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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Writing task 1, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Đề bài:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Bài viết:
The graph given provides the proper information about how old people from both genders retired on average in six nations in the year 2003.
Overall, elderly men and women in Korea had the highest retirement ages while the opposite was true for France, which is much lower than the whole examined countries. Interestingly, Japan and Italy shared the same average ages for the male and female workers who retired in 2003.
Stood at 57 years and 4 months for men and 56 years and 9 months for women that entire on average, France held the shortest times that people spent for work, which is about 7 years earlier than men and women in Australia. Taking the third lowest place, males in the United States retired at moderately 65 years and 6 months, whereas it was 64 years and 2 months for females.
In terms of the three countries that had the highest average retirement age, people all retired after the age of 66. In Japan and Italy, it was 67 years and 4 months for men and 66 years and 9 months for women, which was 1 year and 4 months and 5 months earlier than that of male and female Korean respectively.
Đề bài:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003.
Summarise the information by selecting and r...
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Writing task 2-em mong được thầy cô chấm và sửa chữa ạ.Em cảm ơn ạ
Đề bài: Some people think that good planning is the key factor for success in life. Others think that there are more important factors that lead to success (hard work, luck). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are those who opine that wise arrangement skill is of utmost importance to be successful in life.However, others claim that diligence and fortune are more vital.This essay will discuss both views and the rationales why I favor the latter.
On the one hand, effective plans offer individuals to make timely adjustment and suitable allocation of resources.Regarding the former advantage, wise plans can help people identify specific goals and steps that need to be followed, hence they can fulfill singular aims.By doing small part of target, they could predict foreseeable scenarios to minimize potential risks and recognize their weaknesses and work on them to thrive in their career path.Additionally, thanks to make plans in detailed, individuals could reasonably allocate resources that they current have.To give hypothetical example, If one desires to open small restaurant, by planning for sufficient amount of money needed as well him expert knowledge and work experience he can decide clients group that he want and consistent business premises.
On the other hand, opponents who advocate other criteria such as diligence and fortune also share equal importance.To begin with, one who is assiduous alway highly concentrate in work and work with high intensity, hence they are more likely to gain their own success.In terms of fortunate factor, seize the opportunity help people have apportune chances to develop career.For practical instance, All Day Coffee cafe suddenly became renowned after the surprise visit of US secretary Antony Blinken.Many youngs go there to savor aromatic flavor of staples though it extremely familiar.
In conclusion,although both sides of the argument have their own merits, I believe industriousness and luck can have a more tangible effect on each individual’s success.
Đề bài: Some people think that good planning is the key factor for success in life. Others think that there are more important factors that lead to success (hard work, luck). Discuss both views and gi...
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The graph describes the number of national foreign to three different places in a European country in 20 years, starting from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the country witnessed foreigners who went to the coast, the mountains and the lakes were the highest. Moreover, the coast had a large number of national visitors going from 1987 to 2007, and the lowest was in the lakes.
In 1987, the coast welcomed around 40 thousand visitors, but in 1992 it just decreased to 37 thousand foreigners, it recovered rapidly to approximately in the final year in 2007. Besides, 20 was the number of national visitors going to the mountains in 1987, which rose moderately to 30 thousand in 2002. Subsequently, it documented a period until 2002, followed by a rise of nearly 4000 in 2007.
Finally, starting at the lowest result of 10000 in the beginning, the number of visitors going to the lakes surged dramatically to 75000 in 2002 before decreasing back to nearly of 50000 in 2007.
The graph describes the number of national foreign to three different places in a European country in 20 years, starting from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the country witnessed foreigners...
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Đây là bài IELTS writing task 2 của em. Mong được thày cô chấm chữa ạ.
In some countries, the government encourages businesses and corporations to move from major cities to regional areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
There has been a trend that many companies encouraged by the government repositioned from bustling cities to rural areas. There are a number of advantages and disadvantages that impact directly on these companies and business organizations.
On the one hand, the clear advantage of the movement of companies from urban to rural areas is that it may reduce the costs of products. This is because the costs of living in regional areas are lower than its from big cities, therefore, businesses are offered low-priced items for production lines. As a result, huge profits are created by these businesses thanks to reasonable prices. For instance, rural areas are often good for cultivation such as vegetable growing, so some companies producing healthy food may hold both cheap price and good quality materials. In contrast, some companies in big cities had to bear higher costs and low quality products because of shipping time and costs.
On the other hand, one downside of moving companies and corporations from inner-city to countryside is that it limits company’s approach with potential customers. The reason is because most companies produce large quantities of products for populated areas, so product standards may be based on the habits and hobbies of people living in large cities. Therefore, moving away from big cities leads to the difficulty in customer’s preference and reduces the popularity of products. For example, if a fashion company moves away from the city market, they can not catch the latest trends about fashion and compete with other fashion companies that are from big cities.
In short, the overall impacts on businesses and corporations can clearly consider both negative and positive development.
In some countries, the government encourages businesses and corporations to move from major cities to regional areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
As language such as English, Spanish and Madarin become more widely spoken, there is a concern that many minority languages may disappear. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.
What is your view of this practice?
Bài làm:
English, Spanish, and Mandarin are commonly taught worldwide, courtesy of their origin country's prosperity. Minority languages are slowly disappearing simultaneously with the widespread of these three languages. As the world becomes more integrated, some argue that a lingua franca assists cross-cultural communication, others, however, state that a language is more than just a communication means.
On one hand, a language represents the history, culture, and progress of a nation. In France, the word "river" has masculine and feminine prefixes whereas in Vietnamese poetry, rivers are mostly associated with femininity. The difference occurs because of the cultural perspective towards the subject which formed through a long-existing history of the country. Indian loanwords from English is evidence that it was once dominated by the British Empire. With the gradual vanishing of minority languages, actions need to be taken to avoid loss of cultural heritage.
On the other hand, admittedly, throughout the history of humanity, a number of languages have died out due to their countries' collapse. Once widely spoken language, such as Latin, has disappear almost completely. To some extent, the process of replacing, reinforcing and loss of a language is inevitable. Furthermore, speakers of minority languages are under pressure to speak dominant languages. Therefore, by having a common language, individuals can reduce the disadvantages when communicating with people from different regions, especially when the integration process is unavoidable.
To conclude, although it is desirable for a language to be preserved, the eliminating process is inevitable. By implementing the appropriate methods, the loss will be minimized and, to some certain degree, benefits society.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
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Đăng ký tham gia lớp học giải đáp miễn phí
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Học viên sẽ phải điền bản đăng ký để gửi trước các câu hỏi cần giáo viên giải đáp.
Giáo viên Huyền sẽ giải đáp trực tuyến vào khung thời gian từ 8 giờ tối đến 9 giờ tối các thứ 2 hàng tuần.
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Giáo viên Trang sẽ giải đáp trực tuyến vào khung thời gian từ 2 giờ chiều đến 3 giờ chiều các thứ 4 hàng tuần.
Đăng ký tham gia lớp học giải đáp trực tuyến của giáo viên Trang từ 2 giờ chiều đến 3 giờ chiều thứ 4:
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Đăng ký tham gia lớp học giải đáp trực tuyến của giáo viên Mai từ 7 giờ tối đến 8 giờ tối thứ 6:
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Writing Task 1: Table- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**The table shows the average length of video advertisements on the Internet and the average length of time viewers spend watching them**
Bài làm:
The table illustrates the mean time consumers spend on commercials online, as well as the average duration of these commercials.
Overall, it can be seen that on average, 10,7 seconds were spent on advertisements, half of the length of the average advertisement (22,4 seconds).
Services and products that require extravagant spending, listed as Automotive and Financial services, have the highest commercial duration of above 20 seconds. However, despite its affordability, Government advertisements are recorded for the highest duration of 45.8 seconds, twice as many as the average length. Over 15 seconds were spent watching these advertisements.
More affordable products, such as Travel, Home furnishing, Consumer electronics, Pharmaceuticals, and Clothing, on the other hand, have relatively shorter advertisement duration of between 14.6 seconds to 18 seconds. These advertisements typically receive nearly 50% of view time from the consumers, except Travel and Home furnishing commercials.
It is also interesting to note that, although Retails has 21-second advertisements on average, they can only capture viewers' attention for the first four seconds.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
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Nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài Task 1. Em cảm ơn.
The drawing gives information about how pineapples are cultivated and processed into different kinds of products.
Overall, there are two main stages in the production of pineapples, the process of planting pineapples and how which are proceeded into a beverage, a canned food and exported goods. In addition, it can be seen that this diagram involves both natural and man-made elements.
In terms of the farming process, pineapples are grown in a spacing of 26cm between each plant and the temperature is about between 28 and 30 degrees Celsius. After seven months, ethylene is introduced into the plants, after which they continue to grow in a five month period until being ready for harvest. To reach full maturity, pineapples should reach 30 cm in height and 2 kg in weight.
Regarding the production process, harvested pineapples are washed with water prior to classifying into different sizes. Subsequently, the smallest and medium-size fruits are processed to remove leaves and outer rind. While the former pineapples are then put into an extractor to produce juice, the latter are cut into slices or smaller chunks, both of which are then canned. In contrast, the larger pineapples are left uncut and simply coated in wax, then placed in a crate before being exported overseas.
The drawing gives information about how pineapples are cultivated and processed into different kinds of products.
Overall, there are two main stages in the production of pineapples, the process of pla...
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Nhờ cô chấm giúp em bài task 2 bên dưới. em cảm ơn.
If old people are no longer physically, mentally or financially able to look after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that young family members should legally look after for elderly people who are no longer physically, mentally or financially capable of caring for themselves.From my point of view, I partially disagree with the legitimately compulsory responsibilities of taking care of the elders by only the youth.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why young individuals should support their old relatives. First and foremost, this is a tradition which is deeply rooted in cultural norms, particularly the concept of filial piety. In fact, in Asian societies, there exists a strong belief that it is the moral duty of children to care for their aging parents. This highlights the profound respect and gratitude children own to their parents. Second, thanks to receiving support from their offspring, the emotional well-being of elderly individuals would be enhanced. Similarly, old people tend to feel lonely, so they would like to have an interaction with their own family members instead of using caring services.
On the other hand, from my perspective, I suppose that the responsibility of looking after old individuals should not solely depend on the youth. The first reason is that there is a compulsory contribution of taxes by resident's income. Therefore, elderly inhabitants should receive privileges after retirement such as pension or accommodation supplying services from the authorities. Another reason is that in some cases, there are parents who horribly mistreat their children, which is unfair to the children to have to care for their parents in these situations. Furthermore, each family has a different circumstance, so it is not effective to introduce legislation appropriate for all. In fact, there are some young individuals just able to care for themselves because of insufficient financial capacity. Consequently, imposing a law of looking after old people by the government may put a huge financial burden on these young people.
In conclusion, I believe that family traditions and cultural values about taking care of the elderly should be preserved. However, imposing it as a mandatory law is unreasonable because it should be adjusted according to each family's circumstances, and the state also has a part of responsibility to ensure the lives of the elderly.
If old people are no longer physically, mentally or financially able to look after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree or...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table illustrates changes in demographic expansion, average fertility rate, and expected longevity at birth in nations stratified into three distinct levels of income for the years 2000 and 2004.
Overall, there was an inverse relationship between the income levels and both the demographics and average birth per woman, along with an incremental rise in the anticipated years of life across three national categories.
Regarding demographic growth, both countries with high and low income saw decreases, with a greater extent for the latter, from 0.8% and 2%, respectively in the previous year to 0.7% and 1.8%, in that order in the subsequent year. Despite such changes, these countries remained the lowest and the highest growth in population. Conversely, middle-income countries experienced stabilisation at 0.9% over the period.
Concerning fertility rates, the figure for high-income countries remained the lowest and unchanged at 1.7 children per woman, compared to those for the middle- and low-level ones, witnessing the same decline level of 0.1, from 2.2 and 3.9 in 2002 and 2.1 and 3.8 in 2004.
As for life expectancy, in 2002, the high-income group were expected to live for the longest, up to 78 years at birth, while their low-income counterparts were the opposite (maximum 58 years), and 69 years for the middle-income ones. In the next 2 years, individuals in all three national divisions were anticipated to live nearly 1 year longer from birth, with the respective figures being approximately 79, 70, and 59 years.
The table illustrates changes in demographic expansion, average fertility rate, and expected longevity at birth in nations stratified into three distinct levels of income for the years 2000 and 2004....
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar chart illustrates the American household numbers of five different annual income ranges in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall, the lowest number of households was within the $75000-$99999 bracket in all the three years examined, while that of the highest income group generally dominated and changed the most over the course.
Regarding households earning no more than $49999 per year, the quantity of those making less than $25000 per year was consistently lower than that of the $25000-$49999 cohort over the timeframe. Specifically, in 2007, the former accounted for a quarter billion households, about 2 million lower than the latter, both then increased to 29 and 30 million, respectively in 2011, before decreasing to 28 and 29 million, in that order in 2015.
Concerning the two next income bands, while the number of families earning $50000-$74999 annually stabilised at just over one-fifth billion over the period, that of the $75000-$99999 group fell minorly from just below 15 million in the first year to 14 million in the middle year and recovered to 15 million in the last year.
As for the range exceeding $100000, almost 30 million families fell within this range in 2007, which was the highest, with a subsequent marginal decline to approximately 28 million over the next 4 years, and peaked at roughly 33 million in 2011, surpassing its initial level to remain the highest group.
The bar chart illustrates the American household numbers of five different annual income ranges in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall, the lowest number of households was within the $75000-$99999 bracke...
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài giúp em ạ
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
ANSWER:
In some countries, the number of people becoming overweight has increased and their health conditions and fitness level are declining. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons why people are fat, weak physical condition, and the solutions for these problems.
The reason is that a lot of people consume too much fast food. Most foreigners in some countries such as America, France, Canada are overweight because these are the countries that consume the most fast food in the world. Fast food contains fat and sugar so that they will cause obesity. Moreover, people do not work out regularly because of not having much time, so energy is not released, fat accumulates in the body for a long time and as a result, people's health will be affected. Aside from that, not getting enough sleep and enduring a lot of pressure is one of the factors that cause obesity, stress hormones release and that will increase appetite and weight gain.
There are many ways to solve these problems. One of them is that people should have a suitable diet. For example, they need to eat more vegetables and fruits, and avoid consuming too much fat or sugar. In addition, try to have exercises at least 2 times a week, do not stay up late and avoid pressure to ensure good health and fitness.
To sum up, many people nowadays have problems about their bodies and health conditions because of bad habits. These problems will be solved if they change their unhealthy lifestyles and therefore their health is improved.
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
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Thầy cô chấm sửa dùm em với ạ em cảm ơn ạ
The pie charts compared the figure of hotel guests who described its customer service as exeffent from 2005 to 2010. permistic
Overall. The proportion of optimistic comments surged during 5 years By contrast, There was a plummet in permistic remarks between 2005 and 2010
The percentage of positive rate increase tremendously from 2005 to 2010. The excellent comment and good comment contributed to 28% in 2010 which is rougly sixfold as high as the figure in 2005 about 5%. Moreover, the good rate also showed the enormous growth in 2010!accounted for 39% double in 2005 made up 14%. However, the satisfactory comments slumped in 2010 represent 17% that was twofold as low as in 2005 by 45%.
Likewise, There was a dramatic decline of positive comments between 2005 and 2018. The poor decrease in 2010 made up 12% which was halve the figure in 2005. Similarly, 2010 experienced an enormous went down in the precentage of very poor by 4% that was as threefold as low as in 2005
The pie charts compared the figure of hotel guests who described its customer service as exeffent from 2005 to 2010. permistic
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mong thầy cô chấm bài writing task 2 của em ạ
Essay prompt: Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
n the digital era, there is a fairly common trend that advertising is gradually becoming popular in our lives. Consumers are captivated by advertisements and ultimately decide to spend money on them, which leads us to progressively purchase unnecessary items. I quite disagree with the above opinion and think that it really still comes from the needs of the people.
Since advertising is growing, it might be a useful tool for facilitating users' easier and more engaging access to recently introduced items. It is undeniable that sometimes clients will be attracted by popular trends and then purchase products that are not really necessary. For example, phone companies still release new phone models which are praised for being more modern and stylish. As a result, there are many customers' phones that still work very well but are replaced by iPhone 15 and 16. This explains the increase in annual sales of big businesses such as Samsung and Apple.
On the other hand, I believe that there are numerous reasons for this purchasing, not only for advertising alone. New versions of the product probably still provide convenient and truly necessary features for many people, so they decide to buy them. Moreover, there are many people who decide to buy because the price is more affordable than before. A typical example is that e-commerce platforms like Shopee or Lazada often have promotional programs with product discounts on holidays and anniversaries.
In conclusion, it is certain that advertising has effective strategies to attract buyers, but I still believe that people will not spend money on things they do not need to own.
Essay prompt: Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
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dạ em chào thầy cô, mong thầy cô nhận xét và chấm chữa bài giúp em ạ. em tự học ielts nên writing khá vất, mong được thầy cô giúp đỡ ạ
Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems.
What are the problems? What could be done to solve those problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a common problem among traffic participants including bikers and car users when these two users use a joint lane. This issue can be attributed to many reasons, and it can be solved by the implementation of these following measures.
Using the same road might cause traffic participants a range of issues. The leading cause of the problem can be associated with the limited road space, which cause the traffic congestion. Roads are often not wide enough to accommodate both cyclists and car users; therefore, vehicle users are inclined to encroaching on the other side of the road. As a result, it would cause accident because of the one who suddenly change the route without giving signs for the left users. As both cyclists and drivers cannot anticipate each other’s movements, miscommunication and unpredictability can easily happened, which later lead to conflicts, and even worse, accidents for both of them. Another problem may occur between drivers and bikers when sharing the same road is the safety risks due to speed differences. Cars move significantly fast, whereas bicycle users move so slow that may create a high risk of accidents for them. Many situations where the bike users got pressed by the drivers; as a result, they fall off their bikes and hit the ground. Therefore, it is essential to ensure safety on shared roads for both cyclist and drivers.
However, this issue could be resolved by adopting several solutions. First, congestion happens due to inade road space for traffic participants; therefore, the government should develop dedicated bike land for cyclists. By doing so, they will have their own space to move around, which may ease the congestion.
For instance, cities like Copenhagen has already provided cyclists with separate lane, which reduces traffic bottlenecks considerably. Furthermore, in order to resolve issues occured due to the differences in speed, the government should implement speed regulations zone. With areas that are frequented by both cyclist and drivers, they could enforce speed limits in there to lower the risk of accidents. Thus, slower speeds can ensure safer coexistence between drivers and cyclists.
In conclusion, if sharing road space cause problems for both car users and cyclists, then measurements should be taken by both individuals and government to resolve this issue.
Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems.
What are the problems? What could be done to solve those problems?
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Writing task 1, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Đề bài: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Bài viết:
The bar chart given compares seven nations based on the yearly earnings of doctors and other workers in the year 2004.
Overall, both doctors and other workers in the US were paid the highest in the examined year and this country also saw the biggest difference in salaries of doctors and others. Additionally, there was always a gap between how much doctors get paid for a year and other workers in all nations at about two times.
Taking the lead in 2004, the US's doctors earned 120 thousand USD a year, which was almost double other nations, which just accounted for around 50 to 70 thousand USD annually. Similarly, other workers in the US also got about 45 thousand USD yearly, which was the highest in this category. The second and third places in this all-time list were Switzerland and France, these two countries shared the same amount of money that doctors were paid in 2004, which stood at 70 thousand USD. While the former had 40 thousand USD for other workers, that for the latter comprised 40 thousand USD.
Turning to the Czech Republic, Germany, and Italy, these regions had similar annual wages for doctors and other workers. Doctors earned about 63, 62, and 60 thousand USD respectively whereas other workers all just got about 20 thousand USD per year. Although the yearly wages of doctors in Finland were the lowest, just 50 thousand USD, they had higher pay for other workers, at about 24 thousand USD in 2004.
Đề bài: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
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Mong thầy cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER:
The diagrams illustrate the process of making cement and how cement is used for producing concrete. Overall, there are many stages to make cement, then cement and some materials with certain percentages will be mixed together to produce concrete.
In the production of cement, firstly, limestone and clay are mixed and crushed to make the powder. The mixer of these will go to a rotating heater and then they are grinded in the grinder, finally cement is completely produced and packed in bags.
According to concrete, in the production of concrete, there are some materials which are mixed together, including cement (15%), water (10%), sand (25%), and the material which accounts for the largest proportion is grave (small stones) with 50%. These materials will be mixed in a machine and the machine will rotate in a certain direction, from which the production of concrete is completed.
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates how many tonnes of wheat, barley, rice, and other grains were available in India, the US, and China in 2001.
Overall, India had the lowest yield across all types of grains, while the opposite was true for the US, except for rice where China had the highest amount.
Regarding the US and China, 3.5 tonnes of wheat was harvested in the former, 1 tonne higher than the latter. Moreover, this gap was slightly narrowed in the quantity of barley, with 7 tonnes in the US and 6.5 tonnes in China. Conversely, China produced more rice than the US, with 6 tonnes and 5 tonnes, respectively. Meanwhile, these two countries dominated and shared comparable figures for other categories of grains, at 9 tonnes each.
Concerning India, it had the poorest agriculture among the three countries examined, ranging from the lowest of only 1 tonne of rice to the highest of only just below 2 tonnes of other grains.
The bar graph illustrates how many tonnes of wheat, barley, rice, and other grains were available in India, the US, and China in 2001.
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Nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài task 2 . em cảm ơn
Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an ongoing debate about whether the primary determinant of success in achieving goals is luck. Although I believe that luck is one of the factors attributed to people’s achievements, I firmly disagree with this statement since there are other elements that are much more significant.
Admittedly, fortune plays an essential part in contributing to the success of a person. First, a successful business is often considered a matter of luck. For instance, individuals who start business in unexpected situations such as economic depression and Covid-19 pandemic must bear a huge amount of losses or even close their business. In contrast, those who operate their business at the right time with the right people easily achieve their targets. Second, whether achieving good academic results is sometimes thanks to luck. For example, students may pass an exam with high scores if they have previously prepared for similar topics. Another example is that high scores on multiple-choice exams can be achieved through random selection of correct choices rather than possessing knowledge of the answers.
Nevertheless, I suppose that there are two important factors that mostly affect people's achievements. First and foremost, substantial effort is necessary to accomplish significant achievements. In fact, unless students strive for their academic pursuits, they will not achieve good results in the long run based solely on luckiness. Secondly, the attainment of goals requires a high level of determination. In other words, Individuals need to spend a large amount of time to enlarge their knowledge so that they will have a good qualification as well as necessary skills. As a result, they will have a decent job since they make an effort and dedication for a long time.
In conclusion, the influence of luck on success cannot be dismissed. However, I contend that hard work and patience hold greater importance in the pursuit of goals.
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Writing task 2-Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa.Em cảm ơn ạa
Đề bài:The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern age, it is true that the increasing prevalence of obesity is put pressure on the health care systems as they contend with associated health challenges.Several individuals advocate that adding physical education classes in school curricula as an effective solution to address this issue.in my opinion, I wholeheartedly agree with this viewpoint and my rationales will be explained in this essay.
By incorporating more sports classes into the curriculum as well as encouraging extracurricular sports activities, they will undoubtedly become fitter, enthusiastic and more active.Firstly, physical education promote a healthy lifestyle from a young age by instilling habits of doing physical exercise regularly.The person who participating in outdoor activity early are more likely to continue these practices into adulthood, thus reducing the risk of obesity and other related health issues.Secondly,by providing insight knowledge with align practice , physical education not only a holistic health by Increasing muscle density, blood circulation and endurance but also enhancing brain function.Sciencetifically,this is explained because exercises help stimulate protein production in the body, which considered as a factor that stimulates the growth of nerve cells and enhances cognition.
Admittedly, If physical education is not introduced in school curricula, there are various detrimental effects that would occur and seriously influence numerous aspects.First and foremost, many students will spend time for playing video game or explore virtual world instead of doing exercise, beyond encountered with asthenia, they can also easily suffer from eye diseases and psychological disorders such as nearsightedness and depression.Secondly, the health system will also face many complex problems such as lack of human resources and running out of medicine.The increase in patients means that the number of doctors and drugs must increase to care for patients, while facilities and skilled doctors in most countries cannot serve the demand.
In conclusion, although teachers need a constant effort to make students can absorb knowledge and create the habit of playing sports, I totally believe that it will brings a long-term benefit for students
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