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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp...
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em bài task 1 ạ
The chart below illustrates the percentage of coffee and tea were consumed in five Australian cities Past 4 weeks
Overall, the proportion of people went to a café for coffee or tea was the highest in the survey, meanwhile, the percentage of people bought fresh coffee was the lowest in last 4 weeks in all cities
Examining the chart we see that people in Melbourne and Hobart went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks account for 63% while in Sydney, Brisbane and Adelaide are approximately 61%, 56% and 49%, respectively. There is the same second place in the chart is buying instant coffee which is highest in Hobart at 54% and then was Brisbane , Adelaide, Melboume and Sydney with 539%, 50%, 48% and 46%
By constrast, people in these cities chose fresh coffee less than instant coffee Especially, people in Adelaide don't chosse fresh coffee only 33% and the highest was in Sydney at 43%
The chart below illustrates the percentage of coffee and tea were consumed in five Australian cities Past 4 weeks
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The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants.
The table compares three different types of restaurants, namely: Sit-Down Restaurant, Cafeteria and Fast Food Restaurant in terms of average cost of lunch and dinner as well as average time customers spend on each restaurant.
Overall, Sit-Down Restaurant has the most expensive average cost, while the opposite is true for Fast Food Restaurant. Additionally, it is obvious that people spend more time in Sit-Down Restaurant compared to others.
According to the given table, people spend about 10$ for lunch in Sit-Down Restaurant, and the figures in Cafeteria and Fast Food Restaurant are 7$ and 4.5$, respectively. 45 minutes is the average time people spend for lunch in Sit-Down Restaurant, 15 minutes higher than the average time they stay in Cafeteria. However, customers just stay 20 minutes in Fast Food Restaurant.
Having a dinner in Sit-Down Restaurant costs about 17$ and people spend an hour dining in this restaurant, 3 times higher than the average time people spend in Fast Food Restaurant, where dinner only costs 5$. Regarding Cafeteria, people spend 9.5$ on average and stay about 45 minutes for a dinner in this restaurant.
The table compares three different types of restaurants, namely: Sit-Down Restaurant, Cafeteria and Fast Food Restaurant in terms of average cost of lunch and dinner as well as average time customers...
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The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
Details regarding how a small cinema transformed between 2010 and 2012 are pictorially depicted in the diagram. Overall, this spot underwent relatively extensive innovations and rearrangements, the most noticeable of which is the relocation of a storage, the emergence of restaurants, and the extension of a lobby and a stage.
Internally, regarding the left of the foyer, which was significantly extended, admin office and contiguous ticket one were removed to the opposite corner and the right-handed area that was previously occupied by a Café respectively to cater for the construction of food establishments in tandem with 8 chairs. Meanwhile, the main entrance remained unaltered. Adjacent to the lobby was the auditorium, which maintained the status quo with 12 seats. Externally, on the left of the room, there was a construction of bathrooms,
Concerning the outside stage and hall, a media was constructed on the place that was formerly held by a storage, which was also repositioned to the right of the picture. Looking at the inside one, while there was the notable extension of the hall, the media was converted into a hall.
The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
Details regarding how a small cinema transformed between 2010 and 2012 are pictorially depicted in the diagram. Overall, this spot unde...
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ
The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
the given map shows how a small theater changed from 2010 to 2012
overall , the theater experienced significant changes , with the addition of several facilities and relocation of certain areas.
In 2010 , this small theater had a simple design with seven areas.The auditorium area , situated almost in the middle of the theater , was in front of stage. The media section was located at the bottom the theatre , with a storage section on the left-hand side.the admin office and ticket office next to each other is were built at the bottom left-hand side corner and a coffee section at the bottom right-hand side corner. There are a main entrance is located in the middle of the coffee section and these two offices.
In 2012 , the stage was remained its location and enlarged , with removement of media section on the left-hand side and storage section on the right-hand side , resulting in addition of a small hall.The auditorium area also remained unchanged , with the establishment of showers on the left-hand side of it. The admin office and ticket office were placed by restaurants on the bottom left corner of the building , in contrast , main entrance was proposed to be unchanged. The ticket office was built on the bottom right corner , while admin office was opposite to new restaurants.
The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
the given map shows how a small theater changed from 2010 to 2012
overall , the theater experienced significant changes , with the ad...
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Đề bài: Nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
Answer:
In the contemporary world, there has been much controversy about whether the influences of advertising on audiences are less apparent than in the past brings more benefits or drawbacks. From my perspective, this trend can be seen as beneficial due to various reasons.
One the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that this situation brings about some downsides. To begin with, there are some factors contributing to this. Chief among these is that people are becoming more accustomed to different types of advertisements. This is because, advertising has gained traction in recent years, from billboards along the streets or in front of large supermarkets to varying types of commercials on TV as well as on social media. If people caught novel things on these flatforms at the first sight, they might find it attractive and want to purchase these products, but after watching ads so many times they might find it boring and uninteresting. Furthermore, the standard of living of people in many countries have improved substantially so that people have adequate necessities for entertaining, cooking, eating. As a result, they don't have any appeal for these items.
In my opinion, people becoming less affected by advertisements can be deemed positive due to its role to gain financial advantage. This is because in the past, when considering which products to purchase, consumers usually based on their attractiveness presenting on TV, so they could make impulsive buying decision. However, people in today world are more careful about the products they are searching for, not be easily convinced by vivid visualization presenting on commercials, they can find reviews of items that previous buyers left on many online flatforms. Therefore, they can make more appropriate choices of purchasing goods. As a result, people have the opportunity to spend their money more wisely and not squander on unnecessary items. With the influences of commercials on people being reduced, the mistakes of buying unsuitable products or services could be avoided.
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In conclusion, the tendency toward consumers being less swayed by advertisement is due to its repetition over time and the improvement on people's living standard. From my perspective, this trend is particularly valuable for consumers in terms of financial spending and saving.
Đề bài: Nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
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In the contemporary world, there...
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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether competition or cooperation in different environments, such as in the workplace, at school, and in daily contexts is beneficial. This essay argues that both viewpoints are valid but supports the former.
Granted, advocates of collaboration often highly value a sense of unity that it provides. Indubitably, an increase in collaboration typically fosters stronger relationships, leading to societal cohesion. Vietnamese people have had strong bonds for decades due to their .regular practice of reciprocity Without this practice, a sense of solidarity would not been sustained among Vietnamese communities as it is today.
Conversely, competitive behaviors in professional, educational, and in daily context is incontrovertibly promising. Regarding the working environment and academic setting, competing against each other can acts as a catalyst for developing motivations and aspirations. These mental factors can lead to increased productivity and learning outcomes. This is usually the case with everyday context. For example, Vietnam’s launch of competitive initiatives related to environmental protection have inspired numerous citizens to strive for excellence and has gained notable successes. Another overriding virtue is that challenges can help push personal boundaries or even reach new heights of achievements. This is the advantage that is virtually absent from the practice of mutual altrutism.
In conclusion, while the notion of collaborative efforts in profession, education and daily life seems reasonable due to its potential creation of cohesive communities, I am of the opinion that facilitating competitive conditions can emerge as a wiser approach to maintain sustainable growth.
Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
Discuss both th...
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Mong các thầy cô chấm bài giúp em ạ
The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The provided line graph illustrates the proportion of exports from Australia to four different nations over the course of 22 years, starting in 1990.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that from Australia, exports to China and India witnessed an upward trend, while the opposite was the case for Japan and the United States. Among the four, China was the biggest consumer of Australian goods by the end of the assessed period.
In 1990, Japan was by far the largest market for Australian exports, accounting for roughly 25%, before registering a considerable decrease to nearly 17% in the final year. Far below was the USA, at almost 10%, which was approximately 9% higher than the figure for the remaining country.
Thereafter, the exports to the US fluctuated from 1990 to 2000 before reaching a peak at roughly 6% in 2010. Regarding the case of China, it rose steadily throughout the time shown and reached the highest point in 2012, replacing Japan as the top destination for Australian exports.
The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The provided line graph illustrates the proportion of exports from Australia to four different nations over the course of 22 years, starting in 1990.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that from Australia, exports to China and India witnessed an upward trend, while the opposite was the case for Japan and the United States. Among the four, China was the biggest consumer of Australian goods by the end of the assessed period.
In 1990, Japan was by far the largest market for Australian exports, accounting for roughly 25%, before registering a considerable decrease to nearly 17% in the final year. Far below was the USA, at almost 10%, which was approximately 9% higher than the figure for the remaining country.
Thereafter, the exports to the US fluctuated from 1990 to 2000 before reaching a peak at roughly 6% in 2010. Regarding the case of China, it rose steadily throughout the time shown and reached the highest point in 2012, replacing Japan as the top destination for Australian exports.
The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
Relying on the advancement of technology, the original approach to the information such as printed book or newspaper will be feasibly replaced by the online method in the future. Furthermore, this drastic change may be triggered by the benefits of the online technique, respectively the flexibility and human health. Therefore, this essay will elaborate further on both points and state my perspective.
Initially, the flexibility is one of the major reasons promoting this alteration. This is because the requirement to read online news via the digital devices is to connect with the 4g or 5g. Consequently, individual can access to these websites versatilely in anytime and places. For instance, it is extremely common in some Western countries to catch up someone sitting on the train and reading the latest news on their phone simultaneously. Thus, it seems as one of the main factors leading to this change.
Likewise, the another potential cause for this transformation is to preserve human health. The conversion into online reach possibly reduces the amount of tree which has been cut in the quest of manufacturing paper and other harmful chemicals. As the result, the trees can not only prolong their lives but also filter the excessive proportion of dust in the atmosphere, resulting in restraining numerous diseases associated with the respiratory tract. Indeed, I definitely support this stance.
In conclusion, less people may choose original way instead of online site because of the flexibility and individual health's protection in the following years. Additionally, I fully agree with this statement.
Relying on the advancement of technology, the original approach to the information such as printed book or newspaper will be feasibly replaced by the online method in the future. Furthermore, this dra...
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Mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or diíagree
The debate surrounding whether pursuing an early and single career path compared to changing jobs frequently can yield many satisfying aspects of working life continues to be a topic of contention. From my perspective, I believe that job hoppers may enjoy multiple advantages in their careers.
On the one hand, one school of thought holds that the trend of workers remaining loyal to one position may indeed present several advantages. The primary reason behind this thinking is that they can go to great lengths to develop specialized knowledge and expertise within their chosen field, which may hold immense promise for achieving a generous salary package, good promotion prospects, and a greater sense of job satisfaction. Additionally, remaining in a single job for an extended period can provide stability, and consistency, and restore employers' faith, which is equated with receiving promotions and achieving fulfillment in one's career.
On the other hand, those who jump jobs from time to time can cultivate multiple benefits. Perhaps the foremost rationale would be that this is an opportunity for them to explore personal strengths, roles, and favorable work environments, especially for newly graduated students who can gain diverse experiences and skill sets, making them more valuable and marketable to recruiters. Moreover, changing jobs frequently can help individuals enhance adaptability and versatility, which are essential skills and of paramount importance in today's rapidly changing job market and the trend of employee layoffs, forcing them to accommodate different workplaces.
In conclusion, how one person gains satisfaction from their career may be different from another. I believe that job hoppers have the potential to lead to a fulfilling work life, especially for young people who do not have enough working experience, as they can broaden their horizons and gain a holistic insight into different domains. Therefore, ultimately finding an appropriate job and salary increment can act as a catalyst for a healthier balance in personal and professional spheres
some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or diíagree
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa và đánh giá bài viết ạ
Topic: The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate how UK employment changed between 1998 and 2012.
Overall, it can be seen that over a fourteen-year period, the number of people joining the UK job market increased considerably. Moreover, while the proportion of male employees in this country witnessed a gradual decrease, the figure for female workers observed an upward trend.
During the surveyed time frame, there was a moderate fall in the total value of UK men workers by 5%, caused mainly by the drop in full-time employees, from 53% in 1998 to 47% in 2012, though it still accounted for around half of the UK labor force. However, the opposite was true for males working part-time, as the percentage of this group leveled up by only 1%.
In comparison, although there was a slight reduction in the ratio of women getting a part-time job by 2%, the size of the full-time group of this sex leaped between 19% and 26% over fourteen years, leading to a growth in the total value of females engaging in the UK labor force. Noticeably, four groups in the UK underwent an improvement in total worker numbers, from nearly 24,000,000 to more than 29,000,000 in the year 2012.
Topic: The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The giv...
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The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
The first given line chart illustrates monthly British parents’ expenses for their children’s sports while the second ones shows the popularity of three distinctive sports ,which are football , athletics and swimming among British children during a 6-year-old period , starting from 2008.
Overall , it can clearly be evident that British parents spent money on their children’s sports had an upward trend and the same tendency was true for the three sports over the period . Furthermore , Football seemed to be the dominant sports compared to others.
To begin with , British parents spent around 20 pounds every month for their children’s sports in 2008 and then started to increase gradually over the years .From 2008 to 2010 , the expenses increased by about 5 pounds but then rose slower during the remaining period , when the expenses were only higher than at most 3 pounds every 2 two years . Afterwards , the figure reached a peak in 2014 at 30 pounds
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Regarding participation of children in three different sports , football observed a leveling off when it fluctuated between approximately 8 and 8.75 millions participants over the period . Moreover , the number of children playing football was significantly higher than the sum of that of two other sports for the whole period . Concerning swimming , the number of children who swam was nearly 2.5 millions in 2008 and started to rose gradually after that ,while those who took part in atheletics were initially lower than those who swim about 2 millions from 2008 to 2010 , but then increased rapidly to almost 5 millions participants in 2012 ,followed by a minor fall . However , children who participate in atheltics were higher than those who swam during the last 2 years.
The first given line chart illustrates monthly British parents’ expenses for their children’s sports while the second ones shows the popularity of three distinctive sports ,which are football , athlet...
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The given table illustrates information and predictions on the proportion of old dwellers in three distinct nations from 1988 to 2030.
Overall, there is an increase in the share of senior citizens in all nations, under scrutiny, with the notable stability being seen in the figures for the UK in the first half of the period. Furthermore, Germany secures the highest percentage throughout the span.
Examining the data more closely, the proportion of Canada and Germany old residents represented a surge with the respective figures: from 16.45% to 20.65% and from 20.35% to 25.35%, between 1988 and 2000. Meanwhile, the data for the UK showed a stability with a negligible share of around 14% under the corresponding duration.
Shifting focus to the last 30 years, the percentage of Canada and Germany senior citizens is predicted to rise slightly to 26.35% and 30.65%, respectively, in 2030. Likewise, 14.80% of the UK elderly inhabitants in 2000, with a prediction of a subsequent growth to 20.45% in 2030.
The given table illustrates information and predictions on the proportion of old dwellers in three distinct nations from 1988 to 2030.
Overall, there is an increase in the share of senior citizens in...
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em chào thầy cô, mong thầy cô chấm bài với ạ, em cảm ơn ạ
The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children's sport between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
The first chart illustrates the amount of money which British parents spent on their children’s sport and the second chart compares the number of children who engaged in different three sports in Britain over a period of 6 years
It is clear that an increasing amount of money invested in sport was seen. Moreover, three sports all rose considerably but football was the highest, compared with other sports.
Looking at the first line graph in more detail, the average of money invested in children’s sport was just 20 pounds but this figure increased significantly by over 10 pounds from 2008 to 2014.
Turning to the remaining line graph, the participation in soccer started around 6.5 millions at the beginning of 2008 and this figure stayed relatively stable until the year 2010, then growed dramatically to rougly 9 millions in 2014. The number of children took part in swimming and athletics was nearly 2.5 millions and just 1 millions respectively in 2008. Swimming climbed rapidly to almost 4 millions in 2014 while athletics remained almost unchanged before reaching its peak, at approximately 5 millions and follow by a small rise of just nearly 1 millions overtook swimming index from 2012 onwards
The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children's sport between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in thre...
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The pictures below depict the process of producing tomato ketchup.
There are 15 stages in the diagram, from harvesting tomatoes on the farm to using ketchup with hamburgers and fries at home.
In the first step, when tomatoes have grown sufficiently, they are collected and put in the basket by the farmer. Before sending them to the factory, they are sorted to eliminate bad tomatoes. The next step is removing their stalk, seeds, and skin, then putting them into a container and crushing them until they turn into liquid. After the crushing stage, sugar, vinegar, and salt are added to the liquid, then the mixture is boiled and left for two hours until it stops evaporating.
Having been left for 2 hours, ketchup is poured into the bottle. After labeling, bottles of ketchup are checked, which controls the quality of ketchup. Then, they are packed into boxes and delivered to the supermarket, where they are put on the shelves to be sold. The final step is that people buy it from the supermarket and bring it home to eat with hamburgers and fries.
The pictures below depict the process of producing tomato ketchup.
There are 15 stages in the diagram, from harvesting tomatoes on the farm to using ketchup with hamburgers and fries at home.
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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is asserted that living in major cities is detremental to people’s well-being. I strongly agree on this statement due to two main factors that this essay will discuss including air pollution and people’s lifestyles.
It is commonly known that air quality affects significantly to human health, which can even lead to severe consequences of health problem if living in poor conditions of air. The guarantee of city-dwellers’s well-being is being threatened by air pollution every single day, which has caused several respiratory problems to individuals. To prove, residents living in Ha Noi, which is the second largest city in Vietnam, have claimed that they breathe difficultly when going outside and cough hardly recently. This is because the great number of emissions from vihicles and industial factories discharging into the environment keeps growing, which decrease the living conditions.
As can be seen, the life in big cities are on fast pace, leading to unhealthy lifestyles. Most people tend to go for fast food to save time for working and studying, which can damage their heal in long term. Because of the preparation of junk food, such as frying with lots of seasonings, it contains high calories and limited nutrients for body. As a result, if people consume these kind of food on a regular basis, they will likely to be have obesity or cancer. This way of living is mainly happens to officers, who are incredibly busy, so that they prefer eating outside with various options of food instead of preparing food at home by themselves.
In conclusion, I believe that leading a life in big cities can influence on city-dwellers’ health because of objective factor, living conditions, and subjective one, their style of living.
It is asserted that living in major cities is detremental to people’s well-being. I strongly agree on this statement due to two main factors that this essay will discuss including air pollution and pe...
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The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school
site in 2024.
The given diagrams illustrates the layout of a school and the intention of refurbishing the school site in 2024.
Overall, it it clear that there will be the construction of the school building 3, which can increase the capacity of student from 600 to 1000 students.
In 2004, there were 600 pupils studying at the school, and the two school buildings were separated by a path that is running from the main entrance to the sports field. However, the number students of the school will grow by 400 students in 2024. Furthermore, not only the two buildings will be joint together but also the path will be shortened, which will start from the joint instead of the main entrance.
It can be seen that there is plan for adding another school building in order to widen space for more students, which will be at the spot of the old sports field. There will be also a second car park at the back of the school building 3, which is linked to the front side of the school by a new road. Moreover, the final change will be replacing of the sports field, which will be smaller and stand next to the new car park.
The given diagrams illustrates the layout of a school and the intention of refurbishing the school site in 2024.
Overall, it it clear that there will be the construction of the school building 3, w...
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An increasing number of students worldwide have chosen to stay at home with their families during their university-studying periods. Nevertheless, a good deal of students have tended to become accommodated far away from home these days. The negative implications associated with this tendency could overshadow some limited benefits.
There are some benefits related to the trend of moving far away from the birthplace and settling down in another city. While other adolescents are choosing to stabilize at home, resulting in less active communication with society which is growing daily, other students are striving to move into another city, trying the newness which significantly contributes to generating golden opportunities for their upcoming dreamed careers. For instance, students are such visual and curious creatures, consequently, direct studying and experiencing new things outside could be strongly beneficial support to help them during their journey of gaining soft skills and practical ones either. Students can make new friends, approach new cultures of varied countries, cultivate their skills, and witness something truly dissimilar and out-of-the-way that they've never seen before.
On the other hand, the decision to attend university by living in another city of many students has been verifying its negative dominant effects when compared to little advantages. Getting rid of family protection means that studetn have to face and deal with their problems instantly and independently. They could be threatened by many common social crimes such as theft, social violence, bullying activities, or even murder. As a result of severe lack of knowledge and the socially needed skills, students could be obviously a potential prey of several types of typical crimes. For example, when moving to a whole new city, students are easily caught by its beauty and luxuriousness, presenting to be weak and careless, for that reason, gangsters and robbers could utilize their carelessness to perform offenses. In that case, students with only fresh insufficient knowledge, could not do anything eventually leading to vulnerability and impotence facing with this life. Moreover, besides the heavy pressure of studying that students have to face every semester through examinations and frequent workshops in school, they also have to suffer the shortage of love from their family, which is one of the most healing and effective methods for their mental wounds due to the accommodation far away from home. The insufficiency of family's advices is a good case in point. Moving out from their childhood house means that they are mature enough and must individually decide everything on their own opinion without advices from their families in person.
In conclusion, since living away from home for a university education is literally a big challenge in terms of both physical and mental well-being, the negatives far outweigh the positives.
An increasing number of students worldwide have chosen to stay at home with their families during their university-studying periods. Nevertheless, a good deal of students have tended to become accommo...
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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how many people travelling internationally from 5 different areas between 1990 and 2005.
Overall, there was an increase in the total number of people who travelled abroad, which was the result of growths in the number of international traveling people from all areas examined, except for America. In addition, the number of European passengers witnessed an increasing trend, surpassing America to become the highest figure from 1995 onwards, while Middle West accounted for the lowest number of international travelers over the period.
There was total of 448.9 million people went abroad in 1990, after which it grew gradually to 693.7 at the end of the period. Similarly, the number of European citizens visited other nations rose steadily from 280,2 million to 400.2 million in 2005.
680.5 million of Americans travelled internationally, with a significant decrease to just 113.2 million people in 2005. Opposite changes, but to a lesser extent, can be seen in the figures for Africa and Middle West, which increased from 18,2 million and 9,8 million to 28,7 million and 15,8 million, respectively. Finally, the number of international travelers from Asia and the Pacific was 135,8 in 2005, which was double than that in 1990.
The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comp...
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In the day and age, machines get become more and more practical common. In recent years, with an increasing of machines, there are a wide range of jobs traditionally replaced by machines which uesd to do by human. From my perspective this tendency brings back a lot of benefits for individuals and society. The following essay takes a look at both view of argument before reaching a concrete decision.
On the one hand, there are various disadvantages of machines should not be overlooked. The key argument for this is that there are wide range of workers have to face with job unemployments and displacement. This is due to the fact that automation can lead to significant job displacement, particularly for low-skilled and routine jobs. For example, with the appearance of machines lead to a significant decline of workers who have to face with unemployment and have lower living standars because of lake of money. Furthermore, citizen can over-reliance machines and have sedentary lifestyle lead to chonic disease and hight blood pressure. To illustrate, individuals can put every houhold chores for automation and they spent most time for sufing the Internet and watching TV leading to cause obesity disease or heart diseases even stoke.
On the other hand, there are a host of benefits of machines are even greater. First and foremost machines allow individuals and companies to increase producivity and effectiveness. Machines can perform tasks faster and more effective than humans, leading to increased producivity and efficency in various companies. A typical example for this is that, there are wide range of mass production companies choose machines instead of human because of it’s function and convenient. Additionally, machines make significant contribution to cost saving for businesses. Using machines can reduce labor costs, as businesses do not need to pay wages, benefits, or deal with issues related to human resources. For example, with an increaing of machines lead to a lot of companies tend to choos machines instead of humans for any vacancy due to thay may reduce fee for workers leading to lower prices for consumers and increased competitiveness for businesses.
To sum up, machines becoming prevalent and a lot of companies choose automatic to replace jobs used to done by humans. From my perspective this development have advantages outweight the disadvantages because it make great contribution to boosting the growth of economy.
In the day and age, machines get become more and more practical common. In recent years, with an increasing of machines, there are a wide range of jobs traditionally replaced by machines which uesd to...
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The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates how many tonnes of oil produced daily across four different countries between 2000 and 2004.
As can be seen from the table, there was an upward trend in oil production of all nations, besides Congo. In addition, despite being at the top rank for producing oil in 2000, Congo was exceeded by Nigeria at the end of the period.
Regarding the oil industry, Congo dominated the market, with 275,000 tonnes, which was 70,000 higher than that of Nigeria in the first year. Then, over the next two years, the figures for both Congo and Nigeria slightly dropped to 222,000 and 190,000, respectively. By 2004, an increase was seen in the number of Nigerian oil production, reaching at 213,000 tonnes, whereas the opposite was true for Congo, with a steady decline to just 203,000 tonnes.
On the other hand, while there was no figure of oil industry recorded in Chad in 2000, Somalia started the progress at 5,000 tonnes. However, after a three-year period, about 8,000 tonnes of oil was produced in Chad, compared to the Somalian oil manufacture of 21,000 tonnes. In the last year, a sharp rise was seen in the number of oil in Chad, standing at the same level (50,000) as Somalia.
The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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