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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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DẠ MONG THẦY CÔ CHẤM BÀI GIÚP EM Ạ
The bar chart illustrates the amount of coffee that was produced in various countries between 1990 to 2010.
Overall, most categories witnessed an upward trend, except for Colombia with a reverse pattern over the period in question. Another interesting point is that Brazil produced the most coffee than other countries.
According to the chart, the amount of coffee in Brazil was approximately 0.7 million tonnes initially, then the figure plummeted to nearly 2 million tonnes in 2010. Conversely, there was a gradual decline in the number of coffee production in Colombia, which was from precisely 0.6 million tonnes to 0.4 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000. After that, the figure remained relatively stable for the remainder of this period.
As can be seen, Indonesia allocated the amount of coffee of exactly 0.2 million tonnes in 1990, which plateaued until 1995. It then steadily rose before reaching a high peak of nearly twofold in 2010. Vietnam also underwent the same tendency as Indonesia. Having leveled off at about 0.1 million tonnes from 1990 to 1995, the production of coffee in Vietnam increased slightly by about 0.2 million tonnes in the last year of this period.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of coffee that was produced in various countries between 1990 to 2010.
Overall, most categories witnessed an upward trend, except for Colombia with a reverse patt...
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Task 1: The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph gives information about how many visitors visiting a Caribbean island and their choice of accommodation from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, it is obvious that there was an upward trend in the number of people visiting a Caribbean island. In addition, the quantity of tourists choosing to stay both on cruise ships and on islands witnessed a significant increase over the period.
In 2010, around 0.25 million and 0.75 million visitors stayed on cruise ships and islands respectively. After the following 3 years, the number of people who chose to stay on island considerably went up to 1,5 million, while the figure for cruise ships underwent a fluctuation and reached 1 million in 2013. Between 2013 and 2015, the quantity of tourists staying on island remained unchanged at 1,5 million compared with the dramatic growth of around 0.75 million visitors who chose to stay on cruise ships. By 2017, the number of people staying on the island rose slightly to 1,5 million after shrinking to 1,25 million in 2016. From 2015 to 2017, the quantity of people choosing to stay on cruise ships hit the peak at 2 million visitors.
At the beginning, the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island stood at 1 million. From 2010 to 2015, the quantity of visitors witnessed a remarkable surge to 2,75 million before staying unchanged for 1 year. After 1 year, the total number of visitors underwent a sharp increase and reached a peak at 3,5 million in 2017.
Task 1: The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comp...
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The given line graph compares data on the number of visitors traveling a Caribbean island from 2010-2017.
Overall, there was an increase in the total number of travelers journeying to a Caribbean island, which was a result of the growth in the figures for cruise ship and island staying, under scrutiny . In addition, the tourist number living in cruise ships outpaced the people staying on island to become the most preferred option from 2015 onwards.
Examining the data more closely, the number of callers accommodating on the island started at roughly 0,75 million, after which it witnessed a significant surge to 1,5 million and recovered to this point at the end of the span. A similar trend, albeit to a greater extent, was seen in the data for total which began at 1 million before soaring to 3.5 million in 2017.
In terms of tourists living on island, about 0.25 million people stayed at island in 2010, with a subsequent surge to 1 million in 2014 before surpassing the callers opting to stay in cruise ships between 2015 and 2016. This number reached 2 million at the end of the duration, and became the most interesting from 2015 onwards.
The given line graph compares data on the number of visitors traveling a Caribbean island from 2010-2017.
Overall, there was an increase in the total number of travelers journeying to a Caribbean isl...
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mong thầy cô chấm giúp em bài task 1 ạ
The diagram below describes how electricity is produced in a hydroelectric power station.
Overall, the production of electricity in a hydroelectric station can be summarized into before the power station stage and after the powerstation stage during day and night.
Firstly water from River will move to a high-level reservoir which is avoided by a dam. Then water the flow of water will pass through a small lane which open during day to deliver water to the power station, and closes at night to avoid the flow of water pumped from the station.
Secondly, when water flow to the Reversible turbines which is set to operate the generation during day to a national grid through the power lines then runs to a low-reservoir. At night the reversible turbines will pump water that stored in the low-level reservoir back to the high-level Reservoir by the old way and it will stored at the upper levels then replay the circle again in the next day.
The diagram below describes how electricity is produced in a hydroelectric power station.
Overall, the production of electricity in a hydroelectric station can be summarized into before the power sta...
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The line graph illustrates tourists who set foot in four Brighton destinations in percentage from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, Art Gallery, Pavilion and Pier saw many noticeable fluctuations over the time frame, while Festival was the most stable category throughout the 30 years from 1980 to 2010. Furthermore, Pavilion attracted the largest number of tourists over the years surveyed in general. By contrast, Pier lagged behind, taking up the smallest percentage of visitors.
It is striking that Festival initially led the tourism market in terms of tourist attractions with 30% of tourists. However, this category remained stable after a slight decrease to 25% in 1985. Notably, Pavilion began at 23% in 1980, surged to a peak of nearly a half of tourists in 1995, then followed by a sharp decline to 35% in 2000, eventually reached 30% after a more gentle decrease. Turning to Art Gallery, the figure of tourists who came to this place was slightly above 20% in 1980, experiencing a considerable fall to 20% after peaking at 37% in 1985. Afterward, this category saw a more slight downward trend, hitting a low of under one-tenth ultimately. As for Pier, which had the minority of visitors with one-tenth initially in 1980. This category also fluctuated during the surveyed period, and experienced a general upswing in the subsequent period, grew to 15% in 1985 then finally reached above one-fifth in 2010 after witnessing some fluctuations.
The line graph illustrates tourists who set foot in four Brighton destinations in percentage from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, Art Gallery, Pavilion and Pier saw many noticeable fluctuations over the tim...
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The map describes the outline of the nature museum from 2010 to 2013.
Overall, the area experienced significant changes. The most noticeable change taking place in the area was on the right of the entrance.
In 2010, the mammals were located on the left of the ocean hall. In 2013, it was replaced by Ice Age and relocated to the right of the ocean hall. The insects were extended next to the left of the ocean hall, and located to the ice age.
The ocean hall was expanded in width equal length of the lobby in 2013. The garden was chopped down so the facilities were erected at the right of the entrance. The shop was situated adjacent to the lobby and the coffee was on the right of it. The human origins display was located halfway between the cafe and the mammals.
The map describes the outline of the nature museum from 2010 to 2013.
Overall, the area experienced significant changes. The most noticeable change taking place in the area was on the right of the en...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas of a European country between 1987 and 2007.
ANSWER:
The diagram compares the number of visitors from abroad to different regions of one country in Europe over the period 1987 to 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the figures saw an increase during most of the period, despite some fluctuations. The coast, and the lakes and mountains were the areas most visited by overseas tourists.
In 1987, there were 40,000 visitors to the coast. Although the number fell slightly to around 38,000 in 1992, it then rose to a peak of 70,000 by 2004, before decreasing sharply to 55,000 in 2007.
The figures for overseas visitors to the lakes and mountains witnessed a similar trend. From just 10,000 visitors in 1987, the number rose dramatically to a peak of 75,000 in 2002, overtaking visitor numbers to the coast by the year 2000. The figures then declined steadily to finish at around 65,000 in 2007.
Series 3 overseas visitors numbered 20,000 in 1987 – double the number who went to the lakes and mountains. The figures then fluctuated, but after 1992 visits to the lakes and mountains were higher than Series 3. By 2007, however, visitor numbers for Series 3 had risen to a peak of 35,000.
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas of a European country between 1987 and 2007.
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The diagram compares the number of visitors from abroad to dif...
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The table describes the annual milk production in four different countries, namely the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that data reveal a significant increase in milk production in Tanzania and Guatemala during the period. While the Netherlands remained a top milk producer, Australia saw a gradual decrease in milk production.
Looking at Tanzania and Guatemala, Tanzania's milk production rose from 87,000 liters in 1990 to 1,55,000 liters in 2010, while the amount of milk production in Guatemala also increased from 26,000 liters to 84,000 liters.
On the other hand, Australia experienced a slight decrease in milk production from 11,246,000 liters in 1990 to 9,165,000 liters in 2010. By contrast, the production of milk in the Netherlands spurged from 11,262,000 liters in 1990 to 11,466,000 liters in 2010, which made it the biggest milk producer among the four nations.
The table describes the annual milk production in four different countries, namely the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that data reveal a...
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The provided bar chart delineates the proportion of jobless people aged 15 to 24 in five different European nations in 2005, compared with the total unemployment rates in those countries.
Overall, it is obvious that the percentage of young employment in these five European countries is much higher than that of overall unemployment in 2005. In addition, Poland has the highest unemployment rate, compared to Denmark had the lowest.
In terms of unemployed young adults, Poland and Italy had the highest percentage, at approximately 35% and 25%, compared to other countries. In addition, Denmark had the lowest percentage at just over 5% and the figures for Hungary and Germany were around three times that of Denmark.
Turning to the total unemployment rates, Poland has the highest result in this category, which accounted for exactly 15%, but a lesser extent in Italy, which stood at nearly 25%. Besides, both Hungary and Germany made up approximately 6-7% of total unemployment, 2 times as high as the figure for Denmark.
The provided bar chart delineates the proportion of jobless people aged 15 to 24 in five different European nations in 2005, compared with the total unemployment rates in those countries.
Overall, it...
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The line graph above provides information about the numbers of fuel production including petroleum, coal, and natural gas that are produced in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Overall, the numbers of production levels of natural gas had significantly increased over the whole time, whereas the other two had experienced a decline in amount, resulting in a massive shift in the number of production in this country.
The number of petroleum production which produced in the UK remarkably increased from nearly 90 million tons to over 140 million tons in the first four years, after that, it stabilized at around this point until 1987 before going down quickly to 100 million tons in 1991. Nevertheless, the figure harshly went up and reached its peak of approximately 145 million tons in 2000, holding the highest production level compared to others.
At the same time, between 1981 and 1983, coal production maintained stability at around 80 million tons which was followed by a strong decline to 40 million tons in 1984. After that, having jumped back to above 60 million tons in 1987 and fluctuated at around this point until 1990, the amount of coal produced still steadily dropped, hitting a low of less than 40 tons at the end of the period.
Starting off with the lowest point and staying relatively stable at 40 million tons until 1994, the production of natural gas surged to 85 million tons in 2000, beating coal production to become the second-largest produced fuel in the UK.
The line graph above provides information about the numbers of fuel production including petroleum, coal, and natural gas that are produced in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Overall, the numbers of product...
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The chart below shows the percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas in 1950 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the proportion of native and foreign people living in cities, towns, and rural areas in Australia between 1950 and 2010.
Overall, the share for people born in and outside Australia living in cities were both highest figures and both experienced an increasing trend over the years.
As observed from the graph, around 50% of Australian living in metropolitan in 1950, this amount then grew slightly to above 60% in 2010. By contrast, the portion of native people living in towns was exactly 20% in 1950 and that for rural areas was about 30% in the same year. Subsequently, both figures witnessed a decrease to just nearly 18% at the end of the period.
Further inspection into the graph reveals that in 2010, there was 80% of foreigners living in cities, which was 20% higher than that in 1950. The data for people born outside Australia living in towns and living in rural areas both experienced a considerable drop, from nearly 17% to 10% and from 40% to under 5% respectively.
The chart below shows the percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas in 1950 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main...
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Living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed that living in urban areas causes detrimental effects on people’s health. From my perspective , I partly agree with this viewpoint for several reasons because besides negative aspects , living in major cities also brings positive impacts on people’s health.
On the one hand , living in a metropolis causes health risks. The increase in the number of inhabitants ask for the large number of means of transportation , especially private vehicles which released exhaust fumes into the air , leading to the high levels of polluted air.This brings negative impacts not only on the environment but also on respiratory system’s people. The argument in favor of this notion is notified by the fact that the nature of city life is competitive and fast-paced. Working overtime , coupled with limited access to fresh and heathy foods and prevalent of fast food chain , create unhealthy lifestyles , including skipping meals , staying up late and eating fast food.This , combined with pressure in high living cost in major cities leads to depression , anxiety , sleep disorder and obesity .
On the other hand , i’m convinced that living in urban area brings several positive impacts on people’s health. The key rational in favor of this notion is that wider access to advanced medical services. The concentration of specialized hospitals and clinics in big cities increase access to modern facilities , highly skilled specialists and wider treatment options which give opportunities for city dwellers to treat complex and rare diseases , resulting in enhance heath and life quality
In conclusion , despite of several detrimental effects , I believe that it stills have advantages for people’s health
Living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic
accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving
road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is said that strict punishments is the major measure to prevent driving offenses while others believe that others solutions in related to road safety is more preferable. In my opinion, both means of reducing car accidents do play their role.
On the one hand, strict penalties can deter drivers from violating the law, which helps decrease traffic accidents. Dangerous drivers will be more aware of laws and stop breaking laws because they do not want to lose money and time, paying for their faults. For example, some punishments can be taken account of are licence suspension or even prison sentences if drivers repeat offenses. As a result, the awareness of people will raise and they realize the magnitude of their wrong actions, which can pose a thread to their own life and others'.
On the other hand, improving the safety of roads also contributes to decrease traffic accidents. First, signs and traffic lights should be placed fully at the right spot, especially traffic signs, which give drivers instructions to drive better and safer. Second, road quality should be considered, such as potholes on roads, which might cause accidents when drivers pass on it and lose balance of driving. Besides of raise quality of roads, the government should also encourage people to use public transport in order to descend traffic flow and prevent traffic accidents rising.
In conclusion, punishments can improve the rate of traffic accidents, I think other range of measures also be effective. The government should apply several solutions to make sure the safety of drivers when being in traffic.
It is said that strict punishments is the major measure to prevent driving offenses while others believe that others solutions in related to road safety is more preferable. In my opinion, both means o...
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
Residents of some nations have strong desires to own a home rather than to rent one. The underlying factors behind this phenomenon will be closely examined in this essay, which will also argue that this trend can exert adverse impacts on society.
Admittedly, people’s preference for possessing a home over renting one can be attributed to certain causative rationales, one of which is to foster the potential for highly profitable investments. Indubitably, the booming global population can potentially trigger a scarcity of real estate, proportionally inadequate to meet increasing demands, likely leading to soaring property prices. Hence, homeowners are likely to observe a significant increase in wealth. Another reason for this desire is that homeownership can result in a reduced risk of facing unpredictable problems such as abrupt cases of eviction or the rise in renting costs. These issues can leave renters homeless and financially precarious. In this sense, a stable home can foster a more fulfilling life.
Although owning a home can provide financial stability and security, it is crucial to consider the drawbacks and implications for society as a whole. Doubtless, an unnecessarily high number of people allocating their finance for real estate can be the driving force behind the rise in properties, which proportionally acts as an inherent barrier against investors’ access to these properties for business activities. This will not only lead to the stagnation of national economies but also high unemployment rates. This is particularly noticeable in Vietnam, where there have been excessive investments in buildings and lands for recent decades, and this practice has caused unemployment at a dangerous rate and the economic crisis.
In conclusion, financial benefits and better living conditions can have their deep roots in arousing and fueling the notion of affording a stable home. However, I am of the opinion that this phenomenon can bring about devastating consequences due to the possibility of preventing the economic growth and causing joblessness at an alarming level.
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
Residents of some nati...
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Essay
It is argued that establishing more sports facilities or health clubs would be the most effective way to enhance public health. From my point of view, however, proper health education would be a better measure.
To begin with, people's health has improved significantly as a result of their participation in sports facilities. It is indisputable that engaging in physical activities such as daily exercise or sports improves fitness levels. Therefore, the growing popularity of gym classes and sports clubs provides additional opportunities for people to improve their health. Many individuals in my neighborhood take nighttime yoga lessons to stay healthy after a long day at work.
On the other hand, I believe that expanding the availability of sports facilities would have little impact on social health. This is explained by the fact that many people who paid for an annual gym membership stopped going after only one month. Therefore, I believe it is more vital to educate folk on fundamental health awareness. If a person has a basic understanding of medicine and healthcare, he can simply avoid several possible health issues. For instance, when a child has a wide knowledge of the adverse effects of smoking, he might be less likely to take up this bad habit in his adulthood.
To summarise, the increasing prevalence of sports facilities has brought a wide range of health benefits for people. I believe that raising public awareness through health campaigns would have a greater positive impact on boosting people's health
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other mea...
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Mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài writing task 2 này ạ
Topic: Many individuals argue that planning in advance is the cornerstone of success in life, whereas others contend that factors like diligence or fortune hold greater significance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's competitive world, achieving success is a constant pursuit. While some believe meticulous planning is utmostly crucial, others emphasize the importance of hard work or even luck. In my opinion, a well-rounded approach that embraces all these elements is the key to a fulfilling and successful life.
A well-defined plan acts as a roadmap, providing direction and preventing procrastination. It also allows for adjustments as circumstances evolve. Imagine an ambitious high school student aiming for a prestigious school. A comprehensive plan outlining their coursework, extracurricular activities, and standardized test preparation significantly increases their chances of acceptance.
However, life is rarely a smooth journey. Unexpected challenges can derail even the most meticulously laid plans. This is where unwavering determination and a strong work ethic come into play. These qualities empower individuals to overcome obstacles, find creative solutions, and forge new paths. Think of a passionate entrepreneur whose thoroughly planned business faces an economic downturn. Their relentless work ethic and adaptability can help them adjust their strategy and discover new opportunities. Finally, a touch of serendipitycan play a significant role. Being at the right place at the right time can open unforeseen doors. While luck is a chance factor, a well-prepared and diligent individual is more likely to capitalize on fortunate circumstances. For instance, a talented musician who relentlessly hones their craft may be discovered by a talent scout at a local performance, propelling their career forward.
In conclusion, success is not a singular entity but a harmonious blend of well-defined goals, unwavering effort, and a touch of chance. By embracing this multifaceted approach, individuals can navigate the unpredictable road to success and create a fulfilling life filled with meaningful accomplishments.
Topic: Many individuals argue that planning in advance is the cornerstone of success in life, whereas others contend that factors like diligence or fortune hold greater significance. Discuss both view...
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Mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài W task 2 này ạ. Em xin chân thành cảm ơn thầy cô.
“both government investment in transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?”
These days, the matter of whether the government putting attempts in green movement by simultaneously handling transportation investment and ticket price reduction is useful. In my perspective, I strongly believe that this policy is necessary and highly welcomed due to the outcomes it brings.
On the one hand, it is such a trustworthy development of the government to invest in the transport systems as it enhances the quality of life. Moreover, using public facilities is one of the most fundamental rights every citizen possesses. Therefore, people may be more encouraged to take public rides on a regular basis in order to have pleasant experiences with the most cutting-edge transportation. Take Vietnam as an example, a subway was constructed with the aim to reduce time traveling between two metropolitans and it attracted thousands of passengers when it was finally launched.
On the other hand, people are prone to any decline in prices, especially when it comes to public assets which were constructed by the tax each mature individual paid. This is due to the fact that public traveling can save up a considerable amount of money. For example, people tend to choose public transport like bus or subway over personal belongings like car or motorbike so as to cut off a variety of costs such as maintenance, petrol and admission fee for cars.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that this action of the government will make progress in developing the quality of social life. Furthermore, it can have a drastic impact on how transport pollution is controlled.
“both government investment in transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?”
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Topic: Some people think our first impression of someone is important, while others think we should not judge another person so quickly and should take our time to know them better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While the first impression of someone is supposed to play a crucial role in relationships, many people show their disagreement with this statement. From my perspective, I definitely believe that people had better not judge others at the first sight and spend time understanding each other.
On the one hand, relationships are thought to be mainly affected by the first impression. Firstly, a person's self-presentation skills and confidence can be reflected when meeting at the first time. Apparently, communication skills, when people are involved in a conversation with strangers, can be evaluated by the things related directly to their personality and preferences such as tone of voice, sight, and gesture. Secondly, the first impression sometimes provides accurate insights into character. By observing partners’ preparation for important events in their lives, such as interviews and dates, individuals will have an opportunity to make assumptions about their responsibility and carefulness, which could be shown in their clothes and whether they arrive on time, for example.
On the other hand, taking time to know someone better is highly recommended due to my opinion. The first reason is initial judgements can be influenced by stereotypes and personal bias. It is said that many people are attracted by appearance, which may prevent them from focusing on personality, knowledge and skills of their partners. Hence, this leads to inaccurate or unfair assessments. The second reason is spending time talking and sharing means allowing observation of consistent behaviors and deeper qualities. In the first meeting, there will not be enough communication and contact among participants to make them feel comfortable to fully express themselves. However, if individuals use their time to develop depth in connection, cautious gestures and speech may be replaced by the real traits of partners.
To sum up, I prefer taking time to learn about someone to the first impression, which can be a factor to make some assessment about a person’s characteristics, due to its advantages in the long term.
Topic: Some people think our first impression of someone is important, while others think we should not judge another person so quickly and should take our time to know them better. Discuss both views...
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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram pictorially delineates 100 visitors' attitudes towards Parkway Hotel's customer service, by percentage, during the 5-year period, from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that while the majority of guests initially evaluated satisfactory and poor experience, the reverse pattern was evidenced in 2010, as a result of improved customer service.
Regarding the details presented in the years 2005, Parkway Hotel primarily received fairly good feedback which registered more than two-fifths, outnumbering the data for disappointed ones which accounted for approximately 20%. Meanwhile, the figures for extremely poor and good customer services were relatively comparable, documenting 15% and 14%, respectively. The modest proportion was recorded in excellent experience, comprising only 5%, reflecting an average quality in this hotel.
Over the following 5 years, the customer service enhanced significantly, with nearly 40% visitors rating good experience in Parkway Hotel, increasing considerably compared to initial figure A skyrocketing also was reported for excellent service to just over 25%, trailed by the satisfaction reporting at 17%. Whereas, visitors finding the customer service poor to very poor plummeted, making up merely 12% for the former and 4% for the latter.
The provided diagram pictorially delineates 100 visitors' attitudes towards Parkway Hotel's customer service, by percentage, during the 5-year period, from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that...
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