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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ
The graphs illustrate students' reasons for choosing to study at a specific UK university between 1987 and 2007.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of students going to the university because of suitable degree courses and being close to students’ parents, while the opposite trend can be seen in the other remaining groups. Additionally, throughout the years given, appropriate majors remained the primary reason for most students opting for this school.
To commence with, the percentage of people attending this university due to suitable courses of study started at 35% in 1987, after which it experienced a marginal rise of 2% after 20 years. A similar trend, but to a greater extent, was true for the figure for those pursuing the study at the university examined because of parental- related reasons, which grew significantly from 10% in 1987 to 22% in 2007.
By contrast, 21% students said that quality of resources was the reason why they chose the given university at the beginning of the period, with a subsequent moderate decline to 17% at the end of the period. Moreover, sporting and social pursuits and quality of teaching were the choices, generally sharing the equivalent number of students influenced in both years examined, standing at 19% and 15% in 1987, ending at 6% and 8% in 2007 respectively, after undergoing an around two times drop within 20 years.
The graphs illustrate students' reasons for choosing to study at a specific UK university between 1987 and 2007.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of students going to the university b...
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Writing task 2. Thầy cô sửa bài giúp em.
Nowadays, technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example) through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantage of this the development outweigh the disadvantages?
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In the present era, humans are being tracked by high-quality digital equipment. In many situations, some individuals are not aware of this. In my point of view, these improvements may have some downsides however I strongly believe they have more positive impacts.
First of all, technology updates monitoring systems by boosting camera systems therefore, they can survive a lot of human’s life. By installing these hidden cameras in public places, they give a helping hand to detectives and polices in order to catch robbers and murders by replaying the recorded videos from crime scenes and easily catch thieves. For instance, For instance, in South Korea, there is the rule to install CCTV in every public location like streets, cafes, shopping malls which they put a key to press when a person feels in danger and alert the area’s police station, as can be seen, this invention makes South Korea the top ten safest place in the world.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks which we seriously pay attention. Firstly, governments must respect individual's privacy. Whenever they monitored people, it can reveal some secret information, more specifically for political individuals, about people's lifestyles. It can be fueled by the misuse and abuse of people's secrets. As result countries will be faced with international issues if some information such as political's communications reveal. Additionally, Sensitive documents and personal information are uploaded on the internet such as bank records, credit, and debit card details, property documents, personal photos, and videos, so on. These can be easily accessed by hackers and criminals who misuse them by blackmailing their targets for money extortion.
To sum up, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages as constant surveillance provides a safety net. There is also the danger of confidential information being leaked by cybercriminals.
Nowadays, technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example) through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored ar...
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Dạ thầy cô sửa chữa giúp em ạ. Write a 300-word essay about the following topic: What is your biggest fear? Does it bring you more advantages or disadvantages?
My biggest fear is social interactions. It has become an ever-present obstacle in my daily life, hindering my ability forge meaningful connection. When I try to do some ways which can lead to improved communication skills and increased confidence, I also have benificial experiences so I believe that the advantages of overcoming my fear outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, fear of social interaction can have some disadvantages. It may lead to feelings of isolation and loneliness, as avoiding social situations can limit opportunites for meaningful connections with others. This fear also might contribute to low self-esteem and a lack of confidence in social settings.
On the other hand, improved social skills enable me to network effectively, opening doors to potential career opportunities and collaborations. For example, I have joined a club at university when I started studying at here. It allows me to meet new friends from diverse backgrounds, it also expand my network of contacts. Furthermore, overcoming my fear can also help boost my confidence in public speaking situations, like giving presentation or speaking in front of a group. Moreover, facing fears head-on helps me foster personal growth by pushing myself out of my comfort zone. For instance, my mindset plays a crucial role so I take proactive steps towards gradually that feels right for me.
In conclusion, by actively working on improving my social interaction skills, I become more comfortable interacing with people and have experience more advantages than disadvantages.
My biggest fear is social interactions. It has become an ever-present obstacle in my daily life, hindering my ability forge meaningful connection. When I try to do some ways which can lead to improved...
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writing task 2
A growing number of individuals today express concern over the equality of male and female students in universities in terms of each subject. To my knowledge, I strongly agree that balanced numbers of students with both genders in every subject should be acquired because of its powerfully effective factors during student's learning process.
The gender balance in educational environment resulting from clever policies can create positivity and mutual respect not only among students but also among lecturers. That is because there is no existence of a sex barrier compared this class to another one which used to be a hard-solving problem. For example, competing in physical subjects could be a huge advantage of a class that contains many male students compared to the less ones while having outstanding numbers of female student during art competitions could provide favorable position. Hence, shutting down unbalance of numbers of male and female students could be the path to bring the equity and fairness.
Furthermore, there is a meaningful message through applying equility of the sexes in every subject that universities can convey. Students can gain deeply insight and their own points of view in the future. Regarding there is no unequality in school environment that can truely empower them about a thought they do everything in this life whatever your gender is.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that blurring the gender boudary of students in every subject should be accepted widely.
A growing number of individuals today express concern over the equality of male and female students in universities in terms of each subject. To my knowledge, I strongly agree that balanced numbers of...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The line graph illustrates the difference between the mean number of people visiting a museum in the UK in summer and winter in 2003.
Overall, more visitors came to the museum in summer than in winter, with their peak time at midday in both seasons. Additionally, the museum closed earlier during the cold season.
In summer, visitor numbers surged between 9 a.m. and 12 p.m., peaking at about 1500 at noon. Subsequently, the attendance rate decreased gradually during the day by nearly half at 4 p.m. before falling steadily towards 6 p.m.
In winter, the museum experienced a relatively similar pattern in the quantities of visitors, albeit to a much lesser extent, generally increasing to 400 visitors at 10 a.m. and reaching the highest point at 600 in the middle of the day, despite a minor decline between 10 and 11 a.m., followed by a steady fall until the closing hour at 3 p.m.
The line graph illustrates the difference between the mean number of people visiting a museum in the UK in summer and winter in 2003.
Overall, more visitors came to the museum in summer than in win...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of male and female workers in the UK based on the age of their youngest dependent child in 2008.
Overall, the majority of those in the employment force were men who already had dependent offspring, while the lowest proportion of their female counterparts had the youngest child relying on them aged up to 5. Additionally, the rates of employed females increased accordingly with the age of their youngest dependent progeny.
Regarding males, the figures for those having the youngest child who was a minor were comparable and dominated at 90%, except for the smallest group of those who did not have any children, accounting for about three-quarters.
Concerning females, the gap between them and men in the labour force narrowed as their youngest child aged, from the lowest rate at nearly 60% of the under-5-year-olds to the highest at 80% aged 16 to 18. Moreover, the share of women who had a job but no children was comparable with that of the opposite gender.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of male and female workers in the UK based on the age of their youngest dependent child in 2008.
Overall, the majority of those in the employment force wer...
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Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ . In some countries, students live with their family while studying at a university. In other countries, students attend university in another city. Do you think the advantages of living away from family home while attending university outweigh the disadvantages?
In some nations , students live with their familiy during their university years while in other nations , students move away from their family for their education.From my perspective , despite presenting several certain drawbacks , advantages of living away from home are more significant to individuals.
On the one hand , people who being away from their family are likely to endure mental health issues.Physical distance discourages them from confiding their troubles with their families and loved ones. They tend to keep their difficulties without sharing with others to just ease their families’worries while loved ones at home remaind unaware.This can get worse in case of introverted person who tend to distance themself from new friends. Consequently, they encounter the feelings of homesickness and depression that negative impact on academic results in university.
Nevertheless , the benefits of living independently while attending university are more substainable. To begin with , living far away from their family helps foster personal growth that allows individuals to develop independence , self-reliance and personal responsibility .They learn to develop valuable life skills , including manage finances , compeleting household responsibilities such as cooking or laudry , organizing their time effectively without any family’s support.These skills are necessary for their future professional and personal lives. Moreover , living apart from family exposes students to new social circles and cultural experiences , helping to broaden their horizons and enhance their understanding and appreciation of the world around them.Communicating with new friends from diverse backgrounds and broadening social networks helps enhance communication skills and acquire new valuable experiences , highlighting the positive aspects of living idependently during their university years.
In conclusion , although living away from family can lead to homesickness and mental health problems , I totally believe that this trend brings more benefits for students.
In some nations , students live with their familiy during their university years while in other nations , students move away from their family for their education.From my perspective , despite present...
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
What children do in their leisure time have
transmitted since technical advances.
The writer of this essay believe that the drawbacks
of health issues and distracting from study
greatly outweigh the entertainment needs.
One of the focal disadvantages of spending
free time using technology would impact
directly on children’s health. In other words, the children would have little to no time directly
on children's heath. In other words, the children
would have little to no time focus on a healthy diet then easily leading to obesity
Further obesity
can increase the risk of heart disease and other related health issues. Take US
is an example where the rate of obese children
intensifying which accounts for 10% of the population.
Another negative aspect of using new technological
products is lacking of concentration on school
Those who spend mostly time on technology are just
think about games on the internet which interested them.
Therefore these would divert children attention
away from studying. As a result there would be more addicted children.
Conversely, children could use modern technologies
to entertain them after school. To explain more details, children
often experience boredom and fatigue when only
exposed to academic subjects that do not allow
for much mental recreation Nevertheless, instead
of using technology children can take more
outdoor activities. Consequently they could gain
more sociable skills with their peers rather than
play games by their own.
Taking all points into account, the possible
impact of medical condition and school directing
is outweighed the benefits of entertainment.
Hence, spending most free time to use modern
technique could have a negative impact on their life.
What children do in their leisure time have
transmitted since technical advances.
The writer of this essay believe that the drawbacks
of health issues and distracting from study
greatly outweigh t...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of entrepreneurs in three distinct categories using social media for business activities from 2012 to 2016. Overall, there were increases in social media usage in all three types of firms, with the large ones dominating over the period.
Regarding small companies, they used social media for their operations the least in 2012, at about 28%, followed by a dramatic incline to just below 50% in 2016, despite a slight decrease to 30% in 2015.
Meanwhile, the medium group saw similar changes, albeit to a greater extent. Starting from just over 30%, the rate of social media used for business by firms in this category rose significantly to north of 50% in the last year, despite a considerable fall to the same level as their small counterparts in 2015.
Finally, although they plummeted to just more than 50% in 2015, the large band’s figures relatively stabilised at shy of 80% throughout the period, remaining the largest social media users for business operations.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of entrepreneurs in three distinct categories using social media for business activities from 2012 to 2016. Overall, there were increases in social media usage...
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Writing task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô ah!
TECHNOLOGY
Mobile phone and the internet could have many benefits for old people. However, this age group uses technology the least. What are the benefits for old people of using mobile phones and the internet? How can we encourage them to use this new technology?
In light of the proliferation of technology, there is no denying that cell phones and the Internet can exert positive influences on people's lives, especially the elderly's. Nevertheless, the use of technology is considered the least among this age bracket. In this essay, I will analyze several potential advantages for old people using mobile phones and the Internet before suggesting some strategies to boost the number of old technology users.
Unequivocally, the use of cell phones and the Internet is beneficial for the elderly for a host of reasons. First and foremost, high-tech gadgets facilitate instantaneous communication, regardless of geographical boundaries, which is significantly more convenient compared to the past when hand-written letters used to be prevalent. In addition to this, with the abundance free-of-charge online information, mobile phones with Internet connection assist in enriching one's knowledge. This could result in substantial savings from not purchasing newspapers and books.
Numerous actions can be taken to embolden more old individuals to use mobile phones and the Internet, both by the government and family members. Regarding the former, public campaigns promoting the use of technological devices should be intensified. Once the elderly are better aware of such new technology and its pros, they are more inclined to experimenting with it. In terms of the latter, the younger generations in the family should offer guidance and support related to any issues or difficulties arising from technology usage to the older ones, hence leading to an increase in the number of old technology users maintaining the habit of utilizing it.
In conclusion, mobile phones and the Internet have benefitted old people concerning communication and education, and not only the official authorities but also younger generations in the family can contribute to a rise in the number of old technology users.
TECHNOLOGY
Mobile phone and the internet could have many benefits for old people. However, this age group uses technology the least. What are the benefits for old people of using mobile phones and t...
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writing task 1
The percentage of inhabitants aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three dissimilar countries is indicated in the graph below.
Starting off at nearly 7% in 1940, the proportion of Swedish population aged 65 and over was strongly increased by half in 1980 and went down slightly before bouncing back to 20% in 2020. The figure finally reached 25% in 2040 after hitting a decrease of approximately 18%. Likewise, with a similar chain, the proportion of the USA grew to about 15% in 1980, followed by a fluctuation at around this point between 1980 and 2020, eventually coming up to almost 23% in 2040 which is one of the lowest final results compared to others. On the other hand, although commencing with the lowest figure and remaining unchanged at approximately 5% until 2000, the proportion of population aged 65 and over in Japan reached the highest figure in 2040 and still showed a continued signal to increase.
The percentage of inhabitants aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three dissimilar countries is indicated in the graph below.
Starting off at nearly 7% in 1940, the proportion of Swedish populat...
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Đây là bài Writing task 1. Em mongThầy/Cô chữa giúp em ạ!
The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian products imported by four distinct nations – Japan, the US, China, and India – during the period from 1990 to 2012.
It is clear that there were considerable upward trends in the proportion of Australian exports to two countries China and India, while the two remaining countries saw a remarkable fall over the given period. China has become the main country that imports Australian goods in the last few years.
Starting at nearly 25% in 1990, Japan imported dramatically more from Australia than the remaining countries. This figure then dropped continuously to the lowest point of around 18% before staying static at the end of the given period. A similar downward trend was observed in the US, it peaked at just over 10% then declined gradually to about 8% in 1995. Despite an increase to a high of approximately 13% in 2000, the figure then fell sharply and took up just under 5% in 2012.
By contrast, Australian exports to China witnessed a gradual increase from only 3% in 1990 to 13% in 2007 before surging rapidly to around 28% in 2012, surpassing Japan to become Australia’s largest goods export market. India had a similar pattern, but it went up at a lower rate. The starting point at the lowest position was just merely 1% in 1990, the figure then grew gradually and reached the highest point at about 8% in 2008. Subsequently, a slight drop occurred, finishing at nearly 5% at the end of the period.
The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where rele...
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Writing task 1, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Đề bài:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Bài viết:
The graph given provides the proper information about how old people from both genders retired on average in six nations in the year 2003.
Overall, elderly men and women in Korea had the highest retirement ages while the opposite was true for France, which is much lower than the whole examined countries. Interestingly, Japan and Italy shared the same average ages for the male and female workers who retired in 2003.
Stood at 57 years and 4 months for men and 56 years and 9 months for women that entire on average, France held the shortest times that people spent for work, which is about 7 years earlier than men and women in Australia. Taking the third lowest place, males in the United States retired at moderately 65 years and 6 months, whereas it was 64 years and 2 months for females.
In terms of the three countries that had the highest average retirement age, people all retired after the age of 66. In Japan and Italy, it was 67 years and 4 months for men and 66 years and 9 months for women, which was 1 year and 4 months and 5 months earlier than that of male and female Korean respectively.
Đề bài:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003.
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Writing task 2-em mong được thầy cô chấm và sửa chữa ạ.Em cảm ơn ạ
Đề bài: Some people think that good planning is the key factor for success in life. Others think that there are more important factors that lead to success (hard work, luck). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are those who opine that wise arrangement skill is of utmost importance to be successful in life.However, others claim that diligence and fortune are more vital.This essay will discuss both views and the rationales why I favor the latter.
On the one hand, effective plans offer individuals to make timely adjustment and suitable allocation of resources.Regarding the former advantage, wise plans can help people identify specific goals and steps that need to be followed, hence they can fulfill singular aims.By doing small part of target, they could predict foreseeable scenarios to minimize potential risks and recognize their weaknesses and work on them to thrive in their career path.Additionally, thanks to make plans in detailed, individuals could reasonably allocate resources that they current have.To give hypothetical example, If one desires to open small restaurant, by planning for sufficient amount of money needed as well him expert knowledge and work experience he can decide clients group that he want and consistent business premises.
On the other hand, opponents who advocate other criteria such as diligence and fortune also share equal importance.To begin with, one who is assiduous alway highly concentrate in work and work with high intensity, hence they are more likely to gain their own success.In terms of fortunate factor, seize the opportunity help people have apportune chances to develop career.For practical instance, All Day Coffee cafe suddenly became renowned after the surprise visit of US secretary Antony Blinken.Many youngs go there to savor aromatic flavor of staples though it extremely familiar.
In conclusion,although both sides of the argument have their own merits, I believe industriousness and luck can have a more tangible effect on each individual’s success.
Đề bài: Some people think that good planning is the key factor for success in life. Others think that there are more important factors that lead to success (hard work, luck). Discuss both views and gi...
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Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The graph describes the number of national foreign to three different places in a European country in 20 years, starting from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the country witnessed foreigners who went to the coast, the mountains and the lakes were the highest. Moreover, the coast had a large number of national visitors going from 1987 to 2007, and the lowest was in the lakes.
In 1987, the coast welcomed around 40 thousand visitors, but in 1992 it just decreased to 37 thousand foreigners, it recovered rapidly to approximately in the final year in 2007. Besides, 20 was the number of national visitors going to the mountains in 1987, which rose moderately to 30 thousand in 2002. Subsequently, it documented a period until 2002, followed by a rise of nearly 4000 in 2007.
Finally, starting at the lowest result of 10000 in the beginning, the number of visitors going to the lakes surged dramatically to 75000 in 2002 before decreasing back to nearly of 50000 in 2007.
The graph describes the number of national foreign to three different places in a European country in 20 years, starting from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the country witnessed foreigners...
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Đây là bài IELTS writing task 2 của em. Mong được thày cô chấm chữa ạ.
In some countries, the government encourages businesses and corporations to move from major cities to regional areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
There has been a trend that many companies encouraged by the government repositioned from bustling cities to rural areas. There are a number of advantages and disadvantages that impact directly on these companies and business organizations.
On the one hand, the clear advantage of the movement of companies from urban to rural areas is that it may reduce the costs of products. This is because the costs of living in regional areas are lower than its from big cities, therefore, businesses are offered low-priced items for production lines. As a result, huge profits are created by these businesses thanks to reasonable prices. For instance, rural areas are often good for cultivation such as vegetable growing, so some companies producing healthy food may hold both cheap price and good quality materials. In contrast, some companies in big cities had to bear higher costs and low quality products because of shipping time and costs.
On the other hand, one downside of moving companies and corporations from inner-city to countryside is that it limits company’s approach with potential customers. The reason is because most companies produce large quantities of products for populated areas, so product standards may be based on the habits and hobbies of people living in large cities. Therefore, moving away from big cities leads to the difficulty in customer’s preference and reduces the popularity of products. For example, if a fashion company moves away from the city market, they can not catch the latest trends about fashion and compete with other fashion companies that are from big cities.
In short, the overall impacts on businesses and corporations can clearly consider both negative and positive development.
In some countries, the government encourages businesses and corporations to move from major cities to regional areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
As language such as English, Spanish and Madarin become more widely spoken, there is a concern that many minority languages may disappear. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.
What is your view of this practice?
Bài làm:
English, Spanish, and Mandarin are commonly taught worldwide, courtesy of their origin country's prosperity. Minority languages are slowly disappearing simultaneously with the widespread of these three languages. As the world becomes more integrated, some argue that a lingua franca assists cross-cultural communication, others, however, state that a language is more than just a communication means.
On one hand, a language represents the history, culture, and progress of a nation. In France, the word "river" has masculine and feminine prefixes whereas in Vietnamese poetry, rivers are mostly associated with femininity. The difference occurs because of the cultural perspective towards the subject which formed through a long-existing history of the country. Indian loanwords from English is evidence that it was once dominated by the British Empire. With the gradual vanishing of minority languages, actions need to be taken to avoid loss of cultural heritage.
On the other hand, admittedly, throughout the history of humanity, a number of languages have died out due to their countries' collapse. Once widely spoken language, such as Latin, has disappear almost completely. To some extent, the process of replacing, reinforcing and loss of a language is inevitable. Furthermore, speakers of minority languages are under pressure to speak dominant languages. Therefore, by having a common language, individuals can reduce the disadvantages when communicating with people from different regions, especially when the integration process is unavoidable.
To conclude, although it is desirable for a language to be preserved, the eliminating process is inevitable. By implementing the appropriate methods, the loss will be minimized and, to some certain degree, benefits society.
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Writing Task 1: Table- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**The table shows the average length of video advertisements on the Internet and the average length of time viewers spend watching them**
Bài làm:
The table illustrates the mean time consumers spend on commercials online, as well as the average duration of these commercials.
Overall, it can be seen that on average, 10,7 seconds were spent on advertisements, half of the length of the average advertisement (22,4 seconds).
Services and products that require extravagant spending, listed as Automotive and Financial services, have the highest commercial duration of above 20 seconds. However, despite its affordability, Government advertisements are recorded for the highest duration of 45.8 seconds, twice as many as the average length. Over 15 seconds were spent watching these advertisements.
More affordable products, such as Travel, Home furnishing, Consumer electronics, Pharmaceuticals, and Clothing, on the other hand, have relatively shorter advertisement duration of between 14.6 seconds to 18 seconds. These advertisements typically receive nearly 50% of view time from the consumers, except Travel and Home furnishing commercials.
It is also interesting to note that, although Retails has 21-second advertisements on average, they can only capture viewers' attention for the first four seconds.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
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Nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài Task 1. Em cảm ơn.
The drawing gives information about how pineapples are cultivated and processed into different kinds of products.
Overall, there are two main stages in the production of pineapples, the process of planting pineapples and how which are proceeded into a beverage, a canned food and exported goods. In addition, it can be seen that this diagram involves both natural and man-made elements.
In terms of the farming process, pineapples are grown in a spacing of 26cm between each plant and the temperature is about between 28 and 30 degrees Celsius. After seven months, ethylene is introduced into the plants, after which they continue to grow in a five month period until being ready for harvest. To reach full maturity, pineapples should reach 30 cm in height and 2 kg in weight.
Regarding the production process, harvested pineapples are washed with water prior to classifying into different sizes. Subsequently, the smallest and medium-size fruits are processed to remove leaves and outer rind. While the former pineapples are then put into an extractor to produce juice, the latter are cut into slices or smaller chunks, both of which are then canned. In contrast, the larger pineapples are left uncut and simply coated in wax, then placed in a crate before being exported overseas.
The drawing gives information about how pineapples are cultivated and processed into different kinds of products.
Overall, there are two main stages in the production of pineapples, the process of pla...
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