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Lee Wenyong

9/7/2024

LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!

Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được: 1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất. 2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó. 3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi. Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn. Nếu bạn vẫn còn thắc mắc nào về English club, bạn có thể comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu... Read more

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Lee Wenyong

9/7/2024

CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!

Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read more

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Phụng Nguyễn

4/3/2024

Nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài task 2 . em cảm ơn

Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There is an ongoing debate about whether the primary determinant of success in achieving goals is luck. Although I believe that luck is one of the factors attributed to people’s achievements, I firmly disagree with this statement since there are other elements that are much more significant. Admittedly, fortune plays an essential part in contributing to the success of a person. First, a successful business is often considered a matter of luck. For instance, individuals who start business in unexpected situations such as economic depression and Covid-19 pandemic must bear a huge amount of losses or even close their business. In contrast, those who operate their business at the right time with the right people easily achieve their targets. Second, whether achieving good academic results is sometimes thanks to luck. For example, students may pass an exam with high scores if they have previously prepared for similar topics. Another example is that high scores on multiple-choice exams can be achieved through random selection of correct choices rather than possessing knowledge of the answers. Nevertheless, I suppose that there are two important factors that mostly affect people's achievements. First and foremost, substantial effort is necessary to accomplish significant achievements. In fact, unless students strive for their academic pursuits, they will not achieve good results in the long run based solely on luckiness. Secondly, the attainment of goals requires a high level of determination. In other words, Individuals need to spend a large amount of time to enlarge their knowledge so that they will have a good qualification as well as necessary skills. As a result, they will have a decent job since they make an effort and dedication for a long time. In conclusion, the influence of luck on success cannot be dismissed. However, I contend that hard work and patience hold greater importance in the pursuit of goals. Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There is an ongoing debate about whether the primary determinant of success in... Read more

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Nighftall

4/3/2024

Writing task 2-Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa.Em cảm ơn ạa

Đề bài:The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the modern age, it is true that the increasing prevalence of obesity is put pressure on the health care systems as they contend with associated health challenges.Several individuals advocate that adding physical education classes in school curricula as an effective solution to address this issue.in my opinion, I wholeheartedly agree with this viewpoint and my rationales will be explained in this essay. By incorporating more sports classes into the curriculum as well as encouraging extracurricular sports activities, they will undoubtedly become fitter, enthusiastic and more active.Firstly, physical education promote a healthy lifestyle from a young age by instilling habits of doing physical exercise regularly.The person who participating in outdoor activity early are more likely to continue these practices into adulthood, thus reducing the risk of obesity and other related health issues.Secondly,by providing insight knowledge with align practice , physical education not only a holistic health by Increasing muscle density, blood circulation and endurance but also enhancing brain function.Sciencetifically,this is explained because exercises help stimulate protein production in the body, which considered as a factor that stimulates the growth of nerve cells and enhances cognition. Admittedly, If physical education is not introduced in school curricula, there are various detrimental effects that would occur and seriously influence numerous aspects.First and foremost, many students will spend time for playing video game or explore virtual world instead of doing exercise, beyond encountered with asthenia, they can also easily suffer from eye diseases and psychological disorders such as nearsightedness and depression.Secondly, the health system will also face many complex problems such as lack of human resources and running out of medicine.The increase in patients means that the number of doctors and drugs must increase to care for patients, while facilities and skilled doctors in most countries cannot serve the demand. In conclusion, although teachers need a constant effort to make students can absorb knowledge and create the habit of playing sports, I totally believe that it will brings a long-term benefit for students Đề bài:The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this... Read more

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myhoang23112001@gmail.com

28/2/2024

Writing task 2_Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa bài ạ, em cảm ơn

Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what e... Read more

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Nguyễn Nguyên

6/3/2024

Writing Task 1: Process- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.

Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: The diagram shows the five main writing systems in the wor... Read more

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Nguyễn Nguyên

4/3/2024

Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.

Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: **The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?** Bài làm: As an increasing number of species are on the edge of extinction, biodiversity has become a concerning problem for human society. There are multiple possible causes including deforestation, strip mining, poaching, and so on. However, the solution to this problem remains a conundrum. Individuals do not have the resources and power to solve the problem, therefore, first of all, governments should encourage environmental policies throughout their countries. Consider that most of the time, the reason for sabotaging the environment is for financial advantages. The government could enforce financial charges on illegal environment-related activities such as poaching or clearcutting. In addition, to be able to handle the situation properly, the felony has to be detected on time and penalized fairly. Pollution from several sources listing as industry and consumer waste is another major reason that leads to the loss of habitats and biodiversity. A large quantity of industry waste is being released into nature without properly processing it every day. In regards to that, second of all, the government and organizations should cooperate to establish a stable waste treatment to reduce the unwanted effects of pollution on the floral and fauna habitats. Countries such as Japan and China are investing in waste processing technology and the effort has shown desirable results in their environment. On the other hand, developing and under-developed countries are having a hard time launching environmental laws and researching new technology because of capital shortages. Additionally, maintaining a sustainable economy also requires satisfaction with economic growth. To cope with these drawbacks, countries' leaders should work together for an ultimate generic solution. Preserving biodiversity is the responsibility of not only governments and organizations but also each individual. Although, the process might not be effective instantaneously, with the attempt to reduce the damage, animals, plants, humans and their next generations can benefit from a healthy and prosperous environment. (309 words) Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: **The importance of biodiversity is bein... Read more

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Tùng

5/3/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The bar graphs illustrate how many native and non-native Australians lived in cities, towns, and rural areas in 1995 and 2010. Overall, city life was more prevalent in both categories in both year... Read more

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Tùng

5/3/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The bar graph illustrates the proportion of male and female lecturers in seven departments of a particular university in 2012. Overall, the majority of staff were men, with engineering having the h... Read more

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Nighftall

4/3/2024

Writing task1.Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ.

Đề bài:The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting t... Read more

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Nguyễn Nguyên

2/3/2024

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.

Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: The graph compares the percentage of international and th... Read more

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Nguyễn Nguyên

4/3/2024

Writing Task 1: Process- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.

Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestati... Read more

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Tùng

2/3/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The bar chart illustrates the sales of five major phone brands worldwide between 2009 and 2013. Overall, there were increases in the sales of Samsung and Apple, while the opposite was true for those o... Read more

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Tùng

2/3/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The bar graph illustrates how children aged 5 to 12 in a country commuted to and from school by different means of transport in 1990 and 2020. Overall, being driven by car was more preferred than othe... Read more

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minh huế

2/3/2024

Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ. In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In competitive job market today , people have to relocate from their hometown to find job opportunities. From my perspective , despite presenting several certain drawbacks , the advantages of this dev... Read more

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Nhu Quynh

3/3/2024

Some people say that certain personality types are more suited to particular jobs. Do you think this is true? Can we change our personality?

cho em hỏi dạng này là dạng nào và cách làm với ạ

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Nguyễn Huỳnh Anh Thư

2/3/2024

WRITING TASK 2: Mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ

TASK. People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Thanks to technological developments, humans living in the 21st century have a more enhanced quality of life than older generations. I strongly agree with this opinion, as I think the advancements in science and technology have significant impacts on our way of living. First of all, the rising numbers of medical innovations in facilities and disease treatment methods enhanced quality of life is unprecedented progress and individuals can accessible to more populations than the prior centuries. Modern medical innovations have not only increased life expectancy but also improved the quality of life through effective treatments and preventive care. For example, advancements in medical imaging and minimally invasive surgery have made complex procedures safer and more accessible, drastically reducing recovery times and improving outcomes. Another justification for improving individuals' quality of life is that digital technology makes networking, commerce, and entertainment more convenient and rich. The internet and smartphones have democratized access to information, connecting people across the globe and empowering them with knowledge and resources. Furthermore, the use of mobile banking services has made money transactions among individuals less time-consuming and more managed, since consumers can now access a variety of leisure alternatives at any time and from any location. For example, instead of going to cinemas to watch films, now people can surf the web to opt for millions of films just through several clicks with less expenses. To conclude, the 21st century offers a superior quality of life, primarily thanks to groundbreaking advancements in healthcare and the transformative impact of digital technology. These developments have not only prolonged our lives but have also enriched our daily experiences making our modern life more convenient, connected, and comfortable than ever before. TASK. People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Thanks to technological developments, humans living in th... Read more

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Nguyễn Nguyên

2/3/2024

Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.

Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: Many people believe that formal "pen and paper" examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? Bài làm: Some argues that paper tests are not the ideal measurement of academic results. Admittedly, paper tests may have certain limitations. However, in my opinion, there are no better solution available. First of all, paper examinations reduces the risk of unjustified achievements by ensuring all candidates are evaluated based on the same set of criteria. This eliminates the possibility of favoritism that may arise in other testing methods such as online tests, interviews or practical challenges. They can also be kept as record for further investigation if required. World-wide certificates such as IELTS need to be delivered to multiple countries and there is no better method than printed exams. Second of all, printed tests are efficient and cost-effective. Alternative test can take a long time and a certain amount of money to prepare and conduct. This not only increase the cost of participation fee but the organization fund can also suffer. Small scale competition can be hosted easily, however, others such as the national university entrance exam is impossible to be taken place with such measures. On the other hand, online tests which are affordable and time-saving are becoming a trend at the time. With the increasing availability of technology, online testing platforms offer a convenient experience for students, especially those who live in remoted areas. Despite of its advantages, the test has no guarantees of the monitor needed, therefore, candidates might commit exam counterfeits leading to unfair results. There are opinions which assume paper tests are solely theoretical information rather than practical knowledge. Although it might be true to some extent, until there are a better solution monetarily and timely, paper examinations will remain the best option. (277 words) Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: Many people believe that formal "pen and paper" examination... Read more

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Tùng

2/3/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The pie chart shows the percentage of Australian workers from three areas in 2003, while the line graph illustrates the unemployment rate of those three groups in this country from 1993 to 2003. Ov... Read more

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hải anh

29/2/2024

em mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ

The bar charts illustrate the overall proportion of films premiered and that of ticket sales between 1996 and 2004 in a country. Overall, while there was an increase in the percentage of drama, comedy... Read more

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hải anh

29/2/2024

em mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ

The line chart illustrates how many hours on average four car brands spent on manufacturing vehicles at their US factories. Overall, there was a decrease in the amount of time producing a vehicle in a... Read more

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minh huế

29/2/2024

Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ . The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

overall , production level of petroleum had the highest figure during the period shown . In addtion , while the production levels of petroleum and natural gas increased over the period , the opposite... Read more

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