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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêm






Thao Phuong
21/5/2024
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
Task 2: In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Opinions diverge on whether high income levels for people are beneficial to the nation or salaries should be regulated and limited by the government. This essay will shed light on both views before concluding that restricting the maximum income individuals can earn is more advantageous for national development. On the one hand, proponents of excessive wage levels for employees may cite economic prosperity as their primary argument. It is a fact that as average income increases, so does the tax revenue from residents, which results in economic growth. Furthermore, earning substantial compensation packages serves as an incentive for workers. It is evident that employees who demonstrate competence and remarkable achievements at work are often rewarded with high salaries. This can have a positive motivational influence on other individuals to boost their productivity. However, this line of reasoning is not sound since the effects of paying astronomical wage levels are linked to social issues such as the increase in income gap and crime rate, which affect national development negatively. On the other hand, the government should impose a ceiling on personal earnings to promote income equality and reduce crime rate. Differences in income level contribute to significant wealth gaps, which leads to the increase in poverty and financial hardship; therefore, the government should ensure that wealth is evenly distributed throughout a country by setting a limit on people’s earnings. Moreover, it is hardly undeniable that a significant gap between low and high salaries can cause a disaffection among individuals at work, leading to social conflicts. On top of that, countries with a considerable income gap tend to have higher poverty and crime rates compared to those with narrower economic disparities. Hence, it is necessary for the government to cap individuals’ earnings to foster a more equitable and harmonious society. In conclusion, despite seeming benefits associated with high employee incomes, I side with the opponents of such an idea and believe that constraining the amount individuals can make can have a positive effect on national development. Task 2: In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the... Xem thêm
Lê Minh Khuê
21/5/2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2
Technology is responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, it is clear that unemployment is one of the major concerns in a large number of governments. Because of this, the reason why people are jobless has always been a much debated topic. It is believed that up-to-date devices are attributed to the lack of jobs. In my opinion, I would argue that there are different reasons that affect the problem of being out of work. There is no doubt that technology takes responsibility for the unemployment rate. Obviously, modern devices are exchanging man in manufacturing. One typical example is the robots which not only are extremely intelligent but also complete tasks rapidly. Hence, they are faster and more productive than humans, which helps companies save their time and cost. As a result, these companies have a tendency to use these modern devices instead of humans, especially low-skilled labours, for their production lines, which increases the unemployment rate in many nations. For instance, most technological corporations apply high-tech automotive lines to produce their product, in which robots carry out most of the tasks. Consequently, there will be job cuts in their company and only keep high-skilled workforces to operate the complicated systems. In short, technological devices are used in many industries, bringing about the decline in workforces so the unemployed considerably rise. However, there are various factors that are responsible for unemployment. The first one is the oversupply of workers when many people only pursue a few trendy specializations. This results in the high competence in these fields whose demand is minimal. The enormous layoff wave in the information technology industry is the typical example of the surplus of labours. Because of the hurdles in COVID-19, these companies have laid off most of their low-skilled workers, which puts an alarming rate of unemployment. In addition, the second aspect is the absence of recruitment agencies. Because the authorities do not express much concern about these institutions, they marginally invest money on involved projects. Moreover, job agencies usually are non-profit corporations whose purpose is only to help the unemployed find suitable jobs. For this reason, only a few people can access these career institutions, which gives less opportunity to find occupations for job-seekers. For example, without these employment agencies, it is hard for graduated students who mainly do not have much experience to look for suitable companies to work and enhance their skills. As a consequence, the number of jobless students gradually increases yearly, which triggers issues for the government. In conclusion, some people think that advanced technology is blamed for unemployment. From my perspective, the jobless issue is affected by other factors such as the excess of labor supply and the lack of job agencies. Mong được thầy cô chấm ạ Technology is responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, it is clear that unemployment is one of the major concerns in a large number of governments. Because of... Xem thêm
Lee Wenyong
23/5/2024
KHÁM PHÁ CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH MIỄN PHÍ HÀNG TUẦN CỦA POMBEEBEE
Có một sự thật hiển nhiên là, bạn sẽ không thể cải thiện kỹ năng nói của mình nếu không bắt đầu NÓI. Bạn có thể đi học nói ở một khóa học nào đó, nhồi nhét rất nhiều từ vựng hay ho hoặc nằm lòng tất cả các cấu trúc ngữ pháp, nhưng nếu như bạn không THỰC SỰ MỞ MIỆNG VÀ BẮT ĐẦU NÓI, những kiến thức mà bạn học được sẽ không thể được áp dụng. Hiểu được vấn đề đó, các giáo viên ở Pombeebee mong muốn đưa đến cho các bạn một câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh hoàn toàn MIỄN PHÍ và CHẤT LƯỢNG. Hiện nay buổi học đang được diễn ra trong hai khung giờ: - Tối thứ 7 hàng tuần (thời gian từ 20h-22h) - Sáng Chủ nhật hàng tuần (thời gian từ 9h-11h) Buổi học sẽ được dẫn dắt bởi thầy Lee Wenyong, founder của Pombeebee. Các bạn có thể tìm hiểu thêm về thầy ở đây: https://pombeebee.com/vi/pombeebee-english-club Ngoài ra sẽ có thêm giáo viên là người Việt Nam có thể hỗ trợ các bạn nếu gặp bất cứ khó khăn gì trong xuyên suốt buổi học. Dù bạn đang ở trình độ nào, trong câu lạc bộ, chúng mình sẽ cố gắng khuyến khích bạn nói nhiều nhất có thể, đưa ra cho bạn những lời khuyên để giúp bạn cải thiện được khả năng nói và sự tự tin của mình. Về cách thức tiến hành, buổi chia sẻ sẽ diễn ra hoàn toàn bằng hình thức online. Sau khi bạn đăng ký và được xác nhận tham gia, trước mỗi buổi 15 phút, chúng mình sẽ gửi link google meet cho bạn. Trong mỗi buổi, chúng ta sẽ cùng nhau thảo luận về một vấn đề nào đó (bạn nào chuẩn bị thi IELTS Speaking sẽ thấy những chủ đề này là cực kỳ quen thuộc). Trong quá trình học, thầy giáo sẽ hướng dẫn các bạn kỹ năng nói, giới thiệu các cụm từ vựng bổ ích và cả tư duy logic khi trình bày bài nói của mình nữa đấy! Số lượng thành viên tham gia cũng sẽ giới hạn dưới 15 bạn để bảo đảm chất lượng của buổi nói và để tất cả các bạn đều có cơ hội tham gia chia sẻ ý kiến của mình. Sau mỗi buổi học, bạn sẽ nhận được toàn bộ bản ghi âm buổi học để có thể nghe lại bất cứ lúc nào, đồng thời bạn sẽ nhận được file pdf ghi chép lại tất cả các từ vựng và ví dụ hay được sử dụng và hướng dẫn bởi thầy giáo để giúp các bạn có thể ôn tập và ứng dụng sau này. Để tham khảo nội dung buổi học diễn ra, bạn có thể vào link bên dưới. Đây chính là buổi học đầu tiên được diễn ra vào tuần trước! https://pombeebee.com/en/courses/57 Sau khi bạn đăng ký tham gia, bạn hãy vào phần AI để nhận thông báo xác nhận đăng ký thành công và thông tin về buổi học nhé! Hẹn gặp các bạn vào buổi học cuối tuần này nha! Có một sự thật hiển nhiên là, bạn sẽ không thể cải thiện kỹ năng nói của mình nếu không bắt đầu NÓI. Bạn có thể đi học nói ở một khóa học nào đó, nhồi nhét rất nhiều từ vựng hay ho hoặc nằm lòng tất c... Xem thêm






ludyoh4
20/5/2024
Mong thầy cô chấm bài giúp em ạ, em xin chân thành cảm ơn
Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weeknesses. Is it right to exclude men/ women from certain professions because of their gender? It is traditionally believed that there should be a clear gender distribution between suitable jobs, however, this is untrue in modern times in which males and females have the right to be equally represented in various jobs. In my opinion, gender equality must be strongly encouraged in either way. There are some good arguments stating there are some posts that should be mainly dominated by men or women as well as having all-men or all-women fields since both genders possess distinct abilities and characteristics. For instance, patients in hospitals are well appreciative of having female nurses take good care of them, while in manual labours like mining, and logging, males have a stronger presence than their counterparts. Nevertheless, women and men ought to be allowed greater freedom of choice, instead of being rounded by old-fashioned prejudice. It is well explained to be advantageous having males to take over female-predominated posts and vice versa. For a clearer illustration, if women become police officers, their creative thinking and deep understanding of the cases will help them find an appropriate strategy and tackle the situation easily. On the other hand, if there are male teachers, they probably have a better understanding of young boys’ needs and serve as good role models for them. In conclusion, it depends on different cases whether a job should have the full involvement of men or women or that they can choose according to their desire. However, to benefit the most from this development, it is important not to expect males and females to approach work in identical ways. Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weeknesses. Is it right to exclude men/ women from certain professions because of their gender? It is traditionally believed that the... Xem thêm
Nguyễn Trần Kim Ngân
21/5/2024
Mong được thầy cô chấm bài writing task 1 của em. Em xin cảm ơn Thầy Cô
The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate The given pie charts detail the answer of a respondent of juveniles cultural and activities. Overall, it can be seen that computer games is the most popular relaxation activities for boys, while the opposite was true for reading. Dancing is the highest respondents for girls activities, while listening to music is the least chose in this reported. It is clearly that both generals had exactly 10% of children chose listening to music. The proportion of boys who chose computer games in their free time was nearly a third, 18% higher than that of girls. The percentage of girls who voted for reading was just over 10 times as much as that of boys (2%) Others hobbies of boys were 26% for basketball, compared to 17% for soccer. Likewise, less than a fifth of girls chose netball as opposed to under a third for dancing. The proportion of girls choosing gymnastics equals that of boys choosing skateboarding (11%) The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activi... Xem thêm


Cuong
21/5/2024
People say that it is a waste of time for high school students to learn literature such as novels and poems. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?
Many individuals think that there is no point learning literature at high school since it is a time-consuming and tedious subject. From my perspective, I am wholeheartedly of the contradictory viewpoint due to some reasons being clarified in this essay. It is undeniable that learning literature can bring various positive impacts on the personal development of students. Apparently, literature lessons have the tendency to connect with historical events and upheavals. Hence, studying literature can help young people to be more aware of their history and ethnicity, thereby reinforcing the cultural identity of their nation. For example, in Vietnam, there is an abundance of literary works written in the periods of war. By learning this, students will have a higher sense of gratitude for the sacrifice of their ancestors, thus being motivated to maintain and enhance their homeland. Another advantage that can be obtained from literature is that it can cultivate students’ creativity as well as foster their communication skills. Taking communication skill as a good illustration, many companies these days require employees who have good eloquence and language proficiency, which can facilitate them to get more lucrative contracts. Therefore, learning literature appears to be beneficial as it makes significant contributions to their future career prospects. In conclusion, although literature may not arouse students’ interest in some way due to traditional pedagogical styles, the situation can be improved by integrating technology and other activities to make lessons become more attractive. Hence, my firm conviction is that literature should be a compulsory subject thanks to the merits it brings to students. Many individuals think that there is no point learning literature at high school since it is a time-consuming and tedious subject. From my perspective, I am wholeheartedly of the contradictory viewpoi... Xem thêm
Bùi Hà Bảo Ngọc
22/5/2024
Task 1 mong được các thầy cô chấm ạ
The charts illustrate how much time students in five universities spent on studying, which are separated into weekdays and weekends. Overall, the number of student’s hours is generally equal among five universities on weekdays. However, it reveals significant differences on the weekends. The figure for university A accounts for the highest study hour, in comparison with university D which is the lowest one. Turning to the details, 9 was the hours students in university A studied which far exceeds that of university D at 5.6 hours. Moreover, the figure for university B also shows a great number, at 8.6 hours. University C is 1.6 hours more than university E, with respectively datas being 7.8 hours and 6.2 hours. On weekdays, university C illustrates a hard study time at considerably 10.6 hours. The rest of 4 universities’s figure hovers around 10 hours with 10.1 hours of university B, 10 hours of university E. University A and D’s study hours are lower at respectively 9.8 hours and 9.6 hours. The charts illustrate how much time students in five universities spent on studying, which are separated into weekdays and weekends. Overall, the number of student’s hours is generally equal among fi... Xem thêm


Cuong
21/5/2024
The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed
The table demonstrates the sources which invested in the police budget, while the pie charts illustrates the expenditure on three categories in a specific region of Britain in 2017 and 2018. Overall, it is apparent that the police budget shows a growth with the majority being contributed by the government. Regarding the pie charts, Spending on salaries dominated in both years, while the opposite was true for that on technology. Looking at the table, the total amount of money allocated to police budget rose from £304.7 million to £318.6 million. Particularly, the government invested £175.5 million, followed by a lower figure of £91.2 million by local taxes. Until 2018, the former increased slightly to £177.8 million and still headed the list, whereas the latter experienced a great acceleration by £11.1 million. Additionally, other sources contributed a similar amount of money in two years, around £38 million. Regarding the distribution of the budget, in 2017, three quarters of it was spent on wages, that figure dwindled moderately to 69% in 2018. By contrast, expenditure on technology merely accounted for 8% in 2017 before stepping up to 14% in the next year. Notably, spending on buildings and transport remained stable at 17%. The table demonstrates the sources which invested in the police budget, while the pie charts illustrates the expenditure on three categories in a specific region of Britain in 2017 and 2018. Overall,... Xem thêm


Lê Minh Khuê
21/5/2024
Mong được thầy cô chấm ạ
The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant The two pie charts given illustrate the comparison between the percentage of different types of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 and the forecast in 2040. Generally, the proportion of renewable energy capacity is expected to increase after 25 years, when that of solar energy will be the highest rise. Conversely, the figure for fossil fuels which make up the highest portion over the period considerably decreased. Additionally, the total capacity for all energy in gigawatts is predicted to be nearly double in the 25-year period. It can be seen that there will be a significant decrease in the percentage of fossil fuels’ capacity, which will fall by 20% from 64% in 2015 to 44% in 2040. However, that of fossil fuels will still be the highest among all energy in the future, approximately 5000 GW over 11.678 GW in total in 2040. Besides, making up only 2% in 2015, the proportion of solar energy volume is anticipated to increase nine times to 18% in 2040, becoming the highest in three important renewables recorded. Over the period given, the figure for wind energy will go up from 5% to 12% while that of nuclear energy is predicted to slightly decrease by 1% to 5%, which will be the lowest in all types of energy mentioned. Similarly, the percentage of other renewables capacity is forecasted to marginally decline from 23% to 21% for 25 years. In addition, the number of all energy capacity in GW will rise two times from 6688 GW in 2015 to 11.678 GW in 2040. The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make... Xem thêm


Phạm Thị Thu Thủy
19/5/2024
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ <3 em chân thành cảm ơn
The chart illustrates the number of three kinds of visitors to a museum from 1997 to 2012. Overall, the quantity of adult visitors always comprised the vast majority during the given period, while there was only a minority in special exhibition visitors over the given time frame. Furthermore, all three categories saw a fluctuation over 15 years. In 1997, adult visitors started with the highest number among three categories with 300,100 people, which nearly doubled that of visitors in the under-15 group (120,000 people). Meanwhile, special exhibition visitors lagged behind, which consisted of only 28,000 people. Five years later, the figure for the three categories experienced slight changes. The number of adult visitors and special exhibition visitors increases moderately, to around 1,100 and 1,200 individuals respectively. By contrast, the number of visitors aged under 15 decreased gently to 110,000 people in 2002. Notably, in 2007, the number of adult visitors reached a peak of 400, 500 people then eventually fell to 380,000 in 2012. In addition, visitors aged under 15 dropped to 87,000 in 2007, ultimately reaching 82,300 in 2012. Turning to special exhibition visitors, this category saw an upward trend, rose to 37,700 in 2007 and reached 42,000 after five years. The chart illustrates the number of three kinds of visitors to a museum from 1997 to 2012. Overall, the quantity of adult visitors always comprised the vast majority during the given period, while the... Xem thêm


Lê nguyễn uyên chi
19/5/2024
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa ạ
The given two charts illustrate how many people rated the hotel’s customer service in two intervals: 2005 and 2010. Overall, there was an increase in the percentage of callers considering the hotel’s customer service as excellent and good, except for that of three remaining reactions under scrutiny, with the most dramatic growth in the figures for excellent and good in two years. Building on the overall upward trend, the visitor proportions assessed the hotel’s customer service as excellent which represented a considerable climb from 5% to 28% over the span. Likewise, the data for good reactions skyrocketed enormously from 14% to 39%, showcasing the similar growth in two separate times. In terms of satisfactory, poor and very poor judges, the data for these responses sparkly contrasted with that of excellent and good, when a significant fall was observed from 45% to 17%, 21% to 12% and 15% to 4%, with the respective figures, under two intervals examined. The given two charts illustrate how many people rated the hotel’s customer service in two intervals: 2005 and 2010. Overall, there was an increase in the percentage of callers considering the hotel’s... Xem thêm


vitkunn
17/5/2024
Mong thầy cô chấm bài part 2 của em ạ!!
Đề bài: Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Essay: In this technology driven world, numerous individuals from adults to children are inclined to work and study from home on account of the low cost,accessibility and convenience. From my viewpoint, such development is positive due to the aforementioned reasons. On the one hand, working or studying from home do not waste much expense.Take an illustration of transportation.Every day, it takes people a great amount of time and expenditure even if they commute to working spaces or schools. Plus, there is a possibility of having several spontaneous fees, which can gradually spoil their savings. In this regard, working from home not only alleviates the money spent but also helps with addressing redundant expenses on a daily basis. Another point to consider is that it is effortless to approach. The proliferation of the Internet has overcame geographic barrier; hence, working at home is a sustainable option. In fact, there is no fear of losing interaction with others when several social sites perhaps can fulfill that need. With those platforms, they are able to resolve and discuss work without stepping out of their homes. Additionally, it allows them to flexibly regulate their schedules. Albeit the same official working and learning hours, they can properly decide which task to do first, then which is the second to enhance productivity without being criticized. This may make learning and working more comfortable. In short, while it is clear that there is a great deal of shortcomings with this latest method of working, it is undeniable that the benefits are even more superior. Đề bài: Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive... Xem thêm
AnGia
16/5/2024
Nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài writing TASK 2 ạ
ĐỀ: Employers should be concerned about the quality of their employees' work instead of how they dress. Do you agree or disagree ? There has been a growing concern over that it is crucial for the employers to concentrate on the work quality of the employees instead of being concerned about how they dress. From my perspective , I strongly agree with this statement for many reasons. It is vital for the employers to acknowledge that the labor productivity is the fundamental contributor to the promotion of businesses’ economy. The employers play a paramount role in helping their employees to improve and move up the career ladder. In other words, if the managers put their efforts on training their staffs including following their working performance and find their strength and weakness, it can help the worker to cultivate relevant job skills , acquiring experience working that contribute to the promotion opportunities . As a result , the potential employees have ability to innovate the products that are not only ideal but also creative, boosting firms’ economy and reputation. Another reason why I believe that is limiting the way employees dress leads to the loss of their job satisfaction . This is because when being observed by higher-ups , it makes employees uncomfortable and stressed out about the strict working environment. However, if the workers are allowed to dress in the free way , depending on their preferences, it leads to the enhancement of creativity and comfort. As a result , the employers can provide their employees with the not only friendly but also effective working environment. In conclusion , it is more crucial for the employers to pay attention to the quality at work than focusing on the clothes which the workers dress. ĐỀ: Employers should be concerned about the quality of their employees' work instead of how they dress. Do you agree or disagree ? There has been a growing concern over that it is crucial fo... Xem thêm
Lê nguyễn uyên chi
18/5/2024
MONG THẦY CÔ CHẤM CHỮA ẠA
The given table compares data on the quantities of cars produced in three different nations in 2003, 2006 and 2009. Overall, there was an increase in the car numbers generated in two countries, except for that of Australia under scrutiny, with the most dramatic rise being seen in the figures for Thailand. Furthermore, this nation held the highest numbers over the period. Examining the data more closely, the cars being produced in Argentina which started at 235,088 million cars, after which it experienced a significant growth to 352,759 cars in 2006. Likewise, the figures for Thailand began at 452,163 cars, and then soared enormously to 1,162,356 cars in the corresponding period. Meanwhile, 452,163 cars were made in Australia in 2003, with a subsequent fall to 341,268 cars by 2006. Shifting to the duration from 2006 to 2009, the statistics for Argentina climbed slightly to 466,089 cars in 2009, whereas the number of cars made in Australia and Thailand witnessed a downward trend when descended considerably from 341,268 to 245,264 cars and 1,162,356 to 999,963 cars, respectively, showcasing the parallel decline patterns during the evaluated timeframe. The given table compares data on the quantities of cars produced in three different nations in 2003, 2006 and 2009. Overall, there was an increase in the car numbers generated in two countries, excep... Xem thêm


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18/5/2024
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Writing Task 1
The map illustrates how a medical centre was changed between 2008 and 2010. Overall, the centre was expanded with the addition of other facilities, catering for storage, familial, educational, and pharmaceutical needs. In 2008, the main entrance led right to the reception area, behind which was the staff office, while a laboratory was on the right of the entrance. Meanwhile, visitors could wait in a room located on the left of the entrance, leading to a corridor that divided the centre into two separate areas. Alongside the corridor was a treatment room on the far left-hand side, followed by three doctor’s offices. Two years later, the centre underwent several significant modifications. On the far right of the corridor was a newly-built office for medical practitioners, adjacent to which was a new store room. Moreover, the free space on the left of the waiting room was expanded, allowing a room for studying and another for mother and child to be constructed. Finally, the vacant part behind the laboratory was utilised for the instalment of a pharmacy. The map illustrates how a medical centre was changed between 2008 and 2010. Overall, the centre was expanded with the addition of other facilities, catering for storage, familial, educational, and... Xem thêm


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18/5/2024
It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct. There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
The debate surrounding the natural occurrence of animal extinction and the human responsibility to prevent it continues to be a topic of contention. One school of thought holds that extinction is an inherent aspect of nature and should not be a concern. However, I believe that human actions have a significant impact on the extinction rates of some animals, necessitating intervention to preserve biodiversity. On the one hand, it is understandable that the extinction of animals has always taken place naturally. The primary reason behind this thinking is that geological records show that mass extinctions periodically reset the stage for new life forms to emerge and evolve. For example, numerous dinosaurs, along with other species, were eradicated by a historical catastrophe. This event coincided with the period when Homo sapiens had not yet come into existence. Therefore, it is a stretch to say that natural phenomena, including volcanic activity and climate shifts, are of paramount importance for the dramatic changes in biodiversity. However, the rate of human actions, especially rampant poaching, is more pressing and positively correlates with the dramatic decrease in many species' populations. Moreover, industrial and agricultural activities, while contributing to the healthier economy of the state, partly cause animals to grapple with the challenges of destroyed natural habitats, a dearth of food resources, and poor reproductive conditions. Besides, it is undeniable that many organisms, such as bees and other pollinators, are at the core of maintaining the delicate balance of ecosystems by facilitating the reproduction of flowering plants and ensuring the production of fruits and trees. Secondly, protecting wild animals yields multiple economic benefits, as they play an important role in helping tourism succeed by attracting not only domestic tourists but also international ones. In particular, while extinction is a natural process with historical precedence, human activities also play a crucial role in the extinction of species, necessitating attention to the benefits of safeguarding ecosystems and contributing to the prosperity of the country. Therefore, there is a need for holistic conservation measures. The debate surrounding the natural occurrence of animal extinction and the human responsibility to prevent it continues to be a topic of contention. One school of thought holds that extinction is an i... Xem thêm
Cuong
16/5/2024
It is important for people to take risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
In this contemporary society, taking risks is said to hold an essential part in the development of individual lives as well as career path. From my perspective, although risk-takers can experience undesirable failures and disappointment, my firm conviction is that the prospective benefits of accepting hazardous challenges are far more significant than the disadvantages involved. It is understandable why taking risks may pose some certain demerits to people’s lives. As a matter of fact, people can be confronted with various difficulties which require great effort and capacity to handle. For example, discouraged by those hardships, besides losses in time, money and effort, people may suffer from many serious mental problems such as depression or pessimism. Additionally, when it comes to the context of an enterprise, taking risk may not ensure the operation of a company appropriately. Conducting risky campaigns can probably cause bankrupts, thereby imposing big debt as a financial burden to the operation of the company. Despite the aforementioned negative drawbacks, I would argue that it is worth taking risks due to the advantages it brings to the development of people’s lives and their occupation. To elucidate, it is undeniable that coming out of the comfort zone can help people gain a deeper insight as well as accumulate more experience. A good illustration for this is that students who study abroad may have to deal with loneliness or economic hurdles in return for more broad knowledge they obtain and the career prospects in the future. In terms of professional lives, people can get the same benefits as the mentioned student. For instance, many people do not know the history of establishing the renowned KFC brand which had gone through hundreds of failures and bankruptcy, but its boss did not give up until finding the best recipe then became successful. In conclusion, in spite of bringing several disadvantages to a certain extent, I believe that taking risks is crucial for people because it allows people to broaden their horizon and become more proficient in their fields, thereby succeeding in pursuing their goals. In this contemporary society, taking risks is said to hold an essential part in the development of individual lives as well as career path. From my perspective, although risk-takers can experience und... Xem thêm
Ngọc Chi
16/5/2024
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài hộ e với ạ
The bar chart gives information about the population living in urban areas in six different park of the world. Overall, it can be seen that more and more people lived in cities and this number was predicted to continice rising until 2050. In addition, North America is where urban sprank happens most. According to the chart, North American has the largest population living in urban areas, at 64% in 1950. This number increased to 79% in 2007 and was expected to peak at 90% in the next 43 years. The most noticable surge was seen in Lahin America and Europe, where the percentage of urbain residents experienced the increase of 34% and 21% respectively and these would rocket to around 87% in 2050. At a lesser extent, the figure for Oceania is supposed to go up steadily mom 62% to 75%. With similar pattern, approximately 16% of population in Africa and Asia live in urbans areas, this followed by an increase 23% and might reach about 64% in 2050. The bar chart gives information about the population living in urban areas in six different park of the world. Overall, it can be seen that more and more people lived in cities and this number was pre... Xem thêm


Lê nguyễn uyên chi
16/5/2024
SỬA BÀI NÀY GIÚP EM VỚI ẠAA
Topic 4: The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009. The provided table illustrates how many automobiles are generated in three different nations from 2003 to 2009. Overall, it becomes evident that there was an upward trend of cars generated in Argentina and Thailand with the exception of Australia, being constractly. In general, Thailand represented the highest number of automobiles manufactured over the span. Between 2003 and 2006, Thailand held the top spot with 735,825 and 1,162,356 million cars produced, respectively. Although the figure for Australia displayed a twofold higher value than that of Argentina in 2003, these numbers seemed to be similar in 2006 with figures standing at 452,163 million cars, 235,088 million cars and 352,759 million cars, 341,268 million cars in their respective cases. Shifting focus to the remaining period, between 2006 to 2009, the data for Thailand consistently topped the chart with 999,963 million cars in 2009. The figure for Australia sharply fell in 2009, at 245,264 million cars, whereas, the statistic for Argentina experienced a significant increase and exceeded that of Australia twofold, around 466,089 million cars. Topic 4: The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009. The provided table illustrates how many automobiles are generated in three different nations from 200... Xem thêm


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16/5/2024
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Writing Task 1
The two line charts show how many train travellers were there in Sydney and the punctuality of this means of transport from 1995 to 2004. Overall, there was an increase in the number of people using trains for travelling, while the opposite was true for the proportion of trains arriving on time. Regarding passenger numbers, in 1995, a quarter of a million people were train commuters, which was the lowest point. Over the next 4 years, the number inclined gradually to about 265 million travellers in 1999, before peaking at 300 million at the turn of the millennium. Thereafter, it fell back to the year 2000’s level, levelling off until 2004. Concerning the proportion of punctual trains, in the first year, around 92% of trains were operated on time, followed by a steady decline to 85% in the next 2 years. From here, the share reached the highest point at just over the initial level, prior to dropping to the south of the year 1997’s figure and recovering to the pinnacle. Finally, the rate declined sharply and bottomed out at approximately 73% in the last year of the period. The two line charts show how many train travellers were there in Sydney and the punctuality of this means of transport from 1995 to 2004. Overall, there was an increase in the number of people usin... Xem thêm
