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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate how a small museum and its nearby area had changed between 1990 and 2010.
Overall, the changes of the museum had been not significant, save for the expansion of the car park and the construction of a new cafe.
Originally, In 1990, there were two small gardens at the top left and right corners of the museum area. The exhibition room opposite the main entrance, an L-shaped building and a shop next to it. The store room, at the left corner, was located below the garden, and there were two small exhibition rooms nearby. On the right, there was a car park and a large garden below. A main road stretched along the museum.
With the change of the museum in 2010, some locations remained unchanged including the storeroom, two small gardens, and the entrance. However, there were some changes of the size and replacement. The L- shaped building had been demolished to make way for the shop. Two separate exhibition rooms in 1990 had been combined into one big building. A cottage in 1990 had been replaced by a new cafe. On the right, the parking lot had been expanded, so thus, the large garden had been removed.
The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant....
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The two maps show comparisons made between two floor plans of a trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.
Overall, this plan has experienced several significant changes with the emergency of the concert hall and stage and the demolition of the display area and the meeting room.
As can be seen, the entrance situated on the north side of the conference has two gates, including the main entrance to the left and the side entrance to the right. Between the two gates was a registration area, and all this remained unchanged over the period.
By contrast, the northbound half of this trade conference witnessed some notable transformations, including the fact that the balcony placed along the right wall from the side entrance became a balcony with a lounge area. Next to the balcony, a registration was added in 2010, compared to 2009. In 2009, there was a concert hall and stage in a meeting room to the rear of the left-hand side of the main entrance. After one year, they emerged together and moved near the balcony, converting the position into an exhibition area. Meanwhile, the exhibition area moved to the left corner of the conference, which is more enlarged. The final change is that the display area in the heart of the conference has been completely removed.
The two maps show comparisons made between two floor plans of a trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.
Overall, this plan has experienced several significant changes with the emergency of the concer...
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The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
The given bar chart gives information about how many Olympic medals that separate twelve countries have won. Overall, USA comes first in the total won medals, which was much larger than any that of other countries. Furthermore, the proportions of three different medals of these nations are quite similar.
According to the chart, the greatest figures belong to the US, which possess about 2,300 medals. Moreover, it can be seen that there is slight difference in numbers between each type of medal, with roughly 900 recorded in gold medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze. Meanwhile, in second place on the chart is Soviet Union, having got approximately 1000 medals, with gold medals are a bit higher in number, with nearly 400 gold medals.
As the datas provided by the chart, four next coutries, including the UK, France, Germany and Italy, all won over 500 medals, with quite identical in terms of the number of each color of medals. Additionally, the remaining countries have kind of similar number, ranging from below 500 to 400 medals. Notably, it is witnessed that China has a bit more the gold ones than the left 2 medals, around 200.
The given bar chart gives information about how many Olympic medals that separate twelve countries have won. Overall, USA comes first in the total won medals, which was much larger than any that of ot...
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The two maps show some alterations made to a specific school between 1985 and today.
Overall, it is clear that this school has become a far more modern school, with more facilities for students.
In 1985, with populations’ students size of 1500 students, this school had a large rectangular car park situated right on a north road that was an entrance and exit. In the eastern part of the school, there were some buildings, including an office, library, small car park, and classrooms. On the western side of the map, there was a classroom block with two storeys that was adjacent to a big playing field.
As can be seen, the population of this school currently increases significantly compared to 1985, with 23000 students. One striking change is that the car park is transformed into a half-circle shape. To the left side, the library and small car park were knocked down to make way for constructing a learning resources centre that is a computer room and expanding old classrooms. Meanwhile, the playing field was narrowed to building some amenities, including a pool and fitness centre in the northeast, coupled with the addition of the third storey to the rear of West School and a classroom to accomodate an increasing number of students.
The two maps show some alterations made to a specific school between 1985 and today.
Overall, it is clear that this school has become a far more modern school, with more facilities for students.
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The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today.
In general, the town of Kimsville has witnessed remarkable developments that transformed the town from a small rural village into a largely residential area. The most noticeable change in the town was the increase in leisure facilities and the elimination of forests.
One interesting change is that two forests have been cut down to build new apartments and a football stadium for residential and entertaining purposes. In 2002, there was not any public transport service for villagers, but now a new train station has been introduced in the west of the city centre.
Looking at the east of the city centre, there was a factory in this area but it has been replaced by a software company since 2002. A final striking development is that the old cinema has been converted into a pub opposite the shopping centre.
The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today.
In general, the town of Kimsville has witnessed remarkable developments that...
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Map writing task 1
The given diagrams illustrates the changing of a town center known with the name Islip. Overall, there are great changes to the center of the town including the presence of the ring road and more facilities will be added.
As can be seen from the first map, the main road runs from the west to the east with shops lying along two side of the road. Furthermore, to the north of the main road is the countryside, which streches along on the top of the map. Meanwhile, most of the area in the south is placed with housing and basic facilities nearby the brands of the main road.
It is clear that the town will be advanced with several location and facilities. The main road will be expand into a big ring road with dual carriageway, creating more space for not only the appearance of new destinations and housing, but also area for pedestrians. Additionally, one of the two line shops will be moved and the park will be reduced in size.
The given diagrams illustrates the changing of a town center known with the name Islip. Overall, there are great changes to the center of the town including the presence of the ring road and more faci...
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Mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài writing task 2 này ạ
Topic: Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more important factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the world of sports, the question of what leads to success is often debated. While some individuals argue that physical ability is the key factor, others believe that there are more important elements at play such as mentality of determination. In my opinion, achieving athletic excellence requires a harmonious blend of a wide range of aspects.
On the one hand, undoubtedly, physical ability forms a crucial foundation for athletic achievement. Professional sports set demanding physical standards, from muscular endurance and agility to body composition. Athletes who fall short of these benchmarks may struggle to compete at the highest levels. For instance, basketball players need exceptional height and jumping ability, while marathon runners require exceptional cardiovascular fitness.
However, physical prowess alone is not a guarantee of success. Mental strength plays an equally significant role. Athletes competing under immense pressure, from coaches and fans alike, need unwavering mental resilience to perform at their peak. A strong competitive spirit, coupled with the ability to handle setbacks and channel nerves into focus, is essential. Think of a tennis player facing a crucial match point – mental toughness can be the deciding factor between victory and defeat. Furthermore, dedication and unwavering work ethic are vital for success. Even the most physically gifted athletes need to relentlessly hone their skills and maintain their peak physical condition. An athlete like Serena Williams, renowned for her powerful serve and athleticism, has achieved her legendary status through years of tireless training and unwavering dedication.
In conclusion, while physical ability plays a vital role in sports, it is not the only factor that leads to success. Mental strength, determination, and discipline are equally important in determining an athlete's success.
Topic: Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more important factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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The table presents the information about how many commuters used three major airports in Britain from 1998 and 2003.
In general, all the airports saw a growth trend in the airport visitors count over the period year in the question. An interesting point is that Gatwick airport maintained the highest annual number of visitors, whereas Stansted airport had the lowest one throughout the period.
As can be seen, in 1998, the number of travelers using Gatwick airport was 36.5 million, then it increased impressively before reaching a peak of 69.3 million in the last year of the period. Similarly, there was an escalation in Heathrow’s, which was from 27.2 million in 1998 to 45.6 million in 2003.
Compared with the two airports mentioned above, Stansted had a lowest yearly passenger number. Starting with 17.3 millions of travelers, Stansted airport experienced a substantial rise to 43.3 million in 2001, after which plateaued over the last two years of the timeline.
The table presents the information about how many commuters used three major airports in Britain from 1998 and 2003.
In general, all the airports saw a growth trend in the airport visitors count over...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em. The table below shows the prices of a cup of coffee in 6 cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table displays the variations in the cost of a cup of coffee across six Australian cities spanning the years 2010 to 2014.
Looking at the table, it is immediately apparent that Melbourne experienced the most remarkable rise in the price per cup of coffee during this time. Among the six cities, Sydney had the highest coffee prices, whereas Canberra had the lowest over the studied period.
In 2010, Sydney had the highest price for a cup of coffee at $2.90, almost double the price in Canberra at $1.50. Melbourne had the second-highest price at $2.40, followed by Brisbane at $2.25, and Perth at $2.10. Adelaide and Canberra had the lowest prices below $2, at $1.87 and $1.50, respectively.
After four years, the ranking remained the same, with Sydney still leading at $3.17 and Canberra charging the least at $1.70 per coffee cup. Brisbane's coffee price remained unchanged at $2.25 throughout the period.
The provided table displays the variations in the cost of a cup of coffee across six Australian cities spanning the years 2010 to 2014.
Looking at the table, it is immediately apparent that Melbour...
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Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In contemporary society, opinions are divergent regarding the gender roles in parenthood. Although women have been ascribed to the responsibility of bringing up children, it is a growing agreement that fathers must share equal duty with their wives. From my perspective, I totally concur with the latter viewpoint due to its desirable influences on the family and women’s career.
There are various explanations to justify my opinion. In former days, gender roles lacked equality in the roles of wife and husband. While women tended to be at home and take care of children, men had to be breadwinners. As a matter of fact, a great number of women are dependent on their husband, which leads them to be despised negatively. Therefore, gender equality in childcare decisions can allow women to pursue their career path generate more income, thus being financially independent and dedicating to raising their children.
Another rationale behind my belief is that equal childcare from parents can deliver children a good environment to cultivate their development. According to research, mothers have the inclination towards teaching children emotionally, whereas fathers teach logically. Additionally, fathers are usually more strict when children make unacceptably behavioral mistakes. Consequently, if children have more opportunities to play and learn with their fathers, their cognition can be fostered significantly, thereby performing better at school as well as preventing their behaviour from being deviated from standards.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is that parenthood must take gender roles between men and women into great consideration since it brings many beneficial advantages to the holistic growth of children as well as eliminate prejudices against women’s ability to work.
In contemporary society, opinions are divergent regarding the gender roles in parenthood. Although women have been ascribed to the responsibility of bringing up children, it is a growing agreement tha...
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The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the average salary per year of doctors and other workers in seven nations in 2004.
Overall, the amount of money spent on paying for doctors was higher than those for other workers in all seven examined countries. Additionally, the figures for doctors and other workers in the US were the highest among all nations.
As observed from the graph, doctors in Italy, Czech Republic, and Germany were paid the same amount of annual income at around 60000 dollars. Moreover, other workers in these countries also got exactly 20000 dollars per year. While Switzerland and France expended about 70000 dollars per person to pay for doctors in 2004, only around 30000 dollars was spent on paying for a people worked in other field in France compared to 40000 dollars in Switzerland.
Further inspection of the graph reveals that, in 2004, the US charge the highest sum of money for doctors and other workers, at 120000 dollars and 45000 dollars, respectively. In contrast, doctors in Finland were paid approximately 45000 dollars, which is the lowest figure in all nations examined, while workers in this country were paid at about 25000 dollars.
The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
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mong được thầy cô chữa để biết bản thân em đang ở band nào ạ
People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is an opinion that life quality in the 21st century is better than that in the past eras. Personally, I think there is little to disagree with this viewpoint, and in this essay, I will explain why.
Granted, with a variety of medical advancements, people now can have access to many healthcare services which was not available in the past. This will not only enhance the life expectancy but also provide many medical treatments to cure many dangerous diseases. For example, in the 20th century, a serious infectious cholera called the Black Death occurred all over Europe and caused millions of deaths. However, with the support from technology and modern treatments, such illness has been prevented and people are no longer have to suffer from those pain.
Moreover, various technological innovations have marked a significant improvement over the past, and the convenience and efficiency brought by those is outstanding. Chief of these is that with just a smartphone which is connected to the Internet, you can easily get access to any information you want just by surfing those on Google, connect to people all over the world just by a call on Messenger of Snapchat, pay for anything by online banking. With such improvements, you will save a budget of time to do other tasks since you don’t have to read newspaper to know what is happening around the world, to get information for your assignments, write letters to your friends to stay connected with them, or always have bring cash with you whenever you want to buy something like in the past.
In conclusion, I believe that modern life is much superior than life in the past centuries, since it had significantly enhanced our living standard through advancements in healthcare services and technology, making our life more convenient, connected, and comfortable than ever before.
People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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mong được thầy cô chữa để biết bản thân em đang ở band nào ạ
Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting more works of art like paintings and statues into towns and cities to make them attractive places.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
There is an opinion that to make towns and cities become more exciting and attractive, governmental bodies should expend more money to put more pieces of art as paintings and statues into where people live. Personally, I believe that this allocation may not efficient since people now are no longer too interested in artworks like in the past.
Granted, although artistic objects hold a huge spiritual value, which present the culture of a region or a country, people are more attracted by other entertaining activities rather than watching a picture or a sculpture. With the advancements of social media, people now tend to try new things that are trendy on the Internet, not only youngsters but also elderly. They would rather go to amusement parks or restaurants than visit museums or places that display works of arts. As a result, spending more money on artistic values to get attention from visitors is quite unreasonable.
Therefore, more money should be expended on more interesting, fabric activities and destinations. Crucial factors like infrastructures, green spaces, and public services play a vital role in making cities more livable and attractive. Restaurants, efficient public transportation systems, green parks are extremely common and important in our daily lives and significantly impact a city’s appeal. For example, visitors come to cities like Paris or New York not because of works of art which are presented there, as people come to these cities thanks to modern infrastructures, high quality public services and cuisine. Thus, while pieces of arts can enrich valuable culture, it is prior to allocating more funds for improving facilities and public services.
In conclusion, although work of arts in urban spaces remarkably contributes a aesthetic value, I admit that providing more funds for developing fundamental urban infrastructures and services is a wiser course of action for enhancing attraction and livability of towns and cities.
Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting more works of art like paintings and statues into towns and cities to make them attractive places.
To what extent do you agree or di...
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Em Mong Được Thầy Cô Nhận Xét Và Chấm Chữa Bài Task 2 Này Ạ . Em Chân Thành Cảm Ơn Ạ
Đề bài : Some people think it is more important for the government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyles in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill . To what extent do you agree or disagree .
Many people argue that it is essential for the government to allocate financial resources to promote healthy lifestyles to avoid diseases instead of spending on cures for underwell individuals. Personally , I completely agree with this view .
The reason why I agree that the government should focus on encouraging healthy lifestyles instead of providing medical treatment after a person gets sick is because it helps reduce healthcare expenditure . This can be explained by the fact that if individuals regularly exercise and have good eating habits it will strengthen immune systems and reduce the risk of suffering from health problems . As a result, the spending on treatment , drugs and healthcare services will significantly decrease .
In addition, the idea of promoting healthy habits would be beneficial to scientists and researchers . This is due to when the government launched the campaign to promote healthy lifestyles and prevention programmes which facilitated scientists to research on the way to avoid or delay the onset of fatal health problems . Therefore , the outbreak of life-threatening health conditions like cancer or heart attack would dramatically decline.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above,I maintain that the government should be responsible for promoting healthy lifestyles by public financial resources . It would be beneficial for both individuals and researchers.
Đề bài : Some people think it is more important for the government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyles in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The village of Bunborough is depicted on the two maps below, along with plans for the village in 2024. Overall, it is apparent that a railway line and new road added to the fishing port will disappear in the future.
In the present day, the village consists mostly of houses with just a few shops, the beach, a fishing port, and some road lines. In the east of the village, there were some houses and shops inside the road line.
By the time plans were finished for autumn 2024, the village had changed considerably, mostly regarding the number of houses. Some houses will need to be destroyed and rebuilt elsewhere. The total number of houses will not greatly change though. The village’s current source of income appears to be fishing. In the future, this will be tourism as new hotels are built and much of the fishing port is destroyed. Although the fishing port is being replaced with a promenade, the beach will not change. There will be new road links to the south, and a railway line will be constructed around the villa with a station on the outskirts.
The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wher...
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ
The given diagrams illustrate how the land has changed since 1995 to current.
Overall, the place has undergone a number of dramatic changes, with the most important of which being the development in the sea and the addition of several buildings.
In the north-west, residential area has been expanded with more residences catering for the increase in the population of the area, and the sport venues to the south of these accommodations have been converted into restaurants. In the center of the maps, the two hotels have been modernized to the two-floor spots, and the holiday home, car park have been erected, replacing the public park. There used to be a farm land in the north-east, but it has then been replaced by the golf course, which has been accompanied by the tennis course catering for recreational needs.
In the south-west, the fish market has been transformed into the apartment catering for the demand of staying, and the road which just had one way leading to the fish market in 1995, has been branched off to another small path reaching to the coffee. Furthermore, the coffee has been relocated to the center position due to the expansion of this new road. There is no longer a place for fish boats to anchor in the morning, and the sea has become a tourist destination with a plethora of yachts for tourists traveling.
The given diagrams illustrate how the land has changed since 1995 to current.
Overall, the place has undergone a number of dramatic changes, with the most important of which being the development i...
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The two maps show some alternatives made in Porth Harbour between 2000 and today.
Overall, this harbour had experienced several significant transformations, including a position conversion between Maria for private yachts and fishing boats and the addition of a new dock in its central area.
On the north side of this harbour, the position of a car park and showers and toilets remained unchanged over time. One striking change is that the Maria for private yachts moved to the south side to exchange places with fishing boats. In 2000, there was only one dock, but today it has experienced the expansion of another dock. Nearby is a public beach, and passenger ferries have remained until now.
In the south, in 2000, there was another car park that led to the side road before it was connected to the main road, along with showers and toilets area addition. Commercial development is evident with the introduction of cafes and shops to the rear of the south harbour. Next to is a lifeboat station the same compared to 2000. The disused castle was removed to make room for the building of a hotel, which includes a private beach and is linked to the side road.
The two maps show some alternatives made in Porth Harbour between 2000 and today.
Overall, this harbour had experienced several significant transformations, including a position conversion between...
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Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?
In recent years the popularity of bicycle usage has been dropped. This is because the fast pace of life and electric vehicles have gained popularity. This can be tackcled by interventions of the government and companies.
It is obvious that the two introduced reasons have had an influence on the way of making choices of means of traveling. First and foremost, the husle and bustle of current society does not allow people to spend time cycling, particularly officers who usually have hectic work schedules. As a results, to limit time for commuting they opt for other means of transportation, such as public transport or personal vehicles. Another essential reason need considering is that the common of electric vehicles have led people to more various options when it comes to traveling. In the past, people chose cycling with the wish to supportedly protecting the environment, but there is another more effective option for people nowadays. In Vietnam, the revenues of Tesla and Vinfast, which are two most popular electric vehicle production companies now, have been rising dramatically. This is the evidence that people prefer this type of vehicle to bycicles.
The joint effort of both goveronments and companies can address this problem and promt the use of bycicles in commuters. In terms of the government, awareness campaigns should be launched to detail the benefits of cycling. People need to see the potential results bring to them when cycling, such as building and stregthening muscles or improving stress level. Besides, companies should make rewarding programs to convince their employees to cycle to work. For instance, VNG, which is a vietnamese corporation has established a small fund to reward their workers for cycling regularly. By this way, people in their workplace are likely to go for bycicles instead of other kind of transportation.
In conclusion, the tendency of using bycicles has descended due to the changes of lifestyles and the existency of new vehicles. Both governments and buisenesses should contribute their effort to raise up the number of bycicle usage.
In recent years the popularity of bicycle usage has been dropped. This is because the fast pace of life and electric vehicles have gained popularity. This can be tackcled by interventions of the gover...
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Đề bài : Some people think that the government have the duty to ensure its citizens to have a healthy diet , while others argue it is responsibility of each individual . Discuss both views and give your experience .
Many people believe that the government must make sure its residents to have good eating habits . Others , however , believe that it is the responsibility of each individual . This essay will examine both views and explain why I ultimately believe that individuals should take primary responsibility for their own dietary choices."
On the one hand , there are several reasons why some people feel that the government is responsible for ensuring its individuals achieve a healthy diet . The first one is that government officials are selected by the public so that they need to take responsibility for taking care of their citizens . Therefore the government can promote healthy eating habits by making sure that food factories and industrial zones comply with food security standards and requirements . In addition , another reason is inhabitants have to pay various kinds of taxes on a monthly basis , so that the government can expenditure this finance on public health campaigns to encourage exercises and balanced diets .
On the other hand , I side with those who think that the residents have the duty to ensure that they have a healthy diet . This can be explained by the fact that as adults , we should be held accountable for our actions that encourage self - care and self responsibility . If we become rely heavily on the government for health , we could ultimately become dependent on them for everything in our lives . Moreover , the individuals will make their own decisions on foods and eating diets , thus they can take into account calories and nutrients in food which suitable for individuals . As a result , it facilitates resident to easily control their weight and make healthier food choices .
In conclusion , although some people say that citizens gaining a healthy diet which is the duty of the government , I would completely agree with those who believe that individuals should be held accountable for having good eating habits . By taking control of their dietary choices, individuals can promote their own well-being and contribute to a healthier society.
Đề bài : Some people think that the government have the duty to ensure its citizens to have a healthy diet , while others argue it is responsibility of each individual . Discuss both views and give yo...
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The message that unless there is the constant effort, they may deal with more obstacles to achieve success has been deeply ingrained in some cultures. According to that, some parents attempt to remind it to their offsprings days by days. Therefore, this essay will elaborate further on both beneficial and adverse sides of converting this valuable message.
The foremost benefit of this action is to promote the consistence of children. It means that whenever they begin any event that has an ability to profoundly affect their daily life, they are more likely to follow all steps and respect the process via their dedication, resulting that their consistence may be built up gradually. For instance, the requirement for a student to enter a medical university is at excessively high standard. Therefore, these spots may be only given to these students who have remained studying hard and never given up in their dreams. Indeed, due to this message, the child has become more consistent to achieve their goals.
In contrast, the increase of pressure on a young child is the primary disadvantage of it. This is because the parents, who are impacted by this conception, want their child to achieve success as fast as they can. Whist education may be a shortest way for that purpose, they potentially enforce their child to study with the rigorous schedule and a limited recreational time. Consequently, if these children experience this condition in a long period, they may be stressful and even lead to some mental diseases. It is also obvious in Chinese to notice that numerous youngers have faced depression because of the unstoppable time for study in recent years.
To conclude, it is no doubt that a positive side to transmit the message, hard-working can help people reach to their goals, for offsprings is to promote their consistence with any decision in entire their life. However, that it simultaneously generates an exclusive pressure on this age can be seen as one of the biggest detrimental sides.
The message that unless there is the constant effort, they may deal with more obstacles to achieve success has been deeply ingrained in some cultures. According to that, some parents attempt to remin...
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