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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Thầy cô chấm bài writing Task 2 này giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
Đề: Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that crime is driven by conditions such as poverty and other social issues, while individuals who are inherently immoral are believed to be the main cause. In this essay, I will analyse both sides of the topic, and I believe that excessive greed for money, stemming from a bad nature, is the primary factor contributing to crime.
On the one hand, some argue that prolonged poverty can be seen as a driver of criminal behaviour. Those in poverty often lack basic necessities and face financial insecurity due to unemployment, leading them to commit crimes for survival. To illustrate, slums in cities like Chicago and New York often experience high rates of theft and drug trafficking, driven by limited job prospects and poor living conditions. Consequently, residents in these areas live in constant fear and anxiety.
On the other hand, others believe that an individual's character can lead to criminal activities. To be specific, certain people may possess inherent traits, such as a propensity for violence, that increase their likelihood of engaging in criminal behaviour. These traits may be influenced by genetic factors, early childhood experiences, or psychological disorders. For example, Henry Lee Lucas, a notorious American serial killer, had a violent upbringing and may have had genetic predispositions or psychological disorders, which contributed to his brutal crimes, including 11 murders. From this perspective, early intervention by the government to address such behaviours in children is crucial for preventing future criminal activities.
However, I believe that an overwhelming greed for wealth, inherent in human nature, can take control of individuals and drive them to commit crimes. Specifically, while greed can have both advantages and disadvantages, its impact depends on how it is managed. If controlled by a good person who operates within legal boundaries and aims to help others, greed can lead to positive outcomes in their actions and behaviours. Conversely, the opposite is true for a bad person. This is exemplified by Bernie Madoff, whose insatiable greed led to one of the largest Ponzi schemes in history, defrauding investors of billions of dollars.
To summarise, both sides offer valid viewpoints, such as the impact of poverty and inherent traits on criminal behaviour. However, I believe that an inherently bad nature, driven by excessive greed, is the primary cause, as some impoverished individuals still live within the law. Thus, the first step to reducing crime should be to enhance moral education among younger generations.
Đề: Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give y...
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Nowadays, more and more young Vietnamese people celebrate festivals such as Christmas and Halloween. Some people think there is nothing wrong with this while others are worried about the influence of foreign cultures. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
In the era of globalization, more and more Vietnamese young people decide to celebrate foreign festivals such as Christmas and Halloween. While adopting foreign culture brings various benefits to local residents, others argue that it can destroy the uniqueness of national identity.
On the one hand, there are several benefits of holding international celebrations. First of all, allowing the organization of remote programs in Vietnam can help people to have the opportunity to receive a variety of practical information from communication abilities to innovation abilities. This can broaden their perspective and cultivate their spiritual understanding. For example, participating in Christmas and Halloween celebrations can help them learn more about the societies of other countries, thereby making them more productive. The moment, young people can make friends from all over the world. Understanding the culture at a distance helps them remember their dialect, thereby convincing them to communicate with outsiders with complete honesty. As a result, they may become open-minded and value these events.
On the other hand, organizing these events may lead to some limitations. First of all, this can cause a loss of cultural identity. When festivals abroad are overrated, young people can easily forget about traditional culture and decide to replace it. This causes the erosion of traditional values and customs. As a result, this can lead to youth ignorance of traditional knowledge. They may become disrespectful to their ancestors, especially during important occasions such as Lunar New Year because they attach more importance to foreign festivals. Therefore, the entire young generation can try to replace the original culture, which can exploit the country's development.
In conclusion, although many controversies are formed around the benefit of celebrating Christmas and Halloween, I firmly believe that maintaining a balance between traditional organizations and international ones could create a more harmonious environment for youngsters to acquire knowledge and contribute to the development of traditional culture.
In the era of globalization, more and more Vietnamese young people decide to celebrate foreign festivals such as Christmas and Halloween. While adopting foreign culture brings various benefits to loca...
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Task 2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to study at school. Others think that children should study the same core subjects, regardless of their preferences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that children should have the right to choose the subjects they want to study at school, while others believe they should study the same core subjects, regardless of their preferences. In this essay, both views will be discussed before taking a personal stance, asserting that children should study their favorite subjects.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why many believe children should study the same core subjects, regardless of their preferences. Firstly, children can receive a comprehensive education. Many core subjects, such as mathematics, and literature, can give children general knowledge that can stimulate their creativity, intelligence, and so on. For example, while some students find it difficult to study physics in school, they admit that physics knowledge can help them streamline tasks. Secondly, all students can receive the same rights to access the same foundational knowledge, which is vital for creating equal opportunities.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that children should be responsible for choosing their subjects. Studying their preferred subjects can strengthen their motivation in the study process; hence, they might achieve higher academic achievement. For instance, students who study what subjects they love tend to show higher academic performance than those studying what they do not like. Additionally, children can learn how to make decisions by choosing their favorite subjects. They need to opt for subjects based on their personal circumstances, personality, and skills, making it more sensible to decide.
In conclusion, while children can obtain general skills and get equal opportunities due to studying the same core subjects, I believe that children should study any subjects they want because of the potential for motivation and learning to make decisions. Children should be encouraged to opt for their preferred subjects, ensuring their long-term well-being in the school environment.
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"How have natural disasters or climate change affected you and your surroundings? What actions can you and your community take, and what do you need to make a difference?"
Have you ever been stranded on a rooftop for days, with nothing but hunger and fear? Have you ever felt the agony of losing a cherished heirloom, seen your home crumble, or watched your crops swept away by flood water? It is not pleasant, is it? And neither does the feeling of losing your family and friends. This pain is my reality, it's a reality for the people I love, and it may be a reality for you and millions more across Vietnam. This isn't just the aftermath of an unpredictable natural disaster, but also a failure of mankind. Flooding may be a billion-dollar problem, but that doesn't mean there aren't cost-effective solutions.
According to Dr. Trần Anh Tuấn, Head of the Ministry Infrastructure Department, natural disasters cost Vietnam $1.52 billion in 2021, 800 million in 2022, and 340 million dollars in 2023. These events cause around 170 deaths annually, with 243 fatalities in 2021. Flooding causes 97% of the economic damage and is the second leading cause of death in Vietnam. Therefore, addressing flooding could greatly reduce the impact.
While poor drainage and rapid urbanization are major causes of flooding, people's actions also contribute. Covering drain lids to reduce odors and pouring fat or large trash into water pipes could significantly worsen the problem.
The current solution involves cleaning water pipes and planting trees to improve water absorption and stabilize soil, but both are costly and labor-intensive. However, students and young people can help by promoting tree planting in flood-prone areas, raising public awareness about maintaining clear drains, participating in clean-up events, and leading educational campaigns in schools and local events. The effect of flooding could be gradually reduced.
The most effective solution is using permeable pavements for streets, parking lots, and urban areas. These surfaces let water pass through and infiltrate the soil, reducing the burden on drainage systems. While pricier than traditional concrete, widespread use could lower its costs. They also help reduce urban heat islands by allowing water to evaporate, tackling both flooding and heat issues at once.
Floods are devastating, but the real challenge isn't just nature- it's our collective hesitation act. Everyone has the power to bring about change: by planting trees, advocating for permeable materials, and raising public awareness. Don't wait--Be the Difference. The best time to act was 30 years ago - the second best is now! We're not just preventing floods, we're ensuring a future of resilience, prosperity, and safety. Past generations have destroyed the earth and taken our future from us, and now it's our time to reclaim it!
"How have natural disasters or climate change affected you and your surroundings? What actions can you and your community take, and what do you need to make a difference?"
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The provided diagram illustrates the percentage of individuals who visit the gym at least once a month by age groups over the 19-year interval starting in 1984. Overall, all of the age groups, except from people aged 46-65, experienced an upward trend during the designated timeframe.
As can be seen from the graph, initially standing at the bottom with nearly 10%, then the 18-25 age group witnessed a gradual increase over the period shown and ended at the highest percentage, nearly 70%. Similarly there was an increase in the people belonging to 26-45 age from 1984 to 1989, reaching precisely 40%. However, it dropped substantially to a lowest point of just over 30% and climbed back to a peak of 50%.
Regarding 46-65 aged individuals who visit the gym once a month and or more, this group showed a slight decline, reaching the nadir of approximately 10%. A discernible upward trend was observed in individuals aged 65+ until 1994, before falling to under 10% a5 years later . By the end of this period, this group’s share finished at nearly 20%
The provided diagram illustrates the percentage of individuals who visit the gym at least once a month by age groups over the 19-year interval starting in 1984. Overall, all of the age groups, except...
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The two maps below depict a school library from the previous 5 years and the presented plan. Looking from an overall perspective, the library has undergone notable modifications, with the addition of new facilities and the new arrangement.
At the center of the diagrams, it is readily apparent that studying tables have been removed to accommodate private studying tables. Besides, the book shelves was located at the top and bottom of the map, whereas the desk for students’ laptops has taken the place of book shelves, located at the southern.
On the left main area, the classroom has been replaced by the recording studio and meeting room. In addition, browning and returning desk have doubled in size compared to 5 years ago. Further down the south, the library office has been removed to make way for a new conference room. To right-hand corner, desk for students’ laptop has been built by demolishing desk for computer.
The two maps below depict a school library from the previous 5 years and the presented plan. Looking from an overall perspective, the library has undergone notable modifications, with the addition of...
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Writing task 1
Task 1: The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps depict the main changes that have taken place in a student accommodation between two stages of its development: 2010 and the present day. In general, it appears that the accommodation has been shifted towards a more convenient and spacious area, with far more bedrooms.
In terms of interior facilities, there used to be three bedrooms in the accommodation in 2010. However, the living room and a small garden have been removed to build another two bedrooms, resulting in more living space for students. Regarding the surrounding environment, almost all sides of the accommodation used to be covered by the gardens in 2010. In contrast, the southern garden has been eliminated to establish a car parking area for residents, leading to a reduction in green spaces and trees.
Another notable change is that a new en-suite room has been introduced, located next to the student bedroom in the bottom right corner of the map.
Task 1: The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The debate over whether healthcare should be made free for all individuals or be a personal financial responsibility is a contentious issue with strong arguments on both sides. Both perspectives are valid and carry significant weight. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and share my opinion
On the one hand, one of the primary justifications for the free healthcare sector and educational industry is its role in ensuring everyone has access to necessary medical services, regardless of their financial status. Therefore, making health care free promotes equity and justice, which prevents the scenario where only the wealthy can afford quality care, which can exacerbate social inequalities. This can lead to a healthier population overall. Additionally, this group can make a significant contribution to the economy of their nation, which means that they have more disposable income for different purposes, including business. Hence, this practice can stimulate economic growth, and the quality of life.
On the other hand, others contend that paying for healthcare or education is an individual financial responsibility and the government does not need to concern about this services. On the grounds that funding a universally free health care system requires substantial financial resources, often resulting in higher taxes. To be more specific, in some egalitarian societies such as Germany and Denmark, people living in these nations have access to similar resources and opportunities regardless of their financial backgrounds. However, they must pay handsome taxes. Some argue that such a system is not sustainable in the long term, especially in countries with aging populations.
In conclusion, both statements are also valid but I think financial responsibility is a more beneficial approach because of avoiding unnecessary medical expenses. This can lead to a more efficient allocation of resources.
The debate over whether healthcare should be made free for all individuals or be a personal financial responsibility is a contentious issue with strong arguments on both sides. Both perspectives are v...
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WRITING TASK 2
Task 2: Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same job. What problem does this cause? What is the solution?
Many argue that many older people need employment to compete with their younger counterparts. This trend leads to several problems and various solutions should be adopted to improve the situation.
Two main problems arise from this phenomenon. Firstly, it can reduce efficiency and productivity for the company. When people get older, they may face various health issues that can lower overall well-being and require timely treatment; hence, older people cannot work consistently and may make mistakes during the work process. Consequently, the company may face severe consequences such as a decrease in sales and overall performance. Secondly, the younger generation may experience stress when competing with older people. The elderly often possess valuable experiences that can contribute to a company’s success, making it more challenging for younger workers to meet the demands of the competitive job market.
However, several solutions could be implemented to tackle this issue. One approach is for the government to introduce policies that reduce the retirement age for older generations. This would create job opportunities for the young, allowing them to secure high-paying jobs. Additionally, it can give older individuals more scarce time to take care of their health. Secondly, companies should hire more young employees. Younger generations are now equipped with creativity, diligence, and higher qualifications that the elderly may not possess, which means they can bring many benefits to their company.
In conclusion, the competition between older and younger people in the workplace can result in reducing the company’s efficiency and productivity, and mental illness among the young. Fortunately, lowering the retirement age and hiring younger workers are steps that need to be taken by the government and the company to tackle this problem. With these appropriate policies, the workplace will become more balanced in the long term.
Task 2: Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same job. What problem does this cause? What is the solution?
Many argue that many older peopl...
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ . Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle.Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In the contemporary era, it has witnessed a significant number of children have trouble with their medical condition while individuals contend that schools and parents take the responsibility for easing this issue.In my perspective,this concept is evidently true and the latter parts of this essay will discuss further and present effective methods
On the one hand,children’s unhealthy condition is heavily reliance on their families.Specifically, modern parents frequently spend a considerable amount of time to work and earn money for that reason they have tendacy to pay fewer attention to the young’s diet, allowing them to consume pre-cooked and fast food. As a result , young residents tend to face with negative illness,thereby reducing their ability to be active and concentrate both at school and home.For instance, due to the unbalanced diet of her family my friend get a bad grade in math, which relates to her capacity to focus on the lesson. One promient option for solving this problem is that parents should encourage their kids to engage in outdoor activities as well as controling their diet strictly
On the other side, schools are also responsible for this upward trend.Particularly, asking students to finish and submit their homework on the Internet platform has made room for them to dip into the Internet website.Consequently , shortsightedness, social media addiction and depression will be dealt with by young individuals.Nevertheless, schools can significantly boost their students’ medical condition by providing them with enough knowledge about how to keep fit as well as forcing them to give up rolling in video games or social media. For example , my litter brother,who suffered from obesity , current has a robust lifestyle thank to eating a balanced diet and regular excercises,given by his parent and teacher .As this case reveals,children’s strength rely totally on their families and schools
To sum up, schools and families unevitably gain a remarkable impact on the young’s medical condition.On top of that, some effective solutions can be provided by them to improve young residents’ health
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In today's competitive market job, employers are placing a greater emphasis on hiring individuals with strong social skills, in addition to qualifications. This trend has given rise to the idea that the former is equally important as the latter when it comes to achieving success in the job. I strongly believe that social skills are the most important.
On the one hand, social skills are crucial for effective communication in the workplace. The ability to convey ideas, thoughts, and information clearly is essential to clients and colleagues. Strong social skills can help employers articulate information, actively listen to other thoughts, and adapt skills and knowledge through communication skills. This fosters a positive and collaborative work environment, minimizing misunderstanding, and promoting effective teamwork. For instance, in the workplace, a good leader who has a high qualification will lead a team effectively, they easily resolve problems in flexible ways
Additionally, social skills will contribute to effective leadership and management within professional settings. While other skills will showcase technical expertise, the ability to inspire and lead others is equally important for success. Strong social skills allow individuals to motivate and guide their team members and delegate tasks effectively, they will help members who can finish work productively through communication. On the other hand, a leader has just excellent qualifications without soft skills to foster and give employers trust, which impacts on environment workplace, and employers can not reach their full potential.
In conclusion, I totally agree that social skills are paramount for employers who want to success in the workplace
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Mong thầy cô, mọi người chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ Some argue that music mainly serve as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Some residents contend that music is a principal option for people to unwind and reduce anxiety .In my perspective, I firmly support the idea that listening to music not only helps individuals to relax but also encourages them to express their private experiences
On the one hand, music is widely known to have key function for entertainment . Specifically , a significant number of workers frequently enjoy listening to music after hard-working hours since the soft melody , often provided by classical songs, plays a crucial role in emptying employees’ mind as well as contributing to a qualifying sleep for them . According to BBC News, the figures for citizens , who opt listening to their familiar tunes before going to bed , sustainably reach high levels in the contemporary era . As this case reveals, the concept of serving music as method for relaxing purposed gains a remarkable proponents
Nonetheless, in spite of the principal function for providing individuals with entertaining matters , it is observable for social media users to see the composers’ stories and presents their feelings.Particularly, composers evidently once in a while take inspiration from their own experiences and then mix them to their albums. As a result , viewers perhaps recognise the equivalents between their personal characteristic through the melodic sound, generated by songwriter. Consequently , this trend has fostered individuals’ will to share their lifestyle , raising the sense of community and sympathy among the general public
To sum up , it is true that listening to some tunes is widespread for its use to relax and decrease anxiety . Nevertheless , I can clearly state that music could also be a option for residents to express their own stories
Some residents contend that music is a principal option for people to unwind and reduce anxiety .In my perspective, I firmly support the idea that listening to music not only helps individuals to rel...
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Thầy cô chấm bài writing Task 1 này giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
Đề: The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (in millions)
The given table details the variations of oversea travelers in 5 different areas over the period of 15 years starting from 1990. Overall, the number of visitors who came to Europe was always the highest, the opposite was true for that of the Middle East. Additionally, there were growths in the figures for 5 areas, except for a decrease in the figure for America by the final year of the period.
As for the first year, in 1990, the amount of international holiday-makers in Europe was the highest, accounting for 280.2 million people, followed by America and Asia and the Pacific with 80.5 million people and 60.2 million people respectively. In contrast, 18.2 million people of the total number of holidaymakers belonged to Africa, but it still surpassed that of the Middle East, making up 9.8 million people.
When it comes to the quantity of travelers in 2005, the figure for that in Europe soared to just over 400 million people, which still topped the table, compared to the significant increase in the number of travelers coming to Asia and the Pacific to nearly 140 million people. Similarly, while the total foreign holiday-makers visiting Africa and the Middle East experienced gradual rising trends to 28.7 million people and nearly 16 million people in turn, the figure for that in America slightly decreased from well-over 118 million people in 2000 to 113.2 million people in the final year.
Đề: The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (in millions)
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Too much emphasis is placed on going to university for academic education. People should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 300 words.
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There are those who contend that excessive significance is laid on university education while vocational training is overlooked, leading to a shortage of experienced tradespeople. Personally, I wholeheartedly concur with the proposition that young individuals should feel motivated to choose vocational training.
On the one hand, I approve of the notion that society tends to overemphasize the tertiary academic journey. Societal expectations often necessitate the acquisition of a university degree as a reliable indicator of success. Many youngsters, therefore, feel compelled to pursue higher academic education even though it does not align with their passions or career aspirations. If this trend lingers on, it can instill a sense of disorientation and dissatisfaction in the youth. The pressure on university pursuit, moreover, can lead to an unbalanced job market, characterized by a surplus in graduates from certain academic fields while a shortage in skilled tradespersons. The further repercussions would be higher youth unemployment rates and hindered economic growth of industries based on manual expertise such as the construction and manufacturing domains.
On the other hand, I also subject to the standpoint that promoting vocational training is of great benefit. Realistically, there is a growing demand for qualified tradespersons, including electricians and plumbers. Vocational education can equip young individuals with essential skills, qualifications and working experiences, enabling them to enter this sought-after market field. This will, in turn, facilitate infrastructure development and maintenance, bolstering the economic progress of sectors relying heavily on manual labor. Another merit is that these trade occupations can offer generous remuneration packages, fostering employers’ financial security and job fulfillment as well as cultivating a balanced and resilient economy.
In conclusion, I remain in complete agreement with the viewpoint that the young generation should not be pressured into pursuing tertiary education as the only path to success, and vocational training should hold equal value as this approach can encourage skill development and create a well-rounded and thriving employment market while satiating the need for qualified tradespeople. Hence, governments and industries should collaborate to promote vocational training through incentives, apprenticeships, and partnerships, providing necessary support for students choosing this path.
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The line graph delineates the consumption tendency with three distinctive ingredients from 1981 to 2007. Overall, all the nutrients witnessed a downward trend in food and drink even though there was one of them started later than the two others.
Firstly, the amount of butter consumed in 1981 was the highest data, which was recorded at about 141 grams. Remarkably, this ingredient reached its peak 5 years later with nearly 160 grams eaten. However, the amount of consumable butter dramatically diminished at a rapid pace and ended with only more than 50 grams in 2007.
Accompanied with butter in 1981 was margarine, which started with approximately 90 grams. Five years later, people were not likely to digest this nutrition, resulting in 80 grams of margarine eaten. The figure of margarine, nevertheless, is toto
Unlike the aforementioned ingredients, low fat and reduced spreads commenced lately, which was only 10 grams in 1996. Albeit considerably skyrocketing and reaching about 82 grams, the statistics of consumed low fat and reduced spreads fell to the north of 70 grams.
The line graph delineates the consumption tendency with three distinctive ingredients from 1981 to 2007. Overall, all the nutrients witnessed a downward trend in food and drink even though there was o...
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The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture depicts the stages in the lifespan of frogs in a pond. Overall, there are several stages in the life cycle of a frog from eggs to adult frogs.
Initially, the eggs grow into embryos from which tiny tadpoles emerge and cling to plants in the water or this pond. At this stage, these tadpoles are black and have a short body and a long tail. As they grow, external gills for breathing are produced, and then the lengthening tail keeps on growing. The next stage is that their hindlegs start to appear, and their black skin changes into dark green. Meanwhile, they rely on the nutrients stored in the tail, contributing to their development.
In the next stage, the front legs appear and their tail becomes shorter. After the two stages, they become baby frogs. Finally, those young frogs continue growing and become adult frogs with bright green skin.
The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture depicts the...
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Task 2: Government should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Task 2: Government should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems have become major concerns today because of their severe consequences. Some argue that the government should enforce policies that make individuals responsible for maintaining their own local environment. From my perspective, I agree with this statement.
There are several reasons why I believe people should be responsible for looking after their local environment. Firstly, local environments can directly affect the health of local communities. This is because people live in degraded environments, with lots of rubbish on the streets, polluted water, and fewer trees, it can make them uncomfortable and stressful. Furthermore, polluted environments can result in various diseases due to the proliferation of bacteria. For instance, it has been proven that people who live in unclean environments are more likely to suffer from physical health problems than those who live in cleaner environments.
Another reason is that this can foster a strong sense of local cohesion. When neighbors work on environmental projects, such as street clean-ups or local recycling programs, which lead to strong social bonds and foster a sense of shared purpose. For example, many local environmental campaigns have been launched over the years, leading to not only improved local environments but also strong community bonds.
In conclusion, while the government can play a vital role in protecting the environment, I agree that people should be held responsible for their local environment due to their own health and social cohesion. People should take care of their local environment to live in a greener life and in a more harmonious community.
Task 2: Government should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems have become major concerns today becau...
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The diagram shows how the pineapples are grown and prepared to create its products. Overall, there are both natural and man-made processes starting with the crown of the pineapples and ending with three different sizes of the pineapples. The smallest ones become juice, the second smaller ones are canned and the largest ones are exported globally.
At first, the pineapples are planted and grown in tropical climates (around 23 to 30 celsius) with different sizes varied from 28 to 30 cm and the weight of 2kg, and all the pineapples are sealed with ethanline to keep its freshness.
After that, the pineapples collected are cleaned and sorted into three groups varied in sizes. The smallest pineapples have their crowns cut and all their skins removed. Then, they are put in an extractor, which can make the pineapples into juice. The medium-sized pineapples also have their crowns cut. Following that, they can be sliced into rings or squares to put into cans. Lastly, the largest pineapples are picked to be washed all their wax, which then are placed into containers and shipped globally.
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Đề: Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social
problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is said that crime is driven by conditions such as poverty and other social issues, while individuals who are inherently immoral are believed to be the main cause of illegal activities. In this essay, I will analyse both sides of the topic, and I believe that greed is the primary factor contributing to the prevalence of crime.
On the one hand, some argue that long-term exposure to poverty can lead to criminal behaviour. Individuals living in poverty often face a lack of basic necessities and financial insecurity due to unemployment, which may drive them to commit crimes as a means of survival or escape. To illustrate, slums in major cities such as Chicago and New York often experience high rates of illegal activities, including theft and drug trafficking, due to limited job prospects and poor living conditions, such as water shortages and dilapidated housing. Therefore, residents in these areas frequently live in fear and anxiety.
On the other hand, others believe that the desire for pleasure and enjoyment through violent and sadistic behaviours of some particular types of people can result in illegal activities. Given that some specific types of residents have distorted perceptions for personal pleasures, they will tend to conduct activities that go against morality. As an illustration, Ted Bundy, a notorious serial killer, targeted young women, rendered them unconscious, and then took them to secluded areas where he committed heinous acts, including rape and murder, as a result of a twisted desire for control and sexual gratification. According to this view, monitoring and addressing such behaviours early in young children is crucial to preventing future criminal activities.
To summarise, both sides have their valid viewpoints, such as criminal behaviour of an individual is caused by the long-term living in poor conditions and the twisted desire for personal pleasure and enjoyment. However, I feel that greed that is increased after escaping from poverty can take control of people and lead them to commit a crime. Taking Carlos Lehder who was who grew up in underprivileged Columbian family and became a notorious drug lord as an illustration, in order to protect his large-scale lucrative drug operation, he hired assassins to eliminate anyone who threatened his business that varied from government officials to those who disobeyed his orders, causing widespread violence and suffering for countless Columbians.
Đề: Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social
problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature.
Discuss both views and give...
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The diagram illustrates how sugar is produced from sugar canes. Overall, There are 7 main steps beginning with growing the sugar canes to drying and cooling the sugar.
At the first stage, the sugar canes are planted and wait to grow for a duration of 12 to 18 months. After that, there can be two ways to harvest those canes, one using trucks or machines and one having manual workers doing the job.
When all the sugar canes are collected, there is a crushing machine which extracts the juice out of the canes. Following that, the juice is purified using a limestone filter. The next step is bringing the juice to an evaporator, which can heat the juice and make it into syrup. Then, there is a centrifuge stage separating the sugar crystals from the syrup. After collecting all the sugar, they are put in a metal container to dry and cool down, which will become sugar later.
The diagram illustrates how sugar is produced from sugar canes. Overall, There are 7 main steps beginning with growing the sugar canes to drying and cooling the sugar.
At the first stage, the sugar...
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