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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Dạ thầy cô chấm chữa luận điểm và ngữ pháp giùm em ạ. Đề bài: Discuss some advantages of handmade products over machine-made products. Use specific reasons and examples in your answer.”
In recent years, many people have started to prefer handmade products over machine-made ones. While both types of products have their own benefits, handmade goods have several advantages that attract consumers. This essay will discuss some of these benefits, such as better quality, uniqueness, and the support for local economies.
To begin with, one major advantage of handmade products is their quality. Handmade items are often made with care and attention to detail. Artisans usually use high-quality materials and take the time to ensure that each product is well-made. For example, handmade furniture tends to be more durable than mass-produced items. This focus on quality can result in products that not only look better but also last longer, providing better value for money.
Additionally, handmade products are often unique, which is appealing to many buyers. In a world filled with identical, mass-produced items, people often want products that stand out. Handmade goods reflect the individual style and creativity of the maker, making them special. For instance, a handmade piece of jewelry can be customized to fit a customer’s preferences, resulting in a one-of-a-kind item that cannot be found in stores. This uniqueness adds a personal touch, making the purchase more meaningful.
Moreover, buying handmade products can have a positive impact on local economies. When consumers choose handmade items, they often support small businesses and local artisans. This helps keep money within the community and can lead to job creation. For example, a local crafts fair featuring handmade goods can attract visitors, boosting sales for various vendors and benefiting the local economy. On the other hand, purchasing machine-made products often supports larger corporations that may not contribute as much to the community.
In conclusion, handmade products offer several advantages over machine-made items, including better quality, uniqueness, and support for local economies. As more consumers recognize these benefits, the demand for handmade goods is likely to increase. This trend enriches the marketplace and fosters a greater appreciation for craftsmanship and community.
In recent years, many people have started to prefer handmade products over machine-made ones. While both types of products have their own benefits, handmade goods have several advantages that attract...
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The chart compares the percentages of resident's habit about buying and drinking coffee and tee in five Australian cities.
it is clear that, most people like to go to a coffee shop for buying and drinking while bought fresh coffee is the least popular citizen's coffee and tee buying habits of Australian citizen. In Sydney, the percentage of city residents bought fresh coffee was 43% merely 1% higher than the figure for Melbourne's citizens. Meanwhile, 34% of people bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks in Hobart. The proportion of people bought fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide were nearly the same at 33% and 34%. Citizens in Sydney , Melbourne, Hobart prefered to go to the coffee shop in last 4 weeks were higher than 60%. The figures for Brisbane and Adelaide were 56% and 49% respectively.
50% of Adelaide citizen had habit buy instant coffee, the figures for Sydney and Melbourne were around 45%. The percentage of people who had habits buy instant coffee in Brisbane and Hobart were well over 50%
The chart compares the percentages of resident's habit about buying and drinking coffee and tee in five Australian cities.
it is clear that, most people like to go to a coffee shop for buying and dr...
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Most countries aim to improve their standard of living through economic development, but many important social values can be lost as a result. Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Most countries are paying all their attention to economic development to improve their quality of live, so they are losing many crucial society values . In my point of view, I completely agree that there will be more advantage than disadvantage of economic development
On the negative site, thein the world now without any wars and the trend of all countries in the world are peaceful and cooperation so we won't try to improve army a lot and the way to protect our country now is a stronger economic. So it is easily to understand why most countries now are concentrating on economic than other aspects. However it lead to a problem that some society values will be forgotten . For example, many young people are pursuiting of economic growth so choose leave family early and the number of depression are increasing rapidly . Despite economic growth can lead to the improvements in many sectors but the more improvement in city the more pollution will happen.
On the other hand, the grow of economic can make a lot of long benefits for a country, firstly it can help the tourism development so we can spread our cultural for the world, it also make more new jobs to deal with the unemployment problem, and improve the quality of the future labor force. If we want to protect and improve our cultural values , the main thing we need is a stable economic, for example many countries can recover and preserve their culture by film or entertainment devices such as korea or japan.
I believe that both social and economic are have the influence in each other but the conditions to preserve our social values is economic
Most countries are paying all their attention to economic development to improve their quality of live, so they are losing many crucial society values . In my point of view, I completely agree that th...
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The charts below show the usage of coal, oil, hydropower, wind and renewable energy for fuel production in 2002 and at present.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of different energy sources since 2002 until now.
Overall, Most features had an increase trend whereas the opposite was true for other Renewables and Oil. However oil still the most popular fuel over the period time.
In 2002, the ussage of oil stood at 52% but it decreased rapidly to 45% at the moment However, it is always the highest figure of fuel production from 2002 until now. The proportion of other renewables sources accounted for 1,2 % before dropped slightly to 1% currently.
The figure of Wind energy had significant. increased since 2002 which stood at 0,8%, five times lower than now 5%. Both Hydropower and coal energy have the same trend during the period time while in 2002 Hydropower was 8% and coal was 38%, then they increased slowly to 10% and 39%, respectively, now
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of different energy sources since 2002 until now.
Overall, Most features had an increase trend whereas the opposite was true for other Renewables and Oil. How...
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The bar graph describes how many people participated in 4 types of sports in a particular region in 20 years, beginning from 1985 to 2005
Overall, it is clear that there was a significant decrease in the number of people playing rugby, while the number of people who played tennis increased over the period. Additionally, the trends for Basketball and Badminton were relatively stable.
Regarding Tennis sport, in 1985 150 people who joined in dramatically surged to 200 people in 1995, and the number of players continued to rise to 220 people in 2005. By contrast, rugby had the highest number of players in 2985, with 245 people, but witnessed a steady fall to 200 players in 1995. In 2005, this sport became less popular, declining to exactly 50 players.
In terms of Basketball and Badminton, there was a fluctuation in the number of basketball players in 1985.with 70 players, which still remained unchanged until 2005. Badminton sport had the same trend, standing at 50 players until 2005.
The bar graph describes how many people participated in 4 types of sports in a particular region in 20 years, beginning from 1985 to 2005
Overall, it is clear that there was a significant decrease in...
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Task 1: The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013.
The pie charts depict the five favorite social media platforms namely Facebook, Twitter, Linkedin, Google+, and Pinterest in Australia from 2011 to 2013.
Overall, Facebook was the highest priority in Australia over the given period, while a few people used Google+ and Pinterest. Another notable point is an increase in the favorite rates of almost all social media channels, except for Facebook.
Most people in Australia were attracted to Facebook and Twitter, which had the biggest shares during the 3 years. Twitter occupied 21% in 2011 and went up negligibly to 25% in the end. Facebook still maintained its leadership in the industry despite a significant decrease. Starting with 59%, it fell substantially to 38% in 2013.
Regarding the remaining social platforms, Australians did not use Google+ and Pinterest as much as the other platforms, with 5% in the first year. However, their proportions gradually rose to 10% and 6% in 2012 and ended with 14% and 8% in 2013, respectively. Lastly, there was a marginal rise in the LinkedIn percentage, from 10% to 15% by 2013.
Task 1: The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013.
The pie charts depict the five favorite social media platforms namely Facebook, Twitter, Linkedin, Google+, and Pi...
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task 2 In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend
Most people believe that shopping now can be recognized as a hobby rather than an usual rountine task as it as was in the past. In my point of view, I completely agree that this statement has more negative than positive effects, because it can cause people addiction and financial issues.
On the negative site, nowadays more and more people has enjoyment from shopping, and this will lead to increase the development of shopping addiction due to the grow up dopamine when we buy new things but it dopamine vanish very quickly so people will buy news early. And it is unhelpful for all people because because it is very hard to get out of addiction. For example, shopping addiction will similar to gambling and we need to treat it. There were a lot of ways to produce healthy dopamine instead of shopping like: jaging, reading, studying.
Futhermone, Shopping addiction will lead to numerous troubles in finance . All business will know the way to spectacular by marketing in all entertainment facilities to Research more consumers. As a result, more and more young people face to finance problems due to their shopping behavior .For instance, in the past when economics didn't improve like today, people just go shopping to buy crucial things, which were helpful for their daily because the marketing wasn't strength enough.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that shopping shouldn't be identified as a hopby because of this negative effects if we misuse it
Most people believe that shopping now can be recognized as a hobby rather than an usual rountine task as it as was in the past. In my point of view, I completely agree that this statement has more neg...
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The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the percentage of four types of vehicles used in UK over the period 40 years begin in 1965.
Overall, Private cars were the best choice with the highest proportion over the period time whereas the opposite was true for Recreational vehicles.
The percentage of private cars had an increased trend during 1965, 1985 and 2005 which stood at 40%, 55% and 60%, respectively. Whereas Lorries and other vehicles were remain unchanged accounted for 20% between 1965 before decreased a half into 10% in 2005
In 1965 The proportion of public transport users Stood at 25%, then decreased to 20% in 1985 and back grow up to 22% in 2005. The lowest percentage in three pies were for Recreational vehicles. In 1965, the proportion of recreational vehicles stood at 15%, three times higher than that in 1985 .After that, In 2005, it increased to 8%
The pie graphs illustrate the percentage of four types of vehicles used in UK over the period 40 years begin in 1965.
Overall, Private cars were the best choice with the highest proportion over the...
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Some people believe that your personality doesn’t change over time. To what extent to do you agree with this idea? Give specific examples to support your opinion.”
The belief that personality remains unchanged over time is a prevalent notion. I argue that personality is not fixed and can evolve due to various factors. While some core traits may remain stable, experiences, environment, and personal development play significant roles in shaping who we are.
Firstly, life experiences can lead to substantial changes in personality. For instance, an individual who has faced trauma or significant challenges often develops traits such as resilience and empathy. Take the example of someone who has experienced a serious illness. This person may emerge with a greater appreciation for life and a deeper understanding of others' struggles. Research in psychology indicates that people can adapt their behaviors and attitudes in response to significant life events, demonstrating that personality can indeed shift.
Secondly, social environments can greatly influence personality development. As individuals transition through different life stages—such as moving from adolescence to adulthood—they often adopt new roles that can alter their behavior. For example, a typically shy teenager may become more outgoing when joining a sports team or engaging in community service. Such changes illustrate that social interactions and responsibilities can reshape personality traits over time.
Furthermore, many people actively pursue personal growth, which can lead to changes in personality. Engaging in self-improvement techniques, such as therapy or mindfulness practices, allows individuals to cultivate desired traits. For instance, someone who has struggled with anxiety might work towards being more assertive and confident. This conscious effort to change demonstrates that individuals can influence their personality in meaningful ways.
In conclusion, while some aspects of personality may remain stable, I believe that personality is not immutable. Life experiences, social contexts, and personal initiatives contribute to our ongoing development. Recognizing that personality can change encourages a more optimistic view of personal growth and the potential for transformation throughout life.
The belief that personality remains unchanged over time is a prevalent notion. I argue that personality is not fixed and can evolve due to various factors. While some core traits may remain stable, ex...
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Task 2: In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse/ What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it?
In many countries, it is obvious that the quality of life in modern cities is becoming worse. From my perspective, there are two prominent reasons for this problem and many solutions could be adopted by governments and citizens.
The quality of life in modern cities is becoming worse for two main reasons. Firstly, the air quality of large cities has exceeded excessively safe limits, which can harm citizens’ health. People usually engage in outdoor activities, therefore they can easily be exposed to polluted air which can lead to respiratory disease for citizens. Secondly, inflationary pressure is also a major cause of the worsening of the well-being of people in large cities. For example, the prices of many products in Vietnam have grown fivefold compared to 20 years ago, leading to stress and financial strain among city dwellers.
There are various viable measures that should be taken to solve this problem. One of these is that the government and city dwellers need to spearhead environmental initiatives to make the air quality cleaner for living. As a result, fewer people face respiratory illnesses such as asthma, and sniffles, leading to the better well-being of society. For instance, the advent of new electric vehicles has led to cleaner quality of life and environmental protection. Furthermore, governments should introduce new policies to decrease inflation in big cities, resulting in lower inflation rates and reduced pressure on citizens.
In conclusion, the dangerous air quality and inflation rates are the potential causes of worsening the quality of life in cities. To address this problem, launching environmental programs and reducing inflation should be implemented by governments and citizens, which can improve the well-being of society.
Task 2: In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse/ What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it?
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These days, many students are prone to take a gap year after graduating high school to travel and work. In fact, this will help students gain various valuable experiences, but it also has disadvantages. I will outline both the benefits and drawbacks of gap years.
On the one hand, gap years bring about many advantages for students after high school. Firstly, Gaining experience is one of the main benefits of taking a gap year after high school. This experience will help students develop soft skills when participating in the labor market, which plays a vital role in seeking their area of interest. Moreover, these students just have jobs that require few degrees and experience such as part-time service and seller employees, which support them in practicing hospitality and resilience. In addition, travel during gap years can expose students to different cultures, and customs, providing opportunities to broaden their horizons and develop cross-cultural understanding.
On the other hand, taking a gap year still has several disadvantages. traveling and other activities after high school are extremely costly, and many students can not even be independent financially. This may detract from experience by causing students to incur debt and join in poor-quality jobs. Furthermore, taking gap years will extend study time and miss out on many opportunities in university as expanding quality relationships, interning in good companies, and equipping with specialized knowledge. Additionally, students may face the difficulty of reentering academic life after a gap year, they may have to try to adjust to study academic expectations.
In conclusion, more students tend to take a gap year after graduating from high school. This will help them approach various experiences earlier, but I still believe that taking a gap year will impact bad things on students.
These days, many students are prone to take a gap year after graduating high school to travel and work. In fact, this will help students gain various valuable experiences, but it also has disadvantage...
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The table compares the quantity of waste produced in the six different countries in each three year: 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Overall, the amount of waste which was produced in the Unite State was highest over the period shown. In addition, there was a moderate fall in the Korea disposed of waste while the figures for 5 countries remain increased continuously.
In 1980, 0.6 million tonnes of waste dumped in Ireland, which is lowest and moderately increased to 5 million tonnes in the next 20 years. Additionally, the amount of waste dumped in Japan was 32 million tonnes which was merely 1% higher than the figure for Korea in 1990. While, the Japan continuously increased its waste output to 53 million tonnes, the figures for Korea trash dumped dropped considerably, 12% lower than 10 years before that.
There were 4 million waste dumped in Poland in 1980, which was double the figure for Portugal. After 20 years, the amount of the Poland and Portugal produced trash gradually grew, at 6.6 and 5 million tonnes respectively. The figure for the United State of waste production were constantly went up in every each 10 years, by 20% and 42% respectively
The table compares the quantity of waste produced in the six different countries in each three year: 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Overall, the amount of waste which was produced in the Unite State was highe...
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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One school of thought holds that increasing the minimum legal age for car or motorbike drivers is the best way to reduce accidents. While this action could lead to inconvenience for drivers in some countries, I agree that it provides more safety benefits.
Granted, the change in the minimum legal age would not be suitable for every country. The primary key is that a large proportion of car or motorbike users are teenagers who use them to commute to school. Once the legal age is adjusted, people would tend to use alternative modes of transport like bus or tram. Therefore, the governments should ensure that they have a well-developed public transportation system to cater to their citizens. Considering this notion, it seems like the adjustment of driver’s legal age needs a lot of effort from the governments to develop the quality of their public transport.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned argument, I advocate that the increase in driver’s legal age does wonders in the safety aspect. First and foremost, drivers who are allowed to drive have already been equipped with academic learning, which means that they have knowledge and ability to tackle problems occurring everyday on the road. For example, a 17-year-old man’s life skills and experiences cannot be compared to those of a 20 year-old-man, so that the older man would come up with a wiser solution if he deals with accidents or daily problems on the road. Another key consideration is that this new policy indirectly decreases the proliferation of automobile users which often contributes to traffic congestion. The higher the legal age, the fewer drivers will be using private transportation. Because of that, traffic congestion would decline, reducing one of the major factors of road accidents.
In conclusion, while there are demands for governments worldwide to support the public transport system to adapt to this new policy, I believe that the increase in minimum driver’s legal age is the best way to ensure road safety, considering driver's problem-solving skills and the reduction in traffic congestion.
Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Studies have shown that most criminals have low levels of education. Because of this many believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a job after being released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Given that most criminals have low levels of education according to many studies, the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a secure job after being released. From my perspective, I partially agree with that statement.
On the other hand, educating prisoners is good for crime prevention because academic education can give prisoners higher levels of general knowledge, enhancing their creativity and qualifications which can help them find employment after release. For example, prisoners in many countries are taught manual skills, such as needlework, which can help them to find employment and achieve a better standard of living. Furthermore, teaching prisoners soft skills, such as communicating and foreign language can boost their confidence when applying for jobs, leading to job opportunities and low crime rates.
On the other hand, educational programs for giving knowledge to criminals can cost a large amount of money from government funding, leading to the government's financial burden. Moreover, a better solution is eradicating people’s prejudice about criminals. Many employers do not sympathize towards prisoners although they have been released for a long time; therefore they tend to not employ the prisoners for their company, making it difficult for ex-offenders to reintegrate into society. For instance, many ex-offenders struggle to find secure jobs or they are often offered low-paying jobs, leading to depression and a high risk of reoffending.
In conclusion, while educating prisoners can ensure reduced crime, I partially agree that this is the best way for crime prevention because it can be excessively expensive. Besides, eliminating prejudice is also a good way to reduce crime rates. Therefore, a multifaceted approach is needed to address this issue, ensuring the long-term well-being of society.
Studies have shown that most criminals have low levels of education. Because of this many believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a job after being released....
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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
in contemporary society, paying taxes for the government is always a growing concern. Many contend that taxes made a significant contribution to their city, whereas the view that individuals have broader societal responsibilities is not only an aspect of taxes. From my perspective, I advocate the last statement and i will discuss both perspectives.
Admittedly, the duty of the locals is to provide a fixed funding to the government every year so the state can function effectively. To be more specific, taxes support the needs of the public by facilitating better growth and learning prospects for contemporary generations and public safety, thereby creating a durable social structure with responsible members. Hence, they are fulfilling their tax obligation, doing their fair share.
Those who advocate more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes because they believe that only paying taxes can not elevate life quality and create an equitable society. Ethical behavior plays an integral role in modern society, such as complying with law enforcement, respecting other people, and helping others when someone has some problems. For example, tackling some issues, including environment or storm, requires cooperative effort of all members in the society, this ensures a safe and sustainable future for community.
In conclusion, paying taxes is a fundamental duty but it is not adequate. Hence, the collective actions of informed and proactive citizens are vital for societal development.
Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and...
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The map shown depicts the alteration of a particular village after a span of the last ten years.
Overall, the area has not seen significant changes to the premises, but many facilities have been built and park functionality has been improved.
Regarding the northwest entrance, it remained the same, while the number of tennis courts doubled to a total of four. In addition, the parking area was renovated to accommodate more cars, from 20 to 50. Beside that, the square soccer field in the center of the garden has been shrunk and converted into a rectangular field. Next, the children’s playground has been separated into normal and soft areas.
Analyzing further on the map, a picnic area has been introduced toward the empty space in the southwest along with the opening of boating facilities in place of the pond towards the southeast. Furthermore, the forests in the bottom-right corner of the map were cut down to make space for a new cafe. Additionally, a new bicycle path now encircles the park.
The map shown depicts the alteration of a particular village after a span of the last ten years.
Overall, the area has not seen significant changes to the premises, but many facilities have been buil...
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Đề: The research indicates that nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past. What are the reasons and is it a positive or negative development?
The research demonstrates that some end-users are less affected by advertising currently compared to earlier times. There are two major reasons for this phenomenon, such as increasing exposure to deceptive ads and the rise of alternative information sources. However, I believe this shift has predominantly negative consequences, such as rising unemployment and adverse effects on small businesses with limited budgets.
There are two main causes of this trend. First, the prevalence of misleading advertisements has eroded public trust. When consumers encounter false claims, they become skeptical of advertising as a whole. To illustrate, Volkswagen's 2015 scandal, where the company falsely marketed its diesel cars as environmentally friendly by using a software to cheat emissions tests, significantly damaged consumer confidence in green marketing, leading to broader skepticism toward similar claims. Secondly, the emergence of alternative sources like online reviewers offers consumers more trustworthy information. As an illustration, Mink, a popular Vietnamese beauty blogger, is known for her in-depth and honest reviews of cosmetics sold on Shopee platform, helping consumers make informed decisions and avoid low-quality products.
Despite these reasons, the declining influence of advertising has two major drawbacks. Firstly, it could lead to job losses in the marketing sector. As consumer responsiveness diminishes, companies may downsize their marketing teams, as seen with Twitter Inc., which laid off numerous employees due to shifts in consumer behavior, such as turning to alternative media platforms for reliable product information. Secondly, this trend could hinder small start-ups with limited marketing budgets. As more consumers rely on personal research and word-of-mouth, small businesses that can only afford to advertise on platforms like Facebook or TikTok may struggle to compete with larger companies that have extensive marketing resources. For example, new shops selling gadgets may find it challenging to attract customers through online marketing, while well-established platforms like Shopee dominate the market by leveraging sponsored reviewers and other marketing strategies.
In conclusion, the reduced influence of advertising is primarily driven by distrust in deceptive ads and the availability of alternative information sources. However, this trend brings significant drawbacks, such as job losses and challenges for small businesses, making it a largely negative development.
Đề: The research indicates that nowadays some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past. What are the reasons and is it a positive or negative development?
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The provided maps illustrate transformations in a museum over a ten-year period, between 1998 and 2008. Overall, it is evident that the museum upgraded with the most noticeable features, including the additions of new facilities and a reorganization of this map.
First of all, the permanent exhibition rooms were supposed to be built on both sides of the museum, but it had built on the right side of the maps. In addition, the garden was located in the heart of the maps and remained in the same position over the both years. However, in 2008, this area of garden contained extra fountains and a cafe sitting area.
On the left side, the bottom temporary exhibition room was moved to make space for new amenities, including shops, bags and coats. Although many changes happened, a place where people could buy tickets remained at the middle bottom of the map with entrance and exit over a ten-year period. In the plan, the cafe was constructed at the top of the garden and the wc was placed at the right bottom of the map. The cafe was still retained in the same position as the plan, whereas the cafe was made next to the cafe in 2008.
The provided maps illustrate transformations in a museum over a ten-year period, between 1998 and 2008. Overall, it is evident that the museum upgraded with the most noticeable features, including the...
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Task 2: It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than the benefits to the community and the young adults themselves?
Given that all young adults should be demanded to experience a period of unpaid work helping people in the community, the question of whether the disadvantages of this policy outweigh the advantages has been looming large. Although this trend may present certain challenges, I do believe the benefits far outweigh them.
On the one hand, there are several drawbacks, one of which is leading to young generations’ financial pressure, especially those from low-income classes. When they engage in unpaid jobs, they do not have money to pay for their living and education, leading to stress and financial problems. Compulsory unpaid work can also decrease the quality of the help. Forcing the young to participate in unpaid work might lead to resentment or lack of motivation, which could reduce the efficiency of helping other people.
On the other hand, this trend delivers significant benefits. Firstly, communities can save more money when launching campaigns and projects. Organizing a non-profit initiative or a community project requires a large amount of funding; hence, not paying salaries for workers would reduce significantly the financial burden. Secondly, young adults can gain valuable experience when helping other people. They can learn how to communicate effectively, learn new basic skills, and gain valuable knowledge that may not be taught at school or university. Lastly, this trend can also result in job opportunities. Many companies demand productive and energetic workers; hence, the more meaningful contributions young employees make to the community, the more corporations appreciate them.
In conclusion, while requiring young generations to undertake a period of unpaid jobs can result in financial pressure and decreasing efficiency, I maintain its benefits are greater due to the potential of cost savings, personal development, and increased job opportunities, leading to the long-term well-being of society.
Task 2: It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than the benefits to the com...
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