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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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mong thầy cô giúp với ạ bài này em viết lại
Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
Consumers are inundated with an array of advertisements from competing companies. This essay argues that this trend may spell trouble for the safety net of consumer communities to a significant extent and suggests several viable remedies to avert the current issues.
Admittedly, advertisements can be attributed to numerous drawbacks, one of which is the rise in excessive spending. Indubitably, advertisers, accompanied by corporate bodies have inclination to utilize celebrity endorsement to demonstrate the benefit of their merchandise, proportionally fostering an illusion in viewers’ mind that these promotional products are healthily beneficial. This mindset can lead to squandering expenditure on these items without caution.
Given the adverse influence of promotions on consumers, several effectual solutions should be adopted to mitigate the drawback. One of the most effective measures is that governing bodies impose consumer protection law. Law agencies, for example, require all advertisements to undergo a rigid screening process, ensuring the accuracy and authenticity of the content of promotional goods. Education also plays a crucial role in addressing this current issue. Schools should teach children how to enhance critical-thinking skills. To this end, it is imperative to organize business models in academic setting, forcing children to analyze various situations. This will presumably make substantial contributions to informed purchasers in the face of allure of advertisements.
In conclusion, the bombardment of marketing polices on buyers is significantly detrimental. This is one of the primary culprit of over-spending. However, the harmonious combination of governments’ intervention through stricter censorship of advertisements and the delivery of life skills through the taste of business activities can emerge as a wise approach to maintain sustainability of consumer communities.
Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect th...
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Thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Task 2: Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have differing views about whether or not the government should control the violent scenes in movies. While some argue that it is necessary to draw boundaries for violence content in films, I would believe that violence scenes should not be prohibited due to some reasons.
On one side of the argument, there are many who claim that the authorities should ban scenes relating to violence. The first reason is protecting viewers, especially children. It means that children are not capable of controlling their behavior, so they can imitate violent scenes in movies. According to Murray 2000, children’s TV shows contain about 25 violent acts per hour that means they see about 10,000 violent acts per year and the percentage of children’s imitation is up to 75%. As a consequence, this can lead to the state that some children become fearful, anxious and depressed. The second reason is reducing negative impact. It can be explained that adults can misunderstand the value of violent scenes expressed by their favorite performers and they are left a negative influence on their psyche. Actor Adam Chaplin is a noticeable example when he acted violently, especially in the last bloody battle. Consequently, this can lead to antisocial behaviors which can put a serious threat to our society.
However, I would be inclined to argue against this as I believe that the government should not forbid violent films. The primary reason is that this can limit creativity in the art of film editing. Under certain assumptions, this can be construed as regulations on violent actions on films may restrict director’s creativity and portray realistic scenarios. To illustrate movies relating to war or social issues, fighting scenes are indispensable. As a result, such films can lack their appeal and meaning expressed by filmmakers. Another significant reason is inconsistency in enforcement. This means that enforcement of regulations may vary across different regions or countries, leading to inconsistencies in what is considered acceptable contents. One example they often reference is that European movies are well-known for blockbuster films which can bring a huge profit for its film industry while Asian movies may tend to be gentle and emotional. It is rather clear to some extent, this may result in creating confusion and hinder international distribution of violent films.
In conclusion, while some individuals think that violent scenes should be limited by the government, I strongly hold the view that it should not be banned due to limiting filmmakers’ creativity and inconsistency in enforcement.
Task 2: Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views...
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The bar graph compares the percentage of authority expenditure on road and transportation in four different countries from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, while the percentage of government spending witnessed a downward trend in Italia, Portugal and the UK, the opposite was true for the USA figure. In addition, the Portugal government allocated the most on road and transport throughout the period.
In 1990, Italia government spent more than 20% of their budget on road and transport, around doubled compared to that of the UK. There was a slight fall by mostly 2% in both two figures, before recording a growth of 4% in 2000. By 2005, Italia and the UK allocated 19% and 8% of their expenditure, respectively.
Throughout the 15-year-period, the percentage of Portugal spending decreased significantly from more than 25% to exactly 20% in 2005. Meanwhile, in 1990, the expenditure of the USA on transportation and road accounted for around 10%, followed by a slight fall of 1% before noticeably rising to 15% by the end of the period.
The bar graph compares the percentage of authority expenditure on road and transportation in four different countries from 1990 to 2005.
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In this day and age, the education for teenagers plays a crucial role in a lot of several different nations. Nevertheless, there are some ideas that governments should invest in re-educating adults who are illiterate.From my perspective, I partly agree with this statement, and this essay will explore some benefits and the importance of education for these individuals’ lives on the grounds that literacy is a foundational skill that has a significant impact on each individuals’ lives.
On the one hand, the prioritization of young people’s education in a lot of countries is needed. When iInvesting in the education of the young can help them learn valuable knowledge and become socially responsible citizenry, which is significant for the growth and stability of each nation. Moreover, with a wide range of necessary skills and knowledge can help them have more opportunities to become productive members of society. Besides, it also lays the foundation for informed and engaged citizenship, creating chances for personal fulfilment . Therefore, by providing quality educational opportunities to young people, countries can cultivate a more prosperous , equitable and vibrant society.
On the other hand, government funding for adults who lack basic literacy skills is also significant. By investing in those adults' available educational programs, the government can help them acquire the necessary skills to enhance the standard of life and make them more confident, active. Furthermore, with an emphasis on addressing adult illiteracy, the government can reduce the rates of unemployment, poverty and maintain social order. Moreover, adults who can not read and write can improve their literacy skills and can serve as positive role models for their generations on the grounds that this is a valuable lesson for younger generations of society.
In conclusion, both educating the young and addressing adult literacy is crucial. However, in my viewpoint, I think that allocating more funding to adult illiteracy should be a priority for the government- funded because this can contribute to positive social and strengthen communities.
In this day and age, the education for teenagers plays a crucial role in a lot of several different nations. Nevertheless, there are some ideas that governments should invest in re-educating adults w...
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Mong các thầy cô chấm cho em bài này với ạ. Và em muốn hỏi thêm là ví dụ với task 1 các tiêu chí thành phần em được chấm là 7-7-7-6 thì chia trung bình là overall 6.75. Lúc đó thì mình làm tròn điểm overall lên thành 7 hay 6.5 vậy ạ? Em cảm ơn thầy cô ạ.
Đề bài: The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how much Australia exported to four nations between 1990 and 2012.
Overall, despite some fluctuations, there was a general increase in the percentage of Australian exports to China and India, whereas the inverse was true for Japan and the US. In addition, China rose to become the top export destination at the end of the period.
The proportion of Australian exports to China in 1990 started at roughly 3%, after which it experienced a steady growth until 2007, when it increased sharply to the first position in 2012. Similar changes were seen in the figure for India up to 2008, which also rose moderately at 8% before its sudden drop to around 5% at the end of the period.
Approximately 25% of Australian overseas commodities was exported to Japan in 1990, with a subsequent fall to 15% (2006), followed by a surge to reach its peak of exactly one-fifth and a final leveling off at 17% (2012). The figure for the US saw similar patterns, hovering around 5% and well-above 10% and finally stabilizing at 5% in 2012.
Đề bài: The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whe...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The plans show how a coastal land has developed into a coastal park.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The maps illustrate the transformations of a coastal land into a park in the future.
Overall, the coastal area will witness a host of dramatic changes, with the underlying purpose of leisure requirements. More trees will be planted, as well as recreational facilities will be built.
Staring from the the road entrance, the farm buildings will be superseded by a car park. The unused land and the animal-inhabited area on the western side will be transformed into a small lake, surrounded by trees and a trail extending from the car park. Meanwhile, the agricultural area on the eastern side will be removed in favor of new trees planted, and a path built leading from the parking lot. Additionally, there will be a small coffee shop located in the vicinity of the wood area, above the greenery and near the road. At the bottom of the coastal park, steps will be built through the cliffs so travelers can cross safely to the beach and enjoy the scenery and the comfort with several new-added benches.
The plans show how a coastal land has developed into a coastal park.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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thầy cô chấm giúp em bài này với ạ!
The graph below shows changes in global
food and oil prices between 2000 and
2011.
The line graph compares the average price of a barrel of oil and food price index over a period of 11 years.
It is clear that there was a significant increase in the average prices of global oil and food. Furthermore, the trends for both commodities were very similar, and a strong correlation (93,6%) is suggested.
In 2000, the global oil price was close to $30 per barrel, and the food price stood at nearly 90 points. Over the following four years, both commodities remained relatively stable before rising considerably from 2004 to 2007. By 2007, the average oil price had more than doubled, to around $60 per barrel, and food prices had risen by almost 50 points.
A dramatic increase in both commodity prices was seen from 2007 to 2008, with oil prices reaching the peak of about $130 per barrel, and the food price index rising by approximately 80 points. By the beginning of 2009, the price of oil had dropped by roughly $90, and the food price index had down to about 140 points. Finally, in 2011, the average global oil price rose once again, to nearly $100 per barrel, while food prices reached the peak, at almost 240 points.
The graph below shows changes in global
food and oil prices between 2000 and
2011.
The line graph compares the average price of a barrel of oil and food price index over a period of 11 years.
It...
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The maps below show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now.
The pictures illustrate how a village called Pebbleton has changed over 20 years. Overall, the village has undergone some significant changes, mainly catering for the needs of villagers.
20 years ago, children and teachers could only go to school in the South of the village by commuting along Old Fort Road, crossing Roadbridge on the East, and travelling along Coast Road. However, this lengthy commute has been eliminated by the construction of the footpath on the West of the village across the river.
The creation of the footpath has also led to the introduction of new facilities, including the conversion of the film studio into flats, and a new tennis court between the footpath and Lighthouse land. Moreover, an old fort next to the lighthouse is replaced with an expanded children’s playground, adjacent to which is a newly built community centre. Finally, a neighbourhood next to the community centre has experienced an increase in the number of houses.
The pictures illustrate how a village called Pebbleton has changed over 20 years. Overall, the village has undergone some significant changes, mainly catering for the needs of villagers.
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The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14- to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English-speaking country, and the top three foreign languages.
The two bar graphs illustrate how many students aged 14 to 16 studied a foreign language in a particular English-speaking country, categorised by gender, and the three mostly studied languages, in 1984 and 2007.
Overall, more female students engaged in this activity than their male counterparts over the two years examined, although there were decreases in the percentages of both genders. Additionally, French and German experienced declines in popularity, with the former remaining the most commonly studied, while Spanish experienced an upward trend over the given timeframe.
Regarding gender composition, in 1984, nearly half of 14-16-year-old females studied a foreign language, compared to about one-third of males. By 2007, the gap had narrowed down slightly, with 40% of females and 25% of males.
Concerning the top three studied languages, in the first year, half of the students studied French, which was the highest, considerably higher than the respective figures for German and Spanish, of 20% and about 3%. In the subsequent year, both the rates of students studying French and German approximately halved to around 25% and 13%, in that order. Conversely, the share of Spanish learners doubled to 10%.
The two bar graphs illustrate how many students aged 14 to 16 studied a foreign language in a particular English-speaking country, categorised by gender, and the three mostly studied languages, in 198...
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ. The charts below show the average bed use in 3 typical hospitals internationally and the proportion of Hospital budget allocated to in-patient care before and after day-surgery was introduced in 2003.
The given table illustrates how many beds are used in 3 typical hospitals internationally, while the chart compares the percentage of hospital funds invested in-patient care before and after day-surgery was introduced in 2003.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the number of used beds in 3 hospitals from 1997 to 2006. In addition, there was a reduction in the funds allocated to in-patients who used beds between 2002 and 2006.
Starting at 70 beds in the first initial year, the number of beds in Chinese hospitals slowly increased to 90 in 2002 and hit the highest point of more than 90. For Ukrainian hospitals, 55 beds were utilized in 1997, then reached a peak of more than 70 after 6 years, while it experienced a slight fall to 70 beds from 2003 to 2006. By contrast, the number of patient beds started at 40, after which it experienced a significant rise to 60 in 2003, before ending in 2006 at above 40.
The pie chart further reveals that 35% of the money was invested in in-patient care in 2002, which was far higher than that in 2006 ( about 27%). As we can see, the decline in the budget for in-patient care was seen in the period from 2002 to 2006, which was related to the growth of day-surgery patients, and the number of used beds dropped in this period.
The given table illustrates how many beds are used in 3 typical hospitals internationally, while the chart compares the percentage of hospital funds invested in-patient care before and after day-surge...
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The line graph compares average CO2 emissions that released by individuals in four different countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall, Italy and Portugal witnessed the increase in releasing emissions, while the opposite is true for the United Kingdom and Sweden. In addition, it is notable that the figure for the UK citizens took the lead throughout the period.
In 1967, the amount of CO2 emissions from Italy was around 4 metric tonnes, which is considerably higher than which of Portugal, at only more than a metric tonnes. Over the following 30 years, the figure of Italy experienced a noticable growth by nearly 8 metric tonnes, followed by the stability until 2007. Similarly, the average emissions released by Portugueses increased sharply to around 5 metric tonnes and stablized by the end of period.
Looking at the other two country, the UK residents used to release CO2 mostly at 11 metric tonnes, compared to over 8 metric tonnes by Swedians. Throughout the period of 40 years, UK figure decreased steadily by around 4 metric tonnes. Meanwhile, the Swedians reached a peak at above 10 metric tonnes of CO2 before falling considerably to under 6 metric tonnes.
The line graph compares average CO2 emissions that released by individuals in four different countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall, Italy and Portugal witnessed the increase in releasing emissions, whi...
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The graph illustrates the average annual Gross Domestic Products growth in prosperous countries, countries that have operated a universal approach to business and countries that have not in four decades: 1960s, 1970s, 1980s, and 1990s.
Overall, while the percentage of domestic products in 1980s seemed to be a downward trend, the figures for other decades saw no significant changes over the century. In addition, every single one of the countries had produced the most domestic products in the 1990s.
In 1960s, the percentage of domestic products produced by wealthy countries was 4.7%. However, this percentage had shrunk to 2% in 1990s.
While the globalize countries had peaked from 1.4% to a noticed percentage of 4.9% during early 1990s. Meanwhile, non-globalize countries had fluctuated from 1.4%, 3.2%, 0.8% and 1.4% throughout 1960s to 1990s.
In the following decades, we could see that wealthy countries had declined in producing the domestic products, globalize countries had increased, and non-globalize countries fluctuates.
The graph illustrates the average annual Gross Domestic Products growth in prosperous countries, countries that have operated a universal approach to business and countries that have not in four decad...
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Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ.
The line graph illustrates the production levels of Petroleum, Coal, and Natural gas in the UK over 19 years starting in 1981.
It is clear that there were significant changes in the number of three main fuels shown on the graph. While Petroleum and Natural gas witnessed considerable increases, the quantity of Coal declined dramatically over the 19-year period.
In 1981, Petroleum stood at just under 100 energy units, which was the highest and more than doubled the number of Natural gas, with only around 40 energy units. The second largest was Coal, at approximately 80 energy units. Over the following 10 years, the quantity of Natural gas increased slightly to about 50 energy units, which became joint-second with the number of Coal. In the year 1991, the levels of Petroleum produced in the UK saw a downward trend to around 100 energy units.
From 1991 to 2000, the quantities of Petroleum and Natural gas escalated to about 140 and 100 energy units respectively, while the production levels of Coal dropped to just under 40 energy units and was exceeded by Natural gas.
The line graph illustrates the production levels of Petroleum, Coal, and Natural gas in the UK over 19 years starting in 1981.
It is clear that there were significant changes in the number of three m...
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các cô các thầy giúp em với ạ, em đang ở band bao nhiêu và cần cải thiện ntn ạ . Em cảm ơn nhiều
It is widely recognized that in many nations, the retirement stopping work age has been increasing increased quickly. While this has admittedly certain benefits, I would argue that these are outweighed by the drawbacks.
On the one hand, the advantages of the retirement age show an upward trend. One prominent benefit is that the fund government will be reduced the burden for pension. This amount of money should be invested in other projects that aim to upgrade standard life. Another plus point, there are some careers that require professional seniority such as doctor, teacher, and they can teach descendants valuable lessons. Therefore, the wage also grows for experience, there are emergency situations that need excellent surgeon.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the disadvantages of raising the age. To begin with the number of the depression of the people go up continually with main reason is work, peer pressure, family, among others. They have a tendency to make plan to retire soon, or they want to spend time for family, travel around the world before they are not healthy enough to do this. Beside that, many people feel exhausted from toxic work environment, they have huge contribution to work and expect to retire early. However, if they do it, their pension will be cut down, which affects too much plan. In addition, the young generation have difficulty applying for the job because they have to compete with people who possess in-depth knowledge.
In conclusion, despite certain benefits that growing the age retirement can bring about employees, I would contend that the drawback are more evident.
It is widely recognized that in many nations, the retirement stopping work age has been increasing increased quickly. While this has admittedly certain benefits, I would argue that these are outweighe...
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Em vừa nói thử một bài Speaking part 2. Mong thầy cô đánh giá giúp em bài này ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
Describe your favorite place in your house where you can relax.
You should say:
-Where it is?
-What it is like?
-What you enjoy doing there?
Explain why you feel favorite this place.
To be honest, the place that I can truly allow my self to relax and unwind is definitely my bedroom. It is situated at the end of my house but it's prominent because of the attractive outside decorations as well as the beige painted walls. Because of my family not being affluent, as soon as you open the door, the bed can be seen right in front of you. And in the left hand corner, there is a cabinet where all my clothes are kept. My room is also equipped with the air conditioning system which is used to cool my room down when hot weather comes. Beside that, there is an area that I am most proud of is the place where I keep all my school certificates hung on the walls and arrange all my childhood toys on the shelves. I love this area so I always keep it neated and tidied and also nicely decorated. Whenever I am in my room, I often lie on my bed, complete some assignments and then I endulge in watching a movie or listening to some music before going to bed. And the reason why I considered it as my favorite place is because it provides me privacy as well as a confidential space to immerse myself in singing or even practicing musical instruments without anyone else noticing. So, being in my room puts my mind into the most comfortable state.
Describe your favorite place in your house where you can relax.
You should say:
-Where it is?
-What it is like?
-What you enjoy doing there?
Explain why you feel favorite this place.
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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The plans show a university sports centre as it is now and the new layout following its redevelopment. Overall, while some outdoor facilities will be lost, the new centre will be significantly larger and will cater for a wider range of sports.
The sports centre currently consists of a relatively small central building with an outdoor court on each side. The building houses a 25-metre pool, with a seating area and changing room, and there is a gym to the rear and a reception area to the front.
Following the renovations, only the central pool and its facilities will remain the same. The building will be expanded to the east and west removing the outdoor courts and making way for more indoor facilities. These include a leisure pool on the western side, which will be slightly larger than the existing one and will have its own changing room, and on the eastern side, a new sports hall, and two dance studios. The current gym will be lengthened so that it is double its current size. The reception area will also be widened making it more spacious. On arrival, visitors to the new centre will benefit from a third changing room, a sports shop and a café, all located around the reception area.
The plans show a university sports centre as it is now and the new layout following its redevelopment. Overall, while some outdoor facilities will be lost, the new centre will be significantly larger...
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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies.
To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements?
What measures can be taken to protect them?
In the context of fierce competition, companies have increasingly bombarded buyers with numerous advertisements to increase brand awareness. This essay argues that this phenomenon exerts adverse impacts on buyers and suggests several viable remedies to address the existing problems.
Admittedly, excessive exposure to promotional campaigns can cause several problematic issues, one of which is to run a higher risk of deteriorated wellness. This is particularly noticeable with Vietnam, where many individuals have contracted a diverse range of medical conditions such as obesity and cancers. These people have placed their trust on outstanding singers’ support for functional food on commercials. Without the advertisements, including celebrity endorsement, these buyers would not have suffered from the pain of such health quagmires. By the same token, adding promotion costs into production ones, to maximize profit, can potentially swelling the selling price of merchandise. Hence, this addition can leave buyers financially precarious.
Given the wide-ranging and severe consequences to consumer communities, certain practical and workable solutions should be embraced to curb the trajectory. First, all advertisements are required to undergo the process of rigid screening, ensuring that all the information of products are genuine before being shown to the public, proportionately making substantial contributions to fostering the protection of buyers. Additionally, government-subsidized promotions typically serve as a measure to mitigate the price of items, which likely leads to people’s accumulation of savings, which may be invested in profitable sectors. As a result, numerous customers can live fulfilling lives.
In conclusion, the bombardment of advertisements can be detrimental to the community of purchasers. Therefore, the implementation of a stricter censorship and state-funded promotions emerges as a wise approach to alleviate the repercussions.
Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies.
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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reposting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates how much the ancient population in three distinct nations from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, there is an increase in the share of older people residing in three countries, under scrutiny. Furthermore, Japan representes a dramatic trend, even though a considerable decline being seen in the former half of the span.
Examining the data more closely, the proportion of the USA’s old residents started at shy of 10%, after which it witnessed a slight growth to 10% in 1960, before soaring to approximately 15% in 1980. A similar shift, albeit to a lesser extent, was seen in the figures for Sweden, which began at roughly 7.5%, before reaching nearly 14% in 1980. Conversely, the data for Japanese senior citizens started with a modest percentage of 5%, and plunged to around 3% in 1980.
The period from 1980 to 2040 saw a breakthrough in the share of Japan's senior citizens with a prediction of soaring from roughly 3% to nearly 27% at the end of the duration. Likewise, the data for the USA and Sweden began with respective figures at nearly 15% and 14%, followed by a projection of surging 23% and around 25%, respectively, at the end of the span.
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reposting the main features, and...
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The bar chart provides a breakdown of adult Internet users from 2003 to 2006.
Overall, it was divided into five age blankets, which is: 16 to 24, 25 to 44, 45 to 54, 54 to 64 and 65+. The percentage of adults 16 to 24 years old using the Internet secured the first-place position across all years. In contrast, the 65+ adult users was considerably low in provided years.
Turning to details, the amount of people using Internet at the age of 16 to 24 started at 80% which was remarkably high in comparison to other age groups in 2003. Then, the data stayed the same mark in 2004 until it reached 100% in 2005. After that, the figure ended with a small decline to around 90% in 2006. The 65+ age group was in stark contrast to the 16-24 age group which allocated only nearly 18% in 2003. Despite reaching its highest mark at 20%, it reveals no users in 2006.
In addition, similar patterns can be seen in the figures for 25 - 44 age blanket and 45-54 age blanket, with upward trajectory throughout the period. It went up from approximately 50% to 80% and 60% to 80% of 25 - 44 years old users and 45-54 years old users respectively. The percentage of 55 to 64 age users underwent some oscillations around the 30% mark and ended at nearly 50%.
The bar chart provides a breakdown of adult Internet users from 2003 to 2006.
Overall, it was divided into five age blankets, which is: 16 to 24, 25 to 44, 45 to 54, 54 to 64 and 65+. The percentag...
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Schools are no longer needed because children can find so much information on the internet and study at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
The prevalence of the Internet has raised online studying among families as it provides widely-accessible information of various subjects. However, I contend schools are a necessary environment for students as they supply a suitable course for students and a more disciplined, well-organized place to develop students holistically.
We can’t deny that homeschooling allows students to have access to a large amount of knowledge of mandatory subjects at school. To cite an example, Ted-Ed is a website for homeschoolers where they supply presentations on various topics mainly technology, entertainment or design which spark children’s curiosity. Therefore, students can develop their life skills and imagination, studying entirely on the Internet due to the extensive library videos. This is also why some may be interested in approaching knowledge through technological devices.
Notwithstanding, schools are still the main foundation of education. They have more suitable curriculums which are designed by experts, who know what children need to study for their vital skills and social development. Moreover, schools are a more well-organized environment where students can participate in certain activities and join teamwork. To exemplify, while doing teamwork, they can express their thoughts and implement each one's opinion; therefore, schools can train students to be disciplined, responsible and united with others.
In conclusion, in spite of the advantage of the Internet to studying, I remain of the opinion that students should attend schools to be taught accurate knowledge of society and fundamental subjects.
The prevalence of the Internet has raised online studying among families as it provides widely-accessible information of various subjects. However, I contend schools are a necessary environment for st...
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