Tạo tài khoản Pombeebee để đăng câu hỏi và được giáo viên hướng dẫn.
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Lee Wenyong
17 days ago
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/4adb14b2-6bb3-4504-a0bc-eb746c8a9d78/1720619784_YLns849XHVG80rLSw1bkgM4bXXWi18.png)
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Hannah
21/2/2024
em nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài này ạ
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words. .The table illustrated the rate and count of various of family types residing in poverty in Australia in 1999. Overall, it is clearly seen that the number of people who living under all household granted a greater portion over the period shown. Meanwhile, a reverse pattern can be seen in the proportion of people living in aged couples. According to the data, the aged couples and single aged person are two groups which allocated the smallest proportion of household living under poor standard living, accounting for 4% and 6% respectively. The superior trend can be seen in couples and singles who do not have children, which amounted to 19 and 21 percent with 359 and 232 thousand families in poverty. Meanwhile, 12 percent of individuals who live in couples with their children accounted for 933 thousand people in their total. The largest proportion of poor family type in this country was seen in all households, made up over 11 percent consist of 1.8 million people. . You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Describe the information in the table a... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/9ed0f261-2ff6-44fc-b735-8598055989de/1708556391_nrBORGqlg0c1aEl0agZil7RXG4Ase5.jpg)
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Phạm Bảo Vân
21/2/2024
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn!
The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant ANSWER: The line graph illustrates the differences in goods transportation of the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002. Overall, four modes of transport also increased, the transportation on the road accounted for the highest figure. Meanwhile, the lowest quantity was pipeline. According to the road of transport, it was about 70 million tonnes in 1974 and it increased rapidly to nearly 100 million tonnes in 2002. Meanwhile, the quantities of water and rail transport were less but in general they reduced in some years and increased again at the end. Finally, pipeline transport only accounted for a very small figure in 1974, from 1978 onwards the quantity of this transport increased continuously over the period and in 2002 it reached over 20%. The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/496e943b-b74d-493e-9d68-1c3391f0968d/1708530466_ZJmoSj9OljbJRbcOLjz3sJe5YExRi5.png)
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Tùng
22/2/2024
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The chart illustrates the amount of budget spent in a percentage of GDP by the government on three different sectors between 2000 and 2020, with the projection until 2025. Overall, national coffer allocation of health increases over the period, while the opposite is true for those of education and infrastructure. Additionally, the budget amount distributed for roads and railways changes the most throughout the period, and health is likely to be the most invested aspect by 2025. Opposite patterns were seen in the national spending amount for education and health. Specifically, in 2000, the former received 4% from the government, 1% lower than the latter. Until 2025, the amount of public spending on health will incline significantly to about 7.5%, while that of education is projected to decline gradually to just below 4%, after being overtaken by the figure for health in mid-2000-2005 at just under 5%. As for roads and railways, during the first five years, national expenses for this sector grew slightly to roughly 4.5%, followed by some wild fluctuations in the following fifteen years, with the lowest point at 3% in 2010. Finally, after recovering to the initial level in 2020, the national budget amount distributed to this category is anticipated to fall marginally to approximately 3.5% in 2025. The chart illustrates the amount of budget spent in a percentage of GDP by the government on three different sectors between 2000 and 2020, with the projection until 2025. Overall, national coffer... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/8457d9db-88c1-4b4f-8f09-f5238fbed09d/1708560924_GAywZqGnMYnK3CJfoUBXWchFgKSvjV.png)
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bao linh truong
21/2/2024
em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The line graph depicts the amount of three kinds of meat and fish were utilized by the European during the period from 1979 to 2004. In general, four trends in each kind of products were fluctuated over the time. In particular, while beef, lamb, and fish experienced both the gradual and dramatical decrease in the consumption, chiken trend reached the peak number of customers at the end of this period. Following the upward trend, chicken’s utilizers had jumped around 100 people from less than 150 to nearly 250 weekly. Additionally, during this time frame, this trend had been rising equal to beef trend twice in about 1989, corresponding to about 200 customer per week and similar to lamb trend once after 1979 at approximate 150 people. On another hand, the downward trends in utilizers were involving beef, lamp and fish. For fish product, the purchase was the least among all features just around 50 from onward 1979. Alternatively, both beef and lamb categories had the decline in utilizers nearly 100, but these bottom amount were not equivalent to fish items. The line graph depicts the amount of three kinds of meat and fish were utilized by the European during the period from 1979 to 2004. In general, four trends in each kind of products were fluctuate... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/cef12efc-150c-4bd5-a28d-adbbe333f124/1708480561_5r75CdrAQJLAvI8fMkm7Yf4QkoYDhv.png)
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Hoàng Trọng Sơn
20/2/2024
Đề bài: Some think they can use as much fresh water as they want, but others say governments should limit water use because it's not endless. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. giúp emmm nhanh nha em sắp thi rồi. Em cảm ơn ạ
Water plays a pivotal role for the earth, especially for human life. While some expounds that they have unlimited access to fresh water, others argue that governments should regulate water usage because it is finite. This essay will examine both viewpoints and I believe that people should be still allowed to use a large of freshwater resources , but I think everyone should consume it for right purposes and save reasonably. On the one hand, there are reason to say that people can use freshwater unlimitedly. The key argument here is that unrestricted water usage allows people to have a more positive outlook on life, by using freshwater for daily activities such drinking water, cooking, personal hygiene and washing vehicles, which can help them feel happier and more comfortable. Furthermore, in many countries, water-related industries are experiencing rapid growth to adapt user needs, which is a clear benefit for the development of their countries. On the other hand, there are reasons to believe that government should limit water use, particularly in nations lacking freshwater. Chief of these is that saving water helps civilian in their country have a more stable freshwater source. For instance, by using water properly today can helps them save water for the next day, avoid wasting water. Thus it can indeed serves as a effective solution for countries lacking freshwater. In conclusion, it cannot be denied that unlimited access freshwater can be many benefits for everyone, but it is essential to recognize that it is not infinite. Therefore, people should use it in a useful way. Water plays a pivotal role for the earth, especially for human life. While some expounds that they have unlimited access to fresh water, others argue that governments should regulate water usage beca... Xem thêm![Tùng](/images/logo.png)
Tùng
22/2/2024
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture shows how water is filtered using a solar-generated system and its design. Overall, the system consists of five main components and occurs mostly overground. Additionally, two main stages are operated to make potable water, including pumping water using solar energy and filtering water. Regarding the design, the system consists of solar panels, a solar controller with a capacity from 150 to 300W, a submersible pump installed in a 10-to-50m deep well, a 3-stage water filter powered by direct current, and a water storage tank. During the operation, sunlight is first converted into energy in the form of current by the solar panels, after which it is transmitted to the controller where voltage is adjusted. Next, the pump is powered by the direct current, pumping water up to the set of three filters on the surface to capture particles and ensure the water is clean. Finally, distilled water is stored in the reservoir, from where it can be extracted by a faucet. The picture shows how water is filtered using a solar-generated system and its design. Overall, the system consists of five main components and occurs mostly overground. Additionally, two main stages... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/361c9000-bf5d-4ee7-9c17-148ecb9a1992/1708561959_TCpdRpiQFKWUQRQPEnBoHlQSlhhjpP.png)
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Tùng
22/2/2024
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table illustrates the demographics in four countries, namely Argentina, Indonesia, Italy and the Republic of Korea, in 2003 and the projection for 2025 and 2050. Overall, there will be increases in the population of Argentina, Indonesia, and the Republic of Korea, with the domination of Indonesia over the period, while the figures for Italy are predicted to decrease. Regarding the two countries with the highest initial population, there were 238 million Indonesians in 2003, nearly five times higher than Italy’s population (54 million). In the future, the population numbers in the former country are anticipated to incline gradually to 312 million in 2050, while the opposite is true for the latter, ending at 45 million. As for the two remaining countries, the number of Argentinians in 2003 was 34 million, which was 14 million lower than that of the Republic of Korea. Both countries will grow steadily in population figures, with a greater extent for Argentina, to 62 million people in 2050, and surpass the Republic of Korea’s figure to become the second highest population country. Meanwhile, the population in the Republic of Korea is anticipated to remain stable at 52 million in 2025 onwards. The table illustrates the demographics in four countries, namely Argentina, Indonesia, Italy and the Republic of Korea, in 2003 and the projection for 2025 and 2050. Overall, there will be increase... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/c2271548-38bd-44dd-9718-84f7170aa4fe/1708561069_V9ClCd0kMzbQ1tWJ71BX8DmzXBrYV2.jpg)
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NGUYỄN THỊ NGỌC ANH
19/2/2024
Mọi người giúp em bài này với ạ ( em đang cần gấp). Em cảm ơn
Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?? Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree??![Tùng](/images/logo.png)
Tùng
20/2/2024
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar chart shows the percentage of Internet users in Canada who were online shoppers in six age groups in 2014 and 2018. Overall, the proportion of those shopping online generally decreased as people aged in the two years examined, with the year 2018 consistently witnessing higher online shopping rates in all age ranges. Additionally, the majority of people purchasing on the Internet were 15 to 55 years old in both years. Regarding the 15-45 age range, one in five Canadians in the youngest group shopped online in 2014, which was about 5% lower than the figure in 2018. Meanwhile, just over 30% of 26-to-35-year-olds did so in 2014, which was the highest this year, at the same gap compared to 2018. However, the disparity doubled in the figure for the 35-to-45 cohorts, at around 28% in 2014 in comparison to roughly 38% in 2018. As for the others, the gap remained relatively unchanged with age in both years. Specifically, the share of Canadians between 45 and 55 years old shopping on the Internet in 2014 was just over 20%, in comparison to approximately 28% in 2018. Finally, the figures for the 55-to-65 age bracket and the oldest group were much lower, with just over 10% and 5%, respectively in 2014, and about 18% and just above 10% in that order in 2018. The bar chart shows the percentage of Internet users in Canada who were online shoppers in six age groups in 2014 and 2018. Overall, the proportion of those shopping online generally decreased as p... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/f079d344-2e99-4a74-ae9c-1d00ffdcd9ef/1708404932_ebSOlJcvj29eeQGopWZJt3IWIz0cc3.jpg)
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Tùng
20/2/2024
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models’, and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development? Many celebrities in many parts of the world have increasingly affected young people as they are regarded as exemplars. I believe this tendency has both benefits and drawbacks, depending on the character and behaviour of the well-known individuals involved. To begin with, certain renowned personalities, particularly those with ethical issues and without genuine talent, may negatively affect young people. As for the former, such negative role models can prompt many of the young to make poor decisions. Prime examples would be substance abuse or driving under the influence, behaviours that can cause impressionable young individuals to idolise and follow these misdeeds mistakenly. Furthermore, those figures who come to fame with no talent but scandal can promote a distorted perception of success in young people. This can be seen in the way that genuine talent, more often than not, is overlooked by notoriety and looks. As a result, the young can easily misunderstand the value of success and the means to achieve it. However, there are also celebrities who have served as a great source of inspiration and motivation for the young. Chief among these would be successful entrepreneurs such as Elon Musk, Steve Jobs, and Bill Gates, who can be considered muses for young people to constantly work hard and pursue self-growth. These pioneers have laid a foundation for the development of technology in the world through their perseverance and brilliant intellect. Additionally, some public figures who transfer meaningful messages through their work can inspire many to follow as well. A perfect example would be Ronaldo, one of the best football players in the world whose many world records, awards, and titles. His tenacity, motivation, and discipline have helped him to succeed on this sports field and inspired many other people, especially young fans. In conclusion, there is no ultimate answer to the question of whether the influence of famous individuals on the young is positive or negative. They can be detrimental for young people if these personalities are involved in immoral behaviour or if they lack authentic talent. Conversely, leading entrepreneurs and inspiring athletes who have substantial contributions to society generally have a positive impact. Prompt: In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models’, and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development? Many celeb... Xem thêm![Pham Thuy](/images/logo.png)
Pham Thuy
19/2/2024
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Chúc mừng năm mới tất cả mọi người, em hi vọng được các cô chấm và sửa bài task 1 này ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The given line graph gives information about how many computers were possessed by a household in an European country over the period from 1997 to 2011. Overall, it is clear that while the percentage of households having two and one computer only experienced an increased trend with varying degrees, the opposite trend was true for those with no computers. Remarkably, though the proportion of families possessing three or more computers almost remained unchanged, its number was the highest nearly the whole period surveyed. Looking at the percentage of households who had no computers, at the outset, it was roughly 50%, which was the highest number before decreasing approximately to 32% in 2005. Afterwards, its figure went up and down many times before significantly falling to around 20% at the end. Due to this drop, this proportion moved from the first to the third position in terms of computer possession rate. Meanwhile, there was a stability in the number of families having three or more computers, approximately 45% over the period. Turning to the figure witnessing an increased trend, the percentage of households possessing two computers started at over 5%. In the following years, this percentage rose remarkably to nearly 27% in 2011, which was the second highest number. Similarly, there was a rise in the proportion of families possessing only one computer, though to a lesser extent. At the beginning, it was just 0% and remained static for the next 2 years before rising gradually to 10% at the end. Despite this marginal increase, the figure for households having one computer was still the lowest. The given line graph gives information about how many computers were possessed by a household in an European country over the period from 1997 to 2011. Overall, it is clear that while the percentage... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/54e829a5-fdf4-4af3-9539-e1f9428bee99/1708346513_4BUmOPf5eICC4ZlMZN1ZPf00lYbd9v.jpg)
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Nguyễn hoàng ngân
20/2/2024
The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britian
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Nguyễn Duy Khang
13/2/2024
Mong thầy cô giúp e chấm chữa bài ạ
Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In contemporary society, human beings’ lifespan is continuously extending. This has led to the question of whether the retirement age should be expanded simultaneously to balance the issue. Personally, I firmly oppose the notion of raising the age of retirement. On the one hand, some may argue that the idea of retaining old-age workers can be considered necessary owing to their wide horizon. Without a doubt, the older generation, those who have accumulated a great deal of knowledge and experience after decades of contributing to the workforce, would take precedence over their amateur counterparts. Additionally, another primary factor lies in the budget for pensions. In fact, if humankind’s life expectancy keeps widening while the age for retirement remains unchanged, a handsome pension may be inevitably required to pay for retiring workers. Undoubtedly, raising the retirement age can be an economic decision for later purposes including renovating facilities and purchasing up-to-date equipment, which in turn leads to an enhancement in productivity and accuracy of the working procedure. On the other hand, one compelling rationale advocating the unchanged retirement age can be mentioned in terms of humanitarian. Noticeably, the old-age labor force has spent more than half of their whole life contributing to the national economy. Hence, the period of retirement can be a sign of not only validating their devotion but also averting the matter of abuse. Also, the old-age people are conservative about their conventional working methods and less likely to adapt to changing technology. As a result, making use of modern equipment and many efficient ways of practice can be a big challenge for them. Thus, replacing them with a younger labor force who can easily come up with pragmatic approaches can facilitate better outcomes in this ever-changing world. In conclusion, while raising the retirement age can serve as a plausible solution to the concern of increasing lifespan, I firmly believe the unchanged age for retiring can potentially uphold humanitarian and flexibility in this fast-paced developing world. Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In contemporary society, hum... Xem thêm![Nhu Quynh](/images/logo.png)
Nhu Quynh
12/2/2024
mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp emThe table below shows the amount of waste generation and recycled in three different cities - Hanoi, Phnom Penh, Bangkok and Shanghai - in 2022.
The table gives information about the proportion of the waste production and management in major cities across 4 nations throughout 2022. In general, it can be seen from the graph that waste generation in 3 countries consistently higher than the waste recycling. Additionally, Shanghai contained the biggest amount of waste and and experienced the greatest reduction in its waste output while Phnom Penh had the lowest. Among the four urban areas, waste output and production were notably highest in Shanghai at 1 million tons and 610 thousand tons, respectively. It is followed by the proportion of waste in Bangkok, at 780 thousand tons, whereas its waste management amount was half that of Shanghai. Turning to the remaining statistics, it can be noted that Hanoi had one half of waste production compare to Shanghai amount, at 500 thousand tons. Besides, Phnom Penh accounted for the minority of waste output , just around 480 thousand tons. However, the Phnom Penh waste recycling, at 250 thousand tons was higher than that in Hanoi, which stood at 200 thousand tons. The table gives information about the proportion of the waste production and management in major cities across 4 nations throughout 2022. In general, it can be seen from the graph that waste gener... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/ed2f8529-d975-4354-a3f0-7f67ac02a9a7/1707760097_CA7C8q5mg02JYfMm1RTIbo5AmeNcyv.png)
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Nguyễn Huỳnh Anh Thư
18/2/2024
Thầy cô sửa bài giúp em. Em cảm ơn
TASK: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Essay Some individuals suppose that the majority of household wastes are not recycled. In their view, legal policies from governments are the sufficient approach to grow up recycling. While I believe that governments should impose recycling regulations on families, legislation alone may not be enough to cause a meaningful shift in recycling behaviour. To start, laws and regulations regarding household recycling play a crucial role in reducing the amount of home garbage. As we can see, recycling rates are far higher in countries where it is compulsory, such as Germany or Belgium, than in those where it is not. As a result, rules can ensure that everyone contributes to rubbish reduction while also providing a defined structure for recycling. Such legal measures can act as a powerful motivator, encouraging individuals to prioritize recycling in their daily lives or pausing or mitigating the trend of using disposable items such as plastic bags or non-rechargeable batteries, ultimately curbing the amount of domestic waste. On the other hand, it is essential to recognize that the success of recycling initiatives goes beyond legislation alone. Raising public knowledge of the importance of recycling and its good environmental impact can result in a more significant and long-lasting shift in people's behaviours. Educational programs can highlight the costs of excessive waste generation as well as the benefits of recycling, inspiring people to take proactive efforts toward appropriate waste management. Governments can work with educational institutions, media outlets, and community organizations to raise awareness about recycling and sustainable waste management techniques. To summarize, while I support the enforcement of recycling laws, I strongly believe in the significance of a holistic plan that combines legal demands with vigorous teaching initiatives. TASK: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws... Xem thêm![bao linh truong](/images/logo.png)
bao linh truong
17/2/2024
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The table depicts the expenditure on various types of products which is purchased by the utilizers in five countries in 2002. In general, the consumer staples were food, beverage and tobacco goods, which has the domain preference of customers among these countries. Particularly, although Turkey was the country surpassing other nation’s rate in this field of consumption, its consumers in costume and shoes products fell behind the others. Turkey took the leading role in both consumer staples and leisure or study spending with the proportion, respectively at 32.14% and 4.35%. Furthermore, the first rank in clothing and footwear amount was belonging to Italian users which accounted for 9%, and Turkey rank was positioned after that country during 2002. In contrast, Spain with a share of spending on entertainment and education at 1.98% received the least among all nations. Moreover, it reached the third position in two other features at 18.8% and 6.51%. In addition, the customers in Sweden utilizaing only 5.4% in clothes and shoes were the bottom one in this group. The table depicts the expenditure on various types of products which is purchased by the utilizers in five countries in 2002. In general, the consumer staples were food, beverage and tobacco goods... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/dc89257a-ef6d-40fe-9220-82dc70235469/1708168439_QdAKN3DEnU8mCUOTxSjAPsJ6lnsQcQ.png)
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Minh
18/2/2024
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of implementing a four-day workweek. What is your opinion on this matter? Support your view with relevant examples and explanations.
In this day and age, the strategy to balance between work and life is to reduce timework from 7 or 8 to 4 days per week, while some challenges and demerits are influenced not only for governments but also for civilians. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and give my opinion on this issue. On the one hand, begin with the positive aspects of a four-day work week. It can improve work-life balance to obtain better employee well-being. For example, in a study, if engineers, doctors, and teachers do not have enough time to relax because they work all day, their health may suffer a significant decline. So working along with entertainment activities such as playing sports, participating in concerts, and communicating with friends and parents prevents diseases in terms of mental or physical health such as coughs, headaches, or being almost exhausted. Furthermore, this strategy can enhance productivity because of a more rested workforce. Granted, some jobs may not take it up, like doctors, due to curing patients. However, others need free time to recover their energy and continue contributing to their workplace. For instance, by taking out 3 days per week, street-cleaning workers have time to spend with their families and then return with efficiency and productivity in the latest four days. On the other hand, shift focus to the potential drawbacks. It can be seen that there are possible challenges in customer service and business continuity. Some financial companies, such as banks, if their staff rests for 3 days, lose customers but must pay for annual operational costs and then go bankrupt. Admittedly, companies can cope with difficulties in coordinating with businesses and services operating on a traditional schedule. In particular, a wide variety of facilities that run into after-stop operations follow this idea. For example, water dumps need human to operate, which is difficult to adjust to not be harmful for nearby If a sudden stoppage occurs during resting-related time in 3 days in this infrastructure, they can lack the energy to maintain their lives, and then companies lose much more money as a result of the failed cooperation of other sides because they cannot facilitate residents' needs. Overall, it has some advantages, such as work-life balance and strengthening the activity; however, it can also bring about some disadvantages, such as bankruptcy or unsuccessful collaboration with business. From my perspective, this idea can be implemented with some jobs, which has slightly influenced nations. To deal with this matter, governments need to weigh up to gain job satisfaction. In this day and age, the strategy to balance between work and life is to reduce timework from 7 or 8 to 4 days per week, while some challenges and demerits are influenced not only for governments but... Xem thêm![Phạm Quang Tuấn](/images/logo.png)
Phạm Quang Tuấn
15/2/2024
Thầy cô chấm chữa dùm em với ạ
The line graph illustrates the figures of tourists visiting a Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. It is clear that the proportion of the visitor increased over the period shown. Additionally, the percentage of visitors staying on island is by far the most popular method of tourism in Caribbean Island. In 2010, of the two ways, travellars staying on island is higher than the one staying on cruise ship respective well over 0,5 million and slightly under 0,5 million which entirely 1 million for both. Following that between 2015 and 2016 two figure of tourers together had slightly decline at the same point close to 1,5 million By contrast in 2017, the rate of voyages in twice categories reached the highest point which was 2 million and 1,5 million respectively for visitors staying on cruise ship and visitons staying on on the island. Moreover, the quantites total reach 3 million which was at the top of every year of. The line graph illustrates the figures of tourists visiting a Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. It is clear that the proportion of the visitor increased over the period show... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/578a50bf-4cb9-49bc-96ec-9b3880f90efa/1707988146_Upffu1uVMg9dwvtwho6ba6Qpd5eSBo.jpg)
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Minh Phương
17/2/2024
Em chào thầy cô ạ. Đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em. Thầy cô chấm chữa hộ em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
The given table compares the usage of water for external, industrial, agricultural purposes in four countries, namely Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and Canada. Overall, it is clear that Canada is the largest country of using water in the domestic country and industry. While Egypt stands at the first rank in the agricultural field. Regarding Egypt and Canada, the percentages of water used in the latter are the highest numbers in the external country and industrial purposes, at 20% and 70% respectively while this figure in the former records a peak of 82% in agriculture. By contrast, there are only 8% and 10% respectively in the domestic and industry using water in Egypt. When it comes to Saudi Arabia and New Zealand, the rates of using water in the former are lower than these figures in New Zealand in domestic and industry, at 10% and 46% respectively. In contrast, this figure in Saudi Arabia is 20% higher than in New Zealand. The given table compares the usage of water for external, industrial, agricultural purposes in four countries, namely Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and Canada. Overall, it is clear that Canada is... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/5c62e115-cb0e-42b8-b819-5a5cce4aeeb2/1708160361_S9csFS0BTfzqEbOvctkTxGtb3yWXwZ.jpg)
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bao linh truong
18/2/2024
em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
In current, It is obvious to notice the appearance of many children with special gift in specific field such as sport or music. However, some has thought if the normal kids receive the good education, they will literally become an ideal person. It has been a prevalent and controversial debate for recent years. Therefore, this essay will elaborate further on both points and state my perspectives. On one hand, there are some people are born with the gift as an outstanding physical outcome, which helps them can deal with some stuff less hard than other one. Perhaps, it can be perfect ears that help to identify and distinguish different sounds precisely or strong legs that may run with noticaeble speech. In contrast, that number of special people is only accounting for small group of world’s population. Particularly, the normal people may not mean that they lose more opportunities than the talent one. Indeed, if the gifted person did not learn and pratise their talent frequently, they could not make it become their skills and be a famous sport person or musician. The good instruction plays a remarkable role in the succeed of children’s transformance of who they want to be. This is because most of offspring is highly susceptible to influence by the right guidance, which also bring out the clear direction for them to focus on and enhance themselves. Additionally, any child, who is willing to consume as much as time and effort, is all potential to make their own position in a certain field. For instance, to win the Olympic, which can be explained as a competition among different aspects in sport, needs candidates to try practising techniques day and night. Thus, every children have the same chance to learn and grow to be an ideal person. To sum up, the kid with talent may have more benefits to become a good sports person or musician, but I still think that practice makes perfect. Similarly, when the kid gains the good instruction and attempts to practise it regularly, they will be a sport person or musician. In current, It is obvious to notice the appearance of many children with special gift in specific field such as sport or music. However, some has thought if the normal kids receive the good education,... Xem thêm![](https://blubberbee.s3.ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/public/posts/23b98e89-1d00-4673-a6bc-ea1235138fc7/1708243947_EDsoK1vdPIW9pIU3SUtUFkvuMtoMv7.png)
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