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Li

15/10/2023

Mong các thầy cô sửa bài giúp em ạ

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females consuming different portions of fruit and vegetables each day by 7 age groups in the UK in 2006 Overall, the percentage of females consum... Xem thêm

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phuong thao

23/10/2023

Em đã đạt aim 8.0 overall và được cả 8.0 Writing rồi ạ. Em cảm ơn Pombeebee và các thầy cô giáo nhiều ạ

Cảm ơn mọi người rất nhiều ạ Chúc mọi người học thật tốt và đạt aim ạ

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Do Quang Thanh Truc

21/10/2023

Mong thầy cô xem giúp em ạ

Topic 6: People living in the 21st century have a better life than people who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There is an ongoing debate that the 21st century li... Xem thêm

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nguyen ly

21/10/2023

Mong thầy cô chữa bài task 2 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of difficulties of living in a city. How can the governments make urban life better for everyone? In the contemporary world, life in cities has aroused the public’s interest in recent years because of a search for a higher living standard. However, there are a variety of problems that citizens have to face. This essay will highlight several issues of city life and suggest some solutions for the governments to tackle them. It is conspicuous that there are numerous obstacles, preventing people from having a better life in urban areas. Firstly, it is obvious that the cost of living in cities has risen for a long time, which means services such as healthcare or entertainment are unaffordable for some people. Therefore, the living standard could be reduced, even leading to depression and anxiety disorder. Secondly, environmental pollution also has a great impact on human’s health, especially air pollution. As a result, people have to face a risk of asthma and other respiratory issues. Thirdly, The lack of job opportunities also plays a crucial role in reducing living standards in big cities, so that city dwellers may struggle in search of work, causing a rise in unemployment and crimes. In order to enhance living conditions, the governments should solve those issues thoroughly. Regarding the rate of unemployment, the more the policy broadens job networking opportunities, the less the number of criminal offences could be. Moreover, by establishing campaigns and movements to protect the environment, the life of citizens can be better. For example, “We Cycle” is an annual campaign, where people can take part in plastic collection activities and recycle them into other products. Ultimately, if the budget allocation for services were extended, inhabitants could meet their basic needs without a lack of financial resources. In conclusion, to solve a number of issues that are appearing across the board, the governments need to participate in dealing with those problems in a thorough way, promoting the living conditions of residents. More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of difficulties of living in a city. How can the governments make urban... Xem thêm

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Janee

19/10/2023

em gửi thầy bài này của em ạ, mong được các thầy cô chấm chữa và nhận xét cho em. Em xin cảm ơn nhiều ạ

question: The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest? In this day and age, the proliferation of internet usage has led to significant alternations in the way people share and consume information. While this change causes loads of issues in societies, there are still solutions implemented by governments, local authorities and families. This problem can be explained by two main reasons. First of which is the advantages that some easily accessible websites can take from the internet user, especially from the young people. It can be seen that there are still teenagers who are not of age, try to swindle the censorship on some social platforms for pornographic purposes. These websites, however, give a tacit agreement due lack of consistence in pecuniary benefits from the young age. Another major issue is the appearance of a new type of scheme which is e-fraud or account hacking. These frauds, finally, result in being appropriated property or releasing one’s personal information which can considerably affect their lives. Fortunately, several measures can be implemented to alleviate these problems. Initially, governments should thoroughly check the validation of sites rather than simply old-enough confirmation. This can contribute to preventing the youth from inappropriate and dangerous online information or better still, imposing stricter legislation and punishment as a censored caution on websites that infringe intentionally. In addition, some campaigns should be raised by local authorities in order to raise awareness related to the accurate way to use Internet safety to protect individual’s possession and private information. Besides, families also play a significant role in this issue due to the closest relationship. Parents should closely monitor their children and restrict their access to certain sites. Obviously, without parents’ supervision, it is understandable why there is such a growing number of teenagers approaching unsuitable media. In conclusion, despite being an innovative invention that can enhance human lives, the Internet still has its own problems. However, with the right actions by governments, indigenous authorities and families can reduce the level of the issues, yet, it’ll become an ideal place for people to partake in. question: The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the I... Xem thêm

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Yeugyuvin

19/10/2023

Mong các thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài writing task 2 với ạ

Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Some peo... Xem thêm

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Kieu

16/10/2023

Dạ mong thầy cô cho em nhận xét ạ.

Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Is this a positive or negative development? In recent years, there has been a growing concern over the problems caused by evolving means of transportation. Many people prefer commuting to their workplace or educational institution by using their private vehicles rather than using public services. While cars certainly offer inevitable conveniences, from my perspective, I personally agree that going by passenger cars should be seen as a negative development. A major drawback of commuting is that it creates more traffic congestion. Private automobiles, which can only accommodate four to seven individuals at a time, take up space on city roadways. Consequently, commuters may be stuck in traffic for hours during peak hours, leading to lost productivity and a detrimental impact on the residents' mental health. In Vietnam, for example, during commute hours, citizens have to endure noise and traffic jams, as well as hours of delays. Another negative aspect of driving cars on city streets is their detrimental impact on the environment. This is because automobiles are one of the primary sources of air pollution, as they release large amounts of nitrogen oxides, carbon monoxide, and carbon dioxide. According to data, highway vehicles release about 1.4 million tons of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere each year, contributing to global climate change. Studies have shown that in Europe, 80-90% of cars’ environmental impact comes from fuel consumption and emissions of air pollution and greenhouse gases, which can damage the inhabitants' life expectancy and increase the risk of respiratory diseases such as lung cancer, heart attacks, and asthma. Finally, driving private cars gives less time for other more healthy activities, like walking in the park or following another hobby. This is because walking and cycling will burn calories and excess fat while using passenger automobiles triggers numerous physical illnesses mainly overweight, obesity, and fast heartbeats. Consequently, people's health may be depleted and exhausted. In conclusion, with the aforementioned explanations, I strongly believe that the development of passenger cars has many shortcomings, causing harmful effects on human longevity and the environment. Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Is this a positive or negative development? In recent years, there has been a growing concern o... Xem thêm

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Janee

16/10/2023

em rất mong được thầy cô chấm bài task 1 này của em ạ, em xin cảm ơn nhìu

The pie charts below show information about where coffee is produced, consumed & where its profit goes. The pie charts illustrate the percentage of coffee production and consumption in different a... Xem thêm

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Nguyen Anh Tuan

14/10/2023

Task 1 Line Chart

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting th... Xem thêm

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Giao

18/10/2023

Mong.các.thầy cô sửa bài giúp em ạ.Em cảm ơn ạ

Đề : In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development? With the rapid pace of cultural changes, more and more freedom is granted to children in four corners of the world. It is my assertion that this tendency can be a positive development since I believe that the disadvantages pale into significance when confronted with overwhelming merits. On the one hand, one may argue that more liberty for children should be viewed negatively. A straightforward yet noticeable weakness of this trend is that giving freedom to children may take a toll on their academic performance at school. This is because if they overuse technology to play games without having supervision from their parents, they may lack study responsibilities which can lead to bad marks at their school. Another limitation worth noting is that the bond between parents and children would be diminished. It is the opportunities that their parents instill moral values, and provide fundamental guidance to support children in their lives and navigate challenges. Consequently, when children have more freedom to direct their lives, parental involvement may make it difficult to form a relationship with their offspring due to the lack of chances to interact with them. However, I believe that the positive aspects of this approach are far more significant than the downsides mentioned above. The most obvious advantage is that this trend would benefit the personal development of children. Firstly, children can strengthen critical thinking which is considered a valuable skill for children. The key rationale behind this is that individuals can have more time to explore their interests and make their own decisions. Buying a toy is the case at this point. If children are granted the freedom to choose what they want, they will take their needs or the price into consideration. Moreover, discovering new interests will foster creativity and innovation that they might not have detected before. A further benefit is communication skills. For instance, allowing children to have more freedom means they can spend time hanging out with their peers outside, which leads to strong social skills. In conclusion, despite having the aforementioned disadvantages of providing freedom to children, I believe that this positive strength would contribute to their intimate development. Đề : In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development? With the rapid pace of cultural changes, more and more freedom is granted... Xem thêm

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Nguyễn Phan Hà Anh

18/10/2023

Mong các thầy cô chấm, sửa bài giúp em với ạ

Link gg: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GTa3e7winJ4kZBVzXYI3TGIsgyJlfTP7IO3_Iq3SrTI/edit?usp=sharing

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joyce_nguyen

16/10/2023

Nhờ mn và thầy chấm giúp em writing task 2 ạ, em đang tập viết writing task 1 ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy và mn nhiều ạ.

Spending time online has affected the communication skills of young people both positively and negatively. Discuss the effects of increased online activity on communications skills. In the modern world, teenagers who are spending more time online are constantly increasing. Adolescents' communication abilities have been influenced both adversely and positively by their internet activities. This essay will discuss the possible effects of this problem. On the one hand, there are several benefits to communicating through social media. First of all, young individuals can easily connect with their friends and relatives around the world. For example, Instagram already serves 1.5 million users worldwide, allowing adolescents to connect with their peers by clicking on Instagram and talking. Second, the internet allows for effective contact with people all over the world via email and instant chat. This is due to the fact that we may interact with each other quickly instead of waiting months as in the past. Furthermore, unlike in the past, when we had to pay extra postage if we wanted to send a letter overseas, we can now save money by just clicking a mouse. On the other hand, spending time online has some drawbacks for teenagers' communication. First, young individuals who spend time online often suffer from sleep deprivation, weight gain, and being unable to process emotion as compared to previous generations. This limits their work capacity and results in lower productivity. For example, research has found that people who use computers for more than three hours per day may be at a higher risk of developing mental health problems. Second, although social media makes it easy to meet new people and establish friendships, it also allows vicious individuals to easily break into others' lives. Bullying criminals can utilize the anonymity provided by social networks to earn people's trust before terrorizing them in front of their peers. For example, they may build a fake profile and appear amicable to a classmate, only to betray and shame them online later. In conclusion, spending time online is a major issue that affects a lot of young people in the era of modern technology. Spending time online has affected the communication skills of young people both positively and negatively. Discuss the effects of increased online activity on communications skills. In the modern... Xem thêm

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Ngoc Han

18/10/2023

Dạ nhờ thầy/cô và mng nhận xét, góp ý cho bài viết của em ạ. Em xin cám ơn!!!

TOPIC: It costs a lot of money for a country to host an international sports event, such as the Olympic Games or football World Cup. Some people think that this is a waste of money, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. A number of annual sporting events are held in certain nations to figure out talented individuals joining this field. Unfortunately, some people might believe it is a dissipation of money to do that, while others hold the opposite belief. This essay will evaluate both perspectives before performing my own view that I am more of the latter notion because of its benefit for both sportspeople and socio-economic aspects. On the one hand, throwing cross-border sports events can exert positive effects on a few aspects. Seeking a potential sportsman from all around the world is one of the superior explanations. In fact, global sports competitions confer competitors the ability to show off their capability, closely approaching worthy prize-winning as well as gaining an evitable reputation. This might enable athletes to be recognized by the public and foster the fame of their host country. Another obvious clarification is that by holding these international sports, it is conducive to enhancing the economy of a main region. As more events are hosted with a wide multiple household names of players, more people are attracted to attend and visit there. Therefore, booking restaurants or extended stays in hotels is necessary for spectators to continue to enjoy the contests there as well. This can assist the economy to yield immense profits from that, especially in tourism; in other words, generating multiple job opportunities for residents. On the other hand, some may argue understandably that it is pointless to organize these sports festivals by virtue of their extravagance. To begin with, a host country should allocate a financial budget in order to erect and upgrade relevant infrastructure. Owing to the responsibility of starting an event, improving sports facilities or preparing medical services might be prioritized to meet athletes’ demands. This can therefore put a society under massive pressure, delaying the process of social development in some ways. Besides, it can cost a sum of money to invest in participants. In favor of sportsmen engaging in a contest, a specific region might concentrate on ameliorating the quality of sports teams. This thus boosts the spirituality of players, alleviates tension in the media, and avoids being criticized if sports administrators take no notice of contestants. To conclude, there has been a growing conviction that organizing international athlete games is overspending, whereas opponents of this idea are on the other side. From my viewpoint, I tend to lean towards the following idea, as it offers people a chance to display their talent as well as fostering the pivotal economy. TOPIC: It costs a lot of money for a country to host an international sports event, such as the Olympic Games or football World Cup. Some people think that this is a waste of money, while others belie... Xem thêm

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Do Quang Thanh Truc

19/10/2023

Dạ mong thầy cô nhận xét

Topic 5: The only reason for people working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is often thought that earning money is the individual purpose for people to work relentl... Xem thêm

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Tram Anh

19/10/2023

Làm sao để tăng band điểm cấp tốc trong 1 tháng

Em cần xin tips học cũng như lộ trình đạt 5.5 ielts trong vòng 1 tháng tới ạ

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Linh0102

16/10/2023

Mong được chấm bài ạ - Writing task 2 - Em cảm ơn nhiều

Đề: Some say that music plays an important role in society whilst others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Numerous individuals stress that mu... Xem thêm

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Thái

15/10/2023

Mong được các thầy cô sửa bài ạ

Televised Talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment? There were several projects with new s... Xem thêm

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Nguyễn Phan Hà Anh

18/10/2023

Dạ mong thầy cô nhận xét bài giúp em ạ

Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Children’s brain size and cognitive development improve as they grow. This has led to the belief that their education should be initiated at a very young age, whereas some assume the age of seven is the best for children to attend school. This essay will elaborate on two perspectives and the reasons why I lean towards the latter. On the one hand, starting school at a very young age can bring about a variety of advantages. First, early exposure to education can significantly enhance children’s cognitive development. Numerous scientific studies have demonstrated that quality education commenced during children’s early years can help children engender critical thinking skills as well as problem-solving abilities. These may become the building blocks for their future academic success. Second, early formal education can also benefit parents. In most developed nations today, people are snowed under with heavy workloads, leaving little time for them to fulfill parental duties. Therefore, sending children to school can allow teachers to share such responsibilities, and parents can devote more time to their careers. On the other hand, postponing education until the age of seven may foster better overall development. This can be attributed to the fact that early academic study can lead to unwanted stress that children of this age might not be able to cope with because of their underdeveloped mental capacity. Accordingly, it will be more beneficial for them to start education when they are more developmentally prepared. Moreover, this can allow children to enjoy a more extended period of childhood instead of being overburdened with their studies. To be more specific, young children will not be confined to theoretical lessons. Instead, they can have the chance to spend more time exploring the world around them, thereby discovering new things and gaining practical experience on their own. In conclusion, while it is irrefutable that early education can bestow advantages on children and parents in many aspects, I would contend that delaying formal schooling until the age of seven is a more favorable option. Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Children’s brain... Xem thêm

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phuong thao

14/10/2023

Mong cac thay co sua bai giup em a

The pie charts give information about what households in Japan and Malaysia spent their money for in 2010. Overall, proportionally, the majority of families in Japan spent their money on other goods a... Xem thêm

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Linh

16/10/2023

[TASK 2] mong được thầy cô chấm chữa bài ạaaa

People should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live, rather than for their own benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Essay These days, controversies have arisen over a prevailing belief that individuals should prioritize their health for the betterment of the society they live in, rather than solely for their own benefits. From my perspective, I partially consent to this statement because focusing on personal well-being can lead to positive impacts on individuals and society as a whole. On the one hand, it is undeniable that health should be pursued for personal fulfillment and an enhanced quality of life. Firstly, individuals should have the freedom to make choices regarding their own health without feeling obligated to society. This is primarily because imposing the responsibility of maintaining societal well-being solely on individuals completely neglects other factors contributing to public health. Secondly, poor inhabitants clearly lack access to healthcare facilities, making it difficult for them to prioritize their health. In such circumstances, expecting them to prioritize societal benefits over personal benefits may exacerbate existing inequalities. On the other hand, it is immediately obvious that the importance of personal health has proved to be positive for the entire community. To begin with, one crucial point to discuss is that health promotion substantially reduces healthcare costs. In particular, individuals taking care of their health can minimize the need for expensive medical treatments, assisting the society in both the efficient allocation of healthcare resources and necessary investment in other essential areas. Furthermore, healthier individuals can greatly contribute to a healthier society, which minimizes the burden of the healthcare system. More importantly, they might actively participate in various aspects of society, including work, education, and community activities, leading to overall societal development. To summarize, with these aforementioned catalysts, I firmly believe that it is imperative for individuals to focus on self-care and maintain good health, as it benefits both their personal well-being and society. (297 words) People should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live, rather than for their own benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Essay These days, controversies have... Xem thêm

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Mong các thầy cô sửa bài giúp em ạ

Em đã đạt aim 8.0 overall và được cả 8.0 Writing rồi ạ. Em cảm ơn Pombeebee và các thầy cô giáo nhiều ạ

Mong thầy cô xem giúp em ạ

Mong thầy cô chữa bài task 2 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ

em gửi thầy bài này của em ạ, mong được các thầy cô chấm chữa và nhận xét cho em. Em xin cảm ơn nhiều ạ

Mong các thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài writing task 2 với ạ

Dạ mong thầy cô cho em nhận xét ạ.

em rất mong được thầy cô chấm bài task 1 này của em ạ, em xin cảm ơn nhìu

Task 1 Line Chart

Mong.các.thầy cô sửa bài giúp em ạ.Em cảm ơn ạ

Mong các thầy cô chấm, sửa bài giúp em với ạ

Nhờ mn và thầy chấm giúp em writing task 2 ạ, em đang tập viết writing task 1 ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy và mn nhiều ạ.

Dạ nhờ thầy/cô và mng nhận xét, góp ý cho bài viết của em ạ. Em xin cám ơn!!!

Dạ mong thầy cô nhận xét

Làm sao để tăng band điểm cấp tốc trong 1 tháng

Mong được chấm bài ạ - Writing task 2 - Em cảm ơn nhiều

Mong được các thầy cô sửa bài ạ

Dạ mong thầy cô nhận xét bài giúp em ạ

Mong cac thay co sua bai giup em a

[TASK 2] mong được thầy cô chấm chữa bài ạaaa

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