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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ
Percentage change in average house prices in five cities 1990-2002 compared with 1989.
The given picture shows the change in the prices of houses in two periods, 1990–1995, and 1996–2002, compared to the prices in 1989.
Overall, there are huge differences between the changes in house prices in five cities in two periods, with the most significant being London.
In the first period, from 1990 to 1996, the cost of average houses in New York and London dropped by around 5% and 7%, respectively. However, in the second period, from 1996 to 2002, house buyers in London had to pay 5% more than they did in 1989. Moreover, there was an increase of 12% in New York house prices, which was the highest estate price growth rate over 13 years.
On the other hand, the prices for an average house in Tokyo decreased by 7% in the first period, but between 1996 and 2002, homes in Tokyo remained cheaper by 5% than they were in 1989. Over the five years after 1989, people in Madrid and Frankfurt were reported to buy houses with approximately 2% higher prices. In the second period, compared to housing prices in other cities, those in Frankfurt experienced less significant fluctuations. By contrast, the price of housing in Madrid rose by a further 2%.
Percentage change in average house prices in five cities 1990-2002 compared with 1989.
The given picture shows the change in the prices of houses in two periods, 1990–1995, and 1996–2002, compared...
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Mong thầy cô chấm và hỗ trợ em cải thiện bài viết ạ
Task 2: Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to class delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that online courses provided by some universities nowadays are an alternative to offline classes. While online learning methods are criticized for some disadvantages, I believe such methods are far more benefit.
Those who argue that online learning is not effective compare to traditional learning may have some arguments. Firstly, classes that are delivered on virtual platforms usually lack interpersonal interaction. The learners only interact with a screen in front of them, listen to the lecture’s voice through the computer’s speaker, and do a little response. Secondly, if students are not good at concentration, they can be distracted by their surroundings easily, thereby reducing their learning effectiveness. Lastly, the exams organized through online platforms may exacerbate education integrity because students can intentionally conduct cheating behavior to get good results.
Nevertheless, I believe that online courses can bring greater benefits for students. Virtual education systems offer students with opportunity to freely choose appropriate time, and place for their learning. Thanks to this flexibility, during the COVID-19 pandemic, students worldwide did not have to abandon their academic careers due to restrictions of government. Besides that, online courses provide students with stored lecture video systems that allow them to review and revise the lectures anytime and anywhere. Moreover, such courses enable students to access to academic resources of many Universities around the world, that beneficial for students’ learning and research.
In conclusion, it is understandable why some people may argue the effectiveness of online courses. However, I would take the view that such learning courses offer a range of advantages for students.
Task 2: Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to class delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The bar graph illustrates the amount of teaching done by primary, lower and upper secondary in four different countries in 2001.
Overall, it is clear that teachers in USA taught significantly more than teachers in the remaining three countries. Moreover, the number of hours that teachers spent on primary was the lowest in 4 countries.
In 2001, upper secondary teachers in the USA taught around 1100 hours, this was followed by lower secondary teachers, who did only fewer than 1100 hours, compared to primary teachers, who taught more than 800 hours. In Ireland, Both of lower and upper teachers spent nearly 800 hours per year, but primary just accounted for 600 hours.
Meanwhile both primary and lower teachers in Japan and Spain had the same amount of hours teaching, with 600 hours per year. Similarly, upper secondary in Japan also taught around 600 hours, while Spain counterparted spend around 1000 hours teaching per year.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of teaching done by primary, lower and upper secondary in four different countries in 2001.
Overall, it is clear that teachers in USA taught significantly more th...
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Em chào thầy cô ạ. Đây là bài writing task 2 của em. Em mong được thầy cô chấm và nhận xét ạ.
Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people have proposed that supporting retirees about finance is done by the government, whereas others say that the implementation of financial independence is optimally enhanced. Although both perspectives have a degree of rationale, I agree more with the former perspective due to one primary reason that would be evaluated in this essay.
On the one hand, it is possible that there is one major reason why retired people should be responsible for paying their bills. In this day and age, the regulation of pension of people who finish their career is enacted and implemented for them which contributed to the development of the economy and nation in the past. As a result, retired people can allocate their pension monthly to pay for many bills such as water bills or daily bills in shops or markets. For instance, in Japan, the elderly people live on their own by living alone and using their salary as well as getting a job if they have enough health.
On the other hand, opponents of the previous view claim that the state ought to bear supporting financially for the senior citizens.In the developing nations, the poverty rate is increasing at unprecedented rate which is happening mainly from the retired people by financial burden that worsens the quality of living and national development. Therefore, if the government wants to improve the quality of society’s life and reduce homeless people, endoring money for retirees is the optimal way. In Vietnam, for example, in the past, there were many soldiers who contributed for the peace and independence of the nation to have a better life in the present without the war. Consequently, the Vietnamese state provided them a sum considered as a way of compensation for their devotion for their country.
In conclusion, although there are some controversial views whether or not the government or each individual takes responsibility for supporting financially, I believe that governments need to spend the state budget providing expenses for retired people.
Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in various activities in one month in 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER;
The chart illustrates the attendance of 18-20-year-old men and women in different activities in a month in 2015.
In general, the most popular activity for males was football, while cycling was the most favorite by females. In addition, there was a stark difference in the participation rates of men and women in all sport activities.
As can be inferred from the bar chart, cycling was favored by both males and females and the participation rates were not much different. To be more precise, about 40% of women participating cycling in this month, higher than the figures of men by about 5%. As for basketball, the number of males was around 34%, twice as much as that of females. Similarly, the football participation rate of men, which stood at about 54%, was 3 times as much as that of women.
In contrast, the proportion of females attending swimming activity was about 35%, whilst males only accounted for 20%. Finally, both men and women did not favor hockey, however, the number of males playing this sport was twice higher than females.
The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in various activities in one month in 2015.
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E mong được thầy cô chữa giúp e ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
Question: Nowadays, as role models, famous people have and increasing influence on the young. It is a possitive or negative development?
In the digital age, it is not an exaggeration to say that the prominence of celebrities significantly influences the youth, leading to shifts in their behaviors, encompassing both negative and positive aspects. This essay will explore both sides of this issue.
On the one hand, the impact of celebrities can catalyze positive developments. Firstly, famous people are embodiments of social responsibility models, as they can use their platform to promote positive messages and behaviors, such as supporting community affairs. This not only helps to polish their reputation but also motivates their fans to have a sense of social responsibility. Moreover, through the journeys of grappling with the challenges of renowned individuals, young people seem to be comforted and motivated when facing similar challenges, ultimately leading them to easily overcome obstacles in their lives.
However, alongside the benefits of high-profile individuals, the idolization of celebrities can also contribute to detrimental effects on the younger generation, who may have little or no life experience, making them easily influenced by things that can have a deleterious impact on their behavior. Firstly, famous individuals often boast about their luxury lifestyles and promote an idealized way of living to young minds, leading to unrealistic standards commonly seen on social media. This can result in feelings of inadequacy and low self-esteem among young people as they compare themselves with these portrayals of wealth and beauty. Secondly, idolizing those who exhibit unhealthy behaviors or controversial opinions, including substance abuse, risky conduct, and unethical actions, may lead young followers to harmful mimicry because they are too inexperienced to distinguish right from wrong.
In conclusion, while the positive effects of celebrities on the mental health of the youth are undeniable, it is essential not to overlook the drawbacks in terms of glamorizing unrealistic lifestyles and approving of dangerous actions, which contribute to developments more harmful than beneficial
Question: Nowadays, as role models, famous people have and increasing influence on the young. It is a possitive or negative development?
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Nhờ thầy cô chấm rõ từng tiêu chí giúp em ạ!
Topic: Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making traditions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether or not earning profits from cultural traditions is destroying them. The statement of this essay is that making money from cultural heritage can save these traditions from falling into oblivion.
It is comprehensible why people believe cultural traditions can be destroyed if they were used as money-making tools as the increasing vandalism of artifacts and the deterioration of the environment can be caused by mass tourism. With regard to the former, the curiosity of tourists may catalyse them to touch or even interact physically with the antiquities. For instance, if an old, fragile curio was touched by an inquisitive tourist, it may be disintegrated as it was incapable of physical interactions. Moving to the latter, the surrounding nature can be polluted or littered by unconscious visitors, who throw away garbage discriminately. Therefore, the beautiful sceneries around places of interest may be filled with toxic litters, the surrounding nature such as water and trees may also be affected by those noxious liquid or other substances.
However, the growth in the number of tourists is the opportunity for residents to introduce their traditions and increase the funding or expenses to preserve cultural heritage. Firstly, traditional activities or artifacts can be introduced to both foreign or local tourists. Hence, people will appreciate the values of ancient cultural traditions more and may realize the necessity of conserving cultural heritage, so those valuable traditions can not be sank into oblivion. Another beneficial effect is that mass tourism contribute to the sustainability of the country's traditions by increasing the funding for repairing old buildings or protecting them from being disrepaired. For example, the museum wall is badly damaged by the rain. In order to protect artifacts from being moisturized or collapsed, funding is needed to repair the wall to preserve antiquities inside that museum.
In conclusion, earning money from introducing cultural traditions to tourists has both merits and demerits. However, I believe that cultural heritage may be preserved from being fallen into oblivion due to the increase in funding and appreciation for the traditions.
Topic: Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making traditions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that it is the only way to save these tradi...
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Mong được thầy cô chấm bài writing task 1 của em. Em xin cảm ơn Thầy Cô
topic : Scientists have been warning for many years about environmental protection and how important it is to limit our daily energy consumption.
What are the causes of over-consumption of electricity?
How can people be encouraged to use less energy?
The promotion of protecting the environment from overconsumption of engery in our daily lives has been warned about by scientists for a long time. However, many individuals do not understand the vital of saving electricity. There are several reasons behinds this suggestion and multiple sollotions should be account address it.
A range of factors are responsible for topic why electricity was be used over-consumption. First and foremost, lack of understanding is a direct consequence of many people are not grasping the presented by scientists. According to recent reports, more than half in the population consits of the olderest generation and baby boomers, consequently, they can't touch the quickly information morden technology and know the reason why electricity can cost a fortune in the future. For instance, they only know the equipment that how the equipment works and how much their electricity bill is each month. If it is so high, they stop using the equipment and never buy that type again. The use of old-fashioned equipments is the another reason why power is being depleted by the human.
To solve this problem, a multi-faceted approach is required government and the younger generation by social media, banner and face to face. This is because these two subjects are always noiticed in the daily life and having a strong influence on parents and the oldest person. The government should introduce about the true benefits of new equiments through news, social media, banners, while the younger generation spread the message. This can help the eldest generation and baby boomer to get information and memorizes easier. Every year, we are spend a hour in the last Sunday March on turning off light to save electricity, protect environmental and this event called Earth Hour.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons this problem and several approaches should be adopted to solve this problem.
topic : Scientists have been warning for many years about environmental protection and how important it is to limit our daily energy consumption.
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thấy cô chữa giúp em bài WT2 này với ạ. em cảm ơn ạ
Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this? Suggest some solutions to improve the situation.
The juvenile criminal issue is becoming prevalent in many countries worldwide. While there are several reasons for the phenomenon, some solutions can be implemented to improve this situation.
One cause of this problem is the parents' inadequate practices. In modern life, parents become occupied with their jobs and cannot spend enough time with their children. In a metropolis such as Hanoi, many parents experience financial strain, work-related stress, and challenges in work-life balance; therefore, they can lack interaction with their children. As a result, the children often have aggressive behaviors to attract their parents' attention. To mitigate this problem, parents should learn how to manage their time effectively to maintain work-life balance. For example, in giant corporate such as Google, it has a flexible work model, allowing employees to work remotely, work flexible hours, or schedule their work hours according to their needs to fit their family schedules and time with their children.
Another reason is the children's constant exposure to violent content, which can have adverse effects on youth. According to statistics from the NCBI, the average child sees 12,000 violent acts on television annually, including many depictions of murder and rape. If the youth view media violence regularly, they are more likely to exhibit antisocial behavior. An effective method that should be implemented to tackle this issue is that parents should regularly monitor the content their children watch because teenagers cannot select suitable content. For instance, Youtube or Netflix also provide modes or features to help parents manage children's content safely and effectively
In conclusion, poor parenting practices and constant exposure to violent content are two culprits behind the problem. I believe that if the solutions mentioned above were implemented effectively, the problem would be alleviated.
Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this? Suggest some solutions to improve the situation.
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Topic: The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates the manufacturing process of coffee in 4 separate nations over the course of 20 years, starting from 1990 and ending in 2010.
Overall, there was an increase in the figure for coffee produced in three nations: Brazil, Indonesia, VietNam with the exception of Colombia. Despite the dramatic growth over the span, VietNam remained the nation that had the lowest coffee production in general.
The number of generated coffee in Brazil started at 0,7 millions tonnes in 1990, after which it experienced a significant climb in 1995 and 2000 with respective figures being 1 millions tonnes and 1,5 millions tonnes, before ending the period at 1,9 million tonnes. The figure for Indonesia was at 0,2 millions tonnes in the first two years, followed by steady rise to 0,3 millions tonnes in 2000 and 0,4 millions tonnes in 2010.
0,6 millions tonnes of coffee cultivation in 1990 in
Colombia, with a consistent drop to 0,5 millions tonnes in 1995 and 0,4 millions tonnes in 2000, and a final trough of 0,3 millions tonnes in 2010. A divergent pattern could be witnessed in the figure for Viet Nam, which started at 0,1 millions tonnes in 1990 to 1995, before experiencing a gradual climb to 0,2 millions tonnes in 2000 and peaked at 0,3 in 2010.
Topic: The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates the manufacturing process of coffee in 4 separate nations over...
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Em mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài W task 2 ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô ạ!
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the modern world, a number of people assume that computers should be regarded as the most significant creation which proufoundly influenced the human race in various aspects over the past century. However, there is still an opposing opinion from the remainder of public. From my point of view, I strongly agree with the first statement which gives computers the highest appreciation as the greatest invention.
On the one hand, those who support the first view have a number of reasons in favour of their viewpoint. Apparently, one major point must be included is that computers allow the process of uploading, storing as well as accessing information to become available all over the world. Therefore, they have provided more opportunities for research and have facilitated the development of human literacy. Taking science as a prominent example, many scientific works have been accomplished over the past decades thanks to the viability of materials which were thoroughly investigated and then archived on the computing system where researchers could take them as a source of preference.
In addition, another marvelous merit of the invention computer that I could also mention is that it is a versatile gadget assisting human beings in handling numerous sophisticated tasks. Some technical fields such as Mathematics, Geography or Animation do need computer to join hands in the stage of tracking and analysing data in order to state the most accurate result in an optimal time. To illustrate, human brains are incapable of solving a long range of calculations in a specifically short time and ensuring the accuracy of the equations, so we have to use computers as the more speedy assistance.
To conclude, the benefits computers bring to the human race are incredible and therefore cannot be overlooked. Without this blessing, many aspects such as science, maths will be procastinated from thriving development. Thus, it is highly essential for every single individual to acknowledge the impacts of computers.
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.
The picture illustrates how electricity is generated by a particular type of coal.
Overall, there are 8 main stages in this process, starting from the exploitation of coal to the transformation of electricity for consumption. Additionally, in certain steps during the process, the form of this mineral changes from solid to gas, and waste heat is excluded as a by-product.
The process begins with raw coal being exploited from the mine before being pulverised by means of a crusher. These fine fragments are then transferred to the gasifier, whereby high heat is used, rendering it into gas.
In the next step, the resulting gas enters the cooling facilities, during which waste heat is released. Once the gas has been cooled, it is moved to another place to be cleaned to remove unwanted impurities. The process ends with the cleaned gas being processed in the power plant, where it is converted into electricity for household and industrial use. It is noteworthy that the waste heat is also removed during this final stage.
Prompt: The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.
The picture illustrates how electricity is generated by a particular type of coal.
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Writing task 1
The graphs provide information on the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in a country in two separate years: 1996 and 2000.
Overall, the percentage of films released witnessed an increase in 3 types of films, namely drama, comedy, and fantasy, whereas this figure for romance films kept stable over the two given years. These charts also highlighted the highest proportion of ticket sales of comedy despite its second-ranked percentage of films released.
In terms of the films released, in 1996, the drama films accounted for approximately 27%, which was the highest proportion among 4 genres of films. This was followed by comedy films with 20% of films released. Fantasy and romance films shared the residual part of the percentage of films released in 1996, with 13% and 6% respectively. After 4 years, the proportion of drama, comedy, and fantasy films released increased, while this figure for romance films in 2000 remained unchanged.
In the sales aspect, the highest proportion of revenue belonged to comedy films with about 20% of tickets being sold in 1996. The drama film tickets sold in the same year ranked second with approximately 16%. Romance films record a sale of 5% and fantasy films were least popular with only 3% of tickets being sold. In 2000, an increase in the percentage of tickets sold was recorded for comedy, drama, and fantasy films, among that, fantasy film tickets were sold double in 1996. In contrast, the proportion of tickets being sold for romance films in this year faced a dramatic decrease to about 2%.
Mong thầy cô giúp em sửa bài writing này ạ, Em cám ơn mọi người nhiều.
The graphs provide information on the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in a country in two separate years: 1996 and 2000.
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writing task 1
The prime motives for studying among students in various age groups are displayed in the bar charts below, along with the level of employer assistance they will acquire.
In general, human beings aged above 40 largely continued their education entirely for interest, whereas the younger tended to pursue for career opportunities. Moreover, younger laborers mostly were the most potential age group considered achieving time off and help with fees at the same time.
Beginning with the first chart, it is evident that the number of humans who want to study for career reasons gradually decreased while the age of them increased. Nearly 80% of students under 26 years old, study for their career. This figure is down to almost 40% of 40-49 years and with solely 18% of over 49-year-olds studying for career motivators in late adulthood. Conversely, the proportion of students studying for interest rose with age and reached a peak for an over 49 group, at around 70%. Meanwhile, the figure for career-based students aged below 26 years was very minium, standing at slightly under 20%.
The second chart illustrates that employer support is maximum, approximately 60% for 26-year-old students. It rapidly dropped and hit its lowest point, at about 33% in the third decade of life, nevertheless, the statistic steadily grew again from middle-aged people up to 44%.
The prime motives for studying among students in various age groups are displayed in the bar charts below, along with the level of employer assistance they will acquire.
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writing task 2
The fast efficient access to information resulting from the revolution of cutting-edge technology in general, as well as social media in particular, can support many people to get better news in the modern era. Meanwhile, others suppose that the most proper method to get news quickly and effectively is through the newspaper. In this exposition, the commendable features and imperfect points of this heated question will be thoroughly examined before my personal perspective is provided.
Initially, it is an undeniable fact that the profound advantages of traditional newspapers to newsreaders enormously remain its approachability and reliability. Consequently, the conventional press is always trusted and glorified by its strict editorial content and quality checking in each process of collecting data which brought a good reputation for its credibility and remarkable accuracy. Moreover, reading printed newspapers can somehow reduce the heavy pressure from constantly accessing the digital network. Additionally, this traditional form has been developing for a long period and creating its potentially loyal customers, the proof is that there is a marked number of elderly who maintain a deep-seated hobby for printed news over decades.
Conversely, an unlimited storage of news content is made available, providing unparalleled convenience and widespread popularity in this information era. To clarify further, the extraordinary and scientific advancement of the internet supplies us with inexhaustible access to information and other wonderful features. Through media platforms, users can easily search for fresh information suitable to their taste, update it quickly, or even look for very old news which is the only thing printed newspaper finds hard to preserve.
In conclusion, the process of approaching news, both through traditional printed media and the social media platform, provide newsreaders with its own benefits and commensurate drawbacks. The selection should rely on the specific demand of each user and the certain nature of the information they are looking for. As a result, from my best perspective, the coherent fusion of these two approaches conventionally generates an optimal efficiency in the creation of transmitting information to the reader.
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The line graph gives data about the number of users of five different communication services worldwide from 1998 to 2008
The given line graph illustrates how many people utilized five means of communication over the course of ten years, starting from 1998 and ending in 2008.
Overall, there was an increase in the number of utilizers to all of the collaborative platforms examined, with the most significant growth being seen in the quantity for Cellular phone services to become the most commonly-used service from 2002 onwards.
The number of users to Cellular phone service started at nearly 5 million people in 1998, after which it experienced a considerable rise to nearly 17 million people in 2002, before ending the period at nearly 75 million people. The figures for Fixed broadband and Mobile broadband showed the similar changes along the period, with no users in the first year and increasing slightly to nearly 4 million people in 2008.
3 million people utilized Internet service in 1998, with a significant climb to 11 million people in 2004 and a final increase to 21 million people. Opposite changes can be seen in the figure for Landline service, which started at roughly 16 million people in 1998 and experienced a slight rise to 20 million people in 2006, before ending the period at nearly 19 million people.
The line graph gives data about the number of users of five different communication services worldwide from 1998 to 2008
The given line graph illustrates how many people utilized five means of commun...
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of age group in British donate money to charity in 1990 and 2010.
In 1990, adults aged 36 to 50 donated most money to charity, stood at about 12%. However young people at 18 to 25 were giving least money about 17%. More than 30% of 26 to 35 years old afforded charity. The percentage of 51 to 65 years old donated money to charity was 35%. Moreover, The number of older people gave money to charity stood at 32%.
In 2010, middle aged, who at 51-65 years old, afforded charity about nearly 40%. Besides, the percentage of older people did charity increasely by 3%. While, three group from 18 to 50 years old decreased. Youth from 18 to 25 years donated just 7%. People at 26 to 35 stood at nearly 25%. Moreover, the percentage of adults gave money was 55%.
Overall, youth in 1990 and 2010 donated the least. In 1990, people aged 36 to 50 gave the most money but in 2010, midde age from 51 to 65 donated more money to charity than other groups.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of age group in British donate money to charity in 1990 and 2010.
In 1990, adults aged 36 to 50 donated most money to charity, stood at about 12%. However you...
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People often find It difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make It easier? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is easy to understand that people do not tend to adapt new situations in their life smoothly. This is the result of staying too long in their comfort zone and unable to jump into the other environment. In this essay, I will analyzing the mentioned reasons and giving solutions for this struggled topic.
According to some surveys, one of the most prominent reasons that people found difficulties towards to new challenges is the strange feeling. The main reason of this issue that mostly individuals do not believe in their abilities to overcome new mistakes. For instance, a number of students in Viet Nam graduated from colleges and universities have failed in finding a appropriate job as they do not ove out of their safe zone to cultivate interpersonal skills. Moreover, some of individuals also have struggle incidents in the past since it is hardly to overcome and accept new situations. Losing pets is an example as not everyone has strength to adopt a new one
There are several ways to find the solution for above reasons. First of all, giving ourselves other opportunities is to create a clear statement and discover the best approches to handle those challenges. Additionally, individuals may have chances to develop different characters inside the mind that have not experienced before.
In summary, being adapting new articles are not likely to many people because of disbelieve in themselves and be worried of unwanted circumtances. It is recommended that some people are able to overcome the old problems and make new paths for their future
People often find It difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make It easier? Give reasons for your answer and include any releva...
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Đề:Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Bài làm
Thanks to technological advancements, communication over long distances and the acquisition of information through social media are becoming increasingly popular. Acknowledging certain disadvantages caused by this trend, I believe that it can confer more significant merits.
Admittedly, several threats will be posed to users if they overuse online platforms. The most evident problem is the potential spread of fake information. As content posted onto these platforms tends to undergo less strict supervision of authoritative experts, its credibility is not always ensured. This means that Internet users are more susceptible to fake news. Another demerit is the lack of real life communication in humans’ relationships. Specifically, when people too rely on online platforms to communicate, their face-to-face relationships may degrade. This can be seen in the way many young people are experiencing isolation given their over-reliance on online communication.
However, the benefits of social media tools are of more significant importance. Chief of these is the ability to contact people irrespective of geographical constraints. Students studying abroad, for example, who live far away from their home, can make daily video calls or messages with their family. As a result, it is much easier to maintain long-distance relationships.Another benefit lies in the fact that people can keep updated with information within a short period of time and from numerous sources.. Not until after social media platforms become widely used can people keep up with the latest information.
In conclusion, although the excessive use of online platforms brings about certain problems, I advocate its huge contribution to individuals’ convenient communication and information acquisition.
Đề:Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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Đề: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this?
Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Bài làm:
In modern times, most businesses are looking for ways to promote their products á the newest item. Because new trends are updated everyday, by this way they can attact more people to use their goods. In my opinion, i think it is a positive development because it helps create unique products for each brand.
Currently, when advertising products, businesses always emphasis thet their products are new item. That helps their products become more interesting by consumers. As can be seen , people tend to use products that are trending in the market at present. They believe that these products have good visual and generally, mean better quality and more technological advanced. For example, Although the Iphone versions are quite similar , Apple has changed a litte in appearance and highlighted aome new function to help attact a large number of buyers every time it is released.
However, by the way of making new products, they can also create their own products with unique characteristics, feartures and quality compared to other products in the market. It helps promote brand reputation and attact more consumers using their goods. For example, the Sheun Beauty always update new products everyday with high quality that attact many consumers prefer their shop to buy cosmestic.
In conclusion, business usually emphasis their products are new can help them generate more profits and create their own brand reputation.
Đề: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this?
Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Bài làm:
In modern t...
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