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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read more






Nighftall
4/3/2024
Writing task1.Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ.
Đề bài:The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant The pie chart illustrates the proportion of different groups of workers in Australia in the year of 2003 while the given line chart depicts how their rates of unemployment changed from 1993 to 2003. Overall, Australia-born workers dominate the largest proportion in the total workforce of Australia. Additionally, all groups of workers experienced a downward trend in unemployment level while group of workers who do not speak English remained the highest over the period. Regarding workforce composition, the vast majority were people who derived from Australia, accounting for 76%. This was distantly followed by NESC and ESC groups, representing 14% and 10% respectively. Concerning the patterns of unemployment, initially, approximately 7% of those coming from NESC group unemployment. Despite witnessing fluctuation with a downward trend, declining from 7% to 3% in the last year of the period, this group of workers still held its dominant position throughout. The figures for native-born Australians and those from ESC followed a similar trend, with respective levels decreasing to 2% and 1% at the final year of the period. I have rated the app 5 stars and 1 positive feedback <3. Đề bài:The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting t... Read more


Nguyễn Nguyên
2/3/2024
Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: The graph compares the percentage of international and the percentage of UK students gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK University in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Bài làm: The bar chart illustrates the difference between national and international students graduated with second-class or first-class degrees across eight fields at a UK university in 2019. Overall, it can be seen that in science and technology major, the number of international students graduates with a second-class degree or better was higher whereas in four other majors, UK primarily dominated. It is also interesting to note that in Nursing and Accountancy, there was no difference between the graduates quantity. In terms of technology-related subjects listed as Electrical Engineering and Information Technology, foreign students outnumbered UK students. This is particularly true for Information Technology in which the percentage of international students was above 85% compares to less than 60% of national graduates. Similarly, the figures inclined to international students with a 20% gap in Electrical Engineering. Regarding Arts and Humanities and Social Science majors including English Literature, Art History, International Law and Sociology, the number of UK pupils pre-dominated. Both Art History and Sociology had 80% of UK students graduates with a second-class degree or higher and 70% and 75% abroad graduates respectively. International Law has the lowest over-sea students percentage and also the lowest in the chart of less than 50%. (200 words) Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: The graph compares the percentage of international and th... Read more


Nguyễn Nguyên
4/3/2024
Writing Task 1: Process- Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words Bài làm: The flow chart illustrates the four common consequences of forest clearcutting. Trees are removed on a large scale results in four immediate effects which leads to floods, soil erosion, biodiversity reduction and droughts. One instantaneous effect of deforestation is compacted soil formed from heavy logging equipment on the top soil. The hard ,and "baked" soil restricts water drainage which accounted for flooding. Another immediate consequence of logging is the reduction in the quantity of floral species. With the reduction, plants release less moisture into the air which ultimately lead to the lack of precipitation and the increase incidence of drought. Simultaneously, eliminating the plants also responsible for the erosion of the top soil layer because fewer roots underground remained to hold the soil together. Finally, the chance of intentional ,and unintentional forests fire increases due to clearcutting. Fire hazard leaves the wood remaining as a source of nutrition for micro-organisms. These species, then, breaks the balance of natural biodiversity, courtesy of degrading the existing vegetation. Overall, it can be seen that over-cutting has a major influence on biodiversity , and the soil quality both long-term and short-term. Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 1 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestati... Read more


Tùng
2/3/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar chart illustrates the sales of five major phone brands worldwide between 2009 and 2013. Overall, there were increases in the sales of Samsung and Apple, while the opposite was true for those of Nokia, LG and ZTE. Additionally, in the first year, Nokia recorded the highest revenue, but this was the case for Samsung in the final year, while ZTE was by far the least bought over the period. Regarding manufacturers with the highest figures, in 2009, Nokia dominated the market with 440 million units sold, nearly twice Samsung’s sales (230 million), the second most popular brand in that year. Conversely, in 2013, Samsung sold 450 million units, surpassing Nokia’s figure (250 million), becoming the best seller, while Nokia was the second. Concerning other companies, roughly 120 million LG phones were sold in 2009, followed by a gradual decline of 40 million in 2013. In contrast, Apple’s sales saw the greatest growth, from the lowest at around 20 million devices initially to 150 million finally, to become the third most favoured brand. Meanwhile, ZTE saw a minor incline over the period and was the least preferred brand from 2011 onwards, from approximately 50 million units in the first year to just over this level in the final year. The bar chart illustrates the sales of five major phone brands worldwide between 2009 and 2013. Overall, there were increases in the sales of Samsung and Apple, while the opposite was true for those o... Read more


Tùng
2/3/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The bar graph illustrates how children aged 5 to 12 in a country commuted to and from school by different means of transport in 1990 and 2020. Overall, being driven by car was more preferred than other transportation types, with this option being the most popular subsequently, while this was true for walking in the previous year. Regarding active means of transport, in 1990, going to school on foot was the most common choice, with just over 12 million trips made per year, but numbers halved after 3 decades. Moreover, schoolchildren travelled 6 million times in 1990 by cycling and the combination of walking to the bus stop and going by bus, before journeys decreased to 2 and 3 million, respectively over the next 30 years, making cycling the least favoured choice. Concerning the passive ones, although the use of cars was the least opted in the first year, with 4 million journeys, numbers nearly tripled in the last year, surpassing that of walking to be by far the most widely used means. Meanwhile, taking the bus was the second most popular method, with 7 million trips being made in the former year, followed by a 2 million decrease in the latter year, becoming the third most chosen approach. The bar graph illustrates how children aged 5 to 12 in a country commuted to and from school by different means of transport in 1990 and 2020. Overall, being driven by car was more preferred than othe... Read more


minh huế
2/3/2024
Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ. In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In competitive job market today , people have to relocate from their hometown to find job opportunities. From my perspective , despite presenting several certain drawbacks , the advantages of this development are more significant. Moving away from families and loved ones make indivudual likely encounter mental health issues such as depression as geographical barrier prevents them from emotional connection.Some tend to not confide their trouble with their families , especially in cases of migrate workers , to just ease families’worries while their families and friends remain unaware.People have the feelings of isolation and homesickness , especially people who are introverts and always keep distance with their colleagues in new work environment.Consequently this have negative impact on their work performance and productivity , presenting negative sides of this trend. On the other hand , firstly , relocating to unfamiliar places helps people step out of their comfort zone. This foster independence , resilience and self-reliance , standing on their own whenever facing difficulties as they no longer have their parents and loved ones nearby for support.They also acquire self-sufficiency skills such as cooking or laundry to complete household responsibilities and meet their basic needs. Secondly , relocating for jobs help individuals achieve career fulfillment Moving to economic hubs and metropolitan areas open up opportunities for career advancement and professional growth that are often not available in one’s hometown. .Major companies and business offer higher salaries and better benefits.Employees not only have chance to experience professional settings but also gain well-paying jobs. In conclusion , while relocating for employment have negative impacts on metal health , I firmly believe that this trend brings more beneficial aspects to individuals about career fulfillment and personal growth. In competitive job market today , people have to relocate from their hometown to find job opportunities. From my perspective , despite presenting several certain drawbacks , the advantages of this dev... Read more
Nhu Quynh
3/3/2024
Some people say that certain personality types are more suited to particular jobs. Do you think this is true? Can we change our personality?
cho em hỏi dạng này là dạng nào và cách làm với ạ cho em hỏi dạng này là dạng nào và cách làm với ạ
Nguyễn Huỳnh Anh Thư
2/3/2024
WRITING TASK 2: Mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
TASK. People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Thanks to technological developments, humans living in the 21st century have a more enhanced quality of life than older generations. I strongly agree with this opinion, as I think the advancements in science and technology have significant impacts on our way of living. First of all, the rising numbers of medical innovations in facilities and disease treatment methods enhanced quality of life is unprecedented progress and individuals can accessible to more populations than the prior centuries. Modern medical innovations have not only increased life expectancy but also improved the quality of life through effective treatments and preventive care. For example, advancements in medical imaging and minimally invasive surgery have made complex procedures safer and more accessible, drastically reducing recovery times and improving outcomes. Another justification for improving individuals' quality of life is that digital technology makes networking, commerce, and entertainment more convenient and rich. The internet and smartphones have democratized access to information, connecting people across the globe and empowering them with knowledge and resources. Furthermore, the use of mobile banking services has made money transactions among individuals less time-consuming and more managed, since consumers can now access a variety of leisure alternatives at any time and from any location. For example, instead of going to cinemas to watch films, now people can surf the web to opt for millions of films just through several clicks with less expenses. To conclude, the 21st century offers a superior quality of life, primarily thanks to groundbreaking advancements in healthcare and the transformative impact of digital technology. These developments have not only prolonged our lives but have also enriched our daily experiences making our modern life more convenient, connected, and comfortable than ever before. TASK. People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Thanks to technological developments, humans living in th... Read more
Nguyễn Nguyên
2/3/2024
Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: Many people believe that formal "pen and paper" examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? Bài làm: Some argues that paper tests are not the ideal measurement of academic results. Admittedly, paper tests may have certain limitations. However, in my opinion, there are no better solution available. First of all, paper examinations reduces the risk of unjustified achievements by ensuring all candidates are evaluated based on the same set of criteria. This eliminates the possibility of favoritism that may arise in other testing methods such as online tests, interviews or practical challenges. They can also be kept as record for further investigation if required. World-wide certificates such as IELTS need to be delivered to multiple countries and there is no better method than printed exams. Second of all, printed tests are efficient and cost-effective. Alternative test can take a long time and a certain amount of money to prepare and conduct. This not only increase the cost of participation fee but the organization fund can also suffer. Small scale competition can be hosted easily, however, others such as the national university entrance exam is impossible to be taken place with such measures. On the other hand, online tests which are affordable and time-saving are becoming a trend at the time. With the increasing availability of technology, online testing platforms offer a convenient experience for students, especially those who live in remoted areas. Despite of its advantages, the test has no guarantees of the monitor needed, therefore, candidates might commit exam counterfeits leading to unfair results. There are opinions which assume paper tests are solely theoretical information rather than practical knowledge. Although it might be true to some extent, until there are a better solution monetarily and timely, paper examinations will remain the best option. (277 words) Em chào thầy cô, dưới đây là bài Writing Task 2 của em, em rất mong có thể được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô rất nhiều. Đề bài: Many people believe that formal "pen and paper" examination... Read more
Tùng
2/3/2024
Attentive Student
Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The pie chart shows the percentage of Australian workers from three areas in 2003, while the line graph illustrates the unemployment rate of those three groups in this country from 1993 to 2003. Overall, native Australians accounted for the majority of the workforce. Additionally, all three categories examined experienced a downward trend and slight fluctuations in the proportion of unemployment over the period, with that of non-English-speaking nations consistently the highest, while the opposite was true for other English-speaking nations but Australia. Regarding the pie chart, just over three-quarters of the labour force were locally born in Australia, much higher than those from non-English-speaking (14%) and English-speaking countries (10%) combined. Concerning the line graph, the unemployment level of individuals born in non-English-speaking countries was the highest in 1993, at about 7%, followed by a significant decline to the lowest point at around 3% in 2000, before remaining relatively stable towards 2003. Meanwhile, 4% of native Australians were unemployed initially, after which it halved in the final year, despite a negligible recovery in 1996 and 2001. Finally, a similar pattern, albeit to a greater extent, was seen in the figures for jobless non-native English speakers, starting from just below 4% in the first year and ending at approximately 1%, despite recovering minorly in 1996 and 2001. The pie chart shows the percentage of Australian workers from three areas in 2003, while the line graph illustrates the unemployment rate of those three groups in this country from 1993 to 2003. Ov... Read more


hải anh
29/2/2024
em mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ
The bar charts illustrate the overall proportion of films premiered and that of ticket sales between 1996 and 2004 in a country. Overall, while there was an increase in the percentage of drama, comedy and fantasy films, that of romance films still stayed intact. In addition, comedy was the genre consistently selling the most tickets compared to the remaining genres in the period given. The percentage of drama movies being released started at over 25% in 1996, after which it experienced an upward tendency to 35%, followed by a mere 5% increase in the comedy genre. A similar change was seen in the figure for fantasy, rising from just over 10% to about 15%, whereas the figure for romantic films remained unchanged at around 5% throughout the examined period. In terms of the ticket sales, exactly 20% of ticket sales were made up by comedy films in 1996, with a subsequent increase to just under 25% at the end of the period. A similar pattern, but to a lesser extent, was witnessed in the figure for dramas, which grew from over 15% to roughly 17% in 2000. Moreover, the ticket sales of fantasy increased moderately from under 5% at the beginning to nearly 7% in 2000, while the figure for romance movies showed an opposing pattern, decreasing from 5% to around 2% in 2000. The bar charts illustrate the overall proportion of films premiered and that of ticket sales between 1996 and 2004 in a country. Overall, while there was an increase in the percentage of drama, comedy... Read more


hải anh
29/2/2024
em mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp e ạ
The line chart illustrates how many hours on average four car brands spent on manufacturing vehicles at their US factories. Overall, there was a decrease in the amount of time producing a vehicle in all car manufacturers examined, with Honda generally being the brand using the lowest time to produce a car throughout the period given. The figure for Ford started at 28 hours in 1998 to reach a peak of around 31 hours after 3 years, but later dropped to just under 22 hours at the end of the period. By contrast, the figure for General Motor witnessed a consistent drop from exactly 32 to 22 hours in 2005. As for the other remaining groups, 22 hours were spent on manufacturing a single vehicle by both Honda and Toyota in 1998, and they still continued to share the similar production time between 2001 and 2002, at around 23 hours per car, after witnessing a slight fluctuation over 3 years. Afterward, they managed to fluctuate again during the following years, before declining and converging at 20 hours of completing a car in the final year. The line chart illustrates how many hours on average four car brands spent on manufacturing vehicles at their US factories. Overall, there was a decrease in the amount of time producing a vehicle in a... Read more


minh huế
29/2/2024
Dạ em chào các cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ . The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
overall , production level of petroleum had the highest figure during the period shown . In addtion , while the production levels of petroleum and natural gas increased over the period , the opposite was true in case of coal. In terms of petroleum , the production level started at around 95 million tonnes in 1981 , then increased significantly to approximately 139 million tonnes in 1984 before remaining relatively stable from 1994 to 1997 / over the next four years.In 1991 , the figure for petroleum declined dramatically to 100 million tonnes , followed by rising considerably to nearly 140 million tonnes towards the end of the timeframe Natural gas followed a much steadier upward trend compared to that of petroleum. Starting at under 40 million tonnes itinally in 1981/ in the first year , natural gas overtook the production level of coal in 1991, and ended at 100 million tonnes in 2000. in contrast , the level of coal witnessed a downward trend. Starting at 80 million tonnes in the first year , this figure declined considerably by approximately 40 million tonnes in 1984 , followed by remaining stable in the next 4 years before experiencing the gradual fall in the entire years and ending at nearly 39 million tonnes in 2000. overall , production level of petroleum had the highest figure during the period shown . In addtion , while the production levels of petroleum and natural gas increased over the period , the opposite... Read more


minh huế
29/2/2024
Dạ em chào thầy cô , mong thầy cô giúp em chấm chữa bài ạ em cảm ơn ạ . Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number, and so on) for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking. Is this a positive or negative development?
In current society , many people tend to share their private details online for different purposes.From my perspective ,desptive presenting certain negative aspects , the positive ones are more significant in our increasingly digital society. Providing personal details online contributes to enhanced convenience , help decrease much time on transactions and communication. For example , in the past , to sign up for a bark account , people needed go to the bank branch which waste much time and transportation costs.Therefore , online personal information help users complete time-consuming paperwork without vititing to a bank branch . Moreover , when signing up again , users only fill their names and contact phones to get themselves verified , which is beneficial in cases of emergency when they try to sign up for their account. Secondly , this trend fosters social connections regardless of geographical barrier. For example, users can find out old friends in high school through searching these friend’s names and cities by search engines on popular networking sites such as Facebook and Instagram , then they can keep in touch with each others after a long time.Therefore , users can maintain and develop their social relationships. these benefits not only simplify time-consuming paperworks but also enrich social interactions , illustrating positive aspects of sharing private personal information online. However , the safety concerns are raised about this issue. The advancement of digital technologies pave the way for the privacy breaches and identity theft. Cybercriminals can break into someone’s account , then exploit and steal relevant information such as home adddress , contact number and identity card number.They also utilize detective techniques to trick individuals into revealing the sensitive information such as login information or financial details. Moreover , there have been reports that some social networking sites such as Tik Tok keep track of users’ activities , exploit data and sell illegally users’ information without their permission. These lead to identity theft and financial loss in increasingly digital society , laying out negative ones of this trend. In conclusion , while sharing personal details online brings certain risks relating to personal privacy , I believe that the impacts of this trend on modern society are overwhelmingly positive. In current society , many people tend to share their private details online for different purposes.From my perspective ,desptive presenting certain negative aspects , the positive ones are more signif... Read more
Đỗ hoàng
1/3/2024
writing test 2
The debatable questions regarding testing in education have emerged in recent years. Particularly, there are several arguments battle them affirming that they will likely result in more harm than benefits. I personally think that those examinations play an important role in our nowadays society, but they should not be the sole method to value students. First of all, it is undoubtedly true that testing methods bring huge advantages, not only efficient in assessing students's knowledge but also in assessing the ability to remember. For instance, many researchers suggest that individuals who are good at dealing with a chain of examination are also good at being capable of remembering new knowledge emerging continuously. Another point to make is that examinations are the fairest assessment method because marks have a considerable impact on their final result and their fortune. Given all this, it is not entirely inaccurate to state that they have more educational benefits than disadvantages. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages that cannot be easily verified. One of them is that, besides the wide amount of information tests can acquire, they in some ways can cause the succession of pressure in terms of students's remembering ability and self-defense before studying stress. Moreover, popular competitions in education among students nowadays can strongly effect to their characters and result unpredicted conflict. For example, pupils finished exams with flying color are naturally awarded and commended in front of the whole school in the mean while others with lower scores are obviously received nothing but giving them a round of applause, some of them are even punished by their family due to their colapse. As a result, competitive and jealous emotion will gradually built, waiting for an opportune moment to erupt, perpetrating dangerous actions in student's health and mentality, and its consequences cannot be judged. Finally, only focus on challenging among students is constantly enlarged but ignored the significance of teamwork capability, which is very nescessary in modern society can create lonelyness and don't-care attitude. In conclusion, I think that currently applying tests need to be adjusted, but not mean that their role should be reduced. As stated above, they have a series of downsides that could be handled if, the board of education pay more attention on pupil, and offer effective methods couraging teamwork ability. Overall, their benefits still outweight the disadvantages, but they could be improved even better with only some minor modifications. The debatable questions regarding testing in education have emerged in recent years. Particularly, there are several arguments battle them affirming that they will likely result in more harm than bene... Read more


Phụng Nguyễn
29/2/2024
The diagrams below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Nhờthầy cô chấm chữa giúp em. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The maps illustrate the present layout and proposed transformation of an industrial zone. Overall, the most notable change is the conversion of an industrial site into a new residential area. This results in the removal of offices, canteen, factory and other structures to make way for the establishment of housing and a variety of amenities. In contrast, the surrounding road systems will remain steady. In terms of western development, the existing parking and storage facilities, bordering Toe Lan, are proposed to be replaced by the construction of a 3 bedroom house and a 4 bedroom house. On the Eastern site of the plan, which is to the left of Pie Walk, the space of the current factory will be expanded in order to erect parking areas and a series of apartments. To the Northern area of the layout, along Chimney Road, it is expected that the entrance and reception will substitute with the building of 3 double-bedroom houses. Central to the site, the old yard will be transformed into communal gardens, which will lead to the formation of private roads on the west, east, and south periphery. In the southern section, parking garages, at the corner of Swallow Street and Pie Walk, will be built to replace the existing office blocks and a canteen,which optimizes the area's use by consuming less space than the former office structure. The maps illustrate the present layout and proposed transformation of an industrial zone. Overall, the most notable change is the conversion of an industrial site into a new residential area. This... Read more


Phụng Nguyễn
29/2/2024
Nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài bên dưới. em cảm ơn.
Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Some experts claim that the citizen's satisfaction is not involved in any rise in the economic development of a rich nation. From my point of view, although a wealthy country can bring some benefits to their residents, I firmly agree with this notion. On the one hand, economic growth plays a key role in improving the quality of life of inhabitants in a country. First of all, wealthy nations often concentrate on investing in the healthcare system to assure treatments and medications for any patients. To illustrate, modern equipment, specific drugs, and vaccines are always available in wealthy countries to ensure that emergency or challenging cases can be solved immediately. For example, some patients in undeveloped countries have to come to developed ones with advanced healthcare systems such as Singapore to treat difficult diseases. Secondly, rich countries can offer various high-paid jobs for their citizens compared to poorer countries, which can lead to higher levels of employment and lower the rate of poverty as well. For instance, there is a large number of Vietnamese workers in Vietnam who choose to work overseas labor export to other richer countries such as Japan, Taiwan, Korea, and European nations so that they can earn more money to support their families. On the other hand, from my perspective, I believe that the wealth of a nation does not necessarily equate happiness to its residents. First, it is true that the rate of depression, stress, and taxing is high in some developed countries such as Korea, America and Japan. In contrast, the country of Bhutan is well-known as the happiest country in the world, even though it is considered as a relatively poor nation. Furthermore, excessive wealth may bring some detrimental impacts among people. In fact, there are numerous individuals pursuing material possession to prove their financial capability. Consequently, after possessing luxurious items such as cars and clothing, they find themselve empty and lonely as they lose many important relationships and other spiritual values. In conclusion, although there are some specific advantages that a wealthy nation can bring to their citizens, I do not believe that people in rich countries can have more satisfaction when their government continues boosting the economy as there are other factors measuring a person's level of happiness. Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Some exper... Read more
Trần Việt An
1/3/2024
Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ
The table compares the tuition fees for overseas students in US Dollars in different postgraduate degrees in three countries in 2007. Overall, it is clear that tuition for most courses in country B was the highest, while art and commerce courses in country A were the lowest. Additionally, computing and science were the most expensive courses in all nations. Arts and commerce generally offered cheaper fees than other courses in the three countries. As for arts and commerce fees in country C, they cost 19000, followed by B and A with 18000 and 8000, respectively. Whereas, 8000 dollars was the fee that the country had to pay for meals and accommodation in country A, and 17000 and 11000 dollar for payable fees in country B and C. In terms of science, 29000 was the tuition fee in country A, which was marginally higher than that of country B, with 25000, and the lowest fee courses was 11000 in country A. Furthermore, Country B also ranked first in the courses fee for computing 27000, which was higher than that of country C 3000, 11000 was the tuition fee for country A. The table compares the tuition fees for overseas students in US Dollars in different postgraduate degrees in three countries in 2007. Overall, it is clear that tuition for most courses in country B w... Read more


bao linh truong
25/2/2024
em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.
The bar chart depicts the adjustment in house prices based on the standard number in 1989, locating in 5 different areas in a period from 1990 to 2002. In general, the changing period was seperated into two unrelated time, which remarkably illustrated the consistent rise of dwelling value in Madrid city in Spain. In particular, London was a city, of which percentage of average housing prices had a dramatic increase and took the leading role in this category during a second period. In the moment between 1990 and 1995, the proportion of housing cost in New York, London, and Tokyo had declined up to and more than 5% compared to the amount in 1989. In contrast, the rising percentage of house value only occurred in two places which were Madrid and Frankfurt with the amount not even reaching 5%. However, coming to the years between 1996-2002, only Tokyo remained its house prices lower than the average price in 1989, at 5%. However, its dwelling price had experienced a slight jump from the previous period until 2002, around 3%. Additionally, house prices in Frankfurt indicated the decrease about 1% for most of two periods, but its percentage still surpassed the standard price. The bar chart depicts the adjustment in house prices based on the standard number in 1989, locating in 5 different areas in a period from 1990 to 2002. In general, the changing period was seperated... Read more


Đỗ hoàng
29/2/2024
writing task 1
The total value of exports and the value of fuel, food, and manufactured products exported by one country from 2000 to 2005 is demonstrated in the graph below. The value of fuel exports has been shown a dramatic reduction from 30.000 to 25.000 million dollars in the first three years before followed by a period of top-notch upsurge until the final year. The export of food hovered under 10.000 million dollars over the whole time frame. The value of manufactured goods showed a huge increase in amount from 15.000 to almost 25.000 million dollars in the first three years, the figure went down quickly to 20.000 in 2003, until followed by a period of stability around this value until 2005 nearly 22.000 million dollars. Starting off at over 40.000 million dollars in 2000, in contrast the export of fuel indicated notable decrease by a half in value all the timeline and ended accurately 20.000 million dollars in 2005. In summary, the data provided in the graph below offer insights into the total value of export, the value of fuel, food, and manufactured goods from 2000 to 2005. The total value of exports and the value of fuel, food, and manufactured products exported by one country from 2000 to 2005 is demonstrated in the graph below. The value of fuel exports has been shown... Read more
