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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài giúp em ạ
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
ANSWER:
In some countries, the number of people becoming overweight has increased and their health conditions and fitness level are declining. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons why people are fat, weak physical condition, and the solutions for these problems.
The reason is that a lot of people consume too much fast food. Most foreigners in some countries such as America, France, Canada are overweight because these are the countries that consume the most fast food in the world. Fast food contains fat and sugar so that they will cause obesity. Moreover, people do not work out regularly because of not having much time, so energy is not released, fat accumulates in the body for a long time and as a result, people's health will be affected. Aside from that, not getting enough sleep and enduring a lot of pressure is one of the factors that cause obesity, stress hormones release and that will increase appetite and weight gain.
There are many ways to solve these problems. One of them is that people should have a suitable diet. For example, they need to eat more vegetables and fruits, and avoid consuming too much fat or sugar. In addition, try to have exercises at least 2 times a week, do not stay up late and avoid pressure to ensure good health and fitness.
To sum up, many people nowadays have problems about their bodies and health conditions because of bad habits. These problems will be solved if they change their unhealthy lifestyles and therefore their health is improved.
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Thầy cô chấm sửa dùm em với ạ em cảm ơn ạ
The pie charts compared the figure of hotel guests who described its customer service as exeffent from 2005 to 2010. permistic
Overall. The proportion of optimistic comments surged during 5 years By contrast, There was a plummet in permistic remarks between 2005 and 2010
The percentage of positive rate increase tremendously from 2005 to 2010. The excellent comment and good comment contributed to 28% in 2010 which is rougly sixfold as high as the figure in 2005 about 5%. Moreover, the good rate also showed the enormous growth in 2010!accounted for 39% double in 2005 made up 14%. However, the satisfactory comments slumped in 2010 represent 17% that was twofold as low as in 2005 by 45%.
Likewise, There was a dramatic decline of positive comments between 2005 and 2018. The poor decrease in 2010 made up 12% which was halve the figure in 2005. Similarly, 2010 experienced an enormous went down in the precentage of very poor by 4% that was as threefold as low as in 2005
The pie charts compared the figure of hotel guests who described its customer service as exeffent from 2005 to 2010. permistic
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mong thầy cô chấm bài writing task 2 của em ạ
Essay prompt: Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
n the digital era, there is a fairly common trend that advertising is gradually becoming popular in our lives. Consumers are captivated by advertisements and ultimately decide to spend money on them, which leads us to progressively purchase unnecessary items. I quite disagree with the above opinion and think that it really still comes from the needs of the people.
Since advertising is growing, it might be a useful tool for facilitating users' easier and more engaging access to recently introduced items. It is undeniable that sometimes clients will be attracted by popular trends and then purchase products that are not really necessary. For example, phone companies still release new phone models which are praised for being more modern and stylish. As a result, there are many customers' phones that still work very well but are replaced by iPhone 15 and 16. This explains the increase in annual sales of big businesses such as Samsung and Apple.
On the other hand, I believe that there are numerous reasons for this purchasing, not only for advertising alone. New versions of the product probably still provide convenient and truly necessary features for many people, so they decide to buy them. Moreover, there are many people who decide to buy because the price is more affordable than before. A typical example is that e-commerce platforms like Shopee or Lazada often have promotional programs with product discounts on holidays and anniversaries.
In conclusion, it is certain that advertising has effective strategies to attract buyers, but I still believe that people will not spend money on things they do not need to own.
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dạ em chào thầy cô, mong thầy cô nhận xét và chấm chữa bài giúp em ạ. em tự học ielts nên writing khá vất, mong được thầy cô giúp đỡ ạ
Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems.
What are the problems? What could be done to solve those problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a common problem among traffic participants including bikers and car users when these two users use a joint lane. This issue can be attributed to many reasons, and it can be solved by the implementation of these following measures.
Using the same road might cause traffic participants a range of issues. The leading cause of the problem can be associated with the limited road space, which cause the traffic congestion. Roads are often not wide enough to accommodate both cyclists and car users; therefore, vehicle users are inclined to encroaching on the other side of the road. As a result, it would cause accident because of the one who suddenly change the route without giving signs for the left users. As both cyclists and drivers cannot anticipate each other’s movements, miscommunication and unpredictability can easily happened, which later lead to conflicts, and even worse, accidents for both of them. Another problem may occur between drivers and bikers when sharing the same road is the safety risks due to speed differences. Cars move significantly fast, whereas bicycle users move so slow that may create a high risk of accidents for them. Many situations where the bike users got pressed by the drivers; as a result, they fall off their bikes and hit the ground. Therefore, it is essential to ensure safety on shared roads for both cyclist and drivers.
However, this issue could be resolved by adopting several solutions. First, congestion happens due to inade road space for traffic participants; therefore, the government should develop dedicated bike land for cyclists. By doing so, they will have their own space to move around, which may ease the congestion.
For instance, cities like Copenhagen has already provided cyclists with separate lane, which reduces traffic bottlenecks considerably. Furthermore, in order to resolve issues occured due to the differences in speed, the government should implement speed regulations zone. With areas that are frequented by both cyclist and drivers, they could enforce speed limits in there to lower the risk of accidents. Thus, slower speeds can ensure safer coexistence between drivers and cyclists.
In conclusion, if sharing road space cause problems for both car users and cyclists, then measurements should be taken by both individuals and government to resolve this issue.
Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems.
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Writing task 1, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Đề bài: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Bài viết:
The bar chart given compares seven nations based on the yearly earnings of doctors and other workers in the year 2004.
Overall, both doctors and other workers in the US were paid the highest in the examined year and this country also saw the biggest difference in salaries of doctors and others. Additionally, there was always a gap between how much doctors get paid for a year and other workers in all nations at about two times.
Taking the lead in 2004, the US's doctors earned 120 thousand USD a year, which was almost double other nations, which just accounted for around 50 to 70 thousand USD annually. Similarly, other workers in the US also got about 45 thousand USD yearly, which was the highest in this category. The second and third places in this all-time list were Switzerland and France, these two countries shared the same amount of money that doctors were paid in 2004, which stood at 70 thousand USD. While the former had 40 thousand USD for other workers, that for the latter comprised 40 thousand USD.
Turning to the Czech Republic, Germany, and Italy, these regions had similar annual wages for doctors and other workers. Doctors earned about 63, 62, and 60 thousand USD respectively whereas other workers all just got about 20 thousand USD per year. Although the yearly wages of doctors in Finland were the lowest, just 50 thousand USD, they had higher pay for other workers, at about 24 thousand USD in 2004.
Đề bài: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
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Mong thầy cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The diagrams illustrate the process of making cement and how cement is used for producing concrete. Overall, there are many stages to make cement, then cement and some materials with certain percentages will be mixed together to produce concrete.
In the production of cement, firstly, limestone and clay are mixed and crushed to make the powder. The mixer of these will go to a rotating heater and then they are grinded in the grinder, finally cement is completely produced and packed in bags.
According to concrete, in the production of concrete, there are some materials which are mixed together, including cement (15%), water (10%), sand (25%), and the material which accounts for the largest proportion is grave (small stones) with 50%. These materials will be mixed in a machine and the machine will rotate in a certain direction, from which the production of concrete is completed.
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates how many tonnes of wheat, barley, rice, and other grains were available in India, the US, and China in 2001.
Overall, India had the lowest yield across all types of grains, while the opposite was true for the US, except for rice where China had the highest amount.
Regarding the US and China, 3.5 tonnes of wheat was harvested in the former, 1 tonne higher than the latter. Moreover, this gap was slightly narrowed in the quantity of barley, with 7 tonnes in the US and 6.5 tonnes in China. Conversely, China produced more rice than the US, with 6 tonnes and 5 tonnes, respectively. Meanwhile, these two countries dominated and shared comparable figures for other categories of grains, at 9 tonnes each.
Concerning India, it had the poorest agriculture among the three countries examined, ranging from the lowest of only 1 tonne of rice to the highest of only just below 2 tonnes of other grains.
The bar graph illustrates how many tonnes of wheat, barley, rice, and other grains were available in India, the US, and China in 2001.
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Nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài task 2 . em cảm ơn
Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an ongoing debate about whether the primary determinant of success in achieving goals is luck. Although I believe that luck is one of the factors attributed to people’s achievements, I firmly disagree with this statement since there are other elements that are much more significant.
Admittedly, fortune plays an essential part in contributing to the success of a person. First, a successful business is often considered a matter of luck. For instance, individuals who start business in unexpected situations such as economic depression and Covid-19 pandemic must bear a huge amount of losses or even close their business. In contrast, those who operate their business at the right time with the right people easily achieve their targets. Second, whether achieving good academic results is sometimes thanks to luck. For example, students may pass an exam with high scores if they have previously prepared for similar topics. Another example is that high scores on multiple-choice exams can be achieved through random selection of correct choices rather than possessing knowledge of the answers.
Nevertheless, I suppose that there are two important factors that mostly affect people's achievements. First and foremost, substantial effort is necessary to accomplish significant achievements. In fact, unless students strive for their academic pursuits, they will not achieve good results in the long run based solely on luckiness. Secondly, the attainment of goals requires a high level of determination. In other words, Individuals need to spend a large amount of time to enlarge their knowledge so that they will have a good qualification as well as necessary skills. As a result, they will have a decent job since they make an effort and dedication for a long time.
In conclusion, the influence of luck on success cannot be dismissed. However, I contend that hard work and patience hold greater importance in the pursuit of goals.
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Writing task 2-Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa.Em cảm ơn ạa
Đề bài:The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern age, it is true that the increasing prevalence of obesity is put pressure on the health care systems as they contend with associated health challenges.Several individuals advocate that adding physical education classes in school curricula as an effective solution to address this issue.in my opinion, I wholeheartedly agree with this viewpoint and my rationales will be explained in this essay.
By incorporating more sports classes into the curriculum as well as encouraging extracurricular sports activities, they will undoubtedly become fitter, enthusiastic and more active.Firstly, physical education promote a healthy lifestyle from a young age by instilling habits of doing physical exercise regularly.The person who participating in outdoor activity early are more likely to continue these practices into adulthood, thus reducing the risk of obesity and other related health issues.Secondly,by providing insight knowledge with align practice , physical education not only a holistic health by Increasing muscle density, blood circulation and endurance but also enhancing brain function.Sciencetifically,this is explained because exercises help stimulate protein production in the body, which considered as a factor that stimulates the growth of nerve cells and enhances cognition.
Admittedly, If physical education is not introduced in school curricula, there are various detrimental effects that would occur and seriously influence numerous aspects.First and foremost, many students will spend time for playing video game or explore virtual world instead of doing exercise, beyond encountered with asthenia, they can also easily suffer from eye diseases and psychological disorders such as nearsightedness and depression.Secondly, the health system will also face many complex problems such as lack of human resources and running out of medicine.The increase in patients means that the number of doctors and drugs must increase to care for patients, while facilities and skilled doctors in most countries cannot serve the demand.
In conclusion, although teachers need a constant effort to make students can absorb knowledge and create the habit of playing sports, I totally believe that it will brings a long-term benefit for students
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Writing task 2_Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa bài ạ, em cảm ơn
Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In today’s world, it is widely perceived that citizens should be given a chance to go to university freely instead of paying the tuition fees. Personally, I am wholeheartedly opposed to this position.
There are numerous reasons why this argument should be opposed, one of which is the labor market competitiveness enhancement. To be more specific, if the free - college policy is being prompt, there will appear a majority of college qualifications. As a result, the acquisition of a tertiary degree would not be considered as a prominent factor supporting bachelor’s degree holder in landing higher - paid jobs. This would therefore lead to the increase of the competitiveness in the job market.
Another justification is that waive tuition could impact negatively on the economy. In other words, since the enormous amount of money would be incurred to cover higher education tuition, this would in turn put a strain on government coffers, result in budget deficit, tax hikes, or reduced welfare among others.
While some may contend that the provision of free - of - charge education would result in a rich variety of highly - educated workforce, from my perspective, this notion might be failed to outweigh the accompanying drawbacks and losses. As such, it may be preferable to maintain the status quo.
Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.
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Writing Task 1: Process- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
The diagram shows the five main writing systems in the world
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Bài làm:
The diagram illustrates the main characteristics of five different writing systems worldwide, listed as Logographic, Abjad, Abjuda, Alphabetic, and Syllabic.
As per the presentation in the illustration, Logographic are writing systems that share the same alphabet but differentiate in pronunciations, typically known as Japanese and Chinese. In addition, Japan is also one of the countries using Syllabic writing, a method in which every character represents a syllable.
On the other hand, Abjad, Abjuda, and Alphabetic systems are based on the sounds each word makes. Abjad is notably the first sound-based system in which every character indicates a consonant sound. Indian Devanagari uses the Abjuda system: the combination of a consonant and a vowel makes up an Abjuda character. Lastly, Alphabetic, including English, commonly known for its mismatch in pronunciation and spelling, has characters that are formed from one sound (vowel or consonant).
Overall, close-range regions generally have similar word formation processes and most of them are based on sounds.
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Đề bài:
The diagram shows the five main writing systems in the wor...
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài: **The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat.
What can be done to maintain biodiversity?**
Bài làm:
As an increasing number of species are on the edge of extinction, biodiversity has become a concerning problem for human society. There are multiple possible causes including deforestation, strip mining, poaching, and so on. However, the solution to this problem remains a conundrum.
Individuals do not have the resources and power to solve the problem, therefore, first of all, governments should encourage environmental policies throughout their countries. Consider that most of the time, the reason for sabotaging the environment is for financial advantages. The government could enforce financial charges on illegal environment-related activities such as poaching or clearcutting. In addition, to be able to handle the situation properly, the felony has to be detected on time and penalized fairly.
Pollution from several sources listing as industry and consumer waste is another major reason that leads to the loss of habitats and biodiversity. A large quantity of industry waste is being released into nature without properly processing it every day. In regards to that, second of all, the government and organizations should cooperate to establish a stable waste treatment to reduce the unwanted effects of pollution on the floral and fauna habitats. Countries such as Japan and China are investing in waste processing technology and the effort has shown desirable results in their environment.
On the other hand, developing and under-developed countries are having a hard time launching environmental laws and researching new technology because of capital shortages. Additionally, maintaining a sustainable economy also requires satisfaction with economic growth. To cope with these drawbacks, countries' leaders should work together for an ultimate generic solution.
Preserving biodiversity is the responsibility of not only governments and organizations but also each individual. Although, the process might not be effective instantaneously, with the attempt to reduce the damage, animals, plants, humans and their next generations can benefit from a healthy and prosperous environment.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graphs illustrate how many native and non-native Australians lived in cities, towns, and rural areas in 1995 and 2010.
Overall, city life was more prevalent in both categories in both years examined, with the proportion of citizens born outside this country being higher than that of their native counterparts.
Regarding the native group, in 1995, half of these people resided in metropolises, higher than the town and rural populations, at 20% and 30%, respectively. After five years, this gap widened, as the share of inhabitants living in urban areas saw a nearly 20% growth, while the other two sectors fell remarkably to 15% each.
Concerning expatriates, in 1995, city dwellers accounted for 60% of people in this cohort, compared to 80% in 2010. Meanwhile, one-tenth of occupants in towns were from other countries, more than half lower than the rate of those residing in rural areas. In 2010, however, both figures saw a sharp fall to about 10% and just under this level, in that order.
The bar graphs illustrate how many native and non-native Australians lived in cities, towns, and rural areas in 1995 and 2010.
Overall, city life was more prevalent in both categories in both year...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of male and female lecturers in seven departments of a particular university in 2012.
Overall, the majority of staff were men, with engineering having the highest share of male teachers and the lowest of females, while the figures for medicine were relatively the same in both genders.
Regarding categories with males dominating, just over 80% of men taught engineering, four times higher than their female counterparts. This gap narrowed in the law sector, with 60% of males and 40% of females. Meanwhile, experts in both sexes constituted similarly in the business and science departments, with about 65% of men and 35% of women.
Concerning the remaining sections, just over three-quarters of members in the education division were female, around twice the male group. Conversely, just more than half of women accounted for staff in the faculty of arts, slightly higher than the female cohort (just over 40%). Finally, the rate of professionals in medicine in both genders was near parity, at 50% each.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of male and female lecturers in seven departments of a particular university in 2012.
Overall, the majority of staff were men, with engineering having the h...
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Writing task1.Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ.
Đề bài:The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of different groups of workers in Australia in the year of 2003 while the given line chart depicts how their rates of unemployment changed from 1993 to 2003.
Overall, Australia-born workers dominate the largest proportion in the total workforce of Australia. Additionally, all groups of workers experienced a downward trend in unemployment level while group of workers who do not speak English remained the highest over the period.
Regarding workforce composition, the vast majority were people who derived from Australia, accounting for 76%. This was distantly followed by NESC and ESC groups, representing 14% and 10% respectively.
Concerning the patterns of unemployment, initially, approximately 7% of those coming from NESC group unemployment. Despite witnessing fluctuation with a downward trend, declining from 7% to 3% in the last year of the period, this group of workers still held its dominant position throughout.
The figures for native-born Australians and those from ESC followed a similar trend, with respective levels decreasing to 2% and 1% at the final year of the period.
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Đề bài:The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting t...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
The graph compares the percentage of international and the percentage of UK students gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK University in 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Bài làm:
The bar chart illustrates the difference between national and international students graduated with second-class or first-class degrees across eight fields at a UK university in 2019.
Overall, it can be seen that in science and technology major, the number of international students graduates with a second-class degree or better was higher whereas in four other majors, UK primarily dominated. It is also interesting to note that in Nursing and Accountancy, there was no difference between the graduates quantity.
In terms of technology-related subjects listed as Electrical Engineering and Information Technology, foreign students outnumbered UK students. This is particularly true for Information Technology in which the percentage of international students was above 85% compares to less than 60% of national graduates. Similarly, the figures inclined to international students with a 20% gap in Electrical Engineering.
Regarding Arts and Humanities and Social Science majors including English Literature, Art History, International Law and Sociology, the number of UK pupils pre-dominated. Both Art History and Sociology had 80% of UK students graduates with a second-class degree or higher and 70% and 75% abroad graduates respectively. International Law has the lowest over-sea students percentage and also the lowest in the chart of less than 50%.
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The graph compares the percentage of international and th...
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Writing Task 1: Process- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Write at least 150 words
Bài làm:
The flow chart illustrates the four common consequences of forest clearcutting. Trees are removed on a large scale results in four immediate effects which leads to floods, soil erosion, biodiversity reduction and droughts.
One instantaneous effect of deforestation is compacted soil formed from heavy logging equipment on the top soil. The hard ,and "baked" soil restricts water drainage which accounted for flooding.
Another immediate consequence of logging is the reduction in the quantity of floral species. With the reduction, plants release less moisture into the air which ultimately lead to the lack of precipitation and the increase incidence of drought. Simultaneously, eliminating the plants also responsible for the erosion of the top soil layer because fewer roots underground remained to hold the soil together.
Finally, the chance of intentional ,and unintentional forests fire increases due to clearcutting. Fire hazard leaves the wood remaining as a source of nutrition for micro-organisms. These species, then, breaks the balance of natural biodiversity, courtesy of degrading the existing vegetation.
Overall, it can be seen that over-cutting has a major influence on biodiversity , and the soil quality both long-term and short-term.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar chart illustrates the sales of five major phone brands worldwide between 2009 and 2013. Overall, there were increases in the sales of Samsung and Apple, while the opposite was true for those of Nokia, LG and ZTE. Additionally, in the first year, Nokia recorded the highest revenue, but this was the case for Samsung in the final year, while ZTE was by far the least bought over the period.
Regarding manufacturers with the highest figures, in 2009, Nokia dominated the market with 440 million units sold, nearly twice Samsung’s sales (230 million), the second most popular brand in that year. Conversely, in 2013, Samsung sold 450 million units, surpassing Nokia’s figure (250 million), becoming the best seller, while Nokia was the second.
Concerning other companies, roughly 120 million LG phones were sold in 2009, followed by a gradual decline of 40 million in 2013. In contrast, Apple’s sales saw the greatest growth, from the lowest at around 20 million devices initially to 150 million finally, to become the third most favoured brand. Meanwhile, ZTE saw a minor incline over the period and was the least preferred brand from 2011 onwards, from approximately 50 million units in the first year to just over this level in the final year.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates how children aged 5 to 12 in a country commuted to and from school by different means of transport in 1990 and 2020. Overall, being driven by car was more preferred than other transportation types, with this option being the most popular subsequently, while this was true for walking in the previous year.
Regarding active means of transport, in 1990, going to school on foot was the most common choice, with just over 12 million trips made per year, but numbers halved after 3 decades. Moreover, schoolchildren travelled 6 million times in 1990 by cycling and the combination of walking to the bus stop and going by bus, before journeys decreased to 2 and 3 million, respectively over the next 30 years, making cycling the least favoured choice.
Concerning the passive ones, although the use of cars was the least opted in the first year, with 4 million journeys, numbers nearly tripled in the last year, surpassing that of walking to be by far the most widely used means. Meanwhile, taking the bus was the second most popular method, with 7 million trips being made in the former year, followed by a 2 million decrease in the latter year, becoming the third most chosen approach.
The bar graph illustrates how children aged 5 to 12 in a country commuted to and from school by different means of transport in 1990 and 2020. Overall, being driven by car was more preferred than othe...
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ. In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In competitive job market today , people have to relocate from their hometown to find job opportunities. From my perspective , despite presenting several certain drawbacks , the advantages of this development are more significant.
Moving away from families and loved ones make indivudual likely encounter mental health issues such as depression as geographical barrier prevents them from emotional connection.Some tend to not confide their trouble with their families , especially in cases of migrate workers , to just ease families’worries while their families and friends remain unaware.People have the feelings of isolation and homesickness , especially people who are introverts and always keep distance with their colleagues in new work environment.Consequently this have negative impact on their work performance and productivity , presenting negative sides of this trend.
On the other hand , firstly , relocating to unfamiliar places helps people step out of their comfort zone. This foster independence , resilience and self-reliance , standing on their own whenever facing difficulties as they no longer have their parents and loved ones nearby for support.They also acquire self-sufficiency skills such as cooking or laundry to complete household responsibilities and meet their basic needs. Secondly , relocating for jobs help individuals achieve career fulfillment Moving to economic hubs and metropolitan areas open up opportunities for career advancement and professional growth that are often not available in one’s hometown. .Major companies and business offer higher salaries and better benefits.Employees not only have chance to experience professional settings but also gain well-paying jobs.
In conclusion , while relocating for employment have negative impacts on metal health , I firmly believe that this trend brings more beneficial aspects to individuals about career fulfillment and personal growth.
In competitive job market today , people have to relocate from their hometown to find job opportunities. From my perspective , despite presenting several certain drawbacks , the advantages of this dev...
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