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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ
Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day, they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the causes and solutions?
Many elderly people indeed struggle with loneliness and inadequate physical fitness. This phenomenon can be attributed to several reasons, and solutions should be taken by the government to alleviate the circumstances.
There are two primary reasons why many older individuals are facing isolation and poor physical condition. Firstly, young generations tend to live far away from the elderly and leave them to fend for themselves. This is because many youngsters want to settle in areas that provide a better environment and career opportunities; hence, older adults may feel marginalized. For instance, many young Vietnamese people leave their rural hometowns and move to developed cities to get high-paying jobs and gain a better standard of living. Regarding physical fitness, lacking specific healthcare equipment can negatively affect senior citizens’ health. If they are living in poor conditions that lack available training facilities, it can prevent them from physical activity.
However, several solutions could be implemented to tackle this issue. The first solution would be for the government to improve the citizens’ well-being in some rural regions. If they could reduce the low employment rate, mitigate pollution, and flourish the robust economy in those areas, young adults might not migrate to another place to work. Consequently, they can live near the elderly and cater directly to them. The second solution requires the government to subsidize community centers and healthcare facilities in any neighborhood. This can help the older age groups access to age-appropriate exercise classes and programs. As a result, senior citizens may be motivated to do more exercise.
In conclusion, there are several causes for the elderly community coping with loneliness and low levels of fitness, and steps need to be taken by the government to tackle this problem. It can be predicted that with implementation for better well-being and appropriate funding for healthcare services, this issue would likely be alleviated soon.
Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day, they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness....
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em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
Dinosaurs which were no longer exist in this world from the previous decades can be taken as one of examples for the extinction of special organisms, indicating as a part of natural events. In addition, human is not relevant to these events, so it is not necessary for them to prevent it. However, I firmly believe that the interference of human to hinder these processes would be a crucial consideration.
An outstanding explanation for this perspective is that human have the responsibility to preserve the life of endangered animals. By standing at the dominant position in most of food chains, human is one of potential species which were empowered to control and protect other animals from a high risk of disappearance. Particularly, within their well-being and morality, people seem more determination and dedicated in this duty. For instance, dealing with rhino, a species predicted to be extincted in the following years, numerous scientists have cooperated with organizations to apply the advance of biotechnology to prolong this animal’s life as much as they can. Thus, maintaining this work in decades has made it become an obligation for any individual.
Moreover, a negative feeling is other feasible reason that promotes people to prevent this natural process. The decrease of animals may be a consequence of the drastic change in climate, triggered by the pollution from human’s activities. Therefore, people are more likely to experience a sense of guilty, and attempting to protect animals is their way to compensate to ecosystem and the Earth. Indeed, this feeling can foster people to interrupt the natural events associated with the life of organisms being harm by their action.
To conclude, people have no request to prevent the occurrence of natural process such as the extinction of species. However, I absolutely disagree with this point because both the responsibility and the feel of guilty feasibly contribute to human interference.
Dinosaurs which were no longer exist in this world from the previous decades can be taken as one of examples for the extinction of special organisms, indicating as a part of natural events. In additio...
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thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People in many parts of the world prefer having their own house to renting one. In these parts, the house plays a vital role in people’s lives. In my opinion, although having many benefits, it also has drawbacks that people have to cope with.
There are various reasons leading to this situation. First, having your own house will bring you a private space. Owning a home provides a sense of stability and security for the future, as homeowners can build or fix their houses based on their hobbies. For instance, when someone wants to paint or decorate something in the house, they do not need to ask homeowners for permission. Therefore, everyone might spend more time staying at home rather than hanging out for entertainment which leads to saving entertainment costs. Another reason is that you do not have any financial burdens of accommodation after having your own property. Thus, the amount of money spent on accommodation before will be saved or spent on other aesthetic activities.
Having your own possessions such as a house has both advantages and disadvantages. On the other hand, it helps encourage the young generation to make an effort for a better life because they have to have a huge amount of money when having an intention of buying a new house or an apartment. Therefore, the whole community will develop together. On the other hand, there are also potential drawbacks to prioritizing owning a home. For instance, it might lead to financial strain due to high upfront costs and ongoing maintenance expenses. Additionally, renting offers more flexibility and freedom of movement.
In conclusion, having or renting a house has both positive and negative sides, it depends on the individual’s demand, background, and housing market.
People in many parts of the world prefer having their own house to renting one. In these parts, the house plays a vital role in people’s lives. In my opinion, although having many benefits, it also ha...
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Thầy cô sửa bài giùm em với ạ. E cảm ơn nhiều
The line chart provides the breakdown of the proportion of different age groups visiting cinema in one nation between 1978 and 2008.
Overall, it is evident that the percentage of people whose age ranging from 14 to 24 was the highest. While the proportion of people under 50 witnessed a decrease, the figure for people aged 50 or over rised and was equal to that for people aged 35 to 49.
In 1978, the percentage of people aged 14 to 24 was the highest amongst 4 groups, which was 90%, and it underwent a fall to under 80%, followed by the proportion of people aged 25-34 and 35-49 with 60% and 40% respectively. The period from 1998 to 2003 remained stable in the figure for people under 50 before witnessing a downward trend. In 2008, the percentage of people aged under 24 still achieved the top spot, which was 80% and it was nearly 15% and 20% more than the figure for people aged 25-34 and 35-49 respectively.
While a similar trend was seen in the figure for people over 50 where the proportion of individuals fell from 40% to 20% in 1988, becoming the lowest and then remained unchanged at 40% until 2003, then this group saw a opposite trend compared to other groups, which increased and have a similar percentage of people aged 25-49, which was 50%.
The line chart provides the breakdown of the proportion of different age groups visiting cinema in one nation between 1978 and 2008.
Overall, it is evident that the percentage of people whose age r...
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that some individuals enjoy repeating similar activities and hesitate to experience variations while I am inclined to the idea that modification is a pivotal aspect of personal growth, which will be elaborated in this essay.
On the one hand, people have a preference for maintaining their similar habits since the appeal lies in the comfort and security that familiarity brings. This means that by sticking to a daily routine, individuals feel a sense of stability and control over their environment where they can hone skills and expertise in specific areas, leading to achieving proficiency and mastery without any disorientation. Since experimenting with multifarious things might hinder a person’s ability to lay emphasis on a single task in certain situations, which has some unpleasant influences on productivity, especially for those who possess poor mentality. Additionally, people have merely adopted a fear of uncertainty that prevents them from changing their lives. To be more specific, they are skeptical about whether the change that they make, such as in jobs, will bring the same level of satisfaction as the previous one or not, which definitely explains why many people despise change and adhere to the same activities.
On the other hand, it is indispensable that embracing change is a potential to foster personal growth. Change introduces new challenges, experiences, and opportunities, pushing individuals out of the comfort zone and promoting adaptability and learning, especially in today’s society. This is because in a multitude of fields, robots and artificial intelligence might supersede humans as a result of the rapid advancements of technology, forcing people to cultivate a mindset that is flexible and adaptive in order to navigate the complexities of a changing world. Take, for example, those who do manual jobs are susceptible to being replaced by artificial intelligence which brings higher efficiency and requires a one-time investment if they do not equip themselves with skills and knowledge to meet current needs. Furthermore, it is crucial for individuals to be more strong-minded and confident and enhance their resilience by overcoming hurdles and setbacks, which benefits them in the long term.
In conclusion, although pursuing stability and routine is valid, I advocate the view that adaptability and openness to change are more valued traits to realize one’s fullest potential and contribute meaningfully to the world.
It is argued that some individuals enjoy repeating similar activities and hesitate to experience variations while I am inclined to the idea that modification is a pivotal aspect of personal growth, wh...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The charts illustrate the class size of primary schools in four various states in 2010.
Overall, the group of 25-30 accounted for the most ubiquitous size in most states, save for South Australia. While students under 20 in four states was a very small figure.
Regarding New South Wales, there was 37% of 25-30 students, reaching the highest proportion, followed by the students over 30 and 21-25 with 33% and 26% respectively. In contrast, South Australia had the largest number of 21-25-year old students, while the 25-30s was only 2% lower. Notably, the age group of under 20 in these two states was equal (4%).
As for Australia Capital Territory, the students at the age of 25-30 constituted a half of the total of the class size. Students aged 21-25 accounted for 38%, while the group of over 30 was only 10%. Similarly, Western Australia took the highest percentage of the 25-30s, with 42%. Students at the age of under 21-25 and over 30 shared the same figure, with 26% and 27% respectively. In addition, students under 20 constituted a tiny figure, Australian Capital Territory was only 1% and Western Australia was 5%.
The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re...
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bài task 2 của em ạ mong thầy cô chấm chữa
People have differing views about their way of living. While some argue that it is preferable to do similar activities and stay away from changes, I still believe that alteration is also crucial, which I will elucidate in this essay.
On the one hand, some individuals have a preference for stability and consistency in their lives. This is because part of them possesses a poor mentality and is afraid of obstacles and risks. To be more specific, they claim that embracing change could lead to uncertainty and discomfort, potentially threatening their sense of security, and ultimately their peace of mind; therefore, sticking to the same routine can lead to a more comfortable life and also help reduce stress and anxiety. Additionally, a firm way of living is acceptable for several ages, for instance, the old. Over time, people become accustomed to their routines and environment, which makes the idea of altering less alluring because it requires effort to break established patterns. As a result, leaning on a fixed daily life may be risk-averse and confer life satisfaction.
On the other hand, proponents of change argue that it is essential for personal and professional growth. In the modern era, technology is experiencing unprecedented growth, forcing people to constantly adapt and improve themselves to stay current. A compelling example can be observed in various large businesses such as Google or Apple, where staff have to actively acquire and update new skills in order to avoid being replaced by artificial intelligence. For this reason, alteration is increasingly crucial to catch up with the times and avoid being marginalized. Furthermore, the ability to adapt to changes is vital to build a confident mind and resilience. Only by exposing to new challenges can individuals become strong-minded, overcome hurdles, and cope with uncertainties and setbacks more effectively.
In conclusion, while staying in one’s comfort zone may provide comfort and satisfaction, occasional change is necessary to stimulate personal growth as well as adaptability. I believe that balancing the benefits of stability and change can help individuals lead to fulfilling and resilient lives.
People have differing views about their way of living. While some argue that it is preferable to do similar activities and stay away from changes, I still believe that alteration is also crucial, whic...
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The diagram below shows how the Australian
Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-
minute information on the weather in order
to produce reliable forecasts
The given diagram illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collect datas to forecast the weather. Overall, there are four stages, beginning with the collection of information from different ways, and turning it into broadcast.
As can be seen from the diagram, in the first step, there are 3 ways of collecting incoming information. The satellite receives information and sends datas to the satellite photo for analysis or it can either passes figures to radar, and the synoptic, where the analysis process taking place, gets them. Moreover, rada and drifting bouy can also directly collect signals, which will be processed by radar screen and synoptic chart, depending on their origins.
It is clear that all signals will undergo the computer to prepare for the broadcast. After finishing preparation, they will be broadcast to the public through TV newsreader or delivered to radio and recorded announcement.
The given diagram illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collect datas to forecast the weather. Overall, there are four stages, beginning with the collection of information from differen...
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A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at companies or organisations as part of their programs. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement?
There are requirements of university courses that undergraduates have to work for companies or organizations without being paid to service educational progress. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of this issues.
Interning when being in university brings students benefits for later in life. It is obvious that most companies when recruiting employees tend to ask their candidates to be experienced. It means working as part of the programs in university brings them hands-on experience, which helps them to be hired easier when they seeking for a job after their graduation. Furthermore, working for organizations not only a chance to apply knowledge taught at school in reality, but also to broaden social circle.
On the contrary, there are potential drawbacks in working with no payment for students. To begin with, it may cause students to be demotivated as they have to spend a quite part of time working for other cooperations but gain no material achievements. Moreover not every one is ready to do an internship due to the matter of time. For example, some students will do a part-time job to pay for their living costs, which partly supporting expenses for their family. Consequently, taking on more work as requested by tertiary courses means limiting their time for earning money, leading to difficulties in finance.
In conclusion, besides benefits coming from unpaid work, students may face some disadvantages during a period of time due to personal financial problems.
There are requirements of university courses that undergraduates have to work for companies or organizations without being paid to service educational progress. This essay will discuss the positive an...
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em nhờ thầy cô chấm chữa bài giúp em ạ
The table illustrates the daily amount of oil produced in four countries from 2000 to 2004.
Overall, it is notable that Congo was a leading producer of oil over the first four years, which was taken over by Nigeria in the last year. Moreover, the most notable shift was seen in the figure for Somalia.
In 2000, the amount of oil production of Somalia per day was 205,000 barrels per day before declining slightly to 190,000 barrels in the first 2 years whereas Chad didn't witness any oil produced in the first 3 years. However, the figure for chart initially just produced 8,000 barrels each day in comparison to 210,000 in Nigeria. While the slight uptake in the yield of oil in Nigeria seen in the last year had made itself surpass Congo to top the chart with 213,000 barrels per day by 2004, the similar picture was also seen in Chad witnessing six-fold rise, producing 50,000 barrels daily in the same year.
In terms of Congo and Somalia, their quotidian oil output were 275,000 and 5,000 barrels respectively. while the former witnessed a substantial decline to 203,000 barrels, the oppsite was also true for Somalia, experiencing a fivefold increase to 50,000 which was the same amount as Chad in the last year of the period.
The table illustrates the daily amount of oil produced in four countries from 2000 to 2004.
Overall, it is notable that Congo was a leading producer of oil over the first four years, which was taken o...
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The provided maps demonstrate how small regional museum and green space changed after some developments over a 50-year period, starting from 1957 to 2007.
As can be seen from the maps, the museum site experienced considerable changes during this period, and the most of which is the erection of more new facilities. In addition, this relocation, along with modifications to its surroundings, represents major alterations.
The most obvious change can be observed in the municipal museum, located in the center of the maps. With the replacement of the national history room and museum store room by other services, with the exception of the local history room that remained unchanged.
Additionally, the small pathway that ran from the main road to the entrance hall,located between the local history room and the museum storeroom, was removed to accommodate a parking lot. The tree-filled area significantly reduced the number of trees and the orientation of entrance was changed, the museum shop is now located there.
The provided maps demonstrate how small regional museum and green space changed after some developments over a 50-year period, starting from 1957 to 2007.
As can be seen from the maps, the museum sit...
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Details regarding the changing landscape of an area since 1995 are pictorially delineated in the diagrams. Overall, while the northern spot has remained virtually unaltered, the other sections of the town have developed significantly, the most noticeable of which is an increase in accommodations and the alteration of recreational facilities.
Regarding the north, there used to be a farmland on the northeast, which has been converted into sports areas, including a golf course and a tennis court.
Concerning the central area, on the left side of the artery running from the south to north, cuisine areas have been erected on the place where a sports center previously stood, while more houses have been constructed alongside a newly extended road. Looking at the right one, the public park has been demolished to make a way for the construction of holiday homes and a car park. Meanwhile, the hotels have been upgraded, being extended in height.
With respect to the sea boundary in the south, there has been the removal of a fish market, allowing for a large residential areas. This area has undergone the construction of a side road connecting the café and the main street. Notably, the morning fish boat spot in the west has been removed, whereas a new place for yacht activities has been introduced.
Details regarding the changing landscape of an area since 1995 are pictorially delineated in the diagrams. Overall, while the northern spot has remained virtually unaltered, the other sections of the...
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The question of whether young people should save money for their future is a topic that sparks diverse opinions. While people argue that saving money for the future plays an important role, I am of the opinion that maintaining balance should be a priority.
Proponents of the idea that young people should save money have their own justifications. Firstly, saving money helps them have huge savings to use to cope with emergency situations, such as medical emergencies. Besides that, money savings are also needed to prepare for some big future targets like buying houses, cars, and startups. This is mainly due to the fact that it is hard to practice successfully without a long-term savings plan.
Despite the aforementioned arguments, I believe that sometimes savings have a diverse impact on all people, especially young generations. One compelling reason is that concentrating too much on savings can prevent them from enjoying the fun things in their lives, such as exploring, studying, and entertaining, which offers them a lot of opportunities to improve their personal skills. Moreover, the uncertainty of the future can raise doubts about the wastefulness of savings. As a result, inflation, economic depression, and the transformation of life can decrease the value of savings, which makes saving money unsafe anymore.
Personally, I believe that a balanced method is the most beneficial. While saving money for unexpected situations and targeting the future, enjoying current life is equally important. For me, we should spend a part of our income on saving and the rest on personal preferences, which permits us not only safety but also pleasure.
The question of whether young people should save money for their future is a topic that sparks diverse opinions. While people argue that saving money for the future plays an important role, I am of th...
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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal ages for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that higher legal driving ages is the most effective method to ensure road safety. I think that only allow older ages to drive may contribute to making road safer, while I see there are more measures for this problem.
The rate of traffic incidents will be likely to drop if raising the legal ages for driving. To begin with, adolescents drive more aggressively, amounting to the possibility of car accidents. This is because they tend to break the laws, such as driving at high speed on crowded streets. However, this is less the case for adults who are more aware of the safety of their own and having driving experience, so they usually drive carefully and having skills to handle unexpected situations. Consequently, minimizing the number adolescents participating in traffic means optimizing the road safety level.
Besides the above measure, there are more solutions to protect the safety of traffic participants. It requires the effort of the government to prevent traffic accidents. This means that launching campaigns in order to raise awareness of people about the importance of driving safely and encourage people, particularly newbies, to sharpen their driving skills are necessary. Besides, stricter penalties should be introduced for the purpose of deterring people from traffic offences, so that drivers will pay more attention their behavior, especially when having the thought of violating traffic laws.
In conclusion, although older legal ages will play a significant role in decreasing potential danger of road, there are other strategies prevent traffic accidents.
It is believed that higher legal driving ages is the most effective method to ensure road safety. I think that only allow older ages to drive may contribute to making road safer, while I see there are...
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The diagram below shows how coffee is
produced and prepared for sale in
supermarkets and shops.
The given picture illustrates the production and preparation of coffee to sale on the market. Overall, there 11 stages in the process, starting by picking the coffee beans and ending with packing.
According to the diagram, coffee beans are picked from the plant by an employee before lied on the ground to be dried by the sun in the filed. In the two next steps, the coffee beans are roasted and quickly cooled down, which will be put in a grinder in order to get ground coffee granules.
As can be seen, the product from the previous stage is mixed with hot water, which is, after a period of time, strained and frozen in the machine. Following that is the frozen liquid being ground in the grinder and dried up in a vacuum, which evaporates water. Finally, the coffee is packed into jars, so that it can be displayed at stores or supermarkets, meeting the needs of customers for this product.
The given picture illustrates the production and preparation of coffee to sale on the market. Overall, there 11 stages in the process, starting by picking the coffee beans and ending with packing....
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Mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài writing task 2 này ạ
Topic: As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are causes and what are the effects on both individuals and society as a whole.
Developed nations are witnessing a shift in family structures, with a growing trend of individuals and smaller families replacing traditional extended households. This phenomenon is driven by several causative factors and carries both positive and negative consequences for individuals and society.
There are several reasons why people choose to live alone or in small families instead of in larger ones. One primary reason for this trend is the soaring cost of real estate. In today's world, housing prices have skyrocketed, making owning a large family home an unattainable dream for many. This financial pressure forces individuals to opt for smaller apartments or condominiums, simply unsuitable for large families. Furthermore, career opportunities play a significant role. Urban centers often offer better employment prospects with higher salaries, attracting people away from their families. For instance, in Vietnam, countless young people migrate to metropolises like Hanoi or Saigon seeking higher education and pursuing lucrative careers. Finally, generational differences also play a part. The widening gap in lifestyles and values between generations in large families can lead to friction and conflict. This erosion of family harmony can ultimately weaken the ties that bind extended families together.
The effects of this shift in family structures are multifaceted. For individuals, on the one hand, they may gain greater independence and career mobility. Living away from extended families allows them to pursue personal goals and professional aspirations with less interference. However, loneliness and anxiety, paired with pent-up stress due to the hectic pace of life in metropolises, may cause mental issues for people who lack the unwavering support from their families. Furthermore, the erosion of traditional extended family values may have negative impacts on societal cohesion. The strong social network provided by such kinds of families may deteriorate, leading to the eruption of social support systems.
In conclusion, there are various reasons for family structure shifting. In addition, it is evident that this trend may lead to both positive and negative effects for individuals and society.
Topic: As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are causes and what are the effects on both individuals and society as a whole....
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportions of energy consumption in typical Australian household and its consequency, which is exhaust gas emissions.
Overall, while heating takes up the major role of household energy use, water heating represents the main part of greenhouse gas emissions. Moreover, cooling takes up the lowest part in both of charts.
The heating and the water heating take up the highest and second highest percentage of enery usage, with 42% and 30%, respectively. However, refrigeration, the cooling and lighting merely represent for 7%, 2%, and 4% correspondingly. In addition, other appliances take up for 15%.
Regard to household exhaust gas emissions, the water heating takes the main role, followed by heating with 32% and 15% in turn. The refrigeration represents for 14%, while the cooling and the lighting take up 3% and 8%, respectively. Finally, other applicances represent for 28%, which is the second highest proportion of the chart.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportions of energy consumption in typical Australian household and its consequency, which is exhaust gas emissions.
Overall, while heating takes up the major ro...
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The table indicates the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum, while the two pie charts illustrate the proportions of visitors’ satisfaction rate before and after the museum’s refurbishment.
Overall, there was a gradual rise of the number of visitor after the refurbishment. Moreover, the percentage of people who felt very satisfied and satisfied increased dramatically, while it was a reduction for dissatified ones.
In the year before the museum’s refurbishment, the sum of visitors was 74000. But after the refurbishment, that number increased to 92000.
Before the museum was refurbished, the proportion of dissatisfied people took up the major part on the chart, followed by satisfied ones’, with 40% and 30%, respectively. It took 15% of people who very satisfied and 10% of people who very dissatisfied. There was 5% of people had no response.
After the museum’s refurbishment, the percentage of people who satisfied increased to 40%, followed by satisfied people with 35%. There was just 15% of visitors who were dissatisfied, and satisfied people accounted for 5%. People had now response took up 5%.
The table indicates the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum, while the two pie charts illustrate the proportions of visitors’ satisfaction rate before and after the museum’s refurbishment.
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Essay 2 : The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
The given table delineates the population categorized into four different age groups of New Zealand from between 2011 and 2012.
Overall , it is apparent that population of New Zealand in general increased over two years , with people in 40-64 and over 65 age groups observed an upward trend , whereas other groups showed the contrary . Moreover , people of 15-39 age group account for the largest proportion of New Zealand’s population.
In 2011 , citizens , who are under 15 , were about 890000 in 2011 , but then declined by 0.2% to nearly 896000 in 2012 . The same tendency was true for that of 15-39 age group , there were approximately 1577000 people , however , decreased by almost 4000 subsequently .
Regarding adults in their 40-64 year olds , in contrast with the aforementioned tendency , there were 1339898 people in 2012 , increased by 0.6% compared to 2011 . Moreover , citizens who are over 65 years old surged significantly by 4% to 596903 , which is roughly 20000 higher than in 2011 .
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The given table delineates the population categorized into four different age groups of New Zealand from between 2011 and 2012.
Overall , it is apparent that population of New Zealand in general inc...
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The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The charts illustrate the waste disposal of various categories in a nation between 1960 and 2011.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of food, plastic and wood, while textiles, paper and other types witnessed a decrease in disposal. In addition, mental, glass and green waste shared almost the same figure in two years.
In 1960, the percentage of paper accounted for 25%, but it decreased significantly to 15%. Similarly, textiles saw a fall by 6% in 2011 and there also was a slight decline in others from 12% to 4%.
In contrast, there was a dramatic rise in disposal of food, from 12% to 21% by 2011, followed by plastic with an increase of 8%. The figure of wood increased, however, it was not significant.
Meanwhile, mental, green waste and glass have the same figure. In detail, the percentage of glass and green waste remained stable at 5% and 9% in 2011 respectively. The figure of mental increase of 1%, equal to green waste.
The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compar...
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