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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ
Living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed that living in urban areas causes detrimental effects on people’s health. From my perspective , I partly agree with this viewpoint for several reasons because besides negative aspects , living in major cities also brings positive impacts on people’s health.
On the one hand , living in a metropolis causes health risks. The increase in the number of inhabitants ask for the large number of means of transportation , especially private vehicles which released exhaust fumes into the air , leading to the high levels of polluted air.This brings negative impacts not only on the environment but also on respiratory system’s people. The argument in favor of this notion is notified by the fact that the nature of city life is competitive and fast-paced. Working overtime , coupled with limited access to fresh and heathy foods and prevalent of fast food chain , create unhealthy lifestyles , including skipping meals , staying up late and eating fast food.This , combined with pressure in high living cost in major cities leads to depression , anxiety , sleep disorder and obesity .
On the other hand , i’m convinced that living in urban area brings several positive impacts on people’s health. The key rational in favor of this notion is that wider access to advanced medical services. The concentration of specialized hospitals and clinics in big cities increase access to modern facilities , highly skilled specialists and wider treatment options which give opportunities for city dwellers to treat complex and rare diseases , resulting in enhance heath and life quality
In conclusion , despite of several detrimental effects , I believe that it stills have advantages for people’s health
Living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic
accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving
road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is said that strict punishments is the major measure to prevent driving offenses while others believe that others solutions in related to road safety is more preferable. In my opinion, both means of reducing car accidents do play their role.
On the one hand, strict penalties can deter drivers from violating the law, which helps decrease traffic accidents. Dangerous drivers will be more aware of laws and stop breaking laws because they do not want to lose money and time, paying for their faults. For example, some punishments can be taken account of are licence suspension or even prison sentences if drivers repeat offenses. As a result, the awareness of people will raise and they realize the magnitude of their wrong actions, which can pose a thread to their own life and others'.
On the other hand, improving the safety of roads also contributes to decrease traffic accidents. First, signs and traffic lights should be placed fully at the right spot, especially traffic signs, which give drivers instructions to drive better and safer. Second, road quality should be considered, such as potholes on roads, which might cause accidents when drivers pass on it and lose balance of driving. Besides of raise quality of roads, the government should also encourage people to use public transport in order to descend traffic flow and prevent traffic accidents rising.
In conclusion, punishments can improve the rate of traffic accidents, I think other range of measures also be effective. The government should apply several solutions to make sure the safety of drivers when being in traffic.
It is said that strict punishments is the major measure to prevent driving offenses while others believe that others solutions in related to road safety is more preferable. In my opinion, both means o...
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
Residents of some nations have strong desires to own a home rather than to rent one. The underlying factors behind this phenomenon will be closely examined in this essay, which will also argue that this trend can exert adverse impacts on society.
Admittedly, people’s preference for possessing a home over renting one can be attributed to certain causative rationales, one of which is to foster the potential for highly profitable investments. Indubitably, the booming global population can potentially trigger a scarcity of real estate, proportionally inadequate to meet increasing demands, likely leading to soaring property prices. Hence, homeowners are likely to observe a significant increase in wealth. Another reason for this desire is that homeownership can result in a reduced risk of facing unpredictable problems such as abrupt cases of eviction or the rise in renting costs. These issues can leave renters homeless and financially precarious. In this sense, a stable home can foster a more fulfilling life.
Although owning a home can provide financial stability and security, it is crucial to consider the drawbacks and implications for society as a whole. Doubtless, an unnecessarily high number of people allocating their finance for real estate can be the driving force behind the rise in properties, which proportionally acts as an inherent barrier against investors’ access to these properties for business activities. This will not only lead to the stagnation of national economies but also high unemployment rates. This is particularly noticeable in Vietnam, where there have been excessive investments in buildings and lands for recent decades, and this practice has caused unemployment at a dangerous rate and the economic crisis.
In conclusion, financial benefits and better living conditions can have their deep roots in arousing and fueling the notion of affording a stable home. However, I am of the opinion that this phenomenon can bring about devastating consequences due to the possibility of preventing the economic growth and causing joblessness at an alarming level.
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
Residents of some nati...
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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It is argued that establishing more sports facilities or health clubs would be the most effective way to enhance public health. From my point of view, however, proper health education would be a better measure.
To begin with, people's health has improved significantly as a result of their participation in sports facilities. It is indisputable that engaging in physical activities such as daily exercise or sports improves fitness levels. Therefore, the growing popularity of gym classes and sports clubs provides additional opportunities for people to improve their health. Many individuals in my neighborhood take nighttime yoga lessons to stay healthy after a long day at work.
On the other hand, I believe that expanding the availability of sports facilities would have little impact on social health. This is explained by the fact that many people who paid for an annual gym membership stopped going after only one month. Therefore, I believe it is more vital to educate folk on fundamental health awareness. If a person has a basic understanding of medicine and healthcare, he can simply avoid several possible health issues. For instance, when a child has a wide knowledge of the adverse effects of smoking, he might be less likely to take up this bad habit in his adulthood.
To summarise, the increasing prevalence of sports facilities has brought a wide range of health benefits for people. I believe that raising public awareness through health campaigns would have a greater positive impact on boosting people's health
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other mea...
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Topic: Many individuals argue that planning in advance is the cornerstone of success in life, whereas others contend that factors like diligence or fortune hold greater significance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's competitive world, achieving success is a constant pursuit. While some believe meticulous planning is utmostly crucial, others emphasize the importance of hard work or even luck. In my opinion, a well-rounded approach that embraces all these elements is the key to a fulfilling and successful life.
A well-defined plan acts as a roadmap, providing direction and preventing procrastination. It also allows for adjustments as circumstances evolve. Imagine an ambitious high school student aiming for a prestigious school. A comprehensive plan outlining their coursework, extracurricular activities, and standardized test preparation significantly increases their chances of acceptance.
However, life is rarely a smooth journey. Unexpected challenges can derail even the most meticulously laid plans. This is where unwavering determination and a strong work ethic come into play. These qualities empower individuals to overcome obstacles, find creative solutions, and forge new paths. Think of a passionate entrepreneur whose thoroughly planned business faces an economic downturn. Their relentless work ethic and adaptability can help them adjust their strategy and discover new opportunities. Finally, a touch of serendipitycan play a significant role. Being at the right place at the right time can open unforeseen doors. While luck is a chance factor, a well-prepared and diligent individual is more likely to capitalize on fortunate circumstances. For instance, a talented musician who relentlessly hones their craft may be discovered by a talent scout at a local performance, propelling their career forward.
In conclusion, success is not a singular entity but a harmonious blend of well-defined goals, unwavering effort, and a touch of chance. By embracing this multifaceted approach, individuals can navigate the unpredictable road to success and create a fulfilling life filled with meaningful accomplishments.
Topic: Many individuals argue that planning in advance is the cornerstone of success in life, whereas others contend that factors like diligence or fortune hold greater significance. Discuss both view...
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Mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài W task 2 này ạ. Em xin chân thành cảm ơn thầy cô.
“both government investment in transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?”
These days, the matter of whether the government putting attempts in green movement by simultaneously handling transportation investment and ticket price reduction is useful. In my perspective, I strongly believe that this policy is necessary and highly welcomed due to the outcomes it brings.
On the one hand, it is such a trustworthy development of the government to invest in the transport systems as it enhances the quality of life. Moreover, using public facilities is one of the most fundamental rights every citizen possesses. Therefore, people may be more encouraged to take public rides on a regular basis in order to have pleasant experiences with the most cutting-edge transportation. Take Vietnam as an example, a subway was constructed with the aim to reduce time traveling between two metropolitans and it attracted thousands of passengers when it was finally launched.
On the other hand, people are prone to any decline in prices, especially when it comes to public assets which were constructed by the tax each mature individual paid. This is due to the fact that public traveling can save up a considerable amount of money. For example, people tend to choose public transport like bus or subway over personal belongings like car or motorbike so as to cut off a variety of costs such as maintenance, petrol and admission fee for cars.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that this action of the government will make progress in developing the quality of social life. Furthermore, it can have a drastic impact on how transport pollution is controlled.
“both government investment in transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?”
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa và đánh giá bài viết ạ
Topic: Some people think our first impression of someone is important, while others think we should not judge another person so quickly and should take our time to know them better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While the first impression of someone is supposed to play a crucial role in relationships, many people show their disagreement with this statement. From my perspective, I definitely believe that people had better not judge others at the first sight and spend time understanding each other.
On the one hand, relationships are thought to be mainly affected by the first impression. Firstly, a person's self-presentation skills and confidence can be reflected when meeting at the first time. Apparently, communication skills, when people are involved in a conversation with strangers, can be evaluated by the things related directly to their personality and preferences such as tone of voice, sight, and gesture. Secondly, the first impression sometimes provides accurate insights into character. By observing partners’ preparation for important events in their lives, such as interviews and dates, individuals will have an opportunity to make assumptions about their responsibility and carefulness, which could be shown in their clothes and whether they arrive on time, for example.
On the other hand, taking time to know someone better is highly recommended due to my opinion. The first reason is initial judgements can be influenced by stereotypes and personal bias. It is said that many people are attracted by appearance, which may prevent them from focusing on personality, knowledge and skills of their partners. Hence, this leads to inaccurate or unfair assessments. The second reason is spending time talking and sharing means allowing observation of consistent behaviors and deeper qualities. In the first meeting, there will not be enough communication and contact among participants to make them feel comfortable to fully express themselves. However, if individuals use their time to develop depth in connection, cautious gestures and speech may be replaced by the real traits of partners.
To sum up, I prefer taking time to learn about someone to the first impression, which can be a factor to make some assessment about a person’s characteristics, due to its advantages in the long term.
Topic: Some people think our first impression of someone is important, while others think we should not judge another person so quickly and should take our time to know them better. Discuss both views...
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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram pictorially delineates 100 visitors' attitudes towards Parkway Hotel's customer service, by percentage, during the 5-year period, from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that while the majority of guests initially evaluated satisfactory and poor experience, the reverse pattern was evidenced in 2010, as a result of improved customer service.
Regarding the details presented in the years 2005, Parkway Hotel primarily received fairly good feedback which registered more than two-fifths, outnumbering the data for disappointed ones which accounted for approximately 20%. Meanwhile, the figures for extremely poor and good customer services were relatively comparable, documenting 15% and 14%, respectively. The modest proportion was recorded in excellent experience, comprising only 5%, reflecting an average quality in this hotel.
Over the following 5 years, the customer service enhanced significantly, with nearly 40% visitors rating good experience in Parkway Hotel, increasing considerably compared to initial figure A skyrocketing also was reported for excellent service to just over 25%, trailed by the satisfaction reporting at 17%. Whereas, visitors finding the customer service poor to very poor plummeted, making up merely 12% for the former and 4% for the latter.
The provided diagram pictorially delineates 100 visitors' attitudes towards Parkway Hotel's customer service, by percentage, during the 5-year period, from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that...
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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram pictorially delineates the total population and senior citizens aged 65 years or over in Japan from 1950 and projections to 2055. Overall, it is noticeable that there are correlations between Japan's demographics and its elderly residents, with a rise of different extents evidenced and the prediction of a considerable decline in prospective years.
Concerning Japan's population, the figures initially documented at 84.1 millions, trailed by a steady increment during the 50-year period before reach its pinnacle of 127.8 millions in 2005. However, the data subsequently followed a downward trajectory which result in the reduction of the total population by the year 2015. By 2055, it is anticipated that 89.9 millions of citizens will reside in Japan, exhibiting a plummet compared to its apex.
Regarding the senior segment of 65 and older, this age cohort commenced with only 4.1 millions, registering 4.9% of total people. Due to the increase in Japanese population, the data underwent an upsurge in 2005, rising to 25.7 millions. Specifically, there was an noticeable growth of approximately 15 % during this period. Following this, a substantial increase to 36.5 millions is projected in 2055 with 41% in proportion, being more than nine times compared to the original data.
The diagram pictorially delineates the total population and senior citizens aged 65 years or over in Japan from 1950 and projections to 2055. Overall, it is noticeable that there are correlations betw...
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The pie charts illustrate how the energy sources of four different countries between 2003 and 2008. Overall, India and Vietnam heavily depended on fossil fuels, while Sweden and Morocco demonstrated a greater emphasis on alternative energy sources.
Fossil fuel usage was most prominent in India, where a significant 82% of electricity was generated from this source. Vietnam also relied largely on fossil fuels, with 56% of its energy production coming from this category. In contrast, Sweden and Morocco illustrated lower reliance on fossil fuels, with percentage of 4% and 5%, respectively,
Regarding hydropower, Morocco emerged as the clear leader since an impressive 95% of its electricity production was attributed to renewable source. Sweden and Vietnam followed closely, with 52% and 44% of their energy derived from hydropower accordingly, when India showed a lower percentage of 14%.
Only Sweden and India were dependent on nuclear for power. Among these countries, Sweden stood out, with a substantial 44% of its electricity being produced through nuclear energy. In comparision, only a minor 4% of India’s energy originated from this source.
The pie charts illustrate how the energy sources of four different countries between 2003 and 2008. Overall, India and Vietnam heavily depended on fossil fuels, while Sweden and Morocco demonstrated a...
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The table illustrates the percentages of three economic sectors that contributed to a Xcountry’s GDP from 2016 to 2018.
Looking from an overall perspective, there was an increase in GDP contribution from agriculture and industry sectors, while the opposite is true for the service figure. However, the service sector took a lead over the three-year period.
In 2016, agriculture contributed the least to the country's GDP, accounted for only 13%, followed by a slight fall to 11% before increasing by 4% in 2018. Similarly, over a fifth was contributed by the industry sector, then rose considerably to approximately a third by the end of the period.
Take a look at a remaining category, while there was 65% of GDP contributed by the service sector, it thereafter decreased slightly by 1% and ended with a noticeable dip to 55% in 2018, but still being the largest contributor to the GDP of Xcountry.
The table illustrates the percentages of three economic sectors that contributed to a Xcountry’s GDP from 2016 to 2018.
Looking from an overall perspective, there was an increase in GDP contribution f...
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ. The diagram shows the design of a modern landfill for household waste. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the process of making a modern landfill for organic waste.
Overall, the process comprises three steps, beginning with digging up a hole in the ground and ending with its closure.
At the beginning of the process, the ground is excavated in a trapezoid shape above a natural rock bed. Next, a layer of synthetic substance is coated after lining the hole with a thick layer of clay. The next step is that a drainage tank is excavated, taking the form of a cuboid, which is accompanied by the installation of drainage pipes to direct the liquid to the tank. Meanwhile, another pipe, marked blue, is also set up to emit the gas.
When the landfill construction is ready for operation, it is filled with organic waste. During the use of the landfill, waste liquid leaks out and is directed away from the tank through the installed pipes. Finally, clay is applied to the top surface. After some time, the waste turns into a mud-like substance, which can be used as fertilizer while any emitted gases are released through the pipe.
The picture illustrates the process of making a modern landfill for organic waste.
Overall, the process comprises three steps, beginning with digging up a hole in the ground and ending with its clos...
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Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular.
Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?
There has been much controversy about whether planning trips to isolated areas and communities brings more benefits or drawbacks. In my opinion, this trend can be seen as beneficial.
One the one hand, there are some drawbacks of organizing trips to remote places and social groups. One clear disadvantage of this is that such vigorous activities may make wild animals disturbing and affect their regular habits. This is because such organisms are usually familiar with their natural habitat, the intervention of human can make them uneasy and even sometimes aggressive. Another advantage worth mentioning is that the popularity of tourists may lead to the destruction of local environment. Such drawback can be especially detrimental to the native inhabitants, this is due to the reason that it would make the overall image of this location negative towards tourists. As a result, they probably will not return to this attraction, causing huge loss to local economies. However, with a strict regulation from governments, the situation can be improved positively.
On the other hand, I believe that there are stronger benefits to this approach. One advantage of organizing holiday to lesser-known locations is that it helps local dwellers generate more profits and develop a place's economy. Take modeled tourism in Viet Nam, for example, Home Stay, cooperating local residents' homes with commercial companies as a place for tourists to stay. In addition to this, meals can be served in the same location and through this method, a country can advertise their special products to people in other areas as well as international travelers. By in introducing and educating people about the importance of biological diversity, people can gain better understanding about the related topic and potentially raise awareness about protecting the wildlife.
In conclusion, operating trips to places that are less popular bring more benefits than the drawbacks involved. With adequate law from the ministry, the problem can be better solved, paving the way for local economy to thrive as well as educating and promoting awareness for the public about the wildlife
Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular.
Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?
There has been much controversy ab...
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The line graph below depicts the number of travellers approached specific Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017.
In general, the trends of visitors that maintained their trip on both cruise ships and island were fluctuated, leading to the unsteadiness of their total number. Furthermore, at the end of the period, the statistic of tourists engaging on island surpassed the one on maritime ships.
Particularly, the tracts of travellers in both aspects experienced two times changes their direction, respectively in 2011, 2012 and 2016. As the visitors choosing island, the number remained stable, under approximately 1 million in 2010, but until 2011, it had a surge on increasing that number gradually to reach 1.5 millions of visitors in 2 years.
In contrast, although guests on islands fell behind the individuals choosing cruise ships, about 500 thousand at the beginning, the number on oceanic ships increased and equated to its competitor on islands, at nearly 1,4 millions.
The line graph below depicts the number of travellers approached specific Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017.
In general, the trends of visitors that maintained their trip on both...
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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
In light of the growing debates among individuals, while it is a common assumption that prison is the common way to tackle criminal obstacles, critics argue that exposing individuals to a better education is more effective. Although I acknowledge some benefits that providing a better education offers, I still believe that prison is essential in addressing criminal behavior for several reasons.
One justification for keeping prisons is that they play vital roles in guaranteeing society’s safety. In fact, they separate those who commit crimes from the community, ensuring the safety of residents. Nothing can be more obvious than some cases of violent crime, such as domestic violence or harassment, which are detrimental to the safety of individuals. Without prisons, society's safety would be compromised. Additionally, nowadays, prisons provide ample opportunities for prisoners to experience rehabilitation, which is the key to raising their awareness of right and wrong. These systems allow criminals to reflect on their conscience, paying big dividends in self-improvement. They also prompt offenders to understand their wrongs and prepare them to re-enter society as reformed individuals.
Contrary to the aforementioned arguments, advocates of providing better education often argue that prisons lack an educational system. It is true that some prisons are incapable of providing core subjects like those taught in schools, such as geography or science. However, I contend that prisons still offer educational merits. In reality, prisons enable criminals to access fundamental educational lessons about finance or money. Moreover, prisons allow offenders to learn essential skills such as cooking, cleaning, or gardening. These activities act as precursors to reforming criminals, equipping them with practical skills that can facilitate their integration back into society upon release. In essence, I admit that prisons provide beneficial educational programs to criminals, which works wonders in the long run.
In conclusion, while acknowledging the merits of educational initiatives, I maintain that prisons are indispensable in addressing criminal behavior.
Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
In light of the growi...
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Mong thầy cô chữa bài giúp e với ạ. People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. Do you agree or disagree?
The debate surrounding early career decisions and job stability can yield many satisfying aspects of working life, which continues to be a topic of contention. From my perspective, career satisfaction should have a multifaceted approach that is not determined by when someone chooses a career path or how long they pursue it.
On the one hand, one school of thought holds that workers loyal to one post may indeed present several advantages. The primary reason behind this thinking is that they can focus their efforts on developing specialized knowledge and expertise within a particular field, allowing someone to reach the pinnacle of their chosen profession, which may hold immense promise and lead to greater career fulfillment. Additionally, starting a career early and dedicating oneself for an extended period can provide a sense of job satisfaction. Through the journey of honing their skills, individuals can reap success within their chosen profession, providing them with a better financial situation.
On the other hand, I believe that those who change jobs from time to time can yield multiple benefits. Perhaps the foremost rationale would be that this is an opportunity for them to discover personal strengths within different industries, especially for new graduate students who can gain diverse experience and skill sets that they were not exposed to throughout their school period, making them more valuable and marketable to recruiters. Moreover, some people's personalities may suffer after pursuing a career path for long periods, which can place a huge burden on their mental health, including heavy workloads, workplace conflicts, or simply not providing employees with a living wage. There is a likelihood that workers should eventually find a new career that offers a suitable workplace environment and salary increment for them.
In conclusion, how one person gains satisfaction from their career may differ from another. I believe that job hoppers often find greater fulfillment in their careers since they can broaden their horizons and take a holistic approach within different domains, ultimately leading to a more rewarding professional life.
The debate surrounding early career decisions and job stability can yield many satisfying aspects of working life, which continues to be a topic of contention. From my perspective, career satisfaction...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The graph illustrates the amount of money invested in four financial assets in the United States between 1988 and 2014.
Overall, there was an increase in invested funding of four categories. The investment fund of gold witnessed a significant rise among others.
In 1988, there was exactly 100 millions of dollara invested in gold, followed by fine art about 75 millions dollars spent on. By contrast, 50 millions of dollars invested in property, and the similar figure was true for company shares, with 49 millions. From the following 18 years, the value of investment funds in most assets fluctuated.
Between 2006 and 2014, gold became the most invested asset, reach a peak at 450 millions of dollars before decreasing to under 400 millions at the end of the year surveyed. Followed by fine art with continual increase to about 325 millions in 2014. Finally, the investment funds in property and company shares were lower than the two others, with 149 millions and 200 millions, respectively, in 2014.
The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,...
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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In some statistical literature, urbanization is likely to be an illustrious trend with statehood. And of course, via much migration of residents in the same countryside. There showed immediate pros and cons to many aspects. In the first line, the influx of people into the urban area can demonstrate one thing there are modern facilities, innovative education, and a variety of means of amusement. As well as a fact, these factors captivate inhabitants in many regions. Therefore,it stimulates the economy of these areas
However, more people caused detrimental pollution, thereby affecting to respiratory system and some chronic diseases such as sinusitis or sore throat. In addition,the downward trend of the population in the countryside leads to an imbalance in human distribution between urban and rural areas. So far it can also cause an imbalance economic
In conclusion, the movement of people in rural areas has both drawbacks and advantages. But the government should implement some activities to keep balance people in many areas
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In some statistical...
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Đề: In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?
In many professional sports, abusing prohibited substances to assist athletes’ performance is becoming common. This essay will discuss how athletes’ ambition and the effects of illegal substances are the main causes of this problem, and the most suitable solutions are imposing stricter rules and promoting the detrimental effects of these drugs.
There are two major reasons why athletes use forbidden substances to boost their overall performance. Firstly, the desire for success appears when people are in fierce competitions. It is human nature and athletes are no exception, they always want to win to fulfil their own desires and meet the expectations of others. All athletes strive to earn admiration, especially when they represent their country with the significant mission of bringing honour. Furthermore, the quick results that athletes gain from using banned substances are tempting as it is the easiest way to achieve success without much effort. As a result, athletes’ health is increasingly falling due to the abuse of these drugs. For example, there are many organisations selling drugs illegally these days with appealing advertisements.
There are two main measures that can be implemented to tackle this problem. First, what the government should do is impose rigorous regulation. The government should actively seek out harmful organisation and ban them. Besides that, the institutions which organise sports competitions examine whether the candidates use forbidden substances before allowing them to take part in competitions. For instance, those who use banned substances face a lifetime ban in the Olympics. Another measure is that the government might promote the adverse effects of illegal drugs through social media. In this way, athletes might raise awareness and dare not to use drugs. By taking these solutions this problem will be dealt with appropriately.
In conclusion, there are two main causes leading to this phenomenon, these are athletes’ desire and the magic of drugs. There are also two solutions: imposing stricter regulations and posting news on social media.
Đề: In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the po...
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