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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Topic: The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport
Solve:
The line graph illustrates the proportion distribution of travelers utilizing five distinct modes of transportation within a specific country spanning two decades, commencing in 1989.
Overall, it is clear that all types of vehicles witnessed an upward trend with the exception of aircraft. Additionally, by the end of the period, railway travel registered the highest figure out of all transportations.
In 1989, the percentage of travelers commuting by car registered approximately 50%, accounting for the highest figure that year. Over the following 4 years, there was an increase in the number of visitors using car about over 60% in 1999. After that it witnessed a decline slightly to over 50% in 2009. In contrast, the share of visitors opting for air travel, which dwindled from about 40% to only around 20% between 1989 and 2009.
Looking at the other transportations, at the beginning of the period, the figure for commuters using rail stood at approximately 40%. This figure soared to about 60% by 2009, making it the most widely chosen modes of transportation among those. A similar development was seen in the proportion of travelers using coaches, which surged from 10% in 1989 to nearly 30% in 2009. Meanwhile, ferry was the least popular choices for vacationers over the period, with less than 5% and 10% users in 1989 and 2009, respectively, despite a peak of just over 10% in 2004
Topic: The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type...
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Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, with the development of technology, some people argue that schools are no longer crucial since children can stay at home and learn through the Internet. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this statement due to some following reasons
First and foremost, although the Internet provides a vast amount of information, it is not always reliable or accurate. Children may find it difficult to distinguish credible sources from those that are not trustworthy. In contrast, school provides a structured curriculum that has been designed by professionals and is based on proven teaching methods. For instance, my sister find the solution through Google, Chat GPT, Quanda,.. and the incorrect information makes her misunderstand about the lesson
In addition, being educated at home has some detrimental effects on the communication skills of children. School is not only a source of education but also a place where students can meet other teachers, friends. As a result, they can experience peer interaction and learn how to be social and develop the feeling of sharing and caring. For example, my best friend and me has learnt together from middle to high school and thanks to our school, we have a long-lasting friendship
In conclusion, although the Internet brings about plenty of useful facilities for educating children, it can not be completely replaced by schools. Therefore, schools and teachers still play a vital role and the Internet should be used as a supplement for studies
Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, wi...
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The diagram illustrates the process of food production chain.
Overall, it is evident that there are six stages in the process to produce food, beginning with the production by farmers and livestocks and ending with serving products to the customers.
In the initial step, all the livestocks and sea animals are being produced and fished by the farmers or fishcatchers. Next, the products will be transported to the processing steps to ensure the food security and packaging the products before distributing to the retails and restaurants.
After that, the products are divided into two different trading areas, which is either for restaurants or for public retailers. If the products were distributed to the supermarkets or convenient stores, then all the customers can purchase it and prepare for their family. In constrast, if the restaurants received the products from the producers, then it will be served for the restaurant consumers after being prepared by the professional chelves.
The diagram illustrates the process of food production chain.
Overall, it is evident that there are six stages in the process to produce food, beginning with the production by farmers and livestocks a...
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mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài ielts writing task 1 của em với ạ
The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the online shopping sales of travel, clothes, books, and film/ music in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Overall, decreases were seen in the sales of clothes and travel while those of books and film/music saw increases. In addition, the sales of film/ music and traveling were the highest.
It can easily be seen that traveling was the most popular online shopping sector, accounting for two-fifths in 2003. A slight decrease was seen in the sales of travel to approximately 30% in the next decade. The sales of the clothing sector steadily decreased to 16%. The sale ratio of clothes in 2003 to that in 2013 was 4:3, which made up the least in the online shopping sectors in 2013.
Film/ music underwent a moderate increase, which made it surpass travel. Music/film was a leader in 2013, making up one-third of the New Zealand market. The sale of books was the lowest in 2003, accounting for one-fifth. The number of sold books slightly increased to 22%.
The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Mong thầy cô giúp e chấm chữa bài ạ
The given diagram depicts the procedure of recycling plastic trash.
Overall, it is clear that the process includes six distinct steps, starting from the purchase and utilize plastic products and ending with the consumption of the new recycled products. Noticeably, as can be seen from the picture, this production is considered straightforward.
At the first stage, after being bought and consumed from the marketplace, the plastic wastes are then separated for different purposes. While some non-recyclable items including plastic bags, food containers, and tiny jugs are disposed and end up at the landfill, the plastic bottles and other recyclable materials are gathered at a collection point for the next step.
When all these steps are done, the next stage embarks on materials being collected and transferred to the sorting section before being loaded in a truck. Subsequently, as soon as the sorted wastes are processed in a factory to yield the new plastic products, they are redistributed back to shops and ready for display and purchase. Finally, the process repeats its cycle again.
The given diagram depicts the procedure of recycling plastic trash.
Overall, it is clear that the process includes six distinct steps, starting from the purchase and utilize plastic products and endi...
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The pie charts depict the way of obtaining the news that Germans and Nigerians regard as their superior. Overall, TV is the most prevalent media which provides Nigeria’s dwellers with the news, whilst the vast majority of Germans consider newspapers as their first choice to learn about current affairs. By contrast, the fewest individuals voted for friends and family as the first place in Nigeria. Similarly, other sources are demonstrated as the lowest in terms of popularity.
The most striking feature is that whereas roughly half of Germany’s population prioritize newspapers in order to acquire recent events (45%), only slightly over a tenth of Nigerians chose this type. It is apparent that watching TV is common in both countries, with a significant proportion of the population (63%) favoring this mode of delivery, and less than half of this percentage in Germany (30%).
Another difference between the two surveyed countries is that slightly over one-fifth of Nigera’s citizens listen to the radio, while this category only stands at one in ten in Germany.
Conversely, 11% of Germans access the Internet for news in comparison with a mere 1% in Nigeria. Furthermore, other sources and friends and family are the minorities, which only stand at 4% and 1% in Germany and Nigeria respectively.
The pie charts depict the way of obtaining the news that Germans and Nigerians regard as their superior. Overall, TV is the most prevalent media which provides Nigeria’s dwellers with the news, whilst...
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Mong được các thầy cô chữa giúp em bài writing task 1 này ak
The line graph indicates the number of students from four continents who studied abroad at a UK university between 1995 and 2015.
Overall, while the number of Asia and North America students experienced an upward trend, the contrast figure was seen in Europe and Africa in the same period. It is evident that the number of Asia took the lead throughout the period of 20 years.
In 1995, there were 60 Asia students studied at a Uk university, which is threefold compared to the number of students from Africa that accounted for only 20 students. Regarding Asia students, the number has doubled during the 20-year-period, rocketed to 120 students in the last year of the period. Meanwhile, the number of Africa students remained stable despite the peak at around 30 students, recorded in 2010.
The starting point of both North America and Europe students were more than 40 students, however, the number of international students from North America surged to 70 students, after experienced a slight decrease at under 40 students in 2005. In terms of Europe students, the figure fluctuated throughout the period and finished at accurately 50 students.
The line graph indicates the number of students from four continents who studied abroad at a UK university between 1995 and 2015.
Overall, while the number of Asia and North America students experienc...
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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions could be done?
In the past few years, human activities have had several influences on the ecosystem, which has been causing many species to become extinct and the biodiversity to be devastated. This phenomenon can be attributed to numerous factors, which calls for feasible remedies to be adopted.
There are several reasons why human beings exert adverse impacts on various species and biodiversity. One of the main culprits that lead to animals’ extinction is deforestation. To be more specific, overpopulation may cause demands for products and housing among residents to grow, which is one of the primary reasons why illegal logging has been on the rise. Consequently, it severely destroys the natural habitats of animals, which means there may be no shelter to protect them from harsh weather conditions and predators. Thus, it would pose a serious threat to wild animals and push them to the brink of extinction. Another point worth mentioning is water pollution. Untreated water and plastic waste discharged directly into the community’s water sources such as lakes, rivers, and oceans can detrimentally affect the aquatic ecosystem. Turtles, for instance, consume plastic waste due to mistaking it for food, and they may get entangled in plastic debris, which would risk injuring themselves or even dying.
Various solutions, however, can be implemented to tackle this issue. The first solution is that the government should introduce new environmental laws and impose stricter punishments on those who hunt and cut down trees illegally. Additionally, it is essential for the local authorities to equip dwellers with basic knowledge about family planning and population policies, which can alleviate the problem of exploding population. Another viable measure is that industries have to install proper wastewater treatment systems with a view to preventing the disposal of waste into the environment. Furthermore, residents should follow 3R campaigns including reusing, reducing and recycling, which means the use of reusable and biodegradable products is encouraged.
In conclusion, many reasons can be given to explain why people’s activities have contributed to animal extinction and habitat loss including deforestation and water pollution, and several actions can be taken to address the situation.
Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions could be done?...
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The given table gives information about the rate of women per 100 men in 6 different locations between 1995 and 2005
Overall, it can be observed that while the percentage of females per 100 males in Africa and Europe experienced upward trends the opposite was true for Asia,Oceania, north and Central America. Additionally the proportion of women in Asia was the highest throughout the period
The first thing worth pointing out is that, in 1995 the ratio of females in Europe accounted for 89,4%,which was the lowest among other areas.After that the rate increased gently to 92.8% in the next decade. Similarly,the figure for African followed a similar pattern as it rose slightly from 97,8% in 1995 to 99,2% in the end
It is apparent that the percentage of females in Asia led with 105,3% in 1995,Oceania followed with a significant rate of 103,9%,overshadowing North and Central America of 3,8% and 3,9% respectively.Another highlight is that, in the next 10 years the figure for oceania, north and Central America decreased minimally to just under 100% whilst Asia only underwent a moderate decline to 104,9%
The given table gives information about the rate of women per 100 men in 6 different locations between 1995 and 2005
Overall, it can be observed that while the percentage of females per 100 males i...
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Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life.
Why is this trend occurring?
What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?
In this day and age, more and more couples are deciding to delay their parenthood because of some reasons. However, this tendency can have both positive and negative effects on social and family aspects.
Given that giving birth to children at a later age is more ubiquitous nowadays among many parents, this can be due to a few clarifications. Foremost among these is that most adults concentrate more on their career development. They contend that having a successful career path can lead to a stable life, which can assist in nurturing children in favorable conditions without being pressured about family issues. This is particularly the opposite case for some parents who are stressed about the financial burden of having a first child because of insufficient budgets. Besides, there is a surge in the demand for delight in life, which spurs them to entertain themselves first. It can be understandable that building a family and having children may be synonymous with a stressful and busy life. All in all, two primary elements can hinder adults from having kids at a young age.
Nevertheless, this occurrence can be more of a drawback from both societal and family perspectives. Regarding the former, society might suffer from a lack of labor resources, which serve numerous fields. A good illustration is that although many innovative occupations which require strength are more and more appearing, the rate of the old population may be on the rise, which cannot meet manufactured needs. What is more, parents’ health can be significantly affected when deciding to have children later in life. To be more specific, getting pregnant at an old age may be impossible since a mother’s health is not as good as at a young age, which might lead to some serious diseases when having a child, such as preeclampsia. Consequently, according to these mentioned arguments, perpetuating the process of becoming parents can retain some demerits to society and households.
In conclusion, it is debatable whether postponing parenthood to focus on developing career progress and enjoying a joyful life can have a huge impact on social and family aspects or not; however, it can be a downside trend because it sparks the insufficiency of worker sources as well as the effect of mother’s well-being.
Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life.
Why is this trend occurring?
What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In recent times, living in a foreign country is not novelty as our world is on the process of globalization. When people do not live in their motherland, it means that they have to speak foreign language, adapt to new culture. Some people think that living in a country which is not your home country can lead to significant social issues and also practical issues. I completely disagree with this point of view.
First and foremost, when living in a new country, people have an opportunity to explore new things, learn new skills, and also help them boost their personality to be more sociable as almost people tend to choose to live in a country which is more open-minded than their home country. Although they are first be culture shocked, as time passes they gradually except changes. During the process of adapting to the new culture, they will take the insight that the new culture is not really bad. From that they are more integrated to foreigners and be part of society. The more people integrate with others, the more strong the social cohesion is. For example, a survey in people migrant to the new country depicts every 9 people out of 10 said that they opened their mind more when settled down in a new region.
Another reason why I agree with this idea is that people dwelling in different countries helps to evolve the cultural exchange among dissimilar countries and cultures. It is the fundamental for strenthening the relation between countries. People have a strong desire to maintain their s and adjust to the new areas. People exchange their culture aids other people know and respect more about their country. When countries know better about countries, the governments will have more chance to co operate together. It not only promote the relation but also a crucial development for countries. For instance, the programme " Road to the Olympics " for high school students in Vietnam is sponsered by Australia, the winner of the programme will get a full-fees schoolarship from Merlbourne university. It is a extremely essential phase for students to progress their country.
In conclusion, I fully disagree with the idea said that there are several problems related to society and practical abilities.
Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Đề bài: Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news more effectively through other media.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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In the digital age, it has become increasingly prevalent for several individuals who regard newspapers as their top priority to acquire information. Looking at another point of view, the opponents hold the view that other kinds of media are more productive in spreading the news. Personally, I feel that newspapers are one of the common and traditional media that provide us with a great deal of news and information, however, they are not the best way to learn about the news.
Newspapers have been widespread for a long time, becoming a conventional and age-old means of obtaining the news for us. The presence of newspapers has triggered and boosted the reading habit, which is one of the most intellectual cultures in human civilization. Gradually, reading newspapers has become a pursuit or even a daily routine for some people. In our modern society, we are able to find many types of quality broadsheets, financial-banking, politics, and daily life are some typical examples. The most significant benefit of them is that we do not need to worry about unreliable sources of information. The reason is that newspapers are collected and written by professional journalists, who are trained and guided carefully by universities and other educational agencies. In addition, the information always undergoes checks and is edited meticulously before printing and establishment. Having said that, newspapers also have several drawbacks, and one notable disadvantage is that they are not capable of supplying the up-to-the-minute and breaking news since editing and printing may take a plenty of time. Besides, we can not always buy newspapers to read everywhere, which may cause inconvenience for those who have a demand for reading newspapers.
On the other hand, technology and the internet are growing quickly in our fast-paced world, which allows us to access other various types of media. For instance, many quality digital newspapers appear such as BBC News, Cable News Network, or social media platforms that spread the news quickly, helping us keep up to date with breaking news every minute. Another bright side is that they offer a large amount of diversified information belonging to many different aspects and fields so that they can satisfy a wide range of people of different ages. Moreover, it is certainly convenient and time-saving when we can read news anywhere on any device that has an Internet connection without having to go out to buy newspapers. They will become an endless source of knowledge if we filter and opt for trustworthy websites.
In conclusion, newspapers are one of an effective way to access the news, however, I believe that they are not the best way to acquire the information. Other media do not only bring us more convenient and comfortable ways to obtain the news, but they also protect and foster our valuable reading culture as long as we are aware of selecting the authentic sources to read.
Đề bài: Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news more effectively through other media.
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Mong các thầy cô chấm giúp bài writing task 1 này ạ
The line graph compares the proportion of Scotland visitors’ preferences on aquarium, castle, zoo and festival from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the percentage of castle and zoo while a contrast figure was seen in aquarium and festival. It is evident that festival took the lead in tourism in the first year, however it surpassed by castle in the end of the period.
By 1980, there was 30% of tourists who visited the festival, which is threefold compared to the zoo with just 10%. Regarding festival visitors, the percentage decreased slightly at under 20% throughout the period. Meanwhile, despite the fluctuation at around 10%, the proportion of zoo tourists has doubled in the 30-year-period.
In terms of castle visitors, the percentage increased sharply from about 25% in 1980 and reached a peak at 45% before slightly fell down to under 35% in 2010. In the same period, there was a significant fall in aquarium tourists at nearly 10%, which was less than half compared to the percentage in 1980, after reached a peak at 35% in 1985.
The line graph compares the proportion of Scotland visitors’ preferences on aquarium, castle, zoo and festival from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the percentage of castle and zoo...
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Em chào các cô ạ, hi vọng các cô sửa bài task 2 này cho em ạ.
Topic: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poorer countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary era, the question of whether developed nations only give money to developing countries to address poverty or should also give other assistance has sparked the ongoing debate. While I acknowledge that financial aid can help poorer nations to respond to pressing social issues, I hold the view that a comprehensive strategy should be implemented to efficiently mitigate the level of poverty.
On the one hand, this aid can play an important role to immediately deal with pressing social problems relating to humans and the economy. First of all, due to the monetary support from industrialized countries, many underdeveloped countries can allocate funding to help those living under the social standard. To be more specific, less well-off individuals can receive this support from their government, which can be a great factor to improve their living conditions and break the cycle of poverty. As a result, these receiving countries can solve this human problem, leading to a better opportunity for developing the society. Additionally, many developing economies can use these financial aid to boost the economy. When the government distributes these funds to improve some important sectors such as the education system, transportation and infrastructure, they can attract more potential investment from foreign investors and create many career opportunities for people. Consequently, these low-income countries easily unblock many barriers and reduce the level of poverty, leading to overall development in the long run.
On the other hand, I believe these sponsorships can not completely address the impoverishment owing to its limitation and the need for the comprehensive approach. To begin with, many subsidies were misused and inefficiently allocated by the receiving nations. For example, in some nations, many officials were arrested due to their corruption and many developing countries can not overcome poverty because they failed to utilize these grants. As a consequence, while many resources from the wealthy economies are wasted, many poorer countries show no changes in their development. However, the overall assistance including technological transform and expertise exchange should be introduced to successfully deal with. Many less wealthy nations can significantly benefit from the technological advancement transformed, which boost their productivity and product values. Another potential aid developed nations can give is the expertise exchange. Many professors or senior leaders can arrive in these countries and help them in appropriate management and operation. As a long-term result, these alternatives support sustainable development and gradually break the cycle of poverty in developing countries.
In conclusion, while I confirm that financial aid can act as a practical solution to respond to the rate of poverty in some backward nations, I concede that it is essential for high-income countries to introduce comprehensive support to significantly solve this issue.
Topic: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poorer countries rather than financial aid....
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Nowadays, children in many countries have to deal with a huge load of homework after school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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These days, students in several parts of the world are assigned with a huge load of homework to fulfill after school. From my perspective, although I accept that this situation is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that the drawbacks are far more significant.
On the one hand, there are a number of merits for young people to address numerous home assignments after school. A major perk is that homework acts as additional practice for students to revise horizons attained at school, which enables them to retain knowledge more easily. Hence, it considerably helps curb stress from exams and get a decent academic outcome. Another benefit is that devoting time to studying means that children may have less time for screen leisure activities. Therefore, they are more likely to avoid detrimental impacts of excessive use of the Internet such as eyestrain, back pain, and social isolation.
On the other hand, spending time tackling homework can have serious downsides which overshadow these advantages. The first demerit is that school-goers have a large amount of knowledge to accumulate at school and several home assignments to complete, which makes them have less time for sleeping and unwinding. Consequently, it puts a heavy burden on school children and they may suffer from different health-related problems such as depression or anxiety disorder. Another point worth mentioning is that it deprives teenagers of time for extracurricular activities. As a result, they may have fewer opportunities to both physically and mentally develop and find out their own passions. For instance, in Western countries, children often spend time after school playing outdoor sports or participating in classes that help them develop essential life skills. In contrast, most Asian parents urge their off-springs to attend extra classes and finish a large amount of homework to enhance their academic outcome.
In conclusion, despite the potential advantages that spending much time doing homework can bring to children, they are completely outweighed by the adverse effects involved.
Nowadays, children in many countries have to deal with a huge load of homework after school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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It is true that dwellers in cities become increasingly sedentary and exercise less.This essay will discuss about the main reasons and give some solutions to deal with this problem.
There are two main factors associated with this phenomenon.The key one is people who live in metropolises often have less time for exercise due to their busy work schedules.More specifically,in order to cope with high city living costs,they have to spend most of their time working,even at the weekend.According to recent surveys,approximately 70% of citizens in Ho Chi Minh city have to work overtime to complete their workload to be able to pay for the cost of living here,which is twice as expensive as my hometown.Another reason is the popularity of sedentary activities.This is mainly because these days,people tend to relax by engaging in screen time activities such as watching tv or playing video games instead of taking part in outdoor activities.As a result,this lead to a lot of diseases such as obese,myopic and so on and they do not have many time for their family.
Fortunately,several measures could be taken to alleviate this phenomenon.First and foremost,it is necessary to raise people’awareness of the importance of regular exercise.When they are fully aware of this,they could spend more time doing exercise or participating in more active activities.A technology company,for example,encourages their employees to ride bicycles to work to both exercise and protect the environment.In addition,the local authorities should install more outdoor fitness equipment in parks and other public areas to foster people to do more exercise.Take Hoa Cuc Bien park in my neighborhood as an example,has attracted a huge number of local residents after being equipped exercise equipment.
In conclusion,this phenomenon can be explained by the popularity of sedentary activities and their busy work schedules to making a live.However,the local authorities can tackle this problem by raising people’s awareness of exercise and equipping more outdoor equipment.
It is true that dwellers in cities become increasingly sedentary and exercise less.This essay will discuss about the main reasons and give some solutions to deal with this problem.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are living in a peaceful and fair world. People have the right to do what they like, what they want so it is not suprised to catch the idea that people now have a plenty of choices in many sectors. I strongly agree with this point of view.
First and foremost, with the development of a lot of facets in society, there are more and more jobs for people to do. In the past, people were not mindful of the importance of learning and educating their children so most of these children tended to become a farmer or did trading business. But now with the development of technology and people take an insight into learning, children are educated to do variety of jobs not just become a farmer. Furthermore the most crucial factor is the increase of demands, it appears lots of new job to cater people's demands such as pilot as people want to travel more quickly and plane was invented. For example, there is a hot trend to become a content creater in social media among young generations.
People not only have many choices in career but also in married status. In the past, people had to get married. These days, individuals are more open-minded, people can choose to get married or be single. In addition, many people find marriage is uncomfortable; therefore, they decided not to marry but still live with their partner and have babies. In a research on young people in Vietnam, there are about 30% of them choose to not marry and their parents completely underspin their idea.
In conclusion, I fully agree with the idea saying that there are many choices for people to choose. However, each of us should consider carefully before reaching the final decision on this time.
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
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We are living in a peaceful and fair world. People have the right to do what they like, what th...
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The two pie charts compare the percentage of technology devices being used in 2009 and 2019.
Overall, conventional TV was the most popular gadget in 2009 while a constrast figure was being seen in tablet. However, in 2019, it is evident that conventional TV had the least percentage of usage and being overshadowed by mobile phone.
By 2009, over one-third of population preferred conventional TV, which is almost twofold compared to desktop computer at 18%. Regarding laptop usage, it accounted for exactly 20%, and followed by mobile phone with 15%. The percentage of tablet and flat-screen TV usage were just under 10%.
In the next decade of the period, flat-screen TV and mobile phone took the lead at 27% and 26%, respectively. Meanwhile, conventional TV became out-dated with only 4% being used, which is three times less than desktop computer and laptop, at 12% for both. The tablet usage increased nearly four times compared to the last decade, from 5% to 19%.
The two pie charts compare the percentage of technology devices being used in 2009 and 2019.
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The pie charts compare the percentage of global water consumption with that in San Diego and California.
Overall, it is evident that water in all worldwide and two countries mostly consumed by agriculture. Meanwhile, the industry from San Diego and California use more amount of water compared to global usage.
Regarding water usage from agriculture, it accounts for 69% of global water consumption, which is slightly more than San Diego by 9% and 30% more than California with just around 40%.
In terms of residential water usage, San Diego consumes almost one-fifth of the total water consumption, followed by the proportions of the worldwide and California, account for 23% and 28%, respectively. The percentage of water usage from California’s industry is 33% of total amount of consumption, while a figure from San Diego is just nearly one-fourth. Only a little amount of water is consumed by global industry, which is just under 10%.
The pie charts compare the percentage of global water consumption with that in San Diego and California.
Overall, it is evident that water in all worldwide and two countries mostly consumed by agricul...
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