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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?**
Bài làm:
The emergence of driverless automobiles has been predicted for several years. Indeed, nowadays, drivers have become more dependent on technology. Corporations in the automobile industry have attempted to produce fully-automated cars, one example of this is Tesla. Although the advantages is undeniable, there are varied reasons why they haven't been mass-produced.
On the one hand, artificial intelligence restricts the miscalculations made by humans. Even individuals who have experience in driving can be easily distracted when encounter a certain deterrent. Other than that, people's state of mind can also contribute as an influential factor. For example, lack of sleep can reduce the attention duration while controlling a vehicle. Although, in many cases, there will be no casualty caused due to these simple reasons, it is still important to bear in mind that there are chances that it will. Driverless vehicles, however, do not possess any emotions which can possibly lead to lack of focus. In addition, accidents resulting from alcohol usage and law violations will be completely avoided.
On the other hand, technology can not be depended on in every situation. Despite the advancement of technology, there are still numerous misfunctions in driverless automobiles. Take the example of a nation with frequent traffic congestion such as Vietnam. The advanced vehicles are designed to brake when there is an obstacle, should they be launched on Vietnamese roads, they will be unable to operate due to a shortage of space. Driverless technology is connected to GPS and satellites, which can be a target of hijacking or information theft. There are a variety of aspects to consider before relying completely on technology.
Along with all the disadvantages, there is the continuous development of technology indicating that shortly, the advantages will make up for these drawbacks. Thus, for the time being, in spite of the misjudgments that humans might make, driverless cars still require further innovation to be considered as an alternative option.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**In the future all cars, buses, and tr...
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Writing task 1 - Em rất mong được sự hỗ trợ của thầy cô ạ
The chart indicates the result of a survey about coffee and tea consumption habits of citizens in five cities in Australia.
Overall, people living in four cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide, and Hobart, tend to go to a café for these two beverages rather than buying fresh or instant coffee, with the exception of Adelaide’s citizens. Noticeably, Hobart saw the highest use of coffee over other cities.
The proportion of citizens in these cities who chose to buy fresh coffee was the lowest, with approximately 45% in Sydney, 40% in Melbourne, and Hobart, which was 5% higher than that of Brisbane and Adelaide. Meanwhile, Hobart claimed the first rank in purchasing instant coffee, with 55% of its residents. The next position belonged to Brisbane, Adelaide, and Melbourne, respectively, at about 50% of their citizen, while Sydney remained the last place with 5% lower.
The trend towards going to a café for drinks was dominant in Hobart, Sydney, and Melbourne, with above 60% of residents in each city, whereas the exact figure in Brisbane and Adelaide were relatively low, just about 55% and 50% respectively.
The chart indicates the result of a survey about coffee and tea consumption habits of citizens in five cities in Australia.
Overall, people living in four cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide...
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Writing Task 1: Process- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài: **The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.**
**Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.**
Bài làm:
The diagram illustrates the steps taken in the plastic-recycling process.
Overall, it can be observed that the procedure consists of nine individual parts, which can be distributed into three main phrases including categorizing, processing, and merchandizing the plastic waste.
In the first stage, consumer waste is delivered by garbage trucks to recycling centers for classification, in which it is divided into recyclable and non-recyclable trash manually. The recyclable trash, then, is compacted into separated blocks to enter the trash grinding machine. Soon after, small chunks of plastic, which result from the grinding process, are transferred into a water tank for cleansing. The washed plastics are transformed into pallets, which go through a machine to create finer and cleaner plastic particles. In the seventh step, these pallets are heated and later on, act as a component for making raw material. The raw material can be used in the production of a variety of goods, ranging from plastic containers to synthetic fibers for clothing and stationary products such as pencils. When it is the end of the product's life cycle, the process will repeated from the initial stage.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài: **The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic...
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài Writing task 1 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều.
TASK 1: The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
(BÀI LÀM)
The pie charts illustrate the study results related to reasons for doing MBA qualification, and the significant values which recruiters need most.
Overall, most individuals chose this degree because they believed that it would provide better job opportunities. Additionally, employers longed to choose their employees who had outstanding personality and previous experience (Knowledge), but the qualifications were estimated the last factor they considered.
In terms of the reasons for doing MBA, 65% was dominated by Better Job Opportunities, followed by Ability to Do job Better, accounting for 15%. Next, Personal Development was higher than Ability to Help Others, at 12% and 8%, respectively.
In connection with What Employers Value Most, there were a similar proportion for both Personality and Previous Experience (Knowledge), at 25% for each other. Surprisingly, Presentation/Appearance and Previous Experience (Connections) also had an alike number, registering 20%. Finally, Qualifications was the smallest factor when recruiters employed new workers, at 10%.
TASK 1: The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
(BÀI LÀM)
The pie charts illustrate the study results related to rea...
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Writing task 2, mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed.
What are the reasons for this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Bài viết:
Many fathers and mothers in those days are giving too much expectation on their kids which put them under pressure to be successful for several reasons. Although this tendency may be good in some aspects as it can help children to allocate full effort and energy to whatever they do aiming for success, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the benefits.
There are various reasons why parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. First, people often believe that success can bring a wealthy life to humans. Since children become successful in the future, they can have enough money to afford their daily stuff and have a peaceful state of mind. Moreover, it is a fact that when individuals are put under pressure, they tend to try their best in order to achieve accomplishment.
On the other hand, despite the heavy pressure can contribute to children’s efforts, it can also have negative effects on them. When kids are being put under a lot of pressure, their mental health is harmed, and do not want to spend time with their parents as they are sacrificed by their own families at a very young age. For instance, some parents seem not to be satisfied with their children’s education results although they’ve got great marks. Some dads and mums even compare their children with others to force them to strive for harder work. Furthermore, too much expectation can prone to inferiority of children, they always feel that they are worse than others and do not want to improve themselves anymore. In this case, this development is not an efficient method for adults to help their child better but just gives a converted consequence.
In conclusion, I consider this advance to be negative for both children and their parents. Adults prioritize success and are willing to put their beloved children under pressure as they want the young to conquer a better life but this is not the right way as it can do more harm than good to children's health and minds.
Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed.
What are the reasons for this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Bài viết:
Many fathers and mothers in those days are gi...
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Em mong thầy cô chấm bài Writing task 2 của e ạ, e cảm ơn :3 Q: Some people think that young people should go to university to further their
education, while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or
builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The topic of whether graduates should apply for a university degree as an executive education or they should commence working immediately has long been at the centre of discussion. I personally uphold the view that adults should seek a further education like a university degree.
On the on hand, car mechanics and builders provide essential services that contribute to the functioning of society.For example, construction workers will meet the needs of those who want to build a new house or renovate an old house. Moreover, they can have the opportunities for
hands-on learning.For instance, while going to school has to learn long and boring theories, those who work have been exposed to work, practiced and have a lot of experience.
On the other hand, university provides in-depth
knowledge and expertise in a
particular field of study.During time at university transferable skill will be developed which skills used every day professional work lives, social lives and home lives such as organising, managing time, working as part of a time. Besides, Individuals with a university degree
tend to earn higher salaries over their lifetimes compared to those without a degree. As it proves that workers have solid foundation knowledge as well ashave been trained in their field.
In conclusion, although working as car mechanics or builders presents certain advantages, i contend that is should not be encouraged due to that affects the quality of the salary, which is lower than that of people with a university degree. It can be predicted that communities should take measures to encourage adolescents to pursue higher education programs
The topic of whether graduates should apply for a university degree as an executive education or they should commence working immediately has long been at the centre of discussion. I personally uphold...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates how many tons of four types of waste were collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, the amount collected of all four types of waste increased over the period, with that of paper being generally the highest, while garden waste was consistently the least collected over the given time frame.
Regarding the two most common forms of waste, the amount of rubbish collected from paper in 2011 was 57 tons, after which it decreased steadily to the lowest point at 40 tonnes in 2013, being surpassed by glass waste, before recovering to peak at 70 tonnes in 2015. Meanwhile, the amount of trash collected from glass was generally lower than from paper, except for 2013 when it surpassed that of paper at the initial level of 48 tons to be the most collected, prior to inclining to the highest point at 52 tons in 2015, despite slight decreases to the lowest point at 41 tons in 2012 and to 46 tons in 2014.
Concerning the two remaining waste categories, the waste amount collected from tins was by far higher than that of gardens, hovering around 30 tons throughout the period, except for 2012 when both hit the low, with respective figures being 27 and 15 tons.
The bar graph illustrates how many tons of four types of waste were collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, the amount collected of all four types of waste increased over th...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graphs compare the mean protein and calorie consumption among four different areas around the world, namely India, East Africa, Latin America, and North America.
Overall, North America consistently has the highest protein and calorie intake, while the opposite was true for India. Additionally, North America is the only region where the consumption statistics in both categories exceed the recommended level.
Regarding average protein intake, its standard intake is nearly 70 units in total. The amount of animal protein consumed in North America is five times as much as that of other sources, with 62 and 18 units, respectively, overtaking the advised amount, while the figures for Latin America are much lower, at 32 and 13 units, in that order. However, the average animal-derived and other origins protein intake in India and East Africa are almost comparable, at around half each.
Concerning average calorie intake, North Americans account for the highest amount of around 3500 calories, surpassing the recommendation, while that of Latin Americans is just below the ideal level. Conversely, calorie intake amounts in East Africa and India are much lower, with respective figures being approximately 2400 and 2000 calories, with the latter being the lowest.
The bar graphs compare the mean protein and calorie consumption among four different areas around the world, namely India, East Africa, Latin America, and North America.
Overall, North America cons...
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writing task 1
The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.
The two maps illustrate some changes in Liverton docks infrastructure since 1980.
Overall, it is clear that in 1980 to today the most noticeable changes involving logistics and transport with facilities in education and residential areas.
Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that the northern part had two old warehouses and two cranes in 1980. Now, the crane is cut down and constructed as a sailing club, warehouse to replace the education centre and kid’s playground. In the river 1980 had five ships run through to the coast; after more than 40 years, they had only one ship museum.
The southern Liverton 1980 had one crane and one warehouse. At present, the warehouse is erected for apartments, parking and the crane converted to a hotel. Beside, the riverwalk runs along the river bank. At the moment, the addition bridge connecting the two sides of the river and flood barrier.
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The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.
The two maps illustrate some changes in Liverton docks infrastructure since 1980.
Overall, it is clear that in 1980 to today the most no...
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?**
Bài làm:
Advanced technology has become an important aspect of human life, especially in the way that consumers use and purchase goods. Along with the convenience and benefits that it brings, progress in logistics and e-commerce has created a throwaway society where overconsumption encourages buyers to view and treat items as disposable rather than sustainable. Whether there is more gain than loss, however, is a paradox.
On the one hand, the advancement in transportation and online trading creates a variety of options for buyers and, hence, a cheaper price to increase competitiveness. In the past, purchasing goods from overseas is restricted and costly. However, in 2024, any items can be ordered with just a click. Due to the explosion of consumption, large corporations are obligated to produce more affordable products to maintain their competitive advantages. One feasible approach to this problem is to reduce the quality of the product.
Mass production has created a throwaway society, one typical example is the fast fashion industry. Well-known brands, such as Zara and H&M, produce hundreds of millions of fashion duplications from other brands annually. Customers who purchase fast fashion can follow fashion trends without spending a large amount of money for more sustainable options. These items will often eventually be disposed of after a brief period of use, leading to an increasing amount of consumer waste.
In conclusion, despite the drawbacks that modern buying behaviors bring, there are, currently, no possible alternatives or solutions, therefore, consumers' lives will need to change accordingly.
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Em cảm ơn thầy cô. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều.
Đề bài:
**New technologies and ways of buying...
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Writing task 2 - Em rất mong được sự hỗ trợ của thầy cô ạ
Differences between countries are becoming less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world we see the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels.
To what extent do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?
In recent years, the trend toward globalization has led to the widespread of films, fashion, brands, advertisements, and TV channels. While this situation can benefit the worldwide economy, it leaves an even more significant downside to cultural diversity.
On the one hand, blurring barriers between countries can facilitate the development of the mutual economy. By sharing the similarities in films and fashion trends, the cooperation between intercontinental enterprises working in these industries is much more viable. For instance, if the global fashion trends have many things in common, fashion brands can expand their businesses by establishing branches in other countries. This connection not only helps them generate more profit but also creates more job opportunities in society, ensuring the quality and overall well-being of local individuals in host countries.
On the other hand, globalization leads to the reduction of cultural diversity. Due to the widespread traditions of developed countries through movies or TV broadcasting, individuals in developing parts will have a higher chance to approach and be amazed by such traditions. Hollywood blockbusters, for example, promote American culture through most of their products. As a result, audiences will show the propensity to imitate foreign cultures and neglect the traditions of their own countries. In the long term, this phenomenon will lead to loss of cultural identity and patriotism among various countries worldwide.
In conclusion, while globalization can boost economic growth, this trend can significantly impact the cultural aspects of many countries. Therefore, I assume that the downsides eclipse the advantages of this trend.
Differences between countries are becoming less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world we see the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels.
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writing task 1
The two bar charts below give us information about the prime reasons that students are interested in studying in accordance with age and the number of help they can receive from employers.
The first graph shows us that there is a gradual decrease in studying reasons for career with age. Starting off with 80% of students under 26 study for career. That figure gradually declines by 10%-20% followed by age every decade and finally hits the lowest point at nearly 20% with age over 49 years old. Conversely, a growth of number reasons studying for interest among students followed by age shows the whole frame. As is observed, there is only 10% of under 26 years old studying out of interest. The figure climbs slowly till the beginning of the fourth decade and increases dramatically in late adulthood. Nearly the same number of 40-49 years old study for career. In the final stage, 70% of students study for interest in comparison to 18% studying for career.
The second graph illustrates the support of employers that reach the maximum number of approximately 60% for the under 26 years old students. This figure drops rapidly to nearly 32% up to the third decade, then gradually grows and gets over 40% at the late adulthood of life.
The two bar charts below give us information about the prime reasons that students are interested in studying in accordance with age and the number of help they can receive from employers.
The first...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table compares business activities between the Australian department and online stores in terms of number, profit, revenue, and growth in 2011.
Overall, it is clear that web-based stores’ figures were consistently higher than their physical counterparts. Despite this, the latter achieved greater business efficiency.
Regarding the two first criteria, online stores were on a greater scale compared to the department ones in terms of quantity, almost five times greater, with 368 and 67 stores, respectively. However, profits gained by offline stores nearly equalled the figures for those operated online, with 807 and 863 AUD dollars, in that order.
Concerning the two remaining categories, although the growth recorded in department stores was 0.4%, which was 0.2% lower than the online stores, the sales revenue generated was just 700 AUD dollars lower than their online counterparts, with respective figures being 12700 and 13400 AUD dollars.
The table compares business activities between the Australian department and online stores in terms of number, profit, revenue, and growth in 2011.
Overall, it is clear that web-based stores’ figur...
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Grade For writing Task 1
The bar chart gives an overall view about the percentage of men and women working in different careers in the year 1970.
As can be seen in the bar, it is noticeable that male dominated most of the profession given. In particular, of 11 professions, Jurrists, Accountants, economists and Architects engineers saw the biggest difference between two genders, with man accounting for over 90 percent and women never exceeding 10%. A similar pattern was also recorded in Physical Scientists, Medical, and Statisticist Mathematicians, but with a narrower gap, a difference of nearly 70%. Meanwhile, the proportion of male continued to outnumber its counterpart in all three teacher levels, with male taking up from 60% to 70%, and female contributing to the remaining.
In remarkable contrast, however, with the last profession, nearly 100% nursing and midwives were women, leaving a mere 1% for men. To recap, in 1970, men took up most of the working positions, except nursing and midwives where women actually made up approximately 100%.
The bar chart gives an overall view about the percentage of men and women working in different careers in the year 1970.
As can be seen in the bar, it is noticeable that male dominated most of the pr...
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• Task 1: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe, and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph given demonstrates the percentage of unemployees in three particular regions (the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan) throughout the period of 15 years commencing in 1993.
Overall, while the unemployment rate of the UK and the rest of Europe witnessed downward trends, the opposite was true for Japan. Additionally, the proportion of the unworked population in the rest of Europe was taking the lead for most of the examined period.
In 1993, the rate of unemployment in the UK reached a peak of about 11%, which was 2% and 9% higher than that of the rest of Europe and Japan respectively. However, the figure for the UK consistently decreased and met that of Japan at 5% in 2001, while the share of unemployed people in the rest of Europe rose slightly by more than 3% in 1997 before dropping to about 9% again after 4 years.
Accounting for the same rate in 2001, the share of unworked people in the UK remained stable for 4 years until 2005 before increasing to 6% at the end of the period, whereas that of Japan experienced a small rise by 1% in 2003 and fell to 4% in 2007. Although ranking the highest rate of unemployment, the figure for the rest of Europe kept falling until reached approximately 8% in 2007.
• Task 1: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe, and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comp...
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The line graph illustrates data about how many students have the enrollment in Sheffield University in three different countries,namely Iranian,Greek and Turkish over a period of4 years , starting form 2005
Overall, Both the number of students in Iran and Turkey witness upward trends over given period.However,In Greece, the variety of students experienced contrasting movement if comparing with students in the others countries
Frist,In 2005, The number of student in turkey grow significantly by just 100, then continued its upward trend more slightly to over 120. Secondly ,in 2005, there was a steep rise of 60 in Iran, which led to sharp growth to 160 in 2009.Lastly, In Greece, The number of students decreased dramatically from 180 to over 40 between 2005 and 2009
In 2005 , The number of students in Greece ranked first in three countries, then Iran is second most significant and the last is turkey. After 4 years, The number of students in Iran standed first instead of Greece . Then the second is Turkey and the last is Greece .
The line graph illustrates data about how many students have the enrollment in Sheffield University in three different countries,namely Iranian,Greek and Turkish over a period of4 years , starting fo...
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The diagram compares the layout of typical offices in America and Japan. Overall, there are several differences between both types of office in terms of exhibition. Additionally, working in groups is the norm in Japanese offices, while separated working spaces are emphasized in American ones.
Regarding seat arrangement, in the Japanese office, employees are divided into different groups, with each group being positioned symmetrically and directly supervised by a section manager, who also has the responsibility of reporting to a department manager sitting in the top centre of the office. Meanwhile, in the American office, two rows of L-shaped cubicles for employees are situated in the centre of the office, while the employers work in individual offices on the right.
Concerning other facilities, windows are placed behind the department manager in the Japanese office, while these are installed on either side of the American one. Moreover, the American office is equipped with a printer copier, a storage facility, and two conference rooms, all of which are not provided in the Japanese office.
The diagram compares the layout of typical offices in America and Japan. Overall, there are several differences between both types of office in terms of exhibition. Additionally, working in groups is...
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The bar graph illustrates three transportation preferences, namely car, motorcycle, and bicycle, among young individuals in four countries, namely the UK, the US, Germany, and France.
Overall, cars are the most popular form of transport in nearly all nations examined, except for Germany, while the opposite is true for bicycles, apart from the US.
Regarding petrol-operated vehicles, travelling by car is mostly chosen by young people in France (just over three-quarters), followed closely by the UK and the US (at 60% each), while this is the lowest in Germany, at just 40%. Conversely, one-third of young people in the US choose to travel by motorcycle, nearly half more than their German counterparts (around 15%), while only one-tenth of those in the UK and France do so.
Concerning the environmentally friendly option, travelling by bicycle is the most preferred by German youth, with nearly half of the young population, 15% higher than those in the UK, at just one-third. Meanwhile, just over one-tenth of French youngsters choose to travel by this method of transport, 5% higher than their American counterparts, which is the lowest.
The bar graph illustrates three transportation preferences, namely car, motorcycle, and bicycle, among young individuals in four countries, namely the UK, the US, Germany, and France.
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The action of working or traveling for a year between completing high school and commencing university studies is encouraged in some countries. This essay will provide a detailed explanation of both the positive and negative impacts of this policy on pupils.
First of all, the most obvious advantage is not only to focus on the aim of providing students with an approved period of time that can provide them with relaxation but also nurturing and developing their ability and their soul. As a result of a hard-working period or long-term traveling, students could achieve and store a series of necessary skills that are in high demand skills in the future. Another point to make is that taking a long time to work after ending high school and preparing before entering the university can support pupils earning an amount of good pocket money and purchasing whatever is in accordance with their urgent demands.
However, if students spend too much time working or traveling, there is a possibility that they will forget almost all the knowledge that they learned previously. Moreover, they can be affected and suffer a commonly-undeniable obsession with money. Indeed, money can certainly satisfy every need of humans whether these are physiological, safety, or belongingness and love needs. Money can change students' lives, afterward ruining study commitment and putting them into endlessly purchasing money.
In conclusion, between the period graduating from high school and beginning university coursework, I would argue that pupils should spend a year working or traveling. They should be aware of their ultimate aim when following this policy, nevertheless, avoiding becoming much dependent on it.
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In some countries, students live with their family while studying at a university. In other countries, students attend university in another city. Do you think the advantages of living away from family home while attending university outweigh the disadvantages?
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For higher education, some students choose to move to a new city, while others continue living with their parents. While both options offer unique advantages and challenges, I firmly believe that the benefits of living away from home outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, moving away from home for university education poses challenges related to costs and mental health. Chief among these is the increase in their spending, as there might be a monthly rent attached to their accommodation, and they cannot save on utility and food bills by bulk buying them with their parents. Another major issue lies in the lack of emotional support. Specifically, those having to relocate might not have the company of old friends or family members who can offer them encouragement and advice in the face of hard times, affecting their mental well-being and academic performance.
In contrast, living away from home offers tremendous advantages that promote personal growth and academic success. The first benefit relates to an independent lifestyle. If university students reside separately with their families, they are generally fully responsible for both their academic and personal lives, gradually becoming more self-reliant when making their own decisions in terms of their daily schedules, majors, and relationships. Moreover, living away from home provides students with an environment conducive to academic focus and achievement. Students may devote more time and attention to their studies, and this increased focus frequently results in greater academic success.
To summarize, while living away from home for a university degree might be difficult in terms of expense and mental health, the benefits far exceed the drawback. This experience provides students with tremendous personal growth and intellectual possibilities, transforming them into well-rounded individuals ready to face the difficulties of the modern world.
In some countries, students live with their family while studying at a university. In other countries, students attend university in another city. Do you think the advantages of living away from famil...
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