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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêm






Tùng
16/5/2024
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Writing Task 1
The two line charts show how many train travellers were there in Sydney and the punctuality of this means of transport from 1995 to 2004. Overall, there was an increase in the number of people using trains for travelling, while the opposite was true for the proportion of trains arriving on time. Regarding passenger numbers, in 1995, a quarter of a million people were train commuters, which was the lowest point. Over the next 4 years, the number inclined gradually to about 265 million travellers in 1999, before peaking at 300 million at the turn of the millennium. Thereafter, it fell back to the year 2000’s level, levelling off until 2004. Concerning the proportion of punctual trains, in the first year, around 92% of trains were operated on time, followed by a steady decline to 85% in the next 2 years. From here, the share reached the highest point at just over the initial level, prior to dropping to the south of the year 1997’s figure and recovering to the pinnacle. Finally, the rate declined sharply and bottomed out at approximately 73% in the last year of the period. The two line charts show how many train travellers were there in Sydney and the punctuality of this means of transport from 1995 to 2004. Overall, there was an increase in the number of people usin... Xem thêm


Tùng
16/5/2024
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The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.
The table illustrates the estimates of literacy rates across five continents and worldwide, categorised by gender, between 2000 and 2004. Overall, Europe consistently recorded the highest proportion of literacy in both genders and in total, while the opposite was true for Africa's figures. Additionally, the percentage of literate males was far higher than their female counterparts. In total, the literacy rate was 82.2% globally, in which Europe dominated at 98.8%, followed closely by both the figures for the Americas and Oceania, comparable at around 93%. Meanwhile, just over three-quarters of Asians were literate, slightly higher than in Africa (62.5%). Regarding males, literate men around the world accounted for 87.2%, with nearly every man in Europe able to read and write (99.2%), compared to about 94% in the Americas and Oceania. Moreover, the literacy rates of Asian and African males were 85.9% and 71.6%, respectively. Concerning females, the global literacy rate was 77.3%, lower than that in Europe (98.5%), in comparison with approximately 93% in both the Americas and Oceania. Finally, women who could read and write in Asia represented 72.5%, while just over half of those in Africa were literate. The table illustrates the estimates of literacy rates across five continents and worldwide, categorised by gender, between 2000 and 2004. Overall, Europe consistently recorded the highest proportio... Xem thêm


Nguyễn Ngọc Minh Tâm
14/5/2024
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TOPIC: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is sometimes argued that governments should allocate money to railway systems instead of road networks. To a certain extent, I agree that it may be true that investing in railways can bring many merits. However, I hold a strong view that there are many advantages to building roads. On the one hand, the opinion that spending money on roads rather than railroads is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, roads have improved connectivity more than railways. This can be explained by investing in building roads to enable better access to remote areas, markets, and amenities for people. For example, the project of linking isolated areas to the rest of the country in Brazil through road networks gained improved access to essential services, markets, and healthcare facilities in larger cities. Secondly, building railways can enhance trade and commerce. To explain, when governments squander money on roads, well-constructed roads facilitate the movement of goods and services, encouraging trade and commerce. On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe that governments should allocate money to railways. The first reason is that rail transport is more environmentally friendly than roads. This can be explained that when governments disburse money to railways, the number of people commuting by trains can increase significantly. As a result, this can cut individual carbon footprint and minimize the pollution state. For example, Germany can mitigate air pollution due to making significant investments in railway infrastructure of governments. Another significant reason is railways can reduce the number of vehicles circulating on the streets. Under certain assumptions, this can be construed as by providing a reliable alternative to cars, railways can help alleviate the strain on existing road infrastructure. This can reduce traffic congestion as well as accidents occurring among vehicles on the streets. For instance, the implementation of the high-speed railway system in Japan has significantly reduced traffic jams on major highways and improved the overall transportation experience for the public. In conclusion, while there are valid arguments against spending money on railways, the benefits of their development outweigh the drawbacks. Therefore, governments should prioritize investment in railways to create a more sustainable and efficient transportation network. TOPIC: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is sometimes argued that governments should allocate money t... Xem thêm
Lê nguyễn uyên chi
14/5/2024
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The given graph illustrates the share of women members of parliament in five separate nations between 2000 and 2012. Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of females of parliament to all five countries scrutinized, with the most dramatic rise being seen in the figures for the UK. Despite that, the UK consistently had the lowest data over the period. Examining the data more closely, the percentage of parliament’s women in Germany started at around 35%, after which it experienced a slight fall to shy of this percentage, before reaching nearly 37% at the end of the span. Meanwhile, the figures for Italy climbed enormously to downward of 40%, outpacing that of Germany in 2012. Similar change, but to a lesser extent, were seen in the figures for France, which grew from around 25% to almost 32% during the evaluated timeframe. In terms of Belgium and the UK, nearly 17% female representatives of parliament in 2000 in Belgium, with a significant growth to roughly 24% at the end of the duration. Likewise, data for the UK surged dramatically to 20% in 2008 before registering a similarly relative quantity at around 24% with that of Belgium at the end of the period. The given graph illustrates the share of women members of parliament in five separate nations between 2000 and 2012. Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of females of parliament to all f... Xem thêm


Bùi Hà Bảo Ngọc
13/5/2024
Giúp em wrt t1 này với ạ. em để ảnh ở dưới bình.luận ạ
The diagram provides insights into how frozen fish pies are produced. The whole process involves a range of steps. Overall, a fish pie contains peas, fish, sauce and potato. The sets of stages for fish pie production are as follows: preparation and delivery. In addition, the ingredient has to go through six different stages of preparation. The initial stage of production starts with potato as it requires to be sent one month before the process occurs. It goes through cleaning, peeling and slicing, all the waste in the cleaning process is thrown away. After that, it underwent the process of boiling, chilling and storing. Fresh salmon are marinated in lemon juice and salt and then cooked in a steam oven. The workers are capable of removing their skin and bones. Having inspected, the cooked salmon along with prepared peas, sauce and potato ready to go for wrapping and freezing before dispatching. The diagram provides insights into how frozen fish pies are produced. The whole process involves a range of steps. Overall, a fish pie contains peas, fish, sauce and potato. The sets of stages for fi... Xem thêm
Khánh Ngọc
14/5/2024
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Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion? Nowadays, it is argued by some that the most influential years of a child’s life are before beginning school, whereas others believe that what a person experiences as a teenager has an impact significantly on their future life. This essay will further discuss the two sides of the issue and illustrate my viewpoint. On the one hand, it is undeniable that early-life circumstances influence a child’s life. Since the preschool age is the most impressionable, their core character tends to be formed during that period. This is because years under 7 have had fundamental learning experiences, and their first observation of the world happened at that time, which affected their memory and built the basis of their future actions and decisions. For example, children who grow up in a happy family will create strong family bonds with their parents, and have a sense of security and stability, which helps them develop confidence and higher self-esteem. By contrast, children in an unhappy family may experience feelings of anxiety, and stress, which can affect their mental health and social relationships. On the other hand, advocates of adolescence impacting one’s later life significantly are also able to come up with arguments to justify their opinion. First, a school is a diverse and multiple environment where children interact with peers and teachers, giving them opportunities to present new ideas and beliefs. As a result, children can broaden their horizons and develop a deeper understanding of the world around them. Second, as children mature, they have enough knowledge and responsibility to decide their future, especially to determine and orient their future careers. In fact, self-discovery and exploration are significantly important in shaping their personality and disposition towards life. In conclusion, although the treatment and upbringing of a child from 1 to 6 years old have a great influence on their later life, their teenage period is also influential in forming one’s world views and beliefs. In my point of view, I personally support both of them. Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influent... Xem thêm
Tùng
14/5/2024
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The table illustrates how students at a university assessed its different criteria in 2000, 2005, and 2010. Overall, all the categories examined experienced increases in the proportion of students surveyed who rated positively throughout the period, apart from the modules range offered, which saw a downward trend. However, the ratings for buildings and teaching facilities remained unchanged over the given timeframe. Regarding criteria that fluctuated, in 2000, three-quarters of students rated teaching quality positively, compared to 84% for print stationery. Over the next 10 years, both saw minor fluctuations in the share of students giving good ratings, ending up north of their initial levels in 2010. Concerning the remainder, 45% of students said that e-resources were helpful initially, after which the share nearly doubled, reaching 88% in the final year. Meanwhile, almost one-third of students said so about the range of modules offered in the first year, which gradually declined to 27% after 10 years. Finally, the figure for buildings and teaching facilities stabilised at 77% over the period. The table illustrates how students at a university assessed its different criteria in 2000, 2005, and 2010. Overall, all the categories examined experienced increases in the proportion of students... Xem thêm


AnGia
13/5/2024
Dạ đây là bài writing Task 2 của em ai.Kính mong thầy cô chấm bài giúp em ạ . Em xin cảm ơn.
Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. Do you agree? Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. Do you agree?




Tùng
14/5/2024
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The charts below give information about the people who use public libraries and the main reasons to visit in Britain in 1991 and 2000.
The pie graphs show the primary reasons why people visited public libraries in Britain in 1991 and 2000. Overall, the number of visits remained unchanged over the two years examined, with borrowing or returning books being by far the most common purpose. Additionally, although borrowing or returning videos was not the main reason for utilising public libraries in 1991, it had emerged as a significant one by 2000. In 1991, nearly two-thirds of people in the UK came to public libraries to borrow or return books, which was the most popular reason, just over six times as many as gathering information (10%). However, in 2000, both utilisations experienced a 10% change, to 55% and 20%, respectively. Meanwhile, the respective figures for those using reading materials and studying were at 15% and 10% in the preceding year, but only 5% and 2% did so in the subsequent year, in that order. Moreover, borrowing or returning videos was not listed as the main reason to visit public libraries in 1991, becoming the third most common reason in 2000, with nearly one-fifth of users. Finally, the number of visits remained unchanged at 290 million visits over the two years. The pie graphs show the primary reasons why people visited public libraries in Britain in 1991 and 2000. Overall, the number of visits remained unchanged over the two years examined, with borrowing... Xem thêm


Nhu Quynh
12/5/2024
Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get new events. Do you think the advantages outweighed the disadvantages? mong thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ vì em đang cần gấp lắm. em cảm ơn ạ
Social network has become a very significant part of the daily communication lives and the dependece on the same has escalates drastically over the last decade.The writer contends that the benefits of main contact and grasp information overshadowed the drawback of lack emotional connection. The most advatageous factor of utilizing social media is that it can connect people around the world and keep contact them. To put it plainly, communication is essential way to improve relationship and it is useful for many fiels such as education or working. Additionally, effective communication can recover teamwork which need to have strong cross-functional bonds. As the consequence, using society for keep contact can process metal health and also advance teamwork skill which is useful at higher education. Another advantageous of using social network site is gather information. To put it simply, in the contemporaly lifestyle, human should approach quickly new information in order to catch up with the time and also avoid old-fashioned. In addition, grasp information allow peole to have better understanding of the current situation and opportunities. As the result, citizens should retain modern information in order to access transformed around the world. However, social emtional connection continued to decrease with increased social media. To put ir plainly, conversation in the message can affect seriously on younger who have sensetive thinking that can make them overthinking lead to lack of emotion. For instance,contemporaly, statistic of young generation who have depression are increasing terrifingly in 2022. In conclusion, utilizing social network advance communiaction and retain information quickly, nevertheless, it can impact on youth who lack of emotional connection. Social network has become a very significant part of the daily communication lives and the dependece on the same has escalates drastically over the last decade.The writer contends that the benefits of... Xem thêm
Trần Việt An
12/5/2024
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It is believed by some people that effort should be made to protect and preserve old buildings more than others. Personally, I think there are definitely types of building that should be preserved, and the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, the types of buildings that need to remain include a significant amount of historical and cultural values. For example, old government buildings, temples and churches, even old monuments. These buildings play a crucial role in defining a certain aspect of culture through style of architecture that should be preserved to capture an aspect of history. Take Viet Nam as an example of maintaining the value of history. Independence Palace had been around for nearly 100 years and still remains till now, which is an important role model for Vietnamese people to connect to history and adult people. On the other hand, there are several disadvantages when it comes to protecting old buildings. Because, old buildings have experienced many times,which require a lot of money to restore them to a structurally suitable condition. Additionally, cities nowadays tend to grow significantly and space gradually limited, the perseverance of old buildings will be more difficult and impede the progress of cities. In conclusion, i believe that the importance of protecting culture and historical value are essential, although there are several disadvantages in preserving old buildings as financial and space issues. It is believed by some people that effort should be made to protect and preserve old buildings more than others. Personally, I think there are definitely types of building that should be preserved, an... Xem thêm


Cuong
13/5/2024
The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents. why do you think that is? do you think the news should be balance of both good and bad news
In contemporary society, the amount of news reported has the inclination to be negative news such as wars, poverty, crime and so on. The aim of this essay is to delve into the underlying reasons for this trend. From my own perspective, I totally believe that news should be adjusted in order to be a balance of good and bad news. There are several plausible factors contributing to this trend. It is apparent that people tend to prefer controversial or negative news to the positive ones psychologically. Hence, it is essential for journalists to collect and publish such information in order to generate income . Another rationale behind this phenomenon is that the rates of war, crime or poverty have been astonishingly increasing. Therefore, it is of great importance to ensure all citizens can update the latest news about the current world to suggest feasible solutions to the issues. For instance, the war between Ukraine and Russia was publicized in order to appeal for assistance from other countries to stop the conflict. However, I totally believe that providing a balance between positive and negative news is significant. As a matter of fact, bad news, especially when it comes to untrue news, can contribute to fear, anxiety and hopelessness about the future among readers, thereby undermining social development and operation. Thus, news should also consist of good things such as volunteering, kindness or advancement so as to promote optimism and encourage citizens to devote themselves to their community. In conclusion, while negative reports are vital in the function of journalism and society, I would wholeheartedly argue that the volume of good and bad news should be equal in order to stabilize the society. In contemporary society, the amount of news reported has the inclination to be negative news such as wars, poverty, crime and so on. The aim of this essay is to delve into the underlying reasons for t... Xem thêm
Lê nguyễn uyên chi
12/5/2024
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The given graph compares data on producing coffee in four separate nations between 1990 to 2010. Overall, there was an increase in the number of coffee being produced in all three countries with the exception of Colombia. Furthermore, a noticeable trend can be seen in the figure for Brazil with the most dramatic rise. Following this trend, the data for Brazil consistently had the highest position over the period. Turning first to the quantities of coffee in Brazil and Colombia, the figures for the former started at around 0.7 million tonnes, after which it experienced an enormous growth to nearly 1.5 million tonnes before reaching 1.9 million tonnes at the end of the span. Meanwhile, the data for the latter secured the second-highest standing of 0.6 million tonnes in 1990, and then decreased considerably to the lowest number, roughly 0.3 million tonnes in 2010. Shifting to the remaining subjects, both the statistics for Indonesia and VietNam have a similar trend when merely standing at a point of 0.2 and 0.1, respectively, from 1990 to 1995. Likewise, another similar trend can be seen when both the figures for the former and the latter rose double, from 0.2 million tonnes to 0.4 million tonnes, and 0.1 to 0.3 million tonnes, with the respective numbers, at the end of the duration. The given graph compares data on producing coffee in four separate nations between 1990 to 2010. Overall, there was an increase in the number of coffee being produced in all three countries with the... Xem thêm


Khánh Ngọc
12/5/2024
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Percentage change in average house prices in five cities 1990-2002 compared with 1989. The given picture shows the change in the prices of houses in two periods, 1990–1995, and 1996–2002, compared to the prices in 1989. Overall, there are huge differences between the changes in house prices in five cities in two periods, with the most significant being London. In the first period, from 1990 to 1996, the cost of average houses in New York and London dropped by around 5% and 7%, respectively. However, in the second period, from 1996 to 2002, house buyers in London had to pay 5% more than they did in 1989. Moreover, there was an increase of 12% in New York house prices, which was the highest estate price growth rate over 13 years. On the other hand, the prices for an average house in Tokyo decreased by 7% in the first period, but between 1996 and 2002, homes in Tokyo remained cheaper by 5% than they were in 1989. Over the five years after 1989, people in Madrid and Frankfurt were reported to buy houses with approximately 2% higher prices. In the second period, compared to housing prices in other cities, those in Frankfurt experienced less significant fluctuations. By contrast, the price of housing in Madrid rose by a further 2%. Percentage change in average house prices in five cities 1990-2002 compared with 1989. The given picture shows the change in the prices of houses in two periods, 1990–1995, and 1996–2002, compared... Xem thêm


Trần Tiến Khoa
12/5/2024
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Task 2: Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to class delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? It is true that online courses provided by some universities nowadays are an alternative to offline classes. While online learning methods are criticized for some disadvantages, I believe such methods are far more benefit. Those who argue that online learning is not effective compare to traditional learning may have some arguments. Firstly, classes that are delivered on virtual platforms usually lack interpersonal interaction. The learners only interact with a screen in front of them, listen to the lecture’s voice through the computer’s speaker, and do a little response. Secondly, if students are not good at concentration, they can be distracted by their surroundings easily, thereby reducing their learning effectiveness. Lastly, the exams organized through online platforms may exacerbate education integrity because students can intentionally conduct cheating behavior to get good results. Nevertheless, I believe that online courses can bring greater benefits for students. Virtual education systems offer students with opportunity to freely choose appropriate time, and place for their learning. Thanks to this flexibility, during the COVID-19 pandemic, students worldwide did not have to abandon their academic careers due to restrictions of government. Besides that, online courses provide students with stored lecture video systems that allow them to review and revise the lectures anytime and anywhere. Moreover, such courses enable students to access to academic resources of many Universities around the world, that beneficial for students’ learning and research. In conclusion, it is understandable why some people may argue the effectiveness of online courses. However, I would take the view that such learning courses offer a range of advantages for students. Task 2: Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to class delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? It is true that online courses provided by so... Xem thêm
Trần Việt An
12/5/2024
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The bar graph illustrates the amount of teaching done by primary, lower and upper secondary in four different countries in 2001. Overall, it is clear that teachers in USA taught significantly more than teachers in the remaining three countries. Moreover, the number of hours that teachers spent on primary was the lowest in 4 countries. In 2001, upper secondary teachers in the USA taught around 1100 hours, this was followed by lower secondary teachers, who did only fewer than 1100 hours, compared to primary teachers, who taught more than 800 hours. In Ireland, Both of lower and upper teachers spent nearly 800 hours per year, but primary just accounted for 600 hours. Meanwhile both primary and lower teachers in Japan and Spain had the same amount of hours teaching, with 600 hours per year. Similarly, upper secondary in Japan also taught around 600 hours, while Spain counterparted spend around 1000 hours teaching per year. The bar graph illustrates the amount of teaching done by primary, lower and upper secondary in four different countries in 2001. Overall, it is clear that teachers in USA taught significantly more th... Xem thêm


Minh Phương
11/5/2024
Em chào thầy cô ạ. Đây là bài writing task 2 của em. Em mong được thầy cô chấm và nhận xét ạ.
Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Some people have proposed that supporting retirees about finance is done by the government, whereas others say that the implementation of financial independence is optimally enhanced. Although both perspectives have a degree of rationale, I agree more with the former perspective due to one primary reason that would be evaluated in this essay. On the one hand, it is possible that there is one major reason why retired people should be responsible for paying their bills. In this day and age, the regulation of pension of people who finish their career is enacted and implemented for them which contributed to the development of the economy and nation in the past. As a result, retired people can allocate their pension monthly to pay for many bills such as water bills or daily bills in shops or markets. For instance, in Japan, the elderly people live on their own by living alone and using their salary as well as getting a job if they have enough health. On the other hand, opponents of the previous view claim that the state ought to bear supporting financially for the senior citizens.In the developing nations, the poverty rate is increasing at unprecedented rate which is happening mainly from the retired people by financial burden that worsens the quality of living and national development. Therefore, if the government wants to improve the quality of society’s life and reduce homeless people, endoring money for retirees is the optimal way. In Vietnam, for example, in the past, there were many soldiers who contributed for the peace and independence of the nation to have a better life in the present without the war. Consequently, the Vietnamese state provided them a sum considered as a way of compensation for their devotion for their country. In conclusion, although there are some controversial views whether or not the government or each individual takes responsibility for supporting financially, I believe that governments need to spend the state budget providing expenses for retired people. Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Some people have propose... Xem thêm
Phạm Bảo Vân
11/5/2024
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Mong cô chấm writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn
The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in various activities in one month in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ANSWER; The chart illustrates the attendance of 18-20-year-old men and women in different activities in a month in 2015. In general, the most popular activity for males was football, while cycling was the most favorite by females. In addition, there was a stark difference in the participation rates of men and women in all sport activities. As can be inferred from the bar chart, cycling was favored by both males and females and the participation rates were not much different. To be more precise, about 40% of women participating cycling in this month, higher than the figures of men by about 5%. As for basketball, the number of males was around 34%, twice as much as that of females. Similarly, the football participation rate of men, which stood at about 54%, was 3 times as much as that of women. In contrast, the proportion of females attending swimming activity was about 35%, whilst males only accounted for 20%. Finally, both men and women did not favor hockey, however, the number of males playing this sport was twice higher than females. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in various activities in one month in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main... Xem thêm


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11/5/2024
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Question: Nowadays, as role models, famous people have and increasing influence on the young. It is a possitive or negative development? In the digital age, it is not an exaggeration to say that the prominence of celebrities significantly influences the youth, leading to shifts in their behaviors, encompassing both negative and positive aspects. This essay will explore both sides of this issue. On the one hand, the impact of celebrities can catalyze positive developments. Firstly, famous people are embodiments of social responsibility models, as they can use their platform to promote positive messages and behaviors, such as supporting community affairs. This not only helps to polish their reputation but also motivates their fans to have a sense of social responsibility. Moreover, through the journeys of grappling with the challenges of renowned individuals, young people seem to be comforted and motivated when facing similar challenges, ultimately leading them to easily overcome obstacles in their lives. However, alongside the benefits of high-profile individuals, the idolization of celebrities can also contribute to detrimental effects on the younger generation, who may have little or no life experience, making them easily influenced by things that can have a deleterious impact on their behavior. Firstly, famous individuals often boast about their luxury lifestyles and promote an idealized way of living to young minds, leading to unrealistic standards commonly seen on social media. This can result in feelings of inadequacy and low self-esteem among young people as they compare themselves with these portrayals of wealth and beauty. Secondly, idolizing those who exhibit unhealthy behaviors or controversial opinions, including substance abuse, risky conduct, and unethical actions, may lead young followers to harmful mimicry because they are too inexperienced to distinguish right from wrong. In conclusion, while the positive effects of celebrities on the mental health of the youth are undeniable, it is essential not to overlook the drawbacks in terms of glamorizing unrealistic lifestyles and approving of dangerous actions, which contribute to developments more harmful than beneficial Question: Nowadays, as role models, famous people have and increasing influence on the young. It is a possitive or negative development? In the digital age, it is not an exaggeration to say that the... Xem thêm
Khánh Huyền
10/5/2024