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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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e nhờ thầy cô chấm giúp bài này ạ
Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their
stress and anxiety.
Essay
It is sometimes believed that individuals listen to music to reduce their frustration and worries. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion as now will be discussed.
The first argument behind my belief is that music can protect humans when they are trapped in anxious situations. This is because the human brain will focus on the enjoyable melodies instead of thinking about bad circumstances. By way of illustration of a flight without Wifi, the passengers can be really scary at first, thus immersing themselves in the melodies helps them escape from concern and enjoy the journey. Instead of worrying about the worst situations, the passengers head always thinks about the melodies of the song, thereby making them have a feel safety during the journey,
Such solutions have a positive effect on human’s life.
Another point worth mentioning is that certain types of music recording can help individuals ease their mind and obtain high-quality time at home. Such issues can be proved by researchers that official workers and citizens after returning from work suffer from mental health problems. This can be exemplified that the Harvard News reports high levels of daily stress and tiredness after work days which make 43% of employees feeling that they are on the edge of burnout. In addition, this kind of peaceful sound can help people reduce pressure on their work and find happiness in their mind.
In conclusion, I totally agree that music can be healing for the person given the aforementioned arguments.
Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their
stress and anxiety.
Essay
It is sometimes believed that individuals listen to music to reduce their frustration and...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture illustrates the layout of the Toronto Go Train Station before, during and after the redevelopment. Overall, the platform consisted of two conventional levels for boarding and transiting and was expanded deeper for a third one, catering for commercial purposes. Despite this change, the station remained operational.
Before the construction, the station had two separate levels: the train track on the top and a transit concourse below, with the latter being supported by a pillar with a wider foundation.
During the construction of the second level, specialized machinery was used, with most of the ground and the foundation being removed. Scaffolding was also erected, and a temporary staircase was built for passengers to travel and maintain transportation services.
After renovation, a new level for retailing was opened. The pillar was reconstructed throughout the two levels at the same perimeter with a column footing spread. The transit level was also raised slightly higher.
The picture illustrates the layout of the Toronto Go Train Station before, during and after the redevelopment. Overall, the platform consisted of two conventional levels for boarding and transiting an...
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Contained in the table is data about the number of people who have varied nationalities. Additionally, the pie chart shows the proportion of people in many different parts.
Overall, it can be seen that different groups of people live mostly in metropolises. with regards to the pie chart, those who are Australian have the highest percentage among to total population of Australia
Regarding the statistics of people who have 5 different nationalities living in the city which is higher than those who live in the countryside, ranged from 80% to 99%. The amount of Chinese among the 5 others who live in the city is the highest at 99%, with the least number of people who hardly ever lived in the countryside. It is followed by New Zealanders with nearly 90% of people living in the city and just 10% are countrymans. However other 3 nationalities have just under 90% proportion who live in the city and more than 10% of people live in the countryside
Turning to the pie chart where most people are Australian with around 73%. However, there are 7% of British live in Australia which is higher than the Dutch, Chinese, and New Zealanders, is only 1% 2% 3% respectively
Contained in the table is data about the number of people who have varied nationalities. Additionally, the pie chart shows the proportion of people in many different parts.
Overall, it can be seen...
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Mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ
The pie charts illustrate the distribution of time among working adults engaged in six distinct activities within a specific country during the years 1958 and 2008.
Overall, it is clear that the majority of activities witnessed an upward trend, with the exception of sleeping and hanging out with friends/ family. Additionally, the highest number was seen in the number of adults working spent the most amount of time in a day throughout the period.
In 1958, individuals allocated more than a third of their daily time to work and sleep, comprising a considerable 33%, outnumbered those at that time. After 50 years, although sleeping remained the second most common activity, this figure fell by a fourth. In stark contrast, there was a significant rise in the time allocated to employment, reaching a peak at 42% of the daily time. Going out activities also started at an impressive figure, 19% before its figure decreased by only 6% in 2008.
Turning to the others, commuting to work and other interests or playing sport and experienced a similar trend, with both activities increasing gradually to converge at 8%. After 50 decades, growing slightly 5%, relaxing at home amounted to 13% at the end of the period.
Note: Tiện cô cho em lời khuyên, với dạng Pie này em nên so sánh số liệu của 2 năm để phân tích hay nên phân tích từng năm 1. Ví dụ cho cả dạng 4 pie nữa ạ
The pie charts illustrate the distribution of time among working adults engaged in six distinct activities within a specific country during the years 1958 and 2008.
Overall, it is clear that the ma...
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Writing task 1 - Em nhờ thầy cô chấm chữa giúp ạ.
The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. (đề)
The given map illustrates two types of room providing for one person and two people at an Australian college.
Overall, two-person room have more furnitures than single one. Besides, living in the former one week is more expensive than the latter.
To begin with, both of rooms are equipped with television, microwave, sink, and stove. Then, their windows are located to the top right-hand corner where a bed is next to. There is a bathroom in the northwest of them.
Besides, while the width of two-person dormitory is longer than that for one person, accounting for 4 metres and 2.5 metres, respectively, the length is similar. Two-person room has two beds and two study desks compared to their figure are only one in single room. Additionally, table and chairs are only placed in the central area of two people room alongside two set of cupboards. Finally, as the price of two-person room is 350 dollars weekly, 200 dollars are the cost for the other at the same time.
The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. (đề)
The given map illustrates two types of room providing for one person and two...
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The life quality of humans has changed significantly since the breakthroughs of technology. The fact that researchers believe in the superiority of computers to humans has raised a controversial debate on whether this is positive or negative. This essay will discuss both perspectives before stating my opinion.
On the one hand, computers with high intelligence can significantly enhance efficiency and productivity. They can process vast amounts of data, solve complex problems, and perform tasks at speeds far beyond human capabilities. The logistics sector is an exemplar of this argument since computers can simultaneously sort, track, and update a tremendous number of deliveries relentlessly and effortlessly at extremely high precision and speed in a bit of seconds. However, this can be seen as disadvantageous for humans because as computers become more intelligent, there is a concern about the displacement of jobs. The automation of various tasks could lead to unemployment in some sectors, potentially threatening the livelihoods of many workers, given how effective and productive computers can be.
On the other hand, highly intelligent computers could accelerate scientific research and discovery. They might be able to analyse complex data sets, simulate experiments, and generate hypotheses at a pace that human researchers cannot match. Many medications and vaccines have been produced to tackle some diseases that were seemingly uncurable in the past, thanks to computers. Again, this progress means that without this form of support, humans’ well-being can be easily at risk, and such overreliance can lead to a loss of essential human skills, potentially diminishing human cognitive capabilities and decision-making skills.
In conclusion, although the intelligence of computers can help humans attain many achievements in terms of effectiveness, productivity and progress, I believe the drawbacks of this development may eclipse its benefits in the long run when it comes to the employability and livelihood of numerous labourers, as well as the human nature because of the overdependence on such technology.
Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opin...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The table illustrates how much milk was produced per year in four nations, namely the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala, in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
Overall, the amount of milk produced in the Netherlands was consistently the highest over the period, while the opposite was true for that of Guatemala. Additionally, despite the yearly milk production amount in Australia declining, it was still higher than the figures for Tanzania and Guatemala, both of which experienced rises.
Regarding two countries with a minimum production of 9 million litres, in the first half of the period, both the Netherlands and Australia saw slight decreases in the annual amount of milk made, from 11262 thousand litres and 11246 thousand litres in 1990 to 11155 thousand and 11105 thousand in 2000 respectively. However, in the latter half of the period, the former recovered and ended at 11466 thousand litres in 2010, while the latter fell continually to 9165 thousand litres that year.
As for the others, 87 thousand litres of milk were produced in Tanzania in the first year, four times higher than Guatemala’s figure, at 26 thousand litres. The yearly milk production activity in these two countries grew considerably after two decades, with Tanzania remaining higher, reaching 155 thousand litres in the final year, while Guatemala ended at just below Tanzania’s initial level.
The table illustrates how much milk was produced per year in four nations, namely the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala, in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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Writing task 2
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Task 2: Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?
Currently, the quantity of pupils that have a choice of studying in the scientific curriculum at university in several nations is not positive. So what are the main rationales of this argument and what impacts will it have on a social basis? I will shed the light on this argument in my essay below.
On the first hand, there are many reasons which result in fewer learners choosing to major in science. First of all, it could be said that science is such an academic field that only a minority of students have ability to comprehend it in-depth. In the previous century, science and technology were the tendency and had more opportunities in job market. That is the reason why youngsters prefer to choose science subjects. Having said that, as time goes by, students realize that it is impossible for them to pursue their scientific career without passion, endurance and particularly intelligence. Secondly, some of science subjects such as physics, mathematics, computer science or biology have required learners to higher standards about learners’ levels. A vivid implication of this circumstance is that whenever students are required to have comments about science, it is frequently the description of an unintelligible subject or uncomprehensible so they have a tendency to make a decision to take trendy subjects or some kinds of intelligible modules which they find them easy to study.
On the flip side, despite objective conditions, it could not be denied that the fewer students majoring in science, the more serious impacts on society. Anually, there are a considerable amount of positions in scientific company lack of proficient workforce. This is because graduated students majoring in science decrease significantly. This means one individual must take responsibility for more tasks and it could lead to increase working pressure. Moreover, there are some kinds of preconceptions about scientific modules in studying that could make people have negative attitudes towards this field. It could result in there are fewer and fewer learners choosing science. It could be said that lack of people studying science has serious consequences.
In conclusion, for the time being, there are not enough students considering science and they no longer choose it to study in-depth. This issue actually brings back a range of effects on society. In my opinion, it is essential to have a strategic plan in the future to resolve it.
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Task 2: Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem...
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The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005
The two maps illustrate the degree to which Youngsville in New zealand changed from 1980 to 2005.
Overall, the Youngsville in New zealand experienced a number of dramatic changes, the most prominent of which is the construction of stadium.
In the north-west, most of the trees were cut down, and a park was constructed. The hospital stayed the same. Additionally, the north of the town also witnessed significant changes, with the houses being converted into stadium, and marina was constructed adjacent to the railway.
The warehouse and factories were constructed in the south-west, replacing the woodland and 2 houses, while the airport remain unchanged. In the south of town, there is a construction of skyscrapers, to replace the houses and trees around there.
The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005
The two maps illustrate the degree to which Youngsville in New zealand changed fr...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture illustrates the temperature levels and characteristics of tropical and temperate mountains.
Overall, the tropical mountains are far higher than the temperate ones, with much more variety in terms of plantations and cultivational conditions.
Regarding tropical mountains, the lowest level called the warm zone, up to about 600m, is optimal for various tropical crops. Triple this height is the limit of the temperate zone, which is available for coffee and cocos cultivations, followed by the cool zone, with 1.2km more in height, possible for cultivating grain crops. The forest zone starts from this height, which is also the limit for broad-leaf trees, spanning just under 4km. An additional 500m is begin of the alpine meadows, with the limit for pine and firs to grow, and the final level of permanent snow, peaking at 5.5km.
As for the temperate mountains, the initial 1.5km is the cool zone, a general environment for planting grains, potatoes, or flax. The next zone – the forest, is situated in the next 500m from the limitation of broad-leaf trees. From 2km to just below 1km is the alpine meadows, which is the sub-top zone, commenced by the limit for spruce. Beyond this level is the permanent snow, which is the highest level, with a peak at about 3.6km.
The picture illustrates the temperature levels and characteristics of tropical and temperate mountains.
Overall, the tropical mountains are far higher than the temperate ones, with much more varie...
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Writing task 1 . Em mong thầy cô chấm giúp ạ
The table chart reveals statistics about the proportion of migrant employees in 4 countries such as the UK, US, New Zealand and Australia between 2003 to 2006 and the rate of workers pẻ 1000 people in these countries in 2006.
Overall , the number of workers in these countries witnessed an upward trend . In addition , the figure of immigrant employees in the US was the highest while the highest rate of workers was recorded for New Zealand .
With regard to Oceania countries , the number of migrant workers in Australia was 152000 people in 2003 , then it dramatically increased to 219000 individuals in 2006 , when the rate of workers was over 10,7 per 1000 people in the same year. Additionally , the figure for New Zealand was the lowest in 4 countries with 65000 people in 2003 and 87000 in 2006 , but the rate of workers was the highest with 21,1 per 1000 people in 2006.
Turning to other countries , the highest number of immigrant workers was for the US with 570000 in 2003 , then it significantly increased to 878000 individuals in 2006 , but the total figure of workers over 1000 people was the lowest with a little of 2,3. And finally , the number of laborers in UK was just 137000 in 2003 but it double increased in 2006 and the rate of workers per 1000 people was 4,4
The table chart reveals statistics about the proportion of migrant employees in 4 countries such as the UK, US, New Zealand and Australia between 2003 to 2006 and the rate of workers pẻ 1000 people in...
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
People living in the twenty-first century have a better quality of life than people who live in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The lives of people nowadays have developed significantly since the beginning of the twenty-first century in comparison to those in the previous centuries. While acknowledging the positive impacts of such development, I believe some challenges should be considered as well.
Granted, numerous individuals have achieved a better life quality in this century thanks to many advancements, especially in medical and technological aspects. Regarding the former, breakthroughs in medical fields allow better healthcare services and treatment options, leading to increased life expectancy and the eradication of fatal diseases. This can be seen in the case of Covid-19, where the development of vaccines has saved many lives, which nearly cannot be achieved in the past. Another advantage is that technology has transformed communication, enhancing social bonds and emotional well-being. Life convenience is improved through online shopping and smart home devices, allowing the focus on more meaningful activities and contributing to overall productivity and comfort. Again, these apparent benefits might not have been obtained in the previous centuries.
Nevertheless, despite the aforementioned progress, it would be unwise to overlook the difficulties and inequalities that still exist these days. Chief of these is that wealth disparity arguably affects many people, particularly the underprivileged groups, who, more often than not, are limited to access medical services. Another challenge can also be seen in the case of technology, which contributes to social isolation and the lack of depth in relationships, as virtual interactions are becoming dominant in communication. Job displacement and economic uncertainty resulting from automation and artificial intelligence also impact many workers’ overall quality of life since the productivity and efficiency of machines undeniably outweigh those of human beings. These obstacles are convincing evidence for the fact that the improvements in the twenty-first century cannot be overestimated compared to the follow-along effects.
In conclusion, while it is true that the twenty-first century has seen many beneficial changes when it comes to the life quality of people, in this case, the medical and technological facets, I firmly hold the view that there are still several difficulties and disparities that should be well-considered.
People living in the twenty-first century have a better quality of life than people who live in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think that it's important to spend money on family celebrations (e.g. weddings, birthdays. However, some think that expensive celebrations are a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Family festivities often act as a pivotal part to promote the sense of togetherness among family members. Therefore, it is widely believed that the expenditure on such events is compulsory, while some opt for the idea that money splurging should not be encouraged in such occasions. From my perspective, the spending on such events should not be used exorbitantly as it can be allotted for better practical purposes.
On the one hand, it is justifiable that lavish spending on such occasions can strengthen the relationships among relatives. As family gathering events only happen on some special occasion, this is a rare chance for individuals to reunite and understand more about their status such as careers and well-being. For instance, by organizing events like birthday parties for children, they tend to have good memories of their childhood about their family, which acts as a precursor to the feeling of gratitude and the sense of responsibility to take care of their family in the future. Therefore, a strong bond of relatives will be the repercussions of the expenditure on these ceremonies.
On the other hand, overspending on family celebrations can be seen as extravagant to some extent. Luxurious gathering events usually require a massive budget, which constantly reflects the social status of the party holder. To meet the high expectations from family members, the holder can be under great economical pressure or even go into debt just for having a short satisfying moment. Furthermore, this may enhance the inequality among relatives. Young adults may face peer pressure when being compared about their commodities when involving in these specific events. As a result, the meaning of a family reunion may be overshadowed by a competition of wealthiness among relatives.
In conclusion, both views have their own merits; however, I am of the opinion that family milestones should be celebrated in order to promote the familial relationship as well as nurture the family values. However, the size and funding for the ceremonies should be moderated based on the family financial status.
Family festivities often act as a pivotal part to promote the sense of togetherness among family members. Therefore, it is widely believed that the expenditure on such events is compulsory, while some...
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Writing task 1
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Task 1: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The bar charts illustrate a few changes in the percentage of residents born both in and outside Australia in three distinct areas in 1995 and 2010.
In general, the proportion of people who were born in cities (boroughs are towns) had a tendency to increase significantly while in contrast, the ratio of the population born in smaller areas witnessed an opposite trend.
In the year of 1995, the birth rate of city dwellers of both inside and outside Australia accounted for more than half of the population at notably 50% and 60% respectively. This trend augmented so consecutively that in the year 2010, the ratio of residents born in Australia rose up to more than 60% and the ones who were born outside this continent peaked at 80%.
On the contrary, the rate of people born in rural areas experienced an opposing tendency.
After fifteen years, the data of new bornnewborn rural inhabitants had a dramatic decline from 30% down to nearly 20% for Australian and from 40% to a negligible number in its counterpart area. SimilarySimilarly, the population born in towns in both regions went down gradually with a steady decrease which was from 20% down low to 10%.
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Task 1: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Austral...
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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In this digital era, several youngsters dedicate daily hours to using their smartphones .From a personal viewpoint , it can bring advantages but also have many disadvantages.In this essay, I going to light up my viewpoint .
One of the advantages of allowing children to use smartphones is can access many educational resources such as study apps or ebooks .It helps children to improve their knowledge and skills without having to face-to-face study and also develop skills that are not taught at school . For example , survival skill in the wild place may not be taught in class but with smartphones , they can easily learn how to protect themself in the uncovered place.
However , the negative effects of using smartphones cannot be denied , especially in Health , Social and Emotion . The most popular impact of spent too much time playing on smartphones is physical health such as reduced memory of brain or eye strain . It also can make children become anti-social , not interested in outdoor activities, or exacerbate the development of face-to-face skill . An example , when children dedicate much time to playing games on smartphones without the supervision of the guardian , they can learn the attitudes and actions of the characters in the game . From that , children who spend hours each day using smartphones can easily have a negative impact on children's mental and physical health .
To conclusion , using smartphones can have a positive effect . Additionally, it is necessary to understand and know about the disadvantages, especially the parents who should control the time limit of using smartphones of their children.
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In this digital era, several youngsters dedicate daily ho...
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Em mong cô chấm và nhận xét ạ, em cảm ơn cô: Some people claim that what many people eat in western countries is unhealthy food and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet.
In the modern world, fast food is becoming more and more prevalent in Western countries, even becoming an indispensable part of Western people’s daily menus. This situation raises the thought that their diets are harmful to the human body and that these unhealthy diets are becoming worse. Some people strongly believe that it is necessary for them to alter their eating habits. I personally agree with the fact that numerous citizens in Western countries consume a large amount of junk food and they should consider modifying the types of food intake.
In fact, via mass media, there are various news articles that told us how trendy processed food, convenience food, and junk food are in Western cultures. It is apparent to me that Western residents tend to consume a great deal of unhealthy food every day in their daily routines. For example, several fast food restaurant chains such as McDonald’s, Burger King, KFC, and Pizza Hut are well-known and they hold so much appealing from individuals of all ages. Particularly, children may have a higher risk of becoming addicted to fried chicken, chips, or pizza if adults do not give them any advice. Thanks to its appetizing taste, convenience, and advertisers’ glamorization, unhealthy food including fast food, junk food, and processed food is getting more and more popular and gaining much attraction. Interestingly, they have been even treated as the main course in Western feasts or banquets for a long time. Overeating processed food can cause adverse effects on our bodies, leading to many diseases such as diabetes, obesity, high blood pressure, and so on due to a huge quantity of energy intake from sugar, saturated fat, trans fatty acids, and used oil.
I strongly agree with the critics who hold the view that these countries should make changes to their diets. The thing is this is an effective way to prevent themselves from many detrimental illnesses or even fatal diseases. Nutritionists claim that “You are what you eat”.
Undoubtedly, vegetables, fruits, or fish are potent ingredients that supply nutrients to the human body, and provide us with diverse vitamins, and minerals. As a result, eating more healthy food and drinking juice instead of consuming canned food, and fizzy drinks enables us to strengthen our immune, cardiovascular, and digestive systems so that it acts as a powerful shield to alleviate the risk of suffering from sickness. The government plays a vital role in spreading and encouraging healthy eating habits to the inhabitants for the sake of their health by organizing voluntary campaigns or via mass media. Take my country by way of example, there are many articles on newspapers that are written about food. They deliberately emphasize the importance and influence of healthy food to people. Furthermore, raising juvenile students’ awareness of healthy eating is compulsory in every schools in my country, with the purpose of nourishing children’s mindset about distinguishing between beneficial food and harmful one from a very young age.
In conclusion, although becomes trendy and stylish in many Western countries, detrimental food also results in many negative and serious impacts on individuals’ physical bodies. Therefore, Western residents need to convert the food they eat in a healthier and more positive way in order to protect their well-being as well as organs inside their bodies.
In the modern world, fast food is becoming more and more prevalent in Western countries, even becoming an indispensable part of Western people’s daily menus. This situation raises the thought that the...
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The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.
The given line chart gives information about the proportion of individuals belonging to four age groups who visited the cinema at least once a month in a specific nation over the period 30 years starting from 1978.
Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of people in four age groups witnessed a fluctuation over the period. In addition, individuals aged 14-24 accounted for the highest percentage of people who visited the cinema, while the opposite was true for individuals aged 50+.
As can be observed from the chart, in 1978, more than 40% of individuals aged 50+ watched at least one movie at the cinema on a monthly basis. This percentage decreased sharply to 30% in the next 10 years but increased significantly to 51% in 2008. Similarly, the percentage of individuals aged 35 to 49 stood at 60% in the first year but declined sharply to 10% in 1988. There was growth slightly and reached a peak at around 70% in 1998 before falling to 68% in the last year.
Following that, the percentage of 14-to-24-year-olds visiting movie theaters at least once per month fluctuated slightly around 90%, ending the period at approximately
88% in 2008. The figure for individuals aged 25 to 34 stood at 80% in 1978. This percentage fluctuated sharply to 80% in 1998 and declined slightly to 77% at the end of the period before remaining unchanged between 1988 and 2003.
The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.
The given line chart gives information about th...
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The pie charts give information about the percentage energy manufactured in a nation over the period of 20 years starting from 1983.
Overall, it can be seen that Oil accounted for the highest percentage in five types of energy. Additionally, Nuclear power and Natural gas saw an upward trend while the opposite was true for Coal and Hydropower.
As can be observed from the chart, in the first year, Oil accounted for the highest percentage of power produced, at around 42%. The percentage of Coal and Nuclear power and Natural gas made up for a considerable amount, at 23%, 20% and 11% respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for Hydropower had the lowest percentage, just only 4%.
In the next 20 years, Oil power still made up for the highest percentage but declined slightly to 38%. The figure for Natural gas increased significantly to 10%, at around 21% while Coal and Nuclear Power decreased slightly to 24% and 13% respectively. In contrast, the percentage of Hydropower produced still remained unchanged from 1983 to 2003.
The pie charts give information about the percentage energy manufactured in a nation over the period of 20 years starting from 1983.
Overall, it can be seen that Oil accounted for the highest percent...
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The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors of three distinct categories to the museum over the course of 15 years, starting from 1997.
Overall, it is clear that there were increases in the number of adult visitors and special exhibition visitors, while the reverse was true for visitors aged under 15. Additionally, the most significant difference was seen in adult visitors throughout the period.
Regarding attention to adult guests, in 1997, there were 300,1000 attendees to a museum, recording the highest number. Over the following decade, their attendance experienced a significant rise, reaching a peak at 400,5000 visitors, before decreasing to 380,000 visitors in 2012, remaining in the peak position.
Throughout the period, the data for guests aged under 15 and special exhibition visitors to a museum were lower, witnessing an inverse trend, with the former decreasing from 120,000 participants in 1997 to only 82,300 participants in 2012 and the latter increasing from 28,000 participants in 1997 to 42,000 participants in 2012.
Turning to the total number of participants at the museum, this destination welcomed 448,100 visitors in 1997, undergoing the most significant growth to 525,200 guests in the two following decades and then bottomed out at 504,300 attendees by the end of the period.
The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors of three distinct categories to the museum over the course of 15 years, starting from 1997.
Overall, it is clear that there were increases in the nu...
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The charts below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparation where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of British and Americans’ consumption in five separate types of energy sources in the year 2000 and 2006. Overall, oil dominated the energy market of both countries over the given time frame, whereas other renewable sources were the least prevalent type in the UK and USA in the years examined.
In 2000 and 2006, the rate of oil consumption in the USA initially peaked at approximately 37% and 40% respectively, while this kind of energy source in the UK constituted less than 10% in comparison with the USA in the first year of 2000s, then stood at exactly 30% six years later. The runner-up in 2000 is coal which accounted for over one third of energy consumption in the USA and more than 5% compared with the UK. However, the amount of coal used in both countries had decreased dramatically in 2006, in which year its figure fell over a half and a tenth in the USA and UK sequentially. Meanwhile, one of the most striking features is the significant increase in the percentage of gas utilization in both countries, which climbed more than a half to 38%.
Nuclear power and other renewable sources are the least unpopular type with the British and American in the years surveyed, which witnessed a slight decline in six years. Nuclear power comprised around 16% of total British energy consumption in 2000 then dropped almost a half in 2006. Its figures in the USA were 8% and 6% respectively. Other renewable sources consist of a tiny minority of the UK’s energy use with slightly over a tenth in both years given. Turning to the USA, this type of energy source was responsible for 6% in 2000 and then dropped a half in 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of British and Americans’ consumption in five separate types of energy sources in the year 2000 and 2006. Overall, oil dominated the energy market of both coun...
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