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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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WRITING TASK 2: Mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
TASK. People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Thanks to technological developments, humans living in the 21st century have a more enhanced quality of life than older generations. I strongly agree with this opinion, as I think the advancements in science and technology have significant impacts on our way of living.
First of all, the rising numbers of medical innovations in facilities and disease treatment methods enhanced quality of life is unprecedented progress and individuals can accessible to more populations than the prior centuries. Modern medical innovations have not only increased life expectancy but also improved the quality of life through effective treatments and preventive care. For example, advancements in medical imaging and minimally invasive surgery have made complex procedures safer and more accessible, drastically reducing recovery times and improving outcomes.
Another justification for improving individuals' quality of life is that digital technology makes networking, commerce, and entertainment more convenient and rich. The internet and smartphones have democratized access to information, connecting people across the globe and empowering them with knowledge and resources. Furthermore, the use of mobile banking services has made money transactions among individuals less time-consuming and more managed, since consumers can now access a variety of leisure alternatives at any time and from any location. For example, instead of going to cinemas to watch films, now people can surf the web to opt for millions of films just through several clicks with less expenses.
To conclude, the 21st century offers a superior quality of life, primarily thanks to groundbreaking advancements in healthcare and the transformative impact of digital technology. These developments have not only prolonged our lives but have also enriched our daily experiences making our modern life more convenient, connected, and comfortable than ever before.
TASK. People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài: Many people believe that formal "pen and paper" examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement.
What is your view of examinations?
Bài làm:
Some argues that paper tests are not the ideal measurement of academic results. Admittedly, paper tests may have certain limitations. However, in my opinion, there are no better solution available.
First of all, paper examinations reduces the risk of unjustified achievements by ensuring all candidates are evaluated based on the same set of criteria. This eliminates the possibility of favoritism that may arise in other testing methods such as online tests, interviews or practical challenges. They can also be kept as record for further investigation if required. World-wide certificates such as IELTS need to be delivered to multiple countries and there is no better method than printed exams.
Second of all, printed tests are efficient and cost-effective. Alternative test can take a long time and a certain amount of money to prepare and conduct. This not only increase the cost of participation fee but the organization fund can also suffer. Small scale competition can be hosted easily, however, others such as the national university entrance exam is impossible to be taken place with such measures.
On the other hand, online tests which are affordable and time-saving are becoming a trend at the time. With the increasing availability of technology, online testing platforms offer a convenient experience for students, especially those who live in remoted areas. Despite of its advantages, the test has no guarantees of the monitor needed, therefore, candidates might commit exam counterfeits leading to unfair results.
There are opinions which assume paper tests are solely theoretical information rather than practical knowledge. Although it might be true to some extent, until there are a better solution monetarily and timely, paper examinations will remain the best option.
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Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The pie chart shows the percentage of Australian workers from three areas in 2003, while the line graph illustrates the unemployment rate of those three groups in this country from 1993 to 2003.
Overall, native Australians accounted for the majority of the workforce. Additionally, all three categories examined experienced a downward trend and slight fluctuations in the proportion of unemployment over the period, with that of non-English-speaking nations consistently the highest, while the opposite was true for other English-speaking nations but Australia.
Regarding the pie chart, just over three-quarters of the labour force were locally born in Australia, much higher than those from non-English-speaking (14%) and English-speaking countries (10%) combined.
Concerning the line graph, the unemployment level of individuals born in non-English-speaking countries was the highest in 1993, at about 7%, followed by a significant decline to the lowest point at around 3% in 2000, before remaining relatively stable towards 2003. Meanwhile, 4% of native Australians were unemployed initially, after which it halved in the final year, despite a negligible recovery in 1996 and 2001. Finally, a similar pattern, albeit to a greater extent, was seen in the figures for jobless non-native English speakers, starting from just below 4% in the first year and ending at approximately 1%, despite recovering minorly in 1996 and 2001.
The pie chart shows the percentage of Australian workers from three areas in 2003, while the line graph illustrates the unemployment rate of those three groups in this country from 1993 to 2003.
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em mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ
The bar charts illustrate the overall proportion of films premiered and that of ticket sales between 1996 and 2004 in a country.
Overall, while there was an increase in the percentage of drama, comedy and fantasy films, that of romance films still stayed intact. In addition, comedy was the genre consistently selling the most tickets compared to the remaining genres in the period given.
The percentage of drama movies being released started at over 25% in 1996, after which it experienced an upward tendency to 35%, followed by a mere 5% increase in the comedy genre. A similar change was seen in the figure for fantasy, rising from just over 10% to about 15%, whereas the figure for romantic films remained unchanged at around 5% throughout the examined period.
In terms of the ticket sales, exactly 20% of ticket sales were made up by comedy films in 1996, with a subsequent increase to just under 25% at the end of the period. A similar pattern, but to a lesser extent, was witnessed in the figure for dramas, which grew from over 15% to roughly 17% in 2000. Moreover, the ticket sales of fantasy increased moderately from under 5% at the beginning to nearly 7% in 2000, while the figure for romance movies showed an opposing pattern, decreasing from 5% to around 2% in 2000.
The bar charts illustrate the overall proportion of films premiered and that of ticket sales between 1996 and 2004 in a country.
Overall, while there was an increase in the percentage of drama, comedy...
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em mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ
The line chart illustrates how many hours on average four car brands spent on manufacturing vehicles at their US factories.
Overall, there was a decrease in the amount of time producing a vehicle in all car manufacturers examined, with Honda generally being the brand using the lowest time to produce a car throughout the period given.
The figure for Ford started at 28 hours in 1998 to reach a peak of around 31 hours after 3 years, but later dropped to just under 22 hours at the end of the period. By contrast, the figure for General Motor witnessed a consistent drop from exactly 32 to 22 hours in 2005.
As for the other remaining groups, 22 hours were spent on manufacturing a single vehicle by both Honda and Toyota in 1998, and they still continued to share the similar production time between 2001 and 2002, at around 23 hours per car, after witnessing a slight fluctuation over 3 years. Afterward, they managed to fluctuate again during the following years, before declining and converging at 20 hours of completing a car in the final year.
The line chart illustrates how many hours on average four car brands spent on manufacturing vehicles at their US factories.
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ . The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
overall , production level of petroleum had the highest figure during the period shown . In addtion , while the production levels of petroleum and natural gas increased over the period , the opposite was true in case of coal.
In terms of petroleum , the production level started at around 95 million tonnes in 1981 , then increased significantly to approximately 139 million tonnes in 1984 before remaining relatively stable from 1994 to 1997 / over the next four years.In 1991 , the figure for petroleum declined dramatically to 100 million tonnes , followed by rising considerably to nearly 140 million tonnes towards the end of the timeframe Natural gas followed a much steadier upward trend compared to that of petroleum. Starting at under 40 million tonnes itinally in 1981/ in the first year , natural gas overtook the production level of coal in 1991, and ended at 100 million tonnes in 2000.
in contrast , the level of coal witnessed a downward trend. Starting at 80 million tonnes in the first year , this figure declined considerably by approximately 40 million tonnes in 1984 , followed by remaining stable in the next 4 years before experiencing the gradual fall in the entire years and ending at nearly 39 million tonnes in 2000.
overall , production level of petroleum had the highest figure during the period shown . In addtion , while the production levels of petroleum and natural gas increased over the period , the opposite...
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Dạ em chào thầy cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ em cảm ơn ạ . Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number, and so on) for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking. Is this a positive or negative development?
In current society , many people tend to share their private details online for different purposes.From my perspective ,desptive presenting certain negative aspects , the positive ones are more significant in our increasingly digital society.
Providing personal details online contributes to enhanced convenience , help decrease much time on transactions and communication. For example , in the past , to sign up for a bark account , people needed go to the bank branch which waste much time and transportation costs.Therefore , online personal information help users complete time-consuming paperwork without vititing to a bank branch . Moreover , when signing up again , users only fill their names and contact phones to get themselves verified , which is beneficial in cases of emergency when they try to sign up for their account. Secondly , this trend fosters social connections regardless of geographical barrier. For example, users can find out old friends in high school through searching these friend’s names and cities by search engines on popular networking sites such as Facebook and Instagram , then they can keep in touch with each others after a long time.Therefore , users can maintain and develop their social relationships. these benefits not only simplify time-consuming paperworks but also enrich social interactions , illustrating positive aspects of sharing private personal information online.
However , the safety concerns are raised about this issue. The advancement of digital technologies pave the way for the privacy breaches and identity theft. Cybercriminals can break into someone’s account , then exploit and steal relevant information such as home adddress , contact number and identity card number.They also utilize detective techniques to trick individuals into revealing the sensitive information such as login information or financial details. Moreover , there have been reports that some social networking sites such as Tik Tok keep track of users’ activities , exploit data and sell illegally users’ information without their permission. These lead to identity theft and financial loss in increasingly digital society , laying out negative ones of this trend.
In conclusion , while sharing personal details online brings certain risks relating to personal privacy , I believe that the impacts of this trend on modern society are overwhelmingly positive.
In current society , many people tend to share their private details online for different purposes.From my perspective ,desptive presenting certain negative aspects , the positive ones are more signif...
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writing test 2
The debatable questions regarding testing in education have emerged in recent years. Particularly, there are several arguments battle them affirming that they will likely result in more harm than benefits. I personally think that those examinations play an important role in our nowadays society, but they should not be the sole method to value students.
First of all, it is undoubtedly true that testing methods bring huge advantages, not only efficient in assessing students's knowledge but also in assessing the ability to remember. For instance, many researchers suggest that individuals who are good at dealing with a chain of examination are also good at being capable of remembering new knowledge emerging continuously. Another point to make is that examinations are the fairest assessment method because marks have a considerable impact on their final result and their fortune. Given all this, it is not entirely inaccurate to state that they have more educational benefits than disadvantages.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages that cannot be easily verified. One of them is that, besides the wide amount of information tests can acquire, they in some ways can cause the succession of pressure in terms of students's remembering ability and self-defense before studying stress. Moreover, popular competitions in education among students nowadays can strongly effect to their characters and result unpredicted conflict. For example, pupils finished exams with flying color are naturally awarded and commended in front of the whole school in the mean while others with lower scores are obviously received nothing but giving them a round of applause, some of them are even punished by their family due to their colapse. As a result, competitive and jealous emotion will gradually built, waiting for an opportune moment to erupt, perpetrating dangerous actions in student's health and mentality, and its consequences cannot be judged. Finally, only focus on challenging among students is constantly enlarged but ignored the significance of teamwork capability, which is very nescessary in modern society can create lonelyness and don't-care attitude.
In conclusion, I think that currently applying tests need to be adjusted, but not mean that their role should be reduced. As stated above, they have a series of downsides that could be handled if, the board of education pay more attention on pupil, and offer effective methods couraging teamwork ability. Overall, their benefits still outweight the disadvantages, but they could be improved even better with only some minor modifications.
The debatable questions regarding testing in education have emerged in recent years. Particularly, there are several arguments battle them affirming that they will likely result in more harm than bene...
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The diagrams below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Nhờthầy cô chấm chữa giúp em. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The maps illustrate the present layout and proposed transformation of an industrial zone.
Overall, the most notable change is the conversion of an industrial site into a new residential area. This results in the removal of offices, canteen, factory and other structures to make way for the establishment of housing and a variety of amenities. In contrast, the surrounding road systems will remain steady.
In terms of western development, the existing parking and storage facilities, bordering Toe Lan, are proposed to be replaced by the construction of a 3 bedroom house and a 4 bedroom house. On the Eastern site of the plan, which is to the left of Pie Walk, the space of the current factory will be expanded in order to erect parking areas and a series of apartments.
To the Northern area of the layout, along Chimney Road, it is expected that the entrance and reception will substitute with the building of 3 double-bedroom houses. Central to the site, the old yard will be transformed into communal gardens, which will lead to the formation of private roads on the west, east, and south periphery. In the southern section, parking garages, at the corner of Swallow Street and Pie Walk, will be built to replace the existing office blocks and a canteen,which optimizes the area's use by consuming less space than the former office structure.
The maps illustrate the present layout and proposed transformation of an industrial zone.
Overall, the most notable change is the conversion of an industrial site into a new residential area. This...
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Nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài bên dưới. em cảm ơn.
Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some experts claim that the citizen's satisfaction is not involved in any rise in the economic development of a rich nation. From my point of view, although a wealthy country can bring some benefits to their residents, I firmly agree with this notion.
On the one hand, economic growth plays a key role in improving the quality of life of inhabitants in a country. First of all, wealthy nations often concentrate on investing in the healthcare system to assure treatments and medications for any patients. To illustrate, modern equipment, specific drugs, and vaccines are always available in wealthy countries to ensure that emergency or challenging cases can be solved immediately. For example, some patients in undeveloped countries have to come to developed ones with advanced healthcare systems such as Singapore to treat difficult diseases. Secondly, rich countries can offer various high-paid jobs for their citizens compared to poorer countries, which can lead to higher levels of employment and lower the rate of poverty as well. For instance, there is a large number of Vietnamese workers in Vietnam who choose to work overseas labor export to other richer countries such as Japan, Taiwan, Korea, and European nations so that they can earn more money to support their families.
On the other hand, from my perspective, I believe that the wealth of a nation does not necessarily equate happiness to its residents. First, it is true that the rate of depression, stress, and taxing is high in some developed countries such as Korea, America and Japan. In contrast, the country of Bhutan is well-known as the happiest country in the world, even though it is considered as a relatively poor nation. Furthermore, excessive wealth may bring some detrimental impacts among people. In fact, there are numerous individuals pursuing material possession to prove their financial capability. Consequently, after possessing luxurious items such as cars and clothing, they find themselve empty and lonely as they lose many important relationships and other spiritual values.
In conclusion, although there are some specific advantages that a wealthy nation can bring to their citizens, I do not believe that people in rich countries can have more satisfaction when their government continues boosting the economy as there are other factors measuring a person's level of happiness.
Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The table compares the tuition fees for overseas students in US Dollars in different postgraduate degrees in three countries in 2007.
Overall, it is clear that tuition for most courses in country B was the highest, while art and commerce courses in country A were the lowest. Additionally, computing and science were the most expensive courses in all nations.
Arts and commerce generally offered cheaper fees than other courses in the three countries. As for arts and commerce fees in country C, they cost 19000, followed by B and A with 18000 and 8000, respectively. Whereas, 8000 dollars was the fee that the country had to pay for meals and accommodation in country A, and 17000 and 11000 dollar for payable fees in country B and C.
In terms of science, 29000 was the tuition fee in country A, which was marginally higher than that of country B, with 25000, and the lowest fee courses was 11000 in country A. Furthermore, Country B also ranked first in the courses fee for computing 27000, which was higher than that of country C 3000, 11000 was the tuition fee for country A.
The table compares the tuition fees for overseas students in US Dollars in different postgraduate degrees in three countries in 2007.
Overall, it is clear that tuition for most courses in country B w...
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em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The bar chart depicts the adjustment in house prices based on the standard number in 1989, locating in 5 different areas in a period from 1990 to 2002.
In general, the changing period was seperated into two unrelated time, which remarkably illustrated the consistent rise of dwelling value in Madrid city in Spain. In particular, London was a city, of which percentage of average housing prices had a dramatic increase and took the leading role in this category during a second period.
In the moment between 1990 and 1995, the proportion of housing cost in New York, London, and Tokyo had declined up to and more than 5% compared to the amount in 1989. In contrast, the rising percentage of house value only occurred in two places which were Madrid and Frankfurt with the amount not even reaching 5%.
However, coming to the years between 1996-2002, only Tokyo remained its house prices lower than the average price in 1989, at 5%. However, its dwelling price had experienced a slight jump from the previous period until 2002, around 3%. Additionally, house prices in Frankfurt indicated the decrease about 1% for most of two periods, but its percentage still surpassed the standard price.
The bar chart depicts the adjustment in house prices based on the standard number in 1989, locating in 5 different areas in a period from 1990 to 2002.
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writing task 1
The total value of exports and the value of fuel, food, and manufactured products exported by one country from 2000 to 2005 is demonstrated in the graph below.
The value of fuel exports has been shown a dramatic reduction from 30.000 to 25.000 million dollars in the first three years before followed by a period of top-notch upsurge until the final year.
The export of food hovered under 10.000 million dollars over the whole time frame. The value of manufactured goods showed a huge increase in amount from 15.000 to almost 25.000 million dollars in the first three years, the figure went down quickly to 20.000 in 2003, until followed by a period of stability around this value until 2005 nearly 22.000 million dollars. Starting off at over 40.000 million dollars in 2000, in contrast the export of fuel indicated notable decrease by a half in value all the timeline and ended accurately 20.000 million dollars in 2005.
In summary, the data provided in the graph below offer insights into the total value of export, the value of fuel, food, and manufactured goods from 2000 to 2005.
The total value of exports and the value of fuel, food, and manufactured products exported by one country from 2000 to 2005 is demonstrated in the graph below.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to four different attractions in Scotland: aquarium, castle, zoo, and festival, between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, there were decreases in the share of tourists visiting aquariums and festivals, while the reverse pattern was seen in castles and zoos. Additionally, the castle generally was the most visited over the period, while the opposite was true for the zoo.
Regarding destinations that rose, the share of sightseers visiting the castle started at roughly 23%, after which it increased significantly and peaked at 45% in 1995, followed by a 10% decrease in the next five years, before slowing down and ending the period at shy of this level. Meanwhile, zoos were the least visited for most of the period, with only 10% of travellers in 1980, followed by some fluctuations for the next two decades, before doubling in the final year to be the second most visited.
As for categories with declines, one-fifth of travellers went to aquariums in 1980, with a peak of 35% five years later, prior to falling considerably to the lowest point at 10% in 2010, becoming the least visited, despite a slight recovery between 1990 and 1995. Similar changes, albeit to a much lesser extent, were seen in the figure for festivals, with a steady fall from 30% in 1980 to 20% in 2010.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to four different attractions in Scotland: aquarium, castle, zoo, and festival, between 1980 and 2010.
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The table illustrates how many people from five countries in Europe resided in other countries in this region in 2011. Overall, the highest total of immigrants recorded was the Polish, while the opposite was true for the Spanish. However, Germany dominated in the number of expatriates, while the lowest was the case for that of Poland.
Regarding the three most popular options, Germany saw the highest number of non-Germans, at nearly 1.2 thousand in total, with the majority from Italy (556 thousand). Followed closely was Britain with just over 1 million expats, with just over half being Polish (550 thousand). Meanwhile, the total figure for Spain was around 200 thousand fewer than those of Germany and Britain, of which almost half were from Britain (391 thousand).
As for the two remaining countries, 106 thousand Polish relocated to Italy, which was the largest group, compared to its minority counterpart (19 thousand Spanish). Finally, Poland was the least chosen country, with only 6 thousand people in total, of which over half were from Germany (4.4 thousand), much greater than their minor counterparts (only 170 Spanish).
The table illustrates how many people from five countries in Europe resided in other countries in this region in 2011. Overall, the highest total of immigrants recorded was the Polish, while the oppos...
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The line graph illustrates the export volume from Australia to four countries, namely Japan, the US, China, and India between 1990 to 2012.
Overall, there were increases in the export proportions to China and India over the period, while the opposite was true for those to Japan and the US. Additionally, the figure for China saw the most significant growth, and Japan was the largest importer for most of the period.
Regarding countries with upward trends, in 1990, the Australian export rate to China was about 2%, after which it surged to just below 30% in 2012, after surpassing the figures for the US and Japan at 10% in 2004 and 20% in 2008, respectively, to become the largest importer. Moreover, the export percentage to India remained relatively stable and the lowest at 1% until 2002, followed by a steady incline and peaked at just under 10% in 2009, before ending the period with a marginal fall of 2%.
As for the other countries, both nations saw some slight fluctuations over the period. Japan accounted for the highest share of imports in the first year, at a quarter. Thereafter, its figures saw a gradual decline and the lowest point at approximately 18% in 2003, prior to hovering around this level until 2012, despite a 2007-to-2008 recovery. Meanwhile, the US generally experienced a similar pattern, starting at the highest point at just above 10% initially, then ending with a steady decline to just over India’s final level, despite a peak at the initial level in 2000.
The line graph illustrates the export volume from Australia to four countries, namely Japan, the US, China, and India between 1990 to 2012.
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Some people believe that increasing taxes on various industries will reduce
pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss
both the view and give your opinion.
Opinions diverge the imposition of elevated taxes on several economic sectors, which can decrease environmental degradation. In contrast, there are more helpful methods to resolve this problem.
On the one hand, putting high taxes on diverse industries to alleviate pollution for two reasons. Firstly, high taxes may encourage more sustainable technological advancement. When faced with large tax payable, companies are forced to invest money in modern and cleaner technology. For example, the implementation of a significant tax on single-use plastic prompts manufacturers who have to adopt biodegradable materials for packaging. This reformation can help businesses retain revenue without big tax payable, especially with the technology that is friendly to the environment. Moreover, increasing taxes will decrease the number of companies that do not meet environmental standards. Because most of the small companies produce plastic, brick, and cement releasing a large number of emissions into the air.
On the other hand, there are also more viable ways to handle this problem. The first is one of which is the introduction of rigorous environmental regulations. The authorities should heavily punish organizations that intentionally disobey the laws. To illustrate, business licenses are stripped and members are sentenced to prison by the Vietnamese government for affecting badly into environment. Furthermore, educating and increasing public awareness of citizens to make environment-conscious choices in daily life such as saving water and using recycled electricity, changing to drive electricity transportation instead of oil cars.
In conclusion, although I admit that heighten taxs on businesses can address pollution by promoting clean technology and decreasing carbon emissions. But, using strict laws and policies on businesses is also a good way to decrease pollution
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Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, the question of which are the factors leading to success in life has sparked an ongoing debate. While some people believe it comes from hard work and determination, others think some factors such as money and appearance significantly contribute to success. In this essay, I will delve into analyzing both stances, before concluding my own view why I would lean towards the former.
On the one hand, there are some undeniable reasons why some individuals think money and appearance play an important role in becoming successful. Initially, the strong financial background could facilitate many favorable conditions to success. This is because people can have more opportunities to access higher education and better services based on strong finance. As a result, they could easily lay the foundation for career development, thus resulting in higher job opportunities and living standards. Another factor considered as an essential element is appearance. To begin with, having an outstanding look could offer individuals more choices in an alluring career and attractive salary. For example, many positions that have a high advancement in economic and banking systems require both employees and employers with a good appearance. Therefore, possessing an attractive look can be a vital catalyst to give people more chances to succeed in life.
On the other hand, I hold the view that hard work and determination are one of the most important factors to succeed. Regarding the former, the road to success requires individuals who have an industrious character. To be more specific, it is understandable that the development in the career ladder is usually accompanied with long hours of hard and effective working. Thus, they might become more successful if they are equipped with this valuable quality. Regarding the latter, determination with a lot of goals helps them navigate and develop more effectively. Due to the motivation gained from their goals, they are likely to become more committed with their targets instead of giving up when facing some challenges. As a result, through hard work and strong determination, people could get a higher position in their career prosperity, leading to significant success in their lives.
In conclusion, while I acknowledge finance and appearance play an essential role for people to become successful in life, I concede that hard work and determination are more significant in creating success in life. However, there is a need for a balanced strive between these factors to facilitate the best condition for individuals to gain success in their life.
Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and g...
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The diagrams illustrate the changes that have taken place in a school between 1985 and now. Overall, the school has undergone significant changes, the most important of which are the addition and development of schooling facilities, catering for the educational and physical activities of an increase in the number of students (1500 to 2300).
In the north of the school campus was a rectangular car park in 1985 with a road surrounding it, connecting an entrance and an exit. This car park has been changed into a semicircular shape along with the road, while another small car park in its southwest has been removed. In addition, the driveway leading southward from the road to big playing fields has also been demolished, making space for trees.
The south side of the school premises was mainly occupied by the playing fields in 1985, which has been halved, allowing the construction of a new physical complex including a pool and a fitness centre on the west of the playing fields. Moreover, a library on the west of the campus has been upgraded into a learning resource centre with a new computer room inside, while on the south of this centre is an expanded building of classrooms, which used to be on the east of the former library. Meanwhile, the two-storey classroom block has been added with another level, along with another new building of classrooms built on the south of it.
The diagrams illustrate the changes that have taken place in a school between 1985 and now. Overall, the school has undergone significant changes, the most important of which are the addition and deve...
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The picture compares the layout and furniture between a single student room and a dual one at an Australian university. Overall, the two-student room is more spacious, catering for more furnishings, meaning a higher weekly rental cost than the room for one student.
Regarding size, both rooms share the same length (6 meters), while the two-person room is more spacious (4 meters) than the other room (2.5 meters), prompting students to pay more ($350/week compared to $200/week).
As one enters, on the left of the entrance, the two rooms have similar features, including a bathroom, a bookshelf, a study desk and a bed. In addition, the big difference between these rooms is that the bigger room has a table with two chairs right near the entrance, which are unincluded in the smaller one.
On the right of the entrance is a kitchen corner comprising a microwave, a stove, and a sink in both rooms. However, the single room’s kitchen has a more confined cooking space, while that in the double-occupant room faces the wall by the entrance because of the lengthened width, allowing more space for cooking. Moreover, next to the kitchen, both rooms also have a television. However, the bigger room has less space because of an additional study desk next to the television, and next to which is a second bed located in the far right corner, separated from the first one by two cupboards.
The picture compares the layout and furniture between a single student room and a dual one at an Australian university. Overall, the two-student room is more spacious, catering for more furnishings, m...
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