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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The table compares the amount of môt vehicles per 1000 people in eight different countries in 10 years, starting from 1990 to 2000.
Overall, it is evident that Brazil and Romania saw a significant increase in the rate of motor vehicles per population, while Cambodia had the lowest level of use in all eight countries in both years.
In 1990, The highest rate of vehicles per 1000 inhabitants was found in Luxembourg and New Zealand, at 548 and 531 vehicles respectively, which was followed by the Bahamas with 235 vehicles per 1000 people. Meanwhile, the figure for Brazil, Chile Jordan, and Romania just had slight fluctuation of around 50 to 70 vehicle per 1000 people. Especially, Cambodia had the lowest figure for 1 vehicle per 1000 people.
In 2000, The figure of vehicles in Brazil and Romania increased dramatically to 13580 and 8012 vehicles per thousand people. Vehicles in Luxembourg, Jordan, and Chile increased slightly to 728,157 and 88 vehicles. By contrast, Bahamas experienced a decrease to 187 vehicles per 1000 people. While, the number of motor vehicles in New Zealand and Cambodia stayed relatively the same.
The table compares the amount of môt vehicles per 1000 people in eight different countries in 10 years, starting from 1990 to 2000.
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Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children. What is the reason for doing that? Is this a positive or negative development for the children?
In recent years, the issue of many parents placing considerable pressure on their children has become a topic of growing concern among the public. This essay will delve into the underlying causes of this phenomenon and explore the negative consequences it may have for children.
This problem results from several factors. One major cause of increased parental pressure is the desire for their children to succeed and secure a bright future. This could be explained by the fact that all parents always want to give the best things to their children by investing as much money as possible to build a solid knowledge foundation for them, like finding the most excellent tutor and forcing them to learn all day. Another important factor contributing to this is that children are the face's parents in the competitive status of current society. Children’s abilities are the weapon their parents use to gain respect and admiration from others.
However, this trend has certain negative impacts. Firstly, excessive pressure is one of the main reasons that leads to physical and mental problems such as exhaustion, extreme stress, and depression. As a result, the rates of children committing suicide to escape pressures are higher than ever before. Secondly, it also causes children to lose themselves. In fact, children constantly worry about being scolded and try their best to satisfy their parents. Due to this, they cannot do something they like and pursue their own passion.
In conclusion, parents putting pressure on children stems from some contributing factors, including the desire for children’s success, a bright future, and to win competitive status. This phenomenon also leads to undesirable problems for children, such as physical and mental risks, and losing themselves.
Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children. What is the reason for doing that? Is this a positive or negative development for the children?
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The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
The table and pie graphs illustrate how many students got involved in research in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010, categorised into local and non-local categories, and genders.
Overall, increases in the numbers of both local and overseas students led to upward trends in total numbers, with that of the subsequent year consistently higher than the former year. Additionally, the gender disposition of native and non-native students was nearly equal over the two years, with the percentage of the local ones being far higher than their foreign counterparts.
Regarding the table, in 2001, there were 38,849 students in total, with 33,657 native-born and 5,192 from other countries. In 2010, the figure for domestic students increased to 39,488, while that of the foreign ones nearly tripled to 14,593, resulting in the total number rising to 54,081 students.
Concerning the charts, in the first year, native Australian students accounted for 87%, with gender distribution almost comparable. Meanwhile, 13% of students studied abroad in this country, with 9% of males and 4% of females. Over the following decade, the total proportion of local students decreased to 73%, leading to 35% and 38% of males and females, respectively. Finally, the total share of international students grew to 27%, with 12% and 15% of males and females, in that order.
The table and pie graphs illustrate how many students got involved in research in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010, categorised into local and non-local categories, and genders.
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Waste paper
The chart illustrates how waste paper is cycled. Overall, there are 6 stages of this process, starting from collecting waste paper to making eventual production.
At the first step of cycling waste paper process, paper is collected from the paper banks and businesses, where it is discharged a lot after being used. In the next step, waste paper is sorted by hand according to their grade and removing ones that do not meet the criteria for the following dtage. After sorted, it is transported to the paper mill, where used paper is about to processed.
According to the chart, cleaning the waste paper, pulping it and materials such as staples are taken out in the fourth step before inks and glues on paper are cleaned to release available cleaned pulping for being manufactured in the paper making machine. Finally, the new production is out and ready to meet people's need for paper anew.
The chart illustrates how waste paper is cycled. Overall, there are 6 stages of this process, starting from collecting waste paper to making eventual production.
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Question: These days, a great number of children prefer spending time on computer games rather than on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?
In the modern era, computer games become widespread among kids and teenagers as a type of entertainment. They long to spend a great amount of time to play instead of doing sports. This essay will explain the reasons and effects of this statement.
Firstly, one obvious reason for playing computer games is to be relax after an exhausted day at school. Children usually opt to play video games to relieve stress and spend time for themselves. Computer games also give them the feeling of competitive without injuries as well as the satisfaction when they are the winner of the matches. Moreover, video games is a way to communicate with their friends around the world. Thanks to the development of technology, it is possible for children to connect with global friends and play together.
Nevertheless, this problem leads to numerous impact, both positively and negatively. It is undeniable that computer games provide beneficial effects for children. For example, spending time to practice games helps them to sharpen the memory and enhance the problem-solving skill. By developing these soft skills, it might affect positively in their academic learning at school. However, if children rely on the video games too much, it will bring a detrimental impact on them. Focusing on the video games and the unrealistic world might cause their mental health, results in being careless to people around them and feel tired all the time. Unfortunately, children cannot be aware of how computer games can damage them, so it is hard for them to overcome it.
In conclusion, children choose video games to entertain because of its effeciency and happiness when playing. I believe that teenagers can learn a lot of useful skills from the computer games if they know how to control the time they spend for it.
Question: These days, a great number of children prefer spending time on computer games rather than on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?
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The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and other graduates who got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, and also show the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of full-time workers who were postgraduates of maths and other majors of a university in Australia, while the table depicts their mean salary, between 2004 and 2012.
Overall, the share of both types of graduates generally remained stable, despite noticeable changes around the middle of the period. Additionally, there were increases in the average amount of these graduates' salaries.
Regarding the line graph, in 2004, 80% of full-time workers were math degree holders, whereas approximately two-thirds graduated from other majors. Thereafter, the latter quickly peaked at 90% in 2006, surpassing the former, which gradually reached the highest point at just below this level in 2008. Finally, the rates of maths and other graduates getting a full-time job had recovered to their initial pattern by 2012.
Concerning the table, in 2004 and 2006, graduates of both categories earned comparable average salaries of $41,000 and $43,000, respectively. From 2008 onwards, the figure for maths graduates rose steadily to $56,000 in 2012, overtaking that for maths graduates, which saw an increment of $2,000 biannually, ending at $51,000 the last year.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of full-time workers who were postgraduates of maths and other majors of a university in Australia, while the table depicts their mean salary, between 2004 an...
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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Some people hold a belief that logical masters are more essential than creative experts. Personally, while science analysis brings valuable benefits, it is also important to acknowledge the role of creative people in modern life.
On the one hand, there are reasonable grounds to believe that analysts and cutting-edge experts can bring positive impacts on people’s lives. Firstly, scientists can identify new viruses, which helps control hidden diseases and reduce the risk of pandemics significantly. Secondly, high-tech experts can predict the future. For example, AI can easily forecast the daily weather, which helps individuals work and study optimally. These advantages can contribute to people’s overall lives.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that musicians and artists are great contributors to society. Research shows a link between music and mental health. For instance, ballad songs help listeners relax and reduce stress, while pop songs motivate them to be more energetic. Additionally, they are also beneficial to the connection of society. Creative activities help people broaden their relationships, which effectively boosts a healthy and friendly environment.
In conclusion, while some may argue that science and technology fields are more valuable than creativity fields, I believe a more balanced perspective is needed, acknowledging the advantages of both sides.
Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
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Some individuals may believe that all education shoud be free and government-funded to ensure equal opportunities for all people. I totally agree with this statement and this essay will explore the benefits of government-funded across all aspects.
By making education free and government-funded, all individuals can benefit from them. Fristly, it equips individuals with the knowledge and skills necessary to succeed in the modern world, and providing free education, government can ensure that workforce is highly skilled, leading to increased productivity in global economy. Addtionally, education plays a pivotal role in fostering social cohesion. By providing equal access to education, socities are more likely to be inclusive and equitable . Moreover, education instills critical thinking, empathy, and an understanding of diverse perspectives, thus paving the way for a more hamonious and tolerant society.
Critics may agrue thet government- funded education places a burden on taxpayers and infringes upon personal freedoms. However, it can be argued that the long-term benefits of a well-educated populace outweigh the immediate costs. Moreover, the societal benefits of an educated populace serve to justify the investment.
In conclusion, making education free and government-funded at all levels has the potential to transform societies for the better. By ensuring equal access to education, economies can thrive, and societies can become more inclusive and cohesive. It is imperative for governments to recognize the importance of education and prioritize its funding to secure a bright future for all.
Some individuals may believe that all education shoud be free and government-funded to ensure equal opportunities for all people. I totally agree with this statement and this essay will explore the be...
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Mong các thầy cô chữa writing task 1 hộ em aj
The line graphs provide a breakdown of prisoners in European country between 2011 and 2001, divided into 2 genders: male and female.
Overall, the figure from male prisoners population stands in stack construct to woman's figure, with increase trend and decrease trend respectively. In addition, the fluctuations can be seen across all genders.
Turning to details, the number of male prisoners started at 19,000 people in 2011, after that it declined to 10,000 people 20 years later. Underwent some fluctuations from 1914 to 1971, It ranged around 20,000 people. However, the figure for male prison population sharply rose in the following 10 years period, from approximately 20,000 people to nearly 40,000 people. At the end it continued to increase and reached its peak at north of 45000 people.
In contrast, female prison populations’s peak was obtained in the beginning of the period, at nearly 3,200 people. Then, it experienced a remarkable fall to only 700 people in 1941. Followed by moderate fluctuations to approximately 1300 people, the figure ended at 1800 people in 2001, which are considerably far less than the number of male prisoners.
The line graphs provide a breakdown of prisoners in European country between 2011 and 2001, divided into 2 genders: male and female.
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ. The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010.
The given chart compares how much electricity was produced by sources in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010.
Overall, there was an increase in the amount of electricity generated from both New Zealand and Germany. In addition, there was also a huge difference in the type of fuel used between the two countries.
In 2010, there were 200 units in New Zealand, with the highest total units of sources being coal (150 units), increasing nearly threefold compared to the figure for 1998. Compared to 1980, the electricity generated from hydro sources increased from 30 units to 46 units, making it the second main source in New Zealand. By contrast, the year 2010 witnessed a significant decline in the amount of electricity generated from natural gas and petroleum, dropping dramatically from 30 and 11 units in 1980 to 2 and 2 units in 2010, respectively, the lowest level recorded.
In Germany, there was an upward trend in the total units of sources of electricity generation, increasing to double in 2010, compared to 104 units in 1980. In 1980, coal and natural gas took up the same units, with 28 being the most important sources used for producing electricity, but after 30 years, although the quality of electricity generated using coal remained unchanged, the figure for natural gas considerably decreased to 2 units. With 155 units, nuclear power became the main fuel source in Germany in 2010. Opposite changes can be seen in the figure for hydro, falling from 7 units to 2 units.
The given chart compares how much electricity was produced by sources in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010.
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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that
they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those
related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are some people argued that university students should be given opportunities to choose whatever subjects they prefer to study. However, some others said that students need to be taught only with logical-related ones, such as science and technology to serve the future. In my opinion, I follow the former case.
There are various reasons why some people think students should solely focus on academic subjects. To begin with, job opportunities related to science or technology is widely various, such as programmers or doctors, which are well-known for high salaries. This is because these jobs always meet essential needs of society including healthcare or tools and machines to serve people's lives and work. For example, in Japan, the need for travel by trains are dramatically high and the public maybe wish time travel can shorter to save time for others things, which is the motivation for train companies to put all effort into researching to create more modern trains to satisfy people. As can be seen, train companies require their employees to have good knowledge about technology and science to release faster trains.
However, I believe that students can go for what subjects they love, not being forced to study logical-required ones. In fact, quite a few students in university have artistic talent, which will need for jobs related to art and entertainment. If those students cannot opt for subjects that is suitable with their talent but only academic subjects, it will be such a waste because they are not capable of getting a job due to not having enough skills and knowledge. It is clear that opportunities to get well-paid in artist jobs are higher currently because of the interest of people in collecting pictures or watching movies to release stress is increasing. Therefore students should give freedom to study what they need.
In conclusion, it is reasonable for some to believe university education system should limit student to study some particular subjects, I believe they deserve to decide by themselves.
There are some people argued that university students should be given opportunities to choose whatever subjects they prefer to study. However, some others said that students need to be taught only wit...
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Em có chép lại phần Speaking part 2 như vậy ạ. Thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em trừ những phần phải test trực tiếp như pronunciation ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô ạ.
PROMPT:
Describe a person who often buys at the street market at a cheaper price.
You should say:
● Who this person is
● What this person likes to buy
● Where this person likes to buy things
And explain why this person likes cheap goods.
EM TRẢ LỜI:
When I was reading this question, I popped-up an image of my mom. She is actually an avid foodie and she has a big knack for cooking. Therefore, going to the market and looking for various ingredients such as fresh vegetables, red meat or dressings to make mouth-watering dishes is one of her interests. There is a local market which is conveniently located just a 2-minute walk from our house and she regularly visits it to buy fresh produce She intends to purchase for inexpensive food for numerous reasons. Firstly, she is quite budget-conscious so she wanna save as much money as possible. It enables her to spend more finance on essential needs for example my tuition fees or the electricity bill. Secondly, she has a strong belief that not all pricey goods have high qualities so she would rather get the mid-range quality one than consume extravagantly. The final reason to talk about is the happiness she finds when visiting the market with affordable price. She told me that it provides her a valuable opportunity to interact with intriguing vendors and to perform her professional skill of haggling things.
PROMPT:
Describe a person who often buys at the street market at a cheaper price.
You should say:
● Who this person is
● What this person likes to buy
● Where this person likes to buy things
And...
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Topic: Today, TV channels provide more men's sport shows than women's sport shows. Why is that the case? Should TV channels give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?
These days, the fact that a higher number of games played by men are broadcast, compared to that of women has been receiving a great deal of public attention. There could be several reasons for this, and it is plausible that more women sport.
There are a number of reasons why shows of sportsmen have gained more airtime on TV than those of their female counterparts. It is undeniable that men’s sports have attracted larger audiences, so broadcasters must focus more on them to earn more profits. For example, football at the 30th SEA Games attracted millions of people from around Vietnam and other countries, while the figure for women’s matches was significantly lower. Then, men’s sports often receive more attention from advertising, sponsorship, and opportunities compared to women’s sports. This means that TV channels may prioritize broadcasting events that attract higher advertising revenue.
However, I would advocate that, TV producers should give equal streaming time for male and female programs. Firstly, if TV channels give equal time and coverage to both women’s and men’s sports, it might increase the gender equality movement which is one of the most concerned issues in many parts of the world today. In fact, sporters, especially women, are equally welcome to express their talents and passion. Secondly, when women's sports are broadcast on TV channels, it will promote the sportsmanship of women and encourage those with the potential to embark on their sporting careers. As a result, both men and women are actively involved in sports to create a fair sports environment and a healthy society.
In conclusion, despite more profits from men’s sports channels for TV producers, and I personally believe that it is essential to equally in the coverage of men’s and women’s sports.
Topic: Today, TV channels provide more men's sport shows than women's sport shows. Why is that the case? Should TV channels give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?
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writing task 1
The statistics of goods exported from Australia to other four different countries from 1990 to 2012 were illustrated by the line graph below. Overall, it is evident that Australian exports to Japan and China experienced a downward trend, whereas exportation to China and India witnessed a growing potential in amount.
Initially, Japanese and American exporting commenced at higher levels, with over 25% and 10% respectively, both two countries had to bear with an enormous decline in amount. Japan's percentage decreased sharply to 20% in 1995 before continuing to gradually drop for the rest of the whole timeline and finishing at roughly 18%. On the other hand, after reducing in the first five years, the American number quickly recovered in the upcoming equivalent period. Eventually, The figure still went down and reached its lowest point, about 5%, before showing a slight growth at the end.
Conversely, although China and India began with lower positions, just under 5%, they showed potential in development. While the exports to India increased slightly, peaking at approximately 8% in 2010 before going down minimally afterward, China's fraction rocketed during the whole time frame, reaching its highest point at 30%, surpassing other countries and securing the largest percentage.
The statistics of goods exported from Australia to other four different countries from 1990 to 2012 were illustrated by the line graph below. Overall, it is evident that Australian exports to Japan an...
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The chart shows the total distance traveled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
The bar chart compares the distances traveled by people in the UK on five different modes of transport from 1990 to 2000. Overall, most categories witnessed an upward trend except for bicycle and motorbike, leading to the growth of the total. In addition, the figures for bus and train were significantly high compared to the remaining types of transport.
Regarding the increasing categories, from 1990 to 2000, air travel was the most dramatic change, surging from approximately 1 kilometer to 5 kilometers. By contrast, the figure for bus, starting at 40 kilometers in the first year, recorded a modest growth to under 45 kilometers at the end of the period. Similarly, rail travel underwent the same rate, rising from around 37 kilometers to nearly 40 kilometers during the same period.
In terms of the two remaining means of transport, in 1990, people traveled the least by bicycle and motorbike with distances of less or more 5 kilometers. However, in the next ten years, the latter saw a negligible decline to 3 kilometers, while the former decreased with a faster level to only 1 kilometer
The chart shows the total distance traveled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
The bar chart compares the distances traveled by people in the UK on five differe...
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writing task 2
The increase in the pursuit of new job opportunities resulting from the migration of many people to different parts of the world these days is being argued more and more. Some people suggest that moving away from the birthplace could be a golden chance to find advancement in careers. In this essay, both the advantages and disadvantages of this above information will be discussed before my individual perspective provides which one outweighs.
On the one hand, geographical alteration for professional pursuits creates a wider range of career opportunities that potentially exceed those available in one's local place. This can result in not only professional growth but also increased earning potential by the same token, enabling individuals to improve their standard of living and possibly contribute financially to the well-being of their families. One further benefit can be witnessed here is that participating in diverse cultural fields and traditional perspectives. This might be a necessary support in order to foster personal development by enlarging one's horizons and enriching their understanding of the world, providing significant chances for sharing points of view and communicating among different cultures.
On the other hand, the prosperity and satisfaction of career enhancement cannot adequately compensate for the fundamental social and emotional costs involved. From a social angle, the physical separation from one's established environment, including family and friend relationships, disrupts the developing foundation of an individual in creating a comprehensive mature system. This interruption can lead to a string of isolation, loneliness, and emotional damage, ultimately hindering personal well-being. Furthermore, missing important life events and milestones of loved ones can be a very detrimental ground that damages one's emotions and worsens the sense of detachment with the familiar feeling, unfortunately occurring depression and anxiety. These mental problems may, in turn, affect their long-term professional success and fulfillment, thus defeating the original purpose of relocating.
In conclusion, leaving family and friends in order to seek work opportunities in a different place can help people progress in their careers and grow as a person. Unfortunately, these positive effects obviously cannot outweigh the drawbacks that such a decision can bring to one's social and emotional life.
The increase in the pursuit of new job opportunities resulting from the migration of many people to different parts of the world these days is being argued more and more. Some people suggest that movi...
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International migration in UK
The chart illustrates the number of people immigrating, emigrating and net migrating in UK from 1999 to 2008.
Overall, the immigration and emigration levels tended to ascend at the end of the period, while net migration witnessed roughly fall.
The numbers for immigration and emigration were at around 450 and 300 thousands people, respectively, in the first year. After that, the immigration levels climbed up and stood at nearly 600 thousands in 2004 before being seen an fluctuation through those last years. Meanwhile, the emigration levels fluctuated after the first year and hit its lowest point of 350 thousands in 2007; yet could still be seen the significant growth in 2008.
According to the chart, the figure of net migration was recorded at over 250 thousands, which remained stable until peaking at roughly 250 thousands in 2004. The figures of the next two were quite similar, at around 200 thousands. Fortunately, the number experienced gentle an improvement, with approximately 230 thousands in 2007; however, it went down dramatically in the end, with just above 150 thousands.
The chart illustrates the number of people immigrating, emigrating and net migrating in UK from 1999 to 2008.
Overall, the immigration and emigration levels tended to ascend at the end of the perio...
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The plans below show a public when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The pictures illustrate how Grange Park has been changed since 1920. Overall, amenities and facilities have been added and developed to accommodate musical performances, children, food and beverage needs, and parking.
In 1920, amenities in the park were relatively limited. The park could be accessed via two entrances on Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street. The glasshouse was to the right of an entrance from Eldon Street, opposite which was a pond for water plants. Meanwhile, the fountain was in the central area, to the left of which was the stage for musicians. Seats and rose gardens were scattered throughout the park, except for the position of the glasshouse and the pond, and most of them were near the vicinity of the stage.
Presently, the park has been upgraded significantly. The only elements that remain unchanged are the two entrances and the rose garden on Arnold Avenue near the stage, which has been modernised into an amphitheatre for concerts. Additionally, the fountain has been erected into a new rose garden surrounded by seats, and the rose garden next to the pond has been removed, allowing the addition of a café. Finally, the pond has been upgraded to a water feature and replaces the glasshouse, making space for a newly-built children’s playground, along with the construction of an underground car park.
The pictures illustrate how Grange Park has been changed since 1920. Overall, amenities and facilities have been added and developed to accommodate musical performances, children, food and beverage ne...
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Mong được thầy cô chấm bài writing task 2 của em. Em xin cảm ơn Thầy Cô
In recent years, child obesity levels have increased at an alarming rate across the globe.
What are the causes and solutions of this problem?
you should write at least 350 words
In recent research, doctors around the world reported numerous reasons why being overweight is one of the top phenomenons with juveniles currently and give a list of solutions that can reduce this problem.
There are various reasons for adolescents tend to be overweight every day. However, the first reason for increasing weight in children is lack of activities. This is because of their dependence on innovation and their becoming akin to a couch potato. Energy imbalance will occur when minors do not burn off the calories to enough physical activity, leading to excess calories in a day and enriching lipid levels. The second reason is that the popularity of fast food in social media involves communication from convenience, flavor, and affordability. Furthermore, it is high in sugar, salt, and saturated or trans fats, and due to very easy to gain weight. To illustrate, the weight of a fried chicken leg is 0.4 pounds(0.18kg) and nearly 300 calories, while this figure is similar to 0.67 pounds(0.3kg) of rice and does not include fat percentage. To sum up, the amount of calories and fat in a fried chicken leg is much higher than that of regular food, which can cause health risks even if consumed regularly over a long period.
To solve the result the prevalence of fast food and processed food, the government and parents should work together to the final option. Firstly, creating a balanced lifestyle for children in their leisure activities, while setting limits on screen time. Therefore, parents should control their children's time and encourage doing physical activities. For example, members of the family exercise together, due to the fact individuals are strong and reduce the rate of overweight in minors and improve public health. Secondly, the government should open examinations per year to check the physical activities, and mental systems of children under parental consent. Likewise, doctors and families take immediate tackles to therapy and find the factors of obesity in children. For instance, child obesity should have a healthy diet, and curb your intake of refined carbs.
In conclusion, more and more teenagers have significantly increased weight because of junk food and a sedentary lifestyle. Any individuals should take together essential measures to address this problem. Not only the problem of obesity among children but also the various health issues of the community.
In recent years, child obesity levels have increased at an alarming rate across the globe.
What are the causes and solutions of this problem?
you should write at least 350 words
In recent rese...
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The given two charts illustrate how many travelers went by five means of transport to a university over two distinct years: 2004 and 2009.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of people who went by bicycle, bus, train and walking to college, except for that of car. Furthermore, there was a positive shift in the figures for bus throughout the five-year span.
Examining the data more closely, the data for train and walking observed a slight growth with tiny fractions at 4% and 6%, respectively, in 2009. Likewise, the statistics for bicycles represented 9% in 2004, and rose considerably to 16% by 2009, showcasing the similar rise in two evaluated intervals.
In terms of bus and car, 51% of visitors used cars to go to college in 2004 which topped the first chart. However, this data showed a substantial dip when it descended to 28% by 2009. Meanwhile, there was a surge in the figures for the bus category which merely secured a third in 2004, and soared to 46% by 2009. This percentage held the top spot of the second chart.
The given two charts illustrate how many travelers went by five means of transport to a university over two distinct years: 2004 and 2009.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of people...
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