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Tạ Minh Thư
20 days ago
Writing task 1, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Bài viết: The bar chart illustrates the rates of the uneducated population, divided by gender in 6 specific regions in the previous year. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of illiterate females was higher than that of males in all examined places. Additionally, South Asia took the lead in the highest illiteracy rates for both genders, while the opposite was true for developed countries. In terms of South Asia, Arab States, and Sub-Saharan Africa - the top three with the highest uneducated population shares, the percentage of females that were not able to read and write were 55%, 52%, and 48% respectively. With men, these proportions were much lower, standing at a third, 29% and 31% respectively. Moving to lower rates countries, a fifth was the percentage of illiteracy for women in East Asia, while that for Latin American was just more than a tenth. Accounting for about 8%, the percentage of uneducated men in the formal was a bit lower than the latter. In developed countries, just a minority of the population was unable to read and write, which was under 2% for both sexes. WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by... Xem thêmTùng
19 days ago
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: The table below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000. The table compares the healthcare systems across three European countries, namely Austria, France, and Sweden, in 1980, 1990, and 2000. Overall, Sweden's statistics were consistently the highest in all three categories over the period. Additionally, only the number of hospital beds per 1,000 people in all three countries increased steadily throughout the examined timeframe. Regarding the number of medical practitioners, in 1980, there were 3.6 individuals per 1,000 people in Sweden, while 2.4 and 0.8 physicians were recorded in France and Austria, respectively. Over the following 20 years, Sweden's numbers decreased to 3 people in 1990, before recovering north of the initial level in 2000. However, the figure for France experienced a steady decline to 1.3 in the final year, while that of Austria saw an increment of 0.1 per decade, reaching 1 person. Concerning the number of hospital beds, in the first year, Sweden accommodated 6.4 patients per 1,000 residents, far higher than France's and Austria's respective figures of 0.2 and 1.4. In the next 2 decades, the data for all three countries witnessed steady upward trends to 6.9, 1.6, and 3.7 in the last year, in that order. As for average hospital stays, the statistics for Austria were generally unchanged at 18, despite a three-time drop in the middle year. Sweden saw similar changes, albeit to a lesser extent, with 23 in 1980, 18 in 1990, and 21 in 2000. Conversely, the figure for France was 9 in 1980 and decreased gradually by 2 every 10 years. Prompt: The table below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000. The table compares the healthcare systems across three European countries, name... Xem thêmTùng
19 days ago
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The pictures illustrate how a present college site will change in the future. Overall, the college is projected to undergo several significant changes, the most prominent of which include the addition of classrooms, leading to the expansion of the site at the expense of the footpath and garden. Regarding the exterior, at present, there is a footpath traversing across the site, separating the main building from a garden, a parking lot, and a bus stop. In 2020, the garden and the footpath are anticipated to be removed, making space for the car park and main building to be expanded, while the bus stop and the road are expected to remain unchanged. Concerning the interior, currently, the main building can be accessed via an entrance on the same side of the garden, with a toilet being situated at the far end of the entrance. Moreover, a lunch area and two classrooms can be seen on the right from the entrance, while on the left is a third classroom, a reception area, and a library. According to the proposal, the entrance and toilet are expected to swap positions, while the lunch area will be downsized, making room for the addition of a new shop. Additionally, the reception area is projected to be moved to the centre, and the library is predicted to be switched to the opposite side, making way for additional classrooms. The pictures illustrate how a present college site will change in the future. Overall, the college is projected to undergo several significant changes, the most prominent of which include the addition... Xem thêmĐỗ hoàng
20 days ago
writing task 2
The overuse of high-tech devices, particularly computers resulting from the endlessly continuous development of technology makes varied people nowadays have in mind that they would not be capable of surviving or laboring, but not having them. Contrastingly, other people believe that computers commonly exist as a barrier to humankind in today's world. This essay will analyze the issue from both sides before my personal perspective is provided. On the one hand, there are various ways in which computers are more a hindrance than a help. Initially, in terms of health, not only can negatively affect our vision, but it may also have a risky influence on our human skeleton, particularly the backbone. It is to say if humans use computers for a long time, too much exposure to blue light from computer screens can cause digital eye strain. Furthermore, it is evident that regular usage of computers without any limitations can bring about long-lasting laziness in human behavior, making people less active and more sleepy. On the other hand, individuals feel computers as an indispensable tools, regardless its danger level. Despite the drastic negatives provided, one cannot turn a blind eye to the incontestable benefits that it is the easiest way to collect data. We all acknowledge there are limitations to memorizing capability in our brain, and we cannot remember various information. Thus, we need computers not only to do this work but also to do other types. For example, with computer assistance, we can organize several specific apps to help us manage and fulfill our work from a distance, not having any common mistakes or embarrassing imperfections. After considering the issue, I am more sympathetic to the second view. Although there are several opinions that computers negatively affect our lives, I personally acquiesce that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks. Nevertheless, it is an advice that you should not stay on the computer for hours per day in order not to suffer from health and mentality problems. The overuse of high-tech devices, particularly computers resulting from the endlessly continuous development of technology makes varied people nowadays have in mind that they would not be capable of s... Xem thêmTạ Minh Thư
20 days ago
Writing task 2, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words. Bài viết: Some people believe that the young should be forced to pursue academic subjects and ignore non-academic ones such as physical education and cookery in order to become successful. In my opinion, I do not agree with the idea of removing non-academic subjects from the curriculum as all subjects are important and can contribute to the complete development of children. On the one hand, the opponents encourage young people to just concentrate on educational disciplines since they believe these can help their kids succeed. Children are being put more and more pressure to make an effort to study academic fields such as math or physics. Obviously, these subjects can stimulate kids' brains and help them solve problems logically. As a result, some people consider being good at academic disciplines with intelligence and higher opportunities to achieve greater results. On the other hand, concentrating on succeeding academically and neglecting other fields may lead children to lack life skills. First, when they are put under the expectation of others about high academic results from an early age, they can only focus on that work and forget other necessary skills. For instance, in many families, the parents do not let their kids do any household chores as they want the children to focus on their studies, some even choose to send them to extra classes for better marks. Properly, when these children grow up, they can be extremely good at some academic field but do not know how to do basic housework. Moreover, when non-academic subjects like physical education and cookery are removed, children will not have time for outdoor and leisure activities. They will not have an environment to interact with other people and improve their communication skills. Although many people are not aware of the importance of non-academic subjects to the young population, it is clear that when the body is healthy with physical activity, the brain can work better with studious disciplines. In conclusion, I strongly believe that both academic and non-academic subjects have positive impacts on children as each kind has its own way of developing children's abilities. Therefore, I do not agree with detaching non-academic subjects from the school syllabus. With the combination of all necessary fields, young individuals can be successful. WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people be... Xem thêmĐỗ hoàng
21 days ago
writing task 1
The line chart below illustrates the variation in the number of people accessing to two fresh music sites (Music Choice and Pop Parade) in 15 days. As can be seen from the graph, both the websites' figures experience a fluctuation and end up with higher visits than it shows from the beginning of the period. However, the Music Choice undergoes more remarkable changes overall. Starting off at nearly 120 times in the first three days, Pop Parade's visits went down quickly and dropped to a low of 20 times on the seventh day. After a period of stability around this figure, it suddenly increased to over 140 times, followed by a marked decrease of about half on the thirteenth day once again. Finally, it peaked at over 160 times. Regarding Music Choice, the website has a less humble start than Pop Parade at only 40 visits and spikes to 60 viewers three days later. Nevertheless, it was harshly down and fluctuated at around 20 to 40 visits in the eight upcoming days. Then, the figure surged and touched the highest point over 120 times after starting to decline one more time to reach approximately 80 times on the last day. The line chart below illustrates the variation in the number of people accessing to two fresh music sites (Music Choice and Pop Parade) in 15 days. As can be seen from the graph, both the websites' f... Xem thêmMai Huong
20 days ago
Em chào thầy cô ạ. Đây là bài writing task 2 của em. Mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ
Task2: In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is argued that the trend of being overweight and unhealthy in the young ages, especially kids, are more popular at an unprecedented rate than in the past. In my opinion, I believe that this problem should be addressed by both governments and parents for several reasons. On the one hand, the government makes a significant contribution to deal with the state of child obesity. Firstly, parent’s children pay an amount of money for the national budgets like food or services related to it. As a result, the government should take responsibility for ensuring that children need to sustain a healthy diet with essential nutrition. Secondly, being overweight and unhealthy can happen through having meals at school. With regard to their school’s diet, the government can combine with school as well as nutritionists to get a daily suitable menu for children to provide complete nutrition without causing them to become overweight. On the other hand, the parental factor plays an important role in coping with this issue. Nowadays, the rate of obesity at a young age results from the unconcern of parents about the weight of children, which is researched by experts published in the VNExpress. Because parents often pamper their children by allowing them excessive consumption of sweet candies or soft drinking leading to being overweight and unhealthy. As a result, families should control the amount of food intake everyday of children to reduce the percentage of weight gain. In conclusion, the government and parents are responsible for solving this phenomenon. If the government gets health topics in the children’s curriculums, this trend will reduce significantly. Task2: In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?... Xem thêmTùng
21 days ago
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: The chart below gives information about the journeys to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. The bar graph shows how children in the 11-to-16 age range in the UK commuted to school by four means of transport during a year. Overall, the majority of schoolchildren choose to walk or cycle to school for journeys within 2 miles, while being driven by car or bus is more common for those travelling more than 2 miles. Regarding commutes less than 1 mile, travelling to school on foot makes up 90% of schoolchildren, which is the most common method, while half of those do so by bicycle. However, far fewer children go to school by car or by bus, with less than 10%. In the 1-to-2-mile range, the figure for cycling is the highest, at around three-quarters, surpassing that of walking, at 60%. Meanwhile, one-fifth of children are driven to school by car, doubling that of travelling by bus. Concerning journeys between 2 and 5 miles, half of the children opt to go to school by bus, followed closely by bicycles, at south of this level. This disparity is also seen in cars and walking, with respective figures being 30% and 25%. Finally, as for distances over 5 miles, the most popular approach is going to school by bus, accounting for nearly 70%, more than twice as much as that of cars, only 20%, while walking and cycling are not chosen for this distance. Prompt: The chart below gives information about the journeys to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. The bar graph shows how children in the 11-to-16 age range in the UK commuted... Xem thêmTùng
21 days ago
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. The table illustrates how much people in five cities in Australia pay for their water usage, in terms of mean bills per household and rates per kiloliter, categorised into two thresholds, under and over 125 KL. Overall, citizens in Perth pay the highest water bill on average, and Sydney charges the highest price for bills under 125 KL. Additionally, although Adelaide and Perth have the lowest consumption rates of no more than 125 KL, they also pay the most for water use above 125 KL. Regarding the usage charges of bills below 125 KL, households in Sydney pay the highest of $0.98 per KL, followed closely by Brisbane's and Melbourne's prices at around $0.80, while people in both Adelaide and Perth pay the least for $0.42. For consumption exceeding 125 KL, the figures for Perth and Adelaide slightly more than double to $1.50 and $1.00 per KL, respectively, while that of Brisbane experiences a minor increase of just $0.03. However, Melbourne's and Sydney's rates remained unchanged. Concerning the average water bill per household, those living in Perth pay the most for their water usage at $332, compared to Sydney's figure of $319. Meanwhile, household water bills in Adelaide and Brisbane are almost comparable at around $311, whereas that of Melbourne is the lowest, at only $253. Prompt: The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. The table illustrates how much people in five cities in Australia pay for their water usage, in terms of mean bills per househo... Xem thêmTr M Hoa
21 days ago
IELTS EXAMS
mọi người cho em hỏi, ai có đáp án keywords của quyển này không ạ, em cảm ơn ạ. mọi người cho em hỏi, ai có đáp án keywords của quyển này không ạ, em cảm ơn ạ.Booboo
22 days ago
Writing task 1 dạng map. Em mong được thầy cô sửa bài giúp ạ.
The two diagrams below show an art gallery as it is now and the redevelopment plans for the future. Overall, the art gallery will witness radical changes with the most noticeable being the expansion of the permanent exhibition space and the addition of the space in the West which will be used for two different purposes. The current gallery has a quite narrow space. The visitors access the gallery by a door which leads to the lobby located in front of an office. Walking through two temporary exhibition spaces, visitors can come to the permanent exhibition space. As a result of the redevelopment, the entrance will be moved to the Parkinson Court so that visitors can walk straight into the permanent exhibition space which will be enlarged by the demolition of the two temporary exhibition spaces. On the right of the main area, the lobby and office will be replaced by an education area and a room used for a store or plant. In addition, there will be an extension of space on the left of the permanent exhibition space, making way for a new special exhibition space and an exhibition store. The two diagrams below show an art gallery as it is now and the redevelopment plans for the future. Overall, the art gallery will witness radical changes with the most noticeable being the expansion... Xem thêmTùng
21 days ago
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture illustrates how to make honey in a simple production for commercial purposes. Overall, the process consists of two main phases: the bee phase, beginning from gathering nectar to worker bees keeping their cells clean, and human intervention, commencing from gathering honeycombs to transporting jars of honey for sale. During the bee phase, the process starts with nectar being gathered by forager bees from flowers. This is then carried back to the hive where it is deposited as honey. Next, worker bees fan their wings to dry the honey, thereby making it thicker, followed by each cell being sealed with wax to keep the substance clean and form honeycombs. In the human phase, farmers or workers collect the honeycombs, before these honeycombs are pressed to extract honey, which is then taken to the factory. Once the honey has been transferred to the factory, it is poured into the sump tank, where it is heated to 45 to 50 degrees Celsius. This makes the honey thin enough to flow by gravity down to the second tank where it is sieved to remove impurities. From here, the cleaned honey runs down to the last container, the settling tank, where it is left for 2 to 4 days before being drained into jars. Finally, the jars are labelled, sealed, and transported to selling points. The picture illustrates how to make honey in a simple production for commercial purposes. Overall, the process consists of two main phases: the bee phase, beginning from gathering nectar to worker... Xem thêmTưởng Thị Hoài Phương
25 days ago
People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Online language translation applications have become one of the common applications that are utilised by the masses. I believe that its advantages outweigh disadvantages. On the one hand, some translator applications provide people to translate words and improve their study of new language journals. Especially in modern life, younger generations are approached with exceptional amenities such as they can search for new vocabularies anywhere, even don’t use wifi and need not bring a thick dictionary book. Furthermore, there are a lot of applications developed by producers with numerous functions like voice recognition systems that can identify people's speech, boosting user’s experience. Next, they can enjoy using cameras to translate text via camera, because it is extremely quick to do so that is relevant in any country. However, the foremost ramification is over-reliance on language conversation software. Thus, they will be passive when they want to study any new languages. Then, people will lose their ability to study the English language. For example, Google translator may create some errors and lose its natural meaning. When you want to translate a difficult phrase, that will provide users with a difficult passage. Overall, the benefits from translator apps for humankind is such an amazing invention. Even though it has detrimental effects on some sides, its merit may outweigh its demerit. So , whenever they come to other countries, it becomes easier that they just need to use an online translator to render vocabulary. Online language translation applications have become one of the common applications that are utilised by the masses. I believe that its advantages outweigh disadvantages. On the one hand, some tra... Xem thêmKhanh Nguyễn
25 days ago
Writing task 1 dạng mixed-chart. Mong thầy cô giúp đỡ ạ
The climograph depicts the average figures for the temperature and rainfall every month in a city in Kolkata. Overall, it is apparent that monthly temperature in the city is highest from March to May while the rainfall is between June and September. The figures for rainfall in the first four months increase sequentially but not more than 50 mm. Over the next 3 months, the data of rainfall continues the upward trend to reach its peak at about 330mm in July before declining dramatically in the Winter with almost no rains. In January, the temperature in the city of Kolkata is around 20 Celsius degrees. The period of 4 months from February to May witnessed a significant increase in the temperature to hit its highest point, at 30 Celsius degrees in May. After that, there is a gradual decrease in the next 7 months to its initial statistic in December. The climograph depicts the average figures for the temperature and rainfall every month in a city in Kolkata. Overall, it is apparent that monthly temperature in the city is highest from March to Ma... Xem thêmSunnyy
25 days ago
Writing task 1. Mong được các cô chấm chữa ạ.
The diagram illustrates how bottled and canned stage carbornated drinks are manufactured. Overall, it is clear that there are five stages in plastic bottles and cans production, from water cleaning to heating, mixing, filling and filtering it, which produces the finished packaging. Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that in the first stage, water cleaning from factory raw water to filter, water softener, chemicals and pump. Following this, it is put into a electric heaters to cooling pipe and carbon dioxide, then it is converted into carbonated water. So that’s the end of step 2 heating evaproration and carbonation. The next step is mixing, mixing tanks divide into three jars: colouring, syprup and flavour, after which filter it again and get the finished products are bottles and cans. At the end of step 4 filtering and filling, the last step is packaging and transporting to the supermarket for sale. The diagram illustrates how bottled and canned stage carbornated drinks are manufactured. Overall, it is clear that there are five stages in plastic bottles and cans production, from water cleaning to... Xem thêmPhạm Bảo Vân
24 days ago
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
ĐỀ BÀI: The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. ANSWER: The chart illustrates the percentage of alternative energy in the total of energy provided in 4 sectors during the period 1997 to 2010. Overall, renewable energy was provided mostly in Iceland, next was Turkey and the lowest proportion in Australia and Sweden. For Iceland, the source of renewable energy increased rapidly over the years, with around 45% in 1997 to 70% in 2010. With regard to Turkey, the percentage of alternative energy was relatively high, however, it only accounted for a half of Iceland. In 1997, this country accounted for nearly 38% and the proportion increased slightly to exactly 40%, however, the rate decreased to around 35% in 2010. Finally, the percentage of renewable energy in Australia and Sweden was not very different, the proportion of these 2 countries was the same. For Australia, the quantity of alternative energy reduced to under 10% in 2010 while the proportion of renewable energy in Sweden increased a little to nearly 10% in 2010, it is equal to the percentage of Australia in 1997. ĐỀ BÀI: The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make com... Xem thêmAnhthu
24 days ago
Em mong được thầy cô sửa bài giúp ạ
The bar chart below illustrates the problems people usually come up against when they move to other countries to live at many aged. The first problem is about making friends. People have more difficulities with make friends's acquaintance when they're younger. The percentage of people aged 18 to 34 can making friends stand at about 46%. But 55 to 54 years old can get to know others easily, just 36%. Besides, there is a go down in the percentage of people over 55 years old's ability of make friends is about 23%. On the one hand, finding somewhere to live is a challenge for people at 18 to 54. They stand at approximately 40%. However, over 55 years old who look for accommodation experience more than 20%. Finally, they have one more trouble about language. Nearly 30 percent of 18 to 34 years old have problems with this side while there are more people at 35 to 54 have to come up against with learning the local language. But the percentage of old people have this difficulity is more than others. In conclusion, old people can solve problems about make friends and find accommodations easiest. But they the have the most trouble in learning new language. The bar chart below illustrates the problems people usually come up against when they move to other countries to live at many aged. The first problem is about making friends. People have more difficu... Xem thêmLê lan anh
24 days ago
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Nowadays, there are many reasons environmental pollution. What are causes and solution? In this day and age, there are multiple causes that lead to environmental problems that are more taxing than ever before, some of them seemingly insoluble. Pollution is an obvious example of this affecting our air, water, and soil. In my essay, I will find some of the main causes and remedy a situation. It is obvious that there are numerous reasons for environmental pollution. The first reason is that emissions are released by industry, which lead to air pollution, and have a devastating impact on our atmosphere. Besides, serious pollution can be life-threatening to human life. For example, people suffer from various dangerous diseases such as lung cancer, and heart disease, which have a negative impact on their well-being. Moreover, another reason is deforestation. Other human activities such as the overdevelopment of land the clearing of trees, and deforestation have been shown to cause soil pollution. This contamination in turn affects the natural habitat for many animal species. Especially, endangered species which are on the brink of extinction. There are several solutions can be recommended to address the urgent problem. First and foremost, the governments regulate the emissions by companies so that they do not exceed the limit amount is the challenging one. In terms of deforestation, the authorities forbade inhabitants to use land illegally and educate the public about the importance of the environment by portraying in multimedia to raise awareness of human In conclusion, the environment is our home so we join hands to tackle this pressing problem. Nowadays, there are many reasons environmental pollution. What are causes and solution? In this day and age, there are multiple causes that lead to environmental problems that are more taxing than eve... Xem thêmdung
27 days ago