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Lee Wenyong

9/7/2024

LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!

Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được: 1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất. 2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó. 3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi. Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn. Nếu bạn vẫn còn thắc mắc nào về English club, bạn có thể comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu... Read more

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Lee Wenyong

9/7/2024

CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!

Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read more

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Tùng

27/2/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to four different attractions in Scotland: aquarium, castle, zoo, and festival, between 1980 and 2010. Overall, there were decreases in the sha... Read more

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Tùng

27/2/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The table illustrates how many people from five countries in Europe resided in other countries in this region in 2011. Overall, the highest total of immigrants recorded was the Polish, while the oppos... Read more

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Tùng

27/2/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The line graph illustrates the export volume from Australia to four countries, namely Japan, the US, China, and India between 1990 to 2012. Overall, there were increases in the export proportions t... Read more

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Trần Việt An

25/2/2024

Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ

Some people believe that increasing taxes on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion. Opinions diverge the imposition of elevated taxes on several economic sectors, which can decrease environmental degradation. In contrast, there are more helpful methods to resolve this problem. On the one hand, putting high taxes on diverse industries to alleviate pollution for two reasons. Firstly, high taxes may encourage more sustainable technological advancement. When faced with large tax payable, companies are forced to invest money in modern and cleaner technology. For example, the implementation of a significant tax on single-use plastic prompts manufacturers who have to adopt biodegradable materials for packaging. This reformation can help businesses retain revenue without big tax payable, especially with the technology that is friendly to the environment. Moreover, increasing taxes will decrease the number of companies that do not meet environmental standards. Because most of the small companies produce plastic, brick, and cement releasing a large number of emissions into the air. On the other hand, there are also more viable ways to handle this problem. The first is one of which is the introduction of rigorous environmental regulations. The authorities should heavily punish organizations that intentionally disobey the laws. To illustrate, business licenses are stripped and members are sentenced to prison by the Vietnamese government for affecting badly into environment. Furthermore, educating and increasing public awareness of citizens to make environment-conscious choices in daily life such as saving water and using recycled electricity, changing to drive electricity transportation instead of oil cars. In conclusion, although I admit that heighten taxs on businesses can address pollution by promoting clean technology and decreasing carbon emissions. But, using strict laws and policies on businesses is also a good way to decrease pollution Some people believe that increasing taxes on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.... Read more

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Pham Thuy

25/2/2024

Attentive Student

Dạ hi vọng được các cô sửa và feedback bài task 2 này ạ

Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. In this day and age, the question of which are the factors leading to success in life has sparked an ongoing debate. While some people believe it comes from hard work and determination, others think some factors such as money and appearance significantly contribute to success. In this essay, I will delve into analyzing both stances, before concluding my own view why I would lean towards the former. On the one hand, there are some undeniable reasons why some individuals think money and appearance play an important role in becoming successful. Initially, the strong financial background could facilitate many favorable conditions to success. This is because people can have more opportunities to access higher education and better services based on strong finance. As a result, they could easily lay the foundation for career development, thus resulting in higher job opportunities and living standards. Another factor considered as an essential element is appearance. To begin with, having an outstanding look could offer individuals more choices in an alluring career and attractive salary. For example, many positions that have a high advancement in economic and banking systems require both employees and employers with a good appearance. Therefore, possessing an attractive look can be a vital catalyst to give people more chances to succeed in life. On the other hand, I hold the view that hard work and determination are one of the most important factors to succeed. Regarding the former, the road to success requires individuals who have an industrious character. To be more specific, it is understandable that the development in the career ladder is usually accompanied with long hours of hard and effective working. Thus, they might become more successful if they are equipped with this valuable quality. Regarding the latter, determination with a lot of goals helps them navigate and develop more effectively. Due to the motivation gained from their goals, they are likely to become more committed with their targets instead of giving up when facing some challenges. As a result, through hard work and strong determination, people could get a higher position in their career prosperity, leading to significant success in their lives. In conclusion, while I acknowledge finance and appearance play an essential role for people to become successful in life, I concede that hard work and determination are more significant in creating success in life. However, there is a need for a balanced strive between these factors to facilitate the best condition for individuals to gain success in their life. Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and g... Read more

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Tùng

24/2/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The diagrams illustrate the changes that have taken place in a school between 1985 and now. Overall, the school has undergone significant changes, the most important of which are the addition and deve... Read more

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Tùng

24/2/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The picture compares the layout and furniture between a single student room and a dual one at an Australian university. Overall, the two-student room is more spacious, catering for more furnishings, m... Read more

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Pham Thuy

24/2/2024

Attentive Student

Em chào các cô, hi vọng các cô sẽ chấm và feedback cho em bài task 2 này ạ

Question: Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children, while others claim it has positive effects for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. In this day and age, the question of whether it is good or bad for children to watch TV has sparked an ongoing debate. In this essay I will delve into analyzing both stances, before concluding my own view why its drawbacks are more profound. Admittedly, watching TV can benefit children in terms of obtaining knowledge and developing some valuable qualities. Regarding the former, many children could gain knowledge through watching educational television programs. To be more clarify, many educational programs, which provide insight into animals, science and history could offer kids a range of solid knowledge backgrounds, laying the foundation for cognitive development and future academic study. As a result, it not only contributes to their cognitive development but also helps them easily achieve high academic performance as they grow up. Regarding the latter, some advertisements can inspire kids with many precious messages about appropriate behaviors. Throughout some advertising created to deliver some meaningful lessons about behaving with others, they can realize the right actions and become more responsible. For example, many advertisements aimed at changing wrong children’s behaviors can have significantly positive impacts on them, leading to a sense of appreciation and responsibility. However, it is my firm belief that the advantages of watching TV from children pale in comparison with its disadvantages. One of these drawbacks is that eye-strain can be resulted from overspending time on the screen. This is because many kids nowadays become more addicted to entertainment programs such as cartoons, thus they can spend long hours in front of the screen for only entertainment purposes. Therefore, it can take a toll on their eyesight, potentially affecting their work and study in the future. Another disadvantage is some programs could trigger them to do a lot of dangerous activities. Initially, some adventurous programs, which are produced by professionals and generated for adults only can promote kids to mimic some life-threatening activities. Consequently, this can put children's health at risk and hinder their overall well-being. In conclusion, while I concede that watching TV can bring certain benefits for kids when they get older, I hold the view that its disadvantages are more significant. However, there is a need for a balanced approach in order to facilitate favorable conditions for their well-rounded development. Question: Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children, while others claim it has positive effects for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. In this day a... Read more

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Tùng

24/2/2024

Attentive Student

Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.

The picture illustrates the design and mechanism of a modern landfill for household use. Overall, the landfill comprises several layers, with two drainage systems and a self-degraded process of househ... Read more

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Sunnyy

23/2/2024

E chào các thầy cô của Pombeebee ạ. E nhờ thầy cô chấm chữa bài này giúp em với ạ. E cảm ơn.

Đề bài: The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. The line graph compares figures for exporting from Australia to Japan, US, China and India betw... Read more

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Lora

23/2/2024

People who aspire to fame and fortune often feel more pressure than happiness. Why? And what are the effects?

In recent years, many people believe that being famous and fortunate are very exciting and they automatically make people feel happy. However, some people feel more pressure than happiness when they a... Read more

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Trần Việt An

22/2/2024

Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ

The bar chart illustrates the volume of travelers from different world regions to country X in 2007 and 2008, while the table describes the income of many businesses in Xcountry during the same period... Read more

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NGUYỄN THỊ NGỌC ANH

22/2/2024

Mọi người giúp em bài này với ạ. Em cảm ơn

Differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays people are watching the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels. To what extent do the disadvantages of this outwe... Read more

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Lê Văn Duy

21/2/2024

Mọi người có thể chấm giúp em bài này được không ạ

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsastifactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions. bài làm của em ạ: While a school of thought holds accepting a bad situation is the best idea, others are of opinion that endeavor and enhancing is better. From my perspective, I align myself with the latter view. On the one hand, it is understandable why some argue that accepting a bad situation is the best idea. The key rationale is that They have many characteristics such as lazy, and easily give up. In fact, these days numerous people often have this characteristic, and they often attribute to fortunate because of their mistakes in their work or study. For example, many students do not prepare for the examination, thus, they cannot get a high score at school. As a consequence, they may ascribe to the difficulty of examiners and tasks. This goes to show that accepting a bad situation is a idea of many easily give up and lazy people.’ On the other hand, I side with those who believe that endeavor to enhance their situations is a better idea. First, these people often are patient, and they never give up despite any barriers. They often bear a responsibility with the work or study of them. For example, when they have some mistakes in their works, they may be punished by their boss. However, they do not ascribe to their fortunate, while they check themselves and fix it to be better. Second, they are often hard-working to reach a best result despite their disadvantaged conditions such as poverty. Many people who have these characteristics often get more success than others, who just rely on their fortunate. For example, Son Tung MTP, a famous singer, despite his poverty, he tried to buy an old computer to publish his first song “Con mua ngang qua”. Today, he is regarded as one of the most famous in singer in Viet Nam. In conclusion, although there are some justifications to advocate accepting bad situations is the best idea, I would contend that the best idea is try to enhance their skills and fix their mistakes to be better. Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsastifactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these vie... Read more

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Huyền

23/2/2024

Giúp mình bài này với ạ mình đang cần nó trong tối nay

The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied

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bao linh truong

21/2/2024

em mong các thầy cô có thể chấm chữa bài writing này giúp em ạ. Em xin cảm ơn.

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. In recent years, there has been a controversial and prevalent debate for the adjustment in criminal punishments. Some state that they should create certain penalties for the specific sorts of wrongdoings. However, the others require that before giving the punishments, it is necessary to consider some surrounding factors that can impact on the final decision. Therefore, my essay will elaborate further on both views, and state my perspective. Creating an appropriate punishment for each type of illegal acts can prevent individuals from the long-term engaging in crime. This is because if people have the clear awareness in how terrible of the punishments are, they will feel scared and even hesitate to participate in any crime. For instance, there is a rule in Canada for littering and the one who breaks the rule must be fined for 2000 bucks. As the result, that country has become one of the cleanest countries globally. Thus, the good deterrence will have a positive effect on human being. On the contrary, considering other categories before giving the penalty becomes more equivalent for people. Due to the surrounding factors which sometimes lead individuals to accidently commit the crime, so it may need a careful researd to bring out the proper punishment for each case. Similarly, the woman killing her husband to defend herself from violent action should not be compared as the other killers in purpose. Therefore, currently, before conducting any penalty, most of criminal situation must be discussed carefully at the court. To sum up, creating suitable punishments for each type of crime can contribute to the decline in criminal. However, my perspective is preferable to the careful consideration due to the equality for individuals. Particularly, the purpose for this debate is just to make people do not make any illegal choice. Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should al... Read more

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Pham Thuy

21/2/2024

Attentive Student

Xin chào các cô yêu quý, em hi vọng được các cô chấm và feedback bài task 2 này ạ

Question: Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? In this day and age, the topic of who are the best people to talk to students about the dangers of committing a crime has become an ongoing debate. While some believe it should be individuals who have been in prison and become good citizens later due to their valuable lessons and advice, I hold the view that it should be experts and professionals with a lot of pedagogical knowledge to gain more efficiency. On the one hand, speakers who have been in prison giving talks about crime can help youngsters realize the severe consequences based on their experiences and deter them from illegal activities. First of all, ex-prisoners can educate school students about the severe consequences. This is because they are people who understand exactly the harsh punishment by laws, the pain caused to victims and the torment of conscience. As a result, by their realistic experiences they could instill teenagers about the fear of committing offenses and dissuade any potential ideas about engaging in illegal behaviors. Moreover, nowadays, a lot of tenagers are obsessed with violent activities and admire some criminals due to misleading information featured in comics or movies. Therefore, throughout the serious repercussions, the rehabilitated offenders could give valuable advice and discourage them from committing crimes. On the other hand, I concede that there will be more efficiency when having experts and professionals to educate students about criminal behaviors. To begin with, there are some limitations when having speakers who are ex-criminals due to their non-experience in educating. For example, some of them can give inappropriate approaches about offenses to teenagers, leading to misinforming or even ineffective results. In contrast, the effectiveness of the talk may be enhanced if the spokesperson are experts or professionals. Because some of them are police officers who directly work on dealing with offenders or experts who are equipped with pedagogical techniques can introduce some effective approaches about the dangers of breaking the law to young individuals. Consequently, the teenagers can fully understand the dangers of lawbreaking and prevent themselves from potentially criminal activities. In conclusion, while I acknowledge that speeches made by ex-offenders who become good individuals later can offer teenagers valuable insights and advice about the dangers of crime, I hold the view that we could maximize the positive outcomes when speakers are professionals with teaching methods. Additionally, there is a need for collaboration among social classes to fight against crime, ensuring the sustainable development in society for the long run. Question: Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do... Read more

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Anhthu

21/2/2024

Em chào thầy cô Pombeebee. hi vọgn được thầy cô chấm bài viết của em. Em mới tập viết, ý tưởng chưa nhiều nên chưa viết dài được ạ.

Question: Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Answer: Nowadays,... Read more

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Hannah

21/2/2024

em nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp em bài này ạ

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Describe the information in the table a... Read more

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Phạm Bảo Vân

21/2/2024

Attentive Student

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài writing task 1 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn!

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features... Read more

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