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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The bar graph shows the amount of Internet users in Greece, Denmark, Canada and the world average from 1998 to 2013.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the number of Internet users in Canada and Denmark were higher than in other countries throughout 15 years. In contrast, Greece had fewer users, which was close to the world average, but both gradually increased just as the other countries did.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the number of Internet users in Denmark increased roughly quadrupled within 15 years. In 1998, it had the second highest number of Internet users, but it had surpassed Canada by 2003. While growth after 2003 for Canada was slow, the nation's overall number of users ultimately expanded by more than threefold from 1998 to 2013. Besides, the Internet users in Greece had increased by 20000 people each 5 years. Although the world average climbed as well, moving from about 3000 users to 35000 users, the gap between it and the three countries included in the chart had widened at the end of the period in question.
The bar graph shows the amount of Internet users in Greece, Denmark, Canada and the world average from 1998 to 2013.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the number of Internet users in Canada and De...
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IELTS ACADEMIC TASK 1
Cho e xin nhận xét về bài writing task 1 này với ạ e cảm ơn mọi người rất nhiều ạ 😭
The graph illustrates how much river water in the UK rivers that is divided as having high-quality chemicals from 1990 to 2002.
Overall , there was a decline in the number of river water in Wales while an opposite pattern can be seen in the figure for Northern Ireland , England and Scotland . In addition , the figure for Wales took the lead but it was outnumbered by Northern Ireland in the final year .
A similar trend can be seen in the figures for Wales and Northern Ireland from 1990 to 1998 , which remained stable at around 95% and just under 90% respectively . The number of river water sources in Wales in 1998 was about 95% , after which it gradually decreased to exactly 80% in 2002. The opposite change can be seen in the figure for Northern Ireland from 1998 to 2002 , significantly increasing from north of 90% to about 95% .
The percentage of river water in England that is classified as having good chemical quality started at around 45% in 1990 , with a subsequent dramatic rise to approximately 69% in 1996 , before falling to 30% in 1998 , finally increasing to just under 50% in 2002 . A similar change can be seen in the data for Scotland , climbing from around 22% in 1990 to about 59% in 2000 , eventually reaching 40% in 2002.
Cho e xin nhận xét về bài writing task 1 này với ạ e cảm ơn mọi người rất nhiều ạ 😭
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The chart illustrates the growing process of salmon, which is a species of large fish. Overall, this is a cycle process, including 3 stages, showing the whole life of salmons. Each stage is a period of its life.
First of all, salmon eggs are born under some small stones and reeds, which are located in upper river with slow moving water, for approximately 5 to 6 months. After that, they become fry, with a length of 3 to 8 centimeters. Then they move to lower river with fast flowing water and live there.
After around 4 years, they become smolt, which have a length of 12 to 15 centimeters. At this time, the smolt move to open sea and live there in the next 5 years before becoming adult salmon with a length of 70 to 76 centimeters. Eventually, they come back to upper river and give birth to salmon eggs, and the cycle will continue with the new generation. (160 words)
The chart illustrates the growing process of salmon, which is a species of large fish. Overall, this is a cycle process, including 3 stages, showing the whole life of salmons. Each stage is a period o...
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The process describes how aluminum cans are recycled in order to provide the consuming aluminum cans.
Overall there are six stages in the processing of recycling used cans, starting with the collection of aluminum cans and ending with reusing them.
First aluminum cans are collected into an aluminum trash containers which moves to a special classifier that is done through the process of washing, classifying, shredding, and compressing. Once the cans have been compressed, they then have a solid form and burnt in a fiery furnace.
When the cans are heated they are transferred into a blending machine which have a thickness between 2.5 mm to 6mm in length. The cans are delivered to recycling corporations which designs the can’s color, size, texture, shape, and quality. The recycling cans are reused by consumers at local stores and restaurants, there are 74% that aluminum cans have been recycled in the United Kingdom.
The process describes how aluminum cans are recycled in order to provide the consuming aluminum cans.
Overall there are six stages in the processing of recycling used cans, starting with the collecti...
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Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Large corporations sponsoring major sporting events are a ubiquitous sight. Some people argue that commercialization negatively affects sports. From my perspective, I am opposed to this statement.
The first reason why I think using sports events for advertising does not affect sports badly is that this can provide financial significant resources that enable sports events to thrive. Hosting events can incur a huge amount of expense, so they may not have the possibility of paying for it without funds from large corporations. The sponsors can cover the planning costs, enhance training facilities, and provide catering services. Additionally, sports events are more accessible to people due to sponsorships. Big corporations desire their products to reach as many audiences as possible, so the ticket price of the events will not be overpriced or they could be free. As a result, more spectators from even low-income classes can come to the events and see their advertisements.
Another reason is that many sportsmen can gain a better standard of living because of sponsorship. This is mainly due to the fans of sports who tend to purchase the products that are used or advertised by their favorite sportsmen. Consequently, the more products are sold, the more wages the sponsors pay for athletes. For instance, Ronaldo's income comes from not only participating in football matches but also promoting products for brands.
To sum up, I totally disagree that promoting products through sports events has an undesirable impact on sports because this provides funds for sports events
and financially supports athletes.
Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The line graph shows the numbers of internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 to 2009.
It is clear that the percentages of the USA, Canada and Mexico see a increase over the period shown.Also, the Canadians is the most popular internet users as percentage pf population.
In 1999, the number of internet users in the USA was highest, at around 20% while the respective figures for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5%.In the year 2005, Internet usage in both the USA and Canada rose significantly to around 70% of the population. As can be seen in the graph, there were a slight increase of nearly 20% in the figures for the Mexicans.
In 2009, the quantities of people using the internet in Canada reached the highest point of 100%. According to the graph, there were about 80% of Americans and only 40% of Mexicans.
The line graph shows the numbers of internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 to 2009.
It is clear that the percentages of the USA, Canada and Mexico see a increase over...
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The maps illustrate some changes to the school location over a period of 20 years.
Overall, the school site has experienced considerable changes during the period shown. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are the relocation of the sports field and the construction of new facilities.
As can be seen from the maps, the school site in the west has remained unchanged from 2004 to 2024. However, the school location in the north has changed significantly. The school building 1 is combined to the school building 2. It is also noticeable that a new school building 3 is built because of the increase in the number of students (from 600 students to 1000 students). Moreover, the path is shortened to connect three school buildings
Turning to other features, we can see that the west of the school site has still existed. The sports field is moved to the east to make space for school building 3 where the car park 2 is located beside.
The maps illustrate some changes to the school location over a period of 20 years.
Overall, the school site has experienced considerable changes during the period shown. The most noticeable differe...
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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages
Today, in many countries, if you want to pursue job opportunities that can be equivalent to leaving familiar environments behind. From my perspective, the benefits of this trend surpass its drawbacks.
On the one hand, one school of thought argues that the inclination to move away from families and friends to find work may indeed have several disadvantages. The first one is the potential for increased feelings of loneliness and isolation during the initial period of adjustment in a novel environment, especially for individuals accustomed to the support and companionship of their families and friends. They may also struggle to cope with the pressures of a new life and the transition to independence. Furthermore, the lack of social networks can elevate stress and anxiety levels, as separating from close relationships and support systems can make it difficult to seek help during challenging times, contributing to detrimental effects on mental well-being and work performance.
On the other hand, the positive impacts are much greater. The primary reason behind this thinking is that it paves the way for personal growth, self-reliance, and honing essential life skills crucial for working success, as individuals overcome daily adversities without immediate assistance from family members and friends. This experience also cultivates resilience and adaptability, which positively correlate with healthier personal and professional spheres. Moreover, individuals can broaden their horizons by immersing themselves in diverse cultures, which not only enhances their insight into the world but also expands their social circle with people from different backgrounds. This holds immense promise for a more open-minded perspective and ultimately leads to a more satisfying working life.
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of distancing oneself from support networks for work outweigh the disadvantages. Although this trend can evoke feelings of isolation and loneliness, it presents valuable opportunities for people to broaden their horizons and nurture their personal and professional development.
In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages
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The chart below illustrates the percentage of coffee and tea were consumed in five Australian cities Past 4 weeks
Overall, the proportion of people went to a café for coffee or tea was the highest in the survey, meanwhile, the percentage of people bought fresh coffee was the lowest in last 4 weeks in all cities
Examining the chart we see that people in Melbourne and Hobart went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks account for 63% while in Sydney, Brisbane and Adelaide are approximately 61%, 56% and 49%, respectively. There is the same second place in the chart is buying instant coffee which is highest in Hobart at 54% and then was Brisbane , Adelaide, Melboume and Sydney with 539%, 50%, 48% and 46%
By constrast, people in these cities chose fresh coffee less than instant coffee Especially, people in Adelaide don't chosse fresh coffee only 33% and the highest was in Sydney at 43%
The chart below illustrates the percentage of coffee and tea were consumed in five Australian cities Past 4 weeks
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The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants.
The table compares three different types of restaurants, namely: Sit-Down Restaurant, Cafeteria and Fast Food Restaurant in terms of average cost of lunch and dinner as well as average time customers spend on each restaurant.
Overall, Sit-Down Restaurant has the most expensive average cost, while the opposite is true for Fast Food Restaurant. Additionally, it is obvious that people spend more time in Sit-Down Restaurant compared to others.
According to the given table, people spend about 10$ for lunch in Sit-Down Restaurant, and the figures in Cafeteria and Fast Food Restaurant are 7$ and 4.5$, respectively. 45 minutes is the average time people spend for lunch in Sit-Down Restaurant, 15 minutes higher than the average time they stay in Cafeteria. However, customers just stay 20 minutes in Fast Food Restaurant.
Having a dinner in Sit-Down Restaurant costs about 17$ and people spend an hour dining in this restaurant, 3 times higher than the average time people spend in Fast Food Restaurant, where dinner only costs 5$. Regarding Cafeteria, people spend 9.5$ on average and stay about 45 minutes for a dinner in this restaurant.
The table compares three different types of restaurants, namely: Sit-Down Restaurant, Cafeteria and Fast Food Restaurant in terms of average cost of lunch and dinner as well as average time customers...
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The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
Details regarding how a small cinema transformed between 2010 and 2012 are pictorially depicted in the diagram. Overall, this spot underwent relatively extensive innovations and rearrangements, the most noticeable of which is the relocation of a storage, the emergence of restaurants, and the extension of a lobby and a stage.
Internally, regarding the left of the foyer, which was significantly extended, admin office and contiguous ticket one were removed to the opposite corner and the right-handed area that was previously occupied by a Café respectively to cater for the construction of food establishments in tandem with 8 chairs. Meanwhile, the main entrance remained unaltered. Adjacent to the lobby was the auditorium, which maintained the status quo with 12 seats. Externally, on the left of the room, there was a construction of bathrooms,
Concerning the outside stage and hall, a media was constructed on the place that was formerly held by a storage, which was also repositioned to the right of the picture. Looking at the inside one, while there was the notable extension of the hall, the media was converted into a hall.
The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
Details regarding how a small cinema transformed between 2010 and 2012 are pictorially depicted in the diagram. Overall, this spot unde...
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The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
the given map shows how a small theater changed from 2010 to 2012
overall , the theater experienced significant changes , with the addition of several facilities and relocation of certain areas.
In 2010 , this small theater had a simple design with seven areas.The auditorium area , situated almost in the middle of the theater , was in front of stage. The media section was located at the bottom the theatre , with a storage section on the left-hand side.the admin office and ticket office next to each other is were built at the bottom left-hand side corner and a coffee section at the bottom right-hand side corner. There are a main entrance is located in the middle of the coffee section and these two offices.
In 2012 , the stage was remained its location and enlarged , with removement of media section on the left-hand side and storage section on the right-hand side , resulting in addition of a small hall.The auditorium area also remained unchanged , with the establishment of showers on the left-hand side of it. The admin office and ticket office were placed by restaurants on the bottom left corner of the building , in contrast , main entrance was proposed to be unchanged. The ticket office was built on the bottom right corner , while admin office was opposite to new restaurants.
The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
the given map shows how a small theater changed from 2010 to 2012
overall , the theater experienced significant changes , with the ad...
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Đề bài: Nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
Answer:
In the contemporary world, there has been much controversy about whether the influences of advertising on audiences are less apparent than in the past brings more benefits or drawbacks. From my perspective, this trend can be seen as beneficial due to various reasons.
One the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that this situation brings about some downsides. To begin with, there are some factors contributing to this. Chief among these is that people are becoming more accustomed to different types of advertisements. This is because, advertising has gained traction in recent years, from billboards along the streets or in front of large supermarkets to varying types of commercials on TV as well as on social media. If people caught novel things on these flatforms at the first sight, they might find it attractive and want to purchase these products, but after watching ads so many times they might find it boring and uninteresting. Furthermore, the standard of living of people in many countries have improved substantially so that people have adequate necessities for entertaining, cooking, eating. As a result, they don't have any appeal for these items.
In my opinion, people becoming less affected by advertisements can be deemed positive due to its role to gain financial advantage. This is because in the past, when considering which products to purchase, consumers usually based on their attractiveness presenting on TV, so they could make impulsive buying decision. However, people in today world are more careful about the products they are searching for, not be easily convinced by vivid visualization presenting on commercials, they can find reviews of items that previous buyers left on many online flatforms. Therefore, they can make more appropriate choices of purchasing goods. As a result, people have the opportunity to spend their money more wisely and not squander on unnecessary items. With the influences of commercials on people being reduced, the mistakes of buying unsuitable products or services could be avoided.
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In conclusion, the tendency toward consumers being less swayed by advertisement is due to its repetition over time and the improvement on people's living standard. From my perspective, this trend is particularly valuable for consumers in terms of financial spending and saving.
Đề bài: Nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether competition or cooperation in different environments, such as in the workplace, at school, and in daily contexts is beneficial. This essay argues that both viewpoints are valid but supports the former.
Granted, advocates of collaboration often highly value a sense of unity that it provides. Indubitably, an increase in collaboration typically fosters stronger relationships, leading to societal cohesion. Vietnamese people have had strong bonds for decades due to their .regular practice of reciprocity Without this practice, a sense of solidarity would not been sustained among Vietnamese communities as it is today.
Conversely, competitive behaviors in professional, educational, and in daily context is incontrovertibly promising. Regarding the working environment and academic setting, competing against each other can acts as a catalyst for developing motivations and aspirations. These mental factors can lead to increased productivity and learning outcomes. This is usually the case with everyday context. For example, Vietnam’s launch of competitive initiatives related to environmental protection have inspired numerous citizens to strive for excellence and has gained notable successes. Another overriding virtue is that challenges can help push personal boundaries or even reach new heights of achievements. This is the advantage that is virtually absent from the practice of mutual altrutism.
In conclusion, while the notion of collaborative efforts in profession, education and daily life seems reasonable due to its potential creation of cohesive communities, I am of the opinion that facilitating competitive conditions can emerge as a wiser approach to maintain sustainable growth.
Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The provided line graph illustrates the proportion of exports from Australia to four different nations over the course of 22 years, starting in 1990.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that from Australia, exports to China and India witnessed an upward trend, while the opposite was the case for Japan and the United States. Among the four, China was the biggest consumer of Australian goods by the end of the assessed period.
In 1990, Japan was by far the largest market for Australian exports, accounting for roughly 25%, before registering a considerable decrease to nearly 17% in the final year. Far below was the USA, at almost 10%, which was approximately 9% higher than the figure for the remaining country.
Thereafter, the exports to the US fluctuated from 1990 to 2000 before reaching a peak at roughly 6% in 2010. Regarding the case of China, it rose steadily throughout the time shown and reached the highest point in 2012, replacing Japan as the top destination for Australian exports.
The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The provided line graph illustrates the proportion of exports from Australia to four different nations over the course of 22 years, starting in 1990.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that from Australia, exports to China and India witnessed an upward trend, while the opposite was the case for Japan and the United States. Among the four, China was the biggest consumer of Australian goods by the end of the assessed period.
In 1990, Japan was by far the largest market for Australian exports, accounting for roughly 25%, before registering a considerable decrease to nearly 17% in the final year. Far below was the USA, at almost 10%, which was approximately 9% higher than the figure for the remaining country.
Thereafter, the exports to the US fluctuated from 1990 to 2000 before reaching a peak at roughly 6% in 2010. Regarding the case of China, it rose steadily throughout the time shown and reached the highest point in 2012, replacing Japan as the top destination for Australian exports.
The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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Relying on the advancement of technology, the original approach to the information such as printed book or newspaper will be feasibly replaced by the online method in the future. Furthermore, this drastic change may be triggered by the benefits of the online technique, respectively the flexibility and human health. Therefore, this essay will elaborate further on both points and state my perspective.
Initially, the flexibility is one of the major reasons promoting this alteration. This is because the requirement to read online news via the digital devices is to connect with the 4g or 5g. Consequently, individual can access to these websites versatilely in anytime and places. For instance, it is extremely common in some Western countries to catch up someone sitting on the train and reading the latest news on their phone simultaneously. Thus, it seems as one of the main factors leading to this change.
Likewise, the another potential cause for this transformation is to preserve human health. The conversion into online reach possibly reduces the amount of tree which has been cut in the quest of manufacturing paper and other harmful chemicals. As the result, the trees can not only prolong their lives but also filter the excessive proportion of dust in the atmosphere, resulting in restraining numerous diseases associated with the respiratory tract. Indeed, I definitely support this stance.
In conclusion, less people may choose original way instead of online site because of the flexibility and individual health's protection in the following years. Additionally, I fully agree with this statement.
Relying on the advancement of technology, the original approach to the information such as printed book or newspaper will be feasibly replaced by the online method in the future. Furthermore, this dra...
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some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or diíagree
The debate surrounding whether pursuing an early and single career path compared to changing jobs frequently can yield many satisfying aspects of working life continues to be a topic of contention. From my perspective, I believe that job hoppers may enjoy multiple advantages in their careers.
On the one hand, one school of thought holds that the trend of workers remaining loyal to one position may indeed present several advantages. The primary reason behind this thinking is that they can go to great lengths to develop specialized knowledge and expertise within their chosen field, which may hold immense promise for achieving a generous salary package, good promotion prospects, and a greater sense of job satisfaction. Additionally, remaining in a single job for an extended period can provide stability, and consistency, and restore employers' faith, which is equated with receiving promotions and achieving fulfillment in one's career.
On the other hand, those who jump jobs from time to time can cultivate multiple benefits. Perhaps the foremost rationale would be that this is an opportunity for them to explore personal strengths, roles, and favorable work environments, especially for newly graduated students who can gain diverse experiences and skill sets, making them more valuable and marketable to recruiters. Moreover, changing jobs frequently can help individuals enhance adaptability and versatility, which are essential skills and of paramount importance in today's rapidly changing job market and the trend of employee layoffs, forcing them to accommodate different workplaces.
In conclusion, how one person gains satisfaction from their career may be different from another. I believe that job hoppers have the potential to lead to a fulfilling work life, especially for young people who do not have enough working experience, as they can broaden their horizons and gain a holistic insight into different domains. Therefore, ultimately finding an appropriate job and salary increment can act as a catalyst for a healthier balance in personal and professional spheres
some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or diíagree
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Topic: The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate how UK employment changed between 1998 and 2012.
Overall, it can be seen that over a fourteen-year period, the number of people joining the UK job market increased considerably. Moreover, while the proportion of male employees in this country witnessed a gradual decrease, the figure for female workers observed an upward trend.
During the surveyed time frame, there was a moderate fall in the total value of UK men workers by 5%, caused mainly by the drop in full-time employees, from 53% in 1998 to 47% in 2012, though it still accounted for around half of the UK labor force. However, the opposite was true for males working part-time, as the percentage of this group leveled up by only 1%.
In comparison, although there was a slight reduction in the ratio of women getting a part-time job by 2%, the size of the full-time group of this sex leaped between 19% and 26% over fourteen years, leading to a growth in the total value of females engaging in the UK labor force. Noticeably, four groups in the UK underwent an improvement in total worker numbers, from nearly 24,000,000 to more than 29,000,000 in the year 2012.
Topic: The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The giv...
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The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
The first given line chart illustrates monthly British parents’ expenses for their children’s sports while the second ones shows the popularity of three distinctive sports ,which are football , athletics and swimming among British children during a 6-year-old period , starting from 2008.
Overall , it can clearly be evident that British parents spent money on their children’s sports had an upward trend and the same tendency was true for the three sports over the period . Furthermore , Football seemed to be the dominant sports compared to others.
To begin with , British parents spent around 20 pounds every month for their children’s sports in 2008 and then started to increase gradually over the years .From 2008 to 2010 , the expenses increased by about 5 pounds but then rose slower during the remaining period , when the expenses were only higher than at most 3 pounds every 2 two years . Afterwards , the figure reached a peak in 2014 at 30 pounds
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Regarding participation of children in three different sports , football observed a leveling off when it fluctuated between approximately 8 and 8.75 millions participants over the period . Moreover , the number of children playing football was significantly higher than the sum of that of two other sports for the whole period . Concerning swimming , the number of children who swam was nearly 2.5 millions in 2008 and started to rose gradually after that ,while those who took part in atheletics were initially lower than those who swim about 2 millions from 2008 to 2010 , but then increased rapidly to almost 5 millions participants in 2012 ,followed by a minor fall . However , children who participate in atheltics were higher than those who swam during the last 2 years.
The first given line chart illustrates monthly British parents’ expenses for their children’s sports while the second ones shows the popularity of three distinctive sports ,which are football , athlet...
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The given table illustrates information and predictions on the proportion of old dwellers in three distinct nations from 1988 to 2030.
Overall, there is an increase in the share of senior citizens in all nations, under scrutiny, with the notable stability being seen in the figures for the UK in the first half of the period. Furthermore, Germany secures the highest percentage throughout the span.
Examining the data more closely, the proportion of Canada and Germany old residents represented a surge with the respective figures: from 16.45% to 20.65% and from 20.35% to 25.35%, between 1988 and 2000. Meanwhile, the data for the UK showed a stability with a negligible share of around 14% under the corresponding duration.
Shifting focus to the last 30 years, the percentage of Canada and Germany senior citizens is predicted to rise slightly to 26.35% and 30.65%, respectively, in 2030. Likewise, 14.80% of the UK elderly inhabitants in 2000, with a prediction of a subsequent growth to 20.45% in 2030.
The given table illustrates information and predictions on the proportion of old dwellers in three distinct nations from 1988 to 2030.
Overall, there is an increase in the share of senior citizens in...
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