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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the development of mass communication and transport results in synchronization regarding every aspect of society, leading to globalization. As a consequence, there is no doubt that it arises a prevalent fear of cultural identity loss. I personally disagree with this perspective. In this essay, I will explain the reason, including relevant examples to support my arguments.
From my point of view, thanks to the rapid growth of transportation and mass communication which foster the evolution of globalization, people have opportunities to set foot in various places around the world, even in rural regions on Earth. Therefore, cultural values become increasingly prevalent among residents who come from different countries via tourism and social media. For example, thanks to globalization, we are able to enjoy and discover plenty of traditional specialties and costumes of many countries in the world such as Japanese comic books, Korean movies, American literature, or Ao Dai from Viet Nam and Hanbok from Korea. These intellectual and precious quintessence become worldwide common through mass communication and transport, which is accessed by people from a wide range of ages.
Another benefit of globalization is that it popularizes distinctive genres of music and signature dishes, which play an essential role in nurturing and flourishing cultural identities. By virtue of globalization, Asian restaurants together with European recipes appear extensively in numerous countries. Furthermore, local music has become widely well-known, attracting more viewers and audiences, which contributes to enriching and universalizing cultural identities. As a consequence, the inhabitants have a chance to discover and relish different cuisines and genres of music. For instance, if there was no globalization, individuals would not imagine how appetizing Pho is. Also, we are unable to enjoy many types of music such as rap, R&B, or classical music. For several above reasons, I strongly believe that not only does globalization make cultural identity become vivid and vibrant, but it also portrays and popularizes our distinctive cultures to the world.
In conclusion, I do not feel that globalization results in the total loss of cultural identity. Furthermore, it fosters the development of cultural identity, making special cultures become prevalent among a large number of global countries. People should encourage and promote globalization as it brings numerous advantages in terms of culture.
Nowadays, the development of mass communication and transport results in synchronization regarding every aspect of society, leading to globalization. As a consequence, there is no doubt that it arises...
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"The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant”
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The process depicts an entire 9-stage circular cycle of plastic bottles, from being thrown into a basket and then subjecting various stages and becoming useful products at the end.
Overall, the procedure makes utilization of used plastic bottles with a view to conserving the environment by alleviating the amount of trash put out.
At first, trash thrown at the garbage dump is loaded onto the trucks for delivery to the center which is specially designed for recycling.
Once arrived at the center, bottles are categorized, and compressed into square-shape blocks which will be crushed into small pieces directly into the water container below by a modern squashing machine. Initial outcome will be transferred to a machine producing plastic pellets which will be heated later in order to form raw materials for future use.
Lastly, multi types of housewares such as reusable plastic containers, bottles, bags or even clothing and educational stuff are recreated from the latest ingredients.
"The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant”
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The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates how pineapples grow and are manufactured into products. Overall, this is a complex, linear process with two main stages of growing pineapples and producing them with different purposes based on their mature sizes. This process involves multiple steps, from pineapples being collected to the final products.
At the beginning of the cultivation process, pineapples are cultivated under temperatures from 28 to 30 degrees Celsius and those reach 26 cm, which are qualified enough to be ready for the next steps. After being grown for 7 months, the pineapples are added with chemicals to accelerate development. Then, in the next 5 months, they reach full maturity and ready to be harvested, which are 30-cm height and 2-kg weight.
This is followed by a step in which these collected pineapples go through water hygiene and are divided into three different sizes. Regarding the smaller-sized and medium-sized fruits, they are both cut leaves and peeled the outer rinds. While the smaller-sized pineapples are extracted into juice to serve beverages, the medium-sized ones are separated into slices and then canned for trading. Moreover, larger fruits are selective and coated in wax before stacking in crates to be ready for exporting overseas.
The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where rele...
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chấm giúp em bài này với ạ. Em xin cảm ơn! Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas others think that they should concentrate only on subjects they find interesting. Discuss both views and provide your opinion.
The debate surrounding education is multifaceted with proponents arguing adolescents should focus on all subjects and critics pointing out youngsters should prioritize subjects that resonate with the students' interests. This essay aims to critically examine both view and I believe that teenagers should focus on all subjects.
On the one hand, allowing students concentrate only on their favorite subjects shows respect for freedom individual and therefore leads to greater engagement and understanding of the subjects. For example, a students with a strong interest in chemistry could find information about chemical reactions and know their nature, thereby achieving a deeper grasp as well as better academic performance. Such interest and enthusiasm can blossom into a lifelong passion for learning, which will undoubtedly bring about far-reaching advantages in a person's life.
On the other hand, learning all subjects equally can help students discover their strengths and weaknesses and consequently could develop teenager's self as well as their future career. For instance, a student who proficient in mathematics and physics could pursue some fields such as engineering and technology. In addition, focusing on all subjects allow teenagers to approach concepts from different perspectives and gain comprehensive insights across various disciplines and showing a well-rounded education.
In conclusion, although there are reasonable arguments on both sides but with my opinion, I believe that youngsters should focus on all subjects equally.
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More and more people today are spending large amounts of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There is a drastic increase in people who pay a huge amount of money on their skins in order to have a youthful appearance. There are some causes behind this phenomenon. Although this brings some benefits, from my perspective, the drawbacks are more significant.
Admittedly, there are compelling reasons why people invest in their complexions to have a younger look. Firstly, the social pressures and media affect their thoughts about beauty standards. Similarly, social media platforms set unrealistic standards and promote the desire for anti -aging products and procedures. For example, if celebrities endorsed a skin-care product, there would be an increase in the belief about its quality. Thus, a large number of prospect customers would purchase it, which leads to a rise in sales. Secondly, in terms of culture and society, youth is often associated with beauty which is an important part related to the job sector. In fact, appearance plays a vital role in some certain jobs such as models, actors, singers, and so on; therefore maintaining youthful appearance is one of the conditions to stick firmly with these careers.
It is true that there are both advantages and disadvantages behind this trend. The pursuit of a youthful appearance motivates individuals to adopt a healthier lifestyle. For instance, besides spending a large amount of money on complexions, people can look younger by sport and healthy eating regimes. Conversely, there are detrimental impacts on both individuals and society. Financially, the cost of maintaining a youthful appearance may be sustainable, leading to a burden of finance. In addition, this industry focuses on emphasizing the importance of youth, so it may form undesirable attitudes towards older age groups.
In conclusion, there are two main factors attributed to striving for looking younger. While this trend brings a specific merit to people's lifestyle, in my opinion, there are more demerits that should be taken into account.
There is a drastic increase in people who pay a huge amount of money on their skins in order to have a youthful appearance. There are some causes behind this phenomenon. Although this brings some ben...
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Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Renovation and improvement in education has led to the rising amount of computers in used while schooling, which is now a top concern for whether it will replace professors' roles. Despite acknowledgement regarding the huge notable impacts of this up-to-date methods of teaching, this is still not the case for me.
Firstly, technology, especially computer technology, is the key factor in how effective and convenient learning could be. In this modern days, students can't help themselves from using e-support to look up information, and even analyse it within a click. It also allows learners to access into artificial classrooms without being at the physical ones.
However, the computers are still a machinery that cannot imitate and do exactly what a teacher can. Researches concur that face-to-face classes often have more successful results as not only the teachers' role is teaching but also is sharing and inspiring their students. In other words, teachers and professors who have pedagogical skills are able to lend learners sympathy and encouragement besides of imparting tradition knowledges lessons. Moreover, computers are just a utilization which the tutors can make use of to enhance the quality of teaching at school. Since student-centred education have been the major focus for years, making interacting and attrative lessons with computers' advent both can cultivate its strength and maintain the essential role of teachers.
In conclusion, although computers' presence is the initial crucial key in education, teachers' role is even more essential, irreplaceable due to its own non imitated humanity.
Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Mong cô chấm giúp em ạ: The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.
The diagram illustrates how black tea is made in two different methods: conventional and modern methods.
Overall, it is obvious that tea production consists of five steps, beginning with fresh tea leaves being picked and ending with firing or drying tea leaves.
In the first step, tea pickers only harvest bud and 2 top leaves to make sure that they can give the desired quality of tea. At the next stage, the tea leaves are put on a rack so that the air from the fan can pass through and remove 60% of the moisture. After the leaves wither, they are treated by either a traditional method or a modern one.
Regarding the conventional method, the tea leaves are rolled flat and broken to produce loose tea. Enzymes are released from leaves in this stage.
The modern method, on the other hand, we have to cut, tear, and curl the leaves to manufacture tea bags. Therefore, this process is faster with smaller granular pieces being created.
Subsequently, the leaves now are ready to experience oxidation or fermentation. During this period, the leaves are rolled and spread on tiles or cement to let enzymes react with air, as a result, the leaves change to copper color.
Eventually, we have to fire or dry the leaves in an oven or hot air dryer. This stage eliminates 97% of moisture in total, and releases flavor and aroma.
The diagram illustrates how black tea is made in two different methods: conventional and modern methods.
Overall, it is obvious that tea production consists of five steps, beginning with fresh tea l...
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The line graph illustrates computer ownership statistics per household in a European country from 1997 to 2011
Overall, one-computer possession was the most common throughout the period. Meanwhile, there was a distinct downward trend in the percentages of households without computers. In contrast, households possessed two and three or more computers increased considerably.
At the beginning of the period, in 1997, households owned three or more computers stood at 0%, then rising significantly to about 8% in 2011. Similarly, the percentage of households that have two computers followed an upward trend, growing from about 8% in 1997 to nearly 28% in 2011.
In contrast, there was a significant decline in the proportion of households without computers, from approximately 47% in 1997 to 23% in 2011.
In addition, the figure for households possessed only one computer stayed remained at about 45% throughout the examined period.
The line graph illustrates computer ownership statistics per household in a European country from 1997 to 2011
Overall, one-computer possession was the most common throughout the period. Meanwhile, t...
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The table illustrates the proportion of people aged 65 and above in three different nations in 1988 and 2000, as well as gives projections for the year 2030.
Overall, if all projections are correct, Canada, Germany and UK will witness an increase in the percentage of individuals aged 60 and above in these countries by varying degrees throughout the period. Notably, Germany will consistently remain the most populous nation among three surveyed countries.
Germany and Canada will see a gradual growth in their population aged 60 and above figures over the given period. In 2003, the former made up 20.35%. Thereafter, there was a moderate increase to 25.53% in 2000, followed by a further to 30.65% in 2030. Likewise, Canada will see an upward trend, though to a lesser extent. The proportion of people residing in Canada is expected to increase to 14,80% in 2000, up from 14.25% in 1988, before ending up at 26.35% in 2030.
The percentage of individuals aged 60 and above in the UK will continually increase compared to remaining countries. The figure for the UK stood at 14.25% in 1988, and then went up slightly to 14.80% in 2000, followed by a rise to 20.45%. Due to this increase, the UK will end the period in the lowest position.
The table illustrates the proportion of people aged 65 and above in three different nations in 1988 and 2000, as well as gives projections for the year 2030.
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Through exportation of various kinds of goods for two years at the end of 2000s, taileds regarding changing values in China, which were measured by $HK billion are brought out in the tables.
Overall, China's economy was deemed to be developing, as all the figures sharply rose yet two exceptions were clothing and machinery. Notably, the metal industry impressively topped the chart since it doubled its numbers in 2009.
Visibly, metals had the lowest amount of exports in 2009, however, the changing value enormously increased to 127,3% in the following year and ended up approximately twice as much as 2009 was. Telecommunities also had a notable rise of a half, which made its number the highest at 11.7 billions Hong Kong dollar. Followed with manufacturing equipment with a small improvement from 10.3 to 11.6 billions.
In contrast, clothing and machinery had backward trends. First, the clothing industry fell by 0.7 billion which accounted for a fifth of its sales figures. Luckier compared to clothing, machinery ended up at 4.8 billions which was 200 millions lower than it was in 2009.
However, in general, the total export figure pictured the rising economy in China from 2009 to 2010 with 20% higher, left the total at 38.4 billions in the latter year.
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Through exportation of various kinds of goods for two years at the end of 2000s, taileds regarding changing values in China, which were measured by $HK billion are brought out in the ta...
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The graph illustrates how much salaries were paid for doctors and other workers every year in seven nations, namely the US, France, Italy, Czech Republic, Germany, Finland and Switzerland in 2004.
Overall, the US paid the highest annual pay for both docters and other workers, while salaries in Italy, czech Republic was relatively similar.
As can be seen from the chart, the annual pay in the US for doctors was the highest stood at 120 thousands dollars, followed by Switzerland and France, where health professors were achieved the same salaries, at 70 thousands dollars per year. Doctors in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany were paid for similar all at around 60 thousands dollars every year. In Findland, doctors were received the lowest salary, at 50 thousand dollars per year.
The US still the top payer for other workers, at over 40 thousands dollars, after which the Switzerland paid for non-doctor professional was 40 thousands dollars per year. The salaries were paid for other workers in France and Finland were nearly the same, both at 30 and 25 thousands dollars, respectively. In Italy, Czech Republic and Germany, the annual pay for other professions were identical, all at around 20 thousands dollars every year.
The graph illustrates how much salaries were paid for doctors and other workers every year in seven nations, namely the US, France, Italy, Czech Republic, Germany, Finland and Switzerland in 2004....
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Task 2: Nowadays, as role models, famous people have increasing influence on the young. Is it a positive or negative development?
Recently, youngsters usually take after celebrities who have ìnfluence on them. This phenomenon, in general, is applicably positive yet problematic.
The faster pace of life becomes, the further the Internet spreads and flows, which is why many well-known people all over the world turn into role models. While being trending, every single activity of that person has a huge impact on others, as people usually chase after the trends with a view to not being left behind. Kpop idols can be an obvious example, every item they used can be sold out immediately as soon as it was publicized. Moreover, besides imitating celebrities' practices, they must have to be popular for a reason, such as being talented at a specific field. This might be beneficial for imitators through stimulation the act of coming out of one's comfort zone to act like role models. Additionally, knowledge acquisition and moral thinking have the opportunity to be enhanced by following famous people's right mindset.
In the contrary, it is believed that might be a circumstance which mimicking leads to detrimental repercussions such as disobedience and undesired behaviour. It is a pity that some of the youngs are not fully equipped with the ability to acknowledge whether the issue is right or wrong follow undesired famous people, resulting in bad behaviour towards social is brought out. Unpleased messages intensively drive the youngs to end up in a worse cognition. For instance, young people might follow the wrong one by being gaslighted with lacked confirmed informations, hence easily falled to be the prey of showing off themselves too much such as smoking, racing or fighting.
In summary, although it has a small problem that should be minded, it also brings a positive general view on youngsters’ behaviour and cognition after all, and by this approach, they can be stimulated to develop sharply without being aware.
Task 2: Nowadays, as role models, famous people have increasing influence on the young. Is it a positive or negative development?
Recently, youngsters usually take after celebrities who have ìnfluenc...
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Mong cô chấm bài ạ: In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this ? What solutions can you suggest?
Recently, there has been a large number of students who put a strain on studying diligently and they do not have much spare time in several countries around the world. There are two primary reasons leading to this situation. In this essay, I will mention, and explain carefully the causes, and give examples for my arguments. Furthermore, the solutions for this problem will be suggested according to my knowledge and experience.
In my opinion, the youth today have to cope with a great deal of pressure to learn and they are always busy. There are two principal factors causing this. First and foremost, parents force their children to study hard in order to succeed in their career path. It is apparent that nowadays parents constantly remind their offspring to spend long hours doing homework and studying many things. In addition, some parents even hire a tutor who instructs a child to learn any potent subjects at school, or specific gifted skills such as swimming, playing musical instruments, or martial arts. Take my country by way of example, it is normal that pupils and teenagers spend from three to four hours doing homework, going to extra classes or preparing for their new lessons after finishing a long day at school. This means the students in my country come back home in the late evening and start their school early the next morning. Consequently, they do not have much time for themselves. Another reason behind this is the fierce competition among their fellows in lieu of studying environments. It has become increasingly prevalent for learners to compete aggressively to grab the opportunity of studying in public schools or universities that have a reputation. A higher demand to register in those well-known educational organizations means the student’s academic performance and skills are filtered carefully. Only those who have impressive achievements are selected. As a result, peer pressure arises, which acts as a main drive for students to put great effort into learning in order to conquer their dream schools. Therefore, most of their time is spent on their studies. For a personal example, when I was a student in high school, I used to learn constantly for five hours after school to prepare for the entrance exam, which would decide whether I was chosen to study at my dream university or not. My classmates were in the same situation as mine due to severe rivalry.
There are some solutions suggested to deal with this issue. Firstly, parents should be aware of the outcomes which result from pressurizing their offspring in terms of their studies. Children may get upset, and even depressed. Instead of pushing their children to study hard for a better future, it is necessary for parents to become perceptive people whom children can confide in. Parents can guide children to balance studying and playing in a smart way, develop their soft skills, and prioritize their favorite subjects rather than trying to become well-rounded and perfect students in a traumatic way. As a consequence, children will feel more cheerful, and avoid unhappiness owing to study overload.
In conclusion, young people have to study hard because of their parents’ expectations and competition. It is vital for parents to take action immediately to protect their children from depression. They should encourage their offspring to learn what they are fond of instead of putting them under pressure.
Recently, there has been a large number of students who put a strain on studying diligently and they do not have much spare time in several countries around the world. There are two primary reasons le...
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While one school of thought holds that children should be educated by parents how to behave well in society, . Others are adamant that schools are better equipped to learn. Though both perspectives have their merits, I firmly believe that there are many ways to approach the child's morals, and there is not a one-size-fits-all approach.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that parents play a vital role by teaching children. This is because the nature of children's morality can be derived from educating at home by parents, which means children have a good direction to follow by the actions of their parents. For instance, parents can create a good environment for them to learn necessary skills such as independence, self-discipline, self-confidence and compassion. If parents prevent their children from going out with friends and strictly control their life, they can be autistic and introverted. Therefore, the belief that children need parents to provide wise guidance seems reasonable
On the other hand, I am convinced that school also plays an indispensable role in becoming a useful member for children's society. The first reason is that school can provide a diverse environment, in which children can interact with their teachers and peers in class. This is because children can easily observe the strengths and weaknesses, which can help them understand and appreciate different perspectives. In addition to this, schools have a good opportunity to develop their skills such as communication, presentation and especially creation. This means that children will equip these tools, facilitating for them when they gradually grow up.
In conclusion, while there are different views on whether parents or schools should teach children to be good members of society, I believe that a child's journey to adulthood and becoming a responsible citizen is a mutual obligation between them.
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
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Question: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poorer countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary era, the question of whether affluent nations should only give money to developing countries to address poverty or they should also give other assistance has sparked the ongoing debate. While I acknowledge that financial aid can help poorer nations to respond to pressing social issues, I hold the view that a comprehensive strategy should be implemented to efficiently mitigate the level of poverty.
On the one hand, this aid can play an important role to immediately deal with pressing social problems relating to human welfare and the economy. First of all, due to the monetary support from industrialized countries, many underdeveloped countries can allocate funding to help those living under the social standard. To elucidate, less well-off individuals can receive this support from their government, which can be a great factor to improve their living conditions and break the cycle of poverty. As a result, these receiving countries can solve this human problem, leading to a better opportunity for developing the society. Additionally, many developing economies can use these financial aid to boost the economy. When the government distributes these funds to improve some important sectors such as the education system, transportation and infrastructure, they can allure more potential investment from foreign investors and create many career opportunities for people. Consequently, these low-income countries easily unblock many barriers and reduce the level of poverty, leading to overall development in the long run.
On the other hand, I believe these sponsorships can not completely address the impoverishment owing to its limitation and the need for the comprehensive approach. To begin with, many subsidies were misused and inefficiently allocated by the receiving nations. For example, in some nations, many officials were arrested due to their corruption and many developing countries can not overcome poverty because they failed to utilize these grants. As a consequence, while many resources from the wealthy economies are wasted, many impoverished countries show no changes in their development. However, the overall assistance including technological transform and expertise exchange should be introduced to successfully deal with. Many less wealthy nations can significantly benefit from the technological advancement transformed, which will boost their productivity and product values. Another potential aid developed nations can give is the expertise exchange. Many professors or senior leaders can arrive in these countries and help them in appropriate management and operation. As a long-term result, these alternatives support sustainable development and gradually cyclical the nature of poverty in developing countries.
In conclusion, while I confirm that financial aid can act as a practical solution to respond to the rate of poverty in some backward nations, I concede that it is essential for high-income countries to introduce comprehensive support to significantly solve this issue.
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Topic: Today, people in many countries have to spend more and more time away from their families. Why is this happening?
What effects does this have on the people themselves and on their families?
It is believed that people in many nations have the tendency to spend less time with their family. In my opinion, this phenomenon could be caused by several reasons and there are some adverse effects on family members.
There are some rationales why the time individuals spend with their family is becoming less. One of the reasons is the development of technologies, leading to the indifference of each family member. Because people nowadays have their own devices such as smartphones and laptops, they seem to immerse themselves in using these devices for entertaining purposes and become less attentive to other members. To be more specific, some people are constantly on their phones during social gatherings, checking their messages or social network notifications and surfing their news feeds. Another reason is that people now are under work pressure; therefore, the adults have to cut down on family time to concentrate on making a living, which means the relationships among members seem to be neglected. For example, due to work demand or income stress, individuals are forced to work overtime, leaving them with little time for their family.
If this trend lasts for a long time, it will cause some undesirable consequences. Firstly, the connection with other family members may become weaker and lost, which leads to conflicts and breakdown. Due to the lack of time spent together, people seem unable to understand each other and there is not enough trust among them so that they can confide in; therefore, if there was a misunderstanding, it would easily lead to quarreling among members, which increases the rate of divorce. Moreover, the children could be severely affected for mental life due to the lack of parental care. Some parents seem not to realize that their children, without encouragement or attention from family, are more vulnerable to social problems such as peer pressure or bullying, which makes them suffer abuse at school or even depression.
In conclusion, one of the reasons above has led to the fact that people are spending less time to stay with family and this trend brings about several negative effects on both the individuals and their relatives.
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The given bar chart depicts the rate of driving tests passed in both gender in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010.
It can be seen that the driving test pass propotion of women and men witnessed a significant increase following 30 years. The number of person who passed the driving test in woman were a higher top than the amount of man during the period of 30 years.
Between 1980 and 1990, the 1980 was seen a moderate grow in women, approximately by 5%, while the percentage of drivers who passed the test in men gone up considerably by 9% at the same time.
Over the last 20 years, the figure for drivers completed test in women peak at 68% in 2000 before experienced a marginal drop to 64%. In contrast, this figure of men was climbed substantially at 49% in 2000 and it was remained unchanged over the 10-year period.
The given bar chart depicts the rate of driving tests passed in both gender in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010.
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Topic: Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their
functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
While it is believed that cities should be built with attractive design, others believe that practicality should come first. In my opinion, the functionality ought to be paid more attention compared to the design.
On the one hand, it is understandable why people think the layout of a city should be designed beautifully because the city will properly carry itself with a unique image compared to other normal cities; therefore, it tends to be an interesting tourist attraction. For instance, a city designed in a historic style will become more attractive since tourists perhaps grab attention to nostalgic objects compared to other metropolises which have modern styles. Thanks to the number of tourists coming to the city, it tends to produce an enormous profit for the local authority and this money can be used to partially support the living standard of local citizens. However, the government should not underestimate the functionality because if people maintain the focus on design too much and forget the quality of infrastructure or public services, it will cause bad experiences for the tourists.
Moreover, functionality plays an important role in the backbone of the city’s economy. The more improved the quality of amenities are, the more contributions from the residents to the city because once it meets all the basic needs of the people’s lives, the residents will have more time to work for the benefit of the city, which properly contributes to the economic growth. Also, it can be seen clearly that people have the tendency to choose to develop sufficient better facilities such as health care service, public transport and educational infrastructure rather than building statues or decorating the city with different styles because the functionality is what will serve their lives, not the beautiful layout.
In conclusion, while the attractive designs still have a positive impact on the development of the cities, I would opine that the functionality should be concentrated to develop first.
Topic: Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their
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The primary goal of education for children has undergone a significant shift as it is now seen as having a crucial role in human civilization. There are others who believe that children ought to be raised in a competitive environment. Children are taught to cooperate together, which makes them more prospective adults. This is another area of disagreement. There are benefits and drawbacks to these two arguments.
Let's start with the advantages that youngsters will experience if they are raised in competitive educational environments. When faced with fierce competition, they will have a greater sense of self-improvement and enthusiasm. Under such circumstances, kids will try to figure out how to better their competitive hunger while also finding appropriate methods to develop themselves. However, the other side of it somehow arouses angry feelings that could lead to needless physical and spiritual altercations.
Conversely, kids who learn cooperation will acquire a variety of soft skills and comprehend the pathways that may be required for them in the future. Children who cooperate have the opportunity to pick up valuable skills from others. However, in addition to teaching cooperative skills, this method can also create other detrimental personality traits including envy, carelessness, and selfishness.
Thus, I wholeheartedly concur that teaching kids to cooperate instead of competing is a good idea. Although nobody is perfect, in this way, we continuously shape our characters every day. As a result, I believe that rather than emphasizing rivalry and hierarchy, parents and educators should focus on encouraging cooperation in their kids.
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The given line graph depicts how long migrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to live in the UK.And the pie-chart give information about the reasons for migration in the year 2008
Overall, while the number of immigrants stay in the UK less than 2 years and between 2 to 4 years underwent upward trends the figure for immigrants stay 4 or more years stable throughout the period.In addition, in 2008 work was the most common reason why people migrated whereas other and no reason stated was the lowest
The first thing worth pointing out is that, between 2000 and 2001 the quantity of immigrants stay up to 2 years and 4 or more years equal at 150 thousand people.After that, the corresponding for people live less than 2 years rose sharply to 250 thousand people in the next 3 years and remained stable until the end.Notably the figure for people stay 2 to 4 years experienced some fluctuation at 50 thousand people between 2000 and 2005 before reaching a peak at 100 thousand people in 2008
It is apparent that in 2008 the percentage of people migrated because of work was found to be by far the highest one, at 38% followed closely by the figure for study, with 32%.Additionally 16% of people migrated because of accompanying and joining family which exceeded other and no reason stated around 9%
The given line graph depicts how long migrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to live in the UK.And the pie-chart give information about the reasons for migration in the year 2008
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