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8/9/2023

Nhờ thầy/cô chấm bài giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy/cô nhiều ạ!

Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development? In this day and age, we are being bombarded with the growing number of advertisements on a daily basis. While I consider that this might bring numerous advantageous impacts, there are also several drawbacks about this phenomenon. On the one hand, there is no doubt that exposure with advertisements per day can offer a number of advantages. Firstly, customers can be informed with newly-launched products. They will be easily aware of the array of selections available to their demands, so customers do not have to allocate the amount of time to consider products. Take, for example, my sister who always watches make-up items reviews before purchasing any new commodity. Obviously, the appearance of advertisements in different fields play an important role in supporting shopper needs. Secondly, from the perspective of company benefits, advertising is a potential environment where they can attract consumer attention to their products by launching new merchandise based on customers' preferences and characteristics. Purchasers can benefit from these products that fit their demands and become patrons. The more customer attraction, the more interest they can gain. The Apple group, for instance, whenever they prepare for a new product, they will host a wide variety of marketing campaigns to captivate viewers all over the world. Albeit these aforementioned advantages, I do believe that the expansion of advertisement also poses some threats to customers. By applying tricks and gimmicks, marketers will tempt consumers, especially patrons to purchase unnecessary items. I used to be fascinated to buy a wooden desk at an extortionate price by wholesalers last month. At that time, my old desk was rusty, so I had to find a new one. I made a decision to go around some shops that are in the vicinity of my terraced house and finally, I found a furniture shop with a dramatic discount label outside. After being consulted by the staff, I insisted that this desk was a real bargain for me, but when I got back, my friend told me this one was costly. In conclusion, it seems to me that there are many advantages for the appearance of advertising in human’s life, although this phenomenon has some notable disadvantages. Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development? In this day and age, we are being bombarded with the growing number of advertisements on a... Read more

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Thuận

4/9/2023

dạ thầy cô chữa giùm e bài writing task 2 này với ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ

In many countries, the number of people working from home has increased significantly due to the advancements in technology. While some argue that this trend has numerous benefits, others believe it can lead to serious problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words. In a lot of locations all over the world, the number of people who work remotely has increased dramatically as a result of the development in technology. Some people claim that this trend has plenty of merits, whilst the others argue that it can cause some demerits. This essay strongly believe that the advantages of this trend overshadow the disadvantages, and I will discuss more in these paragraphs below. One of the biggest benefit is the limitless of information resources, it may have a great affect in solving the tasks, when we get trouble due to the lack of our knowledge or information, we can find out it easily, for instance Google is multi functional web and almost all citizens based on it to search for the new information, even an academic essay Moreover, working from home is cost-effective, in lieu of hiring a taxi to commute, we just need to stay at home and open the devices, that mean we can save a large amount of money and spend it for another purposes, for example to rent a taxi in Vietnam is costs approximately 100 thousand VND to move a distance about 7kms. On the other hand, some terrible circumstances such as low quality internet or power cut, not to mention, if we haven't saved a file yet, it means we have to refill the tasks. This situation have been happened for many times in some undeveloped countries like Vietnam or Peru. In addition, it can create a sedentary lifestyle, when we just stay at home and depend on our high tech stuffs, after Covid 19, many people didn't want to go to their companies, they wanted to work remotely. In conclusion, from my perspective, distance employment benefits has numerous benefits, regardless, there are some drawbacks, it will take a lead in the future. In many countries, the number of people working from home has increased significantly due to the advancements in technology. While some argue that this trend has numerous benefits, others believe it c... Read more

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phulee

10/9/2023

ai sửa giúp e với ạ e ms tập làm

I feel proud to have won a bronze medal in swimming in Huu Lung district. The tournament was held at Hai Au swimming pool. The swimming pool is very large so there are many people coming to see it. Th... Read more

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Hàhh

9/9/2023

Em cần tư vấn

thầy cô ơi, em hiện tại tầm 6.5-7.0 listening và aim 7.5 cho kĩ năng này ạ. Em nhận thấy mình hay sai nhiều ở phần multiple choices và matching features. Em nên cải thiện sao để làm 2 phần này tốt hơn... Read more

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Quyên

1/9/2023

Thầy cô chấm giúp em bài task 1 này với ạ.

The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals opting to watch movies at cinemas in a European country seven days a week in the three years: 2003, 2005, and 2007. Overall, it is ap... Read more

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Tuan minh

3/9/2023

Thầy cô chấm và sửa lỗi giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn

The line chart illustrates the proportion of the citizens in four Asian nations from 1970 to 2020. Beside, the information are foreseen by experts with 2030 and 2040 respectively. Overall, most... Read more

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Chu Thảo

8/9/2023

thầy cô có thể chấm bài, cho điểm theo các tiêu chí và gợi ý cải thiện cho e đc k ạ

The given line graph illustrates the amount of acid rain emissions in four different sectors, which were produced over a period of 17 years in the UK, starting from the year 1990. Overall, it is e... Read more

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Nguyen Anh Tuan

4/9/2023

Writing Task 1

Đề Bài: The charts below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in country in 1985 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features... Read more

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Ngoc Han

5/9/2023

dạ nhờ thầy cô chấm chữa cho em bài này ạ!! em cám ơn thầy cô nhiều

The table illustrates the number of foreign travelers arriving (measured in millions) as well as the proportion of change in 8 nations between 2009 and 2010. Overall, although France had the highest... Read more

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Bhannn

31/8/2023

Thầy, cô chấm giúp em với ạ

The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. --... Read more

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Nguyen Anh Tuan

8/9/2023

Two Charts

The two charts illustrate the quantities of men and women taking part in various evening courses at an adult education centre in 2009 and the percentage of ages group paying attention to courses. Ov... Read more

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Thuận

7/9/2023

dạ thầy cô chữa giùm e bài này vs ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ

Some people believe that the government should prioritize investments in public services, such as education and healthcare, over spending on the arts. Others, however, argue that investing in the arts is equally important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Provide relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge to support your answer. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words. Some people claim that the government should invest more in public services, for example education and healthcare, more than spending on the arts, Whilst, the other believe that it is equal when the government invest in the arts. I completely concur with the first statement . These following paragraphs will elaborate on this viewpoint. First and foremost, education and healthcare have play a significant role in our society for a long time, regarding to the benefits of investing in the education, we can use the money to train talents to serve for our country, then we can base on the ability of them and earn a large amount of money, moreover, promoting the quality of the teaching and learning is really essential too, due to a fact that more high-tech devices will facilitate the teaching and also studying. In addition, in term of investing for the public healthcare, the government can upgrade the medical systems by developing the infrastructures, the facilities and the implication of this is the fact more and more people can be rescued and treated, particularly in some developing countries like Vietnam, Lao. For example during the Covid 19 pandemic, the government invested approximately 1 million dollar for the hospitals and medicines, therefore, it led to the death cases in Vietnam much lower when we compared to America or England. Regardless, the speculation on the arts can help the citizens to enjoy some spectacular painting and we can utilize it to entertain and advertise the country culture, spending for public services still more indispensable. In conclusion, although subsidizing for the arts can bring a several merits, investing on the public service is a main key to develop the country. Some people believe that the government should prioritize investments in public services, such as education and healthcare, over spending on the arts. Others, however, argue that investing in the arts... Read more

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Lyn

8/9/2023

Attentive Student

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] Cải thiện phần nghe điền từ

có ai cho em hỏi làm sao cải thiện nghe điền từ vậy ạ, nghe mà đc viết không đc luôn ý, với lại viết thiếu nữa , Thứ hai , làm sao để cải thiện nghe chọn nhiều đáp án đây ạ, em nghe rối lắm , huhu Read more

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Lyn

8/9/2023

Attentive Student

[Câu hỏi từ Ciarraa Nguyen] Áp dụng từ vựng level cao

Mọi người ơi làm sao để thêm mấy cái từ C1 C2 vào writing task 2 vậy ạ. Mình học rất nhiều từ level cao và cả cách dùng nữa nhưng đến lúc viết bài thì mình không cho mấy từ đó vào được. Mình cũng đã t... Read more

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Lyn

8/9/2023

Attentive Student

[Câu hỏi từ Thanh Mai] Không đủ thời gian làm Writing

Em chào mọi người ạ. Tình hình là còn 2 tháng nữa em thi mà một bài task 2 em viết >60p, task 1 những dạng như Bar, Line,... tầm 30p, còn Map và Process còn tệ hơn nữa vì có khi cả tiếng em vẫn không... Read more

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Lyn

7/9/2023

Attentive Student

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] Cải thiện kĩ năng Speaking

dạ em thấy em đang học speaking theo kiểu dịch nghĩa ra viết vào giấy và đọc huhu em cần cách học hiệu quả hơn để có thêm nhiều idea cũng như cách take note những keyword để có thể dễ dàng tự tin nóii... Read more

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Lyn

8/9/2023

Attentive Student

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] "figure of" hay "figure for"

Mọi người ơi cho e hỏi là khi nào mình dùng "the figure for " và "the figure of " trong writing task 1 vậy ạ😊

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Lyn

7/9/2023

Attentive Student

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] Tự học IELTS

muốn tự học ielts thì nên bắt đầu từ đâu ạ?

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phuong thao

4/9/2023

Thầy cô chữa bài Writing Task 1 của em với ạ. Em thi ngày 14/10 ạ em cảm ơn nhiều ạ

The line graph gives information about the global demand of different types of textile over the period of 35 years commencing 1980. Overall, the total demand for Polyester, Cotton and Cellulosic incre... Read more

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Lyn

6/9/2023

Attentive Student

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] Thân bài Writing task 1 dạng Map

Bài Map ở Task 1 thì mình phải mô tả những gì á mn? trong phần body ý

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Nhờ thầy/cô chấm bài giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy/cô nhiều ạ!

dạ thầy cô chữa giùm e bài writing task 2 này với ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ

ai sửa giúp e với ạ e ms tập làm

Em cần tư vấn

Thầy cô chấm giúp em bài task 1 này với ạ.

Thầy cô chấm và sửa lỗi giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn

thầy cô có thể chấm bài, cho điểm theo các tiêu chí và gợi ý cải thiện cho e đc k ạ

Writing Task 1

dạ nhờ thầy cô chấm chữa cho em bài này ạ!! em cám ơn thầy cô nhiều

Thầy, cô chấm giúp em với ạ

Two Charts

dạ thầy cô chữa giùm e bài này vs ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] Cải thiện phần nghe điền từ

[Câu hỏi từ Ciarraa Nguyen] Áp dụng từ vựng level cao

[Câu hỏi từ Thanh Mai] Không đủ thời gian làm Writing

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] Cải thiện kĩ năng Speaking

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] "figure of" hay "figure for"

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] Tự học IELTS

Thầy cô chữa bài Writing Task 1 của em với ạ. Em thi ngày 14/10 ạ em cảm ơn nhiều ạ

[Câu hỏi từ Thành viên ẩn danh] Thân bài Writing task 1 dạng Map

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