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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Em chào các thầy cô ạ, thầy cô chấm giúp em bài với ạ, em cảm ơn ạ
Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
In light of the growing debates among individuals, while it is a common assumption that prison is the common way to tackle criminal obstacles, critics argue that exposing individuals to a better education is more effective. Although I acknowledge some benefits that providing a better education offers, I still believe that prison is essential in addressing criminal behavior for several reasons.
One justification for keeping prisons is that they play vital roles in guaranteeing society’s safety. In fact, they separate those who commit crimes from the community, ensuring the safety of residents. Nothing can be more obvious than some cases of violent crime, such as domestic violence or harassment, which are detrimental to the safety of individuals. Without prisons, society's safety would be compromised. Additionally, nowadays, prisons provide ample opportunities for prisoners to experience rehabilitation, which is the key to raising their awareness of right and wrong. These systems allow criminals to reflect on their conscience, paying big dividends in self-improvement. They also prompt offenders to understand their wrongs and prepare them to re-enter society as reformed individuals.
Contrary to the aforementioned arguments, advocates of providing better education often argue that prisons lack an educational system. It is true that some prisons are incapable of providing core subjects like those taught in schools, such as geography or science. However, I contend that prisons still offer educational merits. In reality, prisons enable criminals to access fundamental educational lessons about finance or money. Moreover, prisons allow offenders to learn essential skills such as cooking, cleaning, or gardening. These activities act as precursors to reforming criminals, equipping them with practical skills that can facilitate their integration back into society upon release. In essence, I admit that prisons provide beneficial educational programs to criminals, which works wonders in the long run.
In conclusion, while acknowledging the merits of educational initiatives, I maintain that prisons are indispensable in addressing criminal behavior.
Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
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Mong thầy cô chữa bài giúp e với ạ. People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. Do you agree or disagree?
The debate surrounding early career decisions and job stability can yield many satisfying aspects of working life, which continues to be a topic of contention. From my perspective, career satisfaction should have a multifaceted approach that is not determined by when someone chooses a career path or how long they pursue it.
On the one hand, one school of thought holds that workers loyal to one post may indeed present several advantages. The primary reason behind this thinking is that they can focus their efforts on developing specialized knowledge and expertise within a particular field, allowing someone to reach the pinnacle of their chosen profession, which may hold immense promise and lead to greater career fulfillment. Additionally, starting a career early and dedicating oneself for an extended period can provide a sense of job satisfaction. Through the journey of honing their skills, individuals can reap success within their chosen profession, providing them with a better financial situation.
On the other hand, I believe that those who change jobs from time to time can yield multiple benefits. Perhaps the foremost rationale would be that this is an opportunity for them to discover personal strengths within different industries, especially for new graduate students who can gain diverse experience and skill sets that they were not exposed to throughout their school period, making them more valuable and marketable to recruiters. Moreover, some people's personalities may suffer after pursuing a career path for long periods, which can place a huge burden on their mental health, including heavy workloads, workplace conflicts, or simply not providing employees with a living wage. There is a likelihood that workers should eventually find a new career that offers a suitable workplace environment and salary increment for them.
In conclusion, how one person gains satisfaction from their career may differ from another. I believe that job hoppers often find greater fulfillment in their careers since they can broaden their horizons and take a holistic approach within different domains, ultimately leading to a more rewarding professional life.
The debate surrounding early career decisions and job stability can yield many satisfying aspects of working life, which continues to be a topic of contention. From my perspective, career satisfaction...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The graph illustrates the amount of money invested in four financial assets in the United States between 1988 and 2014.
Overall, there was an increase in invested funding of four categories. The investment fund of gold witnessed a significant rise among others.
In 1988, there was exactly 100 millions of dollara invested in gold, followed by fine art about 75 millions dollars spent on. By contrast, 50 millions of dollars invested in property, and the similar figure was true for company shares, with 49 millions. From the following 18 years, the value of investment funds in most assets fluctuated.
Between 2006 and 2014, gold became the most invested asset, reach a peak at 450 millions of dollars before decreasing to under 400 millions at the end of the year surveyed. Followed by fine art with continual increase to about 325 millions in 2014. Finally, the investment funds in property and company shares were lower than the two others, with 149 millions and 200 millions, respectively, in 2014.
The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014.
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mong thầy cô chấm và chữa cho em với ạ,em mới học ielts
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In some statistical literature, urbanization is likely to be an illustrious trend with statehood. And of course, via much migration of residents in the same countryside. There showed immediate pros and cons to many aspects. In the first line, the influx of people into the urban area can demonstrate one thing there are modern facilities, innovative education, and a variety of means of amusement. As well as a fact, these factors captivate inhabitants in many regions. Therefore,it stimulates the economy of these areas
However, more people caused detrimental pollution, thereby affecting to respiratory system and some chronic diseases such as sinusitis or sore throat. In addition,the downward trend of the population in the countryside leads to an imbalance in human distribution between urban and rural areas. So far it can also cause an imbalance economic
In conclusion, the movement of people in rural areas has both drawbacks and advantages. But the government should implement some activities to keep balance people in many areas
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ
Đề: In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?
In many professional sports, abusing prohibited substances to assist athletes’ performance is becoming common. This essay will discuss how athletes’ ambition and the effects of illegal substances are the main causes of this problem, and the most suitable solutions are imposing stricter rules and promoting the detrimental effects of these drugs.
There are two major reasons why athletes use forbidden substances to boost their overall performance. Firstly, the desire for success appears when people are in fierce competitions. It is human nature and athletes are no exception, they always want to win to fulfil their own desires and meet the expectations of others. All athletes strive to earn admiration, especially when they represent their country with the significant mission of bringing honour. Furthermore, the quick results that athletes gain from using banned substances are tempting as it is the easiest way to achieve success without much effort. As a result, athletes’ health is increasingly falling due to the abuse of these drugs. For example, there are many organisations selling drugs illegally these days with appealing advertisements.
There are two main measures that can be implemented to tackle this problem. First, what the government should do is impose rigorous regulation. The government should actively seek out harmful organisation and ban them. Besides that, the institutions which organise sports competitions examine whether the candidates use forbidden substances before allowing them to take part in competitions. For instance, those who use banned substances face a lifetime ban in the Olympics. Another measure is that the government might promote the adverse effects of illegal drugs through social media. In this way, athletes might raise awareness and dare not to use drugs. By taking these solutions this problem will be dealt with appropriately.
In conclusion, there are two main causes leading to this phenomenon, these are athletes’ desire and the magic of drugs. There are also two solutions: imposing stricter regulations and posting news on social media.
Đề: In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the po...
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
These days it is becoming more and more common for people who choose cosmetic surgery to attempt to enhance their appearances. There are several reasons why this trend has become increasingly popular although there are various risks in the surgery process, I believe that it is still a positive development.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why people choose plastic surgery procedure. Firstly, enhancing one's appearance will boost self-esteem and feel more confident and happy within oneself. Whether someone is unconfident and unhappy about the shape of their nose, eyes, and skin lost their youthful appearance, plastic surgery is the best way to help millions of people change body and feel better about their appearance. By undergoing surgery cosmetic, people will gain self-confidence and have a happier life, which I believe that cosmetic surgery is a positive method.
On the other hand, cosmetic surgery is also a physical methodology. For example, people with obesity and overweight, although they train and have a healthy diet, can not lose weight, which impact negatively on their lifestyle. Therefore, plastic surgery will help them lose weight through liposuction which allows them more active and improve their quality of life. Furthermore, well-known singers and actors have had surgery cosmetic to change their appearance, which helps them be more confident when standing in front of thousands of people.
In conclusion, although there are many cases of plastic surgery has been detrimental, I strongly believe that it is used to help one's appearance and improve their quality of life.
These days it is becoming more and more common for people who choose cosmetic surgery to attempt to enhance their appearances. There are several reasons why this trend has become increasingly popular...
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ
Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.Are these shows a good method of finding talented people , or they just entertainment?
It is true that talent shows have attracted much attention of viewers in the current age.However,some of the talent shows were organized for searching talented individuals while the others were totally held in entertainment purposes . Moreover,it is undeniable that televised talent shows play a crucial role in finding talented residents
On the one hand, talent shows are found in order to make room for brilliant people to perform their wonderful skills on TV screen.For that reason, many geniuses participated in this kind of show to prove themselve and make audiences feel surprised about the magnificent abilities .Take an example of a talent show ,which was widely known in Viet Nam, “ Sieu Tri Tue” is created with the attendance of brilliant participants .Throughout the show,they competed intensely and used wisely their natural ability to overcome challenges.Therefore, it is evident that talent shows are the great oppoturnity to discover talented humans
On the other hand, many producers want to relax watcher from hard-working hours so they tend to organize talent event for relaxing target. For instance , “ Viet Nam Got Talent” has reputation for its winners since they usually become famous actors or singers after coming through the show.Nevertheless, there were some players acted weirdly as they joined a comedy and this work brought a lot of amusement to followers .Based on that case, we can see that there are some talent shows only make people feel relaxed not seeking for high-qualified individuals
Futhermore , while creating talented events is an effective option to find brilliant residents , we can not deny that there are other methods to do the same thing such as : reading newspaper , following news on TV although they are less reliable than talent shows
In conclusion , Organizing genius shows is a great work to search for brilliant individuals although there are other ways to seek talented people as well . Nevertheless, some the kind of talent events tend to satisfy their viewers with joy and they do not highly appreciate seeking for talented residents
Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.Are these shows a good method of finding talented people , or they just entertainment?
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em bài TASK 2 với ạ:Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In the contemporary era, there has witnessed a growing number of people who contend that government funding for the arts, such as music and theater, is an unwise use of resources, and that this money would be better spent on public services. This essay will proffer a number of convincing rationales to clarify why I take issue with this opinion.
One of the primary justifications for government arts funding is its role in preserving and promoting a country's cultural heritage. The arts are a vital expression of a society's history, values, and identity. By supporting artistic endeavors, governments play a crucial part in ensuring that this cultural legacy is not lost, but rather passed down to future generations. For instance, the Vietnamese government allocates resources towards the restoration and maintenance of UNESCO World Heritage sites like the Imperial City of Hue, the ancient town of Hoi An,helping protect these tangible links to Vietnam's storied past for future generations.
Additionally, the investment in arts can be powerful drivers of tourism, attracting visitors from around the world and boosting local economies. To illustrate, The Cannes Film Festival in France is a prestigious annual event that draws the attention of tourists and celebrities worldwide. The prestige and media exposure generated by the Cannes Film Festival have a halo effect, strengthening France's reputation as a global cultural powerhouse and a desirable tourist destination. The government's ongoing commitment to funding this premier arts event is a key factor in maintaining France's position as a leading cultural tourism hub.
In conclusion, I completely reject the notion that government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Such funding is vitally important and should be prioritized alongside investment in essential public services
In the contemporary era, there has witnessed a growing number of people who contend that government funding for the arts, such as music and theater, is an unwise use of resources, and that this money...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa cho e ạaaaa
Many manufactory food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, a plethora of health ailments involving the people's sugar utilization in goods with high levels of sugar, have heightened the public interest in the topic of how to incentivize people to minimize sugar consumption. Therefore, there are some opinions that sugary items should be made more exorbitant. In my point of view, I wholeheartedly agree with this remedy.
There are two obvious reasons why some opinions oppose this idea. Firstly, this initiative affects the sustainability of sweet manufacturing companies. Given prohibitive expense, this would be a struggle for some firms, which sell sweet products such as candies, soda,.., to generate goods in a large amount. Thus, these companies can face closure in the long run. Additionally, exorbitant costs could widen the gap between the affluent elite and the rest of society. With expensive items, this can be excessive with underprivileged people, whereas wealthy people can pay for it. Therefore, this will broaden the gap between them.
However, I believe that this solution brings more positive outcomes than its disadvantages. Firstly, this initiative can orient residents to have a healthy lifestyle. By having limited choices with sugary goods due to its extremely expensive cost, inhabitants may shift to using other organic items, and gradually form healthy lifestyles. As a result, this utilization can foster a healthy society. Additionally, this idea can alleviate the strain on hospitals. With an immense number of dwellers having robust lifestyles, hospitals can have less pressure on the quantities of hospital admission. Therefore, congestion due to the large number of patients can be controlled.
In conclusion, I firmly agree with this view about increasing the expenses for sweet goods to minimize the consumption of sugary items. Albeit there are some negative sides which are the effect to the sustainability of sweet manufacturing firms, and likelihood of widen the gap between the wealthy elite and low-income people, I believe that this proposal can have more valuable virtues which are the capability of orienting residents have healthy lifestyles, and alleviating the strain on hospital.
Many manufactory food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do yo...
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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent films should be not released. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While many contend that violent films should be banned from television broadcast and cinematic screens, this essay argues that the government regulation on the level of violence for film is a more beneficial approach, despite acknowledging that both are valid.
Admittedly, prohibiting movies displaying aggressive elements can yield certain noteworthy virtues, one of which is the prevention of adverse impacts on children’s future. Indubitably, various scenes of school bullying leave young viewers emotionally distressed, likely triggering an extreme fear of school attendance. Hence, this phobia can hamper children from gaining informative knowledge provided by school, resultantly undermining teenagers’ opportunities to secure finanically rewarding jobs when they attend the workforce. In other words, completely preventing violent movies from screens will probably protect teenagers from potential harm, leading to diminishing their chances of career success after student life .
Conversely, setting a regulation on violence level of films is incontrovertibly beneficial for both film industry and society. To the former, one of the most discernible upsides is to promote profitable growth for the film industry. This can be explained by a huge number of people, who express their preference for violent films over other genres. In this sense, regulating the level of violence for films may enable film producers to not only retain current audiences but also attract prospective customers, likely leading to the rise in revenues. On the societal level, government bodies can receive higher taxes, which are likely invested in crucial factors, such as education and construction. Resultantly, this can potentially create a civilized society.
In conclusion, banning films with aggressive elements is sound as it acts as a preventive measure against potential negative influences. However, I am of the opinion that regulating the level of violence for films can be a better option due to the possibility of fostering economic growth for film businesses as well as a sustainable and well-rounded society.
Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent films should be not released. Discuss both views and give your o...
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ĐỀ BÀI: These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Females have been told to stay at home and take care of their children for the last many decades. However, in today’s world, more women take the responsibility for being a chief breadwinner, whereas men become stay-at-home husbands. From my perspective, this change can be attributed to many reasons and I consider this is not a positive development.
There are two main reasons associated with this phenomenon. The first cause is that the roles of women have been more dignified than in the past. Due to the fact that many global organizations have finalized policies and implemented them to protect the rights of women. Therefore, women can receive the same rights as men, such as going to school, especially pursuing a career. As a result, they may want to be more independent and successful in their career ladder. Another reason is that men, nowadays, realize the dominance of spending time with their family. Because when male individuals stay at home, they can take care of their children directly and share household chores with their wives. Therefore, this can tighten family bondings and prevent conflicts between fathers and mothers.
Personally, I deem this a negative development. Although childcare responsibilities needs parental involvement, it is more suitable for women. This is mainly due to the inherent femininity of females. It consists of gentleness, empathy, and sensitivity. Therefore, children can be cared for more diligently, especially in their formative years, and mothers also can improve their emotional aspect. Additionally, regarding both mental health and physical health, women are weaker than men. The person who is in charge of the primary breadwinner can face stress not only from the workforce but also from the family. So, a man is capable of overcoming those obstacles more effectively than a woman.
In conclusion, while the role-swap between mothers and fathers can result in a gender gap and happiness of the family, I believe that it is not a positive change because of suitable roles for both females and males. If this phenomenon continues rising in popularity, the whole world may deal with the imbalance in the family and society.
ĐỀ BÀI: These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?...
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IELTS WRITING
Em mới học writing, mong các thầy cô giúp đỡ, chấm sửa bài giúp em ạ, em cám ơn
Đề: the table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Bài làm:
The table and pie charts above delineate the changes in the proportion of local and international research students in Australian universities over nearly one decade, from 2001 to 2010.
Overall, both the number of local and international research students exhibited an upward trend over the 9-year period. As can be seen from the two pie charts, the percentage of non-local female students increased significantly, surpassing that of non-local males, whereas the number of local females was still lower than male a little.
In 2010, students researching in Australian universities were mainly local students, with 87% of scholars falling into this category, including the number of females being nearly equal to males. By comparison, at that time, the number of international research students, being in the minority with 13%, was just one-sixth of the number of local students.
Over nearly one decade, it is apparent that the figure for non-local scholars went up much more briskly, registering a noticeable rise of 14%, from 13% to 27% in 2010. Another thing worth noting is a big leap in the proportion of female international students with 11% rising, even surpassing the number of male international students. Compared to the substantially increasing quantity of non-local students, the number of local students still grew steadily.
Em mới học writing, mong các thầy cô giúp đỡ, chấm sửa bài giúp em ạ, em cám ơn
Đề: the table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
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Task 2: Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is
more important than others?
People have different views about whether economic progress or other factors should be placed more important to evaluate a country’s achievement. While there are some reasons to support other factors that should be included in measuring the success of a nation besides economics, I would take the view that the merits of these factors are in equal measure.
On the one hand, I believe that in addition to economics, human rights, and environmental factors should be considered in measuring the success of a country. First of all, citizens should be able to access education and be treated equally regardless of their race, age, gender,... This will encourage society to reduce discrimination and create opportunities to eliminate the gap between the rich and the poor, thereby improving social equality. Secondly, besides solely focusing on profit, business entities have to protect the environment as well by reducing CO2 emissions, toxic wastes, and deforestation… These approaches allow the nation to prevent environmental consequences and maintain sustainable development in the long term.
Economic factor, nevertheless, is also great important in terms of improving living standards and laying a basis foundation for a country’s comprehensive development. The progress of the economy promotes the expansion of production and manufacturing, which can create a lot of jobs for the country's labor. These advantages help the nation decrease the unemployment rate and increase domestic income leading to higher living standards for citizens. Moreover, the development of the economy also creates a potential money flow to support other aspects, such as the improvement of waste recycling systems, and promoting implementation of renewable energy in production,... These contributions of economic progress to other factors enable the country to develop sustainably and comprehensively.
To summarize, although economic progress is often overvalued in evaluating a country’s success, environmental factors and human rights should be considered in this measurement for their contribution to developing sustainability and social equality. Therefore, I strongly believe the roles of these factors are equally important.
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The pie charts showed the satisfaction level of undergraduates and postgraduates about the range of books and non-printed materials provided by their school library.
Overall, postgraduates were not satisfied with both types of academic resources offered by their school library. Meanwhile, undergraduates expressed pleasure in the services of the library.
Regarding the range of books, there was 37% of undergraduates rated very good, which is higher than 15% this figure for postgraduates. This picture can also be seen in satisfaction results, with 35% and 28% respectively. In contrast, only 28% of undergraduates reported they unfavored the diversification of library books, whereas the results collected from postgraduates were significantly higher at 50%.
Regarding non-printed materials, undergraduates also exhibit great favor to electronic academic resources with 68% of respondents, which is noticeably 5 times higher than postgraduates. The satisfaction results received approximately the same number with 20% of undergraduates and 22% of postgraduates. The unfavorable results collected from undergraduates were only 12%, while this figure for postgraduates accounted for 62% of the collected responses, which reveals a high level of dissatisfaction of them with school library services.
The pie charts showed the satisfaction level of undergraduates and postgraduates about the range of books and non-printed materials provided by their school library.
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The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Details regarding the distribution of class sizes in primary schools in four Australian states in 2010 are pictorially delineated in the diagrams. Overall, while class sizes of 30 students or more were negligible, class ranges of 21-25 pupils stood as the peak in all the examined states, except for South Australia, where class sizes of 20 students or fewer were most ubiquitous.
Regarding the statistics for class sizes of 21-25 and no more than 20 students, the former topped the charts in Australia capital Territory, Western Australia and New south Wales, with the figures recording at just over half, 42%, and 37% respectively while this pattern ranked the second place at 33% in the other state. Noticeably, with 36% recorded, the class size of 20 students or fewer dominated the other class categories in South Australia. Furthermore, compared to identical rates of 26% in New South Wales and Western Australia, Australia Capital Territory registered a significantly higher figure at 38%.
Concerning the class size of 26-30 students, there was a marked disparity between New South Wales and Australia Capital Territory, with the former registering 33%, virtually triple that of the latter. Moreover, the other 2 states exhibited relatively comparable data, each occupying roughly 27.5%. Looking at the class pattern of 30 students and more, this type was marginal in four states, not exceeding 5%.
The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010.
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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many people think that accept adverse events is the best solution while others state that we should strive to improve upon those events .However, In my opinion, I believe that The best way to solve a problem is trying to solve it to have a better life.
On one hand, people think that we should be content with all we have and don't need to have a lot of fame and fortune. We should learn about how accepting the present and, don't try to change our live with a lot of risks because if we change we could be lost all we have. For example some people who are always work too much to change their life better but they forgot about their health and family so when They are rich there their health were very adverse and they don't have anyone on side.Or some young people always don’t glad with their job and constantly change jobs, and when they get older, they still lack stable jobs.
On the other hand, some argue that we need motivation to enhance their life. They think we always o need to learn and work industriously and ready for new challenge to be successful and improve our life quality and also our family life. As an example all billionaires in the world need to to change their life and their jobs a lot of times and strive to solve their challenges even losing all the fortune but with their perseverance they try again and then they have their own success. I think that all challenges that appear in our life is a sign that we are on the right way to our dreams and success.
In conclusion, I believe that confronting challenging situations , difficult challenges and acceptance it is not the appropriate solution. It is essential to make efforts to enhance our quality of life
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There is a general increase in anti-social behaviours and lack of respect for others. What are the causes and solutions?
It is factual that the issue of antisocial and disrespectful attitude in society
has aroused people’s discussion. This essay will analyze the root causes of this tendency and then suggest remedies to solve this problem.
There are two primary reasons why inconsiderate behavior has been on rise recently. In my opinion, the foremost cause is that today's people are existing in an environment where pressing and discrimination are always hand-in-hand. It can be explained that people are affected by surrounding elements around them such as their workplaces or families. For instance, work pressure can cause staff to become full of bitterness and frustration. As a result, this prolonged stress can make them want to be vented on others. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by family problems and school bullying. To explain, children who had a history of being lacking parental closeness or friend abuse tend to be vulnerable, unconfident and have low self-esteem. As a consequence, if they suffer from long-term oppression, they will tend to bestow the same behavior upon other people.
There are a number of viable solutions to deal with this problem. The first solution would be reasonable self controlling. People can set for themselves conservation norms such as managing their words before expressing to avoid lashing out at others uncontrollably. This strategy can help everyone and surrounding people feel more comfortable and they can become more sociable and friendly with each other. The second measure is that parents should not underestimate the importance of guiding their children. Parents can educate their children about social manners such as controlling their emotion and attitude toward others, Moreover, parents can block toxic websites relating to violence or gambling. For example, China's government blocks access to these harmful websites that can put a detrimental effect on the growing process of children. Therefore, children can become well-mannered members of society.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the tendency of antisocial and disrespectful behavior and then appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
There is a general increase in anti-social behaviours and lack of respect for others. What are the causes and solutions?
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Many people feel that urban environments are unhealthier than they have been. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem?
In recent decades, a number of individuals have a sensation that environmental issues in metropolitan cities are worse than before. This essay will analyse the root of causes of urban environments such as traffic jams or city dwellers’ activities and then suggest remedies to mitigate these potential problems.
There are two primary reasons why urban environment problems are poorer and poorer. In my opinion the foremost cause of this issue is fossil fuel consumption. This might be explained by the fact that companies’ insatiable appetite for fossil fuels such as coal, oil, and natural gas, drives much of their energy production. However, the combustion of these non-renewable resources releases copious amounts of greenhouse gasses into the atmosphere. To illustrate, according to Linkedin, in the cities, approximately 78% of carbon emissions are due mostly to companies’ over-consumption of fossil fuels. As a result, this contributes to air pollution and puts a high risk on urban habitants’ health. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by human’s agricultural practices. It can be explained that heavy pesticide and fertilizer use in farming activities are more and more popular. Therefore, this can lead to metropolitan soil degradation which can have a detrimental effect on crop productivity.
There are a number of viable solutions to deal with this problem. The first solution is city authorities should implement policies that promote sustainability, renewable energy use and environmental protection. For instance, governments can advocate for and embrace sustainable practices in city dwellers’ daily lives, such as recycling, reducing waste, and conserving energy. A second measure would be that each company should have a detailed plan in consuming natural energy reasonably to limit pollution problems.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the opinion that the metropolitan environment is becoming bad and appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems.
Many people feel that urban environments are unhealthier than they have been. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem?
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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in the Netherlands between 2001 and 2006.
The given table illustrates modifications in average distance commuted by a person in numerous means of transportation in the Netherlands during a 5-year period.
Overall, it is obvious that while modes such as walking, cycling and local buses witnessed a dramatic decline, the opposite was true for the others. Also, cars were the most popular vehicles in both 2001 and 2006.
With regard to a person’s average traveling distance by car, this vehicle was by far the most common means of transportation in both years, was 4806 miles in 2006 which were over half as much as that in 2001. Besides, train travel increased to 366 miles per person in 2006, which was the third position in the table while a dramatic growth was seen in the other one increasing to 585 miles in the same time. Meanwhile, the least popular means was taxi and local distance bus, which were the least modes of transportation in 2001 and 2006, experienced a noticeable rise, to 42 and 124 miles, respectively.
By contrast, the means such as walking, cycling and local bus were considered not to be favored as the others. A considerable decrease was seen by the average gap of people traveling on foot and bicycle, from 255 miles to 237 miles in walking and from 51 miles to 41 miles in cycling. Furthermore, the average gap of people traveling by local bus was 429 miles in 2001 and by 2006, the average fell to 274 miles.
The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in the Netherlands between 2001 and 2006.
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Giúp em bài này với ạ. The graph shows the income of four restaurants in Cambridge in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the turnover of four Cambridge restaurants over the months of 2016.
Overall, the revenue of four restaurants experienced significant fluctuations and general increases over the period given. Moreover, despite starting from a low base, the income of the Pizza House ranked first at the end of the period.
At the beginning of the year 2016, the Grosvenor derived the highest profit of four restaurants, at 160000 pounds. Then, the number fluctuated dramatically between 120000 and 180000 pounds until October. Its dominance was challenged as the income of the Grosvenor dropped remarkably to 50000 pounds at the year's end.
The revenue of the Old Hall was about 100000 pounds in January, three times higher than the figure for the Taj Mahal. Over the following months, the two restaurants witnessed a similar pattern, rising considerably to 140000 and 120000 pounds, respectively. On the other hand, the turnover of the Pizza House increased steadily from 500000 to 100000 pounds in July before declining significantly to 60000 pounds in September. Then, the figure surged to 190000 pounds and claimed the first position at the end of the period.
The line graph illustrates the turnover of four Cambridge restaurants over the months of 2016.
Overall, the revenue of four restaurants experienced significant fluctuations and general i...
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