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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Nowadays, there is more and more competition for getting into university. Is this a positive or negative development?
In the fast-paced world, it is getting more competitive to enter a university due to the increasing number of applicants. As a consequence, a debate regarding whether this situation brings positive or negative outcomes emerged. In my opinion, academic competition in this case is positive despite the fact that it may result in emotional burden among students.
One of the most significant drawbacks of the mounting growth in terms of university competition is the academic pressure and achievements it places on students. Fierce competition usually leads to anxiety, high stress levels and mental health issues. Numerous students have to face sleepless nights and burnout owing to the intense desire to outshine their peers. It is undeniable that long lasting stressful conditions can result in mental disorders and health problems, which affect students’ lives. Nevertheless, it will be less serious if the students can arrange their timetable flexibly and combine studying with other physical and entertaining activities to improve their health.
On the other hand, competition in this case can act as a driving force that motivates students to strive for academic achievements and outstanding performance. When students have to face pressure from their peers and the desire to outshine, they will strictly put their great effort into preparing for the entrance exam. As a consequence, students have opportunities to strive for success, and become more mature, disciplined and resilient, which positively foster and nourish useful soft skills and personal growth.
In conclusion, increased university competition has both advantages and disadvantages. However, its benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Students may suffer from several issues related to mental health but they will be able to gain many helpful skills, bravery and experience that are crucial to pave the way for their bright future. There should be competition in order to stimulate applicants to try their best and reach their full potential.
In the fast-paced world, it is getting more competitive to enter a university due to the increasing number of applicants. As a consequence, a debate regarding whether this situation brings positive or...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian employment in five sectors from 1962 to 2012.
Overall, there was an increase in the share of the Australian labour force in the service category over the period, while the opposite was true for those of manufacturing and agriculture. Meanwhile, construction and mining remained nearly unchanged throughout the given timeframe. Additionally, the employment rate in services consistently dominated, while that of mining was generally the lowest.
In 1962, just over 50% of the Australian workforce was employed in services, nearly doubling the figure for manufacturing (about 28%), whereas the percentages of those working in agriculture and construction were comparable at one-tenth. Meanwhile, almost no one worked in the mining sector.
Over the next 50 years, services employment had almost quadrupled to just below 80% by 2012, while the figures for construction and mining industries relatively stabilised over the period. Conversely, the proportion of people working in manufacturing gradually decreased to the same level of construction in the final year. Finally, agriculture employment experienced similar changes, albeit to a lesser extent, to mining's level in the last year.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian employment in five sectors from 1962 to 2012.
Overall, there was an increase in the share of the Australian labour force in the service categ...
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dạ thầy cô chữa giùm e bài writing task 1 này vs ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ
The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The line graph provides statistics on which factors cause individuals to move to the capital urban area of a typical country.
In general, during the survey period, the figure for employment reasons was in the first place. Furthermore, an upward trend was clearly depicted in a 15-year period.
Regarding the job and education reasons. Notwithstanding, a roughly similar trend was illustrated between 2 purposes, there was a difference in the patterns. From 2000 to 20005, the number of people who moved to promote their jobs witnessed an incredible upsurge ( from 60000 to 87000), in the second place, the extent of study reason had skyrocketed dramatically from 25000 to 480000. In the next 5 years, both data slackened and maintained a gradual increase ( 85000 to 91000 and 48000 to 55000 respectively). From 2010 to 2015, whilst, the statistic of education reason had a leap up to 88000, the data for job reason declined slightly to meet the last one.
In terms of the rest. Even though the extent of the adventure reason started at the lowest point with 12000, it subsequently maintained a steady rise to reach 15000 in 2015, that of the family/friend reason increased slightly from 13000 to 14000 in 2005, then, it suddenly rose to 24000 in 2010 and plateaued to 25000 in the last year.
The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featu...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài writing task 2 này của em ạ
Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
The Fourth Industrial Revolution has helped several inventions come to life, including robots to accompany citizens in the workforce. This invention has led to a question of whether it is beneficial to develop robots for the use of working and doing housework. In my opinion, despite the convenience it brings, robots can’t be left taking individuals’ jobs.
On the one hand, machines with artificial intelligence can increase efficiency and productivity in different working fields. Robots are created using advanced technology, which allows them to perform with better capacity, are having a better performance at work compared to humans. Tasks given to them are finished with not only precision but also consistency, leading to higher efficiency and productivity in various industries. Moreover, since robots are equipped with the latest advances in artificial intelligence and, they are totally capable of conducting a thoughtful conversation with an elderly individual based on their in-depth analysis of each personality, interests and past events. Those conversations have proven effective in reducing loneliness, stress levels and the potential risk of depression among senior citizens in developing countries, such as Japan and the United States.
On the other hand, job displacement can easily occur if robots are being used too often. The widespread of adapting robots in the workforce has encountered disagreement among workers who are worried about being unemployed, especially those with low educational backgrounds and participating in manual jobs. If machines with artificial intelligence are being used in every arsenal and small enterprises, a large number of workers will become unemployed and have a hard time searching for alternative job opportunities. When numerous citizens are unable to find suitable working conditions, economic disruption will likely happen, resulting in a country being on the point of collapse. Furthermore, the integration of robots into everyday life can pose a threat to society, especially to intellectual property rights. AI-powered robots have been in the market for several years with countless purposes, ranging from essay writing to image generation. These AI features have been abused by multiple users to create individual profit. By using AI technology to generate a drawing or write an essay, they seek to profit by adding minor details and then selling them to others, proclaiming those pieces are created using only their ability and imagination. This might seem harmless, but numerous authentic artists have pointed this plagiarism action out and seek for solutions
In conclusion, despite some convenience, the use of robots in organizations and companies still has several negative impacts on the workforce
Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa và cải thiện câu viết cho em ạ . em cảm ơn ạ
The line chart provides detailed data of the number of shop closures and openings in a particular nation over the 7-year internal starting in 2011.
Overall, the figures for both sites indicate a downward trend over the period shown, with significant fluctuations in the number of both categories.
Regarding shop closures, the initial point reached a peak of about 6400 in 2011, but after the number of closing stores witnessed the lowest point in 2015, at under 1000. however, from 2016 to the final year of the period shown, the figure rose dramatically approximately 5200 and stayed the same until the end of the period
In terms of shop openings, the number of openings shops reached the highest point of 8500 in 2011 but later declined significantly by 4000 in 2012. there was an increase to 6200 in the figure for shop openings in 2014, which was followed by a stable figure of approximately 4000 until the end of the period.
The line chart provides detailed data of the number of shop closures and openings in a particular nation over the 7-year internal starting in 2011.
Overall, the figures for both sites indicate a downw...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodation in three different years.
The pie graphs illustrate the preferences of vacationers over four different forms of accommodation in 1988, 1998, and 2008.
Overall, there were decreases in the percentage of travellers choosing to stay with family and go camping, with the former consistently dominating the three years examined, while the opposite was true for those renting apartments and staying in hotels.
Regarding categories that declined, in 1988, just over half of tourists stayed with their families while on vacation (52%), doubling the share of campers (26%). This disparity even widened over the next 20 years, with the respective figures being 54% and 13% in 1998 and 44% and 12% in 2008.
Concerning the two remaining options, during the first decade, the rate of holidaymakers renting apartments was twice as much as those who booked hotels for their trips, with 15% and 7%, respectively, in 1988 and 22% and 11%, in that order, in 1998. However, in the final year, the proportion of visitors staying in hotels doubled to be comparable with that of renting apartments, which remained unchanged.
Prompt: The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodation in three different years.
The pie graphs illustrate the preferences of vacationers over f...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table shows how many male and female workers and factories there were in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
Overall, although there were some fluctuations in the number of factories, that of the total employment saw a steady decrease, leading to the same trend in both genders. Additionally, the majority of employees were males over the period.
During the first decade, the year 1851 recorded the highest employment numbers working in the lowest number of factories, with 400,000 people (287,000 males, 190,000 females) in total and 225 factories. However, a reverse pattern was seen in the next 10 years, with a surge in the number of factories to the highest point of 727 factories, and a drop in the total figure of employment to 191,000 workers (132,000 men, 160,000 women).
Over the following 40 years, the number of factories generally declined, from 622 in 1871 to 600 in 1901, despite some slight fluctuations. However, both the numbers of total employees and male employees gradually fell from 140,000 and 80,000, respectively in 1871 to 105,000 and 65,000, in that order, before nearly halving to respective figures of 61,000 and 31,000 in 1901. Meanwhile, the number of female workers witnessed a decrement of 10,000 females per decade, falling from 60,000 in 1871 to 30,000 in 1901.
The table shows how many male and female workers and factories there were in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
Overall, although there were some fluctuations in the number of factories, that...
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ . Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have much higher salaries than other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that it is necessary for senior management positions to be received a much larger payment than other workers in a company . From my perspective , I totally agree with this viewpoint for several reasons which will be laid out in the following essay.
On the one hand , this viewpoint leads to disparity in payments and social inequality . Large salary gaps may make other employees feel unvalued and not respected , therefore resulting in arguments among the workforce. This has several negative impacts on work performance and job satisfaction .
On the other hand, the higher payment for senior positions is necessary because they spend a large amount of time and efforts to devote to the development of the company. The priority also means the pressure and responsibilities faced by senior management. When the company is at risk , they are responsible for offering solutions and guiding other employees to come over harsh period. Besides , offering large payment can attract and retain the best talent to work for company. Their contributes are necessary to strengthen the position’s company in the increasingly competitive market.A good compensation also encourage senior position to gain high productivity and work performance , thereby leading to job-satisfaction and overall well-being.
In conclusion , despite the drawback relating to principal of equality , I believe that offering a much higher payment for senior management position have more significant benefits for both senior management and the development of their company
Some individuals believe that it is necessary for senior management positions to be received a much larger payment than other workers in a company . From my perspective , I totally agree with this vie...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table illustrates how many women per 100 men in six regions in the world, in 1995 and 2005.
Overall, there were increases in the female-to-male population ratio in Africa and Europe, while that in the remaining areas experienced a reverse pattern. Despite this, the figures for Asia remained the highest over the two years examined, whereas the opposite was true for Europe.
In 1995, the Asian and Oceanian female populations outnumbered those of males, with about 105 and 104 females, respectively, while both North and Central America recorded comparable data, at 100 women each. Meanwhile, Africa and Europe saw fewer women, around 98 and 90 women for every 100 men.
In 2005, although the population ratio of females to males in Asia declined to almost 105 females, only this region had more females than males. Moreover, the figure for Oceania saw a downward trend and was at parity with that of Africa, which inclined, both at nearly 100 women each. Finally, the gender ratio in both North and Central America declined to approximately 97 females per 100 males.
The table illustrates how many women per 100 men in six regions in the world, in 1995 and 2005.
Overall, there were increases in the female-to-male population ratio in Africa and Europe, while that...
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Pie chart - nhờ cô chấm ạ
The pie charts illustrate informations about the percentages of energy produced from five differents sources (Hydropower, Oil, Nuclear power, Coal, Natural Gas) in a country between 1983 and 2003.
It is clear that oil is a popular energy , which slight decrease. however hydropower remain unchanged in 1983 and 2003.
To begin with oil in 1983 is the hghest propotion at 42% of total energy. The propotion of energy produced after oil is nuclear power is 20%. Meanwhile only 23% of total energy produced. the figures for were lower , at 11% and 4% respectively.
The year 2003, the percentage of oils is reduced slightly at 38%. The figure for nuclear power rose slowly to 24%%, while that for coal experienced a dramatic fall of nearly 10%.There were sharp increases of 10% in the figures for Nuclear. Hydro power still raimain unchanged at 4 %.
The pie charts illustrate informations about the percentages of energy produced from five differents sources (Hydropower, Oil, Nuclear power, Coal, Natural Gas) in a country between 1983 and 2003.
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ <3 em chân thành cảm ơn
The bar chart illustrates the average percentage of weekly income that households spent on eight different groups of things in the two years 1968 and 2018.
Overall, in 1968, most families paid money to buy food, while leisure became the top priority that they allocated their weekly income for after a half of century.
In 1968, most families’ income per week was spent on food, whose percentage peaked at 35% initially. The runner-up was housing and clothing and footwear which made up the same proportion (10%). In addition, household goods, personal goods, transport and leisure were at approximately the same rate (8%). It is also striking that people spent the least amount of money on fuel and power.
In the next five decades, families prioritized their money for pastimes, which significantly reached up to 22%. Meanwhile, the least amount of their weekly income was spent on fuel and power and personal goods with a mere 4%. What is more, transport and housing also comprised a considerable amount of weekly income with slightly under a fifth and slightly lower than a quarter respectively. Moving on to clothing and footwear and personal goods, which both consisted of almost 5%.
The bar chart illustrates the average percentage of weekly income that households spent on eight different groups of things in the two years 1968 and 2018.
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Information is depicted in the pie charts as to the proportion of energy consumption for various purposes, and that of the corresponding greenhouse gas emissions from this energy consumption in an average household in Australia.
It is remarkable that heating and water heating make up a large percentage of energy use, whereas most greenhouse gas emissions come from water heating and other appliances.
Most average Australian households consume energy for heating and water heating, with 42% and 30% all told, respectively. These figures make those used for lighting and cooling pale by comparison, at 4% and 2%, respectively. Other appliances take another 15%, which is roughly twice as high as the percentage of energy used for refrigeration.
Water heating is also a source of greenhouse gas emissions, taking up almost a third of total emissions. The second-largest amount of emissions comes from other appliances, with 28%. Interestingly, despite taking up the biggest percentage of energy use, heating is only responsible for 15%, and the figure is nearly the same as that for refrigeration. The remaining 11 percent comes from lighting and cooling.
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Information is depicted in the pie charts as to the proportion of energy consumption for various purposes, and that of the corresponding greenh...
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dạ thầy cô chữa giùm em bài này vs ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ
The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides statistics on the e-commerce purchases made by businesses by industry in Canada over a 5-years period from 2015.
In general, The figure for the Information and communications had been in the top spot during the survey time. Additionally, an upward trend was roughly the norm in the chart.
Regarding the first half of the period of 5 years, the extent of the Information and communications commenced in the highest position with a slight surpass to 60%. Thereafter, there was an incredible upsurge to 70% in 2017. On the other hand, the percentage of construction started at the lowest point at 22%, then it maintained a steady rise to 35% in 2017. Furthermore, Reatail and Manufacturing shared the comparable figure with 32%, both experienced a leap in 2017 with 45% and 52% respectively. Eventually, the statistics of the Wholesale was ranked second in 2015, then skyrocketed at a staggering rate to 53% in 2017.
In terms of the second half, meanwhile, the proportion of the group of the 3 first purchases was matched by a roughly similar trend ( increased significantly to 58%, 55%, and 62% respectively), that of retail dipped slightly to 54%, and for the Information and communications, it diminished rapidly to 59%.
The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
ĐỀ BÀI:
Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.
What are the reasons for this behaviour?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
ANSWER:
It is a fact that many people are becoming consumptive and materialistic because of their expensive things that they do not really need and cannot afford, therefore, getting into debt is quite popular among such people. There are various reasons that have caused this situation and in this essay, I will discuss them and give some measures that can prevent people from having this behavior.
The first reason why many people are facing debt is due to consumptive lifestyles. With the development of social media such as Facebook, Instagram...more people want to show off their lives with luxurious things they have in society and the purpose of this is attracting many followers or fans. Many individuals are acceptable to get into debt to buy luxurious, costly items to show off themselves. That is quite a popular condition nowadays. Moreover, with the significant growth in the number of prestige and quality malls that attract people to spend much money on exorbitant things like clothes, jewelry which may not be necessary and even many people cannot buy it because of the costly prices but they regardless buy it with the desire to possess. As a result, many individuals are facing up with huge debt.
There are some methods to prevent this problem. Firstly, people need to have a solid awareness of spending on things that are unnecessary or beyond their purchase. It must be ensured that the credit limit that is given to credit card holders is aligned with the individual’s income to spend money effectively. Instead of developing many luxurious malls, the government should focus on opening public parks or playgrounds to entertain.
In conclusion, the development of social media and luxurious malls are the factors that make many people get into debt. The government should give more alternative solutions that prevent this problem.
ĐỀ BÀI:
Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.
What are the reasons for this behaviour?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 2 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.
Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Other value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
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In this contemporary epoch, there is an increasing viewpoint that workers should put on suitable clothes, while some people considered other work characteristics are more vital. I will discuss both view in this essay and give my own perspective.
To begin with, some organizations advocate for dressing smartly because they believe that it would enhance their brand images which easy to access more and more stakeholders. For instance, Grab - a famous application in Vietnam providing vehicle-sharing system for users, which required their drivers put on green jackets with a particular logo so that their customers can identify them immediately. Furthermore, employees should wear well-defined dress code since it can create a sense of uniformity and discipline within the workplace such as Vietnamese teachers are expected to wear Ao Dai (a traditional female cloth) when they go to school.
On the other hand, above appearance, many skills or knowledge relating to work features are still vital parts to assess the values of employees. Moreover, the freedom of attire choices can assist personnels become more creative and versatile because it may create a relaxed and comfortable work place. However, this may have some drawbacks, particularly in terms of the organization's public image and professionalism.
In conclusion, while the quality of work is undoubtedly crucial, the way employees present themselves should not be disregarded. A smart and professional appearance can convey a sense of responsibility, competence, and commitment to clients and colleagues. Therefore, I believe that organizations should strike a balance between allowing employees some flexibility in their attire as also maintaining certain dress code standards that are suitable for the company's image and values.
Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Other value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
Đề Bài: The chart below shows the annual number of rental and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Answer:
The chart illustrates the yearly figure of rental and film sales in different formats from a specific store from 2002 to 2011. Overall, it is clear that the rentals had a downward trend over the years. While the usage of VHS disappeared in mid years, the Blu-ray sales emerged in that periods.
In 2002, the rentals was around 180,000, then it reached the lowest cost at 60,000 in 2011. Likewise, VHS sales started from 80,000 in 2002 and it began decreasing gradually to 500 in 2005. Finally, VHS vanished completely in 2006, made room for the rentals and DVD sales to develop. For DVD sales, it was the dominant category in all the years, it was about nearly 50,000 in 2002 and it increased continuously to peak over 200,000 in 2007. In subsequent years, DVD sales had a drop however, it still remained the most popular choice at 180,000 in 2011. Blu-ray sales just emerged from 2007 and it only accounted for small number until 2011.
Đề Bài: The chart below shows the annual number of rental and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting t...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 1 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
(BÀI LÀM)
The chart illustrates the estimated number of garbage manufactured by three companies between 2000 and 2015.
Overall, although company C discharged the least amounts of waste at the beginning, it was recorded the highest number in the last period. Moreover, other features tended to minimize the trash throughout fifteen years.
To begin with, company A registered 12 tonnes in 2000, while 8 tonnes was the figure for company B at the same time. Then, company A dropped its waste constantly until 2015, it was accounted for under 9 tonnes. Furthermore, the year 2005 was the peak amounts of company B waste, at around 10 tonnes. However, the trash of company B significantly declined and became the smallest number in 2015, at 3 tonnes.
In terms of company C, it had an increasing trend during the given period. As its starting point was just around 4 waste in tonnes, the quantity continued to grow and ended at approximately 10 tonnes in 2015.
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
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The chart illustrates the estimated number of garbage manufactured by three companies be...
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Nhờ cô chấm giúp em bài task 2.
Some people think that the increasing of computers and mobile phones for communication had a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the widespread use of digital devices such as smartphones and computers for communication have adverse impacts on people's literacy skills. Although electronic communication has some advantages, I firmly agree with this statement because this trend brings more harm than good.
Granted, one might argue that there are some notable merits of using digital devices for communication. First of all, the availability of mobile phones or computers with the Internet connection can help people stay in touch with others from the comfort of their home. In fact, these devices are linked with messages and textings, which are modern forms of writing. Therefore, individuals can enhance their literacy by regularly with their messaging, texting, and emailing. Furthermore, thanks to technological advances, people can access a vast variety of reading materials, particularly on social media or reading websites by using their private phones or computers. As a result, they can access electronic books, news and magazines in order to broaden their knowledge and improve their reading skills as well.
Nevertheless, I believe that the increasing use of these devices for communication leads to detrimental effects on an individual's literacy ability. First and foremost, young people tend to read short and informal texts since the growing popularity of social media. In fact, there is a lot of unofficial or inaccurate information through the Internet, which creates a challenge for young individuals to intelligently select the value data to read. As a result, they may come across and read false information, thereby affecting their reading ability. In addition, using technological devices deters people from realizing their mistakes. This is because, when writing words or paragraphs on computers or mobile phones, there is a tool to check and correct the spelling and grammatical mistakes automatically. Consequently, if electronic devices are not accessible, individuals are ill-equipped to write manually and grammatically.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits of using mobile phones and computers for communication, such a development has resulted in the growth of communication misunderstandings and hindered the development of formal writing proficiency in young individuals.
Some people think that the increasing of computers and mobile phones for communication had a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table compares the incomes of secondary and high school teachers across five nations, namely Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Korea, and Japan, in 2009.
Overall, teachers in Luxembourg were paid the highest salaries among the five countries. Additionally, those teaching in Australia and Denmark made the maximum salaries with the lowest years of experience, while the opposite was true for their Korean and Japanese counterparts.
Regarding Australia, Denmark, and Luxembourg, the initial salaries of teachers in Luxembourg were the highest, at $80,000, which increased to $112,000 per year after 15 years, and reached the maximum of $139,000 after 30 years of work. However, Australian and Danish teachers' salaries could be raised from $34,600 and $47,000, respectively, to $48,000 and $54,000, in that order within less than 10 years in each country, which remained unchanged even after 15 years.
Concerning the two other countries, Korean teachers' starting salary was $30,500, $2,500 higher than that of those in Japan. Teachers in these two countries were required 15 years of experience to be paid $52,600 and $49,000 annually, respectively, and up to $84,500 and $62,400 at the maximum, higher than Australia's and Denmark's figures, albeit taking more than 30 years to reach this level.
The table compares the incomes of secondary and high school teachers across five nations, namely Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Korea, and Japan, in 2009.
Overall, teachers in Luxembourg were paid...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table compares changes in the popularity of religious and civil marriages, and the mean marriage age between men and women in Australia between 1960 and 2000.
Overall, there were increases in the number of marriages in both types, with that of religion being more common for most of the period, while this was true for civil marriages in the last years. Additionally, both genders got married at a later age over the given time frame.
Regarding the two marriage categories, in 1960, there were 25,000 marriages based on religion, tripling the figure for the civil ones, at only 8,000. Over the next 20 years, this disparity remained relatively unchanged, with the former surging and peaking at 50,000, compared to 16,000 of the latter. However, after two decades, the number of religious marriages was surpassed by that of civil, with respective figures being 34,000 and 40,000 in 2000.
Concerning the average age at the time of marriage, initially, women typically got married at 24 years old, 3 years old sooner than their male counterparts (21 years old). Subsequently, an incline of 1 to 3 years per decade was seen towards the final year of the period, with women and men doing so at 30 and 32 years old, respectively.
The table compares changes in the popularity of religious and civil marriages, and the mean marriage age between men and women in Australia between 1960 and 2000.
Overall, there were increases in t...
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