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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read more






Thanhh Thaoo
27/11/2024
Mong thầy/cô chấm giúp em bài Writing task 1 này ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy/cô nhiều ạ 🙇♀️
The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The given charts illustrate the number of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sold in five European countries UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in 1999 and 2004. Overall, the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee grew in all five Euro countries; meanwhile; the figure for bananas only increased in three of five Euro countries. In addition, the UK has the highest figure in two Fairtrade-labelled products. The proceeds of bananas and coffee in the UK had a dramatic growth from 1.5 millions to 20 millions and from from 15 millions to 47 millions respectively. The figure for Switzerland in coffee reached 3 million euros in 1999 and ended at 6 million euros in 2004. Similar changes can be seen in the sales of Denmark, Belgium and Sweden, which all had a slight increase by just under 1 million in these three countries. The turnover of bananas in Switzerland and Belgium gradually increased, from 1 million euro from 5,5 million euros and from 0,6 million euro from 4 million euros respectively. Conversely, the figure for bananas in Sweden and Denmark reached a low of 1 million euro and 0,9 million euro in 2004, decreased by about 1 million. The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featur... Read more


Trần Việt An
28/11/2024
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These days, schools have to make sure to convey proper behavior to students in addition to offering formal education. I strongly believe this statement and this essay will provide evidence that supports this view. Unlike parents, learning institutions have a unique opportunity to shape children’s behaviors. As a matter of fact, many people tend to spend excessive time in schools, where they are surrounded by many teachers and peers. Teachers who have a great influence on students are entrusted with the duty of developing behaviors at schools since they are in charge of enforcing a school-wide code of conduct and punishment policy. Taking this responsibility, schools ought to devote and allocate suitable time and sufficient resources to make sure students are trained in basic behavior courses after lessons. To accomplish this, educators should regularly balance between formal education and extracurricular activities like volunteer work and music and art. Good behaviors can contribute to the development of a welcoming and supportive school culture, which is widely recognized as one of the most important factors in a school environment. When school prioritizes positive behavior, it will mitigate bullying and strengthen relationships between students. Additionally, students will be actively involved and invest time in studying and researching new knowledge to expand their horizons instead of playing games. Good Behavior not only gives them more opportunities to connect to more people surrounding them but also give rise to better academic performance. In conclusion, I still agree that schools have a duty to equip knowledge about good behavior in addition to formal education by allocating suitable time for them to anticipating in outside activities. These days, schools have to make sure to convey proper behavior to students in addition to offering formal education. I strongly believe this statement and this essay will provide evidence that suppor... Read more


thanh tùng
27/11/2024
mong thầy cô chấm giúp em bài task 1 với ạ
The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The bar charts provide information about the proportions of online sales derived from four major sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Overall, the percentages of sales generated from travel and clothes declined.While the reverse was true for the contribution of books and film/music. In 2003, New Zealand showcased a heavy reliance on travel products and services, as this sector contributed 36% to the total figure.Another 24% was generated thanks to the sales of clothes, while around one-fifth was contributed by seilling films and music products. Although the online sales of books accounted for the least of the overall figure, this sector remained substantially large compared to the three other sectors. Regarding the chart in 2013, the online sales came from film and music products transcended travel products and services to become the largest share of four main sectors as it achieved 33%.By contrast, the figure for travel products and services observed a 7% decreased compared to the previous period with 29% of the total return. While clothing sales were responsible for only 16% of the entire proportion and a 3% increase can be seen for the return of trading books with 22% in this year. The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relev... Read more


Trần Việt An
27/11/2024
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The graph describes the manufacture of three forest industry products in a European country timber, pulp and paper, starting from 1980 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that all three categories had a fluctuating trend throughout the period. In particular, pulp and paper experienced a rise, while timber saw a downward trend In terms of timber products, production started at 5 million tonnes in 1980 and rose sharply to 10 million tonnes after declining to 7 million tonnes in 2000 Regarding pulp and paper, pulp was higher than paper in 1980, with nearly 6 million tonnes and 4 million tonnes respectively. In 1985, following the sharp decline, pulp production began to recover in 1985, climbing from 7 million to nearly 10 million tonnes in 2000. Similarly, the production of paper witnessed an increase to 8,2 million tonnes after continuing reach a peak at 12 million tonnes in 2000 The graph describes the manufacture of three forest industry products in a European country timber, pulp and paper, starting from 1980 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that all three categories had a fl... Read more


hamydoo
23/11/2024
Write about the following topic: Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa và đưa ra band điểm cho em với ạ. In modern life, a growing number of younger generations opting to have their offspring at older age has been a source of controversy. There are many reasons driving this trend, and this phenomenon brings both benefits and drawbacks to individuals and society. Giving birth later in life results from many causes. The first reason is the high living standard in the city. In fact, the cost of housing, hospitals, and clothes have surged in recent years, so salary is often enough to pay for people's daily needs such as water or food price. Thus, having a child can be a burden on their financial foundation, leading to many difficulties. In addition, the upbringing of a kid can disrupt career progress. It is evident that childbirth requires time to recover and raise a child, resulting in interrupting the effort to achieve a higher position in work or further study. It is disadvantageous for people and the nation to delay childbirth. First and foremost, this can affect the mother and infant when having a child. Because of old age, people often have weaker health, influencing the baby's well-being. Thus, kids are born with a poor immune system, becoming vulnerable to disease. Furthermore, giving birth later in life can give rise to a shortage of workers. Consequently, there are not enough employees in the factories to accomplish essential tasks and meet the demands of citizens. Hence, this not only can damage the balance between the young and the senior but it also can hinder the economic growth of the nation. In conclusion, high living costs and prioritizing careers are the reasons for having kids in old age, and it poses many significant challenges such as poor health or a lack of employees. Mong thầy cô chấm chữa và đưa ra band điểm cho em với ạ. In modern life, a growing number of younger generations opting to have their offspring at older age has been a source of contro... Read more
Nguyen Hong Phuc
23/11/2024
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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while other believe that the purpose of museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Opinions are divided on whether museums should offer educational or entertainment values to individuals. This essay will argue that since both factors hold their own merits, striking a balance between them can foster the sustainability of museum growth. Admittedly, advocates of education as a primary rationale often highlight that these facilities generally cater to those favoring visual learning. For example, by exhibiting lifelike dinosaur models, accompanied by explanatory details, this group of visitors has opportunities to experience the prehistoric world first-hand, potentially gaining a deeper insight into prehistoric life. Without this approach, people may find it challenging to profoundly understand bygone ecosystems. However, this perspective is not sound as museums inherently serve as tourist attractions, suggesting that these places should target all visitors, irrespective of their purposes and backgrounds. If exhibition halls place excessive emphasis on educational factors, they will trigger a sense of tediousness among average visitors, leading to a significant decline in visitor counts in the long run. For the aforementioned arguments, combining educational elements and recreational activities can be more beneficial. Regarding the latter, should galleries provide tourists with interactive exhibits or games, many visitors will find enjoyment, a key factor that fosters tourists' spending, making substantial contributions to increasing revenues. These funds are mainly allocated for preservation of precious artifacts and greater accessibility to the public. Resultantly, such a combination not only enhances recreational values but also facilitates the progess of these establishments. In conclusion, due to the inherent benefits of both education and entertainment, I am of the opinion that incorporating the two purposes can emerge as a prudent approach regarding the long-term viability of museum development and the fulfillment of this demand for relaxation among tourists. Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while other believe that the purpose of museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Opinions are... Read more
thanh tùng
21/11/2024
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đề bài More people today are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this?What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic For the time being, it is widely acknowledged that there is a surge in the number of obese people.This issue can be attributed to a myriad of factors and I believe that it should be tackled by both individuals and government There are two primary reasons involved in the increase in obesity rate.Chief among these is that it stems from a sedentary lifestyle.Take office workers for example, whose jobs revolve around sitting in front of computer screen all day.Thus, they have a shortage of time for exercise and also a propensity to gain weight.Furthermore, depression or some kinds of psychological diseases would be seen as a particular reason to a uncontrollable and unhealthy eating habit. In order to mitigate the scale and consequences of this problem,at the governmental level, many solutions should be implemented such as: establishing more recreational areas, enacting strict regulations for fast food industry, and raising awareness among people about effects of fast food and the sedentary lifestyle through social media. However, this groundbreaking approach cannot be en masse successful without support from each individual, playing an integral role in efficiently shaping and constructing their own lifestyle and further is the whole society. Each individual should make time for exercising and cooking their own meals.Gradually following these habits can be a good way to ameliorate life condition and social immersion. In conclusion, the surge in obesity rate can be depicted as a decline in physical participation level and also an exacerbation in psychological conditions, and this persistent problem can be resolved by a joint effort of both the government and the people. đề bài More people today are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this?What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic For the time being, it is widely acknowledged that... Read more
Nhân Đặng
22/11/2024
Writing task 1 ạ. Mong nhận được lời nhận xét của thầy cô ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
The table compares the differences in the number of international visitors between five areas in four years. Overall, the total quantity of people traveling abroad increased gradually over the period 1990–2005. However, the figures for America fluctuated over these years. In 1990, a total of 448.9 million people traveled internationally. Then there was a sharp rise to 615.2 million people in 1995, followed by a less dramatic increase to reach 693.7 million in 2005. Delving into specifics, the number of foreign travelers in Europe secured the leading position and soared significantly from 280.2 million in 1990 to 400.2 million in 2005. The data for Asia and the Pacific also documented the similar trend, with 60.2 million in 1990 then grew more than doubled to 135.8 million in 2005. In 1990, Africa recorded 18.2 million aboard visitors, after which this country observed a minimal growth to 28.7 million people in 2005. The quantity of international tourists in the Middle East showed the smallest data, climbing from 9.8 million to 15.8 million after 15 years. The number of people coming to America for travel reflected an irregular oscillation, expanding from 80.5 million to 118.2 million in the first decade recorded, after which it dipped to 113 million in the next five years. The table compares the differences in the number of international visitors between five areas in four years. Overall, the total quantity of people traveling abroad increased gradually over the period... Read more


Nguyen Hong Phuc
15/11/2024
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The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013. The diagrams delineate the airline ticket price between Sydney and Melbourne of one particular airline, over a two-week period in 2013. Overall, both weeks underwent similar price patterns in both directions, with midweek flights being far cheaper and more stable than weekend ones. Additionally, the peaks of ariplane prices were observed on first Monday and Friday for flights from Sydney to Melbourne and opposite directions, respectively. In more detail, Monday flights from Sydney to Melbourne cost passengers $80 and $50 for week 1 and 2, respectively, compared to $60 and $40 that flight users paid for returning routes in that order. Regarding midweek flights, airfares were comparable, at about $35, with the exception of Thursday flights from Sydney to Melbourne, as passengers were charged slightly higher, with a record of $40. Concerning weekend journeys from Sydney to Melbourne, the airplane prices for both weeks followed identical price patterns, with a surge to $75 on Friday, followed by gradual decline in price to $50 on Sunday. Likewise, the airline also increased the airplane prices for the return to its pinnacle of $80 for the first week and $60 for the second week. Thereafter, week 1 flight price fell gradually back to $50, while after slight drop, the price of week 2 witnessed a plateau at $50 at the end of the period. The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013. The diagrams delineate the airline ticket price be... Read more


Trần Việt An
20/11/2024
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People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than in the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There are those who help the opinion that individuals in the 21st century enjoy a superior quality of life than previous generations. I am completely in agreement with this view, as i believe that with the advance of technology will make people's lives become better. The first reason for the enhanced quality of life is unprecedented progress in healthcare. Modern medical innovation not only increased life expectancy but also improved the quality of life through effective treatment. For example, many years ago, patients who suffered from dangerous and difficult treatment tended to move to foreign, which cost a large number of money, but these days Vietnam is equipped with the most advanced machines to meet the demand of individuals. These medical breakthroughs have improved us with a high level of health and well-being that was previously unimaginable. Moreover, the digital revolution has transformed our lives, making a significant change in the way people study and communicate. Modern devices like smartphones and laptops have access to information and connect people across the globe empowering them with vast knowledge and resources. This helps people consider carefully official information before making decisions under any circumstances. Additionally, the convenience of technology is online apps, which lead students and employees can study and work at home. Taking students as an example, teachers will open an online lesson when the weather is bad, which ensures the students’s security and still conveys enough knowledge. In conclusion, the 21st century has had a significant change and improved people with better lives, with the advancement of medicine has helped patients overcome difficult periods. Furthermore, technology also plays a crucial role in altering people mindset and daily lives People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than in the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There are those who help the opinion that individuals... Read more
Nguyen Hong Phuc
19/11/2024
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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. The diagrams illustrate information about where dance classes take place and how many students by age in one particular Australian town take part in different types of dance classes. Overall, private studios are by far the most common place for dance classes. Additionally, ballet and modern dance classes are the most favored by learners aged 10 or younger and 11-16, respectively, and there is no marked difference in students' attendance in tap dance classes, irrespective of their ages. In more detail, 48% of dance classes are held in private studios, precisely double the proportion taking place in school halls. Furthermore, the respective figures for dance classes in college-based studios and the combination of community halls and others are recorded 10% and 18%. Regarding attendee numbers, ballet dance classes draw exactly 600 students aged no more than 10, precisely twofold the 11-16 age bracket. Meanwhile, modern dance classes represent a significant preference for the older group, with just over 500 attendees, compared to exactly 300 of the younger age profile. Notably, there are comparable data for attending tap dance classes, with records of approximately 480 and 430 students participating in this type of class, accordingly. The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. The diagrams illustrate information about where dance classes... Read more


Nhân Đặng
15/11/2024
Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
The question of how best to address environmental problems has emerged as a critical issue in today’s fast-changing society. Opinions are divided on this topic, with some asserting that only government and businesses could solve this issue, while some maintain that individuals could join hands to make a difference. From my perspective, I believe that both citizens and organizations should act to preserve the environment. Firstly, urgent environmental issues are serious problems. It impacts other aspects of life, such as the quality of life, the national economy, and habitat loss. Therefore, governmental authorities should impose stricter punishments on this issue to have an effective impact on a large scale. Heavy fines or punishment by imprisonment should be applied for people or organizations that have caused destruction to the environment, such as illegal logging and forest clearance. On the other hand, the need for cutting-edge technologies can be supported by business. Therefore, businesses play an important role in producing products using clean energy, such as electric cars and solar electricity. Both government and companies should cooperate to raise public awareness through environmental protection programs. Moreover, policy has a function in encouraging residents to take part in nature safeguarding. For instance, households should be installed with solar panels to save energy. Small acts such as using public transport, recycling, and sorting waste properly could contribute to protecting nature.Furthermore, inhabitants should raise their voice in the war against unsustainable plans. These opinions can heighten environmental awareness and fight for social equality. In conclusion, not only governments and businesses could promote their role in environmental care, but also individuals could join hands to tackle them. Ultimately, it is through acknowledging and addressing the challenges presented by environmental degradation that we can pave the way for positive change and a brighter future. The question of how best to address environmental problems has emerged as a critical issue in today’s fast-changing society. Opinions are divided on this topic, with some asserting that only governmen... Read more
Nhân Đặng
15/11/2024
Nowadays, women as well as men work full time. Therefore, women and men should share household tasks equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, the balance between work and family has sparked ongoing debate and differing viewpoints. In a world where women and men have the same labor responsibilities, they should spend time on their family’s duty equally. In my perspective, I maintain that this division can promote gender equality, work-life balance, and strengthen partnerships, which outweigh some obstructions it may bring. First of all, women now can have a full-time job. This means that the role of women in the workplace has been respected, promotes gender equality, and breaks traditional gender roles. Sharing household chores between husband and wife also supports this awareness. In the past, women were always limited by doing household chores such as cleaning the house, doing the laundry, and cooking. This could restrict them from exploring their potentialities. This fair distribution of responsibilities can lead to work-life balance, reducing burden for each family member. Furthermore, this cooperation can also strengthen the relationship between family members. Parents now can both take care of their children and build a sustainable financial background. On the other hand, differing work schedules and capacities make equality hard. In some countries, such as Japan and India, society’s beliefs still prefer the roles of a breadwinner husband and a housewife. If this trend continues, there could lead to conflicts and disagreements over task allocation in the family. In conclusion, although diving household chores encourage gender equality and promote family happiness, family members should share their difficulties to have a better distribution. Distributing the same amount of housework to both sexes is ideal; however, depending on circumstances, certain exceptions can be justified. In today’s world, the balance between work and family has sparked ongoing debate and differing viewpoints. In a world where women and men have the same labor responsibilities, they should spend time o... Read more
Nhân Đặng
15/11/2024
Writing task 1 ạ. Mong nhận được lời nhận xét của thầy cô ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
The graph provides information about the quantity of tea and coffee purchased by Canada, the UK, the USA, and Germany in tonnes. Overall, the amount of tea imported by the UK occupies the highest position, while that of Canada shows the lowest value. Germany is the country importing the highest metric tons of coffee products, whereas that figure for the UK is the lowest Delving into the specifics, the amount of tea the UK consumes ranks first, precisely 160000 metric tons. That data of the USA trails moderately behind, about over 110000 metric tons. 4000 metric tons of tea are bought overseas by Germany, which doubles the amount of Canada, just 2000 metric tons of tea. With more than 40,000 metric tons, the value of coffee goods bought in Germany guarantees the top spot.This is followed by the data for Canada and the USA, with both countries importing exactly 40000 metric tons of coffee. With barely 2000 metric tons consumed, the UK is the country that consumes the lowest amount of coffee. The graph provides information about the quantity of tea and coffee purchased by Canada, the UK, the USA, and Germany in tonnes. Overall, the amount of tea imported by the UK occupies the highest... Read more


Nguyen Hong Phuc
14/11/2024
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The diagram delineates young individuals’ preferences for different modes of transport across various countries in one particular year. Overall, cars are the most popular means of transport in all the countries, with the exception of France, where bicycles are predominant, and Italy represents the highest proportion. Additionally, the teenagers of all the examined countries show the least interest in motorcycles, except for young Americans. In more detail, roughly 75% of Italian youths prefer cars, slightly higher than that of their counterparts of The US and The UK, with precisely 60% for each. Whereas, France is the only country whose youths’ preference for cars ranks second, at 40%. Regarding the remaining vehicles, France records approximately 45% of its young residents favoring bicycles, while the figure for the UK registers 30%, and only negligible 6% and 5% are observed in Italy and The US, respectively. Concerning motorcycles, young Americans preferring motorcycles account for 30%, basically triple that of their counterparts from the remaining countries, with a record of about 10% for each. The diagram delineates young individuals’ preferences for different modes of transport across various countries in one particular year. Overall, cars are the most popular means of transport in all the... Read more


Quyên
13/11/2024
mong được thầy/ cô chấm và sửa bài giúp em bài writing task 1 này ạ. Em cảm ơn
“The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian Children.” The bar chart illustrates five recreation activities that Australian kids are keen on doing in their free time. Overall, it is evident that boys do more activities than girls, with the exception of art and craft activity. Besides, watching TV or videos is most preferred by both male and female kids in Australia. The proportion of children watching TV and videos is 100%, making up the most popular leisure activities for youngsters in both genders. In addition, the percentage of boys playing video games is exactly 80%, higher than that of girls with 60%. Likewise, the same was true for the figure of both boys and girls engaged in cycling with around 80% and 60%, respectively. Boys constitute almost 40% of spending their spare time in skateboarding and rollerblading, nearly twice as high as girls doing the same activity. Additionally, while boys are more active than their girl counterparts in skateboarding, art and craft is more favored by female children with approximately 60%. “The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian Children.” The bar chart illustrates five recreation activities that Australian kids are keen on doing in thei... Read more


thuy duong
13/11/2024
Em mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài W task 2 ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô ạ!
"In many countries, crime rates amongst younger people have been rising. What are the causes? What are the solutions?" It is globally urgent that the rate of youth crime has been continuously increasing. From my perspective, the issue can be attributed to a number of reasons and this situation can be controlled through the policies implemented in many nations. On the one hand, progressive society and technological advancement have created more chances for today’s youth to experience the digital world. Through social media platforms like Facebook and Tiktok, the youth observe not only qualified information but also explicit content that has already been glamourized. As a result, individuals are prone to mimic unhealthy lifestyles. For instance, since the Covid-19 pandemic when the general population was exposed to social platforms on a daily basis, Vietnam has witnessed a rapid rise in young criminals committing serious crimes such as speeding without safety equipment and using group violence in public. Besides, there has been a strong aspiration to flaunt their inner selves. This is due to the fact that some badly-behaved youth desire to seek public attention. Subsequently, they are willing to take risks to turn a small conflict into a life-threatening situation. On the other hand, this negativity can be alleviated through the assistance of governments. One first step which is worth considering is to impose a strict ban on content that does not meet both social and ethic standards. In particular, national authorities and legal agencies should strengthen online administration to eliminate unacceptable behaviors and to ensure users’ safety. Additionally, there is an urgent demand for national policies to be more strict and educational. If the young were involved in serious wrongdoings, they should have received a long-term punishment exactly the same as adult’s sentence. For example, some common crimes such as violently threatening people’s lives or damaging public facilities should be imprisoned instead of financially punished. In conclusion, youth criminals are triggered by external and internal factors which are online applications and self-assessment. Therefore, governments should take into account stricter policies to establish a well-rounded society with well-mannered citizens. "In many countries, crime rates amongst younger people have been rising. What are the causes? What are the solutions?" It is globally urgent that the rate of youth crime has been continuously incr... Read more
thuy duong
11/11/2024
Em mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài W task 2 ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô ạ!
"These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?" In this modern era, it is widely believed that the pressure of managing household tasks and raising the child lies more on husbands, whereas wives will be more engaged at their workplace. From my perspective, I would state that there are two principal reasons for this shift and conclude this case as a positive improvement for both the citizens and the society. Firstly, from the perspective of the men, there has been a significant change in their point of view which is being understanding means being a true breadwinner. Today's men gradually become more sympathetic to their wives, therefore they might be more active in sharing the household pressure with the women. Besides, in contrast to the past, a father would long for a close relationship with the children, creating a strong bond in a family. In particular, one apparent social improvement is the declining rate of family violence. This is due to the fact that the male gender lives more emotional. Secondly, modern women have a strong desire to acclaim their independence through social positions. Various jobs in some essential fields such as science, education, and politics have been taken under women's leadership. Therefore, it is crucial to anticipate the positivity in both genders' development. From the abovementioned factors, it is reasonable to consider this as a positive change for all parties. On the one hand, citizens will be beneficial because this case shows an optimistic view of both genders in which both parents could acquire a healthy and sharing thinking style. This will therefore lead to a more advanced generation comprehending sympathy. On the other hand, society in general, would be sustainably developed. For instance, in developed countries such as America and Britain, children are more confident and are willing to join a hand in collaborative tasks as their parents have set an example of how a well-mannered citizen should be. In conclusion, modern families have undergone a noticeable revolution in the two genders' perspectives. As a result, a positive development will be formed and heading for the sustainability of the social growth. "These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?" In this modern era,... Read more
Nguyen Hong Phuc
11/11/2024
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𝑺𝒐𝒎𝒆 𝒑𝒆𝒐𝒑𝒍𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒌 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒂 𝒈𝒐𝒐𝒅 𝒅𝒊𝒆𝒕 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒆𝒙𝒆𝒓𝒄𝒊𝒔𝒆 𝒂𝒓𝒆 𝒏𝒐𝒕 𝒏𝒆𝒄𝒆𝒔𝒔𝒂𝒓𝒚 𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝒂 𝒉𝒆𝒂𝒍𝒕𝒉𝒚 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒍𝒐𝒏𝒈 𝒍𝒊f𝒆. 𝑻𝒐 𝒘𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒆𝒙𝒕𝒆𝒏𝒕 𝒅𝒐 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒂𝒈𝒓𝒆𝒆 𝒐𝒓 𝒅𝒊𝒔𝒂𝒈𝒓𝒆𝒆? Healthy dietary options and regular exercise are believed to be no longer necessary for a healthy and long life. While this perspective may be sound due to technology, this essay will argue that the necessity of well-balanced eating habits and frequent physical activities has remained stable. Admittedly, those underestimating the importance of a well-balanced diet and regular exercise often point to technological advancements. Indubitably, the introduction of specialized medical apparatuses, which can remove excess and toxic substances from the body, has instilled in individuals a belief that maintaining a healthy weight and enjoying a long lifespan are possible with medical intervention. This is particularly successful in America, where the widespread implementation of this support has led to an increase in the communal health index and prolonged lifespan, irrespective of eating behaviors and exercise. However, the value of a nutritious eating pattern and regular exercise is still essential. Since treatment costs are generally exorbitant, financial capacity to afford medical services is a significant obstacle for the vast majority of people, especially with financially disadvantaged individuals. If there is excessive neglect of a healthy diet and physical activity, many people may be more highly susceptible to a wide range of medical conditions, such as obesity or even premature death. Moreover, despite the development of technology, engaging in regular exercise and consuming healthy food are scientifically considered the most efficacious methods to maintain a healthy condition and substantially contribute to a prolonged life. In conclusion, although technological development can make a substantial contribution to enhancing a healthy and long life, it cannot replace the role of a healthy dietary practice and regular exercise. 𝑺𝒐𝒎𝒆 𝒑𝒆𝒐𝒑𝒍𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒌 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒂 𝒈𝒐𝒐𝒅 𝒅𝒊𝒆𝒕 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒆𝒙𝒆𝒓𝒄𝒊𝒔𝒆 𝒂𝒓𝒆 𝒏𝒐𝒕 𝒏𝒆𝒄𝒆𝒔𝒔𝒂𝒓𝒚 𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝒂 𝒉𝒆𝒂𝒍𝒕𝒉𝒚 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒍𝒐𝒏𝒈 𝒍𝒊f𝒆. 𝑻𝒐 𝒘𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒆𝒙𝒕𝒆𝒏𝒕 𝒅𝒐 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒂𝒈𝒓𝒆𝒆 𝒐𝒓 𝒅𝒊𝒔𝒂𝒈𝒓𝒆𝒆? Healthy dietary options and regular exercise are believed to b... Read more
Nguyen Hong Phuc
6/11/2024