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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Thầy cô chấm bài IELTS Writing Task 1 này giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
The given pictures illustrate the proposed future development for an industrial zone of Norbiton. Overall, it is predicted that the entire site will be turned into a residential area with the addition of public facilities.
As for replacements, all factories alongside the road linking to the roundabout will be demolished to make places for residential accommodations, while the factory at the end of that road will be converted into a new school. Similarly, the industrial plants around the roundabout will be replaced by two new roads, one leading to three housing areas in the southeast and the other will run past the river through the bridge to the accommodations in the north, whereas the factory in the southwest of the roundabout will be substituted by shops.
When it comes to new appearances, a playground is planned to be built between two housing areas near the river, providing a recreational space for students. Additionally, a small roundabout will be constructed at the T-junction where the southern road meets the main roundabout, which will facilitate easier access to a new medical centre situated between the two roundabouts. Finally, the farmland in the northern part of the site will be reduced to accommodate a new housing development.
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Đề bài
The table below gives information about the average annual distance travelled by adults and the types of travel in 1977 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Bài làm
The statistics compare seven different means of transport in terms of the average annual distances over the period from 1977 to 2007, measured in miles.
Overall, cars were the most popular model of travel throughout the 40 years. Notably, what stands out from the charts is that the figure for cars, taxis, and trains increased sharply, whereas the value for the remaining vehicles witnessed a downtrend.
At the start of the period, secured the top position was cars, with its distance stood at 3500 miles. This was followed by the use of trains, which 100 miles surpassed the usage of buses at 800 miles. Occupying the 4th place was walking, which is considered twice as high as the taxis. The last position on the list came bicycles and motorbikes, with their consumption being 100 miles each.
Afterward, cars witnessed a significant growth by 2600 miles, still ranking 1st. Trains and taxis also underwent a moderate increase to 1000 and 800, respectively. In contrast, the other methods recorded a drop in 2007, with the most dramatic decrease belonged to buses, which fell by 300 miles. The value for walking, motorbikes, and bicycles experienced a marginal fall to 300, 90, and 80 in turn.
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The table below gives information about the average annual distance travelled by adults and the types of travel in 1977 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main...
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The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people in four different age groups attending the cinema at least once a month in a country over a 30-year period , starting from 1978.
Overall , the percentage of people going to the cinema aged 14-24 and 25-34 declined throughout the period ,whereas it increased for those over 35 years old . Despite the decline , the proportion of individuals in the two younger age groups remained higher compared to the older groups.
The proportion of people in 14 to 24 years old fluctuated between 90% and 85% over the timeframe and ended 85%. Meanwhile , those in 25-34 age group witnessed a sharp decrease from 80% to under 60% between 1978 and 1988 , before a resurgence to the 1978’s levels , then it remained stable for 5 years and dropped slightly by 5% afterwards .
In regard to those aged 35 to 49 visiting the cinema , the figure decreased from 60% to 50% in 1988 , yet , dramatically surged to 70% after 10 years , followed by a slight drop by nearly 3% in 2008 . The percentage of those over 50 years old followed the similar pattern from 1978 and 1998 , with a sink from around 40% to 30% then soared to 50% in 1998 , however , it had a minor rise by about 2% at the end .
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people in four different age groups attending the cinema at least once a month in a country over a 30-year period , starting from 1978.
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Task 2: Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that having the same shops and products in many countries is a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. In this essay, both views will be discussed, before a personal stance is taken on the matter, adjusting that this increase in similar shops and products in many countries is a positive development.
On the one hand, having the same shops and products in many countries is considered a negative trend. This development can put these countries under pressure to cope with cultural erosion. Many local shops and products are replaced by international chains; hence, countries’ unique cultures and traditions might be negatively affected. Furthermore, this trend can also lead to a competitive market, forcing the local small shops and companies to release attractive goods to avoid the worst consequence namely bankruptcy. For instance, international products are more ubiquitous, therefore many citizens tend to purchase them due to being manufactured by a prestigious company instead of local products with equivalent quality.
Despite those disadvantages mentioned above, I believe this is a positive development. A practical argument in support of increasing the same shops and products has to do with the fact that countries’ economic prosperity can be fostered. Suppose many countries have the same shops and products in the sense that there is a cross-border partnership between them. Consequently, these countries might conduct global trade more effectively. Moreover, this phenomenon can also result in reducing low employment rates in countries due to lacking of employees to work at their shops and produce various products. We need not look further than the case of Nike, since its employers expanded their markets to Vietnam, they have hired many Vietnamese people to work at their shops in many large shopping malls such as Aeon Mall and VanHanh Mall.
In conclusion, while having the same shops and products in countries can lead to cultural erosion, if not to say thriving competitive market, I believe this is a positive trend due to boosting economic growth and reducing low employment rates. In my view, if this trend is maintained, it can ensure the long-term well-being of humans and society.
Task 2: Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Task 2: Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport.Why is this the case?What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?
In contemporary society, it is believed that fewer people use bicycles as a form of transport. From my perspective, this trend can be attributed to several factors and numerous measures should be implemented to encourage cycling.
The current trend is that people use bicycles less for two main reasons. Firstly, using bicycles can sometimes cause awkward situations. This is because when commuters arrive at work by bike, they may be covered in sweat and get unpleasant smells, while their workplaces rarely provide shower facilities. As a result, they may feel embarrassed when working with colleagues. Secondly, commuting by bicycle is occasionally inconvenient. Due to urban sprawl, people nowadays tend to live far away from their schools or workplaces, therefore unless they get up early, they risk arriving late. Moreover, we can solely ride bikes by ourselves; hence, driving a car is more effective for those who have family.
Several solutions can be implemented to promote cycling. One approach is for companies to provide cleaning facilities that allow their employees to clean after cycling. Secondly, healthcare organizations should focus on educational programs that can raise public awareness about the various benefits of cycling, such as reducing health problems. Last but not least, constructing more affordable apartments or houses near schools and companies will lead to an increase in the number of residents, making cycling a viable option.
In conclusion, people use bicycles less as a form of transportation due to not only causing embarrassing situations but also inconvenience. However, to encourage more people to use bicycles in traveling, providing cleaning facilities, performing educational programs, and offering buildings and houses near workplaces, may be effective proposals. With these implementations, I believe we can significantly increase bicycle usage.
Task 2: Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport.Why is this the case?What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?
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task 2: At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the number of young adults in many countries is larger than that of older people. This writing would argue that the drawbacks of this trend are more significant than the benefits.
One benefit of having a large number of young adults is that it can promote economic development. When there is a larger working-age population, these individuals can potentially increase productivity and efficiency. Their contribution to the workforce can lead to the creation of more goods and services, thereby boosting economic output. Another positive aspect of having a large number of young adults is that it enhances the quality of labor. Young adults often pursue higher education and vocational training, leading to a more skilled and educated workforce. This can attract businesses looking for qualified employees
However, the advantages above pale in comparison with the disadvantages. Firstly, it can apply pressure to many metropolises. Some young individuals migrate to urban areas to seek better job opportunities, so this can put pressure on the environment. For example, a metropolis like Hanoi has become one of the most polluted cities in the world. Another negative is that it can increase the crime rate. As the population grows, the number of job seekers exceeds the number of available positions. This can make young adults struggle with financial instability and increased frustration. In some cases, individuals seek illegal jobs to have alternative means to support themselves or cope with economic pressures.
In conclusion, the demerits of this trend certainly surpass its merits. Not only does having a large number of young adults apply pressure to many metropolises, but it may increase in unemployment rate.
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Many people argue that producers and supermarkets curtail the amount of packaging of goods, while others suppose customer role should reduce spending on packaging. From my perspective, this problem necessitates a collective effort from both the supply and demand sides.
On the one hand, it is reasonable to replace the responsibility on manufacturers and supermarkets to minimize packaging. This is mainly because they use redundant packaging materials in mass production. They tend to use virgin materials for such a process to reduce manufacturing overheads, which results in innumerable landfills that are non-biodegradable. These situations depend on producers and supermarkets adopting environmental exercises in order to rectify this problem.
On the other hand, customers also play a crucial role in reducing packaging by cutting down shopping frequency. The behavioral customers are important measures of businesses that are unwilling to adopt eco-friendly packaging, which adversely affects the visually appealing products through sale figures. Therefore, if customers convert to buying green packaging, retailers, and manufacturers will be pressured into packaging policies. For example, many coffee shops use friendly products with the environment instead of using non-biodegradable packaging, this is the correct decision to attract customers and protect the environment
In conclusion, both producers and customers should need to share the responsibility of fighting with plastic issues caused by packaged products.
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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the ever-growing issue of excessive packaging has sparked debate regarding responsibility. Some contend that manufacturers and retail outlets have the responsibility to provide items with minimal packaging, whereas others believe that the onus is on customers to make informed choices. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and argue that both parties should take responsibility for reducing packaging waste.
On the one hand, major retailers and producers are responsible for producing products' packaging, therefore, they are supposed to take the initiative in cutting it down. In terms of manufacturers, they could simplify their packaging. Specifically, they can utilize innovative packaging designs that use less materials and implement more sustainable practices by using environmentally friendly materials. Supermarkets can opt for products with minimal packaging or packaging made from sustainable materials. For instance, there has been a significant change in the packaging at the deli counter in some supermarkets. Styrofoam boxes have been replaced by sugarcane boxes, which protect not only the environment but also consumers' health. The product is made from 100% bagasse, can stand high temperatures, and disintegrate easily within a few weeks. In this way, businesses can set the standard and take the lead in reducing packaging waste.
On the other hand, consumers also have a crucial role to play in reducing packaging waste. By this I mean, by choosing products with minimal packaging and boycotting excessively packaged items, customers can influence companies to adopt more sustainable practices to boost the sales volume. However, consumers should be aware of “greenwashing” , where companies make misleading claims about the environmental benefits of their products. Moreover, individuals should opt for biodegradable or reusable bags, which would remarkably reduce the amount of plastic waste. As a result, customers could drive positive changes in packaging practices."
In conclusion, the effectiveness of reducing packaging waste hinges on a cooperative effort between manufacturers, retailers, and consumers. A shared sense of responsibility and collaborative action are paramount in overcoming critical environmental issues posed by excessive packaging.
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Task 2: It’s generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is believed that some children have inborn abilities since they are born, for instance, for music and sport, and others are not. Meanwhile, some people argue that any child can be nurtured to become talented in sports and music. This essay will discuss both views before concluding that children need both nature and nurture to become talented in sports and music.
On one hand, some argue that talents in sports and music are innate and evident from a young age. Children born into families with a tradition of excellence in these areas may inherit and demonstrate their abilities early on. For instance, Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart, coming from a musically gifted family, exhibited remarkable talent from a very young age. By the time he was five, he was already composing and performing music, illustrating the potential for inherent talent to manifest early.
On the other hand, there is a strong belief that with the right guidance, practice, and perseverance, any child can achieve success in music and sports. Many notable artists and athletes who did not initially exhibit extraordinary talent have reached the pinnacle of their fields through dedicated effort. Serena Williams, for example, became one of the greatest female tennis players of all time through countless hours of training and overcoming injuries, demonstrating that relentless hard work and determination can lead to exceptional success.
Finally, in my opinion, both nature and nurture have important roles to play in success in music and sport. Natural talent can provide an initial advantage, but it is not the sole determinant of success. The role of environment, practice, and persistence cannot be overstated. Even those with less innate ability can achieve high levels of proficiency with dedicated effort and the right support.
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More people put their personal information online (address, telephone numbers...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is not a stretch to say that updating people's private information, including residential addresses and mobile phone numbers on the online platform, helps them with specific purposes like communication and conducting bank transactions, which is very common in modern society. From my perspective, it is significantly more disadvantageous than advantageous.
On the one hand, one school of thought holds that disclosing personal information in online interactions for routine activities can yield multiple benefits. The primary reason behind this thinking is that it would be more convenient to communicate and keep in touch with friends and family across the globe regardless of geographical distance, as a key to improving relationships and creating a more connected social network. Additionally, it not only provides easy access to banking services and facilities for financial management, saving time and effort for physical visits to banks, but also allows individuals to monitor their accounts, easily pay the bills, and make transactions that enhance financial control.
Notwithstanding the arguments above, its drawbacks are much bigger. Firstly, user privacy can be infringed upon, and individuals can become victims of identity theft by cybercrimes using this data for fraudulent purposes through intrusive marketing practices and targeted advertising, resulting in financial losses and reputation harm. Secondly, it is difficult to stop the spread of personal data, leading to potential long-term invasions and negatively impacting one's future opportunities and security. Since sensitive information can be leaked to online platforms, affecting job prospects, personal social circles, and social standing.
In conclusion, the trend of proactive publicity of personal details accessible in the virtual world can cultivate multiple risks and vulnerabilities, surpassing the convenience it offers. Therefore, considering its potential hazards against the benefits is at the core of ensuring personal privacy is not compromised.
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Đề: Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that the main interest is in world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether international cooperation primarily aims to protect the environment or to foster economic development. While there are compelling arguments for both sides, I believe that the key benefit of international cooperation lies in economic progression.
From an environmental perspective, many believe that international cooperation is crucial for environmental protection because collective efforts can lead to significant positive impacts. For instance, over 130 countries have pledged to achieve carbon neutrality, which involves balancing carbon emissions with carbon absorption through carbon sinks. This ambitious goal is indeed beneficial; however, the majority of these countries are currently responsible for over 80% of global carbon dioxide emissions, and only a few have reached net-zero emissions. This indicates that while international efforts are a step in the right direction, they have not yet led to significant environmental changes. Additionally, the lack of feasible initiatives and the myriad of environmental issues faced by individual countries further complicate global efforts.
On the other hand, the economic benefits of international cooperation are more apparent and immediate. Many countries join international organizations to gain economic advantages that promote growth. For example, European countries that joined the European Union benefit from the abolition of border controls, facilitating free movement and enhancing opportunities for work and travel across the continent. This not only boosts tourism but also improves the fluidity of energy, knowledge, and capital markets, ensuring maximum benefits from these resources. Moreover, international cooperation often leads to symbiotic economic relationships, such as tax reliefs on imports and exports, which significantly facilitate foreign trade.
In conclusion, while it is understandable that some people prioritize environmental protection as the main benefit of international cooperation, I believe that the primary focus tends to be on economic growth. The tangible and immediate advantages of economic collaboration often outweigh the more challenging and slower progress in environmental initiatives.
Đề: Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that the main interest is in world business. Discuss both views a...
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It is a common belief that by granting the police more power is the most practical way to put crime rates lower. Howener I firmly believe that the police use their power in an improper way instead of coming up with a solution.
This is because they discriminate against innocent individuals and threaten to the privacy of non-involved suspects.
To begin with, the police can slander without any papers from the higher authority. When people are not doing anything wrong but get punish by the police.
In fact, the person who got
arrested attack against the dice and it ends up in an awkward situation.
On top of that, what would happen if a police expose the incorrect information about spottess victim. First the person who got violated
sue the police for overusing his power. Then the police imprison himself and lost his job at the same time.
To sum up, the palice has nare power in discriminating wrong criminals and endangering misleading data about accused figure.
For these reasons, I think that by allowing the police to use their power improperly, the crime rates are going up.
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ .In some countries ,there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school .Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages ?
In the previous era,parents frequently had tendacy to send their children to state-funded schools in order for young people to access to various kind of knowledge.Nonetheless, technological advancements in the comtemporary age have facilitating the posibility of home education.Despite some promient merits of this trend , I firmly believe that its major drawbacks surpass its benefits.
On the one hand , the decision to educate children at home will partly obtain financial advantages . To be specific, modern education have applied some breakthroughs in teaching methods, which often leads to the presence of extra fee, thereby becoming the principal sector which contribute to the considerable rise of schools’ expenses. Another point of this situation is that private education allows the flexibility in teaching shedule ,which means students will freely study in lieu of the strict structure of school’s scheme
Nevertheless, in spite of its notable benefits , I support the idea that the downsides of home education outweigh its merits . First and foremost , studying at home fosters children to work alone.Therefore, it has mitigated the ability to commnicate with others and enhance the capacity of the youth to suffer loneliness and depression.Not only that , but students are hardly gained opportunities to form relationship with their peers. For instance , due to the remarkable drawbacks of home education , a significant number of pupils were recorded to have the notion of depression in Ho Chi Minh city in 2010 . Fortunately , this circumstace has been minimized by changes in educating for children, which let them to join outdoor activities with their classmate in school
To sum up , home education has its own disadvantages and advantages.However,the undeniable drawbacks of this trend overshadow its potential merits on the whole.
In the previous era,parents frequently had tendacy to send their children to state-funded schools in order for young people to access to various kind of knowledge.Nonetheless, technological advancemen...
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the line graph illustrates the number of UK's car ownership in a period of 30-year starting from 1975.
at first glance, the figure for citizen who have 1 car and 2 cars exprerienced a upward trend while the opposite was true for the others. In addition, 1 car owner remained the highets number throughout the surveyed period.
in 1975, the number of 1 cars owner was the most common at 45 peole with citizens who do not have slightly trailing at appoximately 45 people. After 10 years , they decreased to about 37 people and exactly 25 people, respectively. however, the number two types car owner witness a constrast patterm. the former increased significantly to 45 people, whereas the latter went down moderate to over 15 people in the last year.
UK's dwellers who get 2cars standed in third rate at around 7people, followed by the number of 3cars owner at under 5 people. over 15-year period, the data for they showed a slightly rose to 10 people before remanding uncharge throghout 5 years later. after that, the figure for 2 cars owner and 3 cars owner increased to almost 20 people and 10 people in 2005, in turn.
the line graph illustrates the number of UK's car ownership in a period of 30-year starting from 1975.
at first glance, the figure for citizen who have 1 car and 2 cars exprerienced a upward trend wh...
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Task 1: The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how many international students applied to the universities of a specific European country spanning from 2004 and 2008.
Overall, Japan, the USA, and Russia witnessed an upward trend in the number of students applying to European universities, while China had a reverse pattern over a given period. Another notable point is that the USA surpassed China which was ranked first in the beginning.
Regarding Japan and the USA, there was a significant increase in the number of applicants with approximately 7000 and 13000 in 2004, then rose to 10000 and more than 25000 in 2008, respectively. Meanwhile, Russia experienced volatility in the number of applicants over the period. Starting with about 2500, then the figure fluctuated over the next 3 years before reaching a high peak of above 3000 in the last year.
In terms of China, whose the highest number of applicants with more than 25000 in the beginning, it was the same as that of the USA in 2008. However, China saw a substantial decline, plummeting to above 15000 in 2008.
Task 1: The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compa...
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The given bar chart depicts the quantity of waste which was tackle through landfill , burning , and dumping at sea in one European metropolis over 4 years interval starting in 2005
Overall, there was a gradual decrease in the amount of waste disposed via landfill , while the burning’s waste at sea saw a slight growth. Notably, the disposal waste by dumping almost no change in the period of shown
Looking at the bar chart, we can be seen that disposing of waste via landfill started at 1800 milion tonnes , which had the highest position in 2005, followed by a steady decrease at 1200 million tonnes in 2006 . Besides , in the first two years nearly burning of waste increased very little ,only 100 million tonnes. Also the amount of trash dumped at sea which always remained relatively unchanged at 600 million tonnes
In the two last years of shown, the quantity of waste processed by landfill and dumping dropped to over 900 and 600 respectively .By 2008, the burning of trash continuously went up till approximately 100 million tonnes
The given bar chart depicts the quantity of waste which was tackle through landfill , burning , and dumping at sea in one European metropolis over 4 years interval starting in 2005
Overall, there wa...
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The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of different groups of magazines sold by the company between 1975 and 2015 .
Overall , Ssort magazines sales increased throughout the period , whereas it dropped for sales of fashion and health magazines and remained intact for food and the unnamed magazines ones . Notably , sport magazines were the bestsellers compared to other types of magazines.
The proportion of sold sport magazines increased moderately from around 31% to just over 35% in 1995 , then peaked at approximately 41% in 2015 . Regarding that of food magazines , its figure started at 10% in 1975 before a soar to over 20% in 1995 , yet , falling back to 1975 levels in 2015 . Meanwhile , the figure of the unamed magazines followed the same pattern when it fluctuated between over 25% and about 30%.
With regard to the proportion of fashion magazines sales , the figure slightly decreased from just over 20% to nearly 15% between 1975 and 1995 , then witnessed a significant decline to 5% at the end . Sales of health magazines also dropped from approximately 25% to 20% in the first 20 years and stablized over the rest of the period.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of different groups of magazines sold by the company between 1975 and 2015 .
Overall , Ssort magazines sales increased throughout the period , whereas i...
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The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.(
The given pie chart illustrates the percentages of tourists coming from different regions , while the table chart shows what different regions’ tourists do in Australia.
Overall , European and US tourists account for the majority of holidaymakers . Notably , tourists tend to stay at least for a week for holiday , and sightseeing is their favorite activity .
To begin with , the percentage European tourists took up 37% of tourists , the largest group visiting Australia . Following by US tourists , who account for 35% of tourists , while those from Asian regions only amount to 10%. Additionally , people from other regions comprise nearly a fifth of tousists came to Austrilia.
With regards to tourists’ length of stay , Asian people usually stay for a week , and mostly choose 5-star hotels to stay, while American tourists stay twice longer, but prefer 4-star hotels . Moreover , Both groups mainly go sightseeing . Regarding European tourists , they stay the longest for 16 days averagely and mostly choose campsite or caravan rather than hotels , moreover , they prefer beach activities like swimming and sunbathing . Those from other regions usually stay for 10 days in the same accommodation as Europeans , however , surfing is the most popular activity.
The given pie chart illustrates the percentages of tourists coming from different regions , while the table chart shows what different regions’ tourists do in Australia.
Overall , European and US t...
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The two plans below compare the layout of a typical Japanese office and a typical American office.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the layout of typical offices in Japan and America.
Overall, there are dramatically differences between offices in two countries, with encouraging collaboration at the workplace in Japan, and emphasis on hierarchy or stratification in America.
In Japan, there are two large manager sections with tables and chairs of members in the same team placed together next to the location of the manager to promote teamwork. In front of two manager areas, there is only one table and chair placed for the department manager, and a window at the back of it.
Meanwhile, in America, tables and chairs for members are separated completely from manager areas. Each manager section is placed in a private room, and opposite is staff areas. Additionally, there are rooms added meeting job requirements, including a copier, a storage and two conference rooms. Besides, unlike Japan, American offices normally have two windows stretching across western and eastern walls.
The two plans below compare the layout of a typical Japanese office and a typical American office.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where...
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People only work hard for money and there are no other reasons for doing that. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals suppose that people work hard for no other reason than money. Although money is the primary reason behind hard work, I firmly believe other factors, including passion and a desire to contribute to society, likewise motivate hard work.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that financial incentives are a primary motivator for many individuals. People need money to fulfil basic needs such as food, clothing, and housing. Beyond these essentials, money also provides a means to achieve personal goals, such as buying a house, travelling, or securing a comfortable retirement. The desire for financial stability and the ability to provide for one's family often drive people to put in long hours and exert significant effort in their jobs. This partly explains why many decide to work overtime or have two jobs at the same time to maximise their income.
However, there are various other reasons why individuals strive to excel in (cố gắng vượt trong) their work. Personal fulfilment and career satisfaction are powerful motivators since people find a sense of purpose and identity through their work. They derive satisfaction from overcoming challenges, achieving professional milestones, and gaining recognition for their accomplishments. This intrinsic motivation often drives individuals to work hard, not solely for monetary rewards but for the personal satisfaction and pride associated with doing a good job.
Additionally, I believe many individuals work hard because of a natural enthusiasm in tandem with a desire to help others. Many artists, for instance, are willing to work in galleries all day long to sketch, paint, and perfect their paintings. Their aim is more about creating impressive works of self-expression than maximizing how much they will earn from selling their artwork. Another reason that encourages hard work is a desire to contribute to society. Firefighters are a case in point. The fact that many firefighters are willing to risk their lives to rescue others shows that money is not their main motivation and that an altruistic wish to help others far exceeds other causes.
To sum up, money is, of course, a driving force behind hard work; however, passion and the desire to help others are also intrinsic factors why many individuals work hard. I hold the standpoint that people are likely to achieve a greater sense of inspiration when they consider other factors besides simply salary.
People only work hard for money and there are no other reasons for doing that. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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