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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Question: In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that people tend to store knowledge and information on the internet rather than in traditional books, which leads to evolutionary development. Although doing this has several disadvantages, the benefits may be far more significant.
There can be some minor disadvantages of using internet platforms as an archive. One possible issue is that information on the internet can be leaked or hacked easily. This is because in some developing countries, such as Vietnam and Laos, the governments do not focus on implementing policies that are related to the security of social media platforms and intellectual copyrights. As a result, this can cause loose cyber laws of these nations, which leads to the seemingly inevitable facts that important information is insecure and copyright infringements are becoming more popular due to the boom of the internet. Another detrimental effect could be that absorbing information from using the internet as knowledge storage may spread misleading information. The simple reason for this is that uninformed netizens can post anything online without verification and repercussions from the governments. Consequently, this causes the spreading rapidly of unreliable information on the internet.
Despite this, storing knowledge online can be more advantageous for several reasons. The most obvious benefit could be that it can provide a significant reduction in look-ups for information time. Thus, instead of leafing through numerous pages when using casual books or listening to every single DVD, people can find the information they want with a single click. This is because the knowledge that is stored on the internet is categorized conveniently. Moreover, state-of-the-art equipment such as computers and artificial intelligence provides individuals the opportunity to look up for knowledge more and more easily. Another merit worth mentioning is that storing knowledge on online clouds may keep more diversified types of knowledge. An illustration for this is that people can store books on the internet through txt and pdf files or store film and musical legacies through mp3 and mp4 files instead of storing this knowledge through books and DVDs, which is inconvenient and can be lost easily. The internet not only stores variety types of knowledge but also stores perhaps unlimited sources of data within a Google Drive workspace or Tera Box cloud as an alternative to a public library or a DVD store.
In conclusion, the potential downsides of individuals using the internet to store knowledge are undeniable. However, they pale in comparison to the beneficial effects brought about.
Question: In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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The three pie charts compare how much money was spent on five different categories by a specific UK school in 1982, 1991, and 2001.
Overall, it is apparent that teachers' salaries made up the largest portion of the cost, while insurance spending experienced the opposite trend. Resources and other workers' wages decreased, but there was an increase in the furniture and equipment used by the school.
In detail, the teacher’s salaries accounted for 40% initially before rising by half a decade later and falling by 5% in 2001. In contrast, others recorded a steady decline from 28% in 1981 to more than a tenth at the end of the period.
As for remaining expenses, the expenditure on insurance experienced a fourfold increase throughout the years, from a considerable 2% in the first year to 8% in the last year. In terms of manufacturing, both resources and furniture exhibited fluctuations. Having increased to a fifth in 1991, resource spending then underwent a halving, at under 10%. Similarly, the portion of equipment in the school decreased by 10%, then peaked at 23% at the end of the period.
The three pie charts compare how much money was spent on five different categories by a specific UK school in 1982, 1991, and 2001.
Overall, it is apparent that teachers' salaries made up the largest...
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The table below show the amount of waste production ( in millions of tonnes ) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
The table compares the production of waste ( in millions of tonnes ) in six nations in three years ( 1980, 1990, 2000).
Overall, the US produced the largest waste in all three years. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that cut its waste output.
In 1980, America produced 131 million tonnes of waste, which outnumbered that of other countries. Over the next 20 years, there was a significant increase to 192 million tonnes of waste output. The production of waste in Japan was two-fold rise to 53 million tonnes in the same period. The amount of waste produced in Poland and Portugal climbed by 2,6 million tonnes and 3 million tonnes, respectively at the end of the period.
An upward trend could also be witnessed in the figure for producing waste in Ireland. The amount of waste produced climbed eightfold, from 0,6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Between 1990 and 2000, there was a slight decline in Korea’s waste output, from 31 million tonnes to 19 million tonnes.
The table below show the amount of waste production ( in millions of tonnes ) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
The table compares the production of waste ( in millions of ton...
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Task 1: The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts how many local and foreign research students of universities in Australia in 2001 and 2010, while the pie charts illustrate the proportions of gender among those students.
Overall, the total number of research students escalated over the given period. Notably, there was a substantial decrease in the former’s share, while the international enrollments increased rapidly. Additionally, the gender distribution remained relatively balanced.
Regarding the number of students conducting research, in 2001, native and international students were 33,657 and 5,192, respectively, with a total number was 38,849. Conversely, the figures escalated to 39,488 and 14,593 in 2010, respectively. As a result, the summarized number of research students rose to 54,081.
In terms of gender distribution, in 2001, non-local female and male research students occupied 4% and 9% of total research students, respectively. However, the figures experienced a soar to 15% and 12%, respectively. Meanwhile, both regional female and male research students declined sharply. In 2001, local female and male students who engaged in research were 43% and 44%, respectively. The figures then went down significantly to just 35% and 38%, respectively.
Task 1: The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak...
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These days, with the spread of innovative technology, children have changed the way they spend time on technology. While there are several potential disadvantages to this trend, but i believe that they are outweighed by the benefits that technology offers for younger people.
On the one hand, there are many disadvantages that pose a risk to the mental and physical health of children who spend too much time on screen or use modern technology. Studies have shown that children spend much time playing video games and watching TV affects their daily routine, which makes them suffer from obesity and sleep disorders. Moreover, technology can affect mental health in the form of impaired cognitive development, behavioral issues, and poor social skills. This will reduce opportunities for young people to connect with the outside environment.
On the other hand, technology plays a vital role in bringing about many advantages for these generations. Firstly, social platforms contain a vast amount of reputable information and knowledge about different subjects that people can be interested in, such as science, history, math,... Secondly, video games are always abundant resources that help people who can solve critical thinking and communication. Especially, modern apps such as Facebook and message and chat platforms have made it easier for children to stay connected with their friends and families.
In conclusion, technologies nowadays have altered the routine of using mobile phones on children's free time and have negative impacts on them, but I also strongly believe that modern technologies will important element to develop skills and relationships of children.
These days, with the spread of innovative technology, children have changed the way they spend time on technology. While there are several potential disadvantages to this trend, but i believe that the...
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The given diagram illustrates the stages involved in the process of recycling paper.
Overall, this process comprises pulp and culminates in the production of recycled paper.
In the initial step of the recycling process, used paper is placed on a conveyor belt that transports air into a mixture of water and chemical agents. Here, the paper is broken down into individual fibers, resulting in a slurry-like pulp. Next, the slurry undergoes a filtration process to impurities.
This is followed by a thorough cleaning stage, where water, soap, and air are used to wash the pulp and eliminate ink residues. Additionally, water and chemicals are then added to further enhance the removal process. In the fourth stage, the cleaned pulp is poured onto another conveyor belt, which carries it through a drying process involving heated rollers to remove the water. Finally, the dred paper is wound into rolle of recycled paper, ready for use in distribution.
The given diagram illustrates the stages involved in the process of recycling paper.
Overall, this process comprises pulp and culminates in the production of recycled paper.
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Part 3: ● Are important decisions best made alone?
I don't think so. It is best to consult others when making an important decision. By doing so, decision-makers can consider more options and see them from distinct angles that they themselves might overlook. Having said that, sometimes making up our own minds is more
beneficial, especially in the case of business leaders. They are the ones who have the vision like no one else, and many, such as Elon Musk, heavily rely on their gut feelings to decide. Thus, while consulting others is generally advantageous, there are instances where individual judgment and intuition play a crucial role.
(Tôi không nghĩ vậy. Tốt nhất nên tham khảo ý kiến của người khác khi đưa ra một quyết định quan trọng. Bằng cách đó, những người ra quyết định có thể xem xét nhiều lựa chọn hơn và nhìn nhận chúng từ những góc độ khác nhau mà bản thân họ có thể bỏ qua. Nói vậy thôi, đôi khi tự mình quyết định còn hơn có lợi, đặc biệt đối với các nhà lãnh đạo doanh nghiệp. Họ là những người có tầm nhìn không giống ai, và nhiều người, chẳng hạn như Elon Musk, phụ thuộc rất nhiều vào trực giác của mình để quyết định. Vì vậy, mặc dù việc hỏi ý kiến người khác nói chung là có lợi nhưng có những trường hợp mà phán đoán và trực giác của cá nhân đóng vai trò quan trọng.)
I don't think so. It is best to consult others when making an important decision. By doing so, decision-makers can consider more options and see them from distinct angles that they themselves might o...
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Part 3: ● Why do some people find it hard to make everyday decisions?
I'm not so sure, but I guess some people struggle with making everyday decisions due to a lack of adequate background information. For example, when we want to choose between different types of cars but don't have an idea about their power and reliability, we can be struggled seriously. Additionally, people usually struggle with making decisions when there are conflicting targets, such as wanting to buy a house near the city center but having a limited budget. This conflict of interests makes it difficult to choose the best option.
(Tôi không chắc lắm nhưng tôi đoán rằng một số người gặp khó khăn trong việc đưa ra các quyết định hàng ngày do thiếu đi các kiến thức cơ bản đầy đủ. Ví dụ: khi chúng ta muốn lựa chọn giữa các loại ô tô khác nhau nhưng không có ý tưởng về sức mạnh và độ tin cậy của chúng, ta có thể gặp trở ngại một cách nghiêm trọng. Ngoài ra, mọi người thường gặp khó khăn trong việc đưa ra quyết định khi có những mục tiêu trái ngược nhau, chẳng hạn như muốn mua nhà gần trung tâm thành phố nhưng có ngân sách hạn hẹp. Sự xung đột lợi ích này gây khó khăn cho việc lựa chọn phương án tốt nhất.)
I'm not so sure, but I guess some people struggle with making everyday decisions due to a lack of adequate background information. For example, when we want to choose between different types of cars b...
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Part 3: At what age do children start making their own decisions?
I believe children start making their own decisions from a very young age, even on the very first day. For instance, they decide when to eat and when to nap mostly by themselves. By the age of three, most children have become more independent and want to make their own decisions with a little help from their parents. I reckon that parents should encourage them to do so to nurture their self-reliance. This early practice in decision-making helps children
develop confidence and critical thinking skills that are essential for their growth.
I believe children start making their own decisions from a very young age, even on the very first day. For instance, they decide when to eat and when to nap mostly by themselves. By the age of three,...
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PART 3:
● Which decisions do most people have to make every day?
Most people face a variety of decisions every day, both at work and at home. At work, they need to decide how to prioritize their tasks, how to communicate effectively with colleagues, and how to manage their time to meet deadlines. At home, decisions often revolve around meal planning, household chores, and managing family schedules.
Most people face a variety of decisions every day, both at work and at home. At work, they need to decide how to prioritize their tasks, how to communicate effectively with colleagues, and how to mana...
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Describe a good decision you have just made recently You should say:
● What the decision was
● When and where you made this decision
● What happened as a result of this decision
And explain why you think this was a good decision to make.
One good decision I made recently was to read the Harry Potter series to improve my IELTS reading skills. This decision came about after I had scored 8.5 on the IELTS reading section for the third time. I realized I needed to boost my reading comprehension, so I consulted a friend who teaches IELTS. He shared various methods, including speed reading and question analysis, but the idea of focusing on reading comprehension through engaging material seemed most convincing to me
I started this journey a few months ago, right after discussing it with my friend. I found that immersing myself in the Harry Potter books not only made reading enjoyable but also significantly improved my skills. My reading speed has increased without compromising comprehension, and I've learned over a thousand new words from the series. This
newfound confidence in my reading ability is invaluable as I prepare for the IELTS again, aiming for a perfect score of 9.0 this August.
Additionally, this decision has fostered a daily reading habit. I now have a constant thirst for more reading materials and have gained a lot of valuable knowledge in the process. Looking back, I wish I had started this approach two years ago when I first began studying for the IELTS. It's been a brilliant decision that continues to benefit me in many ways.
(Một quyết định đúng đắn mà tôi đã đưa ra gần đây là đọc bộ truyện Harry Potter để cải thiện kỹ năng đọc IELTS của mình. Quyết định này được đưa ra sau khi tôi đạt được 8.5 điểm IELTS Reading lần thứ ba. Tôi nhận ra mình cần nâng cao khả năng đọc hiểu của mình nên tôi đã tham khảo ý kiến của một người bạn dạy IELTS. Anh ấy đã chia sẻ nhiều phương pháp khác nhau, bao gồm đọc nhanh và phân tích câu hỏi, nhưng ý tưởng tập trung vào việc đọc hiểu thông qua tài liệu hấp dẫn có vẻ thuyết phục nhất đối với tôi
Tôi bắt đầu hành trình này cách đây vài tháng, ngay sau khi thảo luận với bạn tôi. Tôi thấy rằng việc đắm mình vào những cuốn sách Harry Potter không chỉ khiến việc đọc trở nên thú vị mà còn cải thiện đáng kể kỹ năng của tôi. Tốc độ đọc của tôi đã tăng lên mà không ảnh hưởng đến khả năng hiểu và tôi đã học được hơn một nghìn từ mới từ bộ truyện này. Cái này
Sự tự tin mới có được về khả năng đọc của tôi là vô giá khi tôi chuẩn bị cho kỳ thi IELTS một lần nữa, hướng tới mục tiêu đạt điểm tuyệt đối 9.0 vào tháng 8 này.
Ngoài ra, quyết định này đã nuôi dưỡng thói quen đọc sách hàng ngày. Bây giờ tôi luôn khao khát được đọc nhiều tài liệu hơn và đã thu được rất nhiều kiến thức quý giá trong quá trình này. Nhìn lại, tôi ước mình đã bắt đầu phương pháp này hai năm trước khi tôi mới bắt đầu học IELTS. Đó là một quyết định sáng suốt và tiếp tục mang lại lợi ích cho tôi về nhiều mặt trong cuộc sống.)
One good decision I made recently was to read the Harry Potter series to improve my IELTS reading skills. This decision came about after I had scored 8.5 on the IELTS reading section for the third tim...
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The bar chart illustrates how many three types of visitors to a museum from 1997 to 2002.
Overall, it can be seen that the adult visitors who came to the museum were the most popular during the period given, it was true opposite for the special exhibition visitors.
In 1997, the museum welcomed 300,100 adult visitors, making them the largest visitor group. Visitors aged under 15 numbered 120,000, which were higher than special exhibitions at only 28,000 visitors. Over the next 15 years, adult visitors peaked in 2007 with 400,500 people. The exhibition grew slowly and ended with 42,000 in the final stage.
There were around 120,000 visitors to the exhibition in 1997, but then it experienced a rapid decline to 87,000 visitors by 2007 and around 82,300 visitors in the final stage in 2002. In addition, the total number of museum visitors started at 448,100 before increasing to a peak of 525,200 in 2007. By the end of the period, this number had decreased, at only 504,300 visitors.
The bar chart illustrates how many three types of visitors to a museum from 1997 to 2002.
Overall, it can be seen that the adult visitors who came to the museum were the most popular during the perio...
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The given chart illustrates how long for telephone calls in the UK which grouped into three categories between 1995 to 2002.
Overall, there was an increase in the number of minutes of national and international-fixed line and mobile with the exception of local ones. Additionally, the figures for local-fixed line categories was far higher than two counterparts in the first half of the period.
Turning first to the duration from 1995 to 1999, the number of minutes of local-fixed line started at upward of 70 billion, after which it experienced a significant growth to 90 billion in 1999. Similarly, but to lesser extents, could be observed in the figures for regional and international and mobile types which climbed from under 40 billion, about 4 billion to 50 billion, roughly 14 billion, respectively in 1995-1999 duration.
Shifting focus to the remaining span from 1999 to 2002, whilst 90 billion minutes of local telephone in 1999, followed by a decline to the initial point in 1995, the statistics for the two rest categories constantly rose from 50 to above 60 billion with national international and from upward 10 billion to nearly 45 billion with mobile type at the end of the timeframe.
The given chart illustrates how long for telephone calls in the UK which grouped into three categories between 1995 to 2002.
Overall, there was an increase in the number of minutes of national and in...
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
One important stage in a child's growth is certainly the sense of right and wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting, and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. Therefore, I have to disagree almost entirely with the necessity of punishments.
There are several reasons why we should not punish a child physically. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant lacks the capability to comprehend what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of rationale is reached, however, a child can be rewarded for good behaviors and discouraged from the bad ones. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many unintended negative consequencesby the parents. For example, a timid characteristic of a child can result from the constant punishments of strict parenting.
To help a child differentiate between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modeling. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones - an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.
Rather, teachers and parents can use a variety of methods to discipline their young charges, such as detention, or withdrawal of privileges. Making the punishment fit the misbehavior is a useful notion, which would see the children being made to pick up the litter they have dropped, clean up graffiti they have drawn, or apologize to someone they have hurt. In these ways, responsibility is developed in the child, which leads to much better future behavior than punishment does.
In conclusion, the sole reliance on hurtful punishment is undoubtedly effective only when it is in the form of appropriate discipline, not physical measures, as it could hinder a child’s personality development. Instead, applications of discipline could further cultivate a child’s sense of responsibility.
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with...
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ .Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get new events.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the contemporary era, it has been witnessed a growing number of individuals communicate and with others and check for news daily.From my perspective, I support the idea that the remarkable benefits of this trend surpass its major drawbacks
In the one hand, modern residents have the capacity to correspond with their relatives or acquire to the latest events as result of the enhancements in social network which have minimized the time-consuming issues of traditional methods. To be specific , if citizens keep connecting with others by conventional options such as : face-to-face meeting , holding an appointment, they will have to spend their quality time in order to complete that. In contrast to the old ways, interacting by online applications not only tackle time-consuming obstacles but also enhance the flexibility since users have the ablity to hold a conversation at any time .Take an example of this concept, Threads, which is a widespread website , was utilized by a significant number of people in all over the world.The primary reason contributes to the success of Threads is the sustainable and safe environment that this application created thereby eliminating idenity exposure and supporting residents in building relationships
Futhermore, because of some breakthroughs in technology of notifying website , fanancial problems which are linked to obtaining new events are no longer exist in our daily life.Particularly,the old solutions of receiving news such as : reading newspaper, collecting magazines cost us much money while modern online platforms allow individuals freely access to the latest events.Therefore, it deletes fee’s difficuties and develops economic and knowledgeable aspects a mong people .
To sum up,the potential benefits of connecting with the others and gaining new events overshadow its negative downside.Consequently , it has been a upward trend in the current age amongst the general public to interact through network platforms.
In the contemporary era, it has been witnessed a growing number of individuals communicate and with others and check for news daily.From my perspective, I support the idea that the remarkable benefits...
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The illustration outlines the process of manufacturing ethanol via a biofuel.
Overall, this circular process encompasses three main stages, beginning with absorbing carbon dioxide in the external environment and ending with adding microbes into the progress.
In detail, the initial stage starts with releasing carbon dioxide from means of transportation before it accumulates into plants and trees in a form as an energy containing light ray and carbon dioxide. Coming to the second stage, it is about crushing the physical trees, which are harvested in the farm, by the cutting machine into tiny pieces.
Meanwhile, most of the progression in the third stage will be done with biotechnology and chemicals. After collecting these pieces, they will be converted into numerous cellulose fibrous. Subsequently, combing with some sorts of chemicals will help these fibrous reformed as sugar. According to adding more microbes, sugar will become ethanol, eventually combing back to vehicles.
The illustration outlines the process of manufacturing ethanol via a biofuel.
Overall, this circular process encompasses three main stages, beginning with absorbing carbon dioxide in the external...
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Task 2: International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
In today’s world, foreign holidays are more affordable, and countries are opening their doors to attract more and more tourists. Although this trend may present certain challenges, I believe the benefits far outweigh them.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages. Firstly, overtourism can cause environmental degradation. This is because the countries need to cut down trees for tourist infrastructure. Another drawback is that this can have a negative impact on native residents’ quality life. Popular tourist destinations can be overcrowded; hence, some local people have to migrate to another region which is undisturbed. Moreover, many local markets increase their prices to make more profit, so native people can not buy overpriced products.
On the other hand, this trend delivers significant benefits. It is undoubtedly true that this can lead to economic boost. If there is an influx of tourists coming to visit tourist destinations, they might pay for accommodations, catering facilities, public transportation and so on. Therefore, local companies can gain substantial revenue. Secondly, this can expand employment opportunities for residents due to the rise of travel agencies that provide services for visitors. Last but not least, this can foster a strong sense of social cohesion between various nations. Tourists and native people can exchange their culture and traditions. Consequently, they can exposure to new cultures which can enhance global cooperation and alleviate any existing prejudices.
In conclusion, although this change might have some potential disadvantages, I believe its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. The increase of tourism can be at the root for the robust economy, jobs creation and global integration.
Task 2: International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
In today’s world,...
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Writing task 1
The given table illustrates how many kilometres in average adults traveled and different means of transportation between 1977 and 2007.
Overall, the greatest numbers belonged to cars in both year, and bicycles and motorcycles were the types of vehicles witnessing the least figures.
According to the table, the average kilometres that people drived by cars was 3 500 and rose up to 7 100, which ranked first compared to the other given datas in both year. Following that was the distance traveling by walking, with 400 kilometres in 1977, yet the figure slightly dropped to 300 in the next 10 years. In terms of the numbers of bicycles and motorcycles, the records were similar, with 100 kilometres in 1977. However, there were moderate decrease for two of these types of traveling, with 80 and 90 kilometres, respectively for bicycles and motorcycles.
Furthermore, although the distance that people used bus to commute was 800 kilometres at first, it descended to 500 in 2007. Additionally, trains were seen to have the second highest numbers in this table, with 900 and 1000 kilometres for two mentioned years. Finally, there was a significant distance growth in taxi, going up to 800 kilometres in 2007, compared to 200 kilometres in 1977.
The given table illustrates how many kilometres in average adults traveled and different means of transportation between 1977 and 2007.
Overall, the greatest numbers belonged to cars in both year,...
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Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In contemporary society, the popularity of tourism has led to a growing concern about cultural preservation. Opinions are divergent regarding the matter of whether cultural traditions will be ruined or supported if it is used to earn revenue. The aim of this essay is to investigate both viewpoints before giving my personal perspective on this issue.
It is understandable why a number of individuals suggest that the development of tourism may jeopardise cultural traditions. A rationale behind this belief is that the activities of travellers are likely to pose a threat to the sites visited. Despite the endeavour to protect these cultural heritage sites, local authorities cannot take control over a great quantity of visitors. Furthermore, this trend can lead to the loss of cultural identity since cultural commercialisation usually ignores the pivotal values of culture. As a result, if culture is used as a tool to generate income, it will be attached little importance to a unique tradition, causing damage to the nature of culture.
On the other hand, I would argue that tourism is one of the most optimal ways to protect a culture. First, tourism can help spread the culture on a global scale since countries have witnessed an astonishingly increasing number of tourists from abroad. Hence, it can encourage younger generations to dedicate themselves to activities, thereby preventing cultural traditions from fading into obscurity. For instance, in Vietnam, many skillful artists make an attempt to teach and pass down their skills to not only local residents but also foreign travellers, contributing significantly to the maintenance of cultural identity. Besides, revenue from the tourism sector can be allocated to repairing and upgrading facilities of cultural tourism sites, thus enhancing visitors’ experience. To clarify, unless Hoi An ancient town is used for tourism, it cannot earn enough money to reconstruct old buildings which keep invaluable things.
In conclusion, although tourism may put the integrity of culture at risk, my firm conviction is that it can help preserve these traditional values from disappearing and improve awareness of upholding a culture
In contemporary society, the popularity of tourism has led to a growing concern about cultural preservation. Opinions are divergent regarding the matter of whether cultural traditions will be ruined o...
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ In some countries, schools are teaching foreign languages for primary school children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some countries , children are taught other languages apart from their mother tongue in an early age. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend , I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are two major drawbacks when foreign languages are taught at school. Firstly , adding another language apart from the mother tongue to the curriculum may be challenging and demanding for many children to meet. Children have to learn academic subjects like mathematics and science subjects that demand a lot of time and energy to understand and absorb complex formulas and complex theories and then apply them to complete their homework. Having another subject to learn and strive to excel in may cause the feelings of burnout and overwhelming , potentially leading to mental health issues such as depression and sleep disorders at a young age . Secondly , teaching foreign languages can lack competent language educators. To ensure the quality of education , teachers need to be trained and qualified with passion to deliver knowledge to children effectively. However , some schools in rural areas still find it difficult to address this problem.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits are more significant than such disadvantages.One reason for this view is that learning foreign languages early helps students gain future career opportunities. In our increasingly globalized world , language proficiency is a highly sought-after skill in the job market. Employers in fields such as international business , diplomacy and tourism often prioritize candidates with proficiency and fluency in conversational skill in order to support them to connect to customers from diverse backgrounds. Therefore , learning other languages except for the first language equips children with a solid foundation to be more competitive in today's job market , making them fulfilling in the career ladder and gain more lucrative earnings. Another reason is that learning another language stimulates brain development. To be specific , multilingualism requires learners to manage and exchange information between distinctive languages , making it an effective exercise brain in order for them to enhance multitasking,critical thinking and problem-solving skills.For example, The countless research papers have proven students who have studied a foreign language perform much better than their monolingual peers on many standardized tests, including all sections of the SAT. Therefore, bilingualism boosts brain development, giving learners an advantage in core subjects like mathematics and science subjects.
In conclusion , it seems to me that the advantages of this trend are more significant than the disadvantages.
In some countries , children are taught other languages apart from their mother tongue in an early age. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend , I would argue that these are outweighed by th...
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