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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Nowadays, children in many countries have to deal with a huge load of homework after school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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These days, students in several parts of the world are assigned with a huge load of homework to fulfill after school. From my perspective, although I accept that this situation is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that the drawbacks are far more significant.
On the one hand, there are a number of merits for young people to address numerous home assignments after school. A major perk is that homework acts as additional practice for students to revise horizons attained at school, which enables them to retain knowledge more easily. Hence, it considerably helps curb stress from exams and get a decent academic outcome. Another benefit is that devoting time to studying means that children may have less time for screen leisure activities. Therefore, they are more likely to avoid detrimental impacts of excessive use of the Internet such as eyestrain, back pain, and social isolation.
On the other hand, spending time tackling homework can have serious downsides which overshadow these advantages. The first demerit is that school-goers have a large amount of knowledge to accumulate at school and several home assignments to complete, which makes them have less time for sleeping and unwinding. Consequently, it puts a heavy burden on school children and they may suffer from different health-related problems such as depression or anxiety disorder. Another point worth mentioning is that it deprives teenagers of time for extracurricular activities. As a result, they may have fewer opportunities to both physically and mentally develop and find out their own passions. For instance, in Western countries, children often spend time after school playing outdoor sports or participating in classes that help them develop essential life skills. In contrast, most Asian parents urge their off-springs to attend extra classes and finish a large amount of homework to enhance their academic outcome.
In conclusion, despite the potential advantages that spending much time doing homework can bring to children, they are completely outweighed by the adverse effects involved.
Nowadays, children in many countries have to deal with a huge load of homework after school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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It is true that dwellers in cities become increasingly sedentary and exercise less.This essay will discuss about the main reasons and give some solutions to deal with this problem.
There are two main factors associated with this phenomenon.The key one is people who live in metropolises often have less time for exercise due to their busy work schedules.More specifically,in order to cope with high city living costs,they have to spend most of their time working,even at the weekend.According to recent surveys,approximately 70% of citizens in Ho Chi Minh city have to work overtime to complete their workload to be able to pay for the cost of living here,which is twice as expensive as my hometown.Another reason is the popularity of sedentary activities.This is mainly because these days,people tend to relax by engaging in screen time activities such as watching tv or playing video games instead of taking part in outdoor activities.As a result,this lead to a lot of diseases such as obese,myopic and so on and they do not have many time for their family.
Fortunately,several measures could be taken to alleviate this phenomenon.First and foremost,it is necessary to raise people’awareness of the importance of regular exercise.When they are fully aware of this,they could spend more time doing exercise or participating in more active activities.A technology company,for example,encourages their employees to ride bicycles to work to both exercise and protect the environment.In addition,the local authorities should install more outdoor fitness equipment in parks and other public areas to foster people to do more exercise.Take Hoa Cuc Bien park in my neighborhood as an example,has attracted a huge number of local residents after being equipped exercise equipment.
In conclusion,this phenomenon can be explained by the popularity of sedentary activities and their busy work schedules to making a live.However,the local authorities can tackle this problem by raising people’s awareness of exercise and equipping more outdoor equipment.
It is true that dwellers in cities become increasingly sedentary and exercise less.This essay will discuss about the main reasons and give some solutions to deal with this problem.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are living in a peaceful and fair world. People have the right to do what they like, what they want so it is not suprised to catch the idea that people now have a plenty of choices in many sectors. I strongly agree with this point of view.
First and foremost, with the development of a lot of facets in society, there are more and more jobs for people to do. In the past, people were not mindful of the importance of learning and educating their children so most of these children tended to become a farmer or did trading business. But now with the development of technology and people take an insight into learning, children are educated to do variety of jobs not just become a farmer. Furthermore the most crucial factor is the increase of demands, it appears lots of new job to cater people's demands such as pilot as people want to travel more quickly and plane was invented. For example, there is a hot trend to become a content creater in social media among young generations.
People not only have many choices in career but also in married status. In the past, people had to get married. These days, individuals are more open-minded, people can choose to get married or be single. In addition, many people find marriage is uncomfortable; therefore, they decided not to marry but still live with their partner and have babies. In a research on young people in Vietnam, there are about 30% of them choose to not marry and their parents completely underspin their idea.
In conclusion, I fully agree with the idea saying that there are many choices for people to choose. However, each of us should consider carefully before reaching the final decision on this time.
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are living in a peaceful and fair world. People have the right to do what they like, what th...
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The two pie charts compare the percentage of technology devices being used in 2009 and 2019.
Overall, conventional TV was the most popular gadget in 2009 while a constrast figure was being seen in tablet. However, in 2019, it is evident that conventional TV had the least percentage of usage and being overshadowed by mobile phone.
By 2009, over one-third of population preferred conventional TV, which is almost twofold compared to desktop computer at 18%. Regarding laptop usage, it accounted for exactly 20%, and followed by mobile phone with 15%. The percentage of tablet and flat-screen TV usage were just under 10%.
In the next decade of the period, flat-screen TV and mobile phone took the lead at 27% and 26%, respectively. Meanwhile, conventional TV became out-dated with only 4% being used, which is three times less than desktop computer and laptop, at 12% for both. The tablet usage increased nearly four times compared to the last decade, from 5% to 19%.
The two pie charts compare the percentage of technology devices being used in 2009 and 2019.
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The pie charts compare the percentage of global water consumption with that in San Diego and California.
Overall, it is evident that water in all worldwide and two countries mostly consumed by agriculture. Meanwhile, the industry from San Diego and California use more amount of water compared to global usage.
Regarding water usage from agriculture, it accounts for 69% of global water consumption, which is slightly more than San Diego by 9% and 30% more than California with just around 40%.
In terms of residential water usage, San Diego consumes almost one-fifth of the total water consumption, followed by the proportions of the worldwide and California, account for 23% and 28%, respectively. The percentage of water usage from California’s industry is 33% of total amount of consumption, while a figure from San Diego is just nearly one-fourth. Only a little amount of water is consumed by global industry, which is just under 10%.
The pie charts compare the percentage of global water consumption with that in San Diego and California.
Overall, it is evident that water in all worldwide and two countries mostly consumed by agricul...
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The given diagrams illustrate the structure of a solar panel and how it generates to attract sun rays and transforms it into warm air and warm water for residential use.
At first glance, to become a comprehensive product, sunlight has to go through numerous stages and experience two distinct treatments before preparing for human lives.
As it can be seen, there is a tank with the transparent glass on top and two pipes on each side, which serves as the inlet and the outlet. After that, the panel is exposed to the sun to capture sunlight, which then heats the glass and boils the tank, resulting in the evaporation and transformation of air into warm air.
Following this, similar to the previous process, the evaporation in the tank and the heat from the sun, which heats a long pipe in the tank, generate warm water when exposed for an extended period, approximately one day.There is an obvious discrepancy between two mentioned devices, particularly the pipe in the central of the tank
The given diagrams illustrate the structure of a solar panel and how it generates to attract sun rays and transforms it into warm air and warm water for residential use.
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Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems.What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing?Suggest some solutions
In the contemporary world, following urbanization, almost half of the world is rapidly developing thanks to the sustainable economy and new useful inventions. However, from my perspective, the younger generation experiences the pressure put on their shoulders to become skillful employers or well-educated people to follow their ancestors and grow the value of their countries. This essay will give some reasons why they are under pressure and some solutions to cope with this matter.
First and foremost, most juveniles often have a hectic day at school then go to the extra class until in the evening since their parents consider more studying and better in school report. Nevertheless, no one knows, listens and gives sympathy to their children. Furthermore, friends also pressure kids to conform and keep up with the up-to-date trend. For instance, over the past few months, iphone 15 is presenting leading to the kids who have economic conditions own it and display to the social media platform. This activity makes some less privileged children be deep in sorrow.
On the contrary, there are many methods to stop this problem and reduce the pressure. To begin with, moral education transmits the sentence “not comparing yourself with the other as you are the only individual in the world”. Besides, as I mentioned before, in families, parents should spend more time on listening and giving sympathy to their children's stories about how they feel and things that happen in a day. Listening not only plays a crucial role in bonding the connection and love among family members but also helps their children boost their mood after confiding and get ready for the next day.
In conclusion, while everyone experiences pressure, I believe that young people face similar challenges.There are many causes and many solutions but everything can be solved if humans find the most appropriate way.From my point of view, these two solutions that I presented can significantly alleviate this issue..
Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems.What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing?Suggest some solutions
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The graphs below show the average monthly expenditure on children’s sports and participation in different sports in the UK from 2008 to 2014.
The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children's sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to 2014.
It can be seen that the overall trend of the money spent on children's participation in sports was upward. In terms of the number of children taking part, participation in football is more popular than athletics and swimming.
According to the first chart, the spending on children's sport was 20 pounds in 2008. The amount of money increased gradually over the following six years, and by 2014, the average monthly amount reached to over 30 pounds.
Looking at the second chart, in 2008, children who played football was around 8 millions while only 1 million children took part in athletics and 2 millions people practised swimming. The number of children who played football was stable over the period while the figure of children taking part in athletics and swimming witnessed a significant increase to approximately 5 millions and 4 millions respectively.
The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children's sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 20...
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Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government.
Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, there are a large quantity of mechanize exported from different nations being sold in the market. Some individuals argue that this problem should be encouraged without the authority's intervention. From my point of view, I totally disagree with this notion due to the food safety and the adverse influence on indigenous food.
The first and foremost negative impact that exotic food distribution brings is the security of food. Taking advantage of the government's management on food is loose, some companies produced food with a poor quality. They utilize ingredients descended from unclear origins , containing numerous dangerous fungi or contagious viruses to generate a mass of products. This leads to the spread of severe diseases in the long-term customer’s health. An extreme case is the plague in England in AD 541. Due to the transporting of some animals such as rabbits from overseas, a bacterium causing this disease was delivered into this country, leading to thousands of deaths.
In addition, the prosperity of local specialties will be of low value in this case. They have to face fierce competition with a wide range of food from other countries. Customers prefer to consume international food because of their designs and prices. If the local enterprises do not take action to preserve their name in the market, they would likely yield little profit or even collapse.
In conclusion, imported oversea food without being restricted by the state may cause more disadvantages than advantages. Therefore, it is advisable that the administration impose strict control on the export and import of global commodities.
Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government.
Do you agree or disagree?
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The bar chart illustrates the change in Iceland population according to the age group from 1990 to 2020.
Overall, all of the age groups witnessed the downward trend throughout the 30-year-period, excluding the age from 25 to 54 and over 65. It is evident that the population aging from 25 to 54 overshadowed four other age groups in all years of the period.
In 1990, there was more than 30% of the population aging from 25 to 54, which was threefold compared to 55-64 and over 64 age groups that only accounted for just over 10%. The age of 25 – 54 rose significantly by around 20%, reached at nearly 50% in the last year. Meanwhile the population aging from 55 – 64 seen a slight decrease down to accurately 10% during the period.
The groups of 0-14 and 15-24 years old witnessed the similar changing pattern, which decreased by around 5% and 10%, respectively, to approximately 20% and 10%. The population aging over 65 was almost stable in up to 10% throughout the period of 30 years.
The bar chart illustrates the change in Iceland population according to the age group from 1990 to 2020.
Overall, all of the age groups witnessed the downward trend throughout the 30-year-period, excl...
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The graph shows information about how many vehicles were sold in Kiwi City about a
30-year from 1988 to 2018. The three types of vehicles considered are bicycles, motorbikes, and cars.
Overall, The overall trend shows that the number of vehicles bought in Kiwi City increased from 1988 to 2018. The number of bicycles bought increased the most, followed by the number of motorbikes bought. The number of cars bought remained relatively stable throughout the period.
In 1988, the number of cars bought was the highest, at 1.5 million. The number of bicycles and motorbikes bought was lower, at 1 million and 0.5 million, respectively. However, the number of bicycles bought increased from one million in 1988 to five million in 2018. The number of motorbikes bought had increased to 3.5 million, and car purchases had increased slightly to 3 million.
The number of bicycles bought was significantly higher than the number of motorbikes and cars bought throughout the period. In 2018, the number of bicycles bought was three times higher than the number of motorbikes bought and six times higher than the number of bicycles bought.
The line graph shows that the number of vehicles bought in Kiwi City increased from 1988 to 2018, with the number of bicycles bought increasing the most.
The graph shows information about how many vehicles were sold in Kiwi City about a
30-year from 1988 to 2018. The three types of vehicles considered are bicycles, motorbikes, and cars.
Overall, The...
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the line graph illustrates the number of people who receive news from four different sourse,namely television,radio,newspaper and internet from 1995 to 2025.
From an overall perspective,it is evident that the internet gained more popularity during the period while the opposite was true for the remaining figures.In addition,people using tv is the lowest at the beginning but at the end it is the highest.
At the beginning of the period shown,the number of people using the internet was the highest,at precisely 70 per cent.The figure for radio and newspapers were lower,at around 67% and 52% respectively.However,no one uses television to get news this year.
In the period from 1995 to 2025,the Internet has witnessed an decrease in the number of people using it,at just over 50%.There was also a significant drop in the percentage of radio and newspaper,approximately 32% and 27% in turn.In contrast,the period time has seen a remarkable growth in the figure for television,reaching a peak of 60%.
the line graph illustrates the number of people who receive news from four different sourse,namely television,radio,newspaper and internet from 1995 to 2025.
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many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school.Why is this?What can be done to solve the problem?
In the contemporary world, following the modernized and urbanized revolution, education plays a crucial role in the daily basis of humans.Therefore, the educational burden is widely spread among students including studying at university and studying at school. A large part of undergraduates advocate that they have fallen in dilemma to study more than they were at school.This essay will discuss the reason and give some comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter.
First and foremost, when you are mature enough, you have to do everything by yourself. Attending university or college is the dream of many students around the world but it is so obvious to see that they are in trouble. University life is definitely dependent on themselves, there is no assistance such as support from parents, meticulous care from teachers or tutors because one class can have around 50 students. Moreover, majors in university require high-level concentration and an agile mindset to understand the lesson as well as note-taking ability due to a large amount of knowledge and lecture speed. For instance, while high school students have teachers take care of them and keep track of them, moving to university allows them to liberally arrange their schedule which is appropriate and gain more empirical experiences by enhancing their soft skills.
To address this situation is not only for student’s responsibility but also for the universities.
Firstly, freshmans need to practice their solving skills and soft skills to have an independent attitude which is most necessary. To be more specific, they can join some pre-educated campaigns providing a group of activities that allow them to communicate with their classmates and get acquainted with a new academic environment. Besides, if students usually came to libraries or somewhere containing a large amount of useful knowledge such as museums, exhibitions or study rooms, the lack of knowledge would no longer be a hot press to solve. Promoting the relationship between lecturers and students can stimulate students to seek help and to ask more questions to deeply understand lessons.
To conclude, everyone in the world has its challenges and difficulty but the way they cope with it is different. Therefore, university life demands independence, and is not so obscure due to the differences and the diversity of curriculum. By organizing some pre-educated campaigns providing students with opportunities to foster their soft-skills and communication skills is a potential solution to go through such challenges.
many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school.Why is this?What can be done to solve the problem?
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Đề bài: The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many international visitors to three kinds of areas in a European nation during a twenty-years period from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, there was an increase foreign visitors visiting all three locations through this time frame. In addition, the amount of tourists was the lowest, while the coast was the highest.
In 1987, 40, 000 visitors to the coast in this European country. This figure declined by roughly 35, 000 in 1992, after which it began to rise, reaching approximately 75,000 in 2007. Meanwhile, the number of foreign visitors visiting fluctuation from 20,00 to 30,000 during the half-first period, before rising to roughly 35,000 in 2017.
The number of overseas tourists visiting the lake in this country continuously rose in the first fifteen years of the period, reaching at 75,000 in 2002. However, these figures began to drop, reaching 50, 000 visitors in 2017
Đề bài: The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featur...
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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The three pie charts illustrate how much money is spent annually on five different spending areas in UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall, there was a significant decline in the proportion of annually paying to the resources and other workers salaries, while an increase was seen in the figures for the other remaining. In addition, the amount of money spent on teachers was dominant in three years.
The percentage of paying an amount of money spent on teachers' salaries started at 40% in 1981, after which it experienced a considerable increase to 50% in 1991 before falling slightly to 45% in the final year. The reverse trend can be seen in the figure for other workers' salaries, which decreased from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001.
15% of expending money on resources (e.g.books), followed by a rise to 20% after a decade later. In 2001, this aspect witnessed a decline nearly doubled compared to school spending in 1991. The decrease of the expenditure on resources corresponded with the increase in furniture and equipment, which increased by nearly 8% at the end of the period. The figure for school spending on insurance grew up slightly from 2% in 1981 to 8% in 2001.
The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The three pie charts illustrate how much money is spent annually on five different sp...
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đề: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
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In the digital age, computer-based technology has been increasingly prevalent in human life. In fact, we certainly find it difficult to get through a day without it. In this essay, I will discuss its conversion in the foreseeable future. Also, whether people’s dependency on computer-based technology is beneficial or harmful to us will be analyzed.
I believe that computer-based technology will possibly experience a great alteration in the future. Firstly, it will not only be updated constantly but also become even more integrated into every aspect of our lives, becoming an indispensable and functional tool in order to help people deal with their work and study easily. For example, excel functions are able to aid people in managing and calculating their data precisely, making it faster and more convenient for them in their working lives. Furthermore, a large number of students are studying online, taking advantage of software or artificial intelligence as a companion in doing research or any projects. What is more, many computer-based forms such as artificial intelligence or automatic machines will be used prevalently in every industry, school, or company to automate their tasks and enhance working efficiency. Consequently, computer-based technology is going to become extremely necessary to every individual, particularly those who are living in an innovative society.
It is apparent that an increasing number of individuals are becoming dependent on computers. I believe that computers play the role of a right-hand man to support us in our modern lives, partly alleviating our pressure from work in comparison with the past. Although showcase numerous benefits, they probably result in several drawbacks if we rely too much on them. The inevitable reason behind this is that it will certainly trigger our laziness and dependence instead of trying our best to think and find a way to solve the problem. For further explanation, if automatic machines replace us to do all the tasks, we will not need to brainstorm any new ideas or do physical activities. As a result, this situation possibly leads to obesity, causing various health problems. Besides, relying too much on computers reduces the ability to think critically, and limits our intellectual activities, which can have a disastrous impact on the natural development of each individual.
In conclusion, computer-based technology has proved to be vital to humans in modern society, becoming the most helpful assistant for us. Also, the invention of computers marked a breakthrough in technological development, which brings a large number of advantages to humans. Having said that people should be aware of the pros and cons of computers to take advantage of them smartly and reasonably as well as make them become productive tools. It is necessary to avoid overusing and depending on them too much, which can prevent us from many health problems and natural growth.
đề: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
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In the digital a...
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
With the advanced technology, there are many approaches for people to easily communicate with each other. In my viewpoint, this is a positive development.
There are various disadvantages of interacting with people directly. To begin with, people are busy with their work and do not control their time management clearly, which means it takes a lot of time to communicate with surroundings directly. More specifically, they have to make appointments at cafe, supermarkets to discuss the abundant knowledge related to essays, presentations and eventually homework groups. Besides, people tend to be shy when they talk with friends by face to face interaction because they are not confident enough. This means they can not make their own viewpoints when contacting the opposite person. Therefore, the problems associated with this kind of communication take a toll on everyone.
Nevertheless, this problem also brings several benefits to everyone. With modern technology, the emergence of applications diversifies such as google meet, zooms and messenger for everyone to keep in touch with each other. To commence with, it is easy for people to access a type of communication through social networks. This will help everyone save time to remain in a relationship on useful apps without going out and can serve suitable work involved in learning online and presentation. In addition, social networking sites provide platforms for introverted individuals to express themselves and interact comfortably, helping them self-confidence and social skills. Clearly, this trend can bring advantages to people.
In conclusion, communication by face-to-face interaction takes much time but with the development of the internet, people can communicate with other people through social networks, which shows that this is a positive development.
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or ne...
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The bar chart illustrates and compares the rate of five different causes of absence in a specific European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. For the purposes of this data set, the rationale is divided into five factors, with the total adding up to 100%. Overall, sickness was notably the primary reason absenteeism, with a predominant share in all three years examined. A further point is that while illness continually experienced a downward trend over the given time frame, stress, person needs and unexpected problems explained for an increasing number of individuals asked for days-off.
In the first years of 2000s, the vast majority of employees who had sick-leave reached a peak of 44%, taking up almost a haft of all employees. Afterward, the figure for this category decreased considerably, standing at 40% by 2005 and eventually held 35% after a decade. By contrast,
Fewest laborers enjoyed the downtime because of depression over the period, which only began at 6% in 2000, then hitting a low of merely 4% in the next five years, suddenly climbed to approximately 12% in the final stage. Moving on to person needs, there was 14% of individuals tended to leave for personally occupations by 2000, following by an upswing of 20% and 23% by 2005 and 2010 respectively.
Turning to family responsibility, whose figures was the most stable in 2000s. There was 26% of workers were not present caused by their family duty by 2000. Afterward, this proportion levelled off at around 25% in the following decade. What is more, the quantity of working people who had several unexpected problems and decided to enjoy rest days witnessed a slight increase, beginning with 7%, then doubled in the next half-decade. Ultimately, this cause’s percentage stood at 14% by 2010.
The bar chart illustrates and compares the rate of five different causes of absence in a specific European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. For the purposes of this data set, the rationale is...
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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001
The given chart illustrates how the expenditure annually of a particular UK school changed in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall, the money spent on teacher’s salaries was the dominant in the date, while Insurance was the lowest spending in the period.
In 1981, the salaries used for paying teachers was the highest percent, accounting for 40%. The second highest spending was other workers’ salaries with 28%. The money spent on resources e.g books and furniture and equipment had a similar percent, making up 15%. The percentage of school spending on insurance was lower than others with only 2%.
There was a significant increase in teacher’s salaries accounting for a half percent in 1991 before wenting down slightly in 2001 with 45%. The resources e.g books went up a little, with one-fifth percent in 1991 and had a dramatic decrease in 2001, with 9%. The school spending on furniture and equipment and other worker’s salaries decreased slightly, with 5% and 22%, respectively. In 2001 the spending on furniture and equipment increased sharply with 23%, while the other worker’s salaries also decreased smally with 15%. The insurance had steadily increase over the time survey with 3% in 1991 and 8% in 2001.
The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001
The given chart illustrates how the expenditure annually of a particular UK school c...
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