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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The diagram describes the process of making a tepee. There are a total of eight stages in this process. Each of which will be described below.
Overall, the diagram shows how you can build a tepee in just a few simple steps.
First, find the rope and seize it tightly with three sticks. Secondly, ask two friends one to hold these sticks while the other raising these sticks up the ground. Thirdly, secure the rope that you have tied to the sticks and pull it to the ground. Next, pull the rope as tightly as you can toward you as you stand on the ground. After that, getting a huge canvas to put it on the top of those sticks that you have secured. Then, cover the whole are of the sticks that have exposed to the sun. In addition, put those metal pins in the canvas to protect it from the strong wind. Finally, secure it with the iron column that you have pound it to the ground.
In conclusion, we need to follow these steps to build a tent moreover protect it from the wind.
The diagram describes the process of making a tepee. There are a total of eight stages in this process. Each of which will be described below.
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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, more and more people opt for comestic surgery to change their apperance more beautiful and improve their confidence. In my view, everyone have the right with their body and this circumstance have both pros and cons affect on society development.
Regarding the reasons, Improving appearance can help people to be more confident and happy, but not all people have enough time to change a little bit by the time, so they can choose to do cosmetic surgery. Because it will save their time and effort to change their look. And in the world, it is developing radiply especially in some countries such as Korea, Thailand, where have the high-technology in cosmetic operations can make people feel safe when operate to improve their appearance without dangerous as the past.
Concerning the affects, doing excersices or eating healthy only have a limited impact on our look, while doing cosmetic surgery can change the construction of our face and our body so it can have more effecient to change our appearance. The development of cosmetic will increase the quality of medical technology and help many people who suffer from some diseases that make their face deformed, help they more confident and eseasier to get a job. In contrast, doing cosmetic sugery is still quite dangerous despite having a variety of high-technology devices, the rate of bad consequences appear after doing cosmetic is about 40% to 50%. With the increase in the number of people who had done surgery, many people now have the same appearance despite do not have any related.
In conclusion, I believe that all people have the right to decide their appearance their body. However, if it is not nesscery, we need to think clearly before having a cosmetic surgery because it have both disadvantages and advantages.
Nowadays, more and more people opt for comestic surgery to change their apperance more beautiful and improve their confidence. In my view, everyone have the right with their body and this circumstance...
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The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made.
The diagram depicts the steps involved in producing recycled paper.
Overall, there are four main stages in the process, starting with grinding paper, followed by several process steps, ending with heating and washing to make the final product.
Regarding the two first stages, used paper was passed in the conveyor belt, which comes to a large bath. After immersing in the water and chemical, pulp is made. Next, the substance was purified by a filter machine, then it will be poured in a water tank.
Concerning the remaining stages, two primary substances, namely water and soap are added to the cleaning process with an air pump. Once the pulp is cleaned, unwanted elements like ink will be removed. Following this, the mixture goes through a pipe to come to the next steps, where the resulting substance is created in a heavy machine. Here the purities pulp is subjected to two heated rollers to filter out excess water. Finally, recycled paper such as toilet paper is distributed either directly to consumers.
The diagram depicts the steps involved in producing recycled paper.
Overall, there are four main stages in the process, starting with grinding paper, followed by several process steps, ending with he...
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Some people prefer to provide help or support directly to the local community. Others prefer to give money to national or international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
The question of how best to do charity activities has emerged as a critical issue in today’s fast-changing society. Opinions are divided on this topic, with some asserting that they are keen on helping the local community on their own, and others prefer to fundraise for some charity establishments. From my perspective, I contend that both views have advantages and disadvantages, and I will justify my position in this essay.
Some individuals enjoy participating in specific activities that benefit the local community. This is because they could participate in their charity work, gain experiences from it, and also enrich their knowledge and skills. For instance, people who have a chance to do voluntary work may expand their social networks and pick up a variety of talents, including management and communication skills. They could also understand others' difficult circumstances, which could give them compassion. It also builds stronger local connections and trust. However, in some cases, it takes a lot of time to join the charity work, and nowadays, people tend to lead busy lives. That is why some people tend to give money to some charitable organizations. Numerous humanitarian programs are always organized by several national or international entities for donations. Individuals who have a good financial background and little free time choose to volunteer in this manner because of its potentially broader impact and because it could address larger-scale issues. For example, UNICEF is an organization within the United Nations that focuses on improving the lives of children and their families around the world through funding. This organization receives money from people from all over the world. It also provides professional management of resources.
In conclusion, while both methods of donating have a beneficial surface, it is important not to overlook the potential risk and disadvantages they offer. In my opinion, by implementing a multifaceted approach and doing well-thought-out research before forming the intention of doing charitable work, individuals can alleviate the negative impacts and optimize the benefits of this activity.
The question of how best to do charity activities has emerged as a critical issue in today’s fast-changing society. Opinions are divided on this topic, with some asserting that they are keen on helpin...
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Employers should give its staff at least four weeks of holidays a year to make employees better at jobs,To what extent do you agree and disagree?
In the contemporary era, it is a prevalent
debate among employers whether they should provide their staffs with four weeks of time off yearly or they give their employees less time off to make them perform better at jobs. Although both schools of thought hold merit, I support the idea that workers should be provided with about a month of holidays per year to yield the better outcome by some reasons that are explained further in this essay.
On the one hand,the breakthroughs in humankind accidentally impact heavily on workers .Specifically,working in this period of time usually requires high capacity of consistency and creativity since the technological advancements have offered a wide range of convenient sevices such as : AI, ChatGPT,which can take over some tasks that used to need humans to manage .Hence, residents have to compete more intensely in hope of getting a job as well as the jobs are particularly challenging.For that reason, modern employees frequently under the working pressure,leading to a poor morale and mentality and affect to their performance.Therefore, a considerable amount of time off would help them to refresh and relax their mind,which can obviously increase the quality of working products.
On the other hand, an amount of holidays can result in the better products due to the sufficient preparing.To be specific , when employers assign crucial projects to their staffs, they would receive an unexpected responds if their employees had time to complete it freely.For instance ,UNIQLO which is a large fashion company permits their workers to get a three to four week of time off when they have to accomplish a vital tasks. As a result , UNIQLO products are highly appreciate at the creative style of each clothes.As this case reveal , the more time staffs do not get to work,the better outcome they produce
To sum up, there are mixed opinions about whether companies should provide a considerable amount of holidays or keep working as usual.Nonetheless,I firmly believe that the more employees’ day off are given,the better performance they make at job.
Employers should give its staff at least four weeks of holidays a year to make employees better at jobs,To what extent do you agree and disagree?
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task 2
In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The increased incidents of living alone have brought along a variety of negative effects. In this essay, factors that contribute to this problem and possible ways to solve it will be analyzed.
There are several reasons for this trend, including the isolation between parents and children. In many modern families, parents spend much time working out, therefore children are often taught to do many things independently, such as taking care of themselves or going to school alone, making them become independent people who tend to opt for living alone. Another reason is that living with families, especially with strict parents, puts people under pressure. Many young generations have been told to follow their parents’ instructions without any objection, resulting in depression and the desire to live alone. For instance, many young generations nowadays feel more comfortable and content when they live alone because they can make any decisions independently, not needing to obey their parents. As a result, it can increase their self-reliance which is necessary for their future career.
Many solutions should be implemented to address this problem. Firstly, many companies should reduce employees’ working time, therefore parents can spend more time taking care of their children, leading to a balance between work and parental responsibilities. As a result, children might feel attached to their parents and not want to live independently when they grow up. Secondly, parents should allow children to make decisions about many aspects of their life, instead of forcing them into their parental guidance. Consequently, children may feel loved when living with their own families, leading to not living alone.
In conclusion, unconnected parent-child relationships and strict parenting are the two main causes of living alone. Fortunately, reducing working time and respecting children’s desires can mitigate the independent living rates, leading to the long-term well-being of humans and society.
In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
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Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?
Although individuals are informed about advantageous and disadvantageous activities, millions of them continue doing the latter. The underlying factors behind this phenomenon will be explored in this essay, which will also propose several workable solutions.
Admittedly, continuing unhealthy behaviors is ascribed to several rationales, chief of which is the competitive economic landscape. Indubitably, the strenuous efforts closely associated with the ever-increasing demands of high-paying employment usually leave the workforce physically and mentally exhausted, potentially provoking increasing dependence on processed food such as hamburgers and hot dogs among working-age communities. Additionally, as the digital platform, such as Facebook or Instagram, offers alluring content, many young people fail to resist the temptation, with children’s excessive exposure to such content. This excessive use is a significant culprit of provoking physical inactivity.
To address this issue, several viable and practical approaches should be embraced. More active government intervention to provide healthy meals to employees in the professional context is of great importance, which helps laborers consume a more adequate amount of nutrition. Imposing higher tax on processed meals is also a deterrent effect, which directly affects workers’ budget if these working-age individuals consume these meals. This impact usually discourages the consumption of processed food among the workforce. Another solution is that parents should encourage their children to be more active in social interactions or physical activity by accompanying them to community centers or sending their children to athletic clubs. Were the combination of these approaches implemented efficaciously, a collective shift towards a healthier behavior would presumably develop.
In conclusion, fierce economic competition and social media have their roots in the ubiquity of unhealthy behaviors, despite the fact that people are scientifically well-informed about advantageous and disadvantageous activities. To mitigate the issues effectually, the combination of the aforementioned vehicles should be adopted.
Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?...
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ
The line graph provides information about the enrollment rate of English and French teachers in Ontario from 2001 to 2007
Overall, the need for learning French rose over the recorded time ,which is illustrated by the successful rate in getting a job.Meanwhile, It can be seen that English teachers tended to hardly get a job
According to the data, there were a similar downward pattern of both type of teachers between 2001 and 2002.Particularly,the figures for first-year English as well as French instructors dipped slightly from around 72 percent to 58 percent and 70 percent to nearly 53 percent.Nonetheless, prominent differences was occurred in 2002 and 2003.Although the figure for French-language teachers suddenly went up to approximately 68 percent whilst the percentage of English instructors continue falling to 40 percent
In addition , a upward trend was seen in both figures over the two-year period started in 2003 when the proportion began to increase slightly.Furthermore , the successful rate of having a job of French-language teachers fluctuated between 2005 and 2006 before peaking at 2007 with about 73 percent .In contrast , the occupation rate of English teachers remained a downward trend in the same period , before reaching the bottom at 2007 with just around 28 percent
The line graph provides information about the enrollment rate of English and French teachers in Ontario from 2001 to 2007
Overall, the need for learning French rose over the recorded time ,which...
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The two bar charts below illustrate the percentage of
hiring workers of both genders in Australia, Japan,
and Ireland in 2005 and 2015.
Overall, both graphs show that men comprise the
majority in two years and women comprise the
minority in both years. However, the number of both
genders in 2005 fluctuated steadily while the number
of occupations in the two genders in 2015 slightly
differed.
Looking at the two graphs more closely, one can see
that Japan has the most hard-working men at about
79% while having the lowest number of women only
from 30% to 35%. While in Australia has the second
most diligent working men 71% and 55% of intelligent
women. Moving to Ireland having just 70% of
working men and 50% of fruitful women respectively.
In conclusion, three countries from different
continents have a strong working force of both
genders but a little variation in 2005 and 2015.
The two bar charts below illustrate the percentage of
hiring workers of both genders in Australia, Japan,
and Ireland in 2005 and 2015.
Overall, both graphs show that men comprise the
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task 2
Task 1: The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the striking changes made to a small museum and its external areas in 1990 and 2010. Overall, it appears that the museum's surroundings became a more convenient and entertaining area with a new car park.
In 1990, the museum had three exhibition rooms, one of which was larger than the others. The larger one was in an L-shape, next to the restaurant and the shop, while the two remaining rooms were located in the corner of the museum, near the entrance. However, in 2010, the two small rooms were combined into a large room, whereas the big room was narrowed, becoming a rectangle.
Regarding the museum’s surroundings, there used to be a cottage on the left of the main road in 1990. Conversely, the house has been replaced by a new café, which might have served people who visited the museum. In addition, the huge garden opposite the old cottage has been converted into a new car park, with far more parking lots for visitors.
Task 1: The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relev...
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Parents should encourage their teenagers to get a part-time job in their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that parents should support their children by working part-time during their leisure time. I agree with the opinion above because working part-time has multiple benefits.
There are numerous benefits to parents encouraging their adolescent kids to engage in part-time employment because it can improve personal skills. Firstly, soft skills can be learned by teenagers when they devote time to do a part-time job, which allows them to become sociable by communicating with others such as managers, and colleagues. As a result, children tend to become proficient in interpersonal skills. Meanwhile, if young adults aren’t employed while still in school, they will allocate time to play video games or media, which can be detrimental.
This is because excessive exposure to blue light on smartphones causes children to have some problems with their eyes.
Furthermore, teenagers not only can gain more knowledge about financial management but also become financially independent while they are doing a part-time job. More particularly, learning how to invest money early helps prevent taking out loans or getting into debt while handling emergencies, especially for children who have been raised in a poor family. Consequently, it develops responsibility and forward-thinking. In contrast, the extravagant use of money on unnecessary purchases might be adopted when they become adults, leading to an unstable life in the future.
In conclusion, I firmly agree with the opinion that teenagers should be supported by their parents to work in their time off. It helps children build important skills such as interpersonal skills and financial management.
It is true that parents should support their children by working part-time during their leisure time. I agree with the opinion above because working part-time has multiple benefits.
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ
The given chart provides information about the proportion of individuals, who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables daily, in the UK between 2001 and 2008
As can be seen from the chart , there was an overall upward trend in all figures in the recorded period. Notably,the consumption rate consistently remained its order over the given period with women take the lead , man stay in the second and children make up for the least
According to the data , the proportion of the young and men were recorded to have the similar trend over the five-year period started in 2001.Specifically, the figures for both kind of consumers stabilized from 2001 to 2003, with nearly 12 percent for young people and approximately 17 percent belonged to male individuals, before going up slightly in the following two years.Meanwhile, the percentage of female vegetables consumers experienced a minor increase from 22 percent in 2001 to 32 percent in 2005 before peaking at 2006 with about 35 percent
Nonetheless, prominent differences began to appear in the end of the period. Particularly , the proportion for female vegetable eaters fell gradually while that figure for children had minor variations and male consumers stayed unchanged
The given chart provides information about the proportion of individuals, who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables daily, in the UK between 2001 and 2008
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Many people suppose that well-being is a primary human necessity, which leads to the argument that medical services should not be run by private-oriented companies. However, I was convinced that private medicine, despite its associated several drawbacks, brings about more significant benefits for citizens.
On the one hand, private medicine comes with several disadvantages. Private healthcare operates with a strong profit motive, concentrating on updating cutting-edge facilities and services, hiring many good professional doctors and nurses, and investing money in marketing to expand markets. However, it is hard to approach a large number of people, such as in Vietnam, where the predominantly private healthcare system has led to exorbitant costs, such as normal medical expenses without insurance accounting for around two million, making it inaccessible for low-income families.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that the advantages of private healthcare are announced. Private medicine plays a crucial role in alleviating patients from state-owned healthcare facilities during the period of high demand. In addition, private healthcare institutions solve paperwork quickly reducing queueing time, compared to government hospitals. Especially, in Covid 19 pandemic, government hospitals could not meet large numbers of patients, therefore private ones played a pivotal element in helping patients cope with disease with high-quality services.
In conclusion, while many people say that private healthcare is expensive, I also strongly agree that public healthcare reduces pressure on state-owned healthcare institutions and provides and bring about many worthwhile experiences for patiens.
Many people suppose that well-being is a primary human necessity, which leads to the argument that medical services should not be run by private-oriented companies. However, I was convinced that priva...
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The diagram shows Lakeside development between years 2000 and 2009.
The diagrams delineate the changes to the Lakeside between 2000 and 2009. Overall, this area experienced dramatic modifications and transformations, the most significant of which is the expansion of the industrial complex, the introduction of a shopping center, and the addition of a complex of universities and offices.
Regarding the northwest of the Lakeside, while the residential space remained untouched throughout, the old town was substituted by a new complex of offices and universities, accompanied by a novel car park, constructed on the former location of the disused warehouse, which was contiguous to the previous old town. Moving to the east, the lake, running from north to south, was narrowed to form a small pond.
Concerning the southwestern part, while the adjacent school retained its original state, the art center and the residential area were repurposed for a new theater and a place for shopping, respectively. With respect to the southeast, the small industrial zone and the housing units were incorporated to become a larger industrial complex.
The diagram shows Lakeside development between years 2000 and 2009.
The diagrams delineate the changes to the Lakeside between 2000 and 2009. Overall, this area experienced dramatic modifications and...
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many contend that increasing the provision of sports facilities is the most efficacious method to improve public health. However, it is also argued that the effectiveness of this approach is insignificant and that other measures are better options. This essay will elaborate on both contrasting viewpoints before supporting the latter.
Admittedly, advocates of installing sports clubs often point to a close correlation between fitness and regular exercise. However, a severe shortage of a variety of athletic clubs, such as swimming pools, gyms, or tennis courts to cater for all ages, levels of fitness, and interests, is a significant barrier against communities’ access to physical activities. If this obstacle were addressed effectively by introducing more easy-to-reach local sports amenities, residents would be highly motivated. This enthusiasm strongly fuels residents to make exercise a part of their lives, potentially making substantial contributions to the enhancement of public health.
Conversely, solely focusing on the provision of health clubs is too narrow an approach. For example, the increasing ubiquity of sports clubs in Saigon, the economic center of Vietnam, is not synonymous with an increase in the community’s engagement in physical activities. Moreover, medical conditions are closely associated with unhealthy dietary choices. Therefore, raising the public awareness of healthy food such as vegetables, fruit, and fish as well as a proper consumption habit through schools, newspapers, and social media is of greater importance. If people gain full cognizance of the rudimentary knowledge about nutrition, they will presumably adopt a healthier eating behavior, leading to the higher likelihood of an improvement in public health.
In conclusion, while the availability of sports facilities is relatively advantageous, relying solely on these amenities may yield only negligible improvement. Therefore, educating the public about healthy dietary practice can be a more promising approach towards improving the health of the public.
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other mea...
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The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The diagram delineates a detailed comparison of young people’s preference for different types of transport across various countries in a single year. Overall, cars are the most preferred by the young populations in almost all the nations, with the most significant figure being seen in Italy. Additionally, while the young French gravitate towards bicycles most, their American counterparts show the least interest in this category.
Regarding car preference among the youth, Italy tops the chart, with precisely 75%, distantly followed by identical figures for the United States and the UK, recording 60%. Meanwhile, France is the only country where the popularity of bicycle outnumbers that of cars among the young residents, approximately 45% compared to 40%.
Concerning the remaining categories, 30% of young Americans prefer motorcycles, basically triple that of young individuals of the other countries which show relatively comparable figures, at about 10%. The UK records 30% of its young people who have claimed that they are interested in bicycles. This figure is significantly higher than similar proportions for Italy and the United states, documenting roughly a tenth.
The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.
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The plans below show a theater in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes to a theater over a two-year period starting from 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the structure of the theater was expanded and many facilities were replaced.
In 2010, there was a café shop to the left of the entrance, but two years later, it was replaced with a ticket office. In the southwest of the main building, there was an expansion to the west, where the admin office and ticket office were replaced with a small admin office in the corner next to the new restaurants. On the second floor, the main auditorium remained unchanged; however, new showers were added next to the right corner of it.
The significant changes were on the third floor. To the right of the main building was the storage, but it was changed to media in 2012. And on the opposite side, storage was built as large as the new media. The old media and the stage, located in the main building, were the same size; by contrast, in the next two years, the media was reconstructed into a small hall, so the stage was expanded.
The maps illustrate the changes to a theater over a two-year period starting from 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the structure of the theater was expanded and many facilities were replaced.
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Which is more important in the workplace: Emotional Intelligence or Intellectual Intelligence?
In today’s competitive work environment, both emotional intelligence (EI) and intellectual intelligence (IQ) play crucial roles. However, I believe that emotional intelligence is more important for long-term success in the workplace.
Firstly, emotional intelligence enables individuals to understand and manage their own emotions as well as those of others. This skill is essential for effective communication and teamwork. For instance, employees with high EI can navigate conflicts more smoothly, fostering a positive work atmosphere. They are also more adept at building strong relationships, which can enhance collaboration and productivity.
On the other hand, intellectual intelligence, which includes problem-solving abilities and analytical skills, is undoubtedly important. It allows employees to perform tasks efficiently and make informed decisions. However, in many cases, technical skills alone are not enough. A highly intelligent individual may struggle to work with a team if they lack emotional awareness. Thus, while IQ contributes to individual performance, EI is vital for group dynamics.
Moreover, companies increasingly value emotional intelligence in leadership roles. Leaders with high EI are better at inspiring and motivating their teams, which can lead to higher employee satisfaction and retention rates. This ultimately benefits the organization as a whole.
In conclusion, while both emotional and intellectual intelligence are important in the workplace, emotional intelligence holds greater significance for fostering a collaborative and productive work environment. Investing in EI development can lead to more effective teams and successful organizations.
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The pie chart describes the scale of primary school classes in four nations in Australia in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of classes that had 21-25 students was the highest in all four countries, whereas classes that had fewer than 20 students were the most common. By contrast, classes that contained 30 students or more were a rarity in these areas in 2010.
Looking at New South Wales, 37% of classes had 21-25 students, followed by those with 26-30 students ( 33% and 26% respectively). In South Australia, the proportion of classes that contained 21-25 students or less ranged from 33% to 36%, there was 28% of classes that had 26-30 students. Notable, the figures for the biggest class size in both regions were the same, standing at only 4%.
Turning to the Australian Capital Territory and Western Australia, classes consisting of 21-25 students account for more than half of all class sizes, compared to 38% of classes having no more than 20 students. There was a stark contrast to classes with 26-30 students, making up one-tenth of the total, ten times higher than the smallest class size. In Western Australia, the dominant percentage of classes for 21-25 was still the most popular, with 42%, followed by 27% and 26% for classes with 26-30 students and 20 students or fewer. Additionally, there was just 5% of classes intended for 30 students or more.
The pie chart describes the scale of primary school classes in four nations in Australia in 2010.
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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been argued that politicians' personal life shouldn't be available to the public via newspapers. This essay will advocate for the prohibition of publishing people's lives in newspapers to maintain the safety and personal lives of politicians.
Firstly, by publicly reporting about politicians' lives, we are violating their privacy rights. By exploiting this information as a source of income, or simply to entertain others, newspapers are regarding the potential challenges towards the politican's livelihood and dignity but are also challenging the moral law of humanity. Additionally, by obtaining the information without one's consent, we are exposing secrets, and past that may be humiliating or degrading to people, making the information we obtained immoral.
Secondly, any information leaks could result in permanent damage to people's dignity, which can contribute to rising stress, health risks, and lowered working potential. Furthermore, this could further affect family members, and friends and possibly leave a life-long trauma to politicians.
Some people argue that newspaper articles about politician's past lives may be beneficial in building a reputation and opportunities for young politicians, albeit this certainly isn't the case. By writing about one's private life in newspapers, we are also promoting biased decisions. As interesting, unique lives become a factor in political decisions, people may neglect other crucial factors such as skill, experience, and potential resulting in poor choices and unfairness.
In conclusion, while publishing politician's private lives in newspapers could help to distinguish themselves, it would foster biased decision-making, violate privacy rights and potentially result in stress, health problems, and lifelong damage to individuals.
Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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