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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp...
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Writing task 1 dạng map. Em mong được thầy cô sửa bài giúp ạ.
The two diagrams below show an art gallery as it is now and the redevelopment plans for the future.
Overall, the art gallery will witness radical changes with the most noticeable being the expansion of the permanent exhibition space and the addition of the space in the West which will be used for two different purposes.
The current gallery has a quite narrow space. The visitors access the gallery by a door which leads to the lobby located in front of an office. Walking through two temporary exhibition spaces, visitors can come to the permanent exhibition space.
As a result of the redevelopment, the entrance will be moved to the Parkinson Court so that visitors can walk straight into the permanent exhibition space which will be enlarged by the demolition of the two temporary exhibition spaces. On the right of the main area, the lobby and office will be replaced by an education area and a room used for a store or plant. In addition, there will be an extension of space on the left of the permanent exhibition space, making way for a new special exhibition space and an exhibition store.
The two diagrams below show an art gallery as it is now and the redevelopment plans for the future.
Overall, the art gallery will witness radical changes with the most noticeable being the expansion...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture illustrates how to make honey in a simple production for commercial purposes.
Overall, the process consists of two main phases: the bee phase, beginning from gathering nectar to worker bees keeping their cells clean, and human intervention, commencing from gathering honeycombs to transporting jars of honey for sale.
During the bee phase, the process starts with nectar being gathered by forager bees from flowers. This is then carried back to the hive where it is deposited as honey. Next, worker bees fan their wings to dry the honey, thereby making it thicker, followed by each cell being sealed with wax to keep the substance clean and form honeycombs.
In the human phase, farmers or workers collect the honeycombs, before these honeycombs are pressed to extract honey, which is then taken to the factory. Once the honey has been transferred to the factory, it is poured into the sump tank, where it is heated to 45 to 50 degrees Celsius. This makes the honey thin enough to flow by gravity down to the second tank where it is sieved to remove impurities. From here, the cleaned honey runs down to the last container, the settling tank, where it is left for 2 to 4 days before being drained into jars. Finally, the jars are labelled, sealed, and transported to selling points.
The picture illustrates how to make honey in a simple production for commercial purposes.
Overall, the process consists of two main phases: the bee phase, beginning from gathering nectar to worker...
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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Online language translation applications have become one of the common applications that are utilised by the masses. I believe that its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
On the one hand, some translator applications provide people to translate words and improve their study of new language journals. Especially in modern life, younger generations are approached with exceptional amenities such as they can search for new vocabularies anywhere, even don’t use wifi and need not bring a thick dictionary book. Furthermore, there are a lot of applications developed by producers with numerous functions like voice recognition systems that can identify people's speech, boosting user’s experience. Next, they can enjoy using cameras to translate text via camera, because it is extremely quick to do so that is relevant in any country.
However, the foremost ramification is over-reliance on language conversation software. Thus, they will be passive when they want to study any new languages. Then, people will lose their ability to study the English language. For example, Google translator may create some errors and lose its natural meaning. When you want to translate a difficult phrase, that will provide users with a difficult passage.
Overall, the benefits from translator apps for humankind is such an amazing invention. Even though it has detrimental effects on some sides, its merit may outweigh its demerit. So , whenever they come to other countries, it becomes easier that they just need to use an online translator to render vocabulary.
Online language translation applications have become one of the common applications that are utilised by the masses. I believe that its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
On the one hand, some tra...
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Writing task 1 dạng mixed-chart. Mong thầy cô giúp đỡ ạ
The climograph depicts the average figures for the temperature and rainfall every month in a city in Kolkata.
Overall, it is apparent that monthly temperature in the city is highest from March to May while the rainfall is between June and September.
The figures for rainfall in the first four months increase sequentially but not more than 50 mm. Over the next 3 months, the data of rainfall continues the upward trend to reach its peak at about 330mm in July before declining dramatically in the Winter with almost no rains.
In January, the temperature in the city of Kolkata is around 20 Celsius degrees. The period of 4 months from February to May witnessed a significant increase in the temperature to hit its highest point, at 30 Celsius degrees in May. After that, there is a gradual decrease in the next 7 months to its initial statistic in December.
The climograph depicts the average figures for the temperature and rainfall every month in a city in Kolkata.
Overall, it is apparent that monthly temperature in the city is highest from March to Ma...
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Writing task 1. Mong được các cô chấm chữa ạ.
The diagram illustrates how bottled and canned stage carbornated drinks are manufactured.
Overall, it is clear that there are five stages in plastic bottles and cans production, from water cleaning to heating, mixing, filling and filtering it, which produces the finished packaging.
Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that in the first stage, water cleaning from factory raw water to filter, water softener, chemicals and pump. Following this, it is put into a electric heaters to cooling pipe and carbon dioxide, then it is converted into carbonated water. So that’s the end of step 2 heating evaproration and carbonation.
The next step is mixing, mixing tanks divide into three jars: colouring, syprup and flavour, after which filter it again and get the finished products are bottles and cans. At the end of step 4 filtering and filling, the last step is packaging and transporting to the supermarket for sale.
The diagram illustrates how bottled and canned stage carbornated drinks are manufactured.
Overall, it is clear that there are five stages in plastic bottles and cans production, from water cleaning to...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
ĐỀ BÀI: The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
ANSWER:
The chart illustrates the percentage of alternative energy in the total of energy provided in 4 sectors during the period 1997 to 2010.
Overall, renewable energy was provided mostly in Iceland, next was Turkey and the lowest proportion in Australia and Sweden.
For Iceland, the source of renewable energy increased rapidly over the years, with around 45% in 1997 to 70% in 2010. With regard to Turkey, the percentage of alternative energy was relatively high, however, it only accounted for a half of Iceland. In 1997, this country accounted for nearly 38% and the proportion increased slightly to exactly 40%, however, the rate decreased to around 35% in 2010.
Finally, the percentage of renewable energy in Australia and Sweden was not very different, the proportion of these 2 countries was the same. For Australia, the quantity of alternative energy reduced to under 10% in 2010 while the proportion of renewable energy in Sweden increased a little to nearly 10% in 2010, it is equal to the percentage of Australia in 1997.
ĐỀ BÀI: The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make com...
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Em mong được thầy cô sửa bài giúp ạ
The bar chart below illustrates the problems people usually come up against when they move to other countries to live at many aged.
The first problem is about making friends. People have more difficulities with make friends's acquaintance when they're younger. The percentage of people aged 18 to 34 can making friends stand at about 46%. But 55 to 54 years old can get to know others easily, just 36%. Besides, there is a go down in the percentage of people over 55 years old's ability of make friends is about 23%.
On the one hand, finding somewhere to live is a challenge for people at 18 to 54. They stand at approximately 40%. However, over 55 years old who look for accommodation experience more than 20%.
Finally, they have one more trouble about language. Nearly 30 percent of 18 to 34 years old have problems with this side while there are more people at 35 to 54 have to come up against with learning the local language. But the percentage of old people have this difficulity is more than others.
In conclusion, old people can solve problems about make friends and find accommodations easiest. But they the have the most trouble in learning new language.
The bar chart below illustrates the problems people usually come up against when they move to other countries to live at many aged.
The first problem is about making friends. People have more difficu...
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LLA mong thầy cô chấm chữa ạ ❤️
Nowadays, there are many reasons environmental pollution. What are causes and solution?
In this day and age, there are multiple causes that lead to environmental problems that are more taxing than ever before, some of them seemingly insoluble. Pollution is an obvious example of this affecting our air, water, and soil.
In my essay, I will find some of the main causes and remedy a situation.
It is obvious that there are numerous reasons for environmental pollution. The first reason is that emissions are released by industry, which lead to air pollution, and have a devastating impact on our atmosphere. Besides, serious pollution can be life-threatening to human life. For example, people suffer from various dangerous diseases such as lung cancer, and heart disease, which have a negative impact on their well-being. Moreover, another reason is deforestation. Other human activities such as the overdevelopment of land the clearing of trees, and deforestation have been shown to cause soil pollution. This contamination in turn affects the natural habitat for many animal species. Especially, endangered species which are on the brink of extinction.
There are several solutions can be recommended to address the urgent problem. First and foremost, the governments regulate the emissions by companies so that they do not exceed the limit amount is the challenging one. In terms of deforestation, the authorities forbade inhabitants to use land illegally and educate the public about the importance of the environment by portraying in multimedia to raise awareness of human
In conclusion, the environment is our home so we join hands to tackle this pressing problem.
Nowadays, there are many reasons environmental pollution. What are causes and solution?
In this day and age, there are multiple causes that lead to environmental problems that are more taxing than eve...
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[WRITING TASK 2] Thầy/Cô sửa bài essay này giúp em, em xin cảm ơn nhiều lắm!
Topic: More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is true that there is a large number of people moving to a metropolis which is known as a place of economy, healthcare, and education development that makes city life become more and more difficult for everyone. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.
In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for the challenge of living in a large city. Firstly, when living in a big city we have to face complicated issues as the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in a small town or rural area. Besides, housing is usually much more expensive, and we have to pay higher prices for food, healthcare, and transportation. Secondly, the street and public transport systems are usually overcrowded which leads us to suffer from intractable problems such as traffic congestion, air pollution, or mental health. Finally, one of the primary reasons for social inequality is high population concentration which contributes to social issues such as high crime and poverty rates, environmental degradation, or a gap between rich and poor.
However, these problems can certainly be improved if governments have reasonable policies. I suppose that they should invest money in the building of affordable or social housing, the cost of living needs to be regulated appropriately. It is necessary for the authorities to enhance the public transport network, and encourage all residents to use sustainable public transportation which helps to reduce both air pollution and traffic jams. In Vietnam, for example, the introduction of eco-friendly buses or motorbikes to curb the air pollution problem. Another measure is that the government should promote economic development by creating more jobs in provincial towns or remote areas to help mitigate the pressure on major cities and balance social equality.
In conclusion, these difficulties will continue to survive in the future unless the government implements a range of measures to enhance a better quality of life for all citizens.
Topic: More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make...
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LLA mong thầy cô chấm chữa cho em ạ
There is no need to go out to see live performance (concert...) because it is better to see them on the TV or Computer screen. Do you agree or díagree?
There is a common belief that it is unnecessary to go outside to go to a live concert because watching it at home on personal screens is much better than seeing staged performances. From my perspective, I partially agree with this statement. In this essay, I will shed light on both sides of the issue
On the one hand, I partly agree that people don’t need to participate in live performances One of the main reasons can be that people aren’t interested in concerts owing to the sky-high cost. Another reason is that home entertainment is more comfortable and economical than attending live concerts. this means that it will be one of the appropriate options for fans who can’t afford to meet the costs instead of buying tickets with prohibitive prices. For example, people can easily watch different types of free live concerts or play on the website.
On the other hand, I disagree that seeing concerts at home on personal technology is better. First and foremost, people can appreciate an enjoyable atmosphere at a crowded concert more than staying at home. Particularly, the lighting, the lively atmosphere, and the emotional audience here can’t feel at home. Besides, this is a unique opportunity for real music fans to get close and interact with well-known singers and personal favorite instrumentalists and bands. For example, people can see them on the stage, dancing, and singing with thousands of fans.
To summarize, whenever watching concerts at home or directly, considering this is a more effective way. I partially agree with this opinion because of the reasons that mentioned above
There is no need to go out to see live performance (concert...) because it is better to see them on the TV or Computer screen. Do you agree or díagree?
There is a common belief that it is unnecessary...
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Em chào thầy cô ạ. Em mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài hộ em ạ
The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph illustrates the average number of people participating in traffic by vehicles (car, bus or train) during the 60-year period.
Overall, it is clear that the figure for car and train witnesses an upward trend while that of bus sees the opposite figure. In addition, car takes the first rank in total number of commuters during the period.
In 1970, the number of people traveling by car was around 5 million, followed by bus and train at over 4 and around 2 million respectively. In the next 30 years, those driving work increased significantly by 2 million whilst people taking part in the rail system rose moderably to 3 million. By contrast, the figure for citizens using the bus had a drop of 0,5 million in 2000.
We can see the data in 2030, the figure for commuters traveling by cars is expected to reach a record high of about 9 million, and that of train users is also predicted to rise, at approximately 7 million. However, the prediction about the data of people participating in buses constantly decreases to 3 million daily.
The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph illustrates the average number of people participating in traf...
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dạ thầy cô chấm và sửa bài này giúp em ạ. yêu cầu đề bài em có để hình ảnh ạ
Healthy food is one of the most crucial factors that play a clear role in human health, so foods that are healthy for your health provide. Foods play an important role in life. When you eat properly and have enough meals, it will help you improve your health. First of all, it is necessary to eat enough meals. Eating three meals a day is advisable to maintain good health, especially breakfast. It provides the body with the necessary energy which enables them to exercise all the activities to the fullest. Secondly, a healthy diet rich in fruits, vegetables, whole grains and low - fat dairy can help to reduce your risk of heart disease by maintaining blood pressure and cholesterol levels. Another, it contains many elements essential for your body. Moreover, eating foods that contain high levels of sugars, salts… should be alleviated, as it can cause obesity and heart disease. Finally, healthy food also improves the digestive system, reducing stress and anxiety. In conclusion, foods provide benefits such as stress reduction, heart disease prevention, and so on. Maintaining healthy eating habits assists in helping us stay healthy.
Healthy food is one of the most crucial factors that play a clear role in human health, so foods that are healthy for your health provide. Foods play an important role in life. When you eat properly a...
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
ĐỀ BÀI:
The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
ANSWER:
The chart illustrates the lowest and highest levels of two air pollutants SO2 and N2O in four different cities, Los Angeles, Calcutta, Beijing and Mexico City in 2000. Overall, Mexico City was contaminated by two mentioned pollutants among four cities.
In Los Angeles, the quantity of SO2 emitted into the atmosphere was the lowest compared to three other cities, however, the proportion of N2O emitted was quite high, around 104 micrograms per m3. With regard to Calcutta, the quantity of SO2 and N2O about minimum and maximum was not much different. The minimum of SO2 was 47 and 59 respectively, while the maximum of N2O was 30 and 52. In Beijing, the maximum of SO2 was very high (100 micrograms per m3), it was twice as much as the maximum of N2O ( 54 micrograms per m3). Finally, Mexico City had a very high proportion in both SO2 and N2O ( the maximum was 200 and 207 micrograms). The minimum of these pollutants also accounted for the highest figures compared to three other cities.
ĐỀ BÀI:
The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariso...
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Foods that are good for your health
Foods that are good for your health
em đang bị bí ý tưởng về bài này í ạ :(((. Em có viết bài này gửi cho GV dạy em chấm mà GV nói em làm bị lạc đề nên mn cho em xin 4 ý tưởng để làm bài này được hong ạ. Em xin cảm ơn ạ
Foods that are good for your health
em đang bị bí ý tưởng về bài này í ạ :(((. Em có viết bài này gửi cho GV dạy em chấm mà GV nói em làm bị lạc đề nên mn cho em xin 4 ý tưởng để làm bài này được hon...
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LLA mong thầy cô giúp em chấm bài ạ
de bài:The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013.
The bar graph indicates statistics on the proportion of alternative power over total renewable sources in 6 nations over a 3-year period from 2010
Overall, the percentage of renewable energy production in Germany has an increasing trend, the USA shows a downward trend over the entire period. In addition, other countries remained unchanged significantly.
In 2010, Germany started at the lowest point at approximately 17%, but then there was an incredible upsurge to 25% in the final years of the period. The proporition of renewable power in the USA was registered at around 18% in 2010, after 1 year, dropping to ( dipped down to )approximately 17% , before there was a dramatic increase to 20% in 2013. However, Chinese figure maintained a steady rise to 14% in 2013 (China had increase its renewable energy supply to a mere 14%) and remained almost stable at its second position
Both France and Spain countries fluctuated between 12% and 14% from 2010 to 2013(France and Spaain follwed similar trajectories over the period surveyed), with almost the same share of 12% at the start.the figure for India began the time period at nearly 17,5%, then it showed a fall and hit the lowest point at just over 15% in 2011, and back up to around 18%.
de bài:The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013.
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writing task 2
Nowadays, it is reported that many individuals tend to spend their resting time less actively than they used to in the previous period as a result of developing social networks as well as other online entertaining activities and the more polluted air condition of the environment. I believe that people these days do let their pace of life follow this state.
As I expressed from the beginning, the development of networks in our society and online entertainment are supposed to be the most potential reasons that keep humankind out of contact with others personally. For instance, with solely an internet-connected device, men and women can proactively communicate with others without the limitation of distance and even the difference in culture and language. They can get into an entirely new relationship that do not need to go outside. They prefer perching on the back of the sofa, watching their favorite programs, and playing their beloved games on the net than hanging out after a hard-woring day.
Another root for my opinion is that people in the past loved going outside because of the tree-covering landscape which is one of the most effective therapy in nature. They can be healed and recovered both physically and mentally by the fresh atmosphere even in the place of their house. Nevertheless, with the lower covering density of trees, as a consequence of the forest's overexploitation and cutting down trees for more construction areas, the condition of air in particular and the environment in general is being threatened which contributes as a reason making people spend their free time inactively.
For the reason mentioned above, I believe that human beings in modern times primarily spend their spare time inactively.
Nowadays, it is reported that many individuals tend to spend their resting time less actively than they used to in the previous period as a result of developing social networks as well as other online...
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The bar chart below gives a breakdown of different types of families who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Overall, it is evident that more than one-tenth of Australian families were living in poverty in 1999, approximately 1.8 million in total, and sole parent possessed the highest number of destitute families.
As the data indicated, only 6% single aged person and 4% aged couple lived in poverty in 1999, contrastingly, 19% single with no children were not affluent. It clearly illustrated that elder Australians were economically stronger than their younger counterparts. In addition, Australian couple were generally better off, with the lower level of poverty for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). This type of family had the largest number of poverty household, though, their ratio was lower than other poor family. Finally, the figure of sole parents who were poor in 1999 were 232,000 in number and their poverty ratio was 21%, the highest.
The bar chart below gives a breakdown of different types of families who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Overall, it is evident that more than one-tenth of Australian families were livin...
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The bar graph delineates a comparison of the monetary investments made by five distinct organization in 4 different categories , namely, machinery , building , staff training , research .
It is evident that building is the most funded for organizations A,D, and E . Besides, organization C investes the most money for machinery ,while machinery is the lowest funding for organization B.
Organizations A,D and E spent the biggest proportion of their investment on building , at approximately 1,5 and both 1 billion euros respectively . Staff training is the second investment of both organizations A and E , at 1,2 billion euros and 0,9 billion euros .With regard to research , organizations d and E are the smallest investor in research only with 0,6 and 0,7 billion euros respectively .
In term of staff training , it is the biggest investment of organization B with 1,8 billion euros , while organization only spent around 0,8 billion euros . When it comes to machinery , organization B is the lowest investor . In contrast , the investment of organization c provide 1,3 billion euros for this category
The bar graph delineates a comparison of the monetary investments made by five distinct organization in 4 different categories , namely, machinery , building , staff training , research .
It is evid...
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The two bar graphs illustrate how many male and female students aged 14 to 16 learned another modern language in an English-speaking country, as well as the proportion of the three most commonly studied languages, in 1984 and 2007.
Overall, although decreases were seen in the share of students studying a new foreign language in both genders, that of females was consistently higher than their male counterparts. Additionally, the figures for students learning French and German experienced a downward trend, with the dominance of the former in both years, while the opposite was true for Spanish.
Regarding gender composition, in 1984, nearly half of the 14-to-16-year-old female students learned a foreign language, about 20% higher than that of males. However, this gap had narrowed by 2007, with just over one-third of girls and one-fifth of boys doing so.
Concerning the top three foreign languages studied, in 1984, just over half of the students studied French, much higher than the figures for German and Spanish of 20% and roughly 5%, respectively. In 2007, the share of students learning French halved, whereas that of German fell slightly to 15%. Conversely, despite Spanish almost doubling, it remained the least popularly studied language.
The two bar graphs illustrate how many male and female students aged 14 to 16 learned another modern language in an English-speaking country, as well as the proportion of the three most commonly studi...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graphs compare how Australians across five age groups used the Internet for three different activities in 2010 and 2011.
Overall, emailing was the most commonly used online activity, with it and paying bills sharing the same pattern of user rate, while the use of social media experienced a decrease with age.
Regarding usage, around three-quarters of Australian people used the Internet for email communication, followed by respective figures of 50% for online transactions and 45% for social media.
Concerning the distribution by age, the proportions of people in Australia paying bills and emailing online were comparable, with the majority of users being the middle-aged and oldest groups (about 80% each), followed closely by 70% of the 60-to-65-year-olds, and the minority of the 18-to-25 and 26-to-40 age cohorts (at 60% and 65%, respectively). However, the figures for using social media saw a different pattern of a decline with age, in which almost everyone in the youngest group did so on the Internet, doubling that of the oldest band (approximately 45%), which was the lowest.
The bar graphs compare how Australians across five age groups used the Internet for three different activities in 2010 and 2011.
Overall, emailing was the most commonly used online activity, with...
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