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Phạm Bảo Vân

7/4/2024

Attentive Student

Mong cô chấm writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn

ĐỀ BÀI: Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? ANSWER: It is a fact that many people are becoming consumptive and materialistic because of their expensive things that they do not really need and cannot afford, therefore, getting into debt is quite popular among such people. There are various reasons that have caused this situation and in this essay, I will discuss them and give some measures that can prevent people from having this behavior. The first reason why many people are facing debt is due to consumptive lifestyles. With the development of social media such as Facebook, Instagram...more people want to show off their lives with luxurious things they have in society and the purpose of this is attracting many followers or fans. Many individuals are acceptable to get into debt to buy luxurious, costly items to show off themselves. That is quite a popular condition nowadays. Moreover, with the significant growth in the number of prestige and quality malls that attract people to spend much money on exorbitant things like clothes, jewelry which may not be necessary and even many people cannot buy it because of the costly prices but they regardless buy it with the desire to possess. As a result, many individuals are facing up with huge debt. There are some methods to prevent this problem. Firstly, people need to have a solid awareness of spending on things that are unnecessary or beyond their purchase. It must be ensured that the credit limit that is given to credit card holders is aligned with the individual’s income to spend money effectively. Instead of developing many luxurious malls, the government should focus on opening public parks or playgrounds to entertain. In conclusion, the development of social media and luxurious malls are the factors that make many people get into debt. The government should give more alternative solutions that prevent this problem. ĐỀ BÀI: Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?... Read more

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Le

4/4/2024

Attentive Student

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 2 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.

Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Other value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions. (BAI LAM) In this contempor... Read more

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V

4/4/2024

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(BÀI LÀM) Dear Sir or Madam, I am a graduated high schooler recently and I see your post about recovering memory course. I have been working as a part-time waiter and I can afford to enroll in this... Read more

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Phạm Bảo Vân

4/4/2024

Attentive Student

Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn

Đề Bài: The chart below shows the annual number of rental and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting t... Read more

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Le

3/4/2024

Attentive Student

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 1 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. (BÀI LÀM) The chart illustrates the estimated number of garbage manufactured by three companies be... Read more

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Phụng Nguyễn

4/4/2024

Nhờ cô chấm giúp em bài task 2.

Some people think that the increasing of computers and mobile phones for communication had a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people believe that the widespread use of digital devices such as smartphones and computers for communication have adverse impacts on people's literacy skills. Although electronic communication has some advantages, I firmly agree with this statement because this trend brings more harm than good. Granted, one might argue that there are some notable merits of using digital devices for communication. First of all, the availability of mobile phones or computers with the Internet connection can help people stay in touch with others from the comfort of their home. In fact, these devices are linked with messages and textings, which are modern forms of writing. Therefore, individuals can enhance their literacy by regularly with their messaging, texting, and emailing. Furthermore, thanks to technological advances, people can access a vast variety of reading materials, particularly on social media or reading websites by using their private phones or computers. As a result, they can access electronic books, news and magazines in order to broaden their knowledge and improve their reading skills as well. Nevertheless, I believe that the increasing use of these devices for communication leads to detrimental effects on an individual's literacy ability. First and foremost, young people tend to read short and informal texts since the growing popularity of social media. In fact, there is a lot of unofficial or inaccurate information through the Internet, which creates a challenge for young individuals to intelligently select the value data to read. As a result, they may come across and read false information, thereby affecting their reading ability. In addition, using technological devices deters people from realizing their mistakes. This is because, when writing words or paragraphs on computers or mobile phones, there is a tool to check and correct the spelling and grammatical mistakes automatically. Consequently, if electronic devices are not accessible, individuals are ill-equipped to write manually and grammatically. In conclusion, although there are some benefits of using mobile phones and computers for communication, such a development has resulted in the growth of communication misunderstandings and hindered the development of formal writing proficiency in young individuals. Some people think that the increasing of computers and mobile phones for communication had a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Som... Read more

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Tùng

4/4/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The table compares the incomes of secondary and high school teachers across five nations, namely Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Korea, and Japan, in 2009. Overall, teachers in Luxembourg were paid... Read more

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Tùng

4/4/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The table compares changes in the popularity of religious and civil marriages, and the mean marriage age between men and women in Australia between 1960 and 2000. Overall, there were increases in t... Read more

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Lương Khánh Thiện

2/4/2024

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em bài Writing task 2 này với ạ, em cảm ơn ạ.

The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? The music's influence on human psychology, especially in reducing pressure has... Read more

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Le

3/4/2024

Attentive Student

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 2 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.

Buying things on the Internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. (BAI LAM) In this contemporary epoch, there is a phenomenon that people tend to purchase things throughout platforms on the internet. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend, and I believe that the merits overshadow the demerits. There are some reasons to advocate for this type of shopping such as time saving or cost-effectiveness. These days, people often live in hectic and modern lifestyles so traditional stores may not be appropriate for them. Additionally, due to the development of technology, most individuals posses a smartphone or laptop which act as a catalyst for scrolling on the internet to buy commodities. It is convenient when users can stay at home and order deliveries which are shipped in-person without reaching the traditional shops. Furthermore, they are able to compare the costs between different shops to easy to make the most suitable decision. For example, Shopee is an online shopping platform which gains popularity in Vietnam since it provides the variety of goods and coupons for deliveries and packages. On the other hand, when purchasing things on the internet is more and more common, some owners of traditional stores may be on the edge of bankruptcy because their guests can find similar products at the lower cost. In addition, sometimes, online buyers would not have chances to check the items before receiving, so they may buy the fake or dissimilar products. For some essential goods including cosmetics or medicines, if people buy the counterfeit ones, it could pose a threat to their skin or even their health. In conclusion, although there are several demerits of online shopping including an increasing unemployment rate or counterfeit products, I consider the merits still outweigh because of its time saving, cost-effectiveness, and modern individuals' adaption . Buying things on the Internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your an... Read more

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Nguyễn Thanh Minh

29/3/2024

Chấm chữa writing task 2

Đây là lần đầu tiên em viết writing task 2, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em, em cảm ơn https://docs.google.com/document/d/19pmz2KYCFYLAc_OUJYpwkLTswC1yarbmAZM1IvmZkmc/edit?usp=sharing Read more

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Đào Thị Huyền Trang

2/4/2024

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em. Em cảm ơn.

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Tùng

2/4/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The maps illustrate the layout of a school site in 2004 and its proposed changes over the next 20 years. Overall, the area is projected to undergo several changes, the most prominent of which is th... Read more

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Tùng

2/4/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The bar chart illustrates how many people were self-employed across five countries, namely the Russian Republic, Slovakia, the Czech Republic, Greece, and Turkey, in 1998 and 2000. Overall, more pe... Read more

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Phan Quốc Anh

1/4/2024

Writing task 2 - Em rất mong được thầy cô hỗ trợ chấm bài ạ

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?... Read more

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Tùng

2/4/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The stacked bar graph compares the proportion of total revenue generated in a pharmaceutical company across three regions, namely Asia, Europe, and America, between 2002 and 2006. Overall, there we... Read more

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Như Ý

29/3/2024

mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ.

The presented line graph illustrates the number of foreign students who enrolled in a British university during a 20-year period from 1995 to 2015. Overall, it is clearly seen that the enrollment by... Read more

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Phu Thinh

29/3/2024

Hello mn, đây là lần đầu em đăng tải bài viết của mình trên đây, em hy vọng các thầy cô có thể nhận xét và cung cấp cho em feedback để em có thể nâng cao khả năng viết của mình ạ. Tại vì, em sắp thi IELTS rồi á, khoảng một tháng nữa thôi ấy, nên em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gq5yE0Fes_TeGtG8shYNkEaMKKoASmgX8j7ozx3IDDM/edit?usp=sharing

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duclezzz

25/3/2024

WRITING TASK 1

two bar charts below represent the percentage and its changing between 1995 and 2010 of population living in urban, rural and town according to their birth place, specifically Australian or elsewhere.... Read more

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Minhngoc

24/3/2024

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ

The given graph and chart illustrate information about migration to the UK. While the graph describes how long dwellers intended to stay from 2000 to 2008, the pie-chart gives causes in 2008. The numb... Read more

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