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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram pictorially delineates 100 visitors' attitudes towards Parkway Hotel's customer service, by percentage, during the 5-year period, from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that while the majority of guests initially evaluated satisfactory and poor experience, the reverse pattern was evidenced in 2010, as a result of improved customer service.
Regarding the details presented in the years 2005, Parkway Hotel primarily received fairly good feedback which registered more than two-fifths, outnumbering the data for disappointed ones which accounted for approximately 20%. Meanwhile, the figures for extremely poor and good customer services were relatively comparable, documenting 15% and 14%, respectively. The modest proportion was recorded in excellent experience, comprising only 5%, reflecting an average quality in this hotel.
Over the following 5 years, the customer service enhanced significantly, with nearly 40% visitors rating good experience in Parkway Hotel, increasing considerably compared to initial figure A skyrocketing also was reported for excellent service to just over 25%, trailed by the satisfaction reporting at 17%. Whereas, visitors finding the customer service poor to very poor plummeted, making up merely 12% for the former and 4% for the latter.
The provided diagram pictorially delineates 100 visitors' attitudes towards Parkway Hotel's customer service, by percentage, during the 5-year period, from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that...
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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram pictorially delineates the total population and senior citizens aged 65 years or over in Japan from 1950 and projections to 2055. Overall, it is noticeable that there are correlations between Japan's demographics and its elderly residents, with a rise of different extents evidenced and the prediction of a considerable decline in prospective years.
Concerning Japan's population, the figures initially documented at 84.1 millions, trailed by a steady increment during the 50-year period before reach its pinnacle of 127.8 millions in 2005. However, the data subsequently followed a downward trajectory which result in the reduction of the total population by the year 2015. By 2055, it is anticipated that 89.9 millions of citizens will reside in Japan, exhibiting a plummet compared to its apex.
Regarding the senior segment of 65 and older, this age cohort commenced with only 4.1 millions, registering 4.9% of total people. Due to the increase in Japanese population, the data underwent an upsurge in 2005, rising to 25.7 millions. Specifically, there was an noticeable growth of approximately 15 % during this period. Following this, a substantial increase to 36.5 millions is projected in 2055 with 41% in proportion, being more than nine times compared to the original data.
The diagram pictorially delineates the total population and senior citizens aged 65 years or over in Japan from 1950 and projections to 2055. Overall, it is noticeable that there are correlations betw...
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The pie charts illustrate how the energy sources of four different countries between 2003 and 2008. Overall, India and Vietnam heavily depended on fossil fuels, while Sweden and Morocco demonstrated a greater emphasis on alternative energy sources.
Fossil fuel usage was most prominent in India, where a significant 82% of electricity was generated from this source. Vietnam also relied largely on fossil fuels, with 56% of its energy production coming from this category. In contrast, Sweden and Morocco illustrated lower reliance on fossil fuels, with percentage of 4% and 5%, respectively,
Regarding hydropower, Morocco emerged as the clear leader since an impressive 95% of its electricity production was attributed to renewable source. Sweden and Vietnam followed closely, with 52% and 44% of their energy derived from hydropower accordingly, when India showed a lower percentage of 14%.
Only Sweden and India were dependent on nuclear for power. Among these countries, Sweden stood out, with a substantial 44% of its electricity being produced through nuclear energy. In comparision, only a minor 4% of India’s energy originated from this source.
The pie charts illustrate how the energy sources of four different countries between 2003 and 2008. Overall, India and Vietnam heavily depended on fossil fuels, while Sweden and Morocco demonstrated a...
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The table illustrates the percentages of three economic sectors that contributed to a Xcountry’s GDP from 2016 to 2018.
Looking from an overall perspective, there was an increase in GDP contribution from agriculture and industry sectors, while the opposite is true for the service figure. However, the service sector took a lead over the three-year period.
In 2016, agriculture contributed the least to the country's GDP, accounted for only 13%, followed by a slight fall to 11% before increasing by 4% in 2018. Similarly, over a fifth was contributed by the industry sector, then rose considerably to approximately a third by the end of the period.
Take a look at a remaining category, while there was 65% of GDP contributed by the service sector, it thereafter decreased slightly by 1% and ended with a noticeable dip to 55% in 2018, but still being the largest contributor to the GDP of Xcountry.
The table illustrates the percentages of three economic sectors that contributed to a Xcountry’s GDP from 2016 to 2018.
Looking from an overall perspective, there was an increase in GDP contribution f...
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ. The diagram shows the design of a modern landfill for household waste. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the process of making a modern landfill for organic waste.
Overall, the process comprises three steps, beginning with digging up a hole in the ground and ending with its closure.
At the beginning of the process, the ground is excavated in a trapezoid shape above a natural rock bed. Next, a layer of synthetic substance is coated after lining the hole with a thick layer of clay. The next step is that a drainage tank is excavated, taking the form of a cuboid, which is accompanied by the installation of drainage pipes to direct the liquid to the tank. Meanwhile, another pipe, marked blue, is also set up to emit the gas.
When the landfill construction is ready for operation, it is filled with organic waste. During the use of the landfill, waste liquid leaks out and is directed away from the tank through the installed pipes. Finally, clay is applied to the top surface. After some time, the waste turns into a mud-like substance, which can be used as fertilizer while any emitted gases are released through the pipe.
The picture illustrates the process of making a modern landfill for organic waste.
Overall, the process comprises three steps, beginning with digging up a hole in the ground and ending with its clos...
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Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular.
Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?
There has been much controversy about whether planning trips to isolated areas and communities brings more benefits or drawbacks. In my opinion, this trend can be seen as beneficial.
One the one hand, there are some drawbacks of organizing trips to remote places and social groups. One clear disadvantage of this is that such vigorous activities may make wild animals disturbing and affect their regular habits. This is because such organisms are usually familiar with their natural habitat, the intervention of human can make them uneasy and even sometimes aggressive. Another advantage worth mentioning is that the popularity of tourists may lead to the destruction of local environment. Such drawback can be especially detrimental to the native inhabitants, this is due to the reason that it would make the overall image of this location negative towards tourists. As a result, they probably will not return to this attraction, causing huge loss to local economies. However, with a strict regulation from governments, the situation can be improved positively.
On the other hand, I believe that there are stronger benefits to this approach. One advantage of organizing holiday to lesser-known locations is that it helps local dwellers generate more profits and develop a place's economy. Take modeled tourism in Viet Nam, for example, Home Stay, cooperating local residents' homes with commercial companies as a place for tourists to stay. In addition to this, meals can be served in the same location and through this method, a country can advertise their special products to people in other areas as well as international travelers. By in introducing and educating people about the importance of biological diversity, people can gain better understanding about the related topic and potentially raise awareness about protecting the wildlife.
In conclusion, operating trips to places that are less popular bring more benefits than the drawbacks involved. With adequate law from the ministry, the problem can be better solved, paving the way for local economy to thrive as well as educating and promoting awareness for the public about the wildlife
Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular.
Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?
There has been much controversy ab...
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The line graph below depicts the number of travellers approached specific Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017.
In general, the trends of visitors that maintained their trip on both cruise ships and island were fluctuated, leading to the unsteadiness of their total number. Furthermore, at the end of the period, the statistic of tourists engaging on island surpassed the one on maritime ships.
Particularly, the tracts of travellers in both aspects experienced two times changes their direction, respectively in 2011, 2012 and 2016. As the visitors choosing island, the number remained stable, under approximately 1 million in 2010, but until 2011, it had a surge on increasing that number gradually to reach 1.5 millions of visitors in 2 years.
In contrast, although guests on islands fell behind the individuals choosing cruise ships, about 500 thousand at the beginning, the number on oceanic ships increased and equated to its competitor on islands, at nearly 1,4 millions.
The line graph below depicts the number of travellers approached specific Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017.
In general, the trends of visitors that maintained their trip on both...
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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
In light of the growing debates among individuals, while it is a common assumption that prison is the common way to tackle criminal obstacles, critics argue that exposing individuals to a better education is more effective. Although I acknowledge some benefits that providing a better education offers, I still believe that prison is essential in addressing criminal behavior for several reasons.
One justification for keeping prisons is that they play vital roles in guaranteeing society’s safety. In fact, they separate those who commit crimes from the community, ensuring the safety of residents. Nothing can be more obvious than some cases of violent crime, such as domestic violence or harassment, which are detrimental to the safety of individuals. Without prisons, society's safety would be compromised. Additionally, nowadays, prisons provide ample opportunities for prisoners to experience rehabilitation, which is the key to raising their awareness of right and wrong. These systems allow criminals to reflect on their conscience, paying big dividends in self-improvement. They also prompt offenders to understand their wrongs and prepare them to re-enter society as reformed individuals.
Contrary to the aforementioned arguments, advocates of providing better education often argue that prisons lack an educational system. It is true that some prisons are incapable of providing core subjects like those taught in schools, such as geography or science. However, I contend that prisons still offer educational merits. In reality, prisons enable criminals to access fundamental educational lessons about finance or money. Moreover, prisons allow offenders to learn essential skills such as cooking, cleaning, or gardening. These activities act as precursors to reforming criminals, equipping them with practical skills that can facilitate their integration back into society upon release. In essence, I admit that prisons provide beneficial educational programs to criminals, which works wonders in the long run.
In conclusion, while acknowledging the merits of educational initiatives, I maintain that prisons are indispensable in addressing criminal behavior.
Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
In light of the growi...
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Mong thầy cô chữa bài giúp e với ạ. People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. Do you agree or disagree?
The debate surrounding early career decisions and job stability can yield many satisfying aspects of working life, which continues to be a topic of contention. From my perspective, career satisfaction should have a multifaceted approach that is not determined by when someone chooses a career path or how long they pursue it.
On the one hand, one school of thought holds that workers loyal to one post may indeed present several advantages. The primary reason behind this thinking is that they can focus their efforts on developing specialized knowledge and expertise within a particular field, allowing someone to reach the pinnacle of their chosen profession, which may hold immense promise and lead to greater career fulfillment. Additionally, starting a career early and dedicating oneself for an extended period can provide a sense of job satisfaction. Through the journey of honing their skills, individuals can reap success within their chosen profession, providing them with a better financial situation.
On the other hand, I believe that those who change jobs from time to time can yield multiple benefits. Perhaps the foremost rationale would be that this is an opportunity for them to discover personal strengths within different industries, especially for new graduate students who can gain diverse experience and skill sets that they were not exposed to throughout their school period, making them more valuable and marketable to recruiters. Moreover, some people's personalities may suffer after pursuing a career path for long periods, which can place a huge burden on their mental health, including heavy workloads, workplace conflicts, or simply not providing employees with a living wage. There is a likelihood that workers should eventually find a new career that offers a suitable workplace environment and salary increment for them.
In conclusion, how one person gains satisfaction from their career may differ from another. I believe that job hoppers often find greater fulfillment in their careers since they can broaden their horizons and take a holistic approach within different domains, ultimately leading to a more rewarding professional life.
The debate surrounding early career decisions and job stability can yield many satisfying aspects of working life, which continues to be a topic of contention. From my perspective, career satisfaction...
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The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the amount of money invested in four financial assets in the United States between 1988 and 2014.
Overall, there was an increase in invested funding of four categories. The investment fund of gold witnessed a significant rise among others.
In 1988, there was exactly 100 millions of dollara invested in gold, followed by fine art about 75 millions dollars spent on. By contrast, 50 millions of dollars invested in property, and the similar figure was true for company shares, with 49 millions. From the following 18 years, the value of investment funds in most assets fluctuated.
Between 2006 and 2014, gold became the most invested asset, reach a peak at 450 millions of dollars before decreasing to under 400 millions at the end of the year surveyed. Followed by fine art with continual increase to about 325 millions in 2014. Finally, the investment funds in property and company shares were lower than the two others, with 149 millions and 200 millions, respectively, in 2014.
The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,...
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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In some statistical literature, urbanization is likely to be an illustrious trend with statehood. And of course, via much migration of residents in the same countryside. There showed immediate pros and cons to many aspects. In the first line, the influx of people into the urban area can demonstrate one thing there are modern facilities, innovative education, and a variety of means of amusement. As well as a fact, these factors captivate inhabitants in many regions. Therefore,it stimulates the economy of these areas
However, more people caused detrimental pollution, thereby affecting to respiratory system and some chronic diseases such as sinusitis or sore throat. In addition,the downward trend of the population in the countryside leads to an imbalance in human distribution between urban and rural areas. So far it can also cause an imbalance economic
In conclusion, the movement of people in rural areas has both drawbacks and advantages. But the government should implement some activities to keep balance people in many areas
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In some statistical...
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Đề: In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?
In many professional sports, abusing prohibited substances to assist athletes’ performance is becoming common. This essay will discuss how athletes’ ambition and the effects of illegal substances are the main causes of this problem, and the most suitable solutions are imposing stricter rules and promoting the detrimental effects of these drugs.
There are two major reasons why athletes use forbidden substances to boost their overall performance. Firstly, the desire for success appears when people are in fierce competitions. It is human nature and athletes are no exception, they always want to win to fulfil their own desires and meet the expectations of others. All athletes strive to earn admiration, especially when they represent their country with the significant mission of bringing honour. Furthermore, the quick results that athletes gain from using banned substances are tempting as it is the easiest way to achieve success without much effort. As a result, athletes’ health is increasingly falling due to the abuse of these drugs. For example, there are many organisations selling drugs illegally these days with appealing advertisements.
There are two main measures that can be implemented to tackle this problem. First, what the government should do is impose rigorous regulation. The government should actively seek out harmful organisation and ban them. Besides that, the institutions which organise sports competitions examine whether the candidates use forbidden substances before allowing them to take part in competitions. For instance, those who use banned substances face a lifetime ban in the Olympics. Another measure is that the government might promote the adverse effects of illegal drugs through social media. In this way, athletes might raise awareness and dare not to use drugs. By taking these solutions this problem will be dealt with appropriately.
In conclusion, there are two main causes leading to this phenomenon, these are athletes’ desire and the magic of drugs. There are also two solutions: imposing stricter regulations and posting news on social media.
Đề: In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the po...
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These days it is becoming more and more common for people who choose cosmetic surgery to attempt to enhance their appearances. There are several reasons why this trend has become increasingly popular although there are various risks in the surgery process, I believe that it is still a positive development.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why people choose plastic surgery procedure. Firstly, enhancing one's appearance will boost self-esteem and feel more confident and happy within oneself. Whether someone is unconfident and unhappy about the shape of their nose, eyes, and skin lost their youthful appearance, plastic surgery is the best way to help millions of people change body and feel better about their appearance. By undergoing surgery cosmetic, people will gain self-confidence and have a happier life, which I believe that cosmetic surgery is a positive method.
On the other hand, cosmetic surgery is also a physical methodology. For example, people with obesity and overweight, although they train and have a healthy diet, can not lose weight, which impact negatively on their lifestyle. Therefore, plastic surgery will help them lose weight through liposuction which allows them more active and improve their quality of life. Furthermore, well-known singers and actors have had surgery cosmetic to change their appearance, which helps them be more confident when standing in front of thousands of people.
In conclusion, although there are many cases of plastic surgery has been detrimental, I strongly believe that it is used to help one's appearance and improve their quality of life.
These days it is becoming more and more common for people who choose cosmetic surgery to attempt to enhance their appearances. There are several reasons why this trend has become increasingly popular...
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Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.Are these shows a good method of finding talented people , or they just entertainment?
It is true that talent shows have attracted much attention of viewers in the current age.However,some of the talent shows were organized for searching talented individuals while the others were totally held in entertainment purposes . Moreover,it is undeniable that televised talent shows play a crucial role in finding talented residents
On the one hand, talent shows are found in order to make room for brilliant people to perform their wonderful skills on TV screen.For that reason, many geniuses participated in this kind of show to prove themselve and make audiences feel surprised about the magnificent abilities .Take an example of a talent show ,which was widely known in Viet Nam, “ Sieu Tri Tue” is created with the attendance of brilliant participants .Throughout the show,they competed intensely and used wisely their natural ability to overcome challenges.Therefore, it is evident that talent shows are the great oppoturnity to discover talented humans
On the other hand, many producers want to relax watcher from hard-working hours so they tend to organize talent event for relaxing target. For instance , “ Viet Nam Got Talent” has reputation for its winners since they usually become famous actors or singers after coming through the show.Nevertheless, there were some players acted weirdly as they joined a comedy and this work brought a lot of amusement to followers .Based on that case, we can see that there are some talent shows only make people feel relaxed not seeking for high-qualified individuals
Futhermore , while creating talented events is an effective option to find brilliant residents , we can not deny that there are other methods to do the same thing such as : reading newspaper , following news on TV although they are less reliable than talent shows
In conclusion , Organizing genius shows is a great work to search for brilliant individuals although there are other ways to seek talented people as well . Nevertheless, some the kind of talent events tend to satisfy their viewers with joy and they do not highly appreciate seeking for talented residents
Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.Are these shows a good method of finding talented people , or they just entertainment?
It is true that talent shows have attracted...
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em bài TASK 2 với ạ:Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In the contemporary era, there has witnessed a growing number of people who contend that government funding for the arts, such as music and theater, is an unwise use of resources, and that this money would be better spent on public services. This essay will proffer a number of convincing rationales to clarify why I take issue with this opinion.
One of the primary justifications for government arts funding is its role in preserving and promoting a country's cultural heritage. The arts are a vital expression of a society's history, values, and identity. By supporting artistic endeavors, governments play a crucial part in ensuring that this cultural legacy is not lost, but rather passed down to future generations. For instance, the Vietnamese government allocates resources towards the restoration and maintenance of UNESCO World Heritage sites like the Imperial City of Hue, the ancient town of Hoi An,helping protect these tangible links to Vietnam's storied past for future generations.
Additionally, the investment in arts can be powerful drivers of tourism, attracting visitors from around the world and boosting local economies. To illustrate, The Cannes Film Festival in France is a prestigious annual event that draws the attention of tourists and celebrities worldwide. The prestige and media exposure generated by the Cannes Film Festival have a halo effect, strengthening France's reputation as a global cultural powerhouse and a desirable tourist destination. The government's ongoing commitment to funding this premier arts event is a key factor in maintaining France's position as a leading cultural tourism hub.
In conclusion, I completely reject the notion that government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Such funding is vitally important and should be prioritized alongside investment in essential public services
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Many manufactory food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, a plethora of health ailments involving the people's sugar utilization in goods with high levels of sugar, have heightened the public interest in the topic of how to incentivize people to minimize sugar consumption. Therefore, there are some opinions that sugary items should be made more exorbitant. In my point of view, I wholeheartedly agree with this remedy.
There are two obvious reasons why some opinions oppose this idea. Firstly, this initiative affects the sustainability of sweet manufacturing companies. Given prohibitive expense, this would be a struggle for some firms, which sell sweet products such as candies, soda,.., to generate goods in a large amount. Thus, these companies can face closure in the long run. Additionally, exorbitant costs could widen the gap between the affluent elite and the rest of society. With expensive items, this can be excessive with underprivileged people, whereas wealthy people can pay for it. Therefore, this will broaden the gap between them.
However, I believe that this solution brings more positive outcomes than its disadvantages. Firstly, this initiative can orient residents to have a healthy lifestyle. By having limited choices with sugary goods due to its extremely expensive cost, inhabitants may shift to using other organic items, and gradually form healthy lifestyles. As a result, this utilization can foster a healthy society. Additionally, this idea can alleviate the strain on hospitals. With an immense number of dwellers having robust lifestyles, hospitals can have less pressure on the quantities of hospital admission. Therefore, congestion due to the large number of patients can be controlled.
In conclusion, I firmly agree with this view about increasing the expenses for sweet goods to minimize the consumption of sugary items. Albeit there are some negative sides which are the effect to the sustainability of sweet manufacturing firms, and likelihood of widen the gap between the wealthy elite and low-income people, I believe that this proposal can have more valuable virtues which are the capability of orienting residents have healthy lifestyles, and alleviating the strain on hospital.
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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent films should be not released. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While many contend that violent films should be banned from television broadcast and cinematic screens, this essay argues that the government regulation on the level of violence for film is a more beneficial approach, despite acknowledging that both are valid.
Admittedly, prohibiting movies displaying aggressive elements can yield certain noteworthy virtues, one of which is the prevention of adverse impacts on children’s future. Indubitably, various scenes of school bullying leave young viewers emotionally distressed, likely triggering an extreme fear of school attendance. Hence, this phobia can hamper children from gaining informative knowledge provided by school, resultantly undermining teenagers’ opportunities to secure finanically rewarding jobs when they attend the workforce. In other words, completely preventing violent movies from screens will probably protect teenagers from potential harm, leading to diminishing their chances of career success after student life .
Conversely, setting a regulation on violence level of films is incontrovertibly beneficial for both film industry and society. To the former, one of the most discernible upsides is to promote profitable growth for the film industry. This can be explained by a huge number of people, who express their preference for violent films over other genres. In this sense, regulating the level of violence for films may enable film producers to not only retain current audiences but also attract prospective customers, likely leading to the rise in revenues. On the societal level, government bodies can receive higher taxes, which are likely invested in crucial factors, such as education and construction. Resultantly, this can potentially create a civilized society.
In conclusion, banning films with aggressive elements is sound as it acts as a preventive measure against potential negative influences. However, I am of the opinion that regulating the level of violence for films can be a better option due to the possibility of fostering economic growth for film businesses as well as a sustainable and well-rounded society.
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ĐỀ BÀI: These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Females have been told to stay at home and take care of their children for the last many decades. However, in today’s world, more women take the responsibility for being a chief breadwinner, whereas men become stay-at-home husbands. From my perspective, this change can be attributed to many reasons and I consider this is not a positive development.
There are two main reasons associated with this phenomenon. The first cause is that the roles of women have been more dignified than in the past. Due to the fact that many global organizations have finalized policies and implemented them to protect the rights of women. Therefore, women can receive the same rights as men, such as going to school, especially pursuing a career. As a result, they may want to be more independent and successful in their career ladder. Another reason is that men, nowadays, realize the dominance of spending time with their family. Because when male individuals stay at home, they can take care of their children directly and share household chores with their wives. Therefore, this can tighten family bondings and prevent conflicts between fathers and mothers.
Personally, I deem this a negative development. Although childcare responsibilities needs parental involvement, it is more suitable for women. This is mainly due to the inherent femininity of females. It consists of gentleness, empathy, and sensitivity. Therefore, children can be cared for more diligently, especially in their formative years, and mothers also can improve their emotional aspect. Additionally, regarding both mental health and physical health, women are weaker than men. The person who is in charge of the primary breadwinner can face stress not only from the workforce but also from the family. So, a man is capable of overcoming those obstacles more effectively than a woman.
In conclusion, while the role-swap between mothers and fathers can result in a gender gap and happiness of the family, I believe that it is not a positive change because of suitable roles for both females and males. If this phenomenon continues rising in popularity, the whole world may deal with the imbalance in the family and society.
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IELTS WRITING
Em mới học writing, mong các thầy cô giúp đỡ, chấm sửa bài giúp em ạ, em cám ơn
Đề: the table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Bài làm:
The table and pie charts above delineate the changes in the proportion of local and international research students in Australian universities over nearly one decade, from 2001 to 2010.
Overall, both the number of local and international research students exhibited an upward trend over the 9-year period. As can be seen from the two pie charts, the percentage of non-local female students increased significantly, surpassing that of non-local males, whereas the number of local females was still lower than male a little.
In 2010, students researching in Australian universities were mainly local students, with 87% of scholars falling into this category, including the number of females being nearly equal to males. By comparison, at that time, the number of international research students, being in the minority with 13%, was just one-sixth of the number of local students.
Over nearly one decade, it is apparent that the figure for non-local scholars went up much more briskly, registering a noticeable rise of 14%, from 13% to 27% in 2010. Another thing worth noting is a big leap in the proportion of female international students with 11% rising, even surpassing the number of male international students. Compared to the substantially increasing quantity of non-local students, the number of local students still grew steadily.
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Đề: the table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
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Task 2: Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is
more important than others?
People have different views about whether economic progress or other factors should be placed more important to evaluate a country’s achievement. While there are some reasons to support other factors that should be included in measuring the success of a nation besides economics, I would take the view that the merits of these factors are in equal measure.
On the one hand, I believe that in addition to economics, human rights, and environmental factors should be considered in measuring the success of a country. First of all, citizens should be able to access education and be treated equally regardless of their race, age, gender,... This will encourage society to reduce discrimination and create opportunities to eliminate the gap between the rich and the poor, thereby improving social equality. Secondly, besides solely focusing on profit, business entities have to protect the environment as well by reducing CO2 emissions, toxic wastes, and deforestation… These approaches allow the nation to prevent environmental consequences and maintain sustainable development in the long term.
Economic factor, nevertheless, is also great important in terms of improving living standards and laying a basis foundation for a country’s comprehensive development. The progress of the economy promotes the expansion of production and manufacturing, which can create a lot of jobs for the country's labor. These advantages help the nation decrease the unemployment rate and increase domestic income leading to higher living standards for citizens. Moreover, the development of the economy also creates a potential money flow to support other aspects, such as the improvement of waste recycling systems, and promoting implementation of renewable energy in production,... These contributions of economic progress to other factors enable the country to develop sustainably and comprehensively.
To summarize, although economic progress is often overvalued in evaluating a country’s success, environmental factors and human rights should be considered in this measurement for their contribution to developing sustainability and social equality. Therefore, I strongly believe the roles of these factors are equally important.
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