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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The given bar chart illustrates the amount of salt intake and the recommendation for two genders in the USA in 2000.
Overall, it is clear that the amount of salt consumption for males was higher than that of females regardless of age. Additionally, except children under 6 and women over 60, people consumed significantly more salt than the recommended amount for adults over the surveyed period.
Concerning the salt intake of children under 6, boys consumed 2240 milligrams, which was the lowest amount compared to 1300 of their counterparts. While the highest amount of salt intake was recorded for both males and women in the 20-39 group, at 4500 and 3000 milligrams respectively, which was significantly higher than the recommendation at 2500 milligrams. At the same time, females who aged over 60 were the only group having the salt intake equal compared to the recommended amount.
Boys aged 6 to 11 years old consumed the same amount of salt in comparison with males above 60, at 3500 milligrams. Meanwhile, the same number of salt consumption was seen for three female groups, including girls aged 6 to 11, girl teenagers from 12-19 and females of 20-39 bracket, approximately 3000 milligrams. Male teenagers who aged from 12-19 and middle-age men had salt in their diets significantly higher than the recommendation, which were 4300 and 4200 respectively.
The given bar chart illustrates the amount of salt intake and the recommendation for two genders in the USA in 2000.
Overall, it is clear that the amount of salt consumption for males was higher than...
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The bar chart illustrates how many people aged from 25 to 34 years old were renting in the UK over a 10- year period from 2004.
Overall, it is evident that the proportions of homeowners and renters followed an opposite trend during the period. The data also indicates that the former saw a slight decrease while the latter rose noticeable until 2004
To begin with, standing at approximately 60% in 2004, there was a mild drop to around 50% after 1 year in the percentage of homeowners, which continually decreased to just shy of 40% in 2011, albeit it reached just above 50% in 2007. Otherwise, the remainder started at 20% in 2004, increasing significantly to just north of 40% after 5 years and reaching parity with the former in 2011.
After that, the directions of both categories were further from each other. The former continually showed a downward trend to just above 30% while the latter reached its highest point at around 50% at the end of the period.
The bar chart illustrates how many people aged from 25 to 34 years old were renting in the UK over a 10- year period from 2004.
Overall, it is evident that the proportions of homeowners and renters fo...
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The bar chart compares the proportion of expenditure on road and transport by the authority from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, Portugese government allocated the most financial support throughout 15 years, while UK spent the least money on road and transport in the same period.
Regarding spending on road and transport by Italia, there was a slight decrease by 3%, from 22% down to 19% during 15 years, after reached the highest percentage at around 24%, recorded in 2000. Portugese authority allocated about 27% of their budget on road and transport, which was more than twofold compared to UK, at accurately 10%. It is evident that the expenditure from Portugal fell sharply by more than 5%, ending at 20% in 2005.
By 2000, UK spent the most of financial support at around 12% before decreased to 7% in the last year of the period. The USA was the only country that witnessed an upward trend in the percentage of expenditure on road and transport compared to three other countries, slightly rose from 11% to 15% throughout the period.
The bar chart compares the proportion of expenditure on road and transport by the authority from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, Portugese government allocated the most financial support throughout 15 years, w...
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The bar graph indicate hobby of children in 2 country New Zealand and Australi in 2007. In term of, Australians favourite activies. They prefer outdoor activities to indoor activities.
For Australians, Playing sports were the most leisure, it about 28%. The second hobby which Australians enjoy in 2007. It were going to the park, about 25%. however, the least popular around 7% to 10% that is doing craft, art and reading book,
For New Zealand, the highest activities were doing craft and art, which accounted for 25%. The second popular leisure were reading book and watching DVDS. The both around 17%, The least vital hobby were visit the park and playing sport. It abot 14%
The bar graph indicate hobby of children in 2 country New Zealand and Australi in 2007. In term of, Australians favourite activies. They prefer outdoor activities to indoor activities.
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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Answer:
The first pie chart illustrates the energy consumed by an average Australian household, while the second chart depicts the greenhouse gas emissions that result from this energy use.
Overall, it is obvious that the proportion of energy increased in almost all with the exception of heating. Another striking significant feature is that the consumption of heating is highest for energy houses, while the percentage of water heating reaches a peak in greenhouse gas emissions.
Heating accounts for the highest proportion of energy use, at 42%. The percentage of water heating, which stands at 30%, is twice higher than that of other appliances. A low point of 2% in the figure for cooling of energy use.
Water heating hit the highest point of 32% of greenhouse gas emissions, the opposite was true for cooling at 3%. Standing at 28%, the proportion for other appliances is twice as high as that for refrigeration. This figure is roughly the same as that for heating at 15%. A minimal rise is seen in the percentage of lighting of greenhouse gas emissions at 8%, this is 4% higher than that of lighting of energy house.
The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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The first pie chart...
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The bar chart provides a breakdown of the yearly salaries for doctors and other workers in seven different nations in 2004.
Overall, it can be seen that the US provides doctors and other workers with the highest annual pay among seven countries. However, people from occupations except doctors receive the lowest salaries in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany.
In 2004, doctors and other workers in the US had the highest yearly pay, which made up respectively 120 and almost 45 thousand dollars. Right behind was Switzerland and France, which had an equal amount of money for doctors, which earned approximately 70 thousand dollars; while other workers in France received lower annual pay compared to those in Switzerland, which was respectively about 30 and 40 thousand dollars.
In terms of other countries, other workers received comparable annual pay in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany, which was 20 thousand dollars. Salaries for doctors in these three countries saw overall figures, ranging from 60 to roughly 62 thousand dollars. Although the amount of money paid for doctors was the lowest among seven countries, which was around 50 thousand dollars, the figure for other workers was higher than that in the three countries above, making up 40 thousand dollars.
The bar chart provides a breakdown of the yearly salaries for doctors and other workers in seven different nations in 2004.
Overall, it can be seen that the US provides doctors and other workers wi...
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The line chart provides a breakdown of the percentage of households owning computers in a particular European nation from 1997 to 2011.
Overall, it is evident that the proportion of households possessing one or more computers witnessed an increase with the exception of that of households without computers, which showed a significant decline. In addition, one computer was the most commonly chosen by households among these four.
In 1997, the percentage of households without computers accounted for about 47%, which became the most popular option among four different options. Right behind was families with a computer only, which made up roughly 20%. However, this figure experienced a steady increase and achieved the top spot in 2011, which allocated 45%.
The proportion of households possessing more than one computer was negligible compared to other two options, which was both under 10% in 1997. While families with two computers witnessed a significant growth and reached about 25%, which became the second most option, the figure for those who had more than two computers was just under 15% at the end of period, becoming the least chosen.
The line chart provides a breakdown of the percentage of households owning computers in a particular European nation from 1997 to 2011.
Overall, it is evident that the proportion of households poss...
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The given pie charts illustrate how old the populations were in two different countries, namely Yemen and Italy in 2000, along with predictions for the the next 50 years.
Overall, it is noticeable that the population of Yemen was mostly people aged 0 to 59, with consistently remaining the most significant for the next 5 decades. Meanwhile, the number of citizens aged 15-59 in Italy was higher than that of people aged over 60. However, the figure for the oldest people in Italy is expected to be greater than other age groups in 2050.
In Yemen, the age of people in the age bracket of 0-14 and 15-59 made up the majority of the total percentage of population age, accounting for 50.1% and 46.3%, respectively. Nevertheless, the percentage of individuals aged under 15 is predicted to decrease to 37%, compared to people aged 15-59, whose age is predicted to increase to 57.3% after 50 years. The figure for the oldest group were negligible, at 3.6% in 2000, followed by a slight upward trend to 5.7% in 2050.
In Italy, the proportion of people between 15 and 59 was the greatest in 2000. People at the age of over 60 and under 15 just ranked below, with respective proportions of 24.1% and 14.3%. However, the percentages of people in the youngest and the 15-59 group are anticipated to decline to 11.5% and 46.4% in that order. Furthermore, the figure for the oldest bracket is predicted to increase rapidly to 42.3%.
The given pie charts illustrate how old the populations were in two different countries, namely Yemen and Italy in 2000, along with predictions for the the next 50 years.
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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media platform. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people discuss that newspapers play a vital role in adopting news. However, I also believe that social platform is a great way to update news the fastest. In this essay, I will argue some of the advantages of collecting news from social media.
On the one hand, many reasons why people suppose newspapers are good ways to update news. Firstly, newspapers are only prevalent to elderly people who do not approach modern social media, which makes them consider newspapers to be the most reliable source of information. Additionally, newspapers are printed and published official source of supply for the government, therefore elderly tend to read newspapers to make sure the that news is the most accurate. Take reality example nowadays, the Ministry of Transport will only focus on writing issues about transportation in daily life, and the public readers choose to spend time with correct news instead of tabloids.
On the other hand, I still support social platforms bring many benefits for readers. The first reason is that the media provides a variety of news from different fields making readers easily expand their knowledge through readings. Secondly, online newspapers will be updated constantly to make readers aware of the latest issues. For example, not only online newspapers on official websites public information but influential pages or Instagram also post on media platforms create for readers a hobby of getting information.
In conclusion, while newspapers are popular for many reasons, I also believe that media platform is a good way to acquire information quickly
Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media platform. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Topic: In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Solve:
It is believed that individuals in various nations prefer to put on western-style attire, such as suits and jeans, over traditional clothing. There is a range of reasons for this shift, and I believe that this trend is positive.
A range of factors are responsible for the development in this shift. One of the primary reasons is globalization and cultural exchange. Firstly, living in the integration era parallels the flourishing of technology and social media which is why people can easily approach different cultures and fashion trends in the world. Moreover, Western-fashion has played a crucial role in shaping clothing preferences, including Vietnam. For instance, many fashionistas have caused a sensation and a radical approach in the global fashion industry, such as Chau Bui, Decao, Quynh Anh Shyn,... With their impacts, people prefer to imitate, leading to the rise in popularity of western clothing, especially among the younger generation.
In my opinion, this situation represents a positive development. It is undeniable that chasing Western-fashion trends is advantageous. This has led to economic growth and created job opportunities, such as designers, shopkeepers, preventing mass unemployment. Another reason for welcoming western-style clothing is that its practically and comfort. For example, in Vietnam, the younger generation often prefers wearing jeans and t-shirts for their daily activities, as it allows them to move freely and comfortably. Even for busy individuals, time management is a significant challenge, opting for suits or jeans is a great solution when they have two or three occasions within the same day. Traditional attire is not practical for daily activities, it is only suitable for special occasions and traditional festivals.
In terms of embracing Western trends, individuals also need to be noted. The excessive pursuit of trends can lead to the loss of national identity. It is essential to strike a balance between modern styles and traditions to mitigate the negative impacts on the fashion industry and community aspects such as culture and economy.
In conclusion, the trend of wearing western-style dresses is due to the influence of globalization and popular culture. While there are some detriments to this trend, I believe it can also have more benefits to satisfy personal needs
Topic: In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
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Đề bài: The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK
The given line graph depicts number of immigrants to the uk from 2000 to 2008.The pie chart give information about the reason for immigrants in 2008
Overall it can be observed that while the figure for people intended to stay less than 4 years witnessed upward trends the number of people stay 4 or more years stabled throughout the period.Notably, the reason migration because of work was dominant in 2008
Turning to line graph ,the total of immigrants stay less than 2 years accounted for 150 thousand people between 2000 and 2001, equaled people stay 4 or more years and outstripped immigrants stay between 2 and 4 years about 100 thousand people.After that it rose sharply to 250 thousand people in 2004 and remained stable till the end.Similarly the figure for people stay between 2 and 4 years followed a similar pattern as it increased noticeably from 50 thousand people in 2000 to more than 100 thousand people in the next 8 years.Another highlight is that, people stay for more than 4 years freeze at 150 thousand people from 2000 to 2008
It is apparent that, The reason for migrating for work was higher than the reason for studying, the former being 38% and the latter being 32%.Consistently ranked third was accompany and join family achieving a percentage about 16% which was higher than no reason stated and other around 9%
Đề bài: The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK
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Topic: More and more people today are spending large amounts of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative progression?
In this day and age, there has been an increasing rate of people spending plenty of money on complexion treatments. This phenomena can be attributed to two reasons in terms of boosting their individual's appearance and gaining more career opportunities. However, from my perspective, I completely believe its drawbacks are more significant as it affects people's health and consumes a lot of money.
On the one hand, people are willing to invest a large amount of money to look younger because of two reasons. The foremost reason is the fact that these products can boost people’s look, enhancing their attractiveness and confidence. As a result, they will have more opportunities in starting a romantic relationship or remain physically attractive to their partners. Additionally, the great appearance plays an essential role in many jobs so that people can stand a higher chance of their occupation. To be more specific, in some fields including hospitality, business and so on, having an attractive look can play a factor in reaching higher positions and improving their standard of living.
On the other hand, in my point of view, I completely hold the view that this is a disadvantage development owing to its’ ability to impact on a person's health and finances. First of all, many low-quality products can have an enormous impact on individuals’ health. To begin with, many articles have reported on cases where users had to experience many undesirable effects. Some of them suffered from multitudes of symptoms such as rashes, breakout or even skin tissue damages, leading to hospitalization. The next concern relating to this is its ability to create financial pressure for consumers. To purchase these skin-care products, people are willing to allocate generously money on them, which might make people fall into debt or lack of resources in investment for their future.
In conclusion, the reasons for the tendency of people who want to become younger can be answered by two factors, including the desire to boost their appearance and have career prospects. However, I believe this is a negative development as its influence on people’s health and money management.
Topic: More and more people today are spending large amounts of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative pro...
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Topic: The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in everyday life. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that people have used social media platforms instead of direct contact in recent years. Although doing this has several disadvantages, the benefits may be far more significant.
On the one hand, there can be some minor disadvantages of the social media network. One possible issue is that social media platforms can make users concerned about privacy and security. The reason is that many websites require users to provide their personal data. As a result, users may be subject to targeted advertising, data breaches, and potential misuse of their personal information.
Nevertheless, the fact that people use social media for direct contact can have major advantages which overshadow these negative impacts. The most obvious benefit could be that using social media can help people connect their relationships across distances. This is because some social media platforms that people have been using in recent years, like Facebook and Twitter, allow people to communicate with their friends and family regardless of their geographical location, thereby maintaining their relationships and staying updated on each other’s lives, even when physically separated. The second merit is that using social media can help people release stress after many working or learning hours. For instance, when they have free time, they can watch the reels of their friends or some comedy videos to relax, which helps them feel comfortable after working and learning.
In conclusion, despite the potential downsides of the use of social media platforms in recent years, the beneficial effects brought about are of greater importance.
Topic: The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in everyday life. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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Many people opine that the affluence of the regional economy serves as an optimal strategy to combat poor living conditions. While others believe that this has many unfavorable implications on the environment. This essay will elaborate on both perceptions and also provide my own viewpoint.
On the one hand, it is acknowledged that the prosperous economy has many beneficial impacts on miserable individuals, as it escalates overall living standards among them. By doing so, this formulates occupational opportunities due to the need of the labor workforce, thereby mitigating an immense amount of the unemployed. The prime illustration of this is that in an industrial sector, an apparent quantity of blue-collar workers is associated with economic growth in order to create products for the demand of society. Furthermore, another advantage is that many developmental efforts put in increasing medical fields and welfare, facilitating impoverished people to approach. As a result, this contributes substantially to the increased generall well-being, especially for miserable children.
On the other hand, while this has many merits in aiding a better life, the growth of the economy also has some repercussions on the ecological state. In terms of tourism sectors, the increased garbage is associated with promoting the culture of travelling, as many non-native visitors tend to behave terribly. Consequently, the prolonged state of this phenomenon may turn into a severe concern for the environment. For instance, in Thailand, the country has faced many environmental issues because of the escalated overseas tourists travelling each year.
In my opinion, while this measure is necessary to address the presence of the redundancy of the homeless and the impoverished, many restricitions and policies should be taken into consideration. To be more precise, implementing harsh punishments in case the travellers compromissing the enviroment, while applying renewable energy into industrial sectors.
To conclude, economic growth can undoubtedly alleviate poverty and improve living conditions; however, we must also address its negative impacts on the environment. It is imperative that measures are taken to ensure sustainable development practices are implemented alongside economic expansion efforts.
Many people opine that the affluence of the regional economy serves as an optimal strategy to combat poor living conditions. While others believe that this has many unfavorable implications on the env...
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Writing
The bar charts illustate the proportion of consuming fast food in residents in USA (2003-2013)
It is obvious that the percentage of pupils among 2003 and 2006 seem frequently getaway to fast food restaurant once a week. Futhermore in 2013 which is the highest in the stage once or twice a month
People in American during 2003 and 2006 make out the highest amount which is over 30% once a week in restaurant and in 2013 the proportion considerably less than 35% in once or twice a month. However, the figure frequency every day is the lowest of everything, just under 5%
The quantity in a sex times a year in 2006 and 2013 is the same and precisely 15%
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The bar charts illustate the proportion of consuming fast food in residents in USA (2003-2013)
It is obvious that the percentage of pupils among 2003 and 2006 seem frequently getaway to fas...
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The bar chart illustrate the proportion of Australian both male and female practice exercise in 2010.
in broad terms, It's noticeable that the age group of age 15 to 24 reveal the highest number of male and from 45 to 24 show the top of female. Male in Australian 15 to 24 tends to participate in doing exercise more than any period which makes out 52.8% meanwhile the percentage of woman in 45 to 54 is the highest in every stage of female and eventually the highest of the charts with the evidence is 53,3% which is more than figure of 52,8% male in 15 to 24
By contrast, the age 35 to 44 of male is the lowest just 39,5% and the lowest figure of all. Also female in 25 to 34 make out just 42,2% which is the lowest of woman and the sec lowest just over 39,5% of male.
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The bar chart illustrate the proportion of Australian both male and female practice exercise in 2010.
in broad terms, It's noticeable that the age group of age 15 to 24 reveal the highest n...
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The given pie chart illustrates the distribution of passengers from different areas and the provided table demonstrates their number of day-offs, the most popular accommodation, along with major activity in a specific holiday resort in Australia.
Overall, it is noticeable that the majority of tourists going on holiday in Australia come from US and Europe, with their average lengths of stay being the most significant while a converse pattern is witnessed in the case of Asian tourists. Additionally, camping and caravan are more popular accomodation for European passengers and visitors from other regions, whereas most Asian and American tourists prefer sightseeing.
According to the pie chart, European visitors make up the majority of total percentage of tourists traveling to Australia, accounting for 37%, followed by 35% of the US passengers. Meanwhile, the figures for visitors from Asia and other nations are slightly lower, at 10% and 18%, respectively.
Turning to the table, European and American visitors spend the greatest number of days on vacation in the overall length of stay, with respective figures of 16 days and 14 days. Individuals from other regions and Asia rank just below, standing at 10 days and 7 days, comparatively. Regarding accommodations, camping and caravan are the most favorable choices for European tourists and tourists from other countries, whereas the remaining groups opt to stay in hotels. Nevertheless, Asian and American people are immersed in sightseeing while passengers from Europe and other nations are more into other activities on the beach, such as swimming, sunbathing and surfing.
The given pie chart illustrates the distribution of passengers from different areas and the provided table demonstrates their number of day-offs, the most popular accommodation, along with major activ...
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The given table illustrates the average retirement age of men and women in different nations within the year 2003.
Overall, it is noticeable that males always retired later than females in all countries. Furthermore, Japanese people had the same retirement ages as Italian employees while the figures for France and Korea were comparatively the highest and lowest during the research.
In Korea, male employees were reported to retire when they were nearly 69, whereas women could stop working 2 months after turning 67. Meanwhile, French men were allowed to retire when they were 57 years and 4 months, compared to women, with a figure of just below 57 years. Similar patterns were witnessed in Japanese and Italian workers’ ages, with nearly 67 years and a half for males and under 67 years for women.
Turning to the United States, the figure for males was 65 years and 6 months, as opposed to females, standing at 64 years and 2 months. In addition, Australian men were regulated to retire at the age of just above 64, followed by 63 years and a half for females in 2003.
The given table illustrates the average retirement age of men and women in different nations within the year 2003.
Overall, it is noticeable that males always retired later than females in all countr...
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The given diagram depicts how much money that residents in five Australian cities have paid for water bills and provides an average bill per household.
As can be seen, locals living in Adelaide and Perth pay the least if they use excessively , reaching to 125 KL, while the charge applied on these two mentioned cities is the highest. Besides, Perth also holds the peak in average bill that one household pays and the opposite belongs to Melbourne.
At first glance, figures for overusing up to 125 kL cases witness the domination of Melbourne and Sydney which are respectively known as $0.78 and $0.98, followed by remaining stable if locals use over 125KL. In Brisbane city, there is a slight upsurge between reaching 125KL and surpassing 125KL about $0.3. While, the price that citizens in Adelaide and Perth are charged sees a significant increase starting at $0.42 and reaching $1.00 and $1.50.
Moving to the final column, the highest overall bill per family is in Perth, at $332 and on the opposite side belongs to Melbourne with $253. Furthermore, the remaining three cities seen as Adelaide, Brisbane and Sydney have quite similar prices in the range of $310 and $219.
The given diagram depicts how much money that residents in five Australian cities have paid for water bills and provides an average bill per household.
As can be seen, locals living in Adelaide and P...
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Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting more works of art like paintings and statues into towns and cities to make them attractive places
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is asserted that the government should invest the national budget in locating an increasing number of artworks like paintings and statues inside metropolises to make them appealing destinations. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I completely agree with this notion.
The foremost reason supporting my argument is that putting more works of art into towns and cities to attract visitors might be beneficial to the local people. More precisely, valuable works of art, such as pictures and statues could be appealing to various tourists who desire to have more insights into historical and architectural values of regions. As a result, tourism can provide local people with many employment opportunities like tourist guides, history presenters, etc, thus making a handsome profit, ultimately improving their quality of life.
An additional reason in favor of my view is that this policy can be positive to national development. In fact, a great number of foreigners who are insterested in historical and architectural values are believed to visit the cities and towns, thereby increasing the overall revenue of national tourism. This is exemplified by the fact that Statue of Liberty, located in the center of New York city, has risen the USA’s revenue to over 100 million USD per year by attracting a range of visitors, thus contributing to national development.
In conclusion, I advocate that allocating national expenditure in putting artworks inside cities and towns should be encouraged, given that this policy might supply occupations for local people and make a substantial contribution to the nation as well.
Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting more works of art like paintings and statues into towns and cities to make them attractive places
To what extent do you agree or dis...
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