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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read moreAnh Thư
30/9/2024
Em mong được thầy cô sửa bài ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều lắm ạ.
The pictures describe now West Park Secondary School changed after some developments over a period of 30 years. Overall, the West Park Secondary School witness radical changes with the most noticeable being new spaces. In 1950, the main road was to the north of a school and some houses. The school was left of the houses which were opposite to the farmland. At bottom left hand corner, there was a playground. In 1980, the school and the playground were still remain but the houses and the farmland ans were flatted. The houses are were transformed into car park and science block. They constructed the science block next to the main building. The car park was to the west of science block. Farm land was replaced by sports field. In 2010, main building and science block weren't changed. They constructed the playground, made it smaller to have way for sports field which was relocated to behind the school. Car park was extended and replaced the old sports field. The pictures describe now West Park Secondary School changed after some developments over a period of 30 years. Overall, the West Park Secondary School witness radical changes with the most noticea... Read moreMingoc
27/9/2024
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
According some individuals, accepting a bad situation such as unsatisfied jobs or poor was the best way to face with it .Otherwise, others believe that trying and improving such situations are better. In my opinion, I think that attempt to improve the situations have the advantages outweigh the first statement On the one hand, if we always deny and complain about our bad situation we have to face , it will put a huge pressure in our mind and we can't do anything better because we are thinking too much about the bad problems. For example, when we only graduated one year and we can't have a perfect jobs because of lack of experiences, if we can't accept this situation we will cannot do our job well and never advance. The only things we can do are accept that we don't have enough ability and experience to work in the company we like and do as well as we can for our temporary job. On the other hand, I believe that the bad situation make successful. In all period of our life , we have to face to numerous problems and unexpected situations . It depend on how old you are and how much crucial of this situation we face that we can choose to accept it or solve it . However if you can continue try and work , do it instead of accept it because everyone only live once, if you want and have enough motivation , you should try your best to solve and make this situation better. For example, if we failed to apply in our dream company, don't only accept that we just can work in a small company , start with small company to collect experience instead, then level up our skill and ability and keep trying in the next time to apply in this country and take all chances we have to improve ourselves, that is the best way. In conclusion, I am not completely disagree with accepting a bad situation and enjoying what we have , However if you still have ability and health keep trying to change this bad situation to the better one According some individuals, accepting a bad situation such as unsatisfied jobs or poor was the best way to face with it .Otherwise, others believe that trying and improving such situations are better.... Read morePhạm Bảo Vân
30/9/2024
Attentive Student
Mong thầy cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The maps show art gallery in Australia in 1950 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. ANSWER: The maps illustrate the layout of an Australian art gallery from 1950 to now. Overall, there are several changes of the location and additions of some facilities. In 1950, a Sculpture section was centrally located in the art gallery and an entrance in front of it . On the left side, there was a coffee shop, with the Temporary Exhibition and Bookshop section below. At the right corner, Early European Art was situated at the top, with Middle European Art and Australia Art under. In addition, there was a courtyard along the back of the art gallery. At present, there are some transformations including: Australia Aboriginal Art is newly added behind the Sculpture, the courtyard is removed. Children art school is built at the former location's cafe, and a new toilet next to the latter location’s cafe. Temporary Exhibition is transformed below the toilet and cafe. On the right side, Australian Art was moved at the top with Early European and Middle European under. Asian Art was added at the bottom. Moreover, the entrance, Sculpture and Bookshop remain unchanged. The maps show art gallery in Australia in 1950 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. ANSWER... Read more???
30/9/2024
em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ
The bar charts provide information about the purchasing of food and goods in supermarkets in three different countries in Europe from 1998 to 2008. Overall, an upward trend can be seen in supermarket sales in all countries, regardless of the type of products. Additionally, supermarkets in Country 3 stated the lowest percentage of all products over the period. Regarding food sales, in 1998, around 10% and roughly 23% of food were sold for consumers in Country 1 and Country 2, respectively, before the trend increased significantly ten years later (approximately 35%) in Country 1, surpassing that of country 2 (just over 25%), although the figure of country 1 was lower compared to country 2 in 1998. Meanwhile, food purchases in country 3 remained relatively low, accounting for less than 10% in both years, despite a slight increase. A comparable pattern emerged in the sales of goods. Initially, only below 5% of goods were purchased in country 1, after an eightfold increase can be observed to nearly 40% in 2008. Country 3 also witnessed dramatic growth (from just over 2% to almost 15%), however, they consistently registered the lowest proportion of goods bought in supermarkets. Country 2 led in 1998, with almost 25% of goods purchased, however, it just saw a modest rise in 2008 (around 8%) The bar charts provide information about the purchasing of food and goods in supermarkets in three different countries in Europe from 1998 to 2008. Overall, an upward trend can be seen in supermark... Read moreEraser07
26/9/2024
Dạ em mong các thầy cô chấm chữa đề task 2 giúp em ạ. Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be no longer necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that public museums and art galleries will be soon unnecessary due to the function of a computer that can help people to enjoy historical objects and works. Personally, i am totally disagree, computer might bring a lots of incredible tools for us in modern day but it can not completely substitute the real valuation of life. As the existence of computer is to help us access information and images quicker but this is not the case for historical objects and works, yet it can not describe 100 percent the details of the image. For example, some pictures of Holywood actors might different from how they actually look in real life. In addition, if people saw an artwork or object on the internet it could lead to a misconception, so to give respect to the author and understand deeply about the historical features of an artwork or object, it is crucial to witness those in a museum or art gallery. Furthermore, our brains tend to receive a hundred of information online and remember a handful of it, so if we have a chance to see an object and art work in the museum or a gallery, it will cause a strong impression and emotion to us. It is the same as reading a book, holding a book in our hand can bring us a different experience than reading in online. Although it is convenient to search for the images of a historical art work or object on the internet, those images will becoming vague in our brains. In conclusion, there are many reasons not to see a historical artwork or object through a screen because of its unrealistic. I would rather to spend time in a public museum or art gallery to find more useful information. Many people believe that public museums and art galleries will be soon unnecessary due to the function of a computer that can help people to enjoy historical objects and works. Personally, i am totall... Read morelevietvu
26/9/2024
Mong các thầy cô chấm bài giúp em ạ
All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community. To what do you agree or disagree? Due to the rising need for volunteering in communities, it has been thought that all university students should participate in helping their local community free of charge. While this has been thought to boost public awareness and increase community activities, requiring all students to participate in volunteering poses challenges in balancing students' mental health and academic performance. In countries such as Vietnam, undergraduate tends to study more than 13 hours a day, and with an extremely packed schedule, they do not have any extra time for themselves. By integrating volunteering into undergraduates, we could significantly disrupt their agenda. Since community volunteering can take hours, students will have less time to study, socialize, and follow their hobbies. To solve this problem, students would decrease sleep time and raise learning time, which results in an imbalance in our body's health. Because most Vietnamese undergraduates tend to sleep way less than the 9 hours sleeping recommended per day therefore making volunteering mandatory may threaten people in getting their work done and balancing their health. Due to this struggle, we could be seeing an unprecedented decline in individual subject grades, as well as a reduction in mental and physical health that is caused by lack of sleep time. Thus, this can respond to a lack of focus, health issues, low-stress resilience, and increased anxiety, and inevitably cause several other problems that could significantly affect one's livelihood. In conclusion, while requiring volunteering in universities could raise public awareness and help others, it will result in student's academic performance and may cause health concerns due to the lack of sleeping. Therefore, volunteering activities should only be encouraged in university but shouldn't be seen as a requirement in order to graduate. All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community. To what do you agree or disagree? Due to the rising need for volunteering in communities, it has been thought... Read moreMingoc
26/9/2024
Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that governments should make every universities to free for students due to everyone have the rights to access to higher education. In my point of view, I don't agree with this statements on the first primary reason, I agree that everyone have a right to study in college, however I believe that governments and a lot of organizations now are trying to make the best conditions for poor students who really love studying or have talent can study and I believe that is the best way that can help people who don't have enough money can access to higher education. We can't offer they do more than for everyone because if all the universities are free for everyone, it will lead to the increased rapidly in the score of all universities and it will put a huge pressure on students. While now the number of students suffer depression are increasing especially in high school students so we can't image how much pressure that students will face to if the score increase rapidly in all universities without any fees Furthermore, the governments fund not only spend on education. I believe that if the education develop, it will lead to the development of a country but if government pay all fees to remain all universities in a country , there will not enough money for others aspects of the society such as economic, culture, health. The number of students can find any jobs after graduated college are growing up , so when everyone can access to university it lead to the enormous problem about the number of unemployment rate. I believe that the poor condition cannot ban anyone who really attempt , if their family cannot support them to study in college, they can do it by themselves everything is possible if you word-hard In conclusion , I believe that if government make universities free for all children it can reduce the speed of development of this country and loss the balance in the society Some individuals believe that governments should make every universities to free for students due to everyone have the rights to access to higher education. In my point of view, I don't agree with thi... Read morePhạm Bảo Vân
25/9/2024
Attentive Student
Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. ANSWER: The maps illustrate the transformation of the art gallery's ground floor from 2015 to the present day. Overall, there are several changes of the location, size of sections and the addition of some facilities. In 2015, the receptionist was centrally located in the art gallery, with the stairs behind and opposite was the entrance. At the left corner, there was a cafe, next to the stairs and the gallery office and the exhibition room 4 below. On the right side, occupying three smaller exhibition rooms relatively named 1, 2, 3. At the moment, there are some alterations including: there is an Entrance Hall situated between the receptionist and the entrance. The stairs are downsized, and a newly added lift to facilitate the movement. Moreover, the cafe and the gallery office are transformed into a gallery shop and a vending machine. Exhibition room 4 is removed in favor of Temporary exhibition and Children's area. A ramp for wheelchairs is built leading to the entrance. However, Exhibition room 1, 2, 3 remain unchanged. The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Wr... Read moreberry
24/9/2024
task 2
Task 2: Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However some people think that an interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Given that interviews form the fundamental selection criteria for most prestigious corporations, many people believe that an interview is not a reliable approach to choosing whom to employ. From my perspective, I fully disagree with this statement for two main reasons. Firstly, interviewing can be seen as a great way to choose potential workers because it can foster a strong sense of social cohesion among colleagues. During the interview process, employees tend to show their personalities, such as confidence, diligence, and even kindness, which are some vital factors that most companies demand. As a result, recruiters can have a comprehensive view and make sensible decisions when choosing employees who match their workplace culture. For instance, employers tend to prefer employees who have good attitudes and manners, such as agreeable or easy-going people, creating a harmonious workplace and reducing potential workplace conflicts. Another reason is that interviews can help candidates show their adaptability in various environments and situations, as employers are likely to ask different questions about real-life situations, such as how to deal with different adverse conditions or come up with ideas to overcome hardships, resulting in showing their creativity and flexibility in the work process. For example, many corporations in Vietnam have conducted more than two interviews per job position to know significantly about their potential employees, enhancing the rates of recruiting high-quality and competent workers. In conclusion, I completely disagree that an interview is not a good way to choose who will be employed due to the potential of community bonds and showing candidates’ adaptability, which can help employers opt for appropriate workers. Task 2: Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However some people think that an interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you ag... Read moreberry
24/9/2024
task 1
Task 1: The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The bar chart depicts the expenditure on three categories namely food/drink, restaurant/hotel, and entertainment among five different age groups of British citizens in 2004. Overall, older age groups tended to prioritize food and entertainment, while younger groups favored dining out. Most city-dwellers whose age from 31 spent most money on food and drink, whereas the under 30-year old residents spent just over 5% of total spending. Conversely, they spent the most money on restaurants and hotels, while the 61-75 age group allocated a minimal portion of their budget to these facilities, around 2%, which was the lowest figure shown on the chart. Notably, the figures for 31-45 and 46-60 age groups showed a similar pattern, at approximately 13%. British citizens who aged from 61-75 were attracted to entertainment facilities. They spent 25% of total expenditure on this activity, which was nearly five times as much as that of the under 30 and 31-45 age group. Task 1: The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and... Read moreLora
22/9/2024
Dạ thầy cô chấm chữa luận điểm và ngữ pháp giùm em ạ. Đề bài: Discuss some advantages of handmade products over machine-made products. Use specific reasons and examples in your answer.”
In recent years, many people have started to prefer handmade products over machine-made ones. While both types of products have their own benefits, handmade goods have several advantages that attract consumers. This essay will discuss some of these benefits, such as better quality, uniqueness, and the support for local economies. To begin with, one major advantage of handmade products is their quality. Handmade items are often made with care and attention to detail. Artisans usually use high-quality materials and take the time to ensure that each product is well-made. For example, handmade furniture tends to be more durable than mass-produced items. This focus on quality can result in products that not only look better but also last longer, providing better value for money. Additionally, handmade products are often unique, which is appealing to many buyers. In a world filled with identical, mass-produced items, people often want products that stand out. Handmade goods reflect the individual style and creativity of the maker, making them special. For instance, a handmade piece of jewelry can be customized to fit a customer’s preferences, resulting in a one-of-a-kind item that cannot be found in stores. This uniqueness adds a personal touch, making the purchase more meaningful. Moreover, buying handmade products can have a positive impact on local economies. When consumers choose handmade items, they often support small businesses and local artisans. This helps keep money within the community and can lead to job creation. For example, a local crafts fair featuring handmade goods can attract visitors, boosting sales for various vendors and benefiting the local economy. On the other hand, purchasing machine-made products often supports larger corporations that may not contribute as much to the community. In conclusion, handmade products offer several advantages over machine-made items, including better quality, uniqueness, and support for local economies. As more consumers recognize these benefits, the demand for handmade goods is likely to increase. This trend enriches the marketplace and fosters a greater appreciation for craftsmanship and community. In recent years, many people have started to prefer handmade products over machine-made ones. While both types of products have their own benefits, handmade goods have several advantages that attract... Read moretarget 7.0
22/9/2024
thầy cô chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ. em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ
The chart compares the percentages of resident's habit about buying and drinking coffee and tee in five Australian cities. it is clear that, most people like to go to a coffee shop for buying and drinking while bought fresh coffee is the least popular citizen's coffee and tee buying habits of Australian citizen. In Sydney, the percentage of city residents bought fresh coffee was 43% merely 1% higher than the figure for Melbourne's citizens. Meanwhile, 34% of people bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks in Hobart. The proportion of people bought fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide were nearly the same at 33% and 34%. Citizens in Sydney , Melbourne, Hobart prefered to go to the coffee shop in last 4 weeks were higher than 60%. The figures for Brisbane and Adelaide were 56% and 49% respectively. 50% of Adelaide citizen had habit buy instant coffee, the figures for Sydney and Melbourne were around 45%. The percentage of people who had habits buy instant coffee in Brisbane and Hobart were well over 50% The chart compares the percentages of resident's habit about buying and drinking coffee and tee in five Australian cities. it is clear that, most people like to go to a coffee shop for buying and dr... Read moreMingoc
21/9/2024
Most countries aim to improve their standard of living through economic development, but many important social values can be lost as a result. Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Most countries are paying all their attention to economic development to improve their quality of live, so they are losing many crucial society values . In my point of view, I completely agree that there will be more advantage than disadvantage of economic development On the negative site, thein the world now without any wars and the trend of all countries in the world are peaceful and cooperation so we won't try to improve army a lot and the way to protect our country now is a stronger economic. So it is easily to understand why most countries now are concentrating on economic than other aspects. However it lead to a problem that some society values will be forgotten . For example, many young people are pursuiting of economic growth so choose leave family early and the number of depression are increasing rapidly . Despite economic growth can lead to the improvements in many sectors but the more improvement in city the more pollution will happen. On the other hand, the grow of economic can make a lot of long benefits for a country, firstly it can help the tourism development so we can spread our cultural for the world, it also make more new jobs to deal with the unemployment problem, and improve the quality of the future labor force. If we want to protect and improve our cultural values , the main thing we need is a stable economic, for example many countries can recover and preserve their culture by film or entertainment devices such as korea or japan. I believe that both social and economic are have the influence in each other but the conditions to preserve our social values is economic Most countries are paying all their attention to economic development to improve their quality of live, so they are losing many crucial society values . In my point of view, I completely agree that th... Read moreMingoc
20/9/2024
The charts below show the usage of coal, oil, hydropower, wind and renewable energy for fuel production in 2002 and at present.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of different energy sources since 2002 until now. Overall, Most features had an increase trend whereas the opposite was true for other Renewables and Oil. However oil still the most popular fuel over the period time. In 2002, the ussage of oil stood at 52% but it decreased rapidly to 45% at the moment However, it is always the highest figure of fuel production from 2002 until now. The proportion of other renewables sources accounted for 1,2 % before dropped slightly to 1% currently. The figure of Wind energy had significant. increased since 2002 which stood at 0,8%, five times lower than now 5%. Both Hydropower and coal energy have the same trend during the period time while in 2002 Hydropower was 8% and coal was 38%, then they increased slowly to 10% and 39%, respectively, now The pie charts illustrate the percentage of different energy sources since 2002 until now. Overall, Most features had an increase trend whereas the opposite was true for other Renewables and Oil. How... Read moreTrần Việt An
20/9/2024
Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The bar graph describes how many people participated in 4 types of sports in a particular region in 20 years, beginning from 1985 to 2005 Overall, it is clear that there was a significant decrease in the number of people playing rugby, while the number of people who played tennis increased over the period. Additionally, the trends for Basketball and Badminton were relatively stable. Regarding Tennis sport, in 1985 150 people who joined in dramatically surged to 200 people in 1995, and the number of players continued to rise to 220 people in 2005. By contrast, rugby had the highest number of players in 2985, with 245 people, but witnessed a steady fall to 200 players in 1995. In 2005, this sport became less popular, declining to exactly 50 players. In terms of Basketball and Badminton, there was a fluctuation in the number of basketball players in 1985.with 70 players, which still remained unchanged until 2005. Badminton sport had the same trend, standing at 50 players until 2005. The bar graph describes how many people participated in 4 types of sports in a particular region in 20 years, beginning from 1985 to 2005 Overall, it is clear that there was a significant decrease in... Read moreberry
18/9/2024
task 1
Task 1: The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. The pie charts depict the five favorite social media platforms namely Facebook, Twitter, Linkedin, Google+, and Pinterest in Australia from 2011 to 2013. Overall, Facebook was the highest priority in Australia over the given period, while a few people used Google+ and Pinterest. Another notable point is an increase in the favorite rates of almost all social media channels, except for Facebook. Most people in Australia were attracted to Facebook and Twitter, which had the biggest shares during the 3 years. Twitter occupied 21% in 2011 and went up negligibly to 25% in the end. Facebook still maintained its leadership in the industry despite a significant decrease. Starting with 59%, it fell substantially to 38% in 2013. Regarding the remaining social platforms, Australians did not use Google+ and Pinterest as much as the other platforms, with 5% in the first year. However, their proportions gradually rose to 10% and 6% in 2012 and ended with 14% and 8% in 2013, respectively. Lastly, there was a marginal rise in the LinkedIn percentage, from 10% to 15% by 2013. Task 1: The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. The pie charts depict the five favorite social media platforms namely Facebook, Twitter, Linkedin, Google+, and Pi... Read moreMingoc
18/9/2024
task 2 In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend
Most people believe that shopping now can be recognized as a hobby rather than an usual rountine task as it as was in the past. In my point of view, I completely agree that this statement has more negative than positive effects, because it can cause people addiction and financial issues. On the negative site, nowadays more and more people has enjoyment from shopping, and this will lead to increase the development of shopping addiction due to the grow up dopamine when we buy new things but it dopamine vanish very quickly so people will buy news early. And it is unhelpful for all people because because it is very hard to get out of addiction. For example, shopping addiction will similar to gambling and we need to treat it. There were a lot of ways to produce healthy dopamine instead of shopping like: jaging, reading, studying. Futhermone, Shopping addiction will lead to numerous troubles in finance . All business will know the way to spectacular by marketing in all entertainment facilities to Research more consumers. As a result, more and more young people face to finance problems due to their shopping behavior .For instance, in the past when economics didn't improve like today, people just go shopping to buy crucial things, which were helpful for their daily because the marketing wasn't strength enough. In conclusion, I strongly believe that shopping shouldn't be identified as a hopby because of this negative effects if we misuse it Most people believe that shopping now can be recognized as a hobby rather than an usual rountine task as it as was in the past. In my point of view, I completely agree that this statement has more neg... Read moreMingoc
20/9/2024
The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the percentage of four types of vehicles used in UK over the period 40 years begin in 1965. Overall, Private cars were the best choice with the highest proportion over the period time whereas the opposite was true for Recreational vehicles. The percentage of private cars had an increased trend during 1965, 1985 and 2005 which stood at 40%, 55% and 60%, respectively. Whereas Lorries and other vehicles were remain unchanged accounted for 20% between 1965 before decreased a half into 10% in 2005 In 1965 The proportion of public transport users Stood at 25%, then decreased to 20% in 1985 and back grow up to 22% in 2005. The lowest percentage in three pies were for Recreational vehicles. In 1965, the proportion of recreational vehicles stood at 15%, three times higher than that in 1985 .After that, In 2005, it increased to 8% The pie graphs illustrate the percentage of four types of vehicles used in UK over the period 40 years begin in 1965. Overall, Private cars were the best choice with the highest proportion over the... Read moreLora
18/9/2024