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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school.Why is this?What can be done to solve the problem?
In the contemporary world, following the modernized and urbanized revolution, education plays a crucial role in the daily basis of humans.Therefore, the educational burden is widely spread among students including studying at university and studying at school. A large part of undergraduates advocate that they have fallen in dilemma to study more than they were at school.This essay will discuss the reason and give some comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter.
First and foremost, when you are mature enough, you have to do everything by yourself. Attending university or college is the dream of many students around the world but it is so obvious to see that they are in trouble. University life is definitely dependent on themselves, there is no assistance such as support from parents, meticulous care from teachers or tutors because one class can have around 50 students. Moreover, majors in university require high-level concentration and an agile mindset to understand the lesson as well as note-taking ability due to a large amount of knowledge and lecture speed. For instance, while high school students have teachers take care of them and keep track of them, moving to university allows them to liberally arrange their schedule which is appropriate and gain more empirical experiences by enhancing their soft skills.
To address this situation is not only for student’s responsibility but also for the universities.
Firstly, freshmans need to practice their solving skills and soft skills to have an independent attitude which is most necessary. To be more specific, they can join some pre-educated campaigns providing a group of activities that allow them to communicate with their classmates and get acquainted with a new academic environment. Besides, if students usually came to libraries or somewhere containing a large amount of useful knowledge such as museums, exhibitions or study rooms, the lack of knowledge would no longer be a hot press to solve. Promoting the relationship between lecturers and students can stimulate students to seek help and to ask more questions to deeply understand lessons.
To conclude, everyone in the world has its challenges and difficulty but the way they cope with it is different. Therefore, university life demands independence, and is not so obscure due to the differences and the diversity of curriculum. By organizing some pre-educated campaigns providing students with opportunities to foster their soft-skills and communication skills is a potential solution to go through such challenges.
many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school.Why is this?What can be done to solve the problem?
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Đề bài: The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many international visitors to three kinds of areas in a European nation during a twenty-years period from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, there was an increase foreign visitors visiting all three locations through this time frame. In addition, the amount of tourists was the lowest, while the coast was the highest.
In 1987, 40, 000 visitors to the coast in this European country. This figure declined by roughly 35, 000 in 1992, after which it began to rise, reaching approximately 75,000 in 2007. Meanwhile, the number of foreign visitors visiting fluctuation from 20,00 to 30,000 during the half-first period, before rising to roughly 35,000 in 2017.
The number of overseas tourists visiting the lake in this country continuously rose in the first fifteen years of the period, reaching at 75,000 in 2002. However, these figures began to drop, reaching 50, 000 visitors in 2017
Đề bài: The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featur...
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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The three pie charts illustrate how much money is spent annually on five different spending areas in UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall, there was a significant decline in the proportion of annually paying to the resources and other workers salaries, while an increase was seen in the figures for the other remaining. In addition, the amount of money spent on teachers was dominant in three years.
The percentage of paying an amount of money spent on teachers' salaries started at 40% in 1981, after which it experienced a considerable increase to 50% in 1991 before falling slightly to 45% in the final year. The reverse trend can be seen in the figure for other workers' salaries, which decreased from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001.
15% of expending money on resources (e.g.books), followed by a rise to 20% after a decade later. In 2001, this aspect witnessed a decline nearly doubled compared to school spending in 1991. The decrease of the expenditure on resources corresponded with the increase in furniture and equipment, which increased by nearly 8% at the end of the period. The figure for school spending on insurance grew up slightly from 2% in 1981 to 8% in 2001.
The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The three pie charts illustrate how much money is spent annually on five different sp...
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đề: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
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In the digital age, computer-based technology has been increasingly prevalent in human life. In fact, we certainly find it difficult to get through a day without it. In this essay, I will discuss its conversion in the foreseeable future. Also, whether people’s dependency on computer-based technology is beneficial or harmful to us will be analyzed.
I believe that computer-based technology will possibly experience a great alteration in the future. Firstly, it will not only be updated constantly but also become even more integrated into every aspect of our lives, becoming an indispensable and functional tool in order to help people deal with their work and study easily. For example, excel functions are able to aid people in managing and calculating their data precisely, making it faster and more convenient for them in their working lives. Furthermore, a large number of students are studying online, taking advantage of software or artificial intelligence as a companion in doing research or any projects. What is more, many computer-based forms such as artificial intelligence or automatic machines will be used prevalently in every industry, school, or company to automate their tasks and enhance working efficiency. Consequently, computer-based technology is going to become extremely necessary to every individual, particularly those who are living in an innovative society.
It is apparent that an increasing number of individuals are becoming dependent on computers. I believe that computers play the role of a right-hand man to support us in our modern lives, partly alleviating our pressure from work in comparison with the past. Although showcase numerous benefits, they probably result in several drawbacks if we rely too much on them. The inevitable reason behind this is that it will certainly trigger our laziness and dependence instead of trying our best to think and find a way to solve the problem. For further explanation, if automatic machines replace us to do all the tasks, we will not need to brainstorm any new ideas or do physical activities. As a result, this situation possibly leads to obesity, causing various health problems. Besides, relying too much on computers reduces the ability to think critically, and limits our intellectual activities, which can have a disastrous impact on the natural development of each individual.
In conclusion, computer-based technology has proved to be vital to humans in modern society, becoming the most helpful assistant for us. Also, the invention of computers marked a breakthrough in technological development, which brings a large number of advantages to humans. Having said that people should be aware of the pros and cons of computers to take advantage of them smartly and reasonably as well as make them become productive tools. It is necessary to avoid overusing and depending on them too much, which can prevent us from many health problems and natural growth.
đề: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
With the advanced technology, there are many approaches for people to easily communicate with each other. In my viewpoint, this is a positive development.
There are various disadvantages of interacting with people directly. To begin with, people are busy with their work and do not control their time management clearly, which means it takes a lot of time to communicate with surroundings directly. More specifically, they have to make appointments at cafe, supermarkets to discuss the abundant knowledge related to essays, presentations and eventually homework groups. Besides, people tend to be shy when they talk with friends by face to face interaction because they are not confident enough. This means they can not make their own viewpoints when contacting the opposite person. Therefore, the problems associated with this kind of communication take a toll on everyone.
Nevertheless, this problem also brings several benefits to everyone. With modern technology, the emergence of applications diversifies such as google meet, zooms and messenger for everyone to keep in touch with each other. To commence with, it is easy for people to access a type of communication through social networks. This will help everyone save time to remain in a relationship on useful apps without going out and can serve suitable work involved in learning online and presentation. In addition, social networking sites provide platforms for introverted individuals to express themselves and interact comfortably, helping them self-confidence and social skills. Clearly, this trend can bring advantages to people.
In conclusion, communication by face-to-face interaction takes much time but with the development of the internet, people can communicate with other people through social networks, which shows that this is a positive development.
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The bar chart illustrates and compares the rate of five different causes of absence in a specific European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. For the purposes of this data set, the rationale is divided into five factors, with the total adding up to 100%. Overall, sickness was notably the primary reason absenteeism, with a predominant share in all three years examined. A further point is that while illness continually experienced a downward trend over the given time frame, stress, person needs and unexpected problems explained for an increasing number of individuals asked for days-off.
In the first years of 2000s, the vast majority of employees who had sick-leave reached a peak of 44%, taking up almost a haft of all employees. Afterward, the figure for this category decreased considerably, standing at 40% by 2005 and eventually held 35% after a decade. By contrast,
Fewest laborers enjoyed the downtime because of depression over the period, which only began at 6% in 2000, then hitting a low of merely 4% in the next five years, suddenly climbed to approximately 12% in the final stage. Moving on to person needs, there was 14% of individuals tended to leave for personally occupations by 2000, following by an upswing of 20% and 23% by 2005 and 2010 respectively.
Turning to family responsibility, whose figures was the most stable in 2000s. There was 26% of workers were not present caused by their family duty by 2000. Afterward, this proportion levelled off at around 25% in the following decade. What is more, the quantity of working people who had several unexpected problems and decided to enjoy rest days witnessed a slight increase, beginning with 7%, then doubled in the next half-decade. Ultimately, this cause’s percentage stood at 14% by 2010.
The bar chart illustrates and compares the rate of five different causes of absence in a specific European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. For the purposes of this data set, the rationale is...
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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001
The given chart illustrates how the expenditure annually of a particular UK school changed in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall, the money spent on teacher’s salaries was the dominant in the date, while Insurance was the lowest spending in the period.
In 1981, the salaries used for paying teachers was the highest percent, accounting for 40%. The second highest spending was other workers’ salaries with 28%. The money spent on resources e.g books and furniture and equipment had a similar percent, making up 15%. The percentage of school spending on insurance was lower than others with only 2%.
There was a significant increase in teacher’s salaries accounting for a half percent in 1991 before wenting down slightly in 2001 with 45%. The resources e.g books went up a little, with one-fifth percent in 1991 and had a dramatic decrease in 2001, with 9%. The school spending on furniture and equipment and other worker’s salaries decreased slightly, with 5% and 22%, respectively. In 2001 the spending on furniture and equipment increased sharply with 23%, while the other worker’s salaries also decreased smally with 15%. The insurance had steadily increase over the time survey with 3% in 1991 and 8% in 2001.
The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
It is argued that the advance of technology makes humans interact with other individuals, and can affect their relationships. From my point of view, this development has a negative impact on society development.
The popularity of technology has several effects on people's lives. Technology is the equipment to help many people or students who work and study far from home to communicate with their family and relatives. In fact, with the improvement of social media such as facebook or zalo, students who study abroad can talk with their family using these apps. Moreover, technology has an effective impact on work relationships with working from home and online meetings. For instance, when a person becomes an employee in a new company, they can choose to work online or work in company, so some people can never be face-to-face with their partner or teammate in their company. Thus technology development has several advantages with people live far away from home
Nevertheless, this advance has many disadvantages. Technology can help people connect with each other from far away but this cannot show their emotion on an online meeting or video call. Additionally, in some interactive meetings people usually use their smartphone to surf the social network without communicating with their friends, so this can damage their relationship. Moreover, with the development of technology, each children have their own smartphone to use for entertainment, and if they use it all the time of the day without talking and caring about their parents or friends, their family relationship and friendship will go down. Therefore, technology has a negative impact on people's relationships development.
In conclusion, although technology can help people connect with their relatives far, this can make their life relationships worse which shows that is the negative development.
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
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The given maps illustrate the development occuring in the design of a small local museum and its surrounding area between 1957 and 2007.
Overall, it is noticeable that the museum experienced various significant alterations, the most prominent of which were the construction of some amenities along with the expansion of its layout. Further changes were also made to the museum’s access and parking facilities while there was a decline in the number of trees in the garden.
In 1957, there was a pathway going from the road to the entrance hall of the local museum. The local museum consisted of 3 different areas mainly used to serve the exhibition purposes. National history exhibition was the largest room located on the north of the building, to its south housed a local history room, opposite to a museum storeroom. There were a large number of trees surrounding the building.
By the year 2007, the museum experienced several expansions, with a brand-new museum shop being erected to its west. Visitors could access the building through an entrance in the museum shop and the old pathway was removed to make room for a car parking lot in the southeast of the map. In the north of the building stood 2 separating areas, namely special exhibitions, and education center, with a bigger local history room being constructed to their south. Underneath the local history room was a reception site located between the museum shop and a new café. Finally, the majority of trees in the garden were chopped down while the main road in the south of the drawing remained intact.
The given maps illustrate the development occuring in the design of a small local museum and its surrounding area between 1957 and 2007.
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The given diagram depicts the process of manufacturing a comprehensive pencil through numerous stages.
At first glance, the mixture of clay, H2O and ground graphite is put into a tank, followed by drying and heating in the oven, resulting in leads. While woods become wooden slats then going through some treatments to be complete products.
As can be seen, before going to the forming press, the mixture witnesses transformation to graphite dough leading to become graphite rods. Furthermore, these rods are cut into leads to be prepared for drying treatment, which undergo the heat of the oven in about 800’C.
Besides, woods are also materials for making pencils by grooving cut and gluing it to become leads. Moreover, accompanying the product after putting into the oven undergoes the method named as “ Sandwich” but later slicing to distinct pieces and experiencing the machine that can reshape pencil’s appearance to be smooth finish and ready to distribute and globally use.
The given diagram depicts the process of manufacturing a comprehensive pencil through numerous stages.
At first glance, the mixture of clay, H2O and ground graphite is put into a tank, followed by dr...
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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In contemporary society, a significant decrease in the number of languages has contributed to a common belief that the quality of life will be improved if there are fewer languages on a global scale. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I strongly disagree with this notion.
The foremost reason supporting my argument is that the variation of language can play a pivotal role in the social development. More precisely, a multitude of languages can make it easier for humans to gain profound insights into different cultures in the world, thus fostering the intercontinential relationship. For instance, the diversity of language can offer various opportunities for individuals to expand the outlook in terms of different aspects including traditional customs, cuisine, education in foreign countries, thus transcending geographical barriers and connecting people in society.
An additional reason in favor of my view is that language is beneficial for developing the quality of life. This means being multilingual could create numerous employment opportunities, such as being a tourist guide, translator, or teacher, thereby enabling people to earn a stable income and establish a stable life. This is exemplified by the fact that attaining an outstanding IELTS certificate could be a huge edge, as people can make a handsome profit by being an IELTS teacher, thereby enhancing their quality of life.
In conclusion, I advocate that variation of language plays a key role in developing social relationships and creating people's career prospects. Therefore, it is vitally important to preserve the diversity of languages on a global scale.
Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
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The diagram shows the small-scale production of smoked fish
The diagram illustrates how smoked fish are produced small-scale.
Overall, there are a total of eight steps in the process, beginning with the preparation of the fish and ending with the delivery of the finished product.
Initially, fish are cleaned by a knife before dipping into salt water for half an hour. Afterwards, they are cooked for 5 minutes in hot salt water, and then removed.
The process of smoking is ready to initiate. In a vat, the fish are hung by wires on top of some material which burns and produces smoke. The vat is made of wood, so the smoke cannot escape. After 30 minutes, the fish are smoked, and ready for the next stage, which is the addition of yellow coloring. The smoked fish are then packed in a closed container, and delivered by a truck from the factory to the place where customers consume smoked fish.
The diagram shows the small-scale production of smoked fish
The diagram illustrates how smoked fish are produced small-scale.
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Topic: Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are differing views on the most effective method to enhance community health, with several individuals considering that building a larger number of sport amenities should be encouraged while others argue that government should invest in other measurements. This essay will discuss both viewpoints before concluding the latter is more favorable
On the one hand, one major reason why increasing the number of sports facilities is appealing might be that it can have a positive effect on people's physical health. More precisely, when there is an increase in the number of facilities like gym centers, swimming pools, stadiums, etc, citizens can be easily accessible to various physical activities, such as work-out, swimming, playing football, thus improving their fitness level. Nevertheless, this method might be only effective for some people who are interested in sports including athletics, swimmers, etc, thereby having little influence on public health.
On the other hand, I believe that other methods should be required. First and foremost, complimentary healthcare should be implemented to improve public health. This means offering free healthcare service in hospitals would be beneficial to all individuals regardless of their income. leading to equal treatment between high-income and low-income people. Furthermore, the government should also raise the public's awareness of their health. For instance, several campaigns related to community health should be launched to encourage people to participate. Therefore, the public will be able to expand the outlook in terms of their health.
In conclusion, although some people advocate that the best measure to develop community health is by incorporating a greater number of sports facilities, I contend that this way only benefits individuals who are into sports. Instead, other measures like provision of free healthcare and introduction of health-related campaigns would be favorable for all citizens.
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The given bar chart illustrates the amount of salt intake and the recommendation for two genders in the USA in 2000.
Overall, it is clear that the amount of salt consumption for males was higher than that of females regardless of age. Additionally, except children under 6 and women over 60, people consumed significantly more salt than the recommended amount for adults over the surveyed period.
Concerning the salt intake of children under 6, boys consumed 2240 milligrams, which was the lowest amount compared to 1300 of their counterparts. While the highest amount of salt intake was recorded for both males and women in the 20-39 group, at 4500 and 3000 milligrams respectively, which was significantly higher than the recommendation at 2500 milligrams. At the same time, females who aged over 60 were the only group having the salt intake equal compared to the recommended amount.
Boys aged 6 to 11 years old consumed the same amount of salt in comparison with males above 60, at 3500 milligrams. Meanwhile, the same number of salt consumption was seen for three female groups, including girls aged 6 to 11, girl teenagers from 12-19 and females of 20-39 bracket, approximately 3000 milligrams. Male teenagers who aged from 12-19 and middle-age men had salt in their diets significantly higher than the recommendation, which were 4300 and 4200 respectively.
The given bar chart illustrates the amount of salt intake and the recommendation for two genders in the USA in 2000.
Overall, it is clear that the amount of salt consumption for males was higher than...
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The bar chart illustrates how many people aged from 25 to 34 years old were renting in the UK over a 10- year period from 2004.
Overall, it is evident that the proportions of homeowners and renters followed an opposite trend during the period. The data also indicates that the former saw a slight decrease while the latter rose noticeable until 2004
To begin with, standing at approximately 60% in 2004, there was a mild drop to around 50% after 1 year in the percentage of homeowners, which continually decreased to just shy of 40% in 2011, albeit it reached just above 50% in 2007. Otherwise, the remainder started at 20% in 2004, increasing significantly to just north of 40% after 5 years and reaching parity with the former in 2011.
After that, the directions of both categories were further from each other. The former continually showed a downward trend to just above 30% while the latter reached its highest point at around 50% at the end of the period.
The bar chart illustrates how many people aged from 25 to 34 years old were renting in the UK over a 10- year period from 2004.
Overall, it is evident that the proportions of homeowners and renters fo...
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The bar chart compares the proportion of expenditure on road and transport by the authority from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, Portugese government allocated the most financial support throughout 15 years, while UK spent the least money on road and transport in the same period.
Regarding spending on road and transport by Italia, there was a slight decrease by 3%, from 22% down to 19% during 15 years, after reached the highest percentage at around 24%, recorded in 2000. Portugese authority allocated about 27% of their budget on road and transport, which was more than twofold compared to UK, at accurately 10%. It is evident that the expenditure from Portugal fell sharply by more than 5%, ending at 20% in 2005.
By 2000, UK spent the most of financial support at around 12% before decreased to 7% in the last year of the period. The USA was the only country that witnessed an upward trend in the percentage of expenditure on road and transport compared to three other countries, slightly rose from 11% to 15% throughout the period.
The bar chart compares the proportion of expenditure on road and transport by the authority from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, Portugese government allocated the most financial support throughout 15 years, w...
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The bar graph indicate hobby of children in 2 country New Zealand and Australi in 2007. In term of, Australians favourite activies. They prefer outdoor activities to indoor activities.
For Australians, Playing sports were the most leisure, it about 28%. The second hobby which Australians enjoy in 2007. It were going to the park, about 25%. however, the least popular around 7% to 10% that is doing craft, art and reading book,
For New Zealand, the highest activities were doing craft and art, which accounted for 25%. The second popular leisure were reading book and watching DVDS. The both around 17%, The least vital hobby were visit the park and playing sport. It abot 14%
The bar graph indicate hobby of children in 2 country New Zealand and Australi in 2007. In term of, Australians favourite activies. They prefer outdoor activities to indoor activities.
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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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The first pie chart illustrates the energy consumed by an average Australian household, while the second chart depicts the greenhouse gas emissions that result from this energy use.
Overall, it is obvious that the proportion of energy increased in almost all with the exception of heating. Another striking significant feature is that the consumption of heating is highest for energy houses, while the percentage of water heating reaches a peak in greenhouse gas emissions.
Heating accounts for the highest proportion of energy use, at 42%. The percentage of water heating, which stands at 30%, is twice higher than that of other appliances. A low point of 2% in the figure for cooling of energy use.
Water heating hit the highest point of 32% of greenhouse gas emissions, the opposite was true for cooling at 3%. Standing at 28%, the proportion for other appliances is twice as high as that for refrigeration. This figure is roughly the same as that for heating at 15%. A minimal rise is seen in the percentage of lighting of greenhouse gas emissions at 8%, this is 4% higher than that of lighting of energy house.
The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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The bar chart provides a breakdown of the yearly salaries for doctors and other workers in seven different nations in 2004.
Overall, it can be seen that the US provides doctors and other workers with the highest annual pay among seven countries. However, people from occupations except doctors receive the lowest salaries in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany.
In 2004, doctors and other workers in the US had the highest yearly pay, which made up respectively 120 and almost 45 thousand dollars. Right behind was Switzerland and France, which had an equal amount of money for doctors, which earned approximately 70 thousand dollars; while other workers in France received lower annual pay compared to those in Switzerland, which was respectively about 30 and 40 thousand dollars.
In terms of other countries, other workers received comparable annual pay in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany, which was 20 thousand dollars. Salaries for doctors in these three countries saw overall figures, ranging from 60 to roughly 62 thousand dollars. Although the amount of money paid for doctors was the lowest among seven countries, which was around 50 thousand dollars, the figure for other workers was higher than that in the three countries above, making up 40 thousand dollars.
The bar chart provides a breakdown of the yearly salaries for doctors and other workers in seven different nations in 2004.
Overall, it can be seen that the US provides doctors and other workers wi...
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The line chart provides a breakdown of the percentage of households owning computers in a particular European nation from 1997 to 2011.
Overall, it is evident that the proportion of households possessing one or more computers witnessed an increase with the exception of that of households without computers, which showed a significant decline. In addition, one computer was the most commonly chosen by households among these four.
In 1997, the percentage of households without computers accounted for about 47%, which became the most popular option among four different options. Right behind was families with a computer only, which made up roughly 20%. However, this figure experienced a steady increase and achieved the top spot in 2011, which allocated 45%.
The proportion of households possessing more than one computer was negligible compared to other two options, which was both under 10% in 1997. While families with two computers witnessed a significant growth and reached about 25%, which became the second most option, the figure for those who had more than two computers was just under 15% at the end of period, becoming the least chosen.
The line chart provides a breakdown of the percentage of households owning computers in a particular European nation from 1997 to 2011.
Overall, it is evident that the proportion of households poss...
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