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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Đề: Nowadays, managers and team leaders in different organisations are much younger compared to the past. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?
In recent years, there has been a noticeable increase in the number of young directors and team leaders than it was in the past. While there are two major reasons for this phenomenon, such as the widespread availability of insights shared by successful professionals and the numerous self-development resources available on platforms like YouTube, I consider that this trend will provide major benefits, namely increased company productivity and enhanced adaptability in challenging situations.
There are two main causes of this trend. The first one is that work experiences from successful individuals can help a youngster know how to behave in working places. To illustrate, Huynh Duy Khuong, a renowned communication trainer in Vietnam, frequently shares advice with junior staff through platforms like Spotify. His insights, including stories of common pitfalls such as short-sighted decision-making, help young professionals learn and improve their workplace behaviour. Additionally, young residents can develop themselves through watching helpful videos on Youtube. Taking Web 5 Days as an example, this channel offers numerous videos on cultivating a successful mindset and developing essential life skills, such as maintaining a positive attitude and building productive habits. As a result, young people are better equipped to advance in their careers and secure promotions.
Despite this, this phenomenon could bring about two significant advantages. Firstly, the fresh perspectives of younger leaders can boost company productivity. For example, Tech startups like Cafe X, led by Henry Hu aged 25, have revolutionised the food service industry through robotics and advanced AI. This innovation, therefore, has earned high praise from customers for its efficiency and convenience. Secondly, the outstanding adaptability of young leaders helps them navigate adverse situations effectively. As an illustration, Ben Francis, a founder of Gymshark, identified a rising demand for home workout gear during the COVID-19 pandemic and successfully adjusted his business strategy to meet this demand, allowing the company to thrive during a challenging period.
To summarise, the trend of younger managers and team leaders is driven by accessible work experiences and self-development resources, which results in two benefits, including increased productivity and improved ability to handle challenges.
Đề: Nowadays, managers and team leaders in different organisations are much younger compared to the past. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?
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The best way to solve the gender inequality problem is to pay women as much as men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
On the one hand, providing equal pay for equal roles between the sexes is necessary to promote gender wage equality. In many workplaces today, women's achievements are still undervalued and unappreciated compared to men in the same roles. Additionally, their opportunities to obtain management positions are unequal, regardless of their efforts and expertise. This can potentially lead to feelings of depression and the belief that they will always be second to someone else, no matter how hard they try. Therefore, bridging wage inequality can boost women's confidence and morale, resulting in increased productivity and overall happiness. For instance, in countries like Scotland, the government has implemented strict wage laws to promote pay equality and create an inclusive work environment.
Another alternative is organizing campaigns to educate and boost public awareness to encourage females to pursue fields traditionally dominated by males , such as STEM ( Science , Technology , Engineering and Mathematics ). This can not only create chances for women to demonstrate their abilities in various fields to break down gender stereotypes , but also expand different career options for women
In conclusion , while paying women as much as men can help alleviate the gender inequality problem , I believe there are better solutions. A comprehensive approach that includes encouraging women to involve in fields traditionally dominated by men can lead to more sustainable and long-lasting solution
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The diagrams provide a detailed comparison of per-capita amounts of protein and calories consumed by individuals across regions. Overall, While North America leads in the intakes of both protein and calories, India has the lowest figures in the intakes of both types.
Concerning the average intake of protein, North America top the chart with 80 grams consumed being recorded, distantly followed by Latin America with roughly 45 grams. East Africa have an intake of precisely 30 grams, as opposed to roughly 28 grams for India, which does the least. More notably, residents of North America and Latin America have heavy reliance on animal-based sources when three-quarters and two-thirds of protein intakes in North America and Latin America are derived from animal origins. Whereas, East Africans and Indian have more balanced consumption between animal protein and alternative sources.
Regarding caloric intake on average, North America also takes the lead 35000 calories consumed, which is substantially higher than that of Latin America, at approximately 2700 calories. In stark contrast, while East Africa has the consumption of 2300 calories, 2000 ones are reportedly consumed in India, which also witnesses the lowest data in this category.
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[CHẤM IELTS MOCK TEST]
1. The charts below show the proportion of holiday makers using three different types of accommodations in three different years.
The given pie graphs illustrates the proportion of three different holiday accommodations in 1988,1998 and 2008.
Overall, most visitors chose lower-priced accommodations as staying with family or camping in the first two years, while the last year depicted an upward trend of the percentage of holiday services as hotels and rented apartment.
To begin with, traditional types, staying with relatives and camping, accounted for more than a half of the total. However, most holiday makers preferred staying with their family, making it became the most popular choice with about 53% in 1988 and 1998. After the first two years, the figure for these two options decreased gradually. While the proportion of camping drop from 26% in 1988 to 12% in 2008, staying with family decreased by 8%.
Looking at other options, it could be seen that the holiday accommodation services, rented apartment and hotels were less popular. Both types were lower than one-fourth of the total in three years. Nonetheless, the figure for hotels was doubled the figure for rented houses in 1988 and 1998 before having a same percentage in the next ten years. Beginning at 15%, the proportion of hotels increased to 22% and stay unchanged while the significant growth could be seen for rented apartments’s figure. Staying at only 7% in 1988, the figure tripled to 22% in 2008.
2.New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Today, most people argue that high-tech devices have influenced the way children spend their free time. From my perspective, the negative aspects are more impactful than the positive.
We cannot rule out certain benefits of new technologies on the way children manage their leisure time. What people refer to the most is the variety of activities that modern devices provide. With the latest development, children are no longer limited by traditional games which might be too old and classical since they could access to a range of appliances and entertain with online games through the Internet. The more technological appliances, the more exciting that children feel as there are more new way for them to entertain. In addition, it is nigh to impossible to deny that technology brings more knowledge to children through provided leisure activities. Unlike before when studying and entertaining used to seperate, modern technology allows children to learn knowledge through games and activities in their free time without realising. With exciting plots and virtual images, children are unconsciously adapted lessons while spending free time in the Internet, making those time be more meaningful.
However, the associated drawbacks make this trend worth worrrying. A key argument for this view is related to the impact on health. As being obsessed with virtual activities, a downward trend for physical games or sports could be seen when those hobbies could not be as interesting as new ones and require more physical demands. The resulting possibility of having health issues could act as a consequence when students have to face academic pressure on the one hand with weaker health. Nonetheless, what really forms my pessimism is the capacity of obsessing with virtual world and technology. While using modern devices still require energy and brain’s working, some individuals might neglect this and increase time using for those activities just to entertain and have fun. The diseperated time between entertain and rest could make free time be counterproductive, resulting in poorer academic perfomance and other activities in school.
In conclusion, despite a numerous appliances to entertainment purposes and providing more knowledge, the drawbacks of new technologies to children’s leisure time decisions are more imperative. It not only poses a possible negative impact on health, but also brings the trend of obsessing with online appliances and virtual world.
1. The charts below show the proportion of holiday makers using three different types of accommodations in three different years.
The given pie graphs illustrates the proportion of three different...
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Writing task 2
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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will no longer be necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a contentious argument advocating that museums and art displays for the public are predicted to disappear due to the proliferation of the internet that allows individuals to search for historical objects and art masterpieces online. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this viewpoint because of several reasons explained in the essay.
It is true that the advent of the internet facilitates searching for whatever information that people consider historically and culturally significant. Some claim that the information available online is sufficient for historical items and art breakthroughs if they intend to explore something such as their origin and excavation. Hence, the existence of public museums and art galleries should be restricted. However, I contend that the chronicled documents are absolutely different from the experience of being in the presence of the artworks or historical objects that stick to sacred values and special events of the museums and exhibitions. The experience is unique and should be preserved.
Furthermore, the design of the public museums and art galleries are correlated with a country’s architectural styles. Public museums and art exhibitions are ideal places to express architectural features that may be predominant in the historic period. Hence, people can contemplate the grandeur of these places while they are grasping more valuable knowledge about the historical objects and art works. Millions of people visit The Louvre museum in Paris because it not only exhibits a huge invaluable collection of national masterpieces, but it is a prime example of the aesthetic appeal of ancient French architectural structures.
In conclusion, although the advancement of technology allows us to obtain various information about art and history online, I firmly believe that the public institutions cannot become obsolete because of people’s real sense when they learn about historical items or admiring a piece of art and the outstanding architectural features represented.
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The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment.
The given diagrams depicts the development process of a cooking device.
Overall , there are 3 stages in the process , which initially is simple fire and then becomes a more complex equipment with more features .
The first stage shows that a pot , which was balanced by three stones over a fire of fibres or grass. In the second stage , the fire and stones are surrounded with a clay shield with a small gap on it for adding more fibres.
In the third stage , the fire is enclosed with metal base with a openable door to remove the ash out and also allow more air to flow into when needed . The inner lining of the pot is made of clay. Moreover , There is also metal support and with its help, the pot can be balanced on the stove. Charcoal is used as fuel instead of fibres or grass.
The given diagrams depicts the development process of a cooking device.
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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from eggs to adult fish.
The given diagram depicts the life cycle of a salmon ,from birth to maturity.
Overall , It is clear that there are six main stages as the salmon develops from egg to mature adult. We can also see that salmon spend time in three distinct locations during the cycle, moving from river to estuary to ocean and then back upstream.
Salmon begins its lives in rivers where the adult fish lay and incubate their eggs. After emerging from egg, the young salmon spends the next stage of its life being reared in freshwater areas. Then, at some point in its development, the fish swims downstream to river estuaries where rearing continues.
Following the estuary rearing period, the maturing salmon migrates to the ocean, where it eventually become fully grown adult. Finally, the adult fish travels back upstream to spawning areas of rivers; here it reproduces and lays its eggs, and the life cycle begins anew.
The given diagram depicts the life cycle of a salmon ,from birth to maturity.
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Thầy cô chấm bài IELTS Writing Task 1 này giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
The given pictures illustrate the proposed future development for an industrial zone of Norbiton. Overall, it is predicted that the entire site will be turned into a residential area with the addition of public facilities.
As for replacements, all factories alongside the road linking to the roundabout will be demolished to make places for residential accommodations, while the factory at the end of that road will be converted into a new school. Similarly, the industrial plants around the roundabout will be replaced by two new roads, one leading to three housing areas in the southeast and the other will run past the river through the bridge to the accommodations in the north, whereas the factory in the southwest of the roundabout will be substituted by shops.
When it comes to new appearances, a playground is planned to be built between two housing areas near the river, providing a recreational space for students. Additionally, a small roundabout will be constructed at the T-junction where the southern road meets the main roundabout, which will facilitate easier access to a new medical centre situated between the two roundabouts. Finally, the farmland in the northern part of the site will be reduced to accommodate a new housing development.
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The table below gives information about the average annual distance travelled by adults and the types of travel in 1977 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The statistics compare seven different means of transport in terms of the average annual distances over the period from 1977 to 2007, measured in miles.
Overall, cars were the most popular model of travel throughout the 40 years. Notably, what stands out from the charts is that the figure for cars, taxis, and trains increased sharply, whereas the value for the remaining vehicles witnessed a downtrend.
At the start of the period, secured the top position was cars, with its distance stood at 3500 miles. This was followed by the use of trains, which 100 miles surpassed the usage of buses at 800 miles. Occupying the 4th place was walking, which is considered twice as high as the taxis. The last position on the list came bicycles and motorbikes, with their consumption being 100 miles each.
Afterward, cars witnessed a significant growth by 2600 miles, still ranking 1st. Trains and taxis also underwent a moderate increase to 1000 and 800, respectively. In contrast, the other methods recorded a drop in 2007, with the most dramatic decrease belonged to buses, which fell by 300 miles. The value for walking, motorbikes, and bicycles experienced a marginal fall to 300, 90, and 80 in turn.
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The table below gives information about the average annual distance travelled by adults and the types of travel in 1977 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main...
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The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people in four different age groups attending the cinema at least once a month in a country over a 30-year period , starting from 1978.
Overall , the percentage of people going to the cinema aged 14-24 and 25-34 declined throughout the period ,whereas it increased for those over 35 years old . Despite the decline , the proportion of individuals in the two younger age groups remained higher compared to the older groups.
The proportion of people in 14 to 24 years old fluctuated between 90% and 85% over the timeframe and ended 85%. Meanwhile , those in 25-34 age group witnessed a sharp decrease from 80% to under 60% between 1978 and 1988 , before a resurgence to the 1978’s levels , then it remained stable for 5 years and dropped slightly by 5% afterwards .
In regard to those aged 35 to 49 visiting the cinema , the figure decreased from 60% to 50% in 1988 , yet , dramatically surged to 70% after 10 years , followed by a slight drop by nearly 3% in 2008 . The percentage of those over 50 years old followed the similar pattern from 1978 and 1998 , with a sink from around 40% to 30% then soared to 50% in 1998 , however , it had a minor rise by about 2% at the end .
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people in four different age groups attending the cinema at least once a month in a country over a 30-year period , starting from 1978.
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Task 2: Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that having the same shops and products in many countries is a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. In this essay, both views will be discussed, before a personal stance is taken on the matter, adjusting that this increase in similar shops and products in many countries is a positive development.
On the one hand, having the same shops and products in many countries is considered a negative trend. This development can put these countries under pressure to cope with cultural erosion. Many local shops and products are replaced by international chains; hence, countries’ unique cultures and traditions might be negatively affected. Furthermore, this trend can also lead to a competitive market, forcing the local small shops and companies to release attractive goods to avoid the worst consequence namely bankruptcy. For instance, international products are more ubiquitous, therefore many citizens tend to purchase them due to being manufactured by a prestigious company instead of local products with equivalent quality.
Despite those disadvantages mentioned above, I believe this is a positive development. A practical argument in support of increasing the same shops and products has to do with the fact that countries’ economic prosperity can be fostered. Suppose many countries have the same shops and products in the sense that there is a cross-border partnership between them. Consequently, these countries might conduct global trade more effectively. Moreover, this phenomenon can also result in reducing low employment rates in countries due to lacking of employees to work at their shops and produce various products. We need not look further than the case of Nike, since its employers expanded their markets to Vietnam, they have hired many Vietnamese people to work at their shops in many large shopping malls such as Aeon Mall and VanHanh Mall.
In conclusion, while having the same shops and products in countries can lead to cultural erosion, if not to say thriving competitive market, I believe this is a positive trend due to boosting economic growth and reducing low employment rates. In my view, if this trend is maintained, it can ensure the long-term well-being of humans and society.
Task 2: Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Task 2: Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport.Why is this the case?What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?
In contemporary society, it is believed that fewer people use bicycles as a form of transport. From my perspective, this trend can be attributed to several factors and numerous measures should be implemented to encourage cycling.
The current trend is that people use bicycles less for two main reasons. Firstly, using bicycles can sometimes cause awkward situations. This is because when commuters arrive at work by bike, they may be covered in sweat and get unpleasant smells, while their workplaces rarely provide shower facilities. As a result, they may feel embarrassed when working with colleagues. Secondly, commuting by bicycle is occasionally inconvenient. Due to urban sprawl, people nowadays tend to live far away from their schools or workplaces, therefore unless they get up early, they risk arriving late. Moreover, we can solely ride bikes by ourselves; hence, driving a car is more effective for those who have family.
Several solutions can be implemented to promote cycling. One approach is for companies to provide cleaning facilities that allow their employees to clean after cycling. Secondly, healthcare organizations should focus on educational programs that can raise public awareness about the various benefits of cycling, such as reducing health problems. Last but not least, constructing more affordable apartments or houses near schools and companies will lead to an increase in the number of residents, making cycling a viable option.
In conclusion, people use bicycles less as a form of transportation due to not only causing embarrassing situations but also inconvenience. However, to encourage more people to use bicycles in traveling, providing cleaning facilities, performing educational programs, and offering buildings and houses near workplaces, may be effective proposals. With these implementations, I believe we can significantly increase bicycle usage.
Task 2: Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport.Why is this the case?What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?
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task 2: At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the number of young adults in many countries is larger than that of older people. This writing would argue that the drawbacks of this trend are more significant than the benefits.
One benefit of having a large number of young adults is that it can promote economic development. When there is a larger working-age population, these individuals can potentially increase productivity and efficiency. Their contribution to the workforce can lead to the creation of more goods and services, thereby boosting economic output. Another positive aspect of having a large number of young adults is that it enhances the quality of labor. Young adults often pursue higher education and vocational training, leading to a more skilled and educated workforce. This can attract businesses looking for qualified employees
However, the advantages above pale in comparison with the disadvantages. Firstly, it can apply pressure to many metropolises. Some young individuals migrate to urban areas to seek better job opportunities, so this can put pressure on the environment. For example, a metropolis like Hanoi has become one of the most polluted cities in the world. Another negative is that it can increase the crime rate. As the population grows, the number of job seekers exceeds the number of available positions. This can make young adults struggle with financial instability and increased frustration. In some cases, individuals seek illegal jobs to have alternative means to support themselves or cope with economic pressures.
In conclusion, the demerits of this trend certainly surpass its merits. Not only does having a large number of young adults apply pressure to many metropolises, but it may increase in unemployment rate.
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Many people argue that producers and supermarkets curtail the amount of packaging of goods, while others suppose customer role should reduce spending on packaging. From my perspective, this problem necessitates a collective effort from both the supply and demand sides.
On the one hand, it is reasonable to replace the responsibility on manufacturers and supermarkets to minimize packaging. This is mainly because they use redundant packaging materials in mass production. They tend to use virgin materials for such a process to reduce manufacturing overheads, which results in innumerable landfills that are non-biodegradable. These situations depend on producers and supermarkets adopting environmental exercises in order to rectify this problem.
On the other hand, customers also play a crucial role in reducing packaging by cutting down shopping frequency. The behavioral customers are important measures of businesses that are unwilling to adopt eco-friendly packaging, which adversely affects the visually appealing products through sale figures. Therefore, if customers convert to buying green packaging, retailers, and manufacturers will be pressured into packaging policies. For example, many coffee shops use friendly products with the environment instead of using non-biodegradable packaging, this is the correct decision to attract customers and protect the environment
In conclusion, both producers and customers should need to share the responsibility of fighting with plastic issues caused by packaged products.
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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the ever-growing issue of excessive packaging has sparked debate regarding responsibility. Some contend that manufacturers and retail outlets have the responsibility to provide items with minimal packaging, whereas others believe that the onus is on customers to make informed choices. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and argue that both parties should take responsibility for reducing packaging waste.
On the one hand, major retailers and producers are responsible for producing products' packaging, therefore, they are supposed to take the initiative in cutting it down. In terms of manufacturers, they could simplify their packaging. Specifically, they can utilize innovative packaging designs that use less materials and implement more sustainable practices by using environmentally friendly materials. Supermarkets can opt for products with minimal packaging or packaging made from sustainable materials. For instance, there has been a significant change in the packaging at the deli counter in some supermarkets. Styrofoam boxes have been replaced by sugarcane boxes, which protect not only the environment but also consumers' health. The product is made from 100% bagasse, can stand high temperatures, and disintegrate easily within a few weeks. In this way, businesses can set the standard and take the lead in reducing packaging waste.
On the other hand, consumers also have a crucial role to play in reducing packaging waste. By this I mean, by choosing products with minimal packaging and boycotting excessively packaged items, customers can influence companies to adopt more sustainable practices to boost the sales volume. However, consumers should be aware of “greenwashing” , where companies make misleading claims about the environmental benefits of their products. Moreover, individuals should opt for biodegradable or reusable bags, which would remarkably reduce the amount of plastic waste. As a result, customers could drive positive changes in packaging practices."
In conclusion, the effectiveness of reducing packaging waste hinges on a cooperative effort between manufacturers, retailers, and consumers. A shared sense of responsibility and collaborative action are paramount in overcoming critical environmental issues posed by excessive packaging.
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Task 2: It’s generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is believed that some children have inborn abilities since they are born, for instance, for music and sport, and others are not. Meanwhile, some people argue that any child can be nurtured to become talented in sports and music. This essay will discuss both views before concluding that children need both nature and nurture to become talented in sports and music.
On one hand, some argue that talents in sports and music are innate and evident from a young age. Children born into families with a tradition of excellence in these areas may inherit and demonstrate their abilities early on. For instance, Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart, coming from a musically gifted family, exhibited remarkable talent from a very young age. By the time he was five, he was already composing and performing music, illustrating the potential for inherent talent to manifest early.
On the other hand, there is a strong belief that with the right guidance, practice, and perseverance, any child can achieve success in music and sports. Many notable artists and athletes who did not initially exhibit extraordinary talent have reached the pinnacle of their fields through dedicated effort. Serena Williams, for example, became one of the greatest female tennis players of all time through countless hours of training and overcoming injuries, demonstrating that relentless hard work and determination can lead to exceptional success.
Finally, in my opinion, both nature and nurture have important roles to play in success in music and sport. Natural talent can provide an initial advantage, but it is not the sole determinant of success. The role of environment, practice, and persistence cannot be overstated. Even those with less innate ability can achieve high levels of proficiency with dedicated effort and the right support.
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More people put their personal information online (address, telephone numbers...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is not a stretch to say that updating people's private information, including residential addresses and mobile phone numbers on the online platform, helps them with specific purposes like communication and conducting bank transactions, which is very common in modern society. From my perspective, it is significantly more disadvantageous than advantageous.
On the one hand, one school of thought holds that disclosing personal information in online interactions for routine activities can yield multiple benefits. The primary reason behind this thinking is that it would be more convenient to communicate and keep in touch with friends and family across the globe regardless of geographical distance, as a key to improving relationships and creating a more connected social network. Additionally, it not only provides easy access to banking services and facilities for financial management, saving time and effort for physical visits to banks, but also allows individuals to monitor their accounts, easily pay the bills, and make transactions that enhance financial control.
Notwithstanding the arguments above, its drawbacks are much bigger. Firstly, user privacy can be infringed upon, and individuals can become victims of identity theft by cybercrimes using this data for fraudulent purposes through intrusive marketing practices and targeted advertising, resulting in financial losses and reputation harm. Secondly, it is difficult to stop the spread of personal data, leading to potential long-term invasions and negatively impacting one's future opportunities and security. Since sensitive information can be leaked to online platforms, affecting job prospects, personal social circles, and social standing.
In conclusion, the trend of proactive publicity of personal details accessible in the virtual world can cultivate multiple risks and vulnerabilities, surpassing the convenience it offers. Therefore, considering its potential hazards against the benefits is at the core of ensuring personal privacy is not compromised.
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Đề: Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that the main interest is in world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether international cooperation primarily aims to protect the environment or to foster economic development. While there are compelling arguments for both sides, I believe that the key benefit of international cooperation lies in economic progression.
From an environmental perspective, many believe that international cooperation is crucial for environmental protection because collective efforts can lead to significant positive impacts. For instance, over 130 countries have pledged to achieve carbon neutrality, which involves balancing carbon emissions with carbon absorption through carbon sinks. This ambitious goal is indeed beneficial; however, the majority of these countries are currently responsible for over 80% of global carbon dioxide emissions, and only a few have reached net-zero emissions. This indicates that while international efforts are a step in the right direction, they have not yet led to significant environmental changes. Additionally, the lack of feasible initiatives and the myriad of environmental issues faced by individual countries further complicate global efforts.
On the other hand, the economic benefits of international cooperation are more apparent and immediate. Many countries join international organizations to gain economic advantages that promote growth. For example, European countries that joined the European Union benefit from the abolition of border controls, facilitating free movement and enhancing opportunities for work and travel across the continent. This not only boosts tourism but also improves the fluidity of energy, knowledge, and capital markets, ensuring maximum benefits from these resources. Moreover, international cooperation often leads to symbiotic economic relationships, such as tax reliefs on imports and exports, which significantly facilitate foreign trade.
In conclusion, while it is understandable that some people prioritize environmental protection as the main benefit of international cooperation, I believe that the primary focus tends to be on economic growth. The tangible and immediate advantages of economic collaboration often outweigh the more challenging and slower progress in environmental initiatives.
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It is a common belief that by granting the police more power is the most practical way to put crime rates lower. Howener I firmly believe that the police use their power in an improper way instead of coming up with a solution.
This is because they discriminate against innocent individuals and threaten to the privacy of non-involved suspects.
To begin with, the police can slander without any papers from the higher authority. When people are not doing anything wrong but get punish by the police.
In fact, the person who got
arrested attack against the dice and it ends up in an awkward situation.
On top of that, what would happen if a police expose the incorrect information about spottess victim. First the person who got violated
sue the police for overusing his power. Then the police imprison himself and lost his job at the same time.
To sum up, the palice has nare power in discriminating wrong criminals and endangering misleading data about accused figure.
For these reasons, I think that by allowing the police to use their power improperly, the crime rates are going up.
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ .In some countries ,there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school .Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages ?
In the previous era,parents frequently had tendacy to send their children to state-funded schools in order for young people to access to various kind of knowledge.Nonetheless, technological advancements in the comtemporary age have facilitating the posibility of home education.Despite some promient merits of this trend , I firmly believe that its major drawbacks surpass its benefits.
On the one hand , the decision to educate children at home will partly obtain financial advantages . To be specific, modern education have applied some breakthroughs in teaching methods, which often leads to the presence of extra fee, thereby becoming the principal sector which contribute to the considerable rise of schools’ expenses. Another point of this situation is that private education allows the flexibility in teaching shedule ,which means students will freely study in lieu of the strict structure of school’s scheme
Nevertheless, in spite of its notable benefits , I support the idea that the downsides of home education outweigh its merits . First and foremost , studying at home fosters children to work alone.Therefore, it has mitigated the ability to commnicate with others and enhance the capacity of the youth to suffer loneliness and depression.Not only that , but students are hardly gained opportunities to form relationship with their peers. For instance , due to the remarkable drawbacks of home education , a significant number of pupils were recorded to have the notion of depression in Ho Chi Minh city in 2010 . Fortunately , this circumstace has been minimized by changes in educating for children, which let them to join outdoor activities with their classmate in school
To sum up , home education has its own disadvantages and advantages.However,the undeniable drawbacks of this trend overshadow its potential merits on the whole.
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