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Lee Wenyong
17 days ago
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/4adb14b2-6bb3-4504-a0bc-eb746c8a9d78/1720619784_YLns849XHVG80rLSw1bkgM4bXXWi18.png)
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Lê Hương Giang
21 days ago
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The question of whether young people should save money for their future is a topic that sparks diverse opinions. While people argue that saving money for the future plays an important role, I am of the opinion that maintaining balance should be a priority. Proponents of the idea that young people should save money have their own justifications. Firstly, saving money helps them have huge savings to use to cope with emergency situations, such as medical emergencies. Besides that, money savings are also needed to prepare for some big future targets like buying houses, cars, and startups. This is mainly due to the fact that it is hard to practice successfully without a long-term savings plan. Despite the aforementioned arguments, I believe that sometimes savings have a diverse impact on all people, especially young generations. One compelling reason is that concentrating too much on savings can prevent them from enjoying the fun things in their lives, such as exploring, studying, and entertaining, which offers them a lot of opportunities to improve their personal skills. Moreover, the uncertainty of the future can raise doubts about the wastefulness of savings. As a result, inflation, economic depression, and the transformation of life can decrease the value of savings, which makes saving money unsafe anymore. Personally, I believe that a balanced method is the most beneficial. While saving money for unexpected situations and targeting the future, enjoying current life is equally important. For me, we should spend a part of our income on saving and the rest on personal preferences, which permits us not only safety but also pleasure. The question of whether young people should save money for their future is a topic that sparks diverse opinions. While people argue that saving money for the future plays an important role, I am of th... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/facadc84-9f0a-49a2-a4f7-0ff70a51fcde/1720189221_AvDcOBa4OaGncgdq5NpqtFxefS0gxf.jpg)
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Nguyễn My
19 days ago
Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal ages for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that higher legal driving ages is the most effective method to ensure road safety. I think that only allow older ages to drive may contribute to making road safer, while I see there are more measures for this problem. The rate of traffic incidents will be likely to drop if raising the legal ages for driving. To begin with, adolescents drive more aggressively, amounting to the possibility of car accidents. This is because they tend to break the laws, such as driving at high speed on crowded streets. However, this is less the case for adults who are more aware of the safety of their own and having driving experience, so they usually drive carefully and having skills to handle unexpected situations. Consequently, minimizing the number adolescents participating in traffic means optimizing the road safety level. Besides the above measure, there are more solutions to protect the safety of traffic participants. It requires the effort of the government to prevent traffic accidents. This means that launching campaigns in order to raise awareness of people about the importance of driving safely and encourage people, particularly newbies, to sharpen their driving skills are necessary. Besides, stricter penalties should be introduced for the purpose of deterring people from traffic offences, so that drivers will pay more attention their behavior, especially when having the thought of violating traffic laws. In conclusion, although older legal ages will play a significant role in decreasing potential danger of road, there are other strategies prevent traffic accidents. It is believed that higher legal driving ages is the most effective method to ensure road safety. I think that only allow older ages to drive may contribute to making road safer, while I see there are... Xem thêm![Nguyễn My](/images/logo.png)
Nguyễn My
19 days ago
The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
The given picture illustrates the production and preparation of coffee to sale on the market. Overall, there 11 stages in the process, starting by picking the coffee beans and ending with packing. According to the diagram, coffee beans are picked from the plant by an employee before lied on the ground to be dried by the sun in the filed. In the two next steps, the coffee beans are roasted and quickly cooled down, which will be put in a grinder in order to get ground coffee granules. As can be seen, the product from the previous stage is mixed with hot water, which is, after a period of time, strained and frozen in the machine. Following that is the frozen liquid being ground in the grinder and dried up in a vacuum, which evaporates water. Finally, the coffee is packed into jars, so that it can be displayed at stores or supermarkets, meeting the needs of customers for this product. The given picture illustrates the production and preparation of coffee to sale on the market. Overall, there 11 stages in the process, starting by picking the coffee beans and ending with packing.... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/325743a2-5428-47f3-886e-b14456e97650/1720401388_KTPa4fTxN104n0acVTMrpIjK5lBIJb.jpg)
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Nguyễn Thành Long
22 days ago
Mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài writing task 2 này ạ
Topic: As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are causes and what are the effects on both individuals and society as a whole. Developed nations are witnessing a shift in family structures, with a growing trend of individuals and smaller families replacing traditional extended households. This phenomenon is driven by several causative factors and carries both positive and negative consequences for individuals and society. There are several reasons why people choose to live alone or in small families instead of in larger ones. One primary reason for this trend is the soaring cost of real estate. In today's world, housing prices have skyrocketed, making owning a large family home an unattainable dream for many. This financial pressure forces individuals to opt for smaller apartments or condominiums, simply unsuitable for large families. Furthermore, career opportunities play a significant role. Urban centers often offer better employment prospects with higher salaries, attracting people away from their families. For instance, in Vietnam, countless young people migrate to metropolises like Hanoi or Saigon seeking higher education and pursuing lucrative careers. Finally, generational differences also play a part. The widening gap in lifestyles and values between generations in large families can lead to friction and conflict. This erosion of family harmony can ultimately weaken the ties that bind extended families together. The effects of this shift in family structures are multifaceted. For individuals, on the one hand, they may gain greater independence and career mobility. Living away from extended families allows them to pursue personal goals and professional aspirations with less interference. However, loneliness and anxiety, paired with pent-up stress due to the hectic pace of life in metropolises, may cause mental issues for people who lack the unwavering support from their families. Furthermore, the erosion of traditional extended family values may have negative impacts on societal cohesion. The strong social network provided by such kinds of families may deteriorate, leading to the eruption of social support systems. In conclusion, there are various reasons for family structure shifting. In addition, it is evident that this trend may lead to both positive and negative effects for individuals and society. Topic: As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are causes and what are the effects on both individuals and society as a whole.... Xem thêm![Phan Minh](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/users/350bee5f-2133-4e9e-8613-1ac1bf40a97b/avatar/1718815229_uct84LLHZWHmKnIOvMeXyXEPHBdOIA.jpg)
Phan Minh
22 days ago
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportions of energy consumption in typical Australian household and its consequency, which is exhaust gas emissions. Overall, while heating takes up the major role of household energy use, water heating represents the main part of greenhouse gas emissions. Moreover, cooling takes up the lowest part in both of charts. The heating and the water heating take up the highest and second highest percentage of enery usage, with 42% and 30%, respectively. However, refrigeration, the cooling and lighting merely represent for 7%, 2%, and 4% correspondingly. In addition, other appliances take up for 15%. Regard to household exhaust gas emissions, the water heating takes the main role, followed by heating with 32% and 15% in turn. The refrigeration represents for 14%, while the cooling and the lighting take up 3% and 8%, respectively. Finally, other applicances represent for 28%, which is the second highest proportion of the chart. The two pie charts illustrate the proportions of energy consumption in typical Australian household and its consequency, which is exhaust gas emissions. Overall, while heating takes up the major ro... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/2672d681-077a-4683-bc84-8a319639e145/1720095363_mIVFB85z3m0GmdyOMShsaf6WWoGEow.png)
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Phan Minh
22 days ago
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The table indicates the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum, while the two pie charts illustrate the proportions of visitors’ satisfaction rate before and after the museum’s refurbishment. Overall, there was a gradual rise of the number of visitor after the refurbishment. Moreover, the percentage of people who felt very satisfied and satisfied increased dramatically, while it was a reduction for dissatified ones. In the year before the museum’s refurbishment, the sum of visitors was 74000. But after the refurbishment, that number increased to 92000. Before the museum was refurbished, the proportion of dissatisfied people took up the major part on the chart, followed by satisfied ones’, with 40% and 30%, respectively. It took 15% of people who very satisfied and 10% of people who very dissatisfied. There was 5% of people had no response. After the museum’s refurbishment, the percentage of people who satisfied increased to 40%, followed by satisfied people with 35%. There was just 15% of visitors who were dissatisfied, and satisfied people accounted for 5%. People had now response took up 5%. The table indicates the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum, while the two pie charts illustrate the proportions of visitors’ satisfaction rate before and after the museum’s refurbishment. Overal... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/083705a3-0704-49f4-a4f0-2b7b928bc4e4/1720108197_Ll12peGp7cv6Zt9G01jaN1ZoGY2b0a.png)
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PThanh
22 days ago
Essay 2 : The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
The given table delineates the population categorized into four different age groups of New Zealand from between 2011 and 2012. Overall , it is apparent that population of New Zealand in general increased over two years , with people in 40-64 and over 65 age groups observed an upward trend , whereas other groups showed the contrary . Moreover , people of 15-39 age group account for the largest proportion of New Zealand’s population. In 2011 , citizens , who are under 15 , were about 890000 in 2011 , but then declined by 0.2% to nearly 896000 in 2012 . The same tendency was true for that of 15-39 age group , there were approximately 1577000 people , however , decreased by almost 4000 subsequently . Regarding adults in their 40-64 year olds , in contrast with the aforementioned tendency , there were 1339898 people in 2012 , increased by 0.6% compared to 2011 . Moreover , citizens who are over 65 years old surged significantly by 4% to 596903 , which is roughly 20000 higher than in 2011 . Thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ , em cảm ơn rất nhiều !! The given table delineates the population categorized into four different age groups of New Zealand from between 2011 and 2012. Overall , it is apparent that population of New Zealand in general inc... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/3a6bf36e-b51d-4812-a0ed-94bbecdfd507/1720077253_t7R4LQAYvOwDZPQB9G1MsLbW4izhtz.png)
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Phạm Bảo Vân
21 days ago
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ANSWER: The charts illustrate the waste disposal of various categories in a nation between 1960 and 2011. Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of food, plastic and wood, while textiles, paper and other types witnessed a decrease in disposal. In addition, mental, glass and green waste shared almost the same figure in two years. In 1960, the percentage of paper accounted for 25%, but it decreased significantly to 15%. Similarly, textiles saw a fall by 6% in 2011 and there also was a slight decline in others from 12% to 4%. In contrast, there was a dramatic rise in disposal of food, from 12% to 21% by 2011, followed by plastic with an increase of 8%. The figure of wood increased, however, it was not significant. Meanwhile, mental, green waste and glass have the same figure. In detail, the percentage of glass and green waste remained stable at 5% and 9% in 2011 respectively. The figure of mental increase of 1%, equal to green waste. The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compar... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/b5513035-550c-4abc-8ca3-43483dbba477/1720197387_nTIaXhuLXKtQbphxV2xn8FmwYB4o8g.png)
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PThanh
22 days ago
Essay 1 : The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products .
The given diagram delineates the process of pineapples being grown and prepared for making products . Overall , it is apparent that there are three main stages over the process , commencing at growing the pineapples and culminating with the qualified pineapples being canned or boxed for exportation. To begin with , pineapples are cultivated in tropical climate , ranging from 23-30 degrees Celcius , under the exposure to the sunlight . Moreover , the crown of such newly-grown pineapples must meet the criteria of a 26cm gap between each other . After 7 months being grown , the pineapples are sprayed with a chemical called ethaline .Subsequently , in the next 5 months , the pineapples are fully-grown with a standard of 30cm height and weigh 2 kg . Regarding the preparatory process , the pineapples are categorized into three different sizes: small , medium and large . Small pineapples’ crowns will be chopped and then peeled before being put into an extractor to make juices , whereas medium-sized pineapples will also have their crowns chopped and then being peeled , but then being canned afterwards . In regards of large pineapples , they are coated with wax for preservation , then being put into cargos and transported to ships for exporting afterwards . The given diagram delineates the process of pineapples being grown and prepared for making products . Overall , it is apparent that there are three main stages over the process , commencing at growin... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/4dd9afbe-d750-4d5c-82dd-97113e5dface/1720084894_uNKUOliTBvi4h70Ncc9WPTajP2vNRU.png)
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PThanh
22 days ago
Essay : The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton , and planned future development of the site .
The first map depicts an industrial zone in the town of Norbiton at present and the second one shows its map for the future plan development of the site . Overall , it is apparent that all of the factories in the area will be replaced with houses , and there will also be an expansion to the farmland in the plan . Moreover , more public buildings are going to be built in order to provide inhabitants with more facilities. At the moment , the area is used for industrial purpose when there are three factories situated at the center roundabout . Moreover, more five factories spread along the long road to the east of the town . Besides , there are no linking routes between the town and the farmland for the time being . Regarding the future development plan , the three industrial units in the center are demolished to make way for the new two roads to the north and northwest , which is for traffic infrastructures and building more houses . Moreover , shops and a medical centre are projected to be established around the roundabout . In the east , the industrial buildings are supplanted to make another residential area with a new school and playground for children . Notably , a bridge is going to be constructed to connect the town with the farmland , which is for more residences to the northern . Thank you so much for "curing" my essay :D The first map depicts an industrial zone in the town of Norbiton at present and the second one shows its map for the future plan development of the site . Overall , it is apparent that all of the fac... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/18834466-12b7-4971-90b5-e8578d11f4a8/1720082523_5Lgri95946quGSY1rNYLA4iBqtNs1a.png)
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bao linh truong
23 days ago
em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The graph illustrates the proportion of participants who engaged in numerous recreational activities and were characterized by their genders with the age between 18 to 20 in 2015. In overall, the survey was relied on 5 categories of activities. Additionally, the dominant position of male’s outdoors was taken by football, while cycling was more likely to be preferred by female. In male group, basketball and cycling were put into the middle group with the percentage, respectively around 32 and 46%. These two features were lower than the leading group more than 10% but surpassed the bottom group such as swimming and hockey approximately 10 or 15%. Furthermore, higher proportion of female candidates joined in cycling and swimming, at 40% and nearly 45%, compared to the other sorts of activities. Particularly, although basketball and football only attracted female players in the group of proportion from 10 to 20%, hockey stood at the bottom position at this comparison in both genders with the lowest percentages, at about 11 and 4%. The graph illustrates the proportion of participants who engaged in numerous recreational activities and were characterized by their genders with the age between 18 to 20 in 2015. In overall, the s... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/6174b6f1-5b0b-4b13-bb9b-dc8e6e9a4a43/1720051748_wpR4MxDJirBDRUqt7AMGGpccHm9TwV.png)
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Lê Thị Linh Trang
23 days ago
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The bar chart compares the drinking habits of surveyed people in five cities in Australia namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in the last 4 weeks. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of residents going to a cafe was highest in 4 of 5 cities( except Adelaide). Moreover, the statistics for buying fresh coffee were lowest in all mentioned cities. First, there was a similar trend in drinking habits in Sydney and Melbourne. The proportion of city dwellers going to a cafe was highest in both cities, at around 61% and 64% respectively. By contrast, about two-fifths of questioned citizens chose to buy fresh coffee. In addition, the percentage of people purchasing instant coffee in Melbourne was approximately 48%, nearly 2% higher than the figure in Sydney( around 46%). Take a look at Adelaide- the only city where the proportion of people buying instant coffee was the highest( around half). Besides that, more than half of the people surveyed had bought instant coffee in the last 4 weeks in Brisbane( around 53%), and Hobart( around 54%). Additionally, the percentage of surveyed city dwellers going to a cafe for coffee or tea accounted for around 55%, 49%, and 63% in Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart respectively. Finally, there was only one-third of residents surveyed purchased fresh coffee in 3 cities( Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) The bar chart compares the drinking habits of surveyed people in five cities in Australia namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in the last 4 weeks. Overall, it can be seen that th... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/a4485ed0-08e0-4943-8980-ad43302ffd70/1720032219_v33tqHZm0ivPmEyusCC2szewGJpbmH.jpg)
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25 days ago
Nhờ thầy cô xem giúp em bài Task1 này ạ. The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The two given charts compare the average expense on 5 domestic demands in Japan and Malaysia in 2010. Overall, in 2010, Japanese and Malaysians allocated the largest proportion of their income for food, housing, other goods and services. In contrast, health care was the service receiving the lowest share of expenditures. The percentage of budget for other goods and services accounted for the largest share of overall spending in Japan, at 29% while it was slightly lower by 3% in Malaysia. On the other hand, housing expenses in Malaysia required the biggest proportion of money, accounting for 34%, whereas Japanese only spent 21% of their income on this category. In terms of food spendings, people in Japan and Malaysia allocated a relatively similar proportion of money, at 24% and 27% respectively. The figure for transport in Japan was 20%, twice as much as that in Malaysia. Meanwhile, the proportion of health care expenses in both countries contributed a marginal share to the overall household spendings, with only under 10%. The two given charts compare the average expense on 5 domestic demands in Japan and Malaysia in 2010. Overall, in 2010, Japanese and Malaysians allocated the largest proportion of their income for fo... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/22984e81-f0dc-4931-aa47-1914741e8146/1719891344_LcvSqXrqFa2d0Tbps4ZHMeSHkeenAb.jpg)
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23 days ago
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Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of a bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some contend that social factors and financial constraints are the primary causes of crime, while it is also argued that criminality is attributed to violent personalities. Both viewpoints are relatively valid, but this essay would advocate the former. Admittedly, advocates of aggressive personalities as a primary drive to violence argue that people with this trait may not be influenced by external elements, which might implicitly indicate that cases of violence caused by these individuals may be governed by their inner sense. Numerous events of bloody fighting among teenagers with inborn aggression could be a prime example for this notion. These cases did not come with the effects of surrounding elements such as provocation or mutual altercations. Conversely, the idea that social problems and poverty can spark criminality is more justifiable. To the former, associating with delinquent social circles typically makes people highly vulnerable to antisocial behaviors. This can be explained by the fact that individuals can adopt house intrusions or drug abuse when their circles of friends engage in such illegal behaviors. Regarding financial precariousness, virtual inability to secure basic needs, such as food or shelters legally, generally instils in individuals a mindset that resorting to illegal actions can mitigate their harsh life conditions, leading to potential offenders. In conclusion, while individuals with innate aggressive tendencies may have their origins linked to social disorders, I am of the opinion that regular exposure to harmful actions and financial precariousness are the main culprits of crime, such as burglary, drug substances, or even habitual life of crime. Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of a bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some contend that... Xem thêm![Lê Hương Giang](/images/logo.png)
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The diagram shows the process by which leather goods are produced. Overall, there are eleven steps in the process, commencing with the drying of animal skin and ending with the production of various types of leather goods. The first step is that the skin of animals is collected and then dried under the sun. Once the animal skin has completely dried, it is loaded onto trucks to be transported to the factory. After that, animal skin is washed in a mixture of water and lime, before being soaked in only lime. The process continues when the skin is put into a flat machine, which makes the skin thinner. The next step is that this skin is soaked again with tannin, which is a combination of water and vegetable matter. Afterwards, animal skin goes through a dedicated machine to polish it. In the penultimate stage, trucks distribute this skin to another factory. The process comes to an end when this material is used to produce a variety of finished merchandise made from leather, including shoes, balls, and bags, which is ready to be distributed to consumer markets for sale. The diagram shows the process by which leather goods are produced. Overall, there are eleven steps in the process, commencing with the drying of animal skin and ending with the production of various... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/1209b0d1-1a80-4571-8af3-7ce12894a094/1720103361_lizeB4a6oTbHeCf14ssRQiyhsWZrde.jpg)
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22 days ago
The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The given table delineates the amount of money came from three different sources for police budget while the two charts show how the money was allocated between 2017 and 2018 . Overall , it is apparent that the money from the three sources had a notable increase over the year . Moreover , the money spent on salaries for officers and staff accounted for the largest proportion of the budget . Regarding the sources of the budget , national government stood at the first place in both years , with 175.5 million euros in 2017 and slightly rose by 2.3 million in 2018. In addition , local taxes showed the same tendency but with a more significant escalation to 102.3 million euros compared to 91.2 million in the initial years . Besides , funds from other sources also surged marginally from 38 million to 38.5 million by 2018. In regards of the purposes that the budget was spent for , salaries for officers and staff declined dramatically from 75% to 69% in 2018 , by 6%. The decline of the money for salaries was used for technology , which surged to 14% in 2018 . Meanwhile , Expenditure for buildings and transport remained intact at 17% in both years . The given table delineates the amount of money came from three different sources for police budget while the two charts show how the money was allocated between 2017 and 2018 . Overall , it is appare... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/25abf56f-9ee0-48f2-8f4e-75e774be811a/1720086696_nWhR01tAgttEyrBtG6SzACq633rsJL.png)
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In recent years, the idea of reducing the working week and extending the weekend time off for workers has become a topic of concern. In my opinion, I totally agree with this plan: a shorter working week coupled with a longer weekend would be highly beneficial for a number of reasons. One compelling reason for believing this is that a shorter working week gives employees enhanced productivity. Some research shows that a four-day work week can lead to a productivity increase of a productivity increase of about 40%. This could be explained by the fact that employees will boost their mood when they get more rest. Therefore, they will have more time to concentrate and improve other soft skills, which will support them in increasing productivity while working. Another cogent reason worth mentioning is that an extended weekend helps employees increase both physical and mental strength. This is simply because longer weekends provide employees with more time off to take care of themselves and their families, which is essential for maintaining a healthy work-life balance. Moreover, when employees are reduced working hours, they can spend their time pursuing passion, decreasing the risk of sickness and stress at work, and following this, their well-being will be greatly charged for their mental power. In conclusion, I am in complete agreement with the idea that a shorter working week and longer weekend will bring many huge benefits for both businesses and employees because it will increase productivity at work and improve both physical and mental strength for workers. In recent years, the idea of reducing the working week and extending the weekend time off for workers has become a topic of concern. In my opinion, I totally agree with this plan: a shorter working we... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/44e84d0d-9b31-43e1-ad10-f9cacda793ff/1720021263_OnqFqM5uJCuJXbSwj29FZzwKb0Y2F5.jpg)
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Đề bài: Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Whether financial allocations on road infrastructures or public transport systems should be prioritized has been of great interest. I believe the two categories are equally important as they both contribute to society’s well-being. On the one hand, investing in roads and motorways can help regulate the traffic volume. Expanded and newly constructed roads will provide more space for different lines of vehicles and pedestrians, therefore minimizing the possibility of undesired accidents. For example, before the existence of highways, there used to be a lot of news reporting accidents reporting pedestrians were run over by a truck while crossing the roads. In addition, such policy also facilitates the international trading process. Once the border roads are upgraded, all local people and other foreign parties can have more opportunities to transport goods and commercials across countries. As a result, these activities would possibly enrich the regional and national economy. On the other hand, governments and companies should also distribute funds to the public transport systems as this can ease the effects of pollution. By diversifying types of transit services like subways or trams, policymakers can encourage people, especially daily commuters to use public vehicles more frequently. To illustrate, recently a new tram called Cat Linh Ha Dong has been installed in Ha Noi, attracting many people, mostly office workers to switch from motorbikes and cars. This means that traffic congestion would be reduced, leading to a large decrease in exhaust fumes. Moreover, public transportation can enhance the life quality of citizens, since people would have more choices of traveling with much affordability and convenience. With more people utilizing buses and trams, we could create a public culture and a civilized society. To recapitulate, while roads and motorways offer chances for foreign trade and traffic regulation, public transport plays a vital role in serving the lives of dwellers. Therefore, it would be unjust to prioritize one over the other and both categories should be invested equally. Đề bài: Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Whether fina... Xem thêm![Lê nguyễn uyên chi](/images/logo.png)
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The diagram illustrates the recycling process of a frog. Overall, there are various stages in the life of a common frog, from mature frogs mating to producefrogspawns, to the growth of the immature form, known as tadpoles, to mature frogs developing some time later. At the beginning of the process, a frog experiences the mating process which takes place on the bank of a river or pond, after which frogspawn or eggs are laid in the water by the female. This is followed by the embryos developing into tiny tadpoles, at which point they gradually become more and more bigger than the first size. Afterwards, these tadpoles show a noticeble change when the front legs break through which make their movements become easier. The process continues with the tadpoles growing into frogs, at which point they start to breathe by pulmonary, and have a similar shape with common frogs, albeit it still displays the tail section. Then, the tail disappear, and they become young tadpole frogs with a capability of inhabiting outside the water. Finally, the cycle begins again when the fully-grown frogs find their mates to reproduce. The diagram illustrates the recycling process of a frog. Overall, there are various stages in the life of a common frog, from mature frogs mating to producefrogspawns, to the growth of the immature f... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/7df575cb-ad78-4190-87a9-c09615a07284/1720013447_gkEmJvTTRupXIRHrk37zWVtIRPW3Tv.jpg)
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ANSWER: The maps illustrate how a small museum and its nearby area had changed between 1990 and 2010. Overall, the changes of the museum had been not significant, save for the expansion of the car park and the construction of a new cafe. Originally, In 1990, there were two small gardens at the top left and right corners of the museum area. The exhibition room opposite the main entrance, an L-shaped building and a shop next to it. The store room, at the left corner, was located below the garden, and there were two small exhibition rooms nearby. On the right, there was a car park and a large garden below. A main road stretched along the museum. With the change of the museum in 2010, some locations remained unchanged including the storeroom, two small gardens, and the entrance. However, there were some changes of the size and replacement. The L- shaped building had been demolished to make way for the shop. Two separate exhibition rooms in 1990 had been combined into one big building. A cottage in 1990 had been replaced by a new cafe. On the right, the parking lot had been expanded, so thus, the large garden had been removed. The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/84bc0a73-0dcd-48ff-ab50-a6abd594bf59/1720059232_i6Sdx8ERZ7kinzHte9x1yNVMlmfka0.png)
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