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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Writing task 1
The graphs provide information on the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in a country in two separate years: 1996 and 2000.
Overall, the percentage of films released witnessed an increase in 3 types of films, namely drama, comedy, and fantasy, whereas this figure for romance films kept stable over the two given years. These charts also highlighted the highest proportion of ticket sales of comedy despite its second-ranked percentage of films released.
In terms of the films released, in 1996, the drama films accounted for approximately 27%, which was the highest proportion among 4 genres of films. This was followed by comedy films with 20% of films released. Fantasy and romance films shared the residual part of the percentage of films released in 1996, with 13% and 6% respectively. After 4 years, the proportion of drama, comedy, and fantasy films released increased, while this figure for romance films in 2000 remained unchanged.
In the sales aspect, the highest proportion of revenue belonged to comedy films with about 20% of tickets being sold in 1996. The drama film tickets sold in the same year ranked second with approximately 16%. Romance films record a sale of 5% and fantasy films were least popular with only 3% of tickets being sold. In 2000, an increase in the percentage of tickets sold was recorded for comedy, drama, and fantasy films, among that, fantasy film tickets were sold double in 1996. In contrast, the proportion of tickets being sold for romance films in this year faced a dramatic decrease to about 2%.
Mong thầy cô giúp em sửa bài writing này ạ, Em cám ơn mọi người nhiều.
The graphs provide information on the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in a country in two separate years: 1996 and 2000.
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writing task 1
The prime motives for studying among students in various age groups are displayed in the bar charts below, along with the level of employer assistance they will acquire.
In general, human beings aged above 40 largely continued their education entirely for interest, whereas the younger tended to pursue for career opportunities. Moreover, younger laborers mostly were the most potential age group considered achieving time off and help with fees at the same time.
Beginning with the first chart, it is evident that the number of humans who want to study for career reasons gradually decreased while the age of them increased. Nearly 80% of students under 26 years old, study for their career. This figure is down to almost 40% of 40-49 years and with solely 18% of over 49-year-olds studying for career motivators in late adulthood. Conversely, the proportion of students studying for interest rose with age and reached a peak for an over 49 group, at around 70%. Meanwhile, the figure for career-based students aged below 26 years was very minium, standing at slightly under 20%.
The second chart illustrates that employer support is maximum, approximately 60% for 26-year-old students. It rapidly dropped and hit its lowest point, at about 33% in the third decade of life, nevertheless, the statistic steadily grew again from middle-aged people up to 44%.
The prime motives for studying among students in various age groups are displayed in the bar charts below, along with the level of employer assistance they will acquire.
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writing task 2
The fast efficient access to information resulting from the revolution of cutting-edge technology in general, as well as social media in particular, can support many people to get better news in the modern era. Meanwhile, others suppose that the most proper method to get news quickly and effectively is through the newspaper. In this exposition, the commendable features and imperfect points of this heated question will be thoroughly examined before my personal perspective is provided.
Initially, it is an undeniable fact that the profound advantages of traditional newspapers to newsreaders enormously remain its approachability and reliability. Consequently, the conventional press is always trusted and glorified by its strict editorial content and quality checking in each process of collecting data which brought a good reputation for its credibility and remarkable accuracy. Moreover, reading printed newspapers can somehow reduce the heavy pressure from constantly accessing the digital network. Additionally, this traditional form has been developing for a long period and creating its potentially loyal customers, the proof is that there is a marked number of elderly who maintain a deep-seated hobby for printed news over decades.
Conversely, an unlimited storage of news content is made available, providing unparalleled convenience and widespread popularity in this information era. To clarify further, the extraordinary and scientific advancement of the internet supplies us with inexhaustible access to information and other wonderful features. Through media platforms, users can easily search for fresh information suitable to their taste, update it quickly, or even look for very old news which is the only thing printed newspaper finds hard to preserve.
In conclusion, the process of approaching news, both through traditional printed media and the social media platform, provide newsreaders with its own benefits and commensurate drawbacks. The selection should rely on the specific demand of each user and the certain nature of the information they are looking for. As a result, from my best perspective, the coherent fusion of these two approaches conventionally generates an optimal efficiency in the creation of transmitting information to the reader.
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Sửa bài task 1 giúp e với ạaa
The line graph gives data about the number of users of five different communication services worldwide from 1998 to 2008
The given line graph illustrates how many people utilized five means of communication over the course of ten years, starting from 1998 and ending in 2008.
Overall, there was an increase in the number of utilizers to all of the collaborative platforms examined, with the most significant growth being seen in the quantity for Cellular phone services to become the most commonly-used service from 2002 onwards.
The number of users to Cellular phone service started at nearly 5 million people in 1998, after which it experienced a considerable rise to nearly 17 million people in 2002, before ending the period at nearly 75 million people. The figures for Fixed broadband and Mobile broadband showed the similar changes along the period, with no users in the first year and increasing slightly to nearly 4 million people in 2008.
3 million people utilized Internet service in 1998, with a significant climb to 11 million people in 2004 and a final increase to 21 million people. Opposite changes can be seen in the figure for Landline service, which started at roughly 16 million people in 1998 and experienced a slight rise to 20 million people in 2006, before ending the period at nearly 19 million people.
The line graph gives data about the number of users of five different communication services worldwide from 1998 to 2008
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Em mong được thầy cô sửa bài ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of age group in British donate money to charity in 1990 and 2010.
In 1990, adults aged 36 to 50 donated most money to charity, stood at about 12%. However young people at 18 to 25 were giving least money about 17%. More than 30% of 26 to 35 years old afforded charity. The percentage of 51 to 65 years old donated money to charity was 35%. Moreover, The number of older people gave money to charity stood at 32%.
In 2010, middle aged, who at 51-65 years old, afforded charity about nearly 40%. Besides, the percentage of older people did charity increasely by 3%. While, three group from 18 to 50 years old decreased. Youth from 18 to 25 years donated just 7%. People at 26 to 35 stood at nearly 25%. Moreover, the percentage of adults gave money was 55%.
Overall, youth in 1990 and 2010 donated the least. In 1990, people aged 36 to 50 gave the most money but in 2010, midde age from 51 to 65 donated more money to charity than other groups.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of age group in British donate money to charity in 1990 and 2010.
In 1990, adults aged 36 to 50 donated most money to charity, stood at about 12%. However you...
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Nhờ cô chấm giúp em bài writing task 2 này ạ, em cảm ơn ạ
People often find It difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make It easier? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is easy to understand that people do not tend to adapt new situations in their life smoothly. This is the result of staying too long in their comfort zone and unable to jump into the other environment. In this essay, I will analyzing the mentioned reasons and giving solutions for this struggled topic.
According to some surveys, one of the most prominent reasons that people found difficulties towards to new challenges is the strange feeling. The main reason of this issue that mostly individuals do not believe in their abilities to overcome new mistakes. For instance, a number of students in Viet Nam graduated from colleges and universities have failed in finding a appropriate job as they do not ove out of their safe zone to cultivate interpersonal skills. Moreover, some of individuals also have struggle incidents in the past since it is hardly to overcome and accept new situations. Losing pets is an example as not everyone has strength to adopt a new one
There are several ways to find the solution for above reasons. First of all, giving ourselves other opportunities is to create a clear statement and discover the best approches to handle those challenges. Additionally, individuals may have chances to develop different characters inside the mind that have not experienced before.
In summary, being adapting new articles are not likely to many people because of disbelieve in themselves and be worried of unwanted circumtances. It is recommended that some people are able to overcome the old problems and make new paths for their future
People often find It difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make It easier? Give reasons for your answer and include any releva...
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Đề:Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Bài làm
Thanks to technological advancements, communication over long distances and the acquisition of information through social media are becoming increasingly popular. Acknowledging certain disadvantages caused by this trend, I believe that it can confer more significant merits.
Admittedly, several threats will be posed to users if they overuse online platforms. The most evident problem is the potential spread of fake information. As content posted onto these platforms tends to undergo less strict supervision of authoritative experts, its credibility is not always ensured. This means that Internet users are more susceptible to fake news. Another demerit is the lack of real life communication in humans’ relationships. Specifically, when people too rely on online platforms to communicate, their face-to-face relationships may degrade. This can be seen in the way many young people are experiencing isolation given their over-reliance on online communication.
However, the benefits of social media tools are of more significant importance. Chief of these is the ability to contact people irrespective of geographical constraints. Students studying abroad, for example, who live far away from their home, can make daily video calls or messages with their family. As a result, it is much easier to maintain long-distance relationships.Another benefit lies in the fact that people can keep updated with information within a short period of time and from numerous sources.. Not until after social media platforms become widely used can people keep up with the latest information.
In conclusion, although the excessive use of online platforms brings about certain problems, I advocate its huge contribution to individuals’ convenient communication and information acquisition.
Đề:Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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Mong thầy cô chữa bài cho em với ạ
Đề: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this?
Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Bài làm:
In modern times, most businesses are looking for ways to promote their products á the newest item. Because new trends are updated everyday, by this way they can attact more people to use their goods. In my opinion, i think it is a positive development because it helps create unique products for each brand.
Currently, when advertising products, businesses always emphasis thet their products are new item. That helps their products become more interesting by consumers. As can be seen , people tend to use products that are trending in the market at present. They believe that these products have good visual and generally, mean better quality and more technological advanced. For example, Although the Iphone versions are quite similar , Apple has changed a litte in appearance and highlighted aome new function to help attact a large number of buyers every time it is released.
However, by the way of making new products, they can also create their own products with unique characteristics, feartures and quality compared to other products in the market. It helps promote brand reputation and attact more consumers using their goods. For example, the Sheun Beauty always update new products everyday with high quality that attact many consumers prefer their shop to buy cosmestic.
In conclusion, business usually emphasis their products are new can help them generate more profits and create their own brand reputation.
Đề: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this?
Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Bài làm:
In modern t...
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SỬA GIÚP EM BÀI NÀY VỚI Ạ. EM CẢM ƠN ẠA
Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Some individuals claimed that commercial space travel could be more thriving in the years ahead because of its capable reference in some periods. Personally, I totally disagree with this school of thought because of some negative reasons.
It can be seen that there are some downside views from the proliferation of the commercialization of space travel. For one, it could exacerbate socioeconomic disparities. Aerospace is a prohibitively expensive industry which requires a wide range of innovative equipment, and it doesn’t mean which country with these conditions could develop this industry let alone the poor nations. Instead of opening for all kinds of people, leisure travel space is just suitable for people who have luxury finance and it leads to widen the gap between the wealthy elite and the rest of society.
Another serious effect of space travel is the energy crisis of the world. Most of the materials of Aerospace are from natural sources, and if space travel rapidly developed, the scarcity of energy would be more significant. By using a colossal amount of energy, it is predicted that there will no longer be enough energy to use in the far future. Thereby, global warming, environment pollution and soil degradation would be increased dramatically because of the shift in nature. Given the deterioration of the plant, the commercialization of space travel could be a threat for the whole world.
In conclusion, despite the potential development of outer space, I believe that it would be more inclined towards a negative trend.
Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What do you think are the consequences of this?
In a host of contemporary societies, it has become far more normal for descendants to spend less quality of their time for their ancestors. Personally, this above trend could trigger some ramification that should be considered by humans.
There are two serious consequences of the limited time that grandchildren divert to their grandparents. For one, establishing some bad effects on elderly people's health. As it is being proved by science that grandparents would have many bad emotions about mentality when they do not have too much conservation with younger persons, and it leads to low grandparents' lifespan. Given less interaction with people who have fresh energy, elderly people would be more negative instead of positive. Thereby, the mortality of grandparents would be higher.
Furthermore, tradition and cultural values can not be preserved fully. The most crucial things of a family are the traditional and cultural activities passed down through many years . In order to keep a compelling cultural and traditional background, younger generations rest with the duty of that. Meanwhile, they do not spend time to get an awareness of their traditional and cultural values which passed down from elder relatives, so it leads to the vague tradition of younger generations.
In conclusion, there are some bad effects on ancestor’s health and lack of traditional preservation on a family due to the less quality time of descendants diverting to grandparents. Thus, I strongly believe that this trend could trigger bad consequences on society.
In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What do you think are the consequences of this?
In a host of contemporary societies, it has become far m...
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Em mong thầy cô chữa bài cho em với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
Question: Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
It is not a stretch to say that migration is a powerful force shaping the world, as each individual travels across the globe, yearning for specific reasons. This essay will list why people choose to migrate and discuss its consequences.
First of all, at the heart of the reasoning behind migration is the opportunity for poor individuals living in conditions of the less privileged to find high-paying jobs, as these are jobs they have not experienced in their current environment, and they find themselves at a disadvantage when they did not receive enough attention from their past government. Therefore, both factors can act as precursors for those choosing to move to other countries, holding immense promise for advancing their careers.
Secondly, some individuals tend to choose to move to more developed countries as they want to forge a path towards exposure to better conditions, such as societal conditions, hygiene, common ethics, and others. Moreover, these places level the playing field within occupations, leading to substantial career and financial advantages.
Given the above situation, the wave of immigration might have some potential ramifications for society. Since people have flooded into other countries, there is a small increase in the likelihood of job loss for some workers already living in these countries, which already exist in highly competitive job markets. From an environmental quality perspective, a growing population positively correlates with a significant increase in carbon emissions, as there is a larger need for using private vehicles, especially for commuting.
In conclusion, the majority of migrants want to pursue a more sustainable life. It cannot be denied that they also partly contribute to the healthier economy of the country they come to. Nevertheless, it is essential not to overlook the drawbacks in terms of society and the environment that they have caused.
Question: Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài task 2 này giúp em
In recent years, the number of individuals committing crimes has increased significantly, causing some public controversy. Although some people assume that wrong-doers deserve stiff punishment, I gravitate toward the idea that the contexts and factors should also be considered, as will be elucidated in this essay.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why it is widely believed that crimes should be given rigid penalties regardless of their motives. Firstly, a confirmed conviction acts as a feasible deterrent to felons. This is because they will know there are severe punishments even for small crimes and will never break the law, which will not only prevent any would-be criminals but also reassure everyone that the country does not tolerate these crimes. Secondly, judges are able to sentence a certain verdict to those who do not follow the regulations. Take Singapore for example, in this country, even a small trace of drugs found on anyone can be a call for prison time. These penalties help ensure justice and equality and thus make Singapore one of the safest countries in the world.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the cases should be considered due to the condition and motivation of the perpetrators. Some of them may not want to break the rule; however, they commit crimes due to self-defense or mental health issues. For example, some manslaughters unintentionally kill their opponents in order to protect themselves, or there are some people with psychological problems led astray and become involved in wrongdoings like fraud or vandalism. Furthermore, it is viable to tolerate those who compensate sufficiently for their felons or those who have a deep sense of repentance since they can be rehabilitated and contribute to the public. These aforementioned reasons can guarantee a fair and honest judgment.
In conclusion, even though the idea of imposing fixed punishment on offenders seems to be true to some extent, I am of the opinion that it is necessary to take individual cases and reasons into account.
In recent years, the number of individuals committing crimes has increased significantly, causing some public controversy. Although some people assume that wrong-doers deserve stiff punishment, I grav...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài ạ.
The line graph gives data about the number of users of five different communication services worldwide from 1998 to 2008.
The given graph compares information on the five means of communication being used by people between 1998 to 2008.
Overall, there was an increase in the statistics of utilizers to all of the communication services examined, with the most dramatic rise being seen in the figures for cellular phone service. In addition, mobile broadband generally had the lowest numbers over the time frame .
Turning first to the numbers of subscribers in three services: cellular phone, fixed and mobile broadband, the figures for cellular phone started at roughly 5 million, after which it experienced an enormous growth to upward of 50 million in 2006, before nearly reaching a peak of 65 million at the end of the period. By contrast, both the number of people using fixed broadband and mobile broadload had a negligible rise of nearly 2 million in 2008.
Shifting to the remaining subjects, the data for landline service underwent a levelling off from 1998 to 2006, and had a final slight drop to shy of 20 million, after securing a likewise number with figures for internet service at 20 million. Meanwhile, the statistics of users of internet service began at nearly 4 million in 1998, and then had a climb to 20 million in 2006, before outpacing the data for landline to north of 20 million in 2008.
The line graph gives data about the number of users of five different communication services worldwide from 1998 to 2008.
The given graph compares information on the five means of communication bei...
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The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?
In today’s competitive job market, older individuals who are seeking employment often find themselves facing unique challenges when competing with younger candidates.The essay attempts to shed light on the problems which have resulted from this tendency before outlining several viable solutions that should be adopted to tackle them.
There are two major problems the older generation have to face when contending against the younger when they look for a profession. Firstly, age discrimination remains prevalent in many workplaces. Despite applying for the same job with similar abilities and qualifications, the older generations often suffer more disadvantages in finding jobs and become unemployed than young candidates, which prevents them from meeting basic human needs. Secondly, the rivalry with young applicants might cause adverse implications for aged-seekers' mental and physical health. Specifically, constantly feeling undervalued due to age-related biases in the workforce can lead to increased depression and anxiety among elderly workers, and this could also severely affect their overall well-being, causing high blood pressure or heart disease.
To combat this worrying issue, the following feasible steps should be taken. One of the remedies is that governing bodies should stop employment discrimination based on age by passing several labor laws. For instance, they could heavily fine or even fire recruiters who choose candidates based on age, which could prohibit age-related prejudice in the workplace to ensure that older people are not unfairly treated or overlooked based on their age. Another way is to encourage the old training courses. As a result, the old could have equal opportunities to cultivate relevant job skills, which would enable them to improve their work producitvity and face the young employees.
In conclusion, there are some serious repercussions attributable to this negative tendency, and it is crucial that the aforementioned measures be implemented to deal with these issues.
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The table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates how spending on the health care sector per capita in five countries namely Australia, Germany, United States, Japan, and the United Kingdom in 2019.
Overall, the United States has the highest health expenditure while the United Kingdom has the lowest spending on health care in that period.
In greater detail, the United States took the top place, spending 11,072 US dollars per capita on healthcare. Followed by Germany, which accounts for more than half of the health expenditure of the United States (6,646 US dollar per capita). Next in ranking is Australia with an average of 5,187 US dollars used on healthcare, about 1,500 US dollars less than Germany and around 6,000 US dollars less than the United States. Meanwhile, Japan and the United Kingdom stay at the bottom of the list and these two countries have relatively similar amounts of health expenditure, 4,823 and 4,653 US dollars respectively.
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Topic: Some people believe that teachers play a more important role than peers in the education of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One school of thought believes that teachers play a more essential part compared to peers in children’s education. I am totally in favor of this view due to the better academic performance and moral behaviors that children can gain.
The primary reason I would cite is that children can well perform in academic study with teachers’ instruction. This is because teachers are trained and qualified in the subject, therefore, they can answer the questions that students feel uncertain and confused about. In addition to this, teachers monitor students’ progress regularly through oral tests or 15-minute tests, thereby identifying and addressing individual weaknesses and strengths, ensuring students are adequately supported. This enhances students’ academic performance. Meanwhile, because of the lack of knowledge, some peers cannot respond to their friends’ questions, sometimes emerging disagreement among students about their results. Thus, this requires teachers’ intervention to explain the right answers to them.
Another point to support my view is that teachers can nurture students’ morality. When there are fights between students in the class, teachers must act as disciplinarians to prevent chaos, providing guidance about rights and wrongdoings. Also, with life experience, teachers can give some advice or emotional support to students in need, acknowledging properly about practical issues. By contrast, in some cases, students can be associated with a few bad guys at the same age who would induce them to do some unnecessary misconduct, lowering students’ manners. This happens because some students are inexperienced in choosing friends to play with. As a result, peers are pale in comparison with teachers in ethics
In conclusion, I contend that nothing including peers can replace the role of teachers in the education of children. These advantages include students’ enhanced academic achievement and ethical conduct.
Topic: Some people believe that teachers play a more important role than peers in the education of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for
individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of
ageing populations.
It is true that people in many parts of the world have had a longer life than in the past due to several reasons including the development of their countries. This trend may result in some potential issues for the government and young labor, so societies need to take steps to mitigate these problems.
As people live longer, the populations of countries get older, related to many issues. To begin with, this tendency leads to the fact that the number of people of retirement age, who are eligible to receive a pension, is increasing. This causes tax burden for people still in working age group, which is one of the main sources of tax for the government. To clarify, while the paying of taxes is lower, governments must take a quite amount of money from national budget to pay pension and take care of retired people, which governments may struggle to manage, especially in developing countries with modest budget.
According to the problem mentioned above, some solutions should be taken to reduce the burden for societies. First, as old people's health is usually much better due to modern medical care and healthy food, which plays a significant role in strengthen their lives and healthy, the government should extant the retirement age to around 65-70 years old, so that these people who are still productive working can contribute to taxes for a few more years. Second, implementing new policies in order to encourage immigration to make up for the labor shortage is necessary. This labor can partly support the national budget, which is already spent on pension for retired ones.
In conclusion, there are various disadvantageous effects including tax problem and the need for the government to tackle is urgent.
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Some people argue there is an increasing resemblance between different nations because the same products could be bought worldwide,and they and they view this trend negatively. In my point of view, however, I strongly agree that it is a positive phenomenon because it is beneficial to human society from an overall perspectiveperspective.
On the one hand, there are several advantages in terms of this topic. Countries becoming moremoresimilar make similar make our daily liveslives more convenient. We are likely to purchase things on the e-commerce platform without going to shop physically and have the same product experience as people who live abroadabroad. Moreover, the expansion of international trade can offer more job opportunities, which can absolutely reduce the wealth disparity significantly. Furthermore, with nations becoming more and more identical, people can readily share their ideas or thoughts with others from different backgrounds. As a result, the interaction between different groups will be improved and accelerated.
Being able to see many similar products anywhere obviously has some drawbacks for customers. Firstly, the boundaries between countries will be diminished, which means that there must be a drop in the sense of belonging to countries among people worldwide.. Secondly, many local businesses will struggle to survivebecause of because of the emergence of the international trade system,system,which leads which leads to far more competitive marketplaces. For example, the rise of well-known fast-food chains, such as Burger King, KFC, and Mos Burger, has led to many local restaurants exiting the market. Finally, it will be extremely dangerous if some products contain harmful or toxic ingredients because these commodities are sold worldwide and are difficult to regulate appropriately.
In conclusion, although the phenomenon of countries becoming similar does have some drawbacks, I believe the benefits it generates outweigh the drawbacks.
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Some people think all university student should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Some individuals suppose that university students should have the freedom to study subjects of their choice. While some argue that students should pursue their passions, others advocate for a more pragmatic approach. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting a balanced view.
On the one hand, learners who have the freedom to pursue their own interests are more enthusiastic about learning. In other words, they devote their time and attention to researching their preferred linked areas, resulting in increased knowledge and competence in these groups, which is more likely to be greater than required approaches. According to a report, persons who pursue their aspirations freely not only become more intellectual and skillful in social growth, but they also achieve high levels of success in their respective industries.
On the other hand, there is a compelling argument for universities to prioritize subjects that are directly applicable to the demands of the future, such as science and technology. Supporters of this view assert that in an increasingly competitive job market, graduates with specialized skills in these fields are more likely to secure employment and contribute to societal progress. They argue that investing in practical education aligns with economic and technological advancements, ensuring graduates possess the competencies necessary for the evolving job market.
In conclusion, the debate surrounding university education centres on the choice between studying subjects of personal interest or focusing on practical fields that align with future demands. By offering a diverse range of subjects, including those related to science and technology, while also allowing students to explore their passions, universities can cultivate well-rounded individuals who possess the necessary skills for a rapidly changing world.
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The graph illustrates how much money was given to books in four separate nations Germany, France, Italy and Australia from 1995 to 2005.
Overall, there was an increase in the quantities of money spent on books in 4 countries examined, with the most dramatic rise being seen in the figures for Australia in the latter half period. Over the time frame, Germany's budget spent on books consistently had the highest figures.
The amount of money invested in books in Germany started at 80 dollars million in 1995, after which it experienced a significant rise to 90 in 1999 dollars million, before ending at under 100 dollars million. Likewise, the figure for France was under 60 US dollars million in 1995, followed by a significant increase to under 80 dollars million in 2005.
50 dollars million were spent on books in Italy, with a slow decrease to under 50 US dollars million in 1999 and a final rise to above 60 US dollars million years later. Meanwhile, the figure for Australia saw opposite changes, starting from the lowest point at 30 dollars million in 1995 to reach a peak of above 70 dollars million, secured the third standing in the year 2005.
The graph illustrates how much money was given to books in four separate nations Germany, France, Italy and Australia from 1995 to 2005.
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