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phuong thao

26/9/2023

Mong các thầy cô chấm và cho em band điểm em thi 20/10 ạ

Topic: Some people believe that crime is the result of social problems and society, others think crime is a result of a bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion? In light of the increasing number of crime offenders, one school of thought holds that this problem is the result of social crises and society, whereas others cite a person’s personality to be the culprit. This essay will closely examine both viewpoints before concluding that I side with the former. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that crime is caused by a person’s nature. Their key rationale is in favor of the notion that some people are naturally born to be more aggressive and bad-tempered than others. As a result, they are more likely to behave badly and commit a crime. However, such reasoning is flawed, as personality is something that can be shaped through education to meet society’s rules. This can be largely attributed to the fact that schools are incorporating crime education in their curriculum, teaching young children how to control their impulsive feelings as well as the dire repercussions of criminals. Therefore, from an early age, children are taught how to behave correctly and refrain themselves from violating the laws. On the other hand, I subscribe to the notion that the rise in crime is the consequence of social problems and society. To begin with, as the number of unemployed people is on the rise, many people cannot make enough money to pay for their living expenses such as renting bills or buying food. The implication of this is that these people have to resort to criminal acts like robbery or pickpocketing to have money to meet their basic needs. Another worth mentioning reason is that some people have the tendency to mimic others’ criminal actions, thinking that robbery is an easy way to make money without having to work hard physically or mentally. In conclusion, while it is true that a person’s nature can lead to criminal acts to a certain extent, I believe that this can be tackled by education. However, I would contend that crime is the result of social problems. Topic: Some people believe that crime is the result of social problems and society, others think crime is a result of a bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion? In light of the... Xem thêm

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Chu Thảo

23/9/2023

thầy cô có thể chấm bài, cho điểm theo các tiêu chí và gợi ý cải thiện cho e đc k ạ

Đề: The bar chart shows the amount of money which was invested by different museums in London. The given chart illustrates the amount of money invested by five different museums in London in five m... Xem thêm

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Duong

25/9/2023

Em muốn nhờ thầy cô xem giúp bài này ạa

While it is proposed by some that crime comes from social issues and personal poverty situations, others are of the opinion that it could potentially depend on the congenital evil tendency of criminals. This essay will first closely scrutinize both viewpoints before concluding that I agree with the former. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people hold the belief that a person’s innate characteristics influence wrongdoings. They might argue that individual intrinsic nature, as a behavioral control center, consists of both positive and negative aspects. Indeed, the uglier nature of offenders has surpassed the better one, or more importantly, it effortlessly overcomes the moral and ethical frameworks of society. The argument goes that the psychology of wrongness pursuit facilitates deviant behaviors, even leading to brutal crimes. Without being guided by external elements, approximately 30% of juvenile delinquency stems from their personal fulfillment and sudden desires, according to a worldwide survey by UNICEF. On the other hand, I side with those who are pro the inclusion of factors related to society. Perhaps the foremost reason would be that many offenders have disadvantaged socio-economic backgrounds as well as they lack the right orientations as ordinary citizens, which is indeed of paramount importance in today’s increasingly interconnected world. Several criminals, for example, cannot virtually afford to cover their basic necessities such as tuition fees or food supplies, which consolidates the motives behind their unlawful activities. The argument in favor of social reasons is further fortified by the fact that not only personal deprivation but social chaos also can lead to murder-related actions. Humans are a species with a particularly strong team spirit, so it is inevitable to imitate the bad behavior of incompetent companions. A violent environment, widespread social evils such as prostitution, drugs, and social chaos without proper management have increased the crime rate in the area, with the Cubatao slum in Brazil being a prominent example. In conclusion, while the potential for inherently toxic thoughts in criminals is a valid concern, I would contend that the principal reasons are the plights of each delinquent and also come from a chaotic, unethical, and lawless society. While it is proposed by some that crime comes from social issues and personal poverty situations, others are of the opinion that it could potentially depend on the congenital evil tendency of criminal... Xem thêm

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phuong thao

25/9/2023

Em viết Ielts Writing task 1 mong được các thầy cô sửa ạ. Em thi ngày 20/10 ạ

The bar chart gives information about the proportion of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Overall, the percentage of households with 1 person and 2 people witnessed an upward trend, whe... Xem thêm

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Thanh nhàn

9/9/2023

dạ thầy cô chấm điểm và sữa giúp em với ạ

Some people think it is important to spend money on roads and motorways than public transport systems. To what extend do you agree? It is no doubt that spending money on buses and subways is more cri... Xem thêm

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Linh

21/9/2023

Em mong nhận được những lời nhận xét góp ý của các thầy cô cho bài essay này ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ🌹

People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Essay: In recent years, controversies have arisen over the suitable ages of having offspring. While numerous people advocate the sentiment that married couples should bear children when they are still young, I strongly believe that having children at older ages should be taken into consideration because of its considerable benefits. On the one hand, proponents of the idea that people should not have children at older ages have their own convincing arguments. Firstly, older women who become pregnant are highly vulnerable to both physical and mental health problems. According to a recent research conducted by Ha Noi Medical University, scientists have proved that a significant number of older mothers may have higher risks of death than younger ones, together with the fact that their baby might be physically weaker. Secondly, it appears to be that there is a wide generation gap between parents and children in many circumstances. Specifically, children of older couples may hardly share their stories with them because of the dissimilarity of their thoughts and opinions, which might easily lead to misunderstanding that could escalate into family conflicts. On the other hand, I strongly believe that husband and wife should bear their children at older ages. Particularly, the initial benefit of this tendency is that having kids later in life helps them to completely focus on their career at a young age, which undoubtedly provides them with better opportunities for their work and study. Furthermore, another additional advantage is that married couples can also have more time to prepare for a solid financial foundation and acquire essential knowledge before welcoming a baby. It is undeniable that all parents want their children to be raised properly in a good condition and environment, which can only be achieved through careful financial planning and a comprehensive understanding. To summarize, while having children at a young age is advantageous to some extent, it is my viewpoint that the benefits of bearing children at older ages are greater than the drawbacks of this tendency. People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Essay: In recent years, controversies have arisen over the suitable ages of having offspri... Xem thêm

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Doan Thanh Binh

20/9/2023

Em mong được thầy cô giúp đỡ và chấm chữa để hoàn thiện hơn ạ

Some people think that we should be more careful about sending satellites into space because they show where we are in the universe, and we may attract the attention of dangerous aliens. Others believe that contact with other species may bring enormous benefits to humanity. Answer Within the situation of the current landscape. Unquestionably, people hold different opinions about whether harmful or helpful while launching satellites into orbit. In my personal estimation, although I understand why most of the public feel that it is risky to launch satellites into orbit, sending satellites can bring far greater benefits. This essay will analyze and discuss in depth both points of view in question. It is conceivable why some subscribe to the view that the act of launching satellites into orbit is immensely risky. The key rationale is that if hostile or technologically advanced aliens find out about humanity, they might consider us a threat or try to take advantage of our resources. It is obvious that they will find a method to destroy or deal with us if we are deemed the hostle, the implication of this is that the life of our earth will end. Therefore, being sent into space will menacing does seem justifiable. Nevertheless, in spite of the above argument, I am convinced that the beneficial when launching satellites into orbit for several compelling reasons. First and foremost, humanity may greatly benefit from interactions with other intelligent species. One possible explanation is that they might have the knowledge and technological advancements that are well beyond our current comprehension if we were to establish contact with a highly developed extraterrestrial culture such as medical advancements, or space exploration. Another essential point to consider is that cultural interchange with extraterrestrial civilizations may result in a deeper comprehension of the cosmos and fresh viewpoints on science, technology, and philosophy. One such convincing piece of evidence is that this relationship could fundamentally alter how we think about time, upending accepted beliefs and broadening our understanding of both science and philosophy. In conclusion, while a substantial contingent of individuals exposes the perspective of the dangerous when sending satellites into space, as indicated by a noteworthy level of support, I am firmly persuaded that the advantages it bring deserves even greater attention and consideration. Some people think that we should be more careful about sending satellites into space because they show where we are in the universe, and we may attract the attention of dangerous aliens. Others believ... Xem thêm

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Hiểu Lam

20/9/2023

mong thầy cô cho e xin band@điểm bài này ạ

Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. My essay: Sports and leisure activities are not only a means of physical exercise but also a source of entertainment and relaxation for individuals and communities alike. Therefore, some people contend that an extreme sport like boxing is not appropriate in this contemporary age because of the physical damage that results in its participants. From my own standpoint, I strongly agree with the view for several reasons. To begin with, it is undeniable that boxing matches broadcast in front of the media are often famous for moral principles and a feast for the eyes such as respect for opponents, obedience to rules, and fair playing actions. Nevertheless, underground boxing, which is enjoyed most by the audience, is often associated with various disturbing factors including foul language, disregard for rivals, violent punches, brutal scenes and inelegant appearance as a repercussion of intense physical contact. Therefore, this dangerous sport is not suitable to exist in the modern age. Another rationale behind my belief as well as supporting the view is the case of Mike Tyson, who was an American prominent boxer with many remarkable achievements of his career. But when Tyson became older, he frequently faced hazardous illnesses stemming from boxing matches in the past such as osteoporosis and vision-related problems. Furthermore, several scientists conducted research on Tyson and his health was predicted to hardly recover from the injuries that were the consequences of his boxing career along with the ageing process. In this case, I would argue that this hazardous sport is truly endangered to physical well-being and should be banned on safety grounds. In conclusion, I totally believe that the elimination of boxing is suitable and rational due to the detrimental effects it has on the physical health of its players. Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any... Xem thêm

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Thuy Hiền

20/9/2023

Em mới thử thách bản thân mình với đề cục đá huyền thoại này. Em mong thầy cô có thể sửa giúp em, em cảm ơn nhiều ạ

The picture depicts the evolution of the two separate cutting instruments from 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 million years ago. Overall, it is readily apparent that Tool A was rougher and even sma... Xem thêm

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Tuan minh

24/9/2023

thầy cô sửa và chấm giúp e ạ

The chart details medium spending every week by families during 50 years include 8 categories are food, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footware , household goods, personal goods, transport and... Xem thêm

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Nguyen Anh Tuan

23/9/2023

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The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make co... Xem thêm

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Nyppie

22/9/2023

Thầy cô check giúp em bài task 1 này với ạ. Em cảm ơn🫰🏻

The given line graph illustrates the proportion of people who lived in cities over 50 years starting from 1970. It has some predictions for 2030 and 2040 in four nations namely the Philipines, Malays... Xem thêm

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Linh

22/9/2023

Em chào cả nhà ạ, em mong đc thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em task 1 này, em cảm ơn rất nhiều ạaa <3

The presented diagram illustrates how a book is published. Overall, it is clear that there are nine distinct stages in the up to 24-month process, from the initial preparation of a manuscript to th... Xem thêm

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Yuna🦊

24/9/2023

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can you give me some ideas about benefit of travelling alone???

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Linh

20/9/2023

em chào cả nhà ạ. các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa giúp em bài essay task 2 này đc k ạ. em cảm ơn nhiều ạ💖

Fewer young people choose to work in farming. What are the reasons? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work? Essay: These days, controversies have been engendered over an issue that a... Xem thêm

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Nguyen Anh Tuan

21/9/2023

Line Graph

The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisons where relevant. Bài Làm:... Xem thêm

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Thuy Hiền

18/9/2023

thầy cô check giúp em task 1 này với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ

The table given illustrates the detailed information of productivity of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in five European countries in two separate years including 1999 and 2004. In general, the figures... Xem thêm

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Chu Thảo

2/9/2023

thầy cô có thể chấm bài, cho điểm theo các tiêu chí và gợi ý cải thiện cho e đc k ạ

TOPIC: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There has been a debate surrounding the idea that many developed countries should give other types of support to under-developed countries instead of giving financial support. From my point of view, these changes should be enforced by the governments of many rich countries. On the one hand, the financial aid from many developed countries cannot likely enough to solve the issues for the poorer countries. And many problems cannot be solved by using financial support. Therefore, developed countries should give more practical types of support consisting of food support or medical support to help citizens in poorer countries. Additionally, many rich nations can also send experts in several fields to aid and develop pedestrians in many poorer countries. For example, Vietnam has sent many experts in agriculture fields to Africa to teach them how to grow paddy, which also solves the food problem for them. On the other hand, corruption from officials is inevitable in one country. If other developed countries give financial aid to poorer countries, corruption might occur in these country's officials. Therefore, with the drawbacks of some corruption issues, the money supported by other countries cannot be sent to the citizens. With the lack of equity, the poor country not only cannot solve their emergency problems but also leads to more terrible issues. For instance, when the governments of one poorer country corrupt the money that should be sent to the citizens, the financial support can also be less than before, which can be the result for many violence among the citizens. In conclusion, many developed nations should give more practical types of support which can help poorer countries to solve their issues rather than giving financial aid. TOPIC: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial ai... Xem thêm

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Phan Tấn Phú

4/9/2023

Mn chấm giúp em với ạ

Some people think that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is a belief held by many people that advertising products aimed at children should be prohibited because of its frequent toxic contents. Although enforcing a ban on those advertisements can be advantageous to children, I believe that it is not a primary solution due to its economic drawbacks. On the one hand, it is indisputable that implementing a ban on advertising towards a certain age group, especially juveniles, may have severe impact on economic growth. There is the fact that under-18 people are contributing a significant number in the total amount of population all around the world; thus, if a ban on advertisements aimed at them is imposed, it will be challenging for some companies to access their potential consumers. This might lead to economic downturn in many regions, and therefore the global economy can be adversely affected. For example,if Coca Cola and Pepsi- two typical popular corporations, were not able to attract children to drink their sugar-based beverages, they would not generate huge profits,which directly distribute to a national economy. On the other hand, there are numerous effective solutions instead of a ban on the aforementioned advertising type. Firstly, launching some campaigns to educate children should by organized by governments to help them differentiating helpful contents with unhealthy ones. Hence, this not only assist them to stay away from showing bad behaviors, but it also provides them with the opportunities to acquire analyzing skills. Another point to make is that some companies, which massively offer unhealthy products for their consumers, must appropriately set a limit for their number of advertisements aiming at children. This may result in a reduction in the risk of children overusing harmful goods, and thereby minimizing the toxic contents from advertisements. In conclusion, while imposing a prohibition on marketing to children can be beneficial to them, I hold the belief that other better steps can be taken to improve the situation. Some people think that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is a belief held by many people that advertising products aimed at children shou... Xem thêm

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phuong thao

4/9/2023

Các thầy cô chữa bài Writing Task 2 giúp em với ạ. Em thi ngày 14/10 ạ em cảm ơn ạ

Topic: Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? One school of thought holds that museums and art galleries are no longer needed as historical artifacts and art works can now be observed by computer. In my opinion, I agree with this idea and will discuss my reasons in this essay. On the one hand, advocates of keeping museums and art galleries have their reasonable point. Their key rationale is that only by going to museums and art galleries can visitors experience historical artifacts and works of art at first-hand. In art galleries, visitors can physically see and observe an art work, which in their opinions, is the only way to enjoy art. However, such reasoning is flawed, as in some cases of famous art galleries, people can only observe an artwork from afar as they are closely supervised by security staff to ensure that visitors do not ruin these artworks. The Mona Lisa perfectly exemplifies this, as being one of the most valuable paintings in the world, people have to keep a distance from it and therefore unable to touch or feel the painting. On the other hand, I subscribe to the view that art galleries are no longer of necessity and people can enjoy art works on the Internet. This can be largely attributed to the fact that in order to maintain an art gallery, authorities have to spend a colossal amount of money on infrastructure improvement as well as staff salary. This can be extremely futile especially in developing countries like Vietnam where there are other life sustaining aspects such as education betterment or healthcare services that are more worthwhile to allocate money to. Another reason that worth mentioning is that with the technology advancements, people can now see art works vividly with colorful pictures and high quality videos that can offer the same experience with going to art galleries. In conclusion, while acknowledging the benefit of seeing art works in art galleries, I would contend that art galleries and historical museums are no longer necessary in today’s world as the government should spend money on other vexing issues and people can observe art works online. Topic: Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opi... Xem thêm

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Mong các thầy cô chấm và cho em band điểm em thi 20/10 ạ

thầy cô có thể chấm bài, cho điểm theo các tiêu chí và gợi ý cải thiện cho e đc k ạ

Em muốn nhờ thầy cô xem giúp bài này ạa

Em viết Ielts Writing task 1 mong được các thầy cô sửa ạ. Em thi ngày 20/10 ạ

dạ thầy cô chấm điểm và sữa giúp em với ạ

Em mong nhận được những lời nhận xét góp ý của các thầy cô cho bài essay này ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ🌹

Em mong được thầy cô giúp đỡ và chấm chữa để hoàn thiện hơn ạ

mong thầy cô cho e xin band@điểm bài này ạ

Em mới thử thách bản thân mình với đề cục đá huyền thoại này. Em mong thầy cô có thể sửa giúp em, em cảm ơn nhiều ạ

thầy cô sửa và chấm giúp e ạ

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Thầy cô check giúp em bài task 1 này với ạ. Em cảm ơn🫰🏻

Em chào cả nhà ạ, em mong đc thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em task 1 này, em cảm ơn rất nhiều ạaa <3

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em chào cả nhà ạ. các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa giúp em bài essay task 2 này đc k ạ. em cảm ơn nhiều ạ💖

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thầy cô check giúp em task 1 này với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ

thầy cô có thể chấm bài, cho điểm theo các tiêu chí và gợi ý cải thiện cho e đc k ạ

Mn chấm giúp em với ạ

Các thầy cô chữa bài Writing Task 2 giúp em với ạ. Em thi ngày 14/10 ạ em cảm ơn ạ

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