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Foods that are good for your health
Foods that are good for your health
em đang bị bí ý tưởng về bài này í ạ :(((. Em có viết bài này gửi cho GV dạy em chấm mà GV nói em làm bị lạc đề nên mn cho em xin 4 ý tưởng để làm bài này được hong ạ. Em xin cảm ơn ạ
Foods that are good for your health
em đang bị bí ý tưởng về bài này í ạ :(((. Em có viết bài này gửi cho GV dạy em chấm mà GV nói em làm bị lạc đề nên mn cho em xin 4 ý tưởng để làm bài này được hon...
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de bài:The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013.
The bar graph indicates statistics on the proportion of alternative power over total renewable sources in 6 nations over a 3-year period from 2010
Overall, the percentage of renewable energy production in Germany has an increasing trend, the USA shows a downward trend over the entire period. In addition, other countries remained unchanged significantly.
In 2010, Germany started at the lowest point at approximately 17%, but then there was an incredible upsurge to 25% in the final years of the period. The proporition of renewable power in the USA was registered at around 18% in 2010, after 1 year, dropping to ( dipped down to )approximately 17% , before there was a dramatic increase to 20% in 2013. However, Chinese figure maintained a steady rise to 14% in 2013 (China had increase its renewable energy supply to a mere 14%) and remained almost stable at its second position
Both France and Spain countries fluctuated between 12% and 14% from 2010 to 2013(France and Spaain follwed similar trajectories over the period surveyed), with almost the same share of 12% at the start.the figure for India began the time period at nearly 17,5%, then it showed a fall and hit the lowest point at just over 15% in 2011, and back up to around 18%.
de bài:The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013.
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writing task 2
Nowadays, it is reported that many individuals tend to spend their resting time less actively than they used to in the previous period as a result of developing social networks as well as other online entertaining activities and the more polluted air condition of the environment. I believe that people these days do let their pace of life follow this state.
As I expressed from the beginning, the development of networks in our society and online entertainment are supposed to be the most potential reasons that keep humankind out of contact with others personally. For instance, with solely an internet-connected device, men and women can proactively communicate with others without the limitation of distance and even the difference in culture and language. They can get into an entirely new relationship that do not need to go outside. They prefer perching on the back of the sofa, watching their favorite programs, and playing their beloved games on the net than hanging out after a hard-woring day.
Another root for my opinion is that people in the past loved going outside because of the tree-covering landscape which is one of the most effective therapy in nature. They can be healed and recovered both physically and mentally by the fresh atmosphere even in the place of their house. Nevertheless, with the lower covering density of trees, as a consequence of the forest's overexploitation and cutting down trees for more construction areas, the condition of air in particular and the environment in general is being threatened which contributes as a reason making people spend their free time inactively.
For the reason mentioned above, I believe that human beings in modern times primarily spend their spare time inactively.
Nowadays, it is reported that many individuals tend to spend their resting time less actively than they used to in the previous period as a result of developing social networks as well as other online...
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writing task 1
The bar chart below gives a breakdown of different types of families who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Overall, it is evident that more than one-tenth of Australian families were living in poverty in 1999, approximately 1.8 million in total, and sole parent possessed the highest number of destitute families.
As the data indicated, only 6% single aged person and 4% aged couple lived in poverty in 1999, contrastingly, 19% single with no children were not affluent. It clearly illustrated that elder Australians were economically stronger than their younger counterparts. In addition, Australian couple were generally better off, with the lower level of poverty for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). This type of family had the largest number of poverty household, though, their ratio was lower than other poor family. Finally, the figure of sole parents who were poor in 1999 were 232,000 in number and their poverty ratio was 21%, the highest.
The bar chart below gives a breakdown of different types of families who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Overall, it is evident that more than one-tenth of Australian families were livin...
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LLA mong thầy cô chấm chữa ạ
The bar graph delineates a comparison of the monetary investments made by five distinct organization in 4 different categories , namely, machinery , building , staff training , research .
It is evident that building is the most funded for organizations A,D, and E . Besides, organization C investes the most money for machinery ,while machinery is the lowest funding for organization B.
Organizations A,D and E spent the biggest proportion of their investment on building , at approximately 1,5 and both 1 billion euros respectively . Staff training is the second investment of both organizations A and E , at 1,2 billion euros and 0,9 billion euros .With regard to research , organizations d and E are the smallest investor in research only with 0,6 and 0,7 billion euros respectively .
In term of staff training , it is the biggest investment of organization B with 1,8 billion euros , while organization only spent around 0,8 billion euros . When it comes to machinery , organization B is the lowest investor . In contrast , the investment of organization c provide 1,3 billion euros for this category
The bar graph delineates a comparison of the monetary investments made by five distinct organization in 4 different categories , namely, machinery , building , staff training , research .
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The two bar graphs illustrate how many male and female students aged 14 to 16 learned another modern language in an English-speaking country, as well as the proportion of the three most commonly studied languages, in 1984 and 2007.
Overall, although decreases were seen in the share of students studying a new foreign language in both genders, that of females was consistently higher than their male counterparts. Additionally, the figures for students learning French and German experienced a downward trend, with the dominance of the former in both years, while the opposite was true for Spanish.
Regarding gender composition, in 1984, nearly half of the 14-to-16-year-old female students learned a foreign language, about 20% higher than that of males. However, this gap had narrowed by 2007, with just over one-third of girls and one-fifth of boys doing so.
Concerning the top three foreign languages studied, in 1984, just over half of the students studied French, much higher than the figures for German and Spanish of 20% and roughly 5%, respectively. In 2007, the share of students learning French halved, whereas that of German fell slightly to 15%. Conversely, despite Spanish almost doubling, it remained the least popularly studied language.
The two bar graphs illustrate how many male and female students aged 14 to 16 learned another modern language in an English-speaking country, as well as the proportion of the three most commonly studi...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graphs compare how Australians across five age groups used the Internet for three different activities in 2010 and 2011.
Overall, emailing was the most commonly used online activity, with it and paying bills sharing the same pattern of user rate, while the use of social media experienced a decrease with age.
Regarding usage, around three-quarters of Australian people used the Internet for email communication, followed by respective figures of 50% for online transactions and 45% for social media.
Concerning the distribution by age, the proportions of people in Australia paying bills and emailing online were comparable, with the majority of users being the middle-aged and oldest groups (about 80% each), followed closely by 70% of the 60-to-65-year-olds, and the minority of the 18-to-25 and 26-to-40 age cohorts (at 60% and 65%, respectively). However, the figures for using social media saw a different pattern of a decline with age, in which almost everyone in the youngest group did so on the Internet, doubling that of the oldest band (approximately 45%), which was the lowest.
The bar graphs compare how Australians across five age groups used the Internet for three different activities in 2010 and 2011.
Overall, emailing was the most commonly used online activity, with...
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Nowadays, there is more and more competition for getting into university. Is this a positive or negative development?
In the fast-paced world, it is getting more competitive to enter a university due to the increasing number of applicants. As a consequence, a debate regarding whether this situation brings positive or negative outcomes emerged. In my opinion, academic competition in this case is positive despite the fact that it may result in emotional burden among students.
One of the most significant drawbacks of the mounting growth in terms of university competition is the academic pressure and achievements it places on students. Fierce competition usually leads to anxiety, high stress levels and mental health issues. Numerous students have to face sleepless nights and burnout owing to the intense desire to outshine their peers. It is undeniable that long lasting stressful conditions can result in mental disorders and health problems, which affect students’ lives. Nevertheless, it will be less serious if the students can arrange their timetable flexibly and combine studying with other physical and entertaining activities to improve their health.
On the other hand, competition in this case can act as a driving force that motivates students to strive for academic achievements and outstanding performance. When students have to face pressure from their peers and the desire to outshine, they will strictly put their great effort into preparing for the entrance exam. As a consequence, students have opportunities to strive for success, and become more mature, disciplined and resilient, which positively foster and nourish useful soft skills and personal growth.
In conclusion, increased university competition has both advantages and disadvantages. However, its benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Students may suffer from several issues related to mental health but they will be able to gain many helpful skills, bravery and experience that are crucial to pave the way for their bright future. There should be competition in order to stimulate applicants to try their best and reach their full potential.
In the fast-paced world, it is getting more competitive to enter a university due to the increasing number of applicants. As a consequence, a debate regarding whether this situation brings positive or...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian employment in five sectors from 1962 to 2012.
Overall, there was an increase in the share of the Australian labour force in the service category over the period, while the opposite was true for those of manufacturing and agriculture. Meanwhile, construction and mining remained nearly unchanged throughout the given timeframe. Additionally, the employment rate in services consistently dominated, while that of mining was generally the lowest.
In 1962, just over 50% of the Australian workforce was employed in services, nearly doubling the figure for manufacturing (about 28%), whereas the percentages of those working in agriculture and construction were comparable at one-tenth. Meanwhile, almost no one worked in the mining sector.
Over the next 50 years, services employment had almost quadrupled to just below 80% by 2012, while the figures for construction and mining industries relatively stabilised over the period. Conversely, the proportion of people working in manufacturing gradually decreased to the same level of construction in the final year. Finally, agriculture employment experienced similar changes, albeit to a lesser extent, to mining's level in the last year.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian employment in five sectors from 1962 to 2012.
Overall, there was an increase in the share of the Australian labour force in the service categ...
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dạ thầy cô chữa giùm e bài writing task 1 này vs ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ
The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The line graph provides statistics on which factors cause individuals to move to the capital urban area of a typical country.
In general, during the survey period, the figure for employment reasons was in the first place. Furthermore, an upward trend was clearly depicted in a 15-year period.
Regarding the job and education reasons. Notwithstanding, a roughly similar trend was illustrated between 2 purposes, there was a difference in the patterns. From 2000 to 20005, the number of people who moved to promote their jobs witnessed an incredible upsurge ( from 60000 to 87000), in the second place, the extent of study reason had skyrocketed dramatically from 25000 to 480000. In the next 5 years, both data slackened and maintained a gradual increase ( 85000 to 91000 and 48000 to 55000 respectively). From 2010 to 2015, whilst, the statistic of education reason had a leap up to 88000, the data for job reason declined slightly to meet the last one.
In terms of the rest. Even though the extent of the adventure reason started at the lowest point with 12000, it subsequently maintained a steady rise to reach 15000 in 2015, that of the family/friend reason increased slightly from 13000 to 14000 in 2005, then, it suddenly rose to 24000 in 2010 and plateaued to 25000 in the last year.
The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featu...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài writing task 2 này của em ạ
Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
The Fourth Industrial Revolution has helped several inventions come to life, including robots to accompany citizens in the workforce. This invention has led to a question of whether it is beneficial to develop robots for the use of working and doing housework. In my opinion, despite the convenience it brings, robots can’t be left taking individuals’ jobs.
On the one hand, machines with artificial intelligence can increase efficiency and productivity in different working fields. Robots are created using advanced technology, which allows them to perform with better capacity, are having a better performance at work compared to humans. Tasks given to them are finished with not only precision but also consistency, leading to higher efficiency and productivity in various industries. Moreover, since robots are equipped with the latest advances in artificial intelligence and, they are totally capable of conducting a thoughtful conversation with an elderly individual based on their in-depth analysis of each personality, interests and past events. Those conversations have proven effective in reducing loneliness, stress levels and the potential risk of depression among senior citizens in developing countries, such as Japan and the United States.
On the other hand, job displacement can easily occur if robots are being used too often. The widespread of adapting robots in the workforce has encountered disagreement among workers who are worried about being unemployed, especially those with low educational backgrounds and participating in manual jobs. If machines with artificial intelligence are being used in every arsenal and small enterprises, a large number of workers will become unemployed and have a hard time searching for alternative job opportunities. When numerous citizens are unable to find suitable working conditions, economic disruption will likely happen, resulting in a country being on the point of collapse. Furthermore, the integration of robots into everyday life can pose a threat to society, especially to intellectual property rights. AI-powered robots have been in the market for several years with countless purposes, ranging from essay writing to image generation. These AI features have been abused by multiple users to create individual profit. By using AI technology to generate a drawing or write an essay, they seek to profit by adding minor details and then selling them to others, proclaiming those pieces are created using only their ability and imagination. This might seem harmless, but numerous authentic artists have pointed this plagiarism action out and seek for solutions
In conclusion, despite some convenience, the use of robots in organizations and companies still has several negative impacts on the workforce
Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa và cải thiện câu viết cho em ạ . em cảm ơn ạ
The line chart provides detailed data of the number of shop closures and openings in a particular nation over the 7-year internal starting in 2011.
Overall, the figures for both sites indicate a downward trend over the period shown, with significant fluctuations in the number of both categories.
Regarding shop closures, the initial point reached a peak of about 6400 in 2011, but after the number of closing stores witnessed the lowest point in 2015, at under 1000. however, from 2016 to the final year of the period shown, the figure rose dramatically approximately 5200 and stayed the same until the end of the period
In terms of shop openings, the number of openings shops reached the highest point of 8500 in 2011 but later declined significantly by 4000 in 2012. there was an increase to 6200 in the figure for shop openings in 2014, which was followed by a stable figure of approximately 4000 until the end of the period.
The line chart provides detailed data of the number of shop closures and openings in a particular nation over the 7-year internal starting in 2011.
Overall, the figures for both sites indicate a downw...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodation in three different years.
The pie graphs illustrate the preferences of vacationers over four different forms of accommodation in 1988, 1998, and 2008.
Overall, there were decreases in the percentage of travellers choosing to stay with family and go camping, with the former consistently dominating the three years examined, while the opposite was true for those renting apartments and staying in hotels.
Regarding categories that declined, in 1988, just over half of tourists stayed with their families while on vacation (52%), doubling the share of campers (26%). This disparity even widened over the next 20 years, with the respective figures being 54% and 13% in 1998 and 44% and 12% in 2008.
Concerning the two remaining options, during the first decade, the rate of holidaymakers renting apartments was twice as much as those who booked hotels for their trips, with 15% and 7%, respectively, in 1988 and 22% and 11%, in that order, in 1998. However, in the final year, the proportion of visitors staying in hotels doubled to be comparable with that of renting apartments, which remained unchanged.
Prompt: The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodation in three different years.
The pie graphs illustrate the preferences of vacationers over f...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table shows how many male and female workers and factories there were in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
Overall, although there were some fluctuations in the number of factories, that of the total employment saw a steady decrease, leading to the same trend in both genders. Additionally, the majority of employees were males over the period.
During the first decade, the year 1851 recorded the highest employment numbers working in the lowest number of factories, with 400,000 people (287,000 males, 190,000 females) in total and 225 factories. However, a reverse pattern was seen in the next 10 years, with a surge in the number of factories to the highest point of 727 factories, and a drop in the total figure of employment to 191,000 workers (132,000 men, 160,000 women).
Over the following 40 years, the number of factories generally declined, from 622 in 1871 to 600 in 1901, despite some slight fluctuations. However, both the numbers of total employees and male employees gradually fell from 140,000 and 80,000, respectively in 1871 to 105,000 and 65,000, in that order, before nearly halving to respective figures of 61,000 and 31,000 in 1901. Meanwhile, the number of female workers witnessed a decrement of 10,000 females per decade, falling from 60,000 in 1871 to 30,000 in 1901.
The table shows how many male and female workers and factories there were in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
Overall, although there were some fluctuations in the number of factories, that...
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ . Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have much higher salaries than other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that it is necessary for senior management positions to be received a much larger payment than other workers in a company . From my perspective , I totally agree with this viewpoint for several reasons which will be laid out in the following essay.
On the one hand , this viewpoint leads to disparity in payments and social inequality . Large salary gaps may make other employees feel unvalued and not respected , therefore resulting in arguments among the workforce. This has several negative impacts on work performance and job satisfaction .
On the other hand, the higher payment for senior positions is necessary because they spend a large amount of time and efforts to devote to the development of the company. The priority also means the pressure and responsibilities faced by senior management. When the company is at risk , they are responsible for offering solutions and guiding other employees to come over harsh period. Besides , offering large payment can attract and retain the best talent to work for company. Their contributes are necessary to strengthen the position’s company in the increasingly competitive market.A good compensation also encourage senior position to gain high productivity and work performance , thereby leading to job-satisfaction and overall well-being.
In conclusion , despite the drawback relating to principal of equality , I believe that offering a much higher payment for senior management position have more significant benefits for both senior management and the development of their company
Some individuals believe that it is necessary for senior management positions to be received a much larger payment than other workers in a company . From my perspective , I totally agree with this vie...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table illustrates how many women per 100 men in six regions in the world, in 1995 and 2005.
Overall, there were increases in the female-to-male population ratio in Africa and Europe, while that in the remaining areas experienced a reverse pattern. Despite this, the figures for Asia remained the highest over the two years examined, whereas the opposite was true for Europe.
In 1995, the Asian and Oceanian female populations outnumbered those of males, with about 105 and 104 females, respectively, while both North and Central America recorded comparable data, at 100 women each. Meanwhile, Africa and Europe saw fewer women, around 98 and 90 women for every 100 men.
In 2005, although the population ratio of females to males in Asia declined to almost 105 females, only this region had more females than males. Moreover, the figure for Oceania saw a downward trend and was at parity with that of Africa, which inclined, both at nearly 100 women each. Finally, the gender ratio in both North and Central America declined to approximately 97 females per 100 males.
The table illustrates how many women per 100 men in six regions in the world, in 1995 and 2005.
Overall, there were increases in the female-to-male population ratio in Africa and Europe, while that...
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Pie chart - nhờ cô chấm ạ
The pie charts illustrate informations about the percentages of energy produced from five differents sources (Hydropower, Oil, Nuclear power, Coal, Natural Gas) in a country between 1983 and 2003.
It is clear that oil is a popular energy , which slight decrease. however hydropower remain unchanged in 1983 and 2003.
To begin with oil in 1983 is the hghest propotion at 42% of total energy. The propotion of energy produced after oil is nuclear power is 20%. Meanwhile only 23% of total energy produced. the figures for were lower , at 11% and 4% respectively.
The year 2003, the percentage of oils is reduced slightly at 38%. The figure for nuclear power rose slowly to 24%%, while that for coal experienced a dramatic fall of nearly 10%.There were sharp increases of 10% in the figures for Nuclear. Hydro power still raimain unchanged at 4 %.
The pie charts illustrate informations about the percentages of energy produced from five differents sources (Hydropower, Oil, Nuclear power, Coal, Natural Gas) in a country between 1983 and 2003.
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The bar chart illustrates the average percentage of weekly income that households spent on eight different groups of things in the two years 1968 and 2018.
Overall, in 1968, most families paid money to buy food, while leisure became the top priority that they allocated their weekly income for after a half of century.
In 1968, most families’ income per week was spent on food, whose percentage peaked at 35% initially. The runner-up was housing and clothing and footwear which made up the same proportion (10%). In addition, household goods, personal goods, transport and leisure were at approximately the same rate (8%). It is also striking that people spent the least amount of money on fuel and power.
In the next five decades, families prioritized their money for pastimes, which significantly reached up to 22%. Meanwhile, the least amount of their weekly income was spent on fuel and power and personal goods with a mere 4%. What is more, transport and housing also comprised a considerable amount of weekly income with slightly under a fifth and slightly lower than a quarter respectively. Moving on to clothing and footwear and personal goods, which both consisted of almost 5%.
The bar chart illustrates the average percentage of weekly income that households spent on eight different groups of things in the two years 1968 and 2018.
Overall, in 1968, most families paid money...
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Information is depicted in the pie charts as to the proportion of energy consumption for various purposes, and that of the corresponding greenhouse gas emissions from this energy consumption in an average household in Australia.
It is remarkable that heating and water heating make up a large percentage of energy use, whereas most greenhouse gas emissions come from water heating and other appliances.
Most average Australian households consume energy for heating and water heating, with 42% and 30% all told, respectively. These figures make those used for lighting and cooling pale by comparison, at 4% and 2%, respectively. Other appliances take another 15%, which is roughly twice as high as the percentage of energy used for refrigeration.
Water heating is also a source of greenhouse gas emissions, taking up almost a third of total emissions. The second-largest amount of emissions comes from other appliances, with 28%. Interestingly, despite taking up the biggest percentage of energy use, heating is only responsible for 15%, and the figure is nearly the same as that for refrigeration. The remaining 11 percent comes from lighting and cooling.
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Information is depicted in the pie charts as to the proportion of energy consumption for various purposes, and that of the corresponding greenh...
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dạ thầy cô chữa giùm em bài này vs ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ
The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides statistics on the e-commerce purchases made by businesses by industry in Canada over a 5-years period from 2015.
In general, The figure for the Information and communications had been in the top spot during the survey time. Additionally, an upward trend was roughly the norm in the chart.
Regarding the first half of the period of 5 years, the extent of the Information and communications commenced in the highest position with a slight surpass to 60%. Thereafter, there was an incredible upsurge to 70% in 2017. On the other hand, the percentage of construction started at the lowest point at 22%, then it maintained a steady rise to 35% in 2017. Furthermore, Reatail and Manufacturing shared the comparable figure with 32%, both experienced a leap in 2017 with 45% and 52% respectively. Eventually, the statistics of the Wholesale was ranked second in 2015, then skyrocketed at a staggering rate to 53% in 2017.
In terms of the second half, meanwhile, the proportion of the group of the 3 first purchases was matched by a roughly similar trend ( increased significantly to 58%, 55%, and 62% respectively), that of retail dipped slightly to 54%, and for the Information and communications, it diminished rapidly to 59%.
The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and...
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