with the high costs of tuition and living expenses. Unpaid work placements can exacerbate this situation, as students are required to work without earning an income. This can lead to significant financial difficulties, particularly for those from lower socioeconomic backgrounds. In addition, there is the potential for exploitation by employers who benefit from free labour. Some companies may take advantage of students, assigning them tasks that do not contribute to their learning or professional development. Another issue is inequality. Students from wealthier backgrounds are more likely to afford to work unpaid, whereas those from less privileged backgrounds may be unable to take up such opportunities, creating a gap betw can hinder the academic and professional progress of disadvantaged students.
In conclusion, while unpaid work placements offer practical experience, networking opportunities, and enhanced employability, they pose challenges such as financial strain, inequality, and academic pressure. By addressing these issues, the practice of requiring unpaid work can be made more equitable and beneficial for all students.
A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at an art institution or organization as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
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Task 1: The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates information about how much time men and women in the UK spend on leisure activities in minutes per day, whereas the bar chart depicts the figure for household activities in 2008.
Overall, there is a relative balance between the average time that both British men and women spend on entertaining activities. Another interesting point is that females in the UK spend most time of the day, engaging in household chores, except for repair that men spend more time on per day.
Regarding recreational activities, there is not a great disparity between the time that males and females in Britain spend on media with 137 and 118 minutes per day, respectively. Books and sports exercise occupy a marginal amount of time per day with 18 and 15 minutes for men, and 19 and 11 minutes for women, respectively.
In terms of housework activities, females in the UK spend a large amount of their time cooking and washing nearly 80 minutes per day, while the figure for men is just approximately 30 minutes per day. Meanwhile, the average time British men spend on repair is nearly 20 minutes per day, more than that of women with about 10 minutes.
Task 1: The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reportin...
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The bar chart compares how money was spent in five different categories across France and the UK in 2010.
Overall, it is evident that the expenditure of the UK was higher than France's spending on almost all goods and services. In addition, cars paid the highest expenses for both countries, while perfume recorded the lowest figures.
With regards to the United Kingdom's spending, cars were the leading category, with an impressive amount of money at 450,000 pounds. In contrast, books hold the second position, with the spending at 400,000 pounds. Interestingly, there was no significant distinction in pay among computers and cameras, as they all received an average expenditure of 350,000 pounds, which was roughly 200,000 pounds higher than the expenditure of the UK on perfume.
Turning to the pay of France, cars again offered the highest pay, at around 400,000 pounds. Computers secured the second place, with an average spending of 380,000 pounds. At 300,000 pounds, the expenditure on books was two times as much as that on perfume. Finally, the spending on cameras reaches the lowest point at just 150,000 pounds.
The bar chart compares how money was spent in five different categories across France and the UK in 2010.
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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the ever-growing issue of excessive packaging has sparked debate regarding responsibility. Some contend that manufacturers and retail outlets have the responsibility to provide items with minimal packaging, whereas others believe that the onus is on customers to make informed choices. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and argue that both parties should take responsibility for reducing packaging waste.
On the one hand, major retailers and producers are responsible for producing products' packaging, therefore, they are supposed to take the initiative in cutting it down. In terms of manufacturers, they could simplify their packaging. Specifically, they can utilize innovative packaging designs that use less materials and implement more sustainable practices by using environmentally friendly materials. Supermarkets can opt for products with minimal packaging or packaging made from sustainable materials. For instance, there has been a significant change in the packaging at the deli counter in some supermarkets. Styrofoam boxes have been replaced by sugarcane boxes, which protect not only the environment but also consumers' health. The product is made from 100% bagasse, can stand high temperatures, and disintegrate easily within a few weeks. In this way, businesses can set the standard and take the lead in reducing packaging waste.
On the other hand, consumers also have a crucial role to play in reducing packaging waste. By this I mean, by choosing products with minimal packaging and boycotting excessively packaged items, customers can influence companies to adopt more sustainable practices to boost the sales volume. However, consumers should be aware of “greenwashing” , where companies make misleading claims about the environmental benefits of their products. Moreover, individuals should opt for biodegradable or reusable bags, which would remarkably reduce the amount of plastic waste. As a result, customers could drive positive changes in packaging practices."
In conclusion, the effectiveness of reducing packaging waste hinges on a cooperative effort between manufacturers, retailers, and consumers. A shared sense of responsibility and collaborative action are paramount in overcoming critical environmental issues posed by excessive packaging.
Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.
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Space exploration is too expensive and money should be spent on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Space exploration has long been a topic of debate, particularly regarding its cost and the allocation of financial resources. From my perspective, I acknowledge that space missions are costly, I agree with the notion that money could be better spent on more pressing issues. However, I believe that the benefits of space exploration should not be overlooked.
First and foremost, the high costs associated with space exploration can be seen as a significant drawback. For instance, missions to the Moon, Mars, or beyond require substantial investment in technology, research, and infrastructure. These funds could arguably address urgent problems on Earth, such as poverty, healthcare, and education. Allocating financial resources to improve living standards, tackle climate change, or invest in sustainable energy solutions might yield more immediate and tangible benefits for humanity. In addition, money spent on space programs often does not directly benefit the average person. In times of economic hardship, it seems impractical to prioritize expenditures on exploratory endeavors that do not offer immediate returns or solve existing societal issues. This perspective suggests that resources should be redirected towards enhancing public services and addressing critical needs.
However, space exploration brings numerous benefits that extend beyond the immediate costs. Technological advancements driven by space research have led to innovations that impact everyday life, such as improvements in telecommunications, materials science, and medical technology. For example, technologies developed for space missions have contributed to advancements in satellite communications, GPS systems, and even medical imaging techniques. These innovations can address some of the very issues that are seen as more pressing, such as healthcare and disaster management. Additionally, space exploration has a role in inspiring future generations and fostering international cooperation. It encourages scientific curiosity and promotes collaboration between nations, which can lead to shared advancements and global problem-solving. The pursuit of knowledge and exploration also has the potential to unite people around common goals and aspirations, fostering a sense of global citizenship and collective progress.
In conclusion, while it is reasonable to argue that the costs of space exploration could be redirected towards immediate and pressing needs, the long-term benefits and advancements derived from such endeavors should not be dismissed. A balanced approach is essential, where investments in space exploration are carefully managed and aligned with broader goals of addressing pressing global issues.
Space exploration is too expensive and money should be spent on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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State whether you agree or disagree with the following statement, and why:"The process of inner growth is a process of constant self-discovery. If we don't understand ourselves first, it will be difficult for us to understand others."
Inner growth is a journey of understanding ourselves. Through personal development, we dive deep into our thoughts, emotions, and core values, gaining insights into our true feelings. This process of self-discovery isn’t easy; it requires patience and time. As we work to change unpleasant habits, it becomes challenging if we lack discipline and struggle with accepting feedback. Without a clear sense of our passions and core values, we might experience low motivation and poor self-discipline.
Despite the time and effort required, the results of self-understanding can be transformative. A solid grasp of our own emotions and behaviors helps us recognize similar patterns in others, fostering greater empathy. This self-awareness also allows us to adapt our personalities to different situations and avoid conflicts. Moreover, it helps us understand our own biases and judgments, making us more open-minded and accepting.
In conclusion, understanding ourselves is like having a map that guides us in our interactions with others. By knowing our emotional triggers and thought patterns, we gain a better appreciation for where others are coming from. This empathy and understanding lead to more supportive and positive relationships. Therefore, investing in self-understanding enriches our ability to connect with and understand the people around us.
State whether you agree or disagree with the following statement, and why:"The process of inner growth is a process of constant self-discovery. If we don't understand ourselves first, it will be diffi...
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Topic : "Should Emphasizing Self-Discovery Take Priority Over Keeping Pace with Rapid Digital Advancements?"
In the age of digital revolution, we tend to be lost amid information presented, sometimes, we are over-emphasizing the need to pace the rapidly developing world, this results in our initial personality and characteristics being lost and underprioritized. Despite the benefits of keeping on track with society, I firmly believe that understanding ourselves should be the fundamentals of life.
Firstly, understanding our personality contributes to pride and self-esteem. As we can predict our capability and strength, our decision-making ability becomes precise and logical, allowing us to proceed without fearing for other's claims.
Secondly, understanding our inner self is the first milestone to success. By understanding our minds, we can make accurate decisions and work efficiently. Mastering this would allow us to be ahead of anyone without working effortlessly to catch up with the modern world
Last but not least, by trapping ourselves into endlessly adapting to the changing society, we lose many opportunities in life. By focusing on changing with society, we are losing our opportunities to distinguish ourselves from the rest of the population that needs to know where they are going. Instead of jumping on the bandwagon, we could focus on cultivating our unique strengths and interests.
In conclusion, while keeping pace with the digital age is crucial for staying relevant and informative, it is equally important to prioritize self-discovery and personal growth. By understanding our personality, values, and aspirations, we could guid ourselves to the closest route to success by avoiding an unnecessary obstacle in the way.
Topic : "Should Emphasizing Self-Discovery Take Priority Over Keeping Pace with Rapid Digital Advancements?"
In the age of digital revolution, we tend to be lost amid information presented, someti...
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Đề: In the past, people used to travel abroad to look for many other things different from in their home country. Nowadays, cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Previously, people travelled abroad to seek new and unique experiences different from their home nations. These days, cities worldwide are becoming increasingly similar. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this trend and argue that its disadvantages outweigh the advantages. While there are two major reasons for the current phenomenon, such as the expansion of the tourism industry and the desire for modernization among cities, I consider that this trend would bring about significant drawbacks, namely the loss of cultural identity and decline in tourism development, which outnumber the benefits.
This trend is driven by two factors. The first is the tourism industry expansion. Given that cities cater to international tourists by providing familiar accommodations and eating options, many successful models are constructed in many parts of the world. To illustrate, global fast-food chains like KFC and McDonald’s are ubiquitous, offering familiar meals to travellers. Another contribution factor is the willingness to modernise. Many developing cities aspire to replicate the success of Western metropolises by adopting similar urban planning strategies and architectural designs. An example of this is China's replica of the Eiffel Tower. Therefore, residents of some countries no longer need to travel abroad to experience aspects of other cultures.
Despite this, this phenomenon could result in two considerable disadvantages. Firstly, it can diminish cultural identity. As cities adopt similar features, they risk losing their unique cultural identities and traditions. For instance, traditional structures in big Japanese cities like Machiya and Nagaya in Tokyo are increasingly replaced by modern skyscrapers, eroding the historical architecture.Secondly, the homogenization of cities can lead to a decline in tourism. If every city starts to look the same, tourists may lose interest in travelling abroad, finding it pointless and unexciting. This trend is evident in Greece, where traditional villages are being replaced by modern resorts, reducing the appeal of its cultural heritage.
To summarise, the similarity between nations is caused by expansion of the tourism industry and willingness to modernise, which bring about two main drawbacks: the decrease in cultural identity and tourism development. Therefore, while the globalisation of urban design and amenities may provide some conveniences, the disadvantages of this trend eclipse its benefits.
Đề: In the past, people used to travel abroad to look for many other things different from in their home country. Nowadays, cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the...
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The given table depicts the municipal and universal investigation of students of higher education in Australia between 2001 and 2010, while the pie charts illustrate the percentages of genders among those students.
Overall, the total number of research students experienced a notable escalation throughout both years. Notably, the figure for municipal study students made up more students than the count of global research students over the given period. Despite this, the percentage of local research students witnessed a decline as that of international students increased. Additionally, the distribution of genders remained relatively balanced.
As can be seen from the table, initially standing at 33.657 and 5.192 respectively. Also, it is evident that the figure for native students was nearly 7 times as much as that of universal students. Conversely, there was a significant increase in the number of both native and international students at the end of the period, recording 39.488 and 14.593 respectively.
Regarding the distribution of gender in same students in Australian universities. Non-local females accounted for the lowest share of exactly 4% at the beginning, after which it increased substantially by 15%, which was nearly 4 times as much as the first percentage. Similarly, there was a minor expansion in the counterparts rate from 9% to 12% during this period. In contrast, the figures for both native genders witnessed a notable decrease over the two years.
The given table depicts the municipal and universal investigation of students of higher education in Australia between 2001 and 2010, while the pie charts illustrate the percentages of genders among...
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The use of books should be completely eliminated and replaced with TV, games and movies when teaching children. Do you agree or disagree?
There are arguments that the methods of teaching in schools should be transformed from traditional materials, such as books, to media ones including TV shows, video games and movies. In my opinion, I agree that the later will help students to study more effectively, I think remove books from education system is totally wrong.
First and foremost, learning through games or films is beneficial for children, especially with abstract subjects including maths and physics. It is proved that absorb information by images helps children to remember knowledge better and clearer instead of books filled with letters with confusing definitions. By this way, they not only significantly understand knowledge, but also have an interest in studying.
However, books still play a crucial role in education and imparting knowledge to children. It is obvious that books contain more specific and efficient piece of information. In an effort to assist students in making out abstract definition, only watching TV or playing games is not enough. This is because movies or games do not explain in detail but only visualize knowledge for them to see.
In conclusion, it is reasonable for some to suggest teaching children by images through televisions and games, I think it will be detrimental to the understanding of children without information learning from books. Teachers should combine two of these methods to get the best results in conveying knowledge.
There are arguments that the methods of teaching in schools should be transformed from traditional materials, such as books, to media ones including TV shows, video games and movies. In my opinion, I...
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Many people believe that work-life balance is more important than career success. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued that work-life balance plays a pivotal role over career development in the contemporary world. From my perspective, maintaining a balance between work and personal life is more crucial than achieving high levels of career success. To a significant extent, I agree with this statement for several reasons.
First and foremost, work-life balance is essential for maintaining good health and overall well-being. Long hours and high stress levels associated with career success can lead to physical and mental health issues such as burnout, anxiety, and depression. For example, I once had a colleague who prioritized career advancement over personal time. While she achieved rapid promotions, she eventually faced severe health problems, necessitating a long break from work to recover. This illustrates that without a balance, the pursuit of career success can come at a high personal cost.
Additionally, a balanced life allows individuals to nurture relationships with family and friends, which is vital for emotional support and personal fulfillment. People who spend excessive time at work often miss out on important life events and the opportunity to build strong personal connections. For instance, during my own experience in a demanding job, I noticed that those who managed to maintain a healthy work-life balance were generally happier and more content, as they had time to engage in hobbies and spend quality time with loved ones. These personal experiences and relationships can provide a sense of purpose and happiness that career achievements alone might not offer.
In conclusion, while career success is undoubtedly important, work-life balance should be prioritized as it leads to better health, stronger personal relationships, and increased productivity. Striking a balance between work and personal life not only ensures a more fulfilling life but also supports sustainable and meaningful career success.
Many people believe that work-life balance is more important than career success. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer and include any relevant...
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The given line graph illustrates how much the mobile phone , domestical and international public services were spent on average annually bt consumers in theUnited State over 9 years interval starting in 2001
Overall, there was a gradual decline in spending of national services , whereas both the expenditure of mobile phone and fixed-line services had increase tendency . In addition, It is notable that international services saw almost no obvious change during the period shown
Looking at the line graph, it is clear that the average annual expenditure of both fixed-line and cell phone services started at 200 and 250 dollar respectively, after which they experienced steady growth in the last of year. Notably, Expenditure’s public services abroad remained relatively unchanged ,at 300 dollar during the period
The annual spending of national services began at 700 dollar , followed by a continuously slight decrease , at 400 dollar and also expenditure’s cellphone underwent a progressive rise to just under 800 dollar, which consistenly had by far the highest in 2010
The given line graph illustrates how much the mobile phone , domestical and international public services were spent on average annually bt consumers in theUnited State over 9 years interval starting...
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In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
In certain countries, there is a growing trend of encouraging young individuals to take a gap year between completing high school and beginning university studies. This practice offers advantages and disadvantages, impacting various aspects of a young person's personal and collegiate development.
On the one hand, taking an educational break offers a wide range of benefits by providing the opportunity for personal growth and self-discovery. Being exposed to real-world experiences fosters maturity and independence. Therefore, students have more worthwhile opportunities for introspection and understanding personal interests and goals. For example, volunteering abroad can foster empathy and cultural awareness, while working part-time can instill a strong work ethic and financial responsibility. Besides, time off can aid students return to academia with renewed energy and a clearer sense of purpose after years of hard study. By offering a chance for students to clarify their intellectual and career goals through reflection on their interests, strengths, and aspirations, a gap year enables individuals to make more informed decisions about their future educational goals.
On the other hand, a year away from formal education can make it challenging to return to a structured academic environment. A gap year causes students may disrupt the educational momentum (phá vỡ động lực giáo dục) and routine established during high school and lose proficiency in study habits and academic skills over the break. In addition, learners also have to face social and emotional challenges such as isolation from peers or emotional stress because being out of sync with peers who proceed directly to university can lead to feelings of isolation and adjusting to new environments and experiences can be emotionally taxing. Moreover, there is a risk that some individuals may struggle to re-enter formal education after an extended break, experiencing difficulty in adapting to the rigorous demands of university coursework.
In conclusion, while having a gap year offers numerous benefits like personal growth, self-discovery, and enhanced academic clarity, it presents challenges such as educational disruption and reintegration difficulties. Ultimately, the decision to pursue a period off should be carefully considered based on individual circumstances and goals, weighing the potential advantages and disadvantages to make an informed choice.
In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
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Task 1: The table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tabulated chart illustrates comprehensive information on how many university students enrolled in exchange programs from Europe to Australia and vice-versa. The study was conducted between 2007 and 2009.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the total number of students exchanging from Europe to Australia, which was mainly due to the increased number of German and Swedish students.
Meanwhile, no difference was seen in the figure for students from the reverse exchange program. In addition, France consistently contributed the most people to both international education projects.
Regarding the Europe-Australia exchange project, in 2007, 61 French students joined the programme. The figure remained nearly unchanged up to 2009, at 60 people, making it the greatest contributor among the five countries. A similar pattern was true for The Netherlands, maintaining at 36 throughout the period examined. Meanwhile, Sweden and Germany experienced a surge in the number of exchange undergraduates, which increased significantly from 32 and 27 in 2007 to 42 and 63 respectively in 2009.
With concerns to the vice-versa program, France accounted for 37 students in 2007, followed by an escalation to an impressive number of 58 in 2009. Similarly, in 2007, the figure for Germany was only 18, after which it expanded to 26 in the year 2009. The Netherlands, however, took a nosedive from 32 to just only 18 students by the end of the period.
Câu hỏi thêm: với các dạng task 1 có nhiều data và categories như table (như bài bên trên) thì trong đoạn thân bài em có được lược bỏ một số data và chỉ miêu tả những ý chính không (ví dụ trong bảng trên có 5
nước thì chỉ miêu tả 3 nước có xu hướng rõ rệt và lược đi 2 nước còn lại, không đề cập gì đến 2 nước đó trong thân bài). Làm điều này liệu có ảnh hưởng đến điểm TA không ạ, vì em sợ report thiếu nên lúc nào cũng cố gắng đề cập hết tất cả các categories (dù có thể không miêu tả kỹ) dẫn đến việc viết bài rất mất thời gian khi nhóm các thông tin và cố nặn ra cho đủ các câu trúc để mô tả hết các số liệu. Các thầy cô có thể chia sẻ làm thế nào để lược bỏ số liệu đưa vào trong bài một cách hợp lí mà không bị mất điểm được không ạ? Em cảm ơn ạ!
Task 1: The table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compar...
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