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Lee Wenyong
17 days ago
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/4adb14b2-6bb3-4504-a0bc-eb746c8a9d78/1720619784_YLns849XHVG80rLSw1bkgM4bXXWi18.png)
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Vũ Chi
16 days ago
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. The given diagram illustrates the process of collecting up-to-the-minute weather information, which is carried out by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology, with an aim to produce reliable forecasts. Overall, there are four main stages in the process including collecting incoming information, analysing and forecasting, preparing the broadcast, and broadcasting. Looking at the first and second stage in more detail, we can see that both of these stages consist of three way to collect, analyse, and forecast weather information. Firstly, incoming information can be receive by satellite, which is then presented as satellite photo, or passed to a radar station to show it on radar screen or synoptic chart to be analysed. The second way is to use radar to collect weather information directly and analyse it as the first one. Thirdly, the Australian can use drifting buoys and give information about the weather on synoptic chart. At the third stage of the process, the Australian prepare the weather broadcast on computers. Finally, the information about the weather is delivered to the public on television by newsreader, on the radio, or a recorded phone announcement. The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. The given diagram illustrates the proce... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/9d7de4f2-232a-434b-ba14-75a2709336cf/1720629275_4LNtnM5RtjapsxJZsTuSCP9R1HrQ2O.png)
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Kane
17 days ago
Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa giúp ạ.
Question: The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in everyday life. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this development? Nowadays, the widespread use of social platforms is replacing face-to-face communication. While this development offers various benefits, its drawbacks might outweigh the advantages. On the one hand, there can be certain merits of using social platforms as a main means of communications rather than face-to-face interactions. One possible advantage is that individuals’ daily life become more convenient than before. The reason is that human contact can be easier through applications and thus, people might save time and money on arranging personal meetings. For instance, Facebook and Zalo, which are some well-known applications in Vietnam, enable overseas students to get in touch with their family. Another beneficial effect could be that users might broaden their specialized knowledge. In fact, online courses allow international learners to study at their own houses, thereby giving them more flexibility. Therefore, this is valuable to their cultural experiences due to connecting with citizens from many different countries. Nevertheless, the fact that online interactions are replacing direct communication can have major downsides which overshadow these positive effects. The most obvious issue could be that these platforms might be harmful to online users. More and more scammers exploit new technology, such as AI or voice imitation tools, so as to easily gain others’ trust. Specifically, tricksters may impersonate a police to ask listeners to pay fines for traffic offence with the intention of cheating them out of money. The second drawback is that spending too much time on screen is harmful to people’s health. Relying on social media contributes to the dominance of a sedentary lifestyle. As a result, lack of physical activity causes individuals to struggle with health problems, like obesity and cardiovascular diseases. In conclusion, while in-person interactions being replaced with the rise of social applications can be positive in some situations, this development can bring about some adverse impacts. Question: The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in everyday life. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this development? Nowadays, the wi... Xem thêm![nguyen thi yen nhi](/images/logo.png)
nguyen thi yen nhi
17 days ago
mong thầy cô và mọi người góp ýcho em ạ em cảm ơn
The provided chart illustrates the US livestock consumption of four types of meats: turkey, pork, beef, and broilers over a period of 57 years starting from 1955 overall, It is evident that pork and beef were by far the most prevalent categories at the beginning of the period. However, the per capita consumption of broilers witnessed a considerable escalation, with the figure eventually surpassing the average consumption of beef at the end of the period from 1961 onward, It is noteworthy that beef consumption had seen a significant increase and reached a high of about 90 pounds in 1976 before falling to around 50 pounds in 2012. while there was a fluctuation from around 40 to 50 pounds in the consumption of pork during the period between 1961 and 2012, a dramatic increase was recorded in the annual consumption of broilers, which was the most dominant figure compared to the others. whereas there was a stable trend in yearly turkey consumption from only around 5 to 10 pounds occurring in 57 years. The provided chart illustrates the US livestock consumption of four types of meats: turkey, pork, beef, and broilers over a period of 57 years starting from 1955 overall, It is evident that pork and... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/92b08f38-73d1-49d7-9a65-273895365c31/1720531222_ZBzdojTW9iO7tu1jgDIcxa8apcdrWC.jpg)
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Ntnt0510
17 days ago
Nhờ Thầy/Cô chấm bài giúp em với ạ
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion. While one school of thought holds that science research, market, and academic aspects should provide as much materials as they can, others are of the opinion that invaluable knowledge should not be exchanged easily. On the one hand, it is understandable why some propose scientific investigation, finance, and academic world related information should be shared freely. The primary reason behind this thinking is that knowledge is a treasure for humans to raise their living standards. Hence, it would be a golden opportunity for individuals to have access to logical and educational support from science and academic resources which play a pivotal role in revolutionizing their critical thinking, or to the economic values that they can get from business field’s information and learn how to live economically and work efficiently. Studocu, for instance, which is one of the free-charged websites of thousands of academic documents and research papers, was established to optimize uploading and downloading valuable files in a self-sufficient way. As a result, this website has had more than 1000000 accounts, showing that it can help people enhance their academic study and research process. On the other hand, I side with those who believe that these crucial and high-valued information should be private. Perhaps the foremost reason would be that it can cement the authority’s right. By charging or asking for permission to get the data, the author can ensure the equal of getting such knowledge which they may make a large amount of effort to possess or generate. To exemplify, Nha Nam – a renowned publisher of Vietnamese-translated scientific books – always be adept at keeping the translated versions of well-known books all over the world. They want the customers and avid readers to respect authors’ as well as translators’ grey matter. If they purchase books, they can acquire the contents that such products provide. This example underscores the indispensable role of publishing and reading books, which requires either a pay-to-read process or private-keeping policies. In conclusion, while there are justifications for advocating freely sharing scientific, business, and academic knowledge, I would contend that these information should not be yielded without permission or charging. This is because scientist’s and authors’ grey matter is extremely essential, and if we do not pay for them, we are not thinking highly of their utmost contribution. Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valua... Xem thêm![berry](/images/logo.png)
berry
19 days ago
dạ chấm giúp em với ạ
The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2000 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The bar charts illustrate the summarized proportions of four genres of movies released and their ticket sales in 1996 and 2000 in a particular country. Overall, most categories witnessed an upward trend, except for romantic movies with a reverse pattern in the given time. Another interesting point is that despite the percentage of drama films released being the highest, comedy is much more popular among movie-goers than the other types of film. Regarding the proportions of movies released, drama films, comedy and fantasy were approximately 25%, 20% and about 10% in 1996, respectively. Then the figures escalated to 35%, 25%, and above 15% in 2000, respectively. The percentage of romantic movies released was slightly over 5% in 1996, which was the same as that in 2000. In 1996, most consumers opted for dramatic movies and comedy, with their sales being just over 15% and more than 20%, respectively. After that, these proportions negligibly rose to approximately 16% and nearly 25%, respectively. In 1996, the proportion of fantasy movie ticket sales was about 3%, which was lower than the figure for romance, with exactly 5%. However, the figure for fantasy movies went up nearly twofold in 2000, while the figure for romantic movies decreased to above 2%. The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2000 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featu... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/e0942ddc-3ac5-463c-ad86-ae75dd83b038/1720411119_CZhNUEpM0u2GqwpxrfJCjLrkudvKVt.jpg)
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bao linh truong
21 days ago
em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The given pie chart outlines the distinct sorts of unusable materials which were disposed by a country during the period of 1960 and 2011. In overall, the survey revealed that these wastes were primarily divided into 9 categories with the adjustment of proportion for most of features. However, there were two materials which percentage was constantly maintained in two specific time frames. In 1960, paper possessed the leading role in the proportion of waste disposal as well as was characterized by its unique statistic over 20% compared to other waste items. Furthermore, metal and plastic sharing the similar percentage at 8% in this field were doubling in number of wood, the bottom waste material, at 4%. In 2011, paper waste lost its dominant and was replaced by food waste with higher proportion at approximately 6%. Particularly, while wood waste surpassed other competitors and stood at rate 6 due to the increase of 4%, glass and green waste sustained its proportion, respectively at 5 and 9% in both years. The given pie chart outlines the distinct sorts of unusable materials which were disposed by a country during the period of 1960 and 2011. In overall, the survey revealed that these wastes were pr... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/3876a1bd-9fff-47d6-9e27-feeccbcd6ede/1720243649_kKoJ8244fyIfoxY1zHQTnieHyj0ndn.png)
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hamydoo
17 days ago
Mong thầy cô chám chữa giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The increase in people's life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement. One alternative is that people start to work at younger age. Is this alternative a positive or negative development? The fact that people can live longer has been a source of controversy. It means that people have to work more at later ages in their lives. Nowadays, it is claimed that individuals should start their careers at younger ages to solve this situation. Personally, I think that it is a positive development. On the one hand, working at a younger age can lead to a lack of social life. In fact, people in workplaces often work for 8 hours per day, sometimes they do extra time to complete the project or the target. Because of spending all day at the workplace, they often feel tired when coming home. Therefore, individuals may have less time for self-care and social relationships, which is important for self-development during youth. On the other hand, I strongly believe that it is advantageous to start a job at a younger age. Firstly, the young can enhance crucial skills for their higher career in the future. It is clear that the young are a dynamic age, so they can try their best in many job positions. It not only helps them to experience some awkward circumstances in this job, but it also creates ample opportunities for them to meet others, leading to developing many skills such as communication or discussion which is necessary for their future career. Secondly, youth can have financial independence by working early. Therefore, they reduce their reliance on their families and also save money for their later ages. In other words, when the youth are in retirement, they can have enough money to pay for many unexpected diseases and have a lot of time for self-care. As a result, the life expectancy can be longer. To sum up, I hold the view that despite the lack of private life, working at a younger age is beneficial for individuals, including the development of early skills and the ease for the older age. The increase in people's life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement. One alternative is that people start to work at younger age. Is this alternative a positive or... Xem thêm![Trương Minh Thư](/images/logo.png)
Trương Minh Thư
17 days ago
SỬA BÀI WRITING TASK 1
Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em bài này với ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ. WRITING TASK 1: The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. The given chart indicates the quantity of migrants working temporarily in 4 different nations in 2 years, 2003 and 2006, and the number of those workers for every 1000 people in 2006. Overall, it can be clearly seen that all countries witnessed increases in the number of part-time migrant workers over the period surveyed with the United Kingdom seeing the fastest growth over the period surveyed. Moreover, while the largest figure of temporary migrant working people consistently went on the US, New Zealand had the biggest ratio of migrant workers per 1000 people in 2006. In 2003, there were 577000 temporary migrant workers in the United States, far exceeding the figures for other countries combined. The UK and Australia reported approximately 140000 and 150000 migrant workers respectively, whereas the number of temporarily working migrants was only 65000 in New Zealand. Throughout the next 3 years, whilst the figure for the UK doubled to 266000 part-time migrant workers, the quantity of migrants working part-time in the US, Australia and New Zealand rose by about 100000, 50000, and 130000 respectively. Regarding the rate of part-time migrant workers for every 1000 people, New Zealand recorded the highest number of around 21 in comparison to only 10.7 for Australia. The figures for the UK and the US were below 5, at 4.4 and 2.3 respectively. Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em bài này với ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ. WRITING TASK 1: The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these wo... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/1b4927a3-06ae-4244-a3ab-d51cad82615d/1720525828_yYfGJ2VF7dszFhOiLiVEPlG6vsKUk8.jpg)
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Nguyễn My
17 days ago
More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?
There is a growth of population in many large cities, causing plenty of people to lead their lives in limited accomadations and no open space. Personally, I think this reality have significant negativity. Living in small spaces will be likely to result in some consequences that affect the quality of people’s lives, especially mental aspect. It can be sure that cramped living environment prevents people from doing daily activities effectively, such as space for eating or relaxing, which are all basic neeads of human. It has been proved that living in limited space can elicit feelings of confinement and accumulate negative emotions. Consequently, if this state constanly continues, people will suffer from mental issues including depression. Besides mental problems when staying in small spaces for a long period of time, without outdoor areas also bring about the problem of well-being. It is easily that people will have sedentary lifestyles because of no areas for exercise, causing higher risks of heart attack and obesity. This is even worse to the elderly, who are highly advised to do exercise on a regular basis in order to stay healthy. Furthermore, children are also one of the most vulnerable age group as they need to get exposed to nature and stay energetic to be well-rounded. In conclusion, I believe that this tendency of living in small houses with no open air have several disadvantages to both mental and physical health of people. The government should introduce some policies to help minimize this drawback. There is a growth of population in many large cities, causing plenty of people to lead their lives in limited accomadations and no open space. Personally, I think this reality have significant negativ... Xem thêm![Lê Hương Giang](/images/logo.png)
Lê Hương Giang
18 days ago
Thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ
The pie chart gives information about the place of dance classes which young generations are involved in now, while the bar chart illustrates the dance classes sector following the age categories. Overall, the private studios are a widely popular destination for dance classes. In addition, more people under 11 are interested in attending three types of classes than ages 11-16 , except for modern classes. In the pie chart, private studios account for 48% in the total of location classes, this figure is double that of school halls ( after-school). Meanwhile, community halls & other and college-based studios are merely a minority of 18% and 10%, respectively. Turning to the bar chart, there are 600 students under 11 years are currently learning ballet, twice as many as that of those aged 11-16. Although tap classes are matched by a roughly similar trend, both age categories witness a significant decrease to about 450 students at the age of under 11, and over slightly 400 students for ages 11-16. By contrast, an opposite trend is seen in the modern classes which have only exactly 300 students at 11-16 years of age attending, compared to just over 500 younger students. The pie chart gives information about the place of dance classes which young generations are involved in now, while the bar chart illustrates the dance classes sector following the age categories. Ov... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/1dcb3204-35bb-4d7f-b1e2-48f73f4a3255/1720451463_4TsTosjJLZOycvLHEKNFRlKglxKmz9.jpg)
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berry
19 days ago
mong thầy cô chấm giúp em ạ
Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day, they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the causes and solutions? Many elderly people indeed struggle with loneliness and inadequate physical fitness. This phenomenon can be attributed to several reasons, and solutions should be taken by the government to alleviate the circumstances. There are two primary reasons why many older individuals are facing isolation and poor physical condition. Firstly, young generations tend to live far away from the elderly and leave them to fend for themselves. This is because many youngsters want to settle in areas that provide a better environment and career opportunities; hence, older adults may feel marginalized. For instance, many young Vietnamese people leave their rural hometowns and move to developed cities to get high-paying jobs and gain a better standard of living. Regarding physical fitness, lacking specific healthcare equipment can negatively affect senior citizens’ health. If they are living in poor conditions that lack available training facilities, it can prevent them from physical activity. However, several solutions could be implemented to tackle this issue. The first solution would be for the government to improve the citizens’ well-being in some rural regions. If they could reduce the low employment rate, mitigate pollution, and flourish the robust economy in those areas, young adults might not migrate to another place to work. Consequently, they can live near the elderly and cater directly to them. The second solution requires the government to subsidize community centers and healthcare facilities in any neighborhood. This can help the older age groups access to age-appropriate exercise classes and programs. As a result, senior citizens may be motivated to do more exercise. In conclusion, there are several causes for the elderly community coping with loneliness and low levels of fitness, and steps need to be taken by the government to tackle this problem. It can be predicted that with implementation for better well-being and appropriate funding for healthcare services, this issue would likely be alleviated soon. Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day, they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness.... Xem thêm![bao linh truong](/images/logo.png)
bao linh truong
19 days ago
em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
Dinosaurs which were no longer exist in this world from the previous decades can be taken as one of examples for the extinction of special organisms, indicating as a part of natural events. In addition, human is not relevant to these events, so it is not necessary for them to prevent it. However, I firmly believe that the interference of human to hinder these processes would be a crucial consideration. An outstanding explanation for this perspective is that human have the responsibility to preserve the life of endangered animals. By standing at the dominant position in most of food chains, human is one of potential species which were empowered to control and protect other animals from a high risk of disappearance. Particularly, within their well-being and morality, people seem more determination and dedicated in this duty. For instance, dealing with rhino, a species predicted to be extincted in the following years, numerous scientists have cooperated with organizations to apply the advance of biotechnology to prolong this animal’s life as much as they can. Thus, maintaining this work in decades has made it become an obligation for any individual. Moreover, a negative feeling is other feasible reason that promotes people to prevent this natural process. The decrease of animals may be a consequence of the drastic change in climate, triggered by the pollution from human’s activities. Therefore, people are more likely to experience a sense of guilty, and attempting to protect animals is their way to compensate to ecosystem and the Earth. Indeed, this feeling can foster people to interrupt the natural events associated with the life of organisms being harm by their action. To conclude, people have no request to prevent the occurrence of natural process such as the extinction of species. However, I absolutely disagree with this point because both the responsibility and the feel of guilty feasibly contribute to human interference. Dinosaurs which were no longer exist in this world from the previous decades can be taken as one of examples for the extinction of special organisms, indicating as a part of natural events. In additio... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/9bee81c7-81a0-4b7a-bfc9-8c1275813840/1720357039_SfXl7gUbIN62XXceRgWiiitvHLHvPN.png)
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Lê Thị Linh Trang
22 days ago
thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People in many parts of the world prefer having their own house to renting one. In these parts, the house plays a vital role in people’s lives. In my opinion, although having many benefits, it also has drawbacks that people have to cope with. There are various reasons leading to this situation. First, having your own house will bring you a private space. Owning a home provides a sense of stability and security for the future, as homeowners can build or fix their houses based on their hobbies. For instance, when someone wants to paint or decorate something in the house, they do not need to ask homeowners for permission. Therefore, everyone might spend more time staying at home rather than hanging out for entertainment which leads to saving entertainment costs. Another reason is that you do not have any financial burdens of accommodation after having your own property. Thus, the amount of money spent on accommodation before will be saved or spent on other aesthetic activities. Having your own possessions such as a house has both advantages and disadvantages. On the other hand, it helps encourage the young generation to make an effort for a better life because they have to have a huge amount of money when having an intention of buying a new house or an apartment. Therefore, the whole community will develop together. On the other hand, there are also potential drawbacks to prioritizing owning a home. For instance, it might lead to financial strain due to high upfront costs and ongoing maintenance expenses. Additionally, renting offers more flexibility and freedom of movement. In conclusion, having or renting a house has both positive and negative sides, it depends on the individual’s demand, background, and housing market. People in many parts of the world prefer having their own house to renting one. In these parts, the house plays a vital role in people’s lives. In my opinion, although having many benefits, it also ha... Xem thêm![Minh Ngọc](/images/logo.png)
Minh Ngọc
19 days ago
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The line chart provides the breakdown of the proportion of different age groups visiting cinema in one nation between 1978 and 2008. Overall, it is evident that the percentage of people whose age ranging from 14 to 24 was the highest. While the proportion of people under 50 witnessed a decrease, the figure for people aged 50 or over rised and was equal to that for people aged 35 to 49. In 1978, the percentage of people aged 14 to 24 was the highest amongst 4 groups, which was 90%, and it underwent a fall to under 80%, followed by the proportion of people aged 25-34 and 35-49 with 60% and 40% respectively. The period from 1998 to 2003 remained stable in the figure for people under 50 before witnessing a downward trend. In 2008, the percentage of people aged under 24 still achieved the top spot, which was 80% and it was nearly 15% and 20% more than the figure for people aged 25-34 and 35-49 respectively. While a similar trend was seen in the figure for people over 50 where the proportion of individuals fell from 40% to 20% in 1988, becoming the lowest and then remained unchanged at 40% until 2003, then this group saw a opposite trend compared to other groups, which increased and have a similar percentage of people aged 25-49, which was 50%. The line chart provides the breakdown of the proportion of different age groups visiting cinema in one nation between 1978 and 2008. Overall, it is evident that the percentage of people whose age r... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/5e26baaa-13d6-4873-9dbf-86cfe88d8590/1720349287_fVTRSo1k9cVmKcOVvcXyc8KNR1LiOk.jpg)
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Khanh Nguyễn
20 days ago
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that some individuals enjoy repeating similar activities and hesitate to experience variations while I am inclined to the idea that modification is a pivotal aspect of personal growth, which will be elaborated in this essay. On the one hand, people have a preference for maintaining their similar habits since the appeal lies in the comfort and security that familiarity brings. This means that by sticking to a daily routine, individuals feel a sense of stability and control over their environment where they can hone skills and expertise in specific areas, leading to achieving proficiency and mastery without any disorientation. Since experimenting with multifarious things might hinder a person’s ability to lay emphasis on a single task in certain situations, which has some unpleasant influences on productivity, especially for those who possess poor mentality. Additionally, people have merely adopted a fear of uncertainty that prevents them from changing their lives. To be more specific, they are skeptical about whether the change that they make, such as in jobs, will bring the same level of satisfaction as the previous one or not, which definitely explains why many people despise change and adhere to the same activities. On the other hand, it is indispensable that embracing change is a potential to foster personal growth. Change introduces new challenges, experiences, and opportunities, pushing individuals out of the comfort zone and promoting adaptability and learning, especially in today’s society. This is because in a multitude of fields, robots and artificial intelligence might supersede humans as a result of the rapid advancements of technology, forcing people to cultivate a mindset that is flexible and adaptive in order to navigate the complexities of a changing world. Take, for example, those who do manual jobs are susceptible to being replaced by artificial intelligence which brings higher efficiency and requires a one-time investment if they do not equip themselves with skills and knowledge to meet current needs. Furthermore, it is crucial for individuals to be more strong-minded and confident and enhance their resilience by overcoming hurdles and setbacks, which benefits them in the long term. In conclusion, although pursuing stability and routine is valid, I advocate the view that adaptability and openness to change are more valued traits to realize one’s fullest potential and contribute meaningfully to the world. It is argued that some individuals enjoy repeating similar activities and hesitate to experience variations while I am inclined to the idea that modification is a pivotal aspect of personal growth, wh... Xem thêm![Phạm Bảo Vân](/images/logo.png)
Phạm Bảo Vân
17 days ago
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ANSWER: The charts illustrate the class size of primary schools in four various states in 2010. Overall, the group of 25-30 accounted for the most ubiquitous size in most states, save for South Australia. While students under 20 in four states was a very small figure. Regarding New South Wales, there was 37% of 25-30 students, reaching the highest proportion, followed by the students over 30 and 21-25 with 33% and 26% respectively. In contrast, South Australia had the largest number of 21-25-year old students, while the 25-30s was only 2% lower. Notably, the age group of under 20 in these two states was equal (4%). As for Australia Capital Territory, the students at the age of 25-30 constituted a half of the total of the class size. Students aged 21-25 accounted for 38%, while the group of over 30 was only 10%. Similarly, Western Australia took the highest percentage of the 25-30s, with 42%. Students at the age of under 21-25 and over 30 shared the same figure, with 26% and 27% respectively. In addition, students under 20 constituted a tiny figure, Australian Capital Territory was only 1% and Western Australia was 5%. The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/2271aa15-c122-400b-b8fe-bc8c49bbeb85/1720539141_bbhHqwBdSNz1IUYQYTiFFdXncjEvpF.png)
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Hoàng Trần
20 days ago
bài task 2 của em ạ mong thầy cô chấm chữa
People have differing views about their way of living. While some argue that it is preferable to do similar activities and stay away from changes, I still believe that alteration is also crucial, which I will elucidate in this essay. On the one hand, some individuals have a preference for stability and consistency in their lives. This is because part of them possesses a poor mentality and is afraid of obstacles and risks. To be more specific, they claim that embracing change could lead to uncertainty and discomfort, potentially threatening their sense of security, and ultimately their peace of mind; therefore, sticking to the same routine can lead to a more comfortable life and also help reduce stress and anxiety. Additionally, a firm way of living is acceptable for several ages, for instance, the old. Over time, people become accustomed to their routines and environment, which makes the idea of altering less alluring because it requires effort to break established patterns. As a result, leaning on a fixed daily life may be risk-averse and confer life satisfaction. On the other hand, proponents of change argue that it is essential for personal and professional growth. In the modern era, technology is experiencing unprecedented growth, forcing people to constantly adapt and improve themselves to stay current. A compelling example can be observed in various large businesses such as Google or Apple, where staff have to actively acquire and update new skills in order to avoid being replaced by artificial intelligence. For this reason, alteration is increasingly crucial to catch up with the times and avoid being marginalized. Furthermore, the ability to adapt to changes is vital to build a confident mind and resilience. Only by exposing to new challenges can individuals become strong-minded, overcome hurdles, and cope with uncertainties and setbacks more effectively. In conclusion, while staying in one’s comfort zone may provide comfort and satisfaction, occasional change is necessary to stimulate personal growth as well as adaptability. I believe that balancing the benefits of stability and change can help individuals lead to fulfilling and resilient lives. People have differing views about their way of living. While some argue that it is preferable to do similar activities and stay away from changes, I still believe that alteration is also crucial, whic... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/1ae8ef2b-22cb-4e2c-86ca-a3a4e3e431c1/1720279088_AcyHVQMZzbjxMjKqBOlex93rhlQEKV.jpg)
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Nguyễn My
22 days ago
The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the- minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts
The given diagram illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collect datas to forecast the weather. Overall, there are four stages, beginning with the collection of information from different ways, and turning it into broadcast. As can be seen from the diagram, in the first step, there are 3 ways of collecting incoming information. The satellite receives information and sends datas to the satellite photo for analysis or it can either passes figures to radar, and the synoptic, where the analysis process taking place, gets them. Moreover, rada and drifting bouy can also directly collect signals, which will be processed by radar screen and synoptic chart, depending on their origins. It is clear that all signals will undergo the computer to prepare for the broadcast. After finishing preparation, they will be broadcast to the public through TV newsreader or delivered to radio and recorded announcement. The given diagram illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collect datas to forecast the weather. Overall, there are four stages, beginning with the collection of information from differen... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/7713d04a-7345-4ef4-921f-53d5d1384dbd/1720159557_p5ybMNj6HWYKFw5ZDqDYAwU7Zuit2l.jpg)
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Nguyễn My
22 days ago
A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at companies or organisations as part of their programs. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement?
There are requirements of university courses that undergraduates have to work for companies or organizations without being paid to service educational progress. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of this issues. Interning when being in university brings students benefits for later in life. It is obvious that most companies when recruiting employees tend to ask their candidates to be experienced. It means working as part of the programs in university brings them hands-on experience, which helps them to be hired easier when they seeking for a job after their graduation. Furthermore, working for organizations not only a chance to apply knowledge taught at school in reality, but also to broaden social circle. On the contrary, there are potential drawbacks in working with no payment for students. To begin with, it may cause students to be demotivated as they have to spend a quite part of time working for other cooperations but gain no material achievements. Moreover not every one is ready to do an internship due to the matter of time. For example, some students will do a part-time job to pay for their living costs, which partly supporting expenses for their family. Consequently, taking on more work as requested by tertiary courses means limiting their time for earning money, leading to difficulties in finance. In conclusion, besides benefits coming from unpaid work, students may face some disadvantages during a period of time due to personal financial problems. There are requirements of university courses that undergraduates have to work for companies or organizations without being paid to service educational progress. This essay will discuss the positive an... Xem thêm![Trần Kiện Đông](/images/logo.png)
Trần Kiện Đông
18 days ago
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The table illustrates the daily amount of oil produced in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Overall, it is notable that Congo was a leading producer of oil over the first four years, which was taken over by Nigeria in the last year. Moreover, the most notable shift was seen in the figure for Somalia. In 2000, the amount of oil production of Somalia per day was 205,000 barrels per day before declining slightly to 190,000 barrels in the first 2 years whereas Chad didn't witness any oil produced in the first 3 years. However, the figure for chart initially just produced 8,000 barrels each day in comparison to 210,000 in Nigeria. While the slight uptake in the yield of oil in Nigeria seen in the last year had made itself surpass Congo to top the chart with 213,000 barrels per day by 2004, the similar picture was also seen in Chad witnessing six-fold rise, producing 50,000 barrels daily in the same year. In terms of Congo and Somalia, their quotidian oil output were 275,000 and 5,000 barrels respectively. while the former witnessed a substantial decline to 203,000 barrels, the oppsite was also true for Somalia, experiencing a fivefold increase to 50,000 which was the same amount as Chad in the last year of the period. The table illustrates the daily amount of oil produced in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Overall, it is notable that Congo was a leading producer of oil over the first four years, which was taken o... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/5b744364-1b7e-4d1a-bbef-09c74f78e32b/1720433903_dCkPGkMoAK4M5Jrh0Y3bn554mcwa4J.jpg)
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