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25/9/2023
Em muốn nhờ thầy cô xem giúp bài này ạa
While it is proposed by some that crime comes from social issues and personal poverty situations, others are of the opinion that it could potentially depend on the congenital evil tendency of criminals. This essay will first closely scrutinize both viewpoints before concluding that I agree with the former. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people hold the belief that a person’s innate characteristics influence wrongdoings. They might argue that individual intrinsic nature, as a behavioral control center, consists of both positive and negative aspects. Indeed, the uglier nature of offenders has surpassed the better one, or more importantly, it effortlessly overcomes the moral and ethical frameworks of society. The argument goes that the psychology of wrongness pursuit facilitates deviant behaviors, even leading to brutal crimes. Without being guided by external elements, approximately 30% of juvenile delinquency stems from their personal fulfillment and sudden desires, according to a worldwide survey by UNICEF. On the other hand, I side with those who are pro the inclusion of factors related to society. Perhaps the foremost reason would be that many offenders have disadvantaged socio-economic backgrounds as well as they lack the right orientations as ordinary citizens, which is indeed of paramount importance in today’s increasingly interconnected world. Several criminals, for example, cannot virtually afford to cover their basic necessities such as tuition fees or food supplies, which consolidates the motives behind their unlawful activities. The argument in favor of social reasons is further fortified by the fact that not only personal deprivation but social chaos also can lead to murder-related actions. Humans are a species with a particularly strong team spirit, so it is inevitable to imitate the bad behavior of incompetent companions. A violent environment, widespread social evils such as prostitution, drugs, and social chaos without proper management have increased the crime rate in the area, with the Cubatao slum in Brazil being a prominent example. In conclusion, while the potential for inherently toxic thoughts in criminals is a valid concern, I would contend that the principal reasons are the plights of each delinquent and also come from a chaotic, unethical, and lawless society. While it is proposed by some that crime comes from social issues and personal poverty situations, others are of the opinion that it could potentially depend on the congenital evil tendency of criminal... Read morephuong thao
25/9/2023
Em viết Ielts Writing task 1 mong được các thầy cô sửa ạ. Em thi ngày 20/10 ạ
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Overall, the percentage of households with 1 person and 2 people witnessed an upward trend, whereas the opposite was true for the remaining categories. It is also noteworthy that families with 2 members were the most popular in the 2 years examined. Looking first at the proportion for people who lived alone, in 1981, this figure stood at 17%. 20 years later, this figure increased by 9% to 26%, this was also the figure with the most significant change. The statistics for households with 2 people commenced at 31% in 1981 and then increased slightly to 34% in 2001. Turning to the categories for families with 3 people and 4 people, the figures began at 20% and 18% respectively. After two decades, both figures decreased by 3%. In 1981, 8% of the households in the UK lived with 5 family members and 6% of the households lived with 5 family members; 20 years later only 6 % of the households had 5 people and the statistics for households with 6 people declined to merely 2% The bar chart gives information about the proportion of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Overall, the percentage of households with 1 person and 2 people witnessed an upward trend, whe... Read moreThanh nhàn
9/9/2023
dạ thầy cô chấm điểm và sữa giúp em với ạ
Some people think it is important to spend money on roads and motorways than public transport systems. To what extend do you agree? It is no doubt that spending money on buses and subways is more critical than upgrading the public transport system. While I disagree with this statement. I believe that it is necessary to upgrade public transport and there are many advantages of public transport. To begin with, private vehicles are key factors traffic accidents. Irresponsible driving habits like running red light, speeding and driving under the influence of alcohol come from driver causes endangerous for participants traffic. Moreover, it is the reason for jam-backed. In megacities which motorbikes are move main vehicles, in rush hours worker are alway get held up in havy traffic. Traffic congestion made many people annoyances and take time. Although commute is quiet short waste time too much to move. Therefore, the government should ease traffic flows to avoid negatives effects to environment and human. On the other hand, citizens gain benefits from public transport. Most private vehicles problems are coped with by public transport. Firstly, human are safer when traveling by urban transport service and It help minimize traffic accidents by reducing the amount of vehicles attend movement on subways. Moreover, local transport are a more friendly environment which improves air quality and reduces noise pollution. Furthermore, for those who do not have private vehicles, such as motorbikes or cars, buses and subways are a great choice if they have to commute every day. In conclusion, the government should implement a policy to ease traffic flow. In my view I believe that should spend money to concentrate on upgrading the public transport system. Some people think it is important to spend money on roads and motorways than public transport systems. To what extend do you agree? It is no doubt that spending money on buses and subways is more cri... Read moreLinh
21/9/2023
Em mong nhận được những lời nhận xét góp ý của các thầy cô cho bài essay này ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ🌹
People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Essay: In recent years, controversies have arisen over the suitable ages of having offspring. While numerous people advocate the sentiment that married couples should bear children when they are still young, I strongly believe that having children at older ages should be taken into consideration because of its considerable benefits. On the one hand, proponents of the idea that people should not have children at older ages have their own convincing arguments. Firstly, older women who become pregnant are highly vulnerable to both physical and mental health problems. According to a recent research conducted by Ha Noi Medical University, scientists have proved that a significant number of older mothers may have higher risks of death than younger ones, together with the fact that their baby might be physically weaker. Secondly, it appears to be that there is a wide generation gap between parents and children in many circumstances. Specifically, children of older couples may hardly share their stories with them because of the dissimilarity of their thoughts and opinions, which might easily lead to misunderstanding that could escalate into family conflicts. On the other hand, I strongly believe that husband and wife should bear their children at older ages. Particularly, the initial benefit of this tendency is that having kids later in life helps them to completely focus on their career at a young age, which undoubtedly provides them with better opportunities for their work and study. Furthermore, another additional advantage is that married couples can also have more time to prepare for a solid financial foundation and acquire essential knowledge before welcoming a baby. It is undeniable that all parents want their children to be raised properly in a good condition and environment, which can only be achieved through careful financial planning and a comprehensive understanding. To summarize, while having children at a young age is advantageous to some extent, it is my viewpoint that the benefits of bearing children at older ages are greater than the drawbacks of this tendency. People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Essay: In recent years, controversies have arisen over the suitable ages of having offspri... Read moreDoan Thanh Binh
20/9/2023
Em mong được thầy cô giúp đỡ và chấm chữa để hoàn thiện hơn ạ
Some people think that we should be more careful about sending satellites into space because they show where we are in the universe, and we may attract the attention of dangerous aliens. Others believe that contact with other species may bring enormous benefits to humanity. Answer Within the situation of the current landscape. Unquestionably, people hold different opinions about whether harmful or helpful while launching satellites into orbit. In my personal estimation, although I understand why most of the public feel that it is risky to launch satellites into orbit, sending satellites can bring far greater benefits. This essay will analyze and discuss in depth both points of view in question. It is conceivable why some subscribe to the view that the act of launching satellites into orbit is immensely risky. The key rationale is that if hostile or technologically advanced aliens find out about humanity, they might consider us a threat or try to take advantage of our resources. It is obvious that they will find a method to destroy or deal with us if we are deemed the hostle, the implication of this is that the life of our earth will end. Therefore, being sent into space will menacing does seem justifiable. Nevertheless, in spite of the above argument, I am convinced that the beneficial when launching satellites into orbit for several compelling reasons. First and foremost, humanity may greatly benefit from interactions with other intelligent species. One possible explanation is that they might have the knowledge and technological advancements that are well beyond our current comprehension if we were to establish contact with a highly developed extraterrestrial culture such as medical advancements, or space exploration. Another essential point to consider is that cultural interchange with extraterrestrial civilizations may result in a deeper comprehension of the cosmos and fresh viewpoints on science, technology, and philosophy. One such convincing piece of evidence is that this relationship could fundamentally alter how we think about time, upending accepted beliefs and broadening our understanding of both science and philosophy. In conclusion, while a substantial contingent of individuals exposes the perspective of the dangerous when sending satellites into space, as indicated by a noteworthy level of support, I am firmly persuaded that the advantages it bring deserves even greater attention and consideration. Some people think that we should be more careful about sending satellites into space because they show where we are in the universe, and we may attract the attention of dangerous aliens. Others believ... Read moreHiểu Lam
20/9/2023
mong thầy cô cho e xin band@điểm bài này ạ
Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. My essay: Sports and leisure activities are not only a means of physical exercise but also a source of entertainment and relaxation for individuals and communities alike. Therefore, some people contend that an extreme sport like boxing is not appropriate in this contemporary age because of the physical damage that results in its participants. From my own standpoint, I strongly agree with the view for several reasons. To begin with, it is undeniable that boxing matches broadcast in front of the media are often famous for moral principles and a feast for the eyes such as respect for opponents, obedience to rules, and fair playing actions. Nevertheless, underground boxing, which is enjoyed most by the audience, is often associated with various disturbing factors including foul language, disregard for rivals, violent punches, brutal scenes and inelegant appearance as a repercussion of intense physical contact. Therefore, this dangerous sport is not suitable to exist in the modern age. Another rationale behind my belief as well as supporting the view is the case of Mike Tyson, who was an American prominent boxer with many remarkable achievements of his career. But when Tyson became older, he frequently faced hazardous illnesses stemming from boxing matches in the past such as osteoporosis and vision-related problems. Furthermore, several scientists conducted research on Tyson and his health was predicted to hardly recover from the injuries that were the consequences of his boxing career along with the ageing process. In this case, I would argue that this hazardous sport is truly endangered to physical well-being and should be banned on safety grounds. In conclusion, I totally believe that the elimination of boxing is suitable and rational due to the detrimental effects it has on the physical health of its players. Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any... Read moreThuy Hiền
20/9/2023
Em mới thử thách bản thân mình với đề cục đá huyền thoại này. Em mong thầy cô có thể sửa giúp em, em cảm ơn nhiều ạ
The picture depicts the evolution of the two separate cutting instruments from 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 million years ago. Overall, it is readily apparent that Tool A was rougher and even smaller than Tool B. Also, tool B was more in shape, which might be easier to hold and use. Dating back to 1,400,000 years ago, the front view of Tool A was not as regular as Tool B and its edge was harsh, so it perhaps caused trouble for users. However, Tool B might be in the shape of the dropping water, and its tip was likely to sharpen and be effective for cutting. Regarding the size of those tools, Tool A ranged from 6 to 8 cm, whereas it was significantly larger in Tool B, about 10 cm. Besides that, the side view revealed the development over a period of time. Tool B was supposed to have a smooth edge and surface designed for cutting objects cleanly and easily when compared to Tool A. Finally, the back view showed the most clearly that there was an increase in size and a flattened shape of each stone. The picture depicts the evolution of the two separate cutting instruments from 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 million years ago. Overall, it is readily apparent that Tool A was rougher and even sma... Read moreTuan minh
24/9/2023
thầy cô sửa và chấm giúp e ạ
The chart details medium spending every week by families during 50 years include 8 categories are food, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footware , household goods, personal goods, transport and leisure. General speaking, in 1968 people's payment for food too much which were gained percentage the most in all categories, but in 2018 food and leisure changed first position. Firstly, in the 1968 the expense ranked the first top was food with 35%, the second position were housing, clothing and footware respectively 10%. Beside, the number of proportion of household goods, personal goods and transport were counted approximately 7%. Finally, leisure was adjusted slightly about 1% when comparing with that 4 categories. Secondly, in 2018 average cost of families for the leisure activities were 22%, whereas food was declined double if we compare within 1968. However, housing and transport were improved tremendously and impressively were 18% and 14%. Likewise, household goods didn't have sign fluctuant over 50 years, but clothing and footware as well as personal goods unlucky, that were decreased double and much more. Finally, fuel and power in 1968 approximately 7% and 4 % in 2018 The chart details medium spending every week by families during 50 years include 8 categories are food, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footware , household goods, personal goods, transport and... Read moreNguyen Anh Tuan
23/9/2023
Line Graph
The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Bài Làm: The line chart illustrates how the number of individuals attending different types of sports in a country changed over a 20-year period. Overall, while tennis showed a surge in popularity, rugby experienced a decrease in participation throughout the period, with basketball and badminton remaining relatively stable. Moreover, the figure for rugby witnessed a dramatic change. In 1985, the number of people playing rugby stood at 250, which was roughly twice as high as that of tennis. After that, engaging in rugby was less common in 1995, with 200 participants, then underwent a significant drop before reaching the bottom at 50, which became the smallest figure in the final year. In contrast, the number of people who expressed a desire to play tennis was reported to have increased of 50 by 1995, after exceeding to the figure for rugby for five years later. Finally, the number of players engaging in tennis surged to approximately 240 at the end of the period. Turning to the remaining sports, in the first year, 85 individuals played basketball, almost 25 more than badminton. Over the following decade, the number of participants taking part in basketball rose to about 90, while those in badminton dropped to a low of 45 in 1995. In the remaining period, the figures for these two sports maintained their popularity, as the number of participants stayed at roughly the same level until 2005. Mong Thầy Cô Chấm Giúp Em, Tại Em Sắp Thi nên cần thầy cô chấm chữa ạ The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make co... Read moreNyppie
22/9/2023
Thầy cô check giúp em bài task 1 này với ạ. Em cảm ơn🫰🏻
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people who lived in cities over 50 years starting from 1970. It has some predictions for 2030 and 2040 in four nations namely the Philipines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia. It is noticeable that the figure for the Philipines was the highest in 1970 but it would drop to the third in 2040. By contrast, the lowest proportion in 1970 was in Indonesia which turned into the second at the end of the period. Turning to the details, it can be seen in the graph that Malaysia and Indonesia had an upward trend. The proportion went up from 30 to over 80 for Malaysia, leading to become the first Asian population. Additionally, Indonesia with around 15% in 1970 increased to over 50% was higher than the other nations. The Philipines fluctuated in the first 20 years, then it tended to gradually go up. Thailand had a slight rise until 1990 and stable figures to 2020, it is predicted to have a significant uplift over the next 20 years in period. The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people who lived in cities over 50 years starting from 1970. It has some predictions for 2030 and 2040 in four nations namely the Philipines, Malays... Read moreLinh
22/9/2023
Em chào cả nhà ạ, em mong đc thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em task 1 này, em cảm ơn rất nhiều ạaa <3
The presented diagram illustrates how a book is published. Overall, it is clear that there are nine distinct stages in the up to 24-month process, from the initial preparation of a manuscript to the eventual delivery to book stores. Initially, writers have to finalize the manuscript of the book before this piece of writing is sent to publishing companies. The contents of the book are then checked and censored by editors in order to ensure its quality and coherence. After being thoroughly revised, the book is then passed onto the assessment stage. At the same time, authors sign a contract with the publishing house before the designing process of the cover. The production continues with the final decision on the layout of the book. Subsequently, the book is fully printed, followed by the process of putting the papers inside the book cover and binding them together. Finally, all of these books are delivered to various book shops and ready to be sold. The presented diagram illustrates how a book is published. Overall, it is clear that there are nine distinct stages in the up to 24-month process, from the initial preparation of a manuscript to th... Read moreYuna🦊
24/9/2023
idea
can you give me some ideas about benefit of travelling alone??? can you give me some ideas about benefit of travelling alone???Linh
20/9/2023
em chào cả nhà ạ. các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa giúp em bài essay task 2 này đc k ạ. em cảm ơn nhiều ạ💖
Fewer young people choose to work in farming. What are the reasons? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work? Essay: These days, controversies have been engendered over an issue that a vast majority of youngsters avoid working in the agricultural sector. From my perspective, this trend can derive from several causes that will be discussed in this essay, along with a number of reasons why there should be more young farmers. The fact that there is a slight tendency for young adults to engage in farming work is associated with obvious reasons. Firstly, the agriculture field seems to have both a lower income and a limited prospect of financial stability. This is primarily because the earning is often unstable and it depends heavily on the yield of the crops. Secondly, universal education appears to result in more young individuals thinking that becoming a farmer is not high-class enough for an educated person. As a consequence, instead of tedious work like farming, they tend to gravitate to white-collar jobs that are perceived as smart and classy. Despite these aforementioned catalysts, it is suggested that the young generation should be promoted to become farmers by virtue of significant advantages. The initial benefit is that this encouragement can relatively minimize the risk of food shortage. In particular, the population constantly increases, together with an acceleration in food demands, so the young ought to be stimulated to work in agriculture in order to meet the expectation of the society. Another substantial benefit is that young minds can make notable advances in this profession. It is undeniable that youngsters are more adaptive to new technologies, so they can apply those to the farms, and hence produce healthier food. To summarize, although a falling number of young people are likely to engage in farming activities in recent times, these youngsters should be fostered to work in the agriculture field. Fewer young people choose to work in farming. What are the reasons? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work? Essay: These days, controversies have been engendered over an issue that a... Read moreNguyen Anh Tuan
21/9/2023
Line Graph
The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisons where relevant. Bài Làm: The line chart illustrates how the number of workers was engaged in different types of employment sectors in the USA changed over a 80-year period. There was a downward trend in the figure for farming, fishing, and foresting, while the others exhibited an increasing tendency. Furthermore, the data for farming, fishing, and foresting was reported to be the largest figure in 1930, but the trend shifted toward that of industrial. In 1930, employers were engaged in sales and office stood at approximately 10%, following by the figures for techincal and industrial, with 1% and almost none respectively. After that, the data for industrial remained at a similar level by 1970 before gradually growing to 35%, which became the largest figure in 2010, whereas those of technical, sales and office occupations showed a steady growth almost all the period, but at the end of period, techincal occupations were higher than sales and office ones, with 30% compared to 20%. The proportion of farming, fishing, and foresting occupations experienced a dramatic decline, starting at nearly 90% and gradually declining by 1930–2010. By 2010, workers who pursued farming,fishing, and foresting occupations recorded the lowest figure, reaching the bottom at 0%. In contrast, the percentage of other service positions grew from 10% to 15% in the first decade, then regressed back to 10% and remained around that level until the end of the period. Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em, đơn vị là %. The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisons where relevant. Bài Làm:... Read moreThuy Hiền
18/9/2023
thầy cô check giúp em task 1 này với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
The table given illustrates the detailed information of productivity of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in five European countries in two separate years including 1999 and 2004. In general, the figures of coffee saw an increasing in 2004, while in bananas, there were three out of five countries facing this tendency. Observing the data in 1999 of UK and Switzerland, UK gained the highest sales of bananas, at 15 millions, but, Switzerland was the country achieved the largest amount of coffee sold, at 3 millions. By 2004, there was significant dominant of revenue of UK in both coffee and bananas, especially overshadowed Switzerland with three times and eight times higher than that country, respectively. Also, sale of Fairtrade bananas in Switzerland saw a dramatically increasing from 1 millions in 1999 to 5.5 millions of euros in 2004. Relating to the three remain nations, sales of the two mentioned products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. A slightly rise in coffee sales of these countries can be seen , however, all of them were not over two millions in two years. Finally, it is noticeable that the money spent on Fairtrade bananas actually fell in Belgium and Sweden. The table given illustrates the detailed information of productivity of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in five European countries in two separate years including 1999 and 2004. In general, the figures... Read moreChu Thảo
2/9/2023
thầy cô có thể chấm bài, cho điểm theo các tiêu chí và gợi ý cải thiện cho e đc k ạ
TOPIC: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There has been a debate surrounding the idea that many developed countries should give other types of support to under-developed countries instead of giving financial support. From my point of view, these changes should be enforced by the governments of many rich countries. On the one hand, the financial aid from many developed countries cannot likely enough to solve the issues for the poorer countries. And many problems cannot be solved by using financial support. Therefore, developed countries should give more practical types of support consisting of food support or medical support to help citizens in poorer countries. Additionally, many rich nations can also send experts in several fields to aid and develop pedestrians in many poorer countries. For example, Vietnam has sent many experts in agriculture fields to Africa to teach them how to grow paddy, which also solves the food problem for them. On the other hand, corruption from officials is inevitable in one country. If other developed countries give financial aid to poorer countries, corruption might occur in these country's officials. Therefore, with the drawbacks of some corruption issues, the money supported by other countries cannot be sent to the citizens. With the lack of equity, the poor country not only cannot solve their emergency problems but also leads to more terrible issues. For instance, when the governments of one poorer country corrupt the money that should be sent to the citizens, the financial support can also be less than before, which can be the result for many violence among the citizens. In conclusion, many developed nations should give more practical types of support which can help poorer countries to solve their issues rather than giving financial aid. TOPIC: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial ai... Read morePhan Tấn Phú
4/9/2023
Mn chấm giúp em với ạ
Some people think that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is a belief held by many people that advertising products aimed at children should be prohibited because of its frequent toxic contents. Although enforcing a ban on those advertisements can be advantageous to children, I believe that it is not a primary solution due to its economic drawbacks. On the one hand, it is indisputable that implementing a ban on advertising towards a certain age group, especially juveniles, may have severe impact on economic growth. There is the fact that under-18 people are contributing a significant number in the total amount of population all around the world; thus, if a ban on advertisements aimed at them is imposed, it will be challenging for some companies to access their potential consumers. This might lead to economic downturn in many regions, and therefore the global economy can be adversely affected. For example,if Coca Cola and Pepsi- two typical popular corporations, were not able to attract children to drink their sugar-based beverages, they would not generate huge profits,which directly distribute to a national economy. On the other hand, there are numerous effective solutions instead of a ban on the aforementioned advertising type. Firstly, launching some campaigns to educate children should by organized by governments to help them differentiating helpful contents with unhealthy ones. Hence, this not only assist them to stay away from showing bad behaviors, but it also provides them with the opportunities to acquire analyzing skills. Another point to make is that some companies, which massively offer unhealthy products for their consumers, must appropriately set a limit for their number of advertisements aiming at children. This may result in a reduction in the risk of children overusing harmful goods, and thereby minimizing the toxic contents from advertisements. In conclusion, while imposing a prohibition on marketing to children can be beneficial to them, I hold the belief that other better steps can be taken to improve the situation. Some people think that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is a belief held by many people that advertising products aimed at children shou... Read morephuong thao
4/9/2023
Các thầy cô chữa bài Writing Task 2 giúp em với ạ. Em thi ngày 14/10 ạ em cảm ơn ạ
Topic: Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? One school of thought holds that museums and art galleries are no longer needed as historical artifacts and art works can now be observed by computer. In my opinion, I agree with this idea and will discuss my reasons in this essay. On the one hand, advocates of keeping museums and art galleries have their reasonable point. Their key rationale is that only by going to museums and art galleries can visitors experience historical artifacts and works of art at first-hand. In art galleries, visitors can physically see and observe an art work, which in their opinions, is the only way to enjoy art. However, such reasoning is flawed, as in some cases of famous art galleries, people can only observe an artwork from afar as they are closely supervised by security staff to ensure that visitors do not ruin these artworks. The Mona Lisa perfectly exemplifies this, as being one of the most valuable paintings in the world, people have to keep a distance from it and therefore unable to touch or feel the painting. On the other hand, I subscribe to the view that art galleries are no longer of necessity and people can enjoy art works on the Internet. This can be largely attributed to the fact that in order to maintain an art gallery, authorities have to spend a colossal amount of money on infrastructure improvement as well as staff salary. This can be extremely futile especially in developing countries like Vietnam where there are other life sustaining aspects such as education betterment or healthcare services that are more worthwhile to allocate money to. Another reason that worth mentioning is that with the technology advancements, people can now see art works vividly with colorful pictures and high quality videos that can offer the same experience with going to art galleries. In conclusion, while acknowledging the benefit of seeing art works in art galleries, I would contend that art galleries and historical museums are no longer necessary in today’s world as the government should spend money on other vexing issues and people can observe art works online. Topic: Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opi... Read moreThuy Hiền
9/9/2023