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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read moreTùng
20/2/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models’, and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development? Many celebrities in many parts of the world have increasingly affected young people as they are regarded as exemplars. I believe this tendency has both benefits and drawbacks, depending on the character and behaviour of the well-known individuals involved. To begin with, certain renowned personalities, particularly those with ethical issues and without genuine talent, may negatively affect young people. As for the former, such negative role models can prompt many of the young to make poor decisions. Prime examples would be substance abuse or driving under the influence, behaviours that can cause impressionable young individuals to idolise and follow these misdeeds mistakenly. Furthermore, those figures who come to fame with no talent but scandal can promote a distorted perception of success in young people. This can be seen in the way that genuine talent, more often than not, is overlooked by notoriety and looks. As a result, the young can easily misunderstand the value of success and the means to achieve it. However, there are also celebrities who have served as a great source of inspiration and motivation for the young. Chief among these would be successful entrepreneurs such as Elon Musk, Steve Jobs, and Bill Gates, who can be considered muses for young people to constantly work hard and pursue self-growth. These pioneers have laid a foundation for the development of technology in the world through their perseverance and brilliant intellect. Additionally, some public figures who transfer meaningful messages through their work can inspire many to follow as well. A perfect example would be Ronaldo, one of the best football players in the world whose many world records, awards, and titles. His tenacity, motivation, and discipline have helped him to succeed on this sports field and inspired many other people, especially young fans. In conclusion, there is no ultimate answer to the question of whether the influence of famous individuals on the young is positive or negative. They can be detrimental for young people if these personalities are involved in immoral behaviour or if they lack authentic talent. Conversely, leading entrepreneurs and inspiring athletes who have substantial contributions to society generally have a positive impact. Prompt: In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models’, and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development? Many celeb... Read morePham Thuy
19/2/2024
Attentive Student
Chúc mừng năm mới tất cả mọi người, em hi vọng được các cô chấm và sửa bài task 1 này ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The given line graph gives information about how many computers were possessed by a household in an European country over the period from 1997 to 2011. Overall, it is clear that while the percentage of households having two and one computer only experienced an increased trend with varying degrees, the opposite trend was true for those with no computers. Remarkably, though the proportion of families possessing three or more computers almost remained unchanged, its number was the highest nearly the whole period surveyed. Looking at the percentage of households who had no computers, at the outset, it was roughly 50%, which was the highest number before decreasing approximately to 32% in 2005. Afterwards, its figure went up and down many times before significantly falling to around 20% at the end. Due to this drop, this proportion moved from the first to the third position in terms of computer possession rate. Meanwhile, there was a stability in the number of families having three or more computers, approximately 45% over the period. Turning to the figure witnessing an increased trend, the percentage of households possessing two computers started at over 5%. In the following years, this percentage rose remarkably to nearly 27% in 2011, which was the second highest number. Similarly, there was a rise in the proportion of families possessing only one computer, though to a lesser extent. At the beginning, it was just 0% and remained static for the next 2 years before rising gradually to 10% at the end. Despite this marginal increase, the figure for households having one computer was still the lowest. The given line graph gives information about how many computers were possessed by a household in an European country over the period from 1997 to 2011. Overall, it is clear that while the percentage... Read moreNguyễn hoàng ngân
20/2/2024
The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britian
ko cos ko cosNguyễn Duy Khang
13/2/2024
Mong thầy cô giúp e chấm chữa bài ạ
Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In contemporary society, human beings’ lifespan is continuously extending. This has led to the question of whether the retirement age should be expanded simultaneously to balance the issue. Personally, I firmly oppose the notion of raising the age of retirement. On the one hand, some may argue that the idea of retaining old-age workers can be considered necessary owing to their wide horizon. Without a doubt, the older generation, those who have accumulated a great deal of knowledge and experience after decades of contributing to the workforce, would take precedence over their amateur counterparts. Additionally, another primary factor lies in the budget for pensions. In fact, if humankind’s life expectancy keeps widening while the age for retirement remains unchanged, a handsome pension may be inevitably required to pay for retiring workers. Undoubtedly, raising the retirement age can be an economic decision for later purposes including renovating facilities and purchasing up-to-date equipment, which in turn leads to an enhancement in productivity and accuracy of the working procedure. On the other hand, one compelling rationale advocating the unchanged retirement age can be mentioned in terms of humanitarian. Noticeably, the old-age labor force has spent more than half of their whole life contributing to the national economy. Hence, the period of retirement can be a sign of not only validating their devotion but also averting the matter of abuse. Also, the old-age people are conservative about their conventional working methods and less likely to adapt to changing technology. As a result, making use of modern equipment and many efficient ways of practice can be a big challenge for them. Thus, replacing them with a younger labor force who can easily come up with pragmatic approaches can facilitate better outcomes in this ever-changing world. In conclusion, while raising the retirement age can serve as a plausible solution to the concern of increasing lifespan, I firmly believe the unchanged age for retiring can potentially uphold humanitarian and flexibility in this fast-paced developing world. Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In contemporary society, hum... Read moreNhu Quynh
12/2/2024
mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp emThe table below shows the amount of waste generation and recycled in three different cities - Hanoi, Phnom Penh, Bangkok and Shanghai - in 2022.
The table gives information about the proportion of the waste production and management in major cities across 4 nations throughout 2022. In general, it can be seen from the graph that waste generation in 3 countries consistently higher than the waste recycling. Additionally, Shanghai contained the biggest amount of waste and and experienced the greatest reduction in its waste output while Phnom Penh had the lowest. Among the four urban areas, waste output and production were notably highest in Shanghai at 1 million tons and 610 thousand tons, respectively. It is followed by the proportion of waste in Bangkok, at 780 thousand tons, whereas its waste management amount was half that of Shanghai. Turning to the remaining statistics, it can be noted that Hanoi had one half of waste production compare to Shanghai amount, at 500 thousand tons. Besides, Phnom Penh accounted for the minority of waste output , just around 480 thousand tons. However, the Phnom Penh waste recycling, at 250 thousand tons was higher than that in Hanoi, which stood at 200 thousand tons. The table gives information about the proportion of the waste production and management in major cities across 4 nations throughout 2022. In general, it can be seen from the graph that waste gener... Read moreNguyễn Huỳnh Anh Thư
18/2/2024
Thầy cô sửa bài giúp em. Em cảm ơn
TASK: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Essay Some individuals suppose that the majority of household wastes are not recycled. In their view, legal policies from governments are the sufficient approach to grow up recycling. While I believe that governments should impose recycling regulations on families, legislation alone may not be enough to cause a meaningful shift in recycling behaviour. To start, laws and regulations regarding household recycling play a crucial role in reducing the amount of home garbage. As we can see, recycling rates are far higher in countries where it is compulsory, such as Germany or Belgium, than in those where it is not. As a result, rules can ensure that everyone contributes to rubbish reduction while also providing a defined structure for recycling. Such legal measures can act as a powerful motivator, encouraging individuals to prioritize recycling in their daily lives or pausing or mitigating the trend of using disposable items such as plastic bags or non-rechargeable batteries, ultimately curbing the amount of domestic waste. On the other hand, it is essential to recognize that the success of recycling initiatives goes beyond legislation alone. Raising public knowledge of the importance of recycling and its good environmental impact can result in a more significant and long-lasting shift in people's behaviours. Educational programs can highlight the costs of excessive waste generation as well as the benefits of recycling, inspiring people to take proactive efforts toward appropriate waste management. Governments can work with educational institutions, media outlets, and community organizations to raise awareness about recycling and sustainable waste management techniques. To summarize, while I support the enforcement of recycling laws, I strongly believe in the significance of a holistic plan that combines legal demands with vigorous teaching initiatives. TASK: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws... Read morebao linh truong
17/2/2024
em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The table depicts the expenditure on various types of products which is purchased by the utilizers in five countries in 2002. In general, the consumer staples were food, beverage and tobacco goods, which has the domain preference of customers among these countries. Particularly, although Turkey was the country surpassing other nation’s rate in this field of consumption, its consumers in costume and shoes products fell behind the others. Turkey took the leading role in both consumer staples and leisure or study spending with the proportion, respectively at 32.14% and 4.35%. Furthermore, the first rank in clothing and footwear amount was belonging to Italian users which accounted for 9%, and Turkey rank was positioned after that country during 2002. In contrast, Spain with a share of spending on entertainment and education at 1.98% received the least among all nations. Moreover, it reached the third position in two other features at 18.8% and 6.51%. In addition, the customers in Sweden utilizaing only 5.4% in clothes and shoes were the bottom one in this group. The table depicts the expenditure on various types of products which is purchased by the utilizers in five countries in 2002. In general, the consumer staples were food, beverage and tobacco goods... Read moreMinh
18/2/2024
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of implementing a four-day workweek. What is your opinion on this matter? Support your view with relevant examples and explanations.
In this day and age, the strategy to balance between work and life is to reduce timework from 7 or 8 to 4 days per week, while some challenges and demerits are influenced not only for governments but also for civilians. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and give my opinion on this issue. On the one hand, begin with the positive aspects of a four-day work week. It can improve work-life balance to obtain better employee well-being. For example, in a study, if engineers, doctors, and teachers do not have enough time to relax because they work all day, their health may suffer a significant decline. So working along with entertainment activities such as playing sports, participating in concerts, and communicating with friends and parents prevents diseases in terms of mental or physical health such as coughs, headaches, or being almost exhausted. Furthermore, this strategy can enhance productivity because of a more rested workforce. Granted, some jobs may not take it up, like doctors, due to curing patients. However, others need free time to recover their energy and continue contributing to their workplace. For instance, by taking out 3 days per week, street-cleaning workers have time to spend with their families and then return with efficiency and productivity in the latest four days. On the other hand, shift focus to the potential drawbacks. It can be seen that there are possible challenges in customer service and business continuity. Some financial companies, such as banks, if their staff rests for 3 days, lose customers but must pay for annual operational costs and then go bankrupt. Admittedly, companies can cope with difficulties in coordinating with businesses and services operating on a traditional schedule. In particular, a wide variety of facilities that run into after-stop operations follow this idea. For example, water dumps need human to operate, which is difficult to adjust to not be harmful for nearby If a sudden stoppage occurs during resting-related time in 3 days in this infrastructure, they can lack the energy to maintain their lives, and then companies lose much more money as a result of the failed cooperation of other sides because they cannot facilitate residents' needs. Overall, it has some advantages, such as work-life balance and strengthening the activity; however, it can also bring about some disadvantages, such as bankruptcy or unsuccessful collaboration with business. From my perspective, this idea can be implemented with some jobs, which has slightly influenced nations. To deal with this matter, governments need to weigh up to gain job satisfaction. In this day and age, the strategy to balance between work and life is to reduce timework from 7 or 8 to 4 days per week, while some challenges and demerits are influenced not only for governments but... Read morePhạm Quang Tuấn
15/2/2024
Thầy cô chấm chữa dùm em với ạ
The line graph illustrates the figures of tourists visiting a Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. It is clear that the proportion of the visitor increased over the period shown. Additionally, the percentage of visitors staying on island is by far the most popular method of tourism in Caribbean Island. In 2010, of the two ways, travellars staying on island is higher than the one staying on cruise ship respective well over 0,5 million and slightly under 0,5 million which entirely 1 million for both. Following that between 2015 and 2016 two figure of tourers together had slightly decline at the same point close to 1,5 million By contrast in 2017, the rate of voyages in twice categories reached the highest point which was 2 million and 1,5 million respectively for visitors staying on cruise ship and visitons staying on on the island. Moreover, the quantites total reach 3 million which was at the top of every year of. The line graph illustrates the figures of tourists visiting a Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. It is clear that the proportion of the visitor increased over the period show... Read moreMinh Phương
17/2/2024
Em chào thầy cô ạ. Đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em. Thầy cô chấm chữa hộ em với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ.
The given table compares the usage of water for external, industrial, agricultural purposes in four countries, namely Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and Canada. Overall, it is clear that Canada is the largest country of using water in the domestic country and industry. While Egypt stands at the first rank in the agricultural field. Regarding Egypt and Canada, the percentages of water used in the latter are the highest numbers in the external country and industrial purposes, at 20% and 70% respectively while this figure in the former records a peak of 82% in agriculture. By contrast, there are only 8% and 10% respectively in the domestic and industry using water in Egypt. When it comes to Saudi Arabia and New Zealand, the rates of using water in the former are lower than these figures in New Zealand in domestic and industry, at 10% and 46% respectively. In contrast, this figure in Saudi Arabia is 20% higher than in New Zealand. The given table compares the usage of water for external, industrial, agricultural purposes in four countries, namely Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and Canada. Overall, it is clear that Canada is... Read morebao linh truong
18/2/2024
em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
In current, It is obvious to notice the appearance of many children with special gift in specific field such as sport or music. However, some has thought if the normal kids receive the good education, they will literally become an ideal person. It has been a prevalent and controversial debate for recent years. Therefore, this essay will elaborate further on both points and state my perspectives. On one hand, there are some people are born with the gift as an outstanding physical outcome, which helps them can deal with some stuff less hard than other one. Perhaps, it can be perfect ears that help to identify and distinguish different sounds precisely or strong legs that may run with noticaeble speech. In contrast, that number of special people is only accounting for small group of world’s population. Particularly, the normal people may not mean that they lose more opportunities than the talent one. Indeed, if the gifted person did not learn and pratise their talent frequently, they could not make it become their skills and be a famous sport person or musician. The good instruction plays a remarkable role in the succeed of children’s transformance of who they want to be. This is because most of offspring is highly susceptible to influence by the right guidance, which also bring out the clear direction for them to focus on and enhance themselves. Additionally, any child, who is willing to consume as much as time and effort, is all potential to make their own position in a certain field. For instance, to win the Olympic, which can be explained as a competition among different aspects in sport, needs candidates to try practising techniques day and night. Thus, every children have the same chance to learn and grow to be an ideal person. To sum up, the kid with talent may have more benefits to become a good sports person or musician, but I still think that practice makes perfect. Similarly, when the kid gains the good instruction and attempts to practise it regularly, they will be a sport person or musician. In current, It is obvious to notice the appearance of many children with special gift in specific field such as sport or music. However, some has thought if the normal kids receive the good education,... Read morePhạm Thị Thu Thủy
4/2/2024
In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this trend?
In recent times, due to the population explosion, the outcome of overpopulation become a prevalent and controversial topic. Some governments and local authorities are motivating residents and businesses to move to the rural regions to settle down and establish houses, factories, companies, and so on. I believe that while there are a few benefits of settling down in rural areas, the drawbacks are greater significant. Both the advantages and disadvantages together with relevant examples will be explained carefully in this essay. There are several drawbacks to living in separated regions. First and foremost, it is difficult to connect with the outside world. Rural areas offer poor-quality Internet connection owing to far distance from modern society. For example, very few network providers set up their Internet stations in rural places, as a result, people may find it challenging to access the Internet, and social platforms. Another drawback is the inconvenience in travelling. The public means of transport and vehicles has not been developed yet, which will make it harder to go to any place. To give a personal example, I am living in my hometown, which is a rural district in Vietnam, and it always takes almost an hour to wait for a bus, which fosters the feeling of disappointment and annoyance. Despite the negatives mentioned above, moving to is a positive development for various reasons. One of the main reasons is that it helps to alleviate the pollution in the overpopulated regions in many countries. For further explanation, it is apparent that overpopulated areas will be more contaminated than rural ones because there are more factories, and industries established there, which produce a large amount of exhaust fumes and chemicals. Also, more citizens who are living in crowded places will certainly contribute to much more carbon dioxide and household waste. Fewer inhabitants and industries will produce less industrial and domestic waste, which will make the environment in overpopulated areas become cleaner. In conclusion, despite the advantages of living in rural areas, including pollution reduction in overpopulated areas, I firmly believe that it still has shortcomings in a few aspects such as travelling and accessing the Internet is more significant. In recent times, due to the population explosion, the outcome of overpopulation become a prevalent and controversial topic. Some governments and local authorities are motivating residents and business... Read moreKrystine Lu
1/2/2024
ieltswritingtask1
Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ The line chart below illustrates changes of proportion of vehicle registration of three types of popular transport in UK from 1970 to 2010. Overall, the percentage of truck is the highest while that of bus is the lowest during this period. On the one hand, the proportion of truck registration was on the top of the graph, approxiamate 48% in 1970. This ratio of van strongly decreased by 18% to 30% in the next decade. The proportion had a slight rise by about 2% in 1990 and a significant increase from 32% to 45% in 2000. While the percentage of taxi registration had gradual increase in 1980 (by 11% from about 24%), there was a striking decrease of taxi’s percentage from 35% to about 16% in the next 2 decades. After that, the ratio of taxi gradually rose up to 35% in 2010. On the other hand, bus had a downward trend. The percentage of bus was approxiamte 6% in 1970. This ratio rose to about 15% in 1980 while gradually decreased by 12% to 3% until 2010. Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ The line chart below illustrates changes of proportion of vehicle registration of three types of popular transport in UK from 1970 to 2010. Overall, the percentage of... Read moreTùng
6/2/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The line chart illustrates how many tonnes of waste were produced by three companies from 2000 to 2015. Overall, there were decreases in the waste produced amounts by company A and company B, while the opposite was true for company C. Additionally, the amount of waste disposed by company A was the highest for most of the period. In 2000, the amount of waste discarded by company A was 12 tonnes, which was just over 3 tonnes higher than that of company B and almost tripled company C’s figure. Until 2015, company A considerably decreased its waste produced amount to just below 9 tonnes in 2015. Moreover, the figures for company B peaked north of this level in 2005, followed by a drop of just more than threefold in the final year, while those of company C saw a dramatic opposite change, but to a lesser extent, ending at just above company B’s highest point in 2005. The line chart illustrates how many tonnes of waste were produced by three companies from 2000 to 2015. Overall, there were decreases in the waste produced amounts by company A and company B, whil... Read moreTùng
6/2/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graphs illustrate the weekly working hours in the industrial sector of the proportion of workers in four countries namely France, Denmark, Sweden, and the UK, in 2002. Overall, working 36-40 hours per week was roughly the norm, except for France, where the 31-35 interval was more common. Additionally, the 1-14-hour and over-50-hour practices were generally the least popular, except for the UK. Regarding France and the UK, half of the workers in the latter country worked 36-40 hours per week, which was the most popular, while this was true for the 31-35 interval in the former country. Moreover, the UK worker proportions increased correspondingly with the weekly working hours amounts, with 10% working for no more than 35 hours, and from around 15% to 20% for 41 to over 50 hours. Meanwhile, working 36-40 hours a week was the second most popular in France (just below 40%), followed by the 46-50-hour pattern (20%), while the remainder were around 10%. As for Denmark and Sweden, the majority of the Danes worked for 36-40 hours a week, at nearly three-quarters, nearly three times as much as the figures for the 31-35-hour practice (25%), while the respective figures for the Swedish were 80% and 40% in that order. In addition, no more than 10% of workers in Denmark worked more than 30 hours and less than 41 hours per week, while this was also the case for Sweden, except for the 41-45 schedule (approximately 30%). The bar graphs illustrate the weekly working hours in the industrial sector of the proportion of workers in four countries namely France, Denmark, Sweden, and the UK, in 2002. Overall, working 36-4... Read moreTùng
6/2/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: Some people want the government to spend money on life on other planets, however, others think it is a waste of public money when the Earth has so many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Opinions are divided on whether the government should allocate the national budget towards the discovery of life on other planets or to solve problems on Earth. This essay will discuss both of these perspectives and explain why I believe a balanced approach should be well-considered. On the one hand, proponents of extraterrestrial exploration often emphasise the significance of humankind’s sustainability. This is because the search for interplanetary life can serve as a crucial backup plan for the long-term survival of human civilisation, given the volatility and catastrophe of current calamities and disasters on Earth. On the other hand, critics of cosmic discovery often argue that it is also imperative for the government to put importance on Earth. The resources and expenses should be provided for issues on the planet, such as poverty, health, education, and environment, to name but a few. The pursuit of interplanetary life should be considered extravagant and out of the boundaries of possibility. From my perspective, a balanced approach would be feasible, meaning space exploration can be done in tandem with addressing problems on Earth. This can be seen in a way that such investment can necessitate many innovations and breakthroughs that cater for the benefit of astronauts and the potential of interplanetary life. Furthermore, this strategy can also act as a catalyst for the expedition in the research of cutting-edge technology that can be implemented on Earth, prompting numerous effective solutions for measuring issues on the planet. In other words, neither of which should be prioritised at the expense of the other. In conclusion, while it is true that the government should distribute the national coffers budget to tackle worrying problems on Earth, I contend that the discovery of extraterrestrial life should receive public funding as well. A proper amount of resources and money provided can ensure both practices can be done simultaneously and efficiently. Prompt: Some people want the government to spend money on life on other planets, however, others think it is a waste of public money when the Earth has so many problems. Discuss both views and give yo... Read morebao linh truong
4/2/2024
writing task 1. em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm giúp em ạ.
This bar chart illustrates the quantity of electrical manufacturing and utilization in 10 countries holding the ten peak ranks in 2014. Overall, the number of electric producers in 10 areas surpassed the number of consumers in 2014. In particular, China was a nation, which achieved the significant statistic in both domains. In contrast, the tenth level of these factors belonged to Korea, Rep. The production of electric in China and United States, which had a noticeable higher level comparing to other countries, accounted for 5,398 and 4,009 billion KWh in 2014. However, United States produced electric less than China only 1,000 KWh. Especially, the different amount of utilizing and creating electric in 4 countries such as China, Russia, German, and Korea, Rep was unremarkable, at approximately 20 to 70 KWh. In the contrary, From the fourth rank of countries onwards, the amount of both fields was under 1,000 KWh. Furthermore, the rank of Brazil was higher than Germany, but the statistics of German electric consumers overtook Brazil users, at 126,7 KWh. This bar chart illustrates the quantity of electrical manufacturing and utilization in 10 countries holding the ten peak ranks in 2014. Overall, the number of electric producers in 10 areas surpass... Read moreTùng
3/2/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture illustrates the process of recycling paper. Overall, the process comprises four main stages, starting from making pulp from used paper, through filtering and cleaning, to fully recycled paper. The process begins with the used paper being conveyed on a belt into a large chamber, which contains a mixture of water and chemicals to clean the paper and break it down into fibre to form unfiltered pulp. This unfiltered pulp is then filtered to eliminate unwanted particles. Subsequently, the filtered pulp enters the cleaning stage, where it is deinked with water and soap in another chamber. During this stage, an air pump is installed, creating bubbles so that the ink is caused to rise to the surface, from where the ink is then removed through another pipe. This step is essential to ensure the pulp is free from any residual printing substances. The process then moves to the final stage, during which clean pulp is passed through heated rollers, which squeeze out water and produce rolls of recycled paper. The picture illustrates the process of recycling paper. Overall, the process comprises four main stages, starting from making pulp from used paper, through filtering and cleaning, to fully recycled pa... Read moreTùng
3/2/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The line graph shows changes in house prices, on average, in three countries from 1997 to 2014. Overall, there were increases in average accommodation costs in all three countries, with that of country A being the highest for most of the period, while county C’s figures saw the least variation. Regarding country A, its average housing prices were about $200 thousand in 1997, followed by some wild fluctuations until 2009, from which point the prices remained relatively stable at around $600 thousand towards the end of the period. Similar changes, but to a lesser extent, can be seen in the figures for country B, from just under country A initial level to shy of $500 thousand in 2010 and hovered around this level until the final year. Conversely, country C’s figures generally witnessed a steady incline, growing steadily from just below the figure for country B in the first year, except for the lowest point at approximately $200 thousand in 2008 and a slight decline to end the period at just over $250 thousand. The line graph shows changes in house prices, on average, in three countries from 1997 to 2014. Overall, there were increases in average accommodation costs in all three countries, with that of countr... Read moreVũ Thị Bích Nguyệt
4/2/2024