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Writing task 2 - Em rất mong được thầy cô hỗ trợ chấm bài ạ
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is believed that the ubiquitous online newspapers will diminish the use of printed newspapers and books in the future as their accessibility is free for each individual. From my point of view, I completely agree with such a statement since digital sources of information have already gained social endorsement in this recent era.
On the one hand, the development of online newspapers has begeted a downward trend in the use of printed newspapers and books. Due to recent technological advancements, digital sources of information have unfolded the possibility of uploading videos and voice records, enabling individuals to have thorough insights into posted news. For example, soccer fans can rewatch their favorite matches with portable devices like laptops, which a paper cannot do. Although pops-up ads might appear on the screen afterward, it is a reasonable price to access these online websites.
On the other hand, the rising cost of paper-based news lies at the core of why people would replace it with the digital one. In order to release a new issue for traditional newspapers or publish a new book, the expenses, including printing costs or staff wages, are inevitable for every editorial office, which has to shoulder solely its budget. Such a situation would lead to the perpetual escalation of newspaper and book purchasing prices since most newsrooms would need an adequate charge for that sense of financial balance. As a result, readers not tempted by the touchable features of traditional news sources tend to prioritize costless digital platforms, lessening their spending on a large scale.
In conclusion, I believe the free access and the experience that digital newspapers offer have made them become the imminent replacement for traditional ones and books.
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The stacked bar graph compares the proportion of total revenue generated in a pharmaceutical company across three regions, namely Asia, Europe, and America, between 2002 and 2006.
Overall, there were decreases in the rates of total sales of this firm in America and Europe, while the opposite was true for that of the branch in Asia. Additionally, the division in America earned the highest share of total revenue initially, but this was the case for Asia’s branch in the final year.
In America, this region accounted for 41% of the total sales rate in 2002, which was the highest, before approximately halving to the bottom of 27% in 2004, followed by a steady recovery to 30% in 2006.
Meanwhile, 34% of total sales were made in the European market in the first year, gradually rising and peaking at 38% in 2004 to outnumber the other two regions’ figures. Subsequently, however, the total sales saw a slight downward trend, ending at America’s final level.
Finally, the total sales percentage of the market in Asia was a quarter initially, after which it experienced a steady increase over the next 4 years, ending at the peak of 40% in 2006, surpassing the two other regions’ statistics to dominate the last 2 years.
The stacked bar graph compares the proportion of total revenue generated in a pharmaceutical company across three regions, namely Asia, Europe, and America, between 2002 and 2006.
Overall, there we...
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ.
The presented line graph illustrates the number of foreign students who enrolled in a British university during a 20-year period from 1995 to 2015.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the enrollment by students in Asia was the highest figure among four countries. Additionally, while Asia and North America showed an upward trend, the figures for Africa and Europe remained unchanged over the given period.
The enrollment of Asian students was 60 in 1995, which then increased slightly to roughly 70 in 2000. After that, this figure continued to rise steadily in the next 10 years, before finishing its highest point at 120 in 2015. Likewise, the enrollment of students from North America started at 40 in 1995. Then, this figure remained stable in 2000, before fluctuating around 40 in the following 10 years. Finally, there was a dramatic growth in this figure from 40 to approximately 65 in 2015.
However, the percentage of African students remained unchanged at 20 from 1995 to 2005, rising slightly to about 25 in 2010, before returning to 20 in 2015. Similarly, that of Europe oscillated between 50 and 55 over the 20-year given period.
The presented line graph illustrates the number of foreign students who enrolled in a British university during a 20-year period from 1995 to 2015.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the enrollment by...
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Hello mn, đây là lần đầu em đăng tải bài viết của mình trên đây, em hy vọng các thầy cô có thể nhận xét và cung cấp cho em feedback để em có thể nâng cao khả năng viết của mình ạ. Tại vì, em sắp thi IELTS rồi á, khoảng một tháng nữa thôi ấy, nên em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
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WRITING TASK 1
two bar charts below represent the percentage and its changing between 1995 and 2010 of population living in urban, rural and town according to their birth place, specifically Australian or elsewhere.
At first glance,it's clear that the majority always live in the cities, despite borders or the shift of time. however, the numbers in the remaining two bars fluctuate by both countries and time. in 1995,both charts share the same trend. which is, the cities population equal to the number of town and rural area all combine. But, whereas the numbers of population for people born in australia living in town and rural areas are slightly different, those of people born elsewhere are totally not the same. in detail, the number from rural bar may triple its counterpart.
in 2010, people around the world seem to have a tendancy to move to cities, resulting to sheer drecreasing in population in towns and rural areas. the total number of people living in city whose born in and out of Australian depicted in both charts are so out-numbered that the numbers from rural areas and towns are likely to be neglected, none of the four bar comprise up to twenty units. survey conducted on people born in australia seems to be less severe than that of people born outside Australia.
two bar charts below represent the percentage and its changing between 1995 and 2010 of population living in urban, rural and town according to their birth place, specifically Australian or elsewhere....
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ
The given graph and chart illustrate information about migration to the UK. While the graph describes how long dwellers intended to stay from 2000 to 2008, the pie-chart gives causes in 2008. The number of people expected to live in the UK for only 2 years hit the highest point, compared to immigrants planned to stay from two to four years was the lowest. The primary reasons for immigrants temporarily moving to the UK was for occupational purposes.
As can be seen from the line graph, in 2000, the percentage of people who had the intention of living in the UK for maximum two years and for four years or more saw a similar number, for 150,000 people. In 2001, migrants were going to stay in the UK for more than four years remained stable until 2008. In the same time, the proportion of people planning to live in the United Kingdom for two years gradually saw an upward trend, from 150,000 to 250,000 people through to three years from 2001 to 2003 and plateaued until the end of the period. People who intended to stay for two to four years fluctuated minimally from the beginning until 2007, and decreased by half (100,000 compared to 50,000).
According to the pie-chart, the greatest causes that made people expected to live in the UK was for professional purposes, for nearly 40%. Another major reason was education, with around 32%, double number for people who expected to join family, 16%. Other reason and no reason stated was 14%.
The given graph and chart illustrate information about migration to the UK. While the graph describes how long dwellers intended to stay from 2000 to 2008, the pie-chart gives causes in 2008. The numb...
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Mong thầy cô sửa giúp em bài này ạ
The percentages of unemployed citizens in three regions (the Uk, the rest of Europe and Japan) for a period from 1993 to 2007 are depicted by the provided illustration. Overall, there was an increase of joblessness level in Japan whilst it was the opposite in the case of two other figures. Additionally, Europe line was remaining the highest for most of this period as in another hand.
Starting with an initial unemployment rate at 11%, percentage of the jobless Uk people plummeted constantly until the year of 2001 when it reached its bottom at approximately 5%. From that point, the figure remained unchanged for 4 years. Finally, it had a slight rise in 2005 and got to 6%
Meanwhile, Europe followed a similar downward trend. It started at 9% and had a three-year period of gradually increasing began from 1993. Among the 3 figures, Europe had the highest peak, which was more than 11% and was reached in 1997.Having climbed to the climax, Europe then constantly dropping to 2003 when it started to rose slightly in 2 years and followed with another decrease until it hit rock bottom at lower than 8%.
Initially, Japan unemployed citizens's rate was at 2 percent which then had a little push until 1995 when it remained steadily unchanged for 4 years. Next, it didn’t stop rapidly thriving not until 2003 that brought it to its highest point.From then on, the figure steadily falling with the rate of 0.5% per year in the next 4 years. The percentages of unemployed citizens in three regions (the Uk, the rest of Europe and Japan) for a period from 1993 to 2007 are depicted by the provided illustration. Overall, there was an increase of joblessness level in Japan whilst it was the opposite in the case of two other figures. Additionally, Europe line was remaining the highest for most of this period as in another hand.
The percentages of unemployed citizens in three regions (the Uk, the rest of Europe and Japan) for a period from 1993 to 2007 are depicted by the provided illustration. Overall, there was an increase...
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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In modern society, sport is becoming more and more prevalent among individuals at every age. Some people argue that it is more necessary to be strong physically and mentally and vice versa. In my opinion, both aspects are crucial to achieve success in sport. Nevertheless, physical strength is the fundamental factor that helps us gain achievements. In this essay, I will discuss both views, give explanations and relevant examples to support my arguments.
A number of individuals believe that having a positive and strong mental attitude will lead to success when it comes to playing sports. It is undeniable that keeping a healthy, optimistic and resistant mind is able to foster a competitive spirit, which triggers and stimulates the humans’ primal side to compete fiercely to become a winner. Furthermore, a strong mentality creates numerous aspiring athletes, who bring positive energy to their teammates and audiences that inspire the passion for sports to the world.
On the other hand, having a healthy and strong body is one of the most basic and vital elements that paves the way for success in sport. If a person who takes up sports and puts great effort in practicing and playing sports every day, he or she is more likely to get in shape. Also, this good routine boosts their physical endurance and stamina, which helps them balance and keep their body condition stable during the matches. It is obvious that a healthy person has more advantages in playing sports and achieving prizes than someone who suffers from health issues.
Another reason is that if participants who have enough health that meet the requirement for a particular sport, they will not need to cheat their opponents by using some illegal substances or performance-enhancing drugs that help them play better than their real ability, which may result in unfair evaluations and crimes.
In conclusion, both mental and physical strength are the key factors that lead to success. However, being strong physically is more important because it is the most basic need for people to take part in sport and become competent in this area. Therefore, it is a must for individuals to try their best to practice every day to keep their body healthy, strong and in the best condition.
In modern society, sport is becoming more and more prevalent among individuals at every age. Some people argue that it is more necessary to be strong physically and mentally and vice versa. In my opin...
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E mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài WT2 ạ Question 2: Education
Some people think that schools should invest more money in technology, such as more computers while others think more money should be spent on teachers. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many people argue that schools should spend more money on technology than teachers.While teachers should be spent on more than modern technology. I am of the opinion that spending on digital devices is significant more than that.
On the one hand investing in education technology is beneficial for students.
Firstly, schools should provide greater funding for the technology to directly enhance the student learning experiences.With technology, tutors can develop more interactive and engaging lessons that attract learner’s attention throughout each session . Technology also allows students to communicate and collaborate improving their communication and social skills.
Secondly, technology enables students to access educational resources globally. This is because online courses, digital libraries, education sites, audiobooks, and other resources can offer teachers and learners a wealth of resources and information for their learning.
On the other hand, purchasing teachers is critical. The reason for this is investing in teachers to build a team of high quality education.This is mainly due to, effective teaching plays a role in unlearning to stay up to date with modern trends and technology, teachers must continually upskill and train themselves.
In conclusion, there are many beneficial sides of spending on teachers. I still believe that spending on modern technology is significant because this enhances students' access to educational resources globally.
Many people argue that schools should spend more money on technology than teachers.While teachers should be spent on more than modern technology. I am of the opinion that spending on digital devices i...
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mong thầy cô chữa giúp em bài này ạ .Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money the make. Is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?
Some individuals hold the belief that profits a criterion to measure the success of business. It is a true factor of business success, however money is not the sole determinant of success, customer satisfaction and ability to manage risks should also be measured in.
To begin with, money without a doubt, is considered as a true and most valuable criterion to mark success busines. Cash is the lifeblood of a busines which plays a major role in stability and growth of enterprise. According to some recently researches that most of successful entrepreneurs spend money on market searching and training staff then can facilitate the business development .
However, money alone cannot create a strong foundation for a business, satisfying consumers
is a significant measurement .In other words the companies should understand what customers
expect and delight them with amazing experiences. Take BMW, Mercedes, and Toyota as an example
of the auto industry which seemingly always have much higher expectations than average from their
customers that they have to manage.
Additionally, focusing on the risk management can provide a distinctive perspective
on success than simply looking at profits. It is ensure that truly successful people are those are able to protect their business from the risks. Elon Musk is known that being failed on multiple occasions
then consistently overcomes the most devastating blows to take his companies to even greater heights.
To conclude, even though profit is indicator of business success. It is clear that pursuit of money should be balanced with the consumers satisfaction and overcoming risks.
Some individuals hold the belief that profits a criterion to measure the success of business. It is a true factor of business success, however money is not the sole determinant of success, customer sa...
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Em mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài WT2 Ạ : Question 3: Nowadays, there is a trend that media reports focus on problems and
emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to
individuals and to society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the main focus of the media is a topic of much debate. While there is a trend that media reports focus on problems and
emergencies rather than positive development.I am of the opinion that it is a serious issue and also has negative impacts on civilization.
On the one hand, the option to network social focus on negative news is useful.
Firstly, focusing on problem can mobilize communities and governments to
address these pressing issues.
This mainly due to when they received the news to the others reports, the issue will be immediately solved
Secondly, reporting on emergencies can enhance public awareness to prevent potential consequences
In case, someone posts some news relevant to risks that endanger children so many parents will be attracted and pay attention, improving their knowledge to protect their children.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe the reports focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development.
The main one is,continuous exposure to negative news can increase stress and anxiety.
For instance, via social media platforms such as Facebook and Twitter consumers will be got more news on daily basis such as the pressure adolescence, many adults tend to overthinking since they have to attend too much lessons that they do not want to participate since depressed and lengthy theories.
In addition, constant exposure to negative news can desensitize people to violence, tragedy, and suffering.
This can be exemplified in the case of, when existing some reports about the regarding the issue of protecting people’s freedom and happiness , consumers always believe that they are being closely protected by the majority, but in reality is not that, the issue of school violence and domestic violence still appears in around the world,
In conclusion, while there are many benefits to problems and emergencies reported by the news. I still believe that it is more disadvantageous to society because negative news can increase stress and anxiety or desensitize people to violence, tragedy, and suffering.
It is advisable that governments take the initiative to completely solve the problem in the near future.
It is true that the main focus of the media is a topic of much debate. While there is a trend that media reports focus on problems and
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thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The illustration describes the renovation of Toronto GO Train Station in Stages.
Overall, it is clear that the station originally had two levels of boarding and transiting, which was further expanded to another level for commercial purposes.
In the past, the train tracks were located above ground, below this level was underground which used as a path for passengers to transit. A pillar was constructed to support from the bottom of the ground floor, which was divided two parts, the exposed part in the basement was relatively small
From the redesign stage, there was a big part of the pillar that was dismantled for the purpose of adding another underground level. After renovation, the bottom of the station was removed to resize the pillar. The existing transit concourse was slightly raised, and another underground level was opened for retail stores
The illustration describes the renovation of Toronto GO Train Station in Stages.
Overall, it is clear that the station originally had two levels of boarding and transiting, which was further expande...
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?**
Bài làm:
The emergence of driverless automobiles has been predicted for several years. Indeed, nowadays, drivers have become more dependent on technology. Corporations in the automobile industry have attempted to produce fully-automated cars, one example of this is Tesla. Although the advantages is undeniable, there are varied reasons why they haven't been mass-produced.
On the one hand, artificial intelligence restricts the miscalculations made by humans. Even individuals who have experience in driving can be easily distracted when encounter a certain deterrent. Other than that, people's state of mind can also contribute as an influential factor. For example, lack of sleep can reduce the attention duration while controlling a vehicle. Although, in many cases, there will be no casualty caused due to these simple reasons, it is still important to bear in mind that there are chances that it will. Driverless vehicles, however, do not possess any emotions which can possibly lead to lack of focus. In addition, accidents resulting from alcohol usage and law violations will be completely avoided.
On the other hand, technology can not be depended on in every situation. Despite the advancement of technology, there are still numerous misfunctions in driverless automobiles. Take the example of a nation with frequent traffic congestion such as Vietnam. The advanced vehicles are designed to brake when there is an obstacle, should they be launched on Vietnamese roads, they will be unable to operate due to a shortage of space. Driverless technology is connected to GPS and satellites, which can be a target of hijacking or information theft. There are a variety of aspects to consider before relying completely on technology.
Along with all the disadvantages, there is the continuous development of technology indicating that shortly, the advantages will make up for these drawbacks. Thus, for the time being, in spite of the misjudgments that humans might make, driverless cars still require further innovation to be considered as an alternative option.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**In the future all cars, buses, and tr...
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Writing task 1 - Em rất mong được sự hỗ trợ của thầy cô ạ
The chart indicates the result of a survey about coffee and tea consumption habits of citizens in five cities in Australia.
Overall, people living in four cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide, and Hobart, tend to go to a café for these two beverages rather than buying fresh or instant coffee, with the exception of Adelaide’s citizens. Noticeably, Hobart saw the highest use of coffee over other cities.
The proportion of citizens in these cities who chose to buy fresh coffee was the lowest, with approximately 45% in Sydney, 40% in Melbourne, and Hobart, which was 5% higher than that of Brisbane and Adelaide. Meanwhile, Hobart claimed the first rank in purchasing instant coffee, with 55% of its residents. The next position belonged to Brisbane, Adelaide, and Melbourne, respectively, at about 50% of their citizen, while Sydney remained the last place with 5% lower.
The trend towards going to a café for drinks was dominant in Hobart, Sydney, and Melbourne, with above 60% of residents in each city, whereas the exact figure in Brisbane and Adelaide were relatively low, just about 55% and 50% respectively.
The chart indicates the result of a survey about coffee and tea consumption habits of citizens in five cities in Australia.
Overall, people living in four cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide...
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Writing Task 1: Process- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài: **The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.**
**Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.**
Bài làm:
The diagram illustrates the steps taken in the plastic-recycling process.
Overall, it can be observed that the procedure consists of nine individual parts, which can be distributed into three main phrases including categorizing, processing, and merchandizing the plastic waste.
In the first stage, consumer waste is delivered by garbage trucks to recycling centers for classification, in which it is divided into recyclable and non-recyclable trash manually. The recyclable trash, then, is compacted into separated blocks to enter the trash grinding machine. Soon after, small chunks of plastic, which result from the grinding process, are transferred into a water tank for cleansing. The washed plastics are transformed into pallets, which go through a machine to create finer and cleaner plastic particles. In the seventh step, these pallets are heated and later on, act as a component for making raw material. The raw material can be used in the production of a variety of goods, ranging from plastic containers to synthetic fibers for clothing and stationary products such as pencils. When it is the end of the product's life cycle, the process will repeated from the initial stage.
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Đề bài: **The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 1 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.
TASK 1: The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
(BÀI LÀM)
The pie charts illustrate the study results related to reasons for doing MBA qualification, and the significant values which recruiters need most.
Overall, most individuals chose this degree because they believed that it would provide better job opportunities. Additionally, employers longed to choose their employees who had outstanding personality and previous experience (Knowledge), but the qualifications were estimated the last factor they considered.
In terms of the reasons for doing MBA, 65% was dominated by Better Job Opportunities, followed by Ability to Do job Better, accounting for 15%. Next, Personal Development was higher than Ability to Help Others, at 12% and 8%, respectively.
In connection with What Employers Value Most, there were a similar proportion for both Personality and Previous Experience (Knowledge), at 25% for each other. Surprisingly, Presentation/Appearance and Previous Experience (Connections) also had an alike number, registering 20%. Finally, Qualifications was the smallest factor when recruiters employed new workers, at 10%.
TASK 1: The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
(BÀI LÀM)
The pie charts illustrate the study results related to rea...
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Writing task 2, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed.
What are the reasons for this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Bài viết:
Many fathers and mothers in those days are giving too much expectation on their kids which put them under pressure to be successful for several reasons. Although this tendency may be good in some aspects as it can help children to allocate full effort and energy to whatever they do aiming for success, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the benefits.
There are various reasons why parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. First, people often believe that success can bring a wealthy life to humans. Since children become successful in the future, they can have enough money to afford their daily stuff and have a peaceful state of mind. Moreover, it is a fact that when individuals are put under pressure, they tend to try their best in order to achieve accomplishment.
On the other hand, despite the heavy pressure can contribute to children’s efforts, it can also have negative effects on them. When kids are being put under a lot of pressure, their mental health is harmed, and do not want to spend time with their parents as they are sacrificed by their own families at a very young age. For instance, some parents seem not to be satisfied with their children’s education results although they’ve got great marks. Some dads and mums even compare their children with others to force them to strive for harder work. Furthermore, too much expectation can prone to inferiority of children, they always feel that they are worse than others and do not want to improve themselves anymore. In this case, this development is not an efficient method for adults to help their child better but just gives a converted consequence.
In conclusion, I consider this advance to be negative for both children and their parents. Adults prioritize success and are willing to put their beloved children under pressure as they want the young to conquer a better life but this is not the right way as it can do more harm than good to children's health and minds.
Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed.
What are the reasons for this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Bài viết:
Many fathers and mothers in those days are gi...
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Em mong thầy cô chấm bài Writing task 2 của e ạ, e cảm ơn :3 Q: Some people think that young people should go to university to further their
education, while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or
builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The topic of whether graduates should apply for a university degree as an executive education or they should commence working immediately has long been at the centre of discussion. I personally uphold the view that adults should seek a further education like a university degree.
On the on hand, car mechanics and builders provide essential services that contribute to the functioning of society.For example, construction workers will meet the needs of those who want to build a new house or renovate an old house. Moreover, they can have the opportunities for
hands-on learning.For instance, while going to school has to learn long and boring theories, those who work have been exposed to work, practiced and have a lot of experience.
On the other hand, university provides in-depth
knowledge and expertise in a
particular field of study.During time at university transferable skill will be developed which skills used every day professional work lives, social lives and home lives such as organising, managing time, working as part of a time. Besides, Individuals with a university degree
tend to earn higher salaries over their lifetimes compared to those without a degree. As it proves that workers have solid foundation knowledge as well ashave been trained in their field.
In conclusion, although working as car mechanics or builders presents certain advantages, i contend that is should not be encouraged due to that affects the quality of the salary, which is lower than that of people with a university degree. It can be predicted that communities should take measures to encourage adolescents to pursue higher education programs
The topic of whether graduates should apply for a university degree as an executive education or they should commence working immediately has long been at the centre of discussion. I personally uphold...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates how many tons of four types of waste were collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, the amount collected of all four types of waste increased over the period, with that of paper being generally the highest, while garden waste was consistently the least collected over the given time frame.
Regarding the two most common forms of waste, the amount of rubbish collected from paper in 2011 was 57 tons, after which it decreased steadily to the lowest point at 40 tonnes in 2013, being surpassed by glass waste, before recovering to peak at 70 tonnes in 2015. Meanwhile, the amount of trash collected from glass was generally lower than from paper, except for 2013 when it surpassed that of paper at the initial level of 48 tons to be the most collected, prior to inclining to the highest point at 52 tons in 2015, despite slight decreases to the lowest point at 41 tons in 2012 and to 46 tons in 2014.
Concerning the two remaining waste categories, the waste amount collected from tins was by far higher than that of gardens, hovering around 30 tons throughout the period, except for 2012 when both hit the low, with respective figures being 27 and 15 tons.
The bar graph illustrates how many tons of four types of waste were collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, the amount collected of all four types of waste increased over th...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graphs compare the mean protein and calorie consumption among four different areas around the world, namely India, East Africa, Latin America, and North America.
Overall, North America consistently has the highest protein and calorie intake, while the opposite was true for India. Additionally, North America is the only region where the consumption statistics in both categories exceed the recommended level.
Regarding average protein intake, its standard intake is nearly 70 units in total. The amount of animal protein consumed in North America is five times as much as that of other sources, with 62 and 18 units, respectively, overtaking the advised amount, while the figures for Latin America are much lower, at 32 and 13 units, in that order. However, the average animal-derived and other origins protein intake in India and East Africa are almost comparable, at around half each.
Concerning average calorie intake, North Americans account for the highest amount of around 3500 calories, surpassing the recommendation, while that of Latin Americans is just below the ideal level. Conversely, calorie intake amounts in East Africa and India are much lower, with respective figures being approximately 2400 and 2000 calories, with the latter being the lowest.
The bar graphs compare the mean protein and calorie consumption among four different areas around the world, namely India, East Africa, Latin America, and North America.
Overall, North America cons...
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