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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending on different commodities and services in a particular European country in 1998 and 2008.
The bar graph illustrates the total percentage of residents’ spending on different products and services in a particular country in 1998 and 2008.
Overall, both electronic goods and clothing were spent the most and saw increases in total spending rate in the two years examined, while the opposite pattern was true for going to the theatre and newspapers and magazines.
Regarding the expense categories with growth or stability, in 1998, the share of total spending on electronic goods was 16%, after which it inclined slightly to one-fifth in 2008. A similar change, but to a larger extent, was seen in clothing’s figures, with 12% in the first year and a 6% rise after a decade. Meanwhile, eating out accounted for 6% of the residents’ total spending and remained unchanged.
As for the remainder, people used 8% of their budget for vacation in 1998, followed by a minor decline to 5% ten years later. However, the figures for visiting the cinema and buying newspapers and magazines were comparable and experienced the same trend in both years, declining from 3% initially to 1% in 2008.
Prompt: The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending on different commodities and services in a particular European country in 1998 and 2008.
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: The table below shows the postgraduate course fees in US Dollars that international students paid in three countries in 2007.
The table illustrates the study-related fees for five categories that overseas students in three countries paid in 2007.
Overall, the fees examined in country A were the lowest, while those in country B were relatively the highest, except for tuition fees for art and commerce in country C. Additionally, computing and science were the most expensive courses in all three countries, with the domination of country B.
Regarding arts, commerce, and meals and accommodation, the fees for these two courses were the highest in country C, at $19000 each, followed closely by those in country B, at $18000 per course, both of which over doubled those combined in country A, where students paid $8000 for a course. Meanwhile, board and housing fees in country A were also $8000, less than half the amount in country B, which was $17000, higher than those in country C, at $11000.
As for computing and science, the combined fees for these two courses in country A were still lower than the fee of a single course in countries B and C. Specifically, country B had the highest fees for computing and science, at $27000 and $29000, respectively, while those in country C were lower, at $24000 and $25000 in that order. However, country A had the lowest figures, with each course at $11000.
Prompt: The table below shows the postgraduate course fees in US Dollars that international students paid in three countries in 2007.
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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the number of international travelers in 5 distinct regions in 4 different years.
Overall, most countries showed an upward trend in the number of overseas visitors with the exception of America. In addition, Europe was the most popular destination to visit compared to other countries.
In 1990, America visitors took precedence at over 680 millions, followed by European and total global visitors at roughly 280 millions and 449 millions respectively. Since then, the number of European travelers had increased significantly to over 400 millions in 2005, while the total of international visitors recorded a growth to over 694 millions in the same year. In contrast, the American figure peaked at 118.2 million in 2000, before dropping to 113.2 million 5 years later.
Regarding three other countries, Asia and the Pacific had around 60 million visitors at the beginning of the period, gradually growing and overtaking America in 2005 at about 136 million. Meanwhile, starting at 18.2 million and 9.8 million, Africa and the Middle West were among the least popular destinations. They both shared the same trend, marginally increasing by 1.5 times at the end of the period.
The chart depicts the number of international travelers in 5 distinct regions in 4 different years.
Overall, most countries showed an upward trend in the number of overseas visitors with the exceptio...
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The line graph illustrates the alterations of food and oil prices and compares them over the period of 11 years.
Overall, the average price of both categories rose considerably over the given time frame. Furthermore, the trends of both commodities were very similar, so a strong correlation (93.6%) is suggested.
In 2000, the average global oil price was close to 25$ per barrel, and the food price index stood at just under 90 points. Over the subsequent 4 years, both prices remained relatively stable, before having more than doubled to nearly $60 per barrel and 140 points in worldwide oil price and food price index respectively by the year 2007.
Another noticeable feature is that both categories had seen a noticeable growth by the year 2008. The average oil price peaked at about $130 per barrel in 2008, but later dropped by more than a third ($40) before rising to $100 per barrel eventually in 2011. Similarly, the food price index stood at $120 in 2008. After declining sharply to 140 points after two years, the worldwide price of food finally climbed to a peak of $140 in 2011.
The line graph illustrates the alterations of food and oil prices and compares them over the period of 11 years.
Overall, the average price of both categories rose considerably over the given time f...
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Task 1
Em chào quý thầy cô ạ, em mới học IELTS nên cần người check giúp phần writing. Em mong quý thầy cô thấy bài post của em xin dành chút thời gian quý báu sửa hộ em bài viết này nhé ạ. Em xin chân thành cảm ơn!
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The graph indicates the four significant factors that a specific country’s residents arrive to the urban area.
Overall, the number of people moved their country for all reasons of employment, study, family/friends and adventure increasingly. While the study reason was a key reason why people moved significantly during the period shown. At first, employment factor was the most essential reason for moving of resident in the country; however, at the end of period, the amount of people left to urban area by this reason decreased, but habitant who moved by study purpose increased sharply.
In 2000, the number of employee arrived to urban city to work is around sixty thousand people, while the figure of people went to city with the purposes for studying and for family or friend is approximately twenty five thousand people and eleven thousand habitants respectively. The lowest amount of people moved to capital city for adventure is about ten thousand people.
Over the following ten years, there was dramatically increased of fifty-six thousand people moving to the city for learning, as well as the number of workers arrived in urban city continue rose sharply around ninety-two thousand employee. By contract, the year 2010 saw a gradually went up twenty-one thousand and twelve thousand dwellers coming to the capital city for family, friends, and adventure respectively.
Between 2000 and 2015, the line chart displays the figure of people relocating to the urban city for study increased about eighty-seven thousand ones, and a number of citizens for reason of family, friends and adventure saw a growth approximately twenty-three thousand and fourteen thousand peoples. On the other hand, the amounts of employee for finding job dropped to around eighty-seven thousand people.
Em chào quý thầy cô ạ, em mới học IELTS nên cần người check giúp phần writing. Em mong quý thầy cô thấy bài post của em xin dành chút thời gian quý báu sửa hộ em bài viết này nhé ạ. Em xin chân thành...
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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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In the modern world, it is obvious that urbanisation and population boom can lead to extreme problems such as those with the transportation system is facing congestion or severe accidents. Some individuals believe that government should invest in railways commute rather than roads. I strongly believe with this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss this problem.
Firstly, the investment in railways system will bring many benefits for people. Individuals can travel around regardless of city ad country because railways system are extremely dense in some countries with less expensive fee. Therefore, they can achieve higher speeds than other vehicles such as cars, motorbikes, trucks, etc and passengers only spend less time commuting than in the past. In addition, this is a cost saving measure for people. For example, railways system in Vietnam are improves the quality of life for citizens because they can get around very quickly to another city that do not need to consume too much hours.
Another point is that trains is a environmentally friendly transportation because trains are four times more fuel- efficient than other vehicles on roads. They tend to reduce greenhouse gas emissions, give off lower nitrogen oxides. Moreover, the trains have a higher capacity and uses separate lanes, they will decrease traffic jams in metropolis cities and avoid unexpected collision. For instance, government efforts in Vietnam in construction faster railways lessened traffic crowded rate at 10% in annually.
To sum up, governments should spend more money on railways because it bring many benefits for people such as ensure social safety and environmental problem. Investment in railways commutes is the best option to provide a better transport experience for citizens.
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ĐỀ: International travel has many advantages for both travelers and the countries that they visit. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Travel between different countries is beneficial to both the tourist and the host nations. The writer of this essay hold the belief that the benefits of international travel is broaden the various culture in many countries in worldwide and getting more outcomes outweigh the environment issues
In terms of the advantages of international travel, which can enhance cultural awareness for people. In other words, foreign travelers can broaden their horizons, experience exotic cultures and have a sense of being true global citizens
Therefore, international travelling contributes a variety of positive outcomes for local economy. This can be used to develop infrastructure and other social projects, improving the quality of life for the residents. For instance, the annual budget of Switzerland, an European nation, targets to spend a minimum of 10% of total earnings from the treasury on maintaining and developing tourist spots, and in return, the government is getting a hefty amount from travelling people.
Conversely, the drawbacks of international travel could impact strongly on host nations. Popular tourist destinations often face challenges in managing waste and preserving natural resources, leading to adverse effects on ecosystems and biodiversity . Additionally, overtourism an also lead to the degradation of historical and natural landmarks. Take the case of Barcelona, a city admired for its rich history and vibrant culture. The surge in tourist numbers has overwhelmed the city, resulting in unique character of Barcelona is fading, and the strain on its infrastructure is increasingly apparent.
To conclude , there are more advantages than disadvantages. Not only broadening the knowledge for travelers but also providing more budget for the host countries. By contrast, this can lead to many environment issues.
ĐỀ: International travel has many advantages for both travelers and the countries that they visit. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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mong thầy cô chữa giúp em với ạ. Đề: some teachers and many students are making increasing use of AI in education. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The use of Al in educated systems is made
increased by the amount of instructors and
shidents. The writer of this essay believe
that this development brings more benefits
to be convenient and reliable than the drawback of being sense of laziness.
The first compelling advantage of using AI
in education is saving time and convenience. Learning with the help from AI help students find out more information needed. In other words, this help students do not waste too much time to research many unessessary data. Futhermore, AI is used on phone
of laptop which can be easy to keep. Take chat GPT website as an example, which is an AI systems can fix
many problems for people in a short time.
Another positive aspect of the use of AI
in education is that this is reliable for
people. People often use AI for learning language and learn more academic subjects. This is because information in AI is almost correct. For instance, there is an increasing amount of students in many developing countries practice Speaking English with AI systems at home.
There was, however some people tend to think that
if instructors and students continue to based too much
on AI they would have a sense of laziness. For example, students would not do homework if they had AI to help them but it can be depend on each person.
In conclusion, the use of AI is convenient and reliable ,can help students save the time and learn more languages, conversely the drawback is
a create a sense of laziness. Thus, on balance, the advantages of AI using out weigh
the disadvantages.
The use of Al in educated systems is made
increased by the amount of instructors and
shidents. The writer of this essay believe
that this development brings more benefits
to be convenient and reli...
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Mong thầy cô chữa giúp em, em cảm ơn ạ. The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate information about the laborers in two genders from three distinctive sectors in country A and country B.
Overall, the service sector is prevalent in both countries.Furthermore, while the industry sector has the least workers in country A, agriculture is the least favorable domain in country B.
In terms of country A, more than half of the male employees and less than half of the female counterparts work in the services sector, followed by 29% of men and 43% of women participating in agricultural-based jobs. In addition, nearly one-fifth of the male occupation is in the industry domain, which is roughly double of that of the female one.
Regarding country B, the figures for male and female employment in services-related jobs are far significant, at 65% and 49% respectively. In contrast, 32% of males work in industry compared to 11% of females. Last but not least, the working rate in agriculture services for both genders makes up a negligible proportion.
The pie charts demonstrate information about the laborers in two genders from three distinctive sectors in country A and country B.
Overall, the service sector is prevalent in both countries.Furtherm...
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TASK 2
Em chào quý thầy cô, em kính nhờ quý thầy cô chấm giúp em bài viết dưới đây ạ. Em xin cảm ơn quý thầy cô ạ.
TOPIC: More and more people have sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What can be done to make people drink less?
My essay:
Sugar-based drinks have sparked debates over their recent growth in popularity. With the number of consumers of these beverages having consistently soared over the past few years, their substances and a dominant tradition are cited as the primary reasons. To curb high consumption, two effective remedies should be taken into consideration.
To begin with, critics put emphasis on two principal rationales to explain the surge in popularity. The first root of the trend lies in several addictive properties found in soft drinks. When individuals associate sugary products with a source of energy, their dependence on these beverages commences growing, resulting in excessive consumption. In addition, the long-standing tradition of incorporating such drinks into social gatherings has accelerated consumption. In Vietnam, for instance, residents have a tendency to indulge in a small glass of Coca-Cola, 7Up, and so forth prior to savouring main dishes. The escalating prevalence of these two reasons has explained the remarkable preference for soft drinks.
Given the urgency of the matter, finding viable solutions is imperative. Firstly, the government should foster residents’ awareness regarding adverse health effects induced by the high levels of addictive substances in fizzy drinks, especially potential risks for incurable diseases such as cancer or diabetes. If media platforms are utilised to remind citizens of those neglected issues, they will be likely to shift from drinking such a high amount of these beverages to opting for other healthy options such as water or juice. Secondly, it is of vital importance to impose a rise in taxes on production and contribution of the products. Consequently, the price of sweetened drinks surges, leading to a decline in sugary product consumption both during feasts and in daily life.
In conclusion, the fact that more and more people are addicted to sugar-based drinks stems from their addictive properties and the ingrained cultural practice. To counter the problem, the implementation of taxes on these drinks and the enhancement of consumers' awareness are deemed the two feasible solutions.
Em chào quý thầy cô, em kính nhờ quý thầy cô chấm giúp em bài viết dưới đây ạ. Em xin cảm ơn quý thầy cô ạ.
TOPIC: More and more people have sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What can be done...
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In the modern day, that youngster’s crimes are still exist become increasingly prominent in humanitarian society and there are need solution to be deal with this problem. This dissertation will elaborate the reasons, leading to crime in youth age and indicating some practical approaches which government could confront this problem in order to limit not only the crime wave, but also criminality.
To begin with, the disobedience of youths originates from the upbringing and indulgence within family. Their parents do not distinguish between right and wrong behavior and They always are in favor of defending offspring much as these children do wrong. Accordingly, but for the parental supervision, Young children would have been in the habit of breaking the law and on the verge of becoming criminal. Additionally, the culprit of this problem which is the inadequate and imprecise school curriculum for each child. These school only take care of responsible student and neglect those who have no future. As a consequence, these youngsters will become fed up with the society and do something illegally and irresponsibly such as pickpocket, burglary, in the interest of reversing the order of society.
To handle this problem, there are several policies which government should take into account, Firstly, some deterrents might be replenished by principal authority to deter the criminals such as fine or the capital punishment, take them into custody and incarceration, among others. Through this remedy, not only will the awareness of the adolescents raise but there is little likelihood that they will commit the crime one more time. Moreover, the government’s intervention in the syllabus of student play a crucial role in determining their own bright future and providing better education such as the scholar or welfare benefit for students with poor living condition. It is vital that advertisement campaign in term of crime problem will propagate for young generation
and help them stay away from crime.
In conclusion as discussed above, the inadequate parental supervision and curriculum are the main factor behind the rise in juvenile crime, However, the intervention of government could make a contribution to address the surge of juvenile crime and give them the hand to make a getaway of crime zone.
In the modern day, that youngster’s crimes are still exist become increasingly prominent in humanitarian society and there are need solution to be deal with this problem. This dissertation will elabor...
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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Is it a positive or negative development?
It is undeniable that the inexorable popularity of sport events has contributed to the vast investments in professional sportsmen in terms of infrastructure. While some contend with this idea, others believe that these facilities should be made public for ordinary people to use as a way to keep fit. Although this policy brings enormous benefits to the state sports, I believe this trend is detrimental as it prioritizes elite achievement over broader societal benefits.
On the one hand, advocacy on facilities improvement can further foster the potential of athletes to reach triumph in the international field. As being trained through vigorous training programs with the advanced equipment, sportsmen tend to have better performance on the type of sports they play. Therefore, this promotion acts as a precursor for the sport players to acquire higher rewards and success in sport, making great contributions to national achievement in this field. For instance, some developed countries like the USA, UK have their own sport centers to train the young generations with innate ability, which plays as a future investment in advancing the national sport quality when engaging in the global events.
On the other hand, the demerit that the negligence on introducing adequate sport facilities and equipment brings is far more significant as it can deter the public health quality. While more sports hubs are being proposed for the professional, the less open space such as parks, gardens and squares are available for citizens to do exercises. Consequently, less spaces are offered for public sport activities, leading more people to gravitate toward the sedentary lifestyle that constantly exacerbates their health quality.
In conclusion, though an investment on the specialized equipment can be the key to boost the athletes’ quality and promote the national standing, the consequences in deteriorating the general public health quality are far more significant. As a matter of fact, the balance on money allocation and facilities allotting for both sportsmen and trivial citizens should be taken into consideration as a way to ensure the well-rounded and sustainable approach to sport development.
It is undeniable that the inexorable popularity of sport events has contributed to the vast investments in professional sportsmen in terms of infrastructure. While some contend with this idea, others...
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The bar chart compares the proportion of males and females in Australia in separate age categories who did exercise frequently in 2010. Overall, both categories experienced a fluctuation throughout the year surveyed. It is noticeable that the number of women who took part in physical activity was slightly higher than that of men, and men tended to do less workout when they got older.
The youngest male group (15 to 24) initially made up the largest percentage among other age groups of the same gender (52.8%) in terms of regular physical activity participation, followed by a downward trend when the age increased. Notably, the number of men who exercised at the age of 35 to 44 was the lowest.
On the other hand, in 2010, there were 47.7% of women between the age of 15 to 24 who treated physical activity as their daily routine. Opposed to their counterpart, women had a tendency to do more exercise when they grew older. In 20210, the vast majority of women who were 45 to 54 joined in physical activity frequently, whose number peaked at 53.3% and also became the most crowded group.
Above 65, both genders witnessed a decline, and shared almost the same proportion, with 46.7% for males and 47.1 % for females respectively.
The bar chart compares the proportion of males and females in Australia in separate age categories who did exercise frequently in 2010. Overall, both categories experienced a fluctuation throughout th...
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of water consumption for six different places in the world.
Overall, it is clear that people in North America and Europe primarily use water for industry while individuals in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia spend it on agricultural.
The percentage of water consumption for industrial by people in North America people and Europe accounts for nearly half in both areas accounted for 48% and 53% respectively. Also, Usage water for domestic purposes in two regions accounted for 13% and 53% respectively.
Most other countries including South America, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia use water majority for irrigation, with highest figure belonging to Central Asia at 88%, followed by Africa, South East Asia and South America. However, the purposes of consumption water for industrial and domestic purposes in Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia took up with the smallest percentage, only 5% to 12% in each types of purpose. In contrast, South American water usage for domestic was noted at higher rates compared with other areas at 19%.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of water consumption for six different places in the world.
Overall, it is clear that people in North America and Europe primarily use water for industry while in...
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The line graph below shows the average number of uk commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph compares the figure of British who travel daily by different forms of transportation over the period of six decades from 1970 to 2030.
Overall, car is the most popular vehicle in the UK. The number of passengers who use car and train experiences an upward trend over the given time frame, while the figure for bus decrease sharply.
It is striking that car dominates the UK’s means of transportation, starting at approximately 5 million of frequent travellers in 1970, followed by a dramatic increase to 7 million in 2000. Eventually, it will have risen to a peak of 9 million by 2030.
The runner-up is bus, which is the only category to show any fall.
Initially, there were 4 million passengers using the bus on a daily basis in 1970, then the number dropped sharply before hitting a low of 3 million users after 6 decades, predicted to be least popular choice in the future.
Turning to train, which attracts the smallest number of people travelling every day with only 2 million in 1970. Subsequently, the figure for this category climbed gradually over the period of 40 years, then more dramatically to over 3 million passengers in 2030.
The line graph compares the figure of British who travel daily by different forms of transportation over the period of six decades from 1970 to 2030.
Overall, car is the most popular vehicle in the...
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e nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp bài này ạ
Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their
stress and anxiety.
Essay
It is sometimes believed that individuals listen to music to reduce their frustration and worries. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion as now will be discussed.
The first argument behind my belief is that music can protect humans when they are trapped in anxious situations. This is because the human brain will focus on the enjoyable melodies instead of thinking about bad circumstances. By way of illustration of a flight without Wifi, the passengers can be really scary at first, thus immersing themselves in the melodies helps them escape from concern and enjoy the journey. Instead of worrying about the worst situations, the passengers head always thinks about the melodies of the song, thereby making them have a feel safety during the journey,
Such solutions have a positive effect on human’s life.
Another point worth mentioning is that certain types of music recording can help individuals ease their mind and obtain high-quality time at home. Such issues can be proved by researchers that official workers and citizens after returning from work suffer from mental health problems. This can be exemplified that the Harvard News reports high levels of daily stress and tiredness after work days which make 43% of employees feeling that they are on the edge of burnout. In addition, this kind of peaceful sound can help people reduce pressure on their work and find happiness in their mind.
In conclusion, I totally agree that music can be healing for the person given the aforementioned arguments.
Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their
stress and anxiety.
Essay
It is sometimes believed that individuals listen to music to reduce their frustration and...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture illustrates the layout of the Toronto Go Train Station before, during and after the redevelopment. Overall, the platform consisted of two conventional levels for boarding and transiting and was expanded deeper for a third one, catering for commercial purposes. Despite this change, the station remained operational.
Before the construction, the station had two separate levels: the train track on the top and a transit concourse below, with the latter being supported by a pillar with a wider foundation.
During the construction of the second level, specialized machinery was used, with most of the ground and the foundation being removed. Scaffolding was also erected, and a temporary staircase was built for passengers to travel and maintain transportation services.
After renovation, a new level for retailing was opened. The pillar was reconstructed throughout the two levels at the same perimeter with a column footing spread. The transit level was also raised slightly higher.
The picture illustrates the layout of the Toronto Go Train Station before, during and after the redevelopment. Overall, the platform consisted of two conventional levels for boarding and transiting an...
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Contained in the table is data about the number of people who have varied nationalities. Additionally, the pie chart shows the proportion of people in many different parts.
Overall, it can be seen that different groups of people live mostly in metropolises. with regards to the pie chart, those who are Australian have the highest percentage among to total population of Australia
Regarding the statistics of people who have 5 different nationalities living in the city which is higher than those who live in the countryside, ranged from 80% to 99%. The amount of Chinese among the 5 others who live in the city is the highest at 99%, with the least number of people who hardly ever lived in the countryside. It is followed by New Zealanders with nearly 90% of people living in the city and just 10% are countrymans. However other 3 nationalities have just under 90% proportion who live in the city and more than 10% of people live in the countryside
Turning to the pie chart where most people are Australian with around 73%. However, there are 7% of British live in Australia which is higher than the Dutch, Chinese, and New Zealanders, is only 1% 2% 3% respectively
Contained in the table is data about the number of people who have varied nationalities. Additionally, the pie chart shows the proportion of people in many different parts.
Overall, it can be seen...
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Mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
The pie charts illustrate the distribution of time among working adults engaged in six distinct activities within a specific country during the years 1958 and 2008.
Overall, it is clear that the majority of activities witnessed an upward trend, with the exception of sleeping and hanging out with friends/ family. Additionally, the highest number was seen in the number of adults working spent the most amount of time in a day throughout the period.
In 1958, individuals allocated more than a third of their daily time to work and sleep, comprising a considerable 33%, outnumbered those at that time. After 50 years, although sleeping remained the second most common activity, this figure fell by a fourth. In stark contrast, there was a significant rise in the time allocated to employment, reaching a peak at 42% of the daily time. Going out activities also started at an impressive figure, 19% before its figure decreased by only 6% in 2008.
Turning to the others, commuting to work and other interests or playing sport and experienced a similar trend, with both activities increasing gradually to converge at 8%. After 50 decades, growing slightly 5%, relaxing at home amounted to 13% at the end of the period.
Note: Tiện cô cho em lời khuyên, với dạng Pie này em nên so sánh số liệu của 2 năm để phân tích hay nên phân tích từng năm 1. Ví dụ cho cả dạng 4 pie nữa ạ
The pie charts illustrate the distribution of time among working adults engaged in six distinct activities within a specific country during the years 1958 and 2008.
Overall, it is clear that the ma...
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Writing task 1 - Em nhờ thầy cô chấm chữa giúp ạ.
The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. (đề)
The given map illustrates two types of room providing for one person and two people at an Australian college.
Overall, two-person room have more furnitures than single one. Besides, living in the former one week is more expensive than the latter.
To begin with, both of rooms are equipped with television, microwave, sink, and stove. Then, their windows are located to the top right-hand corner where a bed is next to. There is a bathroom in the northwest of them.
Besides, while the width of two-person dormitory is longer than that for one person, accounting for 4 metres and 2.5 metres, respectively, the length is similar. Two-person room has two beds and two study desks compared to their figure are only one in single room. Additionally, table and chairs are only placed in the central area of two people room alongside two set of cupboards. Finally, as the price of two-person room is 350 dollars weekly, 200 dollars are the cost for the other at the same time.
The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. (đề)
The given map illustrates two types of room providing for one person and two...
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