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Tuan minh

8/11/2023

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The line chart illustrates the quantity of shops were closed as well as that were opened from 2011 to 2018. Firstly, the closings over the 4 years ( from 2011 to 2014) always fluctuate strongly. Ha... Xem thêm

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Kakakkkaa

8/11/2023

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Đề: Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is this a positive or negative development? Bài làm: Advertising has become a ubiquitous presence in modern society, infiltrating our... Xem thêm

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Phạm Thị Thu Thủy

7/11/2023

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ <3 em chân thành cảm ơn thầy cô

Đề: In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion. Bài làm: As life expectancy has been increasing inexorably in recent years, it has emerged as a topic of interest all around the world. Nowadays, people tend to live longer thanks to innovative technology and new methods of remedy. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks. From my perspective, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Longer life expectancy results in several related problems that can be anticipated. First and foremost, the principal issue with this situation is obviously aging-population, which is a long-term dangerous phenomenon leading to many social problems. By way of example, numerous elderly dwellers can cause a dense population, consequently, people have to face the lack of living spaces, rapid house price growth, and pollution. The second drawback is that there will be more people of retirement age who are eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of the working-age population will be smaller and thus, the government will receive less money in taxes. In other words, young generations have to handle a greater tax burden. Besides, the government can not stably maintain the budget for healthcare services and public hospitals. As a result, there are not enough facilities and human resources to take care of people’s health. Despite the fact that there have been many cons, that affect negatively on our society, the potential of increasing life expectancy brings about significant pros in human lives. On the plus side of this trend, the elderly will have more time for themselves to pursue their own recreational activities after their hard-working lifetime when they were young, for instance, they can play sports with friends, and take part in many cultural activities. What is more, the elderly can also help parents take care of their children, so it will cut down a certain amount of money spent on babysitting, and reduce parents’s financial burden in many households. Consequently, their mental health is not only improved, but their family are also becoming more close-knit. In conclusion, whilst there are certain benefits the growing popularity of life expectancy may bring about, I would opine that the disadvantages of this trend are far weightier. It is necessary that the government should take measures to manage and balance the population, for the better growth of the young generation. Đề: In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion. Bài làm: As life expectancy has been... Xem thêm

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nhungtrang

7/11/2023

Thầy cô giúp em sửa bài với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.

Some people think that news has no connection to people’s lives, and therefore, they consider it a waste of time to read news in newspapers or watch television news programs. To what extent do you agr... Xem thêm

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phaminhbaongoc

7/11/2023

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Đề: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Bài làm: It is a common belief that advertising is an effective way to persuade customers to purchase stuff. However, some argue that nowadays people are not paying too much attention to advertisements since they have become so familiar. Therefore, this essay will discuss both ideas before revealing a definitive conclusion. On the one hand, due to the widespread multimedia and information transmission, advertising has become too popular, which bores people and makes them want to neglect it. In fact, according to a survey conducted in the USA in 2019, when coming across an advertisement on a webpage or TV, around 40% of people tend to overlook and the other 10% even try to cancel it by buying a free-advertising account. Consequently, this old way of marketing seems to be no longer as effective as it used to be in catching customers' attention. Additionally, it's more difficult for corporations to gain people's trust through the information advertised about the products compared to the past. On the other hand, advertising has a long history of existence in the markets. Besides, it is the easiest and most prevalent way for the companies' products to approach the customers. Therefore, numerous successful businesses both in the past and in the present still apply this way and come off well. Take the Unilever corporation as an example, from the last century up to now, they have continued using the old strategy as advertising but still gain significant incomes. For this reason, advertisements play an important in marketing despite of periods. Moreover, although parts of people choose to neglect or postpone the advertisements, more than 50% of the respondents during the above survey still watch the advertisements, 20% of which answered that they found some interesting and beneficial that affect their shopping choices from advertisements. In conclusion, although it is true that advertisement is no longer as effective in attracting customers as it was in the past, it is inevitable that it still holds an important status in business by encouraging people to purchase products. For that reason, advertising still be one of the most common ways used by companies to attract customers. Đề: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these... Xem thêm

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Phạm Thị Thu Thủy

7/11/2023

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The given chart depicts the amount of time spent by the residents who lived in the UK on three primary kinds of phone call from 1995 to 2002. Overall, most people tend to make calls by local-fixed... Xem thêm

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Phạm Thị Thu Thủy

6/11/2023

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The diagrams illustrate how the area of the town of Poulton changed after some alterations and urban developments over a period of 35 years, from 1900 to 1935. Overall, the area experienced significan... Xem thêm

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nhungtrang

6/11/2023

Thầy cô giúp em sửa bài với ạ. Em cảm ơn

Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society To what extent do you agree with this view? The modern world we live in is now covered by a multitude of... Xem thêm

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nguyen ly

6/11/2023

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The given line graph reveals how the prices of bananas in Japan, France, Germany and the USA had changed from 1994 to 2004. Overall, as can be seen from the diagram, while bananas in Japan were the mo... Xem thêm

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Mi ú

6/11/2023

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Some people think that nuclear energy is better than other sources of power for meeting ever-increasing global need. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ——————————————— It is undeniable that th... Xem thêm

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Minh Hạnh

5/11/2023

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Question: Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both views and give your opin... Xem thêm

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Minh Hạnh

5/11/2023

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Question: The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Many people believe that raising petrol prices for transportation is the most efficient measure to tackle the environmental issues in the world. While I acknowledge the reasons behind this thinking, I would argue that the authorities could introduce many solutions that offer more suitable results. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe the environment will be considerably improved due to a sharp rise in petrol prices. The government decides to raise tax on fuel cost lead to reduce the number of transport. Those who own vehicles, for instance, would take into consideration using public transport to minimize cost. Besides, trading goods would be transported by railway system rather than trucks. These actions would cut down on emission from vehicles and help limit global warming and other consequences like acid rain and the greenhouse effect. On the other hand, I am convinced that increasing prices of petrol is just a stopgap measure, the national and local authorities should adopt more practical policies to comprehensively solve this problem. Firstly, the government should allocate resources to upgrade and expand public transport infrastructure to help moving in the city become more convenient. Thus, people tend to use it instead of private cars to avoid congestion and the emissions could also significantly decrease. Secondly, it is essential to enhance the use of electric vehicles instead of such petrol transportations. For example, the development of new friendly-environmentally electric motorbikes and cars help reduce the amount of petrol consumption and become a sustainable measure with the environment conservation. In conclusion, while there are justifications that rising petrol prices could positively impact on our habitat, I would contend that other solutions would offer long-lasting efficiency. Question: The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Many people believe that rai... Xem thêm

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Linh

5/11/2023

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The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and repo... Xem thêm

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Lê Hương Giang

3/11/2023

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The bar chart illustrates the yearly income for doctors and other occupations in seven countries, including France, Italy, Czech Republic, Germany, Finland, Switzerland, and the US, in 2004. Overall,... Xem thêm

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Vinh

3/11/2023

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WHAT ARE SOLUTIONS TO RELIEVE STRESS AMONG STUDENTS? (ESSAY)

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Mi ú

3/11/2023

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Some people think that a good health is very important should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages? ————————————————————— Good health is crucial to individuals’ life, so many people argue that it should not be managed by organizations which want to make profit. Although there are several controversies, I totally believe that the positive impacts are bigger than the negative ones. On the one hand, there are some disadvantages about private healthcare runned by profit-making companies that makes people think they waste their money having several additional tests. To be more specific, many private healthcare places often give unnecessary health tests for their patients or force the illness to buy healthcare center’s medicine to earn money. Patients do not know about the tests or the medicine can cost them a lot of money, but their health does not improve positively. Consequently, those private healthcare can make profits from the illness without taking care of their patient’s health. On the other hand, in my opinion, private healthcare centers have higher qualities of service and personal experience. For more illustration, because of the high prices, patients can be looked after carefully and treated with many modern facilities, especially for people who have serious illnesses such as cancer. For example, the patients can be cured with the technology that often lacks in normal hospitals, so they can be treated carefully by best devices and skillful doctors. Moreover, instead of waiting in a long queue in public hospitals, they can reduce time for waiting and take care fast by the nurses and doctors. In conclusion, in spite of some negative effects on having unnecessary tests in private healthcare systems, I hold the opinion that those health centers cure and care of their patients with many high qualified facilities, which may reduce the patients’ levels of illness. Some people think that a good health is very important should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages? ————————————————————— Good hea... Xem thêm

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Minh Hạnh

2/11/2023

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Question: Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Nowaday... Xem thêm

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Nguyễn Đức Tú

1/11/2023

Cách làm phần writing task 1

Hiện tại mik bắt đầu học phần writing task 1 nhưng ko bt cách làm, mn có thể chỉ cho em các bước làm được không ạ?

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Mina Tran

31/10/2023

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The chart illustrates how recycling centers collected waste of paper, glass, tins and garden between 2011 and 2015. Overall, there was an increase in the amount of waste collected in all categories e... Xem thêm

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Mina Tran

31/10/2023

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ———————— There are conflict... Xem thêm

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[Task 2] Mong thầy/cô sửa bài giúp và cho em xin band điểm với ạ. Em chân thành cảm ơn ạ

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